Let's Read: Warhammer Fantasy: End Times

Do you prefer the current slow, detailed method or would you like a quicker, less detailed one?

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Reminds me a bit of Rise of the Sith.

The novelisation also takes pains to remind us that Anakin hasn't slept for ages whenever he makes a stupid decision or fails to notice Palpatine being obviously evil.
 
It also seems rather absurd The Emperor and the Elector Counts didn't catch what Gelt had done. Surely they must have been briefed on the nature of the Bastion and they should all know enough about magic to hear "Gold Wizard mucked with Hysh and God Stuff." and instantly go "YOU WHAT."

Also a low effort meme for a low effort arc.

 
"How odd, ever since I used two Winds at once I've had trouble with nightmares and paranoia and megalomania. I wonder why that might be? I wonder if there's any reason known to the Colleges for why someone might experience that mental state from wielding two Winds at once? Oh well, I'm sure it's nothing important. Now let's read this Big Book Of Naughty Magic that Vlad von Carstein gave to me, an extremely good idea that definitely doesn't set off any alarm bells."

Extremely cool and compelling that the plot only works if the Supreme Patriarch of the Colleges of Magic is completely ignorant of the causes and symptoms of Dhar exposure while fighting against Chaos and Vampires.
You know, now that you mention it, Gelt's pretty megalomaniacal here. I just assumed that was his standard personality because of how excessively cocky he is in Total War, but now I'm pretty sure it's partially enhanced by the Wind touching. Gelt kind of vascillitates between extremes of paranoia and triumph in a manner that wouldn't be sustainable in the long term in any manner if it was the usual.
 
I can't believe that the canon reason for Gelt losing his shit in the End Times is the same as why Dumbledore said "what are you doing you motherfukers".
 
Sexual tension with a Vampire? I agree. I could vaguely sense the sparks between Gelt and Vlad.
I meant more that he's tired and has a headache. Since similar to the End Times My Immortal stops in place to tell us that Gelt/Dumbledore is super tired and that's why this isn't OOC or stupid guys!
 
I meant more that he's tired and has a headache. Since similar to the End Times My Immortal stops in place to tell us that Gelt/Dumbledore is super tired and that's why this isn't OOC or stupid guys!
Apparently I'm rustier on My Immortal lore than I thought. I thought you were referring to the scene where Dumbeldore barges into the scene of Draco and Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way getting frisky.
 
You know, now that you mention it, Gelt's pretty megalomaniacal here. I just assumed that was his standard personality because of how excessively cocky he is in Total War, but now I'm pretty sure it's partially enhanced by the Wind touching. Gelt kind of vascillitates between extremes of paranoia and triumph in a manner that wouldn't be sustainable in the long term in any manner if it was the usual.

That makes him sound sort of manic-depressive
 
Chapter 4 Nagash: Corruption
Chapter 4: Corruption, Obsession and Deceit (Part 2):

To be fair to this chapter, Gelt doesn't immediately crack open the Revelations Necris and start reading. It takes some time to ease him in on the idea, as the narrative continues from his point of view. To be exact, it takes him two pages, which is a lot for End Times.

Gelt's mind is working on overdrive, making rationalisations and justifications for himself over why he's even considering the thought of an alliance with Vlad. The book states that Gelt's opinion would likely be different if he knew of the Nameless' atrocities or that Vlad killed all the people garrisoned in Rackspire, but of course he doesn't know that so Gelt tries his best to do a Taylor (from Worm) impression.

Gelt didn't tell anyone of his conversation with Vlad, for fear that it would be seen as treason (something that a part of him agrees with). Gelt himself considers that he would never agree under normal circumstances, but these are not normal circumstances, and sometimes hard decisions need to be made. It's not as if the Empire's alliances were entirely bloodless. Bretonnia, Kislev, the Elves and even the Dwarves fought and spilled Imperial blood, and yet they were still allies in times of need. As Gelt tells himself: "If friendship could be so inconsistent, then why not enmity?"

Gelt knew these thoughts were dangerous, so he spent most of his time losing himself in the protection of the border, which only worsened the issue. Gelt found that his magic was often the only barrier between victory and defeat, and even then it was frequently so close that victory was only possible through the slimmest of margins. "At Kragvost, the wizard transformed the steel of the attackers' weapons to lead, and set a plague of rust upon their armour. At Snaldren Keep, where he arrived too late to save the garrison, Gelt used the weapons of the slain to forge iron golems in the defenders' likenesses, and with them held the bridge over the Upper Talabec for twelve hours." Day after day Gelt fought his enemies and killed thousands of them, and yet tens of thousands more still lay beyond the border ready to flood southwards.

There wasn't enough men. Never enough men, and all Gelt could do is hope the Chaos Gods would slumber again like they did so many times before. It is here that Gelt begins his introspective insomnia paragraph which I posted after the last update. The gist of it is that weeks later, Gelt's sleeplessness and paranoia is coming to a head. He's growing more and more desperate and has no one to turn to, which is further exacerbating his unhealthy tendencies and obsessions. Gelt was being drawn ever further into the allure of the beauty of controlling more than one Wind.

The Ar-Ulric and Luthor Huss were touring the Empire with Valten at hand, demonstrating his Sigmar-ness to the populace to buoy their spirits. Gelt learns of this through letters with Valgeir because the two are pen-pals now, and Valgeir's distaste over Luthor Huss' continued belief and insistence over Valten being Sigmar reborn is constantly shown in the letters. Valgeir asked Gelt in his letters if he made any progress on the Shapeshifter debacle, but Gelt was so tired and disconsolate that he rarely replied. Gelt became more reclusive and withdrawn, delegating his responsibilities as Supreme Patriarch to his deputies as he focused on his job defending the border.

"More battles came and went, each bloodier than the last. The walls of Moorholt were torn apart by daemon-fire, and the fortress-town's central keep would have fallen too, had it not been for the almost inhuman bravery of Captain Pieter Hanseld, who led a charge to reclaim the gatehouse. Hanseld perished in the moment of victory, and his fellow Wissenlanders buried him in the shadow of the keep he had saved. The village of Eska was assaulted once by rampaging northmen, and a second time by beastmen lured by the carnage. Each time, Gelt's men fought and died in its defence, though it would have perhaps been quicker and kinder to let the village burn."

At the same time, Vlad's words and offer kept coming back to Gelt's mind. Gelt had contemplated burning the Revelations Necris several times, yet an instinct had held him back from doing so. He had sealed the tome away from prying eyes, and the temptation to open it was ever present. After the Second Battle of Eska, his mind's eye still focusing on the mangled dead bodies on the field, he broke open the clasps of the book and surrendered himself to the secrets within.

It didn't take long for people to notice something was wrong. Gelt had requisitioned a mansion built by a local nobleman who fled south to Heffengen at the first sign of trouble as soon as Gelt arrived at the border. Gelt's reputation was such that few people questioned him or went to said mansion. Servants would occasionally make the trip to tend to Gelt's spartan needs and Dreist and his captains met with him for war meetings occasionally. Rumors spread about strange lights around the mansion and ghostly figures wandering around it, but few could confirm them, Dreist foremost in denying them despite his reluctance to ever approach Gelt's iron doors.

It was during the Battle of Akkerheim that Gelt's descent was made known. It was one of the biggest breaches in the history of the Auric Bastion, the wall crumbling and then being held open by two mutated giants. The giants were slain by keen eyed Stirlander archers, but not before thousands of Northmen flooded into the fields of Akkherheim. The battle would have been a disaster if it wasn't for Gelt, but the salvation he provided was not one that many could accept.

Gelt released a dark cloying fog across the battlefield, raising the dead to fight against the northmen. His first attempt was clumsy, the corpses collapsing within minutes, as would be expected of a novice, but what he lacked in skill he made up for in quantity. The undead swarmed over the northmen, backed into the closed section of the Bastion, they were overwhelmed and annihilated. Some of the soldiers, particularly the veterans of Alderfen who had seen the undead come to their aid, looked on in approval, but most of them looked aghast as two nightmares fought each other. They only relaxed when the battle was over and Gelt allowed the undead to collapse.

After the initial shock, few realised that Gelt was the one who had done this, and fewer questioned it, for they were ignorant of the powers of mages and saw little distinction between such acts and turning people to gold statues. There were rumors that the Amethyst College could do such things, and this was further proof of things, so they shrugged and moved on.

But not everyone was like that. Captain Dreist was still traumatised by Alderfen and the puppeteering of his body by the Nameless, and was afraid that the same was happening to Gelt. Another shared in his suspicions, a Priest of Sigmar by the name of Hans Kreiner who had recently arrived at the border, and was certain that Gelt was corrupted. Hans left to Gelt's mansion alone to confront the man, and only Dreist was aware of it. Dreist was scared, so he ran. He ran until he reached Castle Skarlan, where Aldebrand Ludenhof oversaw his section of the border.

Aldebrand ignored Dreist's restless hands and squirming eyes as he recalled the account of the last few days and Gelt's actions. Aldebrand did not want to believe that Gelt had been corrupted, but he had to consider the possibility. He took an outrider escort with him as he left. He wanted to take Dreist with him, but the Captain reacted with such an extreme reaction of fear that he relented and admitted him to the Sisters of Shallya. I have to say I'm a bit confused why they gave a whole ass character arc for this minor End Times OC as his sanity slowly dwindles from all the trauma of the events that occur to him. I guess he's supposed to be an example of the effect of these events on those who have had to go through it.

Three days later, when Aldebrand arrives at the section that Gelt is supposed to oversee, any doubts he had were immediately dispelled. Seeking to strengthen the Auric Bastion, Gelt reinforced the wall with great skeletal buttresses with accompanying skeletal gargoyles with witchfires burning in their eyes. Classy. Didn't take him long to embrace the aesthetic.

What appalled Aldebrand even more than that was that the people under the walls didn't even look bothered by all the skeletons and such. Ludenhof wondered if they were corrupted too, but my guess is that they're getting used to this shit.

As Ludenhof approaches Gelt with his escort warily, Gelt greets them personally. He didn't seem all that different to the last time Ludenhof met him. In fact, he looked as if he had a giant weight lifted off of him, as if he was relieved or happy. Gelt offered hospitality that Ludenhof carefully refused, then Gelt proceeded to monologue about his discoveries. Gelt kept talking about the secrets he had found and the revelations he had discovered. Why should the living perish defending the walls of the Empire when the dead could do just as well? Clearly, the Patriarch had taken the steps necessary to preserve the lives of the loyal soldiers of the Empire.

Ludenhof listened with mounting horror at Gelt's "excited soliloquy" as he attempted to politely extract himself. He had done a poor job at disguising his disgust, but Gelt was so self-absorbed that he hardly noticed. Ludenhof knew not what madness consumed Gelt, but it would have to be ended soon, he thought as he rode back to Castle Skarlan. The Elector Count did not notice the dispassionate gaze of Vlad von Castein from the windows of Gelt's mansion, so he had no forewarning of what was to come.

Gelt and Vlad have the following conversation:
His mind bubbling with contempt and annoyance, Vlad watched Ludenhof's escort ride away. 'Ludenhof is blind to your achievements,' the vampire cautioned Gelt. 'Even now, he plots to destroy you.'

'You're wrong,' the wizard replied. 'He'll see the necessity of it, they all will.'

Vlad laughed. 'Wise men are always the most foolish. Did you not see the look in his eyes; hear the tremor in his voice? He fears what you have done, and will see you destroyed for it.'

'What would you have me do?' Gelt demanded quietly.

Vlad arched an eyebrow. He said nothing, but Gelt took his meaning all the same.

'No!' the wizard said angrily. 'What I have done, I have done to save lives, not end them.'

'Then when next you lay eyes on Ludenhof, it will be at your burning, everything we have worked for will have been for nothing, and the Dark Gods will laugh at your stupidity.'

'No,' Gelt said again, but his voice was tired, pleading against an inescapable truth.

'If your allegiance is to mankind's survival, you cannot afford loyalty to individual men,' Vlad pointed out. 'Is Ludenhof's life worth more to you than the hundreds upon thousands who will die if he denounces you?'

Gelt was silent for a time, but when he spoke again, his voice was firm. 'No, no it isn't.'

Good, thought Vlad, the lesson had been learned. 'I appreciate the difficulty this must present – I will attend to it if you wish,' the vampire offered, careful that mockery was absent from his tone.

Gelt shook his head. 'No,' he replied resolutely. 'The burden is mine to bear.'

'Good,' Vlad replied, grasping the wizard's shoulder. 'Then there is yet hope for us all.'
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Two days after Ludenhof leaves Gelt, he is met on the road by Gelt on Quicksilver, his pegasus, at the crossroads known as Deadman's Pike within Fang Wood. Gelt begs Ludenhof to "hark at his counsel". Ludenhof doesn't have much of a choice given the skeletal watchers on the surrounding woods, but there was still a part of the Elector Count that still hoped that Gelt could be turned from his path.

He was soon dismayed as Gelt repeated the ideals he spoke of in Alderfen. Worse, he proposed an alliance with the Von Carsteins, and spoke of how ultimate salvation lay at the hands of none other than dread Nagash.

Then things go batshit, and for people to have the proper context, I will quote verbatim, because it bears seeing for yourself:

So saying, Gelt spread his hands imploringly, but one of Ludenhof's outriders misread the gesture as the start of some enchantment. Bringing his repeater pistol up, he pulled the trigger. The gun roared, and the bullet struck Gelt high in his shoulder, throwing him back in the saddle.

Anarchy reigned as Gelt's skeletal guards burst from the trees and fell upon their master's assailant. The other outriders, their nerves already frayed, opened fire. Heavy bullets whined as the soldiers defended themselves, but though many a bone was shattered, the creatures came on. Ludenhof's sword came out as he tried to organise his escort, but the outriders scattered in panic, and so became easy prey. Soon the air was full of terrified cries, and Ludenhof's orders were drowned out.

Blinking past the pain of his ruined shoulder, Gelt became aware of the unfolding slaughter and commanded his minions to cease the attack. These were not mere mindless dead, but constructs crafted from much older and more difficult magic, and with his thoughts disrupted by the agony of his wound, Gelt could not marshal the necessary control. All the creatures knew was that their master was imperilled, and they ruthlessly and efficiently crushed the threat.

By the time Gelt regained control, only Ludenhof still lived. The Elector had been unhorsed, his clothes were bloody and torn, but he fought on despite his wounds. Ludenhof was tiring fast, and his last swing had left his guard open for the stroke that even now came to sever his head. Ludenhof saw the blow come about, and knew at once he could do nothing to prevent it, so instead whispered a last farewell to his wife, though she would never hear it. A heartbeat later, Gelt's word of command rang out across the clearing, and the blade halted in mid-strike. Ludenhof flinched away from the stalled blow then, recovering his composure, stared contemptuously across at the Supreme Patriarch.

Gelt returned the Elector's gaze, searching for an explanation to undo the damage of the preceding moments, and convince Ludenhof how necessary his actions had been. But no matter how much the wizard tried, he could find no words. As he sat in a silence that felt altogether too much like cowardice, Gelt saw the other constructs cluster unbidden around the bloodied Elector Count. There could be no reasoning, the wizard realised sorrowfully, no words to bridge the chasm that now lay between them. As the blades came down for Ludenhof one last time, he spat defiantly at Gelt, who turned away in shame. Though the wizard saw it not, the Elector Count died unbowed, his sword still gripped in his hand.
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….

Yeah. That happened. Remember when I said this chapter was full of contrivances? I wasn't kidding. Ludenhof died because of a misunderstanding resulting in a near comical series of events where everything goes wrong just perfectly so that Gelt would fall to the Dark Side. It's truly impressive how shameless this series of events is in trying to drive the plot forward in the intended direction.

Gelt returns to Alderfen, desperate to drive the thought of Ludenhof from his mind. He wasn't worried about being found out. If the bodies were found, the blame would be placed on the Goblins of Fang Wood. He was simply torn apart by guilt. He crossed a line. As violent as the reprisals would be for killing an Elector Count, he feared the changes to his personality even more.

I end this part here, because the next part is… too much to be covered now, after the Ludenhof debacle. I advise whoever's reading this to buckle up. It gets worse.
 
The worst part of all of this?

From your explanation, at least, Gelt didn't really seem to do anything bad other than maybe "touching the bad magic" until Luderhoff's man shot him, at which case the resulting kerfuffle still wasn't really his fault. Seriously, other than the in-universe conceit of dhar corrupting, I cannot even find an act that is morally grey on all this, never mind black, until the Lundenhof standoff.

So this doesn't sound like a man forced to do more and more moral compromises for the greater good falling into evil, it just sounds like a man doing good while people dislike his aesthetics and shoot him, only to end up as a villain because he was pigeonholed and attacked and had to defend himself.

And, like, I get it, dhar evil, but... you have to reinforce that in the text, dear authors, not just rely on previous conduct, make Gelt do some bad stuff without him even realising what is so bad about them.
 
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Gelt's actions and thoughts might be slightly plausible, if shockingly naive, if the Empire had never encountered Vampires or Necromancy before and Gelt was having to grapple with these ideas from scratch. But in an Empire that had survived three Vampire Wars and fifteen hundred years of post-Frederick Van Hal Sylvania, there's no reason that Gelt should be giving any of Vlad's arguments the benefit of the doubt, or that after he does fall he should think that the 'hey, maybe necromancy is good actually' gambit would end in anything but pyres. They really did just decide where the plot was going to go and twisted every character they had to, as far as it took, to get there.
 
Chapter 4 Nagash: Deceit
Chapter 4: Corruption, Obsession and Deceit (Part 3):

Balthasar Gelt was desperate to take his mind off the mess that his life had become after Ludenhof's death. In order to do this, he threw himself at the mountains of correspondence sent to him by Emil Valgeir that he was far too preoccupied with his reading of the Revelations Necris to get to. What he found was not reassuring, as things weren't so quiet out west with Huss and Valten.

Under Luthor Huss' guidance, faith and hope bloomed across the northern Empire wherever Valten joined battle. Many, including even Karl Franz, were either recognising Valten's divine patronage, or in KF's case at least pretending to do so for political reasons. Valgeir could barely disguise his distaste over the matter and Huss' exploitation of the situation to further his agenda and the Sigmarites, but there was a bigger problem. The shapeshifter was following Valten. Wherever Valten ended up, mischief and disaster followed. The Ar-Ulric had no evidence, or he would have shown it to the Emperor, so he had begged the Supreme Patriarch to come north in his penultimate letter to confirm the matter.

Gelt did not do so until he read the final letter. Dated a week prior, a ceremony would be held where Ghal Maraz would be personally handed down to Valten by Karl Franz. Emil was sure that Valten was the shapeshifter, and that he crafted the persona to get close to the Emperor for an assassination. This got Gelt's paranoia to act in overdrive, and in his extreme worry, Gelt rode Quicksilver to leave for Castle Von Rauken, where the ceremony would take place. He could reach the ceremony in time, if only just barely.

The Changeling watched with glee as Castle von Rauken's defenders filed onto the muster field. Hundreds of soldiers stood waiting beneath gaudy banners, and more were arriving every minute.

The daemon had possessed no real plan when he had first arrived in the Empire long months ago. Tzeentch had bade him manipulate Gelt into sealing the vampires into Sylvania, which the Changeling had done through imitation of the golden wizard's apprentice, Dieter. After that, the daemon had been content to indulge his mischief wherever opportunity presented itself.

The ritual circle at Alderfen had perhaps been a mistake, the Changeling conceded, as a troop of Reiksguard knights came smartly to a halt over to his left, but then how had he been to know that Nurgle was better positioned to attack the breach than were the cat's paws of his own glorious master? After that near-catastrophe, one which had driven the Changeling to aid the humans to ensure that bloated Nurgle wouldn't prosper from the error, the daemon had amused himself with petty acts, letting instinct guide his misrule.

Thus had the Changeling played many roles in the preceding weeks, but always he had returned to his current form. He had not known why at first, but now it was all he could do suppress his mirth at the opportunity before him. The Emperor Karl Franz, so nearly within his grasp! The Changeling was saddened that he would have to murder the man, for it had been centuries since he had last impersonated a monarch, but the daemon could sense an edge of the divine about the Emperor, and this prevented flawless mimicry. For a moment, the reminder of his limitations saw the Changeling downcast, but his cheer was never absent for long – he was too easily amused for that. In this case, the daemon's spirits returned when he remembered that the Emperor's death would surely be accompanied by another's disgrace.

A clarion of trumpets split the air, and the Changeling looked up as the mighty griffon Deathclaw bore Karl Franz out of the skies. It wouldn't be long now…
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Quicksilver brought Gelt to the ceremony just after the Emperor himself. Gelt could see the pedestal from which the ceremony would take place, adorned with emblems and banners of House Luitpold and other such things. He saw the Emperor raise Ghal Maraz in response to the crowd, surrounded by cheering audience members atop Deathclaw his Griffon. Surrounding him was his dour bodyguard Ludwig Schwarzhelm and the Reiksguard, and around the pedestal were four of the surviving Elector Counts, the Grand Theogonist and the Ar-Ulric. Opposite the pedestal was a walkway containing Luthor Huss and Valten at the end, about to arrive for the ceremony, Huss on horseback and Valten on foot. Gelt wondered if Karl Franz' security detail could handle the assassin.

Quicksilver alighted on the stage a dozen feet from Deathclaw, causing outrage as Ludwig Schwatzhelm drew his sword and issued a challenge. Beneath all the outrage, Valgeir cracked a small smile underneath his bushy beard.

The Emperor demanded an explanation for Gelt's actions. Gelt hurriedly began explaining the situation of the shapeshifter at Alderfen and his suspicions regarding Valten, and Karl Franz couldn't help but doubt Gelt's words. Luthor Huss was a reliable and steady rock in these turbulent times, something that Gelt was decidedly not, and Franz couldn't help but feel sadness at Gelt's fraying sanity. Luthor Huss and Valten could not hear what was happening, but they hurried up their walk to the stage. Karl Franz refused to let the delusions of a maddened Wizard ruin a day of celebration, so he ordered his soldiers to escort the Supreme Patriarch from the stage.

As the soldiers approached Gelt, he panicked. Instead of drawing on a spell from his decades of Alchemical Lore, he drew on the Lore of magic that had occupied his mind over the last few weeks. It was too late when Gelt realised his catastrophic actions, for skeletal hands had broken through the mud to grasp at the soldier's feet. Silence reigned over the fields for a moment, before it was broken by a single word, taken up first by Ludwig and spreading through the crowd. Treachery!

Gelt's life as he knew it shattered. Yet with that shattering came a moment of clarity. Gelt could still save the Emperor by killing Valten- or rather, whoever was assuming his shape- and he wouldn't be stopped by a bunch of ingrates too stupid to understand the necessities of these dark times. Gelt stabbed his staff into the ground and gave in to the Wind of Death, raising corpses across the fields to do his bidding.

Many leagues to the east, Vlad's sword stabbed into a Northmen chieftain's throat as he sensed a shift in the Wind of Death. Vlad smiles as he realises what that means, before putting the thought away.

In Castle Von Rauken, chaos ensued. The people were arrayed for a celebration, not an attack, and the chaotic mess of undead and spirits surrounding Gelt prevented any from managing to push through to him to end it. The disorganised mess resulted in many falling dead or dying. If Gelt was in his right mind, perhaps he would have spared the soldiers simply performing their duty, but in his current state he only had two thoughts. Kill Valten, Save the Emperor.

The narrative attempts to justify this:

"These were perhaps not the actions of a rational man, but then Gelt was no longer entirely sane. Gnawed at by the guilt of Ludenhof's death, shamed by the Emperor's rejection and his perceptions subtly twisted by the sorceries he now employed, the Supreme Patriarch teetered on the brink of abiding madness. Then, without knowing it, Gelt lost his grip on the precipice, and fell. The wizard did not truly see the slaughter that unfolded before him, as terrified men gave their all in battle against the worm-eaten dead. He felt no remorse as rusted blades split skulls and hacked through flesh. Like a drowning man reaching for driftwood, Gelt was focussed entirely on the one thing he was sure would be his exoneration – the death of the daemon that called itself Valten."

Yet even that goal would be out of Gelt's reach. With the events culminating, both Huss and Valten urged themselves to the Emperor's side. Through a twist of fate, Huss was pulled from his saddle and swarmed, and though he used his Holy Light to blast through them and regain his footing, he could gain no purchase and advance further. Valten, on the other hand, ran with his reforged hammers in hand without a second glance at Huss. He knew what his goal was, clearer than ever before. He rushed to the Emperor's side. Zombies grasped his legs, but he tore free. Skeletons jumped into his path, but he swung his hammers to crash through them. Spectral figures swirled about him, singing to numb his mind, but a flash of light emerged from him that caused them to fall back. Nothing could stop him.

Meanwhile, Kurt Helborg, the Reiksmarshal was slicing his way through his opposition, Grudge Settler in hand. The Runefang glowed in his hands as he repeated a mantra in his head. Kill the Wizard, End the Battle. He urged his Destrier forward as he remembered the many campaigns where he repeated the mantra in his head, fighting against the Vampires and knowing that was the path to victory. Kill the Wizard, End the Battle. It didn't matter that Gelt was once a comrade who had fought by his side, he would be simply another enemy that needed to be taken down so the Empire could endure. Kill the Wizard, End the Battle. Kurt's horse vaulted over the circle of undead around Gelt, and Kurt's sword would have taken Gelt's head off with his swing if the Patriarch hadn't blocked it with his Staff. In this, the Staff of Volans and the Runefang fought each other to see which would win, and the Staff survived. The blow was checked.

Emil Valgeir jumped down from the scaffolding that he was on with an ease that belied his age. Valgeir ignored the many soldiers and citizens calling for their steeds or running past and across him, and he used his axe to butt anyone out of his way, soldier and cadaver alike. He was heading for the Emperor, and if he was worried for anyone's safety, his or the Emperor's it was not clear. Valgeir vaulted over the field of Reiksguard surrounding the Emperor and approached him from the right side, moving fast just a few paces away. It would be close, but it could be done.

The Emperor was standing back, on top of his mount Deathclaw the Griffon. It was clear to him that something more was going on, and while it grated him to do so, he knew it was wise to stand back and let the people whose job it is to die for him do so. Sometimes that was required. All of that changed when Valgeir vaulted over his bodyguards. Karl Franz was astounded as pink fire blossomed from the priest to consume the Reiksguard around him. As the Reiksguard screamed, burned into charcoal beneath their armor, Karl Franz was tackled from atop his mount and knocked to the ground, Ghal Maraz jarred from his hand. Ludwig Schwartzhelm and his bodyguard attempted to rush to his side but were pushed back by another burst of pink flames. As the Ar-Ulric raised his Ulrican axe for a final decapitating blow, it was known to all witnessing that the Assassin was real, although it wouldn't have brought much comfort to Gelt to know this.

Before the axe could strike home, the Changeling was tackled by Valten. The two rolled over and over in the mud, having lost their weapons in their haste, the two punched and kicked and grappled as the Changeling's form shifted. Karl Franz stood in haste to grab Ghal Maraz, but he could not decide who to assist. Valgeir and Valten were no more, for it was Valten and Valten wrestling in the mud. They were identical in all their features, and Karl Franz was not willing to pulp his savor to take down his assassin.

Thankfully, trusty Deathclaw is there, who's far sharper than the Emperor. The Griffon tackles the closer Valten, who turns out to be the Changeling. The creature transformed into a blue hooded mass of tentacles as it attempts to escape the Griffon's grasp, but the creature only continues to scream as its chest is pierced by the Emperor's Standard, held by a burnt Ludwig Schwartzhelm in charred armor. Ludwig proceeds to destroy the Changeling by slicing into it with his sword, turning it into a pile of goo.

None were so stricken by that sight as Balthasar Gelt. Even as he attempted to stay alive under Kurt Helborg's endless barrage, he still witnessed the events and found that the Emil Valgeir who was his friend was not who he thought he was. He was deceived, and he provided ample distraction for the trickster to proceed with his ploy. Gelt released a bitter anguished cry of despair as he swung his staff to force Helborg to draw back. He took this opportunity to lift off with Quicksilver and leave, the Winds in his grasp unraveling as the undead across the fields collapsed onto the ground. The survivors of the incident left to grasp the pieces of the puzzle.

This battle would later be known as Gelt's Folly, and its ramifications were widespread. Patriarch of the Amber College, Gregor Martak, became the Supreme Patriarch after Gelt. This was only the beginning of the end for the Gold College, because after that, Aldebrach Grimm the Lord Protector of the Templars of Sigmar (Witch Hunters) started a Witch Hunt in the Gold College. Very few of the many that would be put to the pyre were truly guilty, but such was Gelt's reputation that few placed any checks on Grimm and his actions, and some would even cheer him on. This would only be the start of the persecution the Gold College would continue to face. Only the Alchemists who spent all their time on the border maintaining the Auric Bastion escaped these purges.

Gelt knew none of this. In the aftermath of the battle, he left to become Vlad von Carstein's apprentice, eagerly learning all that he could and assisting the Vampire in his mission to resurrect Isabella. Such was his broken frame of mind that he found none of what was in Vlad's halls appalling.

As the year 2525 IC ground on, all of this would pale in comparison to Grand Theogonist Kaslain withdrawing his support of the Auric Bastion on account of its creator being corrupt. Karl Franz dearly missed Volkmar, because as gruff and stubborn as he was, he would not have done as Kaslain. Gelt, as corrupted as he turned out to be, still did good work, and the Auric Bastion could not be allowed to collapse out of principle. Yet nothing Karl Franz could do would change Kaslain's opinion, and his attempts to replace him with another Grand Theogonist failed as the Cult closed ranks to refuse his meddling.

It took a fortnight for the Bastion to collapse. The Gold and Light Orders maintained their rituals, but without the Faith of the priesthood the walls could not repel the Daemons and Warriors pounding on the walls day and day out. The walls began to crumble where it all began, in the Ostermark village of Alderfen, where Gurug'ath the Unclean was sealed within the walls by Gelt months ago. There the walls crumbled, and with a triumphant roar, the Northmen charged under the guidance of the Greater Daemon. Alderfen was overwhelmed in hours, northern Ostermark in days.

Karl Franz decided to collect as many soldiers as he could to personally lead a battle against the hordes using Castle Von Rauken as staging grounds. The Imperials had no idea why the hordes were rushing through Ostermark instead of aiming for Wolfenburg, Middenheim or Talabheim, but it didn't matter, they would fight back.

Vlad was more aware of their reason. They were heading for Sylvania, where Nagash sealed the Wind of Death. That could not be, so Vlad mustered his forces to assist the Imperials in Heffengen, where they would face off against Chaos. Whether the men of the Empire desired it or not, they would not fight alone. The Nameless was left in charge of the Helreach.

And with that, we're done with this section of the chapter. Next is the Battle of Heffengen, which is pretty big, then the final chapter, Land of the Dead, covering the Legions of the Dead vs the Kingdom of Nehekhara.

This one was a doozy. I hope you guys realise part of the reason I took such a long impromptu hiatus. This section was….ugh. If I was being super nitpicky, I could say things like "How the hell did the Staff of Volans, made by Bright Patriarch Von Tarnus, able to withstand the Runefang made by Alaric the Mad?" or "The Changeling is supposedly capable of fooling Gods, but Deathclaw can tell something's wrong and apparently he has trouble with tinge of the divine, yet he assumed the position of the Ar-Ulric, the most divine Ulrican figure". Except I don't need to be nitpicky because so much of this is just contrived bullshit.

Emil Valgeir had absolutely no connection to Gelt, yet they forced one here so that Gelt could be psychologically manipulated by a person who he thought was a friend. Maybe this could have been stronger if there was ever any basis for such a relationship, but it seriously feels out of nowhere, and while I can believe that the two of them can get along, the level of trust he places on Valgeir that he immediately believes that Valten is the shapeshifter despite Valgeir explicitly saying he has no direct evidence that he could show the Emperor…

Like, yeah I get it. Gelt is not in the right state of mind. He just came off a serious bout of insomnia, he's exhausted from constant fights, he's suffering from Dhar exposure and touching other Winds, he's being manipulated by Vlad, he just came off a traumatic experience that he never intended with Ludenhof, and his paranoia has been set to maximum by a shapechanger. He's lost the trust of the people, the Emperor placed his faith in Gelt by giving him a section of the border, and Gelt's been forced to bear a burden of responsibility he never asked for. And yet… it still doesn't feel right. I could go on and on about how some level of contrivance is expected in fiction. Making things work to establish a plotline and move the story where you want it to go is somewhat understandable.

And yet, at a certain point, there's a limit to how far you can go. Especially in an established world with established rules. What this ends up resulting in is a goddamn mess. I understand the concept of this story arc, and I can get how it can be compelling, but the nature of the situation behind the End Times makes the execution fall flat.

It's just depressing. I felt bad.

And now, well. Amethyst College is gone. Gold College is practically gone. Gelt is corrupted. Bretonnia has been sundered. Athel Loren is dying. Kislev is dead. Ulthuan is on the verge of Civil War. The Lizardmen are running away with their tails between their legs. The Skaven have destroyed Tilea, Estalia and the Border Princes. The Dwarves have withdrawn into their Holds. Chaos is winning.

According to Teclis, our only hope is Nagash.
 
They really did just decide where the plot was going to go and twisted every character they had to, as far as it took, to get there.
Yeah, the Game of Thrones' method.

(I know ET is older)

Grand Theogonist Kaslain withdrawing his support of the Auric Bastion on account of its creator being corrupt.
What a stupid, stupid man. Does he die screaming? Please, tell me he dies screaming.
 
This battle would later be known as Gelt's Folly, and its ramifications were widespread. Patriarch of the Amber College, Gregor Martak, became the Supreme Patriarch after Gelt. This was only the beginning of the end for the Gold College, because after that, Aldebrach Grimm the Lord Protector of the Templars of Sigmar (Witch Hunters) started a Witch Hunt in the Gold College. Very few of the many that would be put to the pyre were truly guilty, but such was Gelt's reputation that few placed any checks on Grimm and his actions, and some would even cheer him on. This would only be the start of the persecution the Gold College would continue to face. Only the Alchemists who spent all their time on the border maintaining the Auric Bastion escaped these purges.

Gelt knew none of this. In the aftermath of the battle, he left to become Vlad von Carstein's apprentice, eagerly learning all that he could and assisting the Vampire in his mission to resurrect Isabella. Such was his broken frame of mind that he found none of what was in Vlad's halls appalling.

As the year 2525 IC ground on, all of this would pale in comparison to Grand Theogonist Kaslain withdrawing his support of the Auric Bastion on account of its creator being corrupt. Karl Franz dearly missed Volkmar, because as gruff and stubborn as he was, he would not have done as Kaslain. Gelt, as corrupted as he turned out to be, still did good work, and the Auric Bastion could not be allowed to collapse out of principle. Yet nothing Karl Franz could do would change Kaslain's opinion, and his attempts to replace him with another Grand Theogonist failed as the Cult closed ranks to refuse his meddling.
Oh look, the Empire happily commits suicide.

I mean, trying to purge an entire college during an ongoing war would already be madness in itself, but also breaking down the only wall between you and the inexplicably endless hordes of Chaos, that finishes it.
 
If a loyal servant of the Empire was compromised by Djar and manipulated by Daemons into inadvertently betraying the Empire, I can see them reacting badly, but not immediately dropping everything to go call Vlad senpai. Maybe this is supposed to suggest that Gelt never really had the best interests of the Empire motivating him, but if Gelt isn't supposed to be a tragic hero, why has the narration been apologising and excusing Gelt this whole time?

The most frustrating part is that in the broadest strokes the components of all of this could make a compelling story, but the actual implementation of any of it is deeply flawed in countless ways.
 
If a loyal servant of the Empire was compromised by Djar and manipulated by Daemons into inadvertently betraying the Empire, I can see them reacting badly, but not immediately dropping everything to go call Vlad senpai. Maybe this is supposed to suggest that Gelt never really had the best interests of the Empire motivating him, but if Gelt isn't supposed to be a tragic hero, why has the narration been apologising and excusing Gelt this whole time?

The most frustrating part is that in the broadest strokes the components of all of this could make a compelling story, but the actual implementation of any of it is deeply flawed in countless ways.
To be fair, he had nowhere to go. He just left a battlefield where he killed dozens if not hundreds of Imperial Soldiers after just finding out that the person he was working with was manipulating him so he could be a distraction. He couldn't resume his position on the Bastion because he likely would be hunted down and get even more people killed, so I assume he went to the guy he thought would help him, who he established an alliance with and has been manipulating him for weeks now.

Overall, It feels like Gelt's had very little agency throughout this arc. Almost everything that happened seemed to occur despite him rather than because of him. Whether it was the Walls of Sylvania, the Auric Bastion, Nagash's revival and the Wall's collapse, the Changeling's manipulations, Vlad's manipulations, or the series of misunderstandings and coincidences leading to a chain of events that turns out perfectly to get him to inadvertently kill Ludenhof and reveal himself as a Necromancer in front of the Emperor. He really feels like a puppet.
 
It's a crying shame that the man who began from the humblest origins, (getting off a boat to Altdorf, paying the captain in counterfeit gold coins, and knocking on the door of the Colleges of the Magic, "Good morning, I am Mister...Mister Gold, and I wish to to join the Gold College and learn Gold Magic.") and from there rose to become Supreme Patriarch ended up this way.
 
Honestly on the Changling thing and Gelt trusting a person so closely who he have little narrative reason to be such a close friend with is a really easy fix. Like simply take the Arl Ulric and swap him out with the Patriarch of the Light order (since they are noted to be involved in the wall) or one of the other colleges, basically someone who Gelt has likely been working with for years and has every reason to trust.

Also it avoids the "Changling has trouble with the divine" plot hole, at least partially, as the Changling is pretending to be a wizard and all that.

On Gelt's side of things it would be more in character and lore accurate to have him be aware of the Dhar corruption caused by touching more than one wind, hell even have him fret about it. But then use the plot point that he doesn't have the time to cleans himself through the normal methods, as if he does then he can't help the wall meaning people will die or the wall could fail.

Basically have him arrogantly think that he could handle it, that a mage of his brilliance can resist the taint long enough and then he can cleanse himself.
 
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Anakin at least did evil things of his own volition, rather than "its actually good if you think about it" , "its bad because its dhar and for no other reason", "its bad because the other aside attacked first and his hand magic was twitchy" and "its bad because he was tricked". (Although he also has the dark side and Palpatine, so 2 and 4 still apply, just in ways that actually give him more agency)

Then again, I only know what I read in this thread, and Gelt's arc is not done, he may do something genuinely monstrous rather than keep up with the tragic misunderstandings and the "why is this bad again? just because it uses dhar?"s
 
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