Kaleidoscope Swordswoman, Sasaki Koujirou Quest (Nasuverse/Yuki Yuna is a Hero Crossover)

Should Koujirou retain his Drying Pole?

  • Yes, but Koujirou should be able to astralize it and resummon it at will.

    Votes: 36 73.5%
  • Yes, but it has to be permanently physical.

    Votes: 9 18.4%
  • No.

    Votes: 4 8.2%

  • Total voters
    49
  • Poll closed .
Wait, when does Kars do sword Beams? The closest I remember is him using it to reflect light, but he never really went in for sword Beams.
He can cut people from farther away than he should be able to, and it's often accompanied by a curve of refracted light that transcribes the arc of the cut. Thus, sword beams.
 
The scene where Lisa Lisa holds up the red stone. The beam starts firing before JoJo and Caesar have really moved, so they dodged it at a speed greater than that of light.
Manga panels, maybe, but the Anime is pretty clear that A) The laser, as lasers should, hits before they can react, and B) is not aimed anywhere they would need to doge. The motion was entirely "holyshitwhatthefuck a laser just blasted a crater in the ground!" jumps of surprise.
 
Alrighty, votes closed. Could somebody take a tally for me? My app is still fucked up.

It's a very close and highly contested vote:
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[X] Are you feeling well Itsuki?
No. of Votes: 13
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[X] I'm sorry you had to see that.
No. of Votes: 3
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Total No. of Voters: 16
 
Story Post 20
Shorter post due to me trying to get back into the groove of this quest after a long hiatus. Nope, it isn't dead yet.

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[X] Are you feeling well Itsuki?

Itsuki lowers he head, eyes downcast. "I'm– Yes, sempai. I'm doing well enough."

You nod awkwardly in response. "That's a relief."

"Yue-sempai... can we talk about what happened later?" Itsuki asks in a small voice.

You smile as warmly as you can, patting the younger girl on the head. "Of course, Itsuki," you whisper back.

"Hey, what are you two whispering about? Gossiping about boys, hm?" Fu jams her face in between the two of you, causing Itsuki to turn beet red.

"W-what? Of course not, nee-chan!"

The rest of the afternoon passed by in a flash, the four of you giggling (you're still getting used to "that" aspect of your new body) as you discussed various topics. Come nightfall, Itsuki is released from the hospital when the doctors finish their examinations, and the Hero Club members go their separate ways.

Much later, after you're certain Fu has gone to bed, you and Itsuki meet in her room.

"Yue-sempai... this wasn't a simple kidnapping was it? I know what I saw wasn't just a dream."

You bow your head. "I'm afraid it wasn't Itsuki. I... I'm sorry you had to see that. No girl your age should be exposed to that sort of violence."

Itsuki smiles grimly. "You saved me, Yue-sempai. Even if I don't agree fully with what you did, I could never hold it against you! What kind of girl would that make me?"

That... could have gone worse.

You pat Itsuki on the head, ruffling her hair a bit.

[ ] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.

[ ] The same as above, but have Itsuki attempt to transform as well. She seems to possess a "guardian" as well.
 
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[X] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.

No need to rush her, let her take her time.
 
[ X] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.

I agree with @Neo-Chan, let's let Itsuki finish her emotional healing as well as her physical healing.
 
[x] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.
 
[x] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.
 
[X] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.
 
... Does she not remember? Convinced herself it didn't happen like it really did?

Repression's a hell of a drug let me tell you.
Nah, she's still just coming to terms with seeing someone die. She's only 12 after all.

Also, if this wasn't clear in the text, can you tell me what threw you off so I can fix it to make it more clear? I forget to write down little details occasionally.
 
[X] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.
 
[X] The same as above, but have Itsuki attempt to transform as well. She seems to possess a "guardian" as well.

No secrets between us.
 
Itsuki lowers he head, eyes downcast. "I- Yes, sempai. I'm doing well enough."
"I—yes, sempai. […] enough."

Em dash because she faltered in her speech and changed it. I guess you could do so with just stumbling words, but there is a long precedent of using hyphens for those ("W-what?").

Your word processor didn't convert the second quotation mark. A possible solution is to alter your keyboard settings so you can directly write them. There is already one made based on the US QWERTY keyboard*, found here: Typography Layout

It was created via Microsoft Keyboard Layout Creator 1.4

If you feel unsatisfied with the one Ilya made, you can modify it or change just a few of your keyboard's characters.

* He mentioned this in the comments section of Typography Keyboard Layout: Download Now! – Smashing Magazine
Ilya Birman said:
Everyone, please notice, that this software uses the standard English QWERTY layout as a base, so if your language uses different keyboard, you won't feel quite confortable with it. But still, we welcome your feedback, both positive and negative: it will help us do better in possible future versions. Thanks!
Dave said:
You say that this works with "standard English QWERTY layout" but there is no such thing. Do you mean en-US, en-GB or what?
Ilya Birman said:
Dave, I guess I mean en-US :)
You smile as warmly as you can, patting the younger girl on the head. "Of course, Itsuki." you whisper back.
Itsuki," you
The rest of the afternoon passed by in a flash, the four of you giggling (you're still getting used to 'that' aspect of your new body)
used to "that"

[X] Return to your room and change into your new form. Take note of that form's physical capabilities and powers.
 
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