I'm not going to say that there is going to be lots of combat in this story, because in all honesty there probably isn't. One of the big problems I have with ME fics in general is that most of them tend to end up being numberwank sessions with vast amounts of data on exactly how long the ships are (they really have a thing about length. It's a little concerning...,) the exact model number of each weapon used, any number of descriptions of battles that could mostly have been avoided with a little care, and so on. I don't need to read that amount of data on each gun, and if I did I could just download a brochure from an arms company, which is what a few fics I quickly gave up on felt like!

On the other hand, it's the ME-verse, at least in part. Things almost certainly will get all blowed up sooner or later. That's sort of how the entire thing is set up, almost as if someone was trying to make a game and force as much combat as possible while ignoring realism... 🤔

Strange, that.

On paper, the Reapers could easily be wiped out with trivial effort. Assuming that (A) humanity and their friends actually know about them, (B) the Reapers don't have the brains to change tactics (I like the orange ones,) and (C) they decide to do something about the problem.

A hasn't happened yet, and absent a random discovery, isn't likely to for the moment, as the Relays have been very carefully and thoroughly purged of anything that would lead someone to the builders. Space is very large, and randomly stumbling across the buggers even with long range planium detectors and the blink drive is still fairly unlikely, except by accident.

B is an unknown. The Reapers are devious and smart, we know that, but they're also dicks, we know that too. It's not impossible that some at least would just come bulling in, cause problems, and disappear in a blue fireball when they sufficiently pissed off the humanx civilizations. But it's also not impossible that they may be monitoring things, as in fact in canon was at least partially true, and might be sitting back and thinking very hard about what the fuck they do now...

C is almost a given, though.

There are also a lot of other parameters involved, so it's not entirely cut and dried. There are certainly situations that could arise where the ability to just fire the fuck off beam wouldn't actually be viable. If you're inside a system with something or someone you value in it and you do that to kill a ship, you might well kill the entire system as well. It's somewhat irresponsible. The big problem with weaponized planium is that it's too good. Even a small amount will cause enormous damage, and that makes it very difficult to use for precision strikes. Zap a Relay, sure, you solve the problem, but you solve it by removing not only the problem, but all the problem's friends, relatives, pets, houseplants, and so on. At times, that could be considered overkill :)

For the most part, they'd just leave, rather than fight. If they need to fight, though, planium destabilization is the last resort, not the first. At least on purpose.

After all, we've had nuclear weapons since the 1940s, but wars we have are fought with chemical propellants and small lumps of high speed lead more than anything else. No one wants to be the first to take the gloves off, because at that point everything is up in the air.

@Epsilon Rose The problem is that people take the lightsaber and death star thing extremely literally. The same people also only consider combat to be valid "literary conflict". Interpersonal relationships? Not a valid source of dramatic tension. The back and forth of high stakes political intrigue? Not valid either. Only the protagonist engaging in battle with the antagonist is an acceptable form of dramatic tension to such people. Which makes me wonder how they can read a good spy thriller or mystery and enjoy it. You know, since a well written spy thriller will not be focusing on combat. It'll focus on the cat and mouse dynamic of parties trying to stealthily accomplish something while other parties are trying to find them. And a good mystery wont even have violence. Well, other then an "off camera" murder which sets up the mystery.

This, however, is entirely valid, I agree. The insistence that 'conflict' in a story must mean literal armed conflict is something that entirely baffles me. There are a vast, vast number of stories where no one actually kills anyone!

I mean, not that many love stories have a body count... Sure, there are a few but they're the exception ;)

You can have a good story with plenty of tension without using violence at all. I've seen it done. I'm even told I've done it myself a couple of times.
 
The problem with that is we pretty much already know the answer: They don't.

The two civs getting near each other is a, pretty resoundingly, bad idea. At the same time, absent some external pressure, there's also no real reason for them to interact. As this fic has done a good job of highlighting, there is a lot of space in, well, space. The Eezo civs can easily stick to their lanes and the WIMP civs can go everywhere else and they'll never have a need to bother each other, outside minor curiosity or maybe some ethical concerns on the WIMP side.
Stealing WIMP technology, getting to 'know' an Asari, Batarian slavers plotting how to get their hands on exclusive wares, the Reapers trying to come up with an answer, the Geth splitting into 'contact them' and 'stay the hell away factions', ...

Yes, no chance for interaction.
 
Stealing WIMP technology, getting to 'know' an Asari, Batarian slavers plotting how to get their hands on exclusive wares, the Reapers trying to come up with an answer, the Geth splitting into 'contact them' and 'stay the hell away factions', ...

Yes, no chance for interaction.
Besides the fact that humanity has removed the only relay that allows entrance to that section of the galaxy?
 
I think what he's saying is if the Reapers who created the Palladium trap would probably have Protected Their Mass Effect course
I was talking about the guy saying stuff about interaction as humanity has moved the only relay into their section of the galaxy so unless the mass effect people are very lucky they might not get into contact with humanity at all.
 
On the other hand, it's the ME-verse, at least in part. Things almost certainly will get all blowed up sooner or later. That's sort of how the entire thing is set up, almost as if someone was trying to make a game and force as much combat as possible while ignoring realism...


Or alternatively, almost as if it was a story where the basic premise is a new technology that makes huge explosions all over the ME universe.
But what kind of silly writer would do that?
 
@Epsilon Rose The problem is that people take the lightsaber and death star thing extremely literally. The same people also only consider combat to be valid "literary conflict". Interpersonal relationships? Not a valid source of dramatic tension. The back and forth of high stakes political intrigue? Not valid either. Only the protagonist engaging in battle with the antagonist is an acceptable form of dramatic tension to such people. Which makes me wonder how they can read a good spy thriller or mystery and enjoy it. You know, since a well written spy thriller will not be focusing on combat. It'll focus on the cat and mouse dynamic of parties trying to stealthily accomplish something while other parties are trying to find them. And a good mystery wont even have violence. Well, other then an "off camera" murder which sets up the mystery.
I feel like you might be overgeneralizing here, a little bit. I can't speak for others, nor do I have any statistics on the group of people who use that phrase, but I am a person who is fond of it and I definitely don't think that way; hopefully I've demonstrated as much in my posts. I don't know what to tell you beyond that, though?

I think the general message of "If you boost the power of your protagonist, make sure you still have a functional conflict and reasonable tension, even if the power boost and conflict are not directly connected." is a valuable one. It makes the simplistic suggestion of also increasing the power of the antagonist in some way, but I think some allowances can be made for the sake of a pithy quote. I'll concede that it's use often does focus on the raw fighting power side of things, but I think that's partially due to how prevalent combat is in a lot of fan-fiction, and media in general.
I'm not going to say that there is going to be lots of combat in this story, because in all honesty there probably isn't. One of the big problems I have with ME fics in general is that most of them tend to end up being numberwank sessions with vast amounts of data on exactly how long the ships are (they really have a thing about length. It's a little concerning...,) the exact model number of each weapon used, any number of descriptions of battles that could mostly have been avoided with a little care, and so on. I don't need to read that amount of data on each gun, and if I did I could just download a brochure from an arms company, which is what a few fics I quickly gave up on felt like!
Yeah. That's probably a good take. Even in stories that focus on combat, the interpersonal and internal struggles tend to be what really carries the story (just look at any good shonen anime), and once you hit a certain tech or power level that stops fitting into the mechanics of the actual fighting. There are a lot of ways to play with the Reapers and how they interact with the story, but even in a version of IS with more dangerous Reapers and a lot of in universe fighting, I'd expect the story to mostly focus on other things.
There are also a lot of other parameters involved, so it's not entirely cut and dried. There are certainly situations that could arise where the ability to just fire the fuck off beam wouldn't actually be viable. If you're inside a system with something or someone you value in it and you do that to kill a ship, you might well kill the entire system as well. It's somewhat irresponsible. The big problem with weaponized planium is that it's too good. Even a small amount will cause enormous damage, and that makes it very difficult to use for precision strikes. Zap a Relay, sure, you solve the problem, but you solve it by removing not only the problem, but all the problem's friends, relatives, pets, houseplants, and so on. At times, that could be considered overkill

That's actually a really good point and one I hadn't thought of before. Even if the Reapers stay exactly like their canon counterparts, the Humanx are unlikely to run into them until they start the invasion, at which point the reapers will often be in colonized systems. Since their motivation to get involved would be protecting the other races, anything that results in erasing entire systems isn't a valid solution, which pretty much rules out the NOPE beam. That means they'd need to figure out a way to help the ME races run away, without making them explode, or a way to neutralize the Reapers without WIMP weapons.

I think they'd still have a massive edge, even if they're just using WIMP drives to deliver inert kinetic payloads or cheat C-lag with mundane weapons, but that's less of an edge and I could see reasons why it would still be unacceptable. There'd also still be a lot of interesting ground to cover with how they suddenly introduce themselves to the ME races in the middle of the crisis, with ready made solutions at no cost, because none of that is highly suspicious. (Assuming the Humanx avoid contact before that point.)

Stealing WIMP technology, getting to 'know' an Asari, Batarian slavers plotting how to get their hands on exclusive wares, the Reapers trying to come up with an answer, the Geth splitting into 'contact them' and 'stay the hell away factions', ...

Yes, no chance for interaction.

The first three result in a pretty blue ball of fire. The human side isn't that stupid and the ME side can't feasibly get to the human side.

The Reapers trying to come up with an answer pretty much fits in with what's been discussed and decried.

The Geth split could happen and they could download their software onto WIMP compatible hardware, but that's still unlikely to draw in the rest of the races, since the Geth are also highly isolationist and none of that interaction really requires the other races. Even with the Quarians, it's unlikely to result in much more than a note saying "Hey, we don't hold the Morning War against you and we've left the home-world, you're welcome to it at any time," because the Geth have basically given up on a full reconciliation at this point and they've already started their plan to leave so the Quarians can return. As you said, there be some internal tension with the Geth, but we've already seen the way they deal with those types of splits and, effectively, going their separate ways isn't really a conflict. I think the greatest potential in this scenario would be if it happens after Sovereign contacts them, at which point you're back to the question of what the Reapers can actually do with the story, only this time the humans have advanced warning and incentive to use their crazy scanning tech.

Also, as has already been pointed out, the Humans have mostly, or completely, isolated their part of the galaxy at this point, which would make it very hard for an ME race to initiate contact, even if they wanted to.
 
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The reapers, one way or another, aren't a massive problem...
Well, individually, the Reapers are pretty big, but as long as Humanx catch them outside an inhabited system, they really aren't a problem, just a pretty firework that screws up navigation from all the particulates that get scattered everywhere. :whistle:
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85% of Lizards interviewed expressed a preference for Toabasco as the preferred medium. :grin:
 
Any military conflict between this Earth and the Citadel Council is going to end up something like this:

Council Ambassador: "... and finally, we must insist that you renounce all further use of the weapon you deployed at Shanxi."

Humanx Ambassador: "It's not our fault you stuff your ships with the most powerful explosive in the known universe and then whine when it goes off."
 
Any military conflict between this Earth and the Citadel Council is going to end up something like this:

Council Ambassador: "... and finally, we must insist that you renounce all further use of the weapon you deployed at Shanxi."

Humanx Ambassador: "It's not our fault you stuff your ships with the most powerful explosive in the known universe and then whine when it goes off."
... No, no, I don't think that's quite right. Because the Humanx side of things would be the ones more likely to be making demands, from a significant position of power, and further not being willing to risk even going near the Citadel with all the planium in the thing and thus insisting that the Citadel send someone to them. And, because of all the planium contamination, still wanting to do the meeting via telepresence.
 
Any military conflict between this Earth and the Citadel Council is going to end up something like this:

Council Ambassador: "... and finally, we must insist that you renounce all further use of the weapon you deployed at Shanxi."

Humanx Ambassador: "It's not our fault you stuff your ships with the most powerful explosive in the known universe and then whine when it goes off."

"Weapon? Ah... Oh, do you mean our security scanner system?"
 
"Weapon? Ah... Oh, do you mean our security scanner system?"

It's a bit like that one TNG episode with the Han Solo expy.

"Why are we at yellow alert?"
"Regulations dictate that any other ship's armaments aimed at the ship be responded to with at minimum yellow alert. Even gigawatt lasers."
"Lasers!? Our navigational sensors are enough to prevent any damage from those."
"Yessir. But the regulations are quite clear."
"We'll have to update the regs, then."

Only in this case the navigational sensors make the enemy explode.
 
A galaxy, even a fairly modestly sized one like ours, is very very big.

People tend to underestimate that to an enormous level. The way the games work doesn't help, since it tends to make it look like you can practically trip over stars just by aiming in a random direction and going for it.

There is this "game" - Space Engine which simulates known cosmic objects and adds everything else procedurally using current scientific basis - it allows user to travel in space in real time and change parameters of the drive. It really simulates how empty and bewildering space is.
 
There is this "game" - Space Engine which simulates known cosmic objects and adds everything else procedurally using current scientific basis - it allows user to travel in space in real time and change parameters of the drive. It really simulates how empty and bewildering space is.

Are you sure it's not just a black screen with a few tiny lit pixels on it that never move? That would be a fairly accurate simulation... ;)
 
It's a bit like that one TNG episode with the Han Solo expy.

"Why are we at yellow alert?"
"Regulations dictate that any other ship's armaments aimed at the ship be responded to with at minimum yellow alert. Even gigawatt lasers."
"Lasers!? Our navigational sensors are enough to prevent any damage from those."
"Yessir. But the regulations are quite clear."
"We'll have to update the regs, then."

Only in this case the navigational sensors make the enemy explode.
Navigational deflectors (the fields that keep space dust from making holes in Starfleet's shiny science vessel), not sensors.
 
... No, no, I don't think that's quite right. Because the Humanx side of things would be the ones more likely to be making demands, from a significant position of power, and further not being willing to risk even going near the Citadel with all the planium in the thing and thus insisting that the Citadel send someone to them. And, because of all the planium contamination, still wanting to do the meeting via telepresence.

Oh, the Humax did make their demands, this is just the Citadel Council's attempt to convince them not to make it entirely one-sided.

"Lasers!? Our navigational sensors are enough to prevent any damage from those."

Having flashbacks here to the Minbari/Earth Alliance first contact, where the Minbari scanners futzed with the EA ships' electronics so much that Jank-kowski assumed it was an EWar attack and opened fire.
 
Having flashbacks here to the Minbari/Earth Alliance first contact, where the Minbari scanners futzed with the EA ships' electronics so much that Jank-kowski assumed it was an EWar attack and opened fire.
Did not help that Minbari tradition also mandated they approach the Earth vessel with their gunports open.
 
As I understand it, they happened on humans apparently trying to activate a relay, presumably 314. However, I'm still somewhat puzzled about how that actually works. 314 led to the Shanxi system as far as I know, as the Turians went through it to attack the place, in what was definitely an act of war although that tends to get glossed over a lot. So the relay in the Shanxi system couldn't have been 314, it was one that 314 connected to.

So how did humans get to 314? Did they go through it from the Shanxi end? Presumably, in which case the Turians must have discovered an unknown ship or ships near a relay that was previous dormant and now wasn't, jumped to conclusions very hard indeed, and fucked things up beyond belief on the spot. But that then leads to how did the Turians get to 314? Via standard FTL drive, or through another relay in the system? I haven't been able to find out a definitive answer for that, and don't have the games.

I chose to work on the basis that some systems have two relays, as links in a chain, the 314 system was one of those, and the Turians were transiting the system using the other relay when they noticed that 314 was now active. You could also use the approach that a neighboring system might have had the relay, and it was within a couple of light years or so, making the transit time between them a matter of hours, which would still be fairly trivial. I doubt very much that the other relay was more than a dozen or so lightyears away, though, or the likelihood of the Turians just wandering past seems low. They'd have little reason to use a couple of days just to check up on a known dormant relay as far as I can see.
To clarify this as a person who has studied quite a bit of Mass Effect Lore. Relay 314 was not a relay connected to Shanxi. Shanxi was simply the closest human colony in relation to Relay 314. Relay 314 remain inactive throughout the war.

At that point, humans were expanding very aggressively through the relay network and activating any relays that they find through exploration ships and exploring any and all nearby systems. One such group happen to encounter a Turian patrol group while they were attempting to activate Relay 314. Instead of negotiating or giving out any warning, the Turian group instantly opened fired and destroyed all but one ship that escaped to warn the Alliance which then sent a retaliatory force and destroyed that Turian Patrol fleet. Thing quickly escalated as both sides prepared for war.

Now in between this incident to the occupation of Shanxi, there were actually quite a number of conflicts in which Turian fleets would encounter and destroy human scouts and patrol groups as they searched for human colonies. Eventually, they would break through and discover Shanxi and after obtaining orbital supremacy, they began a protracted siege on the planet. Human resources were already stretched thin due to exploration efforts so Shanxi had no choice but to surrender as they couldn't obtain food/supplies without risking civilians from orbital bombardment. Believing they had defeated the majority of human forces, the turians moved to occupy and now they suffered from logistics due to needing to ship food from their space to Shanxi. A month after the surrender, the Alliance Second Fleet arrived and took the Turians by surprise, evicting them from Shanxi. As both sides prepared for long term war, the Council intervened.

The First Contact War lasted three months and had a total death toll of 623 human lives, and slightly more turian lives.

In regards to any Prothean ruins on Shanxi, there was none. What happened was that a Turian research vessel that was carrying an artifact (a Reaper Tech called Arca Monolith) crashed landed on Shanxi. General Desolus was charged with the mission of finding that artifact and the downed vessel which then leads to the encounter of Jack Harper and his team.
This entire event happens in Mass Effect Evolution comics, which I'm not bothered writing the entire thing down. All I would say is that indoctrination happened with Desolus going all Transturian and wants to convert the entire turian race into supersoldiers, Jack and Saren teaming up to kill Desolus on Pavalen in a Temple that has another Monolith, and then Jack leaving with the death of his friends becoming the Illusive Man and starting Cerberus.
 
It's a bit like that one TNG episode with the Han Solo expy.

"Why are we at yellow alert?"
"Regulations dictate that any other ship's armaments aimed at the ship be responded to with at minimum yellow alert. Even gigawatt lasers."
"Lasers!? Our navigational sensors are enough to prevent any damage from those."
"Yessir. But the regulations are quite clear."
"We'll have to update the regs, then."

Only in this case the navigational sensors make the enemy explode.
Navigational deflectors (the fields that keep space dust from making holes in Starfleet's shiny science vessel), not sensors.
You wouldn't happen to know which episode that was, would you?
 
1. Guest Omake - They CANNOT be serious...
So this came to me and I had to write it to get it out of my head. I apologize for anything that feels off about it from a Mass Effect point of view, as I've never actually played the games and know the setting essentially entirely from a few stories I've read.



The Citadel Council looked at the projection of the Humanx ambassador, annoyed that they hadn't bothered to show up in person. The Asari representative was the first to express their combined displeasure.

"We thought that when you agreed to send someone to speak with us that you would actually arrive in person."

The ambassador looked at the three of them. "My apologies, but we were going to insist on you sending someone to us, up until we realized just how dangerous even the least contaminated of your people happen to be. Since there's no way that any of our people, of any of our physical persuasions, would be willing to meet with a walking bomb in person we had to resort to other measures. On that subject, I'd like to apologize in advance for any lag. Given how dangerous your 'Citadel' is, and you're crazy for putting your seat of government on a giant bomb by the way, we're erring on the side of caution even now and running this communication channel through multiple relays of our own. If you should suddenly explode it shouldn't be possible to traverse the communication link, and we know it, but the extra degrees of separation make us feel more comfortable."

"Why do you consider the Citadel to be a giant bomb?" the Salarian representative asked. "We have seen no sign of any issues with it since taking residence."

There was a pause, partially due to lag, before the Humanx ambassador was able to respond. "I'm sorry, you took residence of an existing structure and based your government out of it?"

"Yes, but we have never seen any sign of it being as dangerous as you imply."

"It contains a sizable mass of planium, though I understand that you call it 'element zero'. We've found the substance to be dangerously unstable under circumstances that are far too common for us."

The Salarian leaned forward. "We're unaware of any situation where element zero could be considered to be 'unstable'. Do you have any evidence of this supposed fact?"

The Humanx ambassador nodded. "The very incident that we both wished to talk about is a prime example. We warned the Turian vessels that stumbled upon one of our damaged vessels to stay back. While we still aren't positive as to what hit the vessel, we do know that it caused significant damage to components of its drive system just before a jump. That's how it ended up almost a thousand lightyears off course in the first place, but it made it very dangerous for anyone using planium to approach the vessel at the same time."

"You wiped out six of our ships," the Turian representative finally said. "Not a single individual survived whatever superweapon you were obviously trying to sneak into Citadel space, and you damaged the refueling station and two planets in the system as well. It may very well have only been luck that one of the planets shielded the relay and the lone ship waiting by it."

"Two of your ships opened fire upon a civilian vessel. The ship's intelligence saw that as sufficient justification to override the safeties and activate the drive system to leave despite the presence of planium in the danger zone. They escaped, but the flux caused by their damaged drive likely destabilized the planium in the attacking vessels."

There was a pause as the three representatives digested some of that, though the Salarian had reeled before that. He was the first to recover, possibly due to having the first shock of realization. "Your civilian vessel was almost a thousand lightyears off course?"

The Humanx ambassador nodded again. "Indeed. They ended up going almost exactly the opposite direction that they'd intended. It was pure chance that they ended up in a system at all, and incredibly good luck that in doing so they didn't land next to the 'relay', as you call it. Arriving in that manner, with their drive system damaged, would've been fatal. It is due to that hazard that we must demand that none of your planium-using vessels enter the regions of the galaxy that we sent you. A demand that you have stated that you will be denying, despite being made on our part for your own safety. In fact, our intelligence service indicates that you've actually prepared fleets to start making your way into the region."

The Turian representative bared his teeth. "Yes. We will not allow your transgression to go unanswered. Especially as we also suspect that you're behind several missing relays."

"We did remove all of the relays leading into our region of the galaxy, as well as all of the relays inside of said region. Cleaning up some of the planium remnants is taking longer, of course. At the same time, we figured that you would need more evidence as to why you should not cross us, and after a vote among our people we've decided to give two demonstrations for you today. Luckily, you have fleets in position in suitable systems for both of them."

"Demonstrations?" the Asari representative questioned, sounding concerned. "What kind of demonstrations?"

The Humanx ambassador's projection was replaced with the image of a star system, one that was quickly identified by the council as being a staging area for one of the prepared incursions into the Humanx region of space. It was at the end of a relay chain that was otherwise useless due to the lack of a relay into the Humanx region. The image showed the small collection of vessels preparing a resource station there.

"To start with," the ambassador said. "We've got several scout drones in this system right now, and one of them just landed on the relay there. This is going to be a...delicate procedure, but our intelligences assure me that we've got all of the calculations correct and have provided plenty of 'buffer'. We just need to wait for the shutdown commands that the relay has been given to finish their job."

"Buffer for what?" the Salarian asked, a moment before the relay in the image vanished. Seconds later the terminals for all three councilors started beeping frantically, and the Salarian hit his first. "What is it?"

"A mass relay just appeared on the edge of the system," came from the other side of the conversation. "We have no clue where it came from or how it got here."

The other two were getting similar reports, and all three representatives stared at the image being projected. The Asari representative took a deep breath before speaking. "Did you just move a relay a significant distance?"

"Indeed," the Humanx ambassador's voice replied. "Luckily it should only be a couple of weeks for your vessels to make it home, and they should have plenty of resources for doing so with the station that they were setting up. Still, you aren't aware of what could've happened if we'd gotten that wrong, as slim as the chances were with all of the prep work we did." The projected image changed to a different system, on the edge of the acknowledged Citadel space. One commonly used as a transit point through the Relay network.

"Do you plan on crippling our transportation by moving another relay?" the Turian asked, oddly calm in the face of what had happened already. "By breaking the link that system provides?"

"Oh no. I've been assured that the two relays in use in the system will be perfectly safe. The demonstration here is the third relay in this moon here." One of the moons around a gas giant lit up in the projected image. "We've removed the counterpart to it in our region of space already, but hadn't found a good way to remove it due to the frequency that people pass through this system. Convenient for us now, granted, especially since there are vessels from five different species there. We've deployed a drone to the moon, which has been broadcasting a warning for a few minutes now and feel that we're ready."

"Are you about to move the entire moon?" the Salarian asked.

"No, though that's within our capabilities. It just happens to be positioned well to demonstrate how lucky it was that the damaged vessel didn't land on top of the relay. But first, to show you what you can't see, let's power the relay up."

A moment later the image showed the moon shaking, and then blasting apart to reveal a hidden relay. That caused all three council members to reel back in shock. They watched as the relay went through a cycle that they recognized, before powering back down.

"There we go. It attempted to contact its counterpart, failed, and we blocked the 'phone home for service' routine and has shut down properly. We haven't figured out where those calls go yet, but we'd rather not get their attention right now. Now our drone has had its drive system deliberately modified to allow it to simulate the damage the civilian vessel's damaged drive, and has engaged those modifications. It will be returning home shortly."

A few seconds later all three members of the council looked like they might faint as the previously-hidden relay exploded, taking out the gas giant with it and causing widespread destruction throughout the entire system. The other vessels in the system were obviously in a state of panic at that point as well, a couple that had started to move to examine the exposed relay spinning around to flee from the sudden explosion instead.

Several minutes later the Humanx ambassador spoke up. "Having seen what happens when our technology interacts with planium, I'm sure that you understand why you should be leaving our region of space alone. With that said, we'll await a revised decision on your part regarding staying out of our region of space. We've also prepared a set of warning protocols that we'd like you to agree to, in case any of our vessels have another accident and end up in your space without intending to."

The transmission cut, and the projection shut off, but it took almost an hour for the council members to properly recover.

"They are very subtle with their threats," the Salarian finally said.

The other two turned to stare at him, the Asari pointing at where the projection had been. "Provided we can confirm that explosion, how can you possibly call that subtle? It was the exact opposite!"

"They have a drive system that allows for incredible range at impossible speeds, something that we cannot match, and damaging it causes element zero to explode. They first demonstrated this by moving a relay into this system, with no apparent trouble beyond ensuring that they didn't cause it to explode. Coupled with their belief that the Citadel is a bomb waiting to happen?"

The other two obviously realized what the Salarian was saying at that point. Though they delayed any serious contemplation of the topic by both fainting on the spot.
 
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