- Location
- Buenos aires
sorry about the grammar dont have grammarly on the phone and it was written in between periods i will edit later on
God save the tsar (Imperial Russia quest)
- Thread starter captain_mercury
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sorry about the grammar dont have grammarly on the phone and it was written in between periods i will edit later on
- Location
- Asia
[X] Plan: Favored Negotiations
- Location
- alphen aan den rijn
no worry its fine might want too check your auto-correct.
lol missed the mistake i made while pointing out your!
- Location
- Australia
- Location
- Manila, Philippines
[X] Plan: Favored Negotiations
Kufufu
Adequate at best
- Location
- What's it to ya?
[X] Plan: WE WILL TAKE JERUSALEM! (Eventually)
[X] Take the holy city of Constantinople, drive them out of their homes in the name of The Lord! DEUS VULT!!
[X] with the leaders of these rebellions now somewhat friendly to you see if you can get them to strike an alliance with you and secure them into your zone of influence
[X] Send inquiries as to possible cooperation with Greece to both coordinate with them and help them coordinate with (Greek, Macedonian, and Albanian) rebels to the north.
[X] Take the holy city of Constantinople, drive them out of their homes in the name of The Lord! DEUS VULT!!
[X] with the leaders of these rebellions now somewhat friendly to you see if you can get them to strike an alliance with you and secure them into your zone of influence
[X] Send inquiries as to possible cooperation with Greece to both coordinate with them and help them coordinate with (Greek, Macedonian, and Albanian) rebels to the north.
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- Australia
I love the enthusiasm, but man we aren't even at Ankara yet, let alone able to reenact a certain Venetian Doge.
Though I wouldn't be upset if we could dismantle the Ottomans and absorbing Armenia would be amazing.
We probably can't accomplish taking Constantinople yet
Though I wouldn't be upset if we could dismantle the Ottomans and absorbing Armenia would be amazing.
We probably can't accomplish taking Constantinople yet
[X] Plan: Favored Negotiations
- Location
- Earth
[X] Plan: Favored Negotiations
so @carvacho12 how is the update coming along?
- Location
- Buenos aires
been having some trouble writing it so im focusing more into the naruto quest dont worry i will have it done by next week
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- Buenos aires
i am going to close the vote now
- Location
- Buenos aires
I'm back
edit: hi guys its been a while if you are wondering what happened well things got complicated I lost my job and failed some tests so writing had to take the back seat for a while and now that I passed the exam make-ups (sp?) and found a job I have some free time to write again, on thing I should warn all of you is that I haven't written anything in English in this time so my spelling may be full of errors (more than usual). The next update is already written I am just going over some details.
edit: hi guys its been a while if you are wondering what happened well things got complicated I lost my job and failed some tests so writing had to take the back seat for a while and now that I passed the exam make-ups (sp?) and found a job I have some free time to write again, on thing I should warn all of you is that I haven't written anything in English in this time so my spelling may be full of errors (more than usual). The next update is already written I am just going over some details.
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war against the ottomans part 3
- Location
- Buenos aires
31 of March 1890
February was now over and with it, and things are looking more in your favor.
The armies of Greece, Macedonia, and Albania (in the case of the last two supported by your guns and ammo) managed to break the enemy lines in the west and are now threatening Constantinople.
The Ottomans did not suffer much in the terms of casualties because their men kept surrendering in exchange for a fair treatment by the Coalition (The name of the alliance) which now is composed of Albania, Armenia, Greece, the new nation of Kurdistan, Macedonia and Russia, with the Greeks being a recent addition after the diplomatic meeting in early February.
On the eastern front, the fighting seemed to have left the ottoman forces, with the pocket nearing the Caspian Sea surrendering at the middle of the month and the offensive in Anatolia managed to secure the Armenian lands with only some of the Kurdish lands remaining in the hands of the Ottomans.
The casualty list are a lot shorter now that many units are surrendering but six hundred men perished in the attacks with the ottomans taking two thousand dead and almost one thousand captured
The navy seemed to regain the initiative and proceeded to start the bombardment of several dockyards and cities in the coast of the black sea with but they are hesitant of bombarding Constantinople for the cultural ramifications the destruction of the Hagia Sofia could bring, there's more good news in the fact that the blockade seems to be very effective in its job and have now captured a total of 4 ships from Britain and France who are now docked in of the port in the Caucasus.
In the political battlefield, the situation is quite tense with both the French and British demanding the release of the smugglers and both Austria-Hungary and Germany asking to join the fight so they can grab land in the Middle East.
However, there are good news considering that a telegram from the ottoman sultan Abdul asking for terms of surrender, it's now up to you to decide if this war continues or if talks can be arranged and stop the slaughter that's been going on this last moths
Diplomatic talks
[] Accept the surrender and discuss terms
[] Ignore it and continue the fight
[] Write-in
February was now over and with it, and things are looking more in your favor.
The armies of Greece, Macedonia, and Albania (in the case of the last two supported by your guns and ammo) managed to break the enemy lines in the west and are now threatening Constantinople.
The Ottomans did not suffer much in the terms of casualties because their men kept surrendering in exchange for a fair treatment by the Coalition (The name of the alliance) which now is composed of Albania, Armenia, Greece, the new nation of Kurdistan, Macedonia and Russia, with the Greeks being a recent addition after the diplomatic meeting in early February.
On the eastern front, the fighting seemed to have left the ottoman forces, with the pocket nearing the Caspian Sea surrendering at the middle of the month and the offensive in Anatolia managed to secure the Armenian lands with only some of the Kurdish lands remaining in the hands of the Ottomans.
The casualty list are a lot shorter now that many units are surrendering but six hundred men perished in the attacks with the ottomans taking two thousand dead and almost one thousand captured
The navy seemed to regain the initiative and proceeded to start the bombardment of several dockyards and cities in the coast of the black sea with but they are hesitant of bombarding Constantinople for the cultural ramifications the destruction of the Hagia Sofia could bring, there's more good news in the fact that the blockade seems to be very effective in its job and have now captured a total of 4 ships from Britain and France who are now docked in of the port in the Caucasus.
In the political battlefield, the situation is quite tense with both the French and British demanding the release of the smugglers and both Austria-Hungary and Germany asking to join the fight so they can grab land in the Middle East.
However, there are good news considering that a telegram from the ottoman sultan Abdul asking for terms of surrender, it's now up to you to decide if this war continues or if talks can be arranged and stop the slaughter that's been going on this last moths
Diplomatic talks
[] Accept the surrender and discuss terms
[] Ignore it and continue the fight
[] Write-in
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- Buenos aires
one of the things that have been going on through my head is the number of mistakes on the quest that I made, like the crits not giving special rewards the use of hero units and other things, so I been thinking of doing one of three options the first is about restarting the quest( same format and add crit reward), starting another quest with the same style but a different MC, and the other one is to keep going here and improve both the writing and the quest in general in future updates
I am most likely going to put up a poll (when I figure out how to do it) and get your opinion on the matter.
I am most likely going to put up a poll (when I figure out how to do it) and get your opinion on the matter.
- Location
- Buenos aires
on thing you should remeber is that they are only demanding sailors and ships but should germans and austrians join well things could go ugly
- Location
- United States
Personally I would just say keep working on this quest and improve on it as you write it. You already have a few turns invested into this quest and for the most part people seemed to have enjoyed it.
Hmm, Now what to do about the offer of surrender. We could chose to Ignore it and keep kicking them while their down but I have the feeling the British and French would intervene if it looks like the Ottomans are going to be conquered.
But on the other hand we have quite a few minor powers on our side and the Germans and Austria-Hungary are wanting to join in so they could serve as a counterbalance to British and French intervention. I guess the worse case scenario is that we kick off the Great War about 24 years early.
I would be interesed to hear what the Ottomens would be willing to offer us if we accepted their surrender. I guess what we would want is unfettered access to the Mediterranean sea for our black sea fleet followed by some territorial gains for us and finally for independence be granted to the Armenians. These are at least the things I can think off the top of my head.
Hmm, Now what to do about the offer of surrender. We could chose to Ignore it and keep kicking them while their down but I have the feeling the British and French would intervene if it looks like the Ottomans are going to be conquered.
But on the other hand we have quite a few minor powers on our side and the Germans and Austria-Hungary are wanting to join in so they could serve as a counterbalance to British and French intervention. I guess the worse case scenario is that we kick off the Great War about 24 years early.
I would be interesed to hear what the Ottomens would be willing to offer us if we accepted their surrender. I guess what we would want is unfettered access to the Mediterranean sea for our black sea fleet followed by some territorial gains for us and finally for independence be granted to the Armenians. These are at least the things I can think off the top of my head.
- Location
- California
The quest is back rejoice!
Kufufu
Adequate at best
- Location
- What's it to ya?
We can take the relationship hit with them, deny their requests to join the war. Without a direct invitation from us they lack a casus beli and will face serious reprisal for their interference, as for England and France? They are currently bumbling about trying to save face after their state sanctioned smugglers were caught, luckily for us their lions are made of paper here and they dont have a leg to stand on between themselves.