Forged Symbol (MHA Celestial Forge alt-Quirk)

Chapter 5: Temper
Summer turned to Autumn, Autumn to Winter, and Midoriya's new study plan-focused lifestyle continued as the date of the U.A. entrance exam inexorably drew nearer.

On the morning of the exam, he woke up and flexed his Quirk, as had become his habit.

[3.96 SPELL COMPENDIUM UNLOCKED - 150 STORED]

This time a PDA dropped into his hand, and over breakfast he gave it a quick browse. Skimming through the entries - Accel, Active Air Mine, Air Armor - it listed hundreds of spells? Tapping through the entries, each one described a magical effect like compressing air in the caster's hand to fire as a bullet. If this was real, it would be incredible!

Below the spell description, rather than the incantations and hand movements he'd expected from fantasy novels and comic book wizards, there was an attached "activation sequence" which was meant to be loaded onto a "CAD".

"Computer-aided design?" He mumbled, tapping the link and finding a glossary of terms. No, the spells needed "Casting Assistance Devices" to perform, tools which converted "psions" into electricity.

He reached out with his sense for materials, but thinking about CADs came back with nothing. He had more luck when he considered the components to make one himself, but there was a feeling of incompleteness, and reading further told him about the "induction stone" needed for all CADs which his material sense also came up empty on.

A quick search online confirmed his suspicions, that neither CADs nor induction stones existed. Which meant his Quirk had pulled in a digital spellbook from… the future? An alternate universe where magic was real? What would happen if his Quirk gave him a CAD next? He had assumed all his items already existed in the world, but this changed everything.

He was in charge of his Quirk, he reminded himself, not the other way around. Today was the most important exam of his life and he needed to focus on it to give it his all - and go beyond! He still slipped the PDA into his pocket, though, just in case his Quirk came through with the other half.

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Soon, he was walking up from the subway and through the gates of U.A., the shoulder of his uniform still damp from where his mom had hugged him goodbye and his breath making clouds in the cold February air.

"Outta my way, Deku. Don't miss your last chance to drop out."

He looked behind him but Bakugo was already shouldering past, slamming into him and sending him tumbling. He tried to find his balance but tripped over his feet and toppled forwards, the ground rushing up to meet him -

It still felt like he was falling, but the ground had stopped getting any closer. Then he felt a hand on his shoulder and a girl with a blonde bob and long bangs tilted him back upright as he floated in midair.

"Are you alright? Sorry, I saw you falling so I used my Quirk on reflex." She tapped her fingertips together nervously, dropping him onto his feet, then gave the departing blond boy a sour look when Izuku failed to respond. "That was so rude, I hope I don't end up in the same class as him."

"Huh? Ah, Kacchan? No, it's alright, he's always like that," Izuku said, defending his childhood friend on his own reflex.

"Oh, is that just how he greets you?" She muttered something about boys. "Well, anyway, good luck on the exam!"

He mumbled a reply as she left, already congratulating himself on speaking to a girl his age.

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The written exam lasted for two hours but Izuku felt like it had only been ten minutes between sitting down, opening the paper to start writing, and then hearing the proctors call for everyone to stop writing.

The questions had ranged from multiple-choice math and literacy questions that reminded him of the hardest parts of the standardized tests at school, to lengthy science or engineering problems asking him to estimate how much air was in the Musutafu subway system (five lines times the 13 kilometers across the city times pi times the radius of the tunnels squared, and he could come back to think about the stations later) or explain why the government spread salt on the roads in winter (the grit made it less slippery, and had something to do with melting points? Or was the question asking about the economics of why they did it?). The essay at the end on why he wanted to be a Hero was almost a relief. He'd even caught a glimpse of the desk next to his, and it looked like that student had an entirely different paper!

His hand cramped from holding his pen so tightly, but that didn't matter. It was time for the practical exam.

Seeing Present Mic live was amazing; his radio shows and podcasts couldn't convey how loud his voice was as it filled the vast assembly hall - was it to do with the speaker collar he wore? The other students seemed unimpressed by his stage presence as he briefed them on the types of robots they'd be fighting, but Izuku couldn't help muttering his awed observations.

Unfortunately, the only other student from his middle school applying to U.A. was sat right next to him. Bakugo had no patience for that. He slammed a palm down on the desk in front of him to shut Deku up with the miniature explosion it produced.

"Shut up, Deku," he added.

Then a stern student with glasses raised his hand to call out the two of them in front of the entire auditorium. Izuku sunk even further down into his seat, his face burning with embarrassment, as Bakugo shouted back. He could feel the whole room's eyes on him through the rest of the presentation, and he found himself wishing his Quirk could turn him invisible.

Maybe if he thought about it really hard?

[932/1000 WORDS]

No, his Quirk seemed unwilling to cooperate in making him disappear.

A small mercy was that the two of them would be tested in different groups. Even with his new armor, he didn't think he'd survive being stuck in the same city block as the explosive boy if he was given half an hour to cut loose.

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It was on the bus to the training ground that his Quirk finally responded, earning him odd looks from the other examinees as he suddenly started mumbling about delayed responses and proximity exposure.

[15.52 ALCHEMIST - INSUFFICIENT CHARGE - 250 STORED]

He fumbled for a notebook to record the latest activity of his Quirk. Even if it was a failure, it still provided evidence for what caused it to act up and whether he could ever get it under conscious control.

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In front of the replica city, Izuku opened up the box with his name on it containing the items he'd registered for the exam.

Unlike the ones he'd seen in museums or online, the chain shirt he'd made with Mr. Amakiir's guidance was fitted closely to the curves of his body to distribute the weight and provide more protection. He'd even shown him a special weave to use for the rings so that it could be worn on its own without pinching bare skin or catching hairs, which was apparently a serious issue in his teacher's line of work. Izuku was wearing a t-shirt underneath for the extra padding, though.

He had also gone back over the blueprints his Quirk had given him and found that his new insight into modular construction helped to understand them. He'd belatedly realised that one reason his attempt to make a model satellite was so unsuccessful was that he'd tried to build it all at once, instead of taking a single section at a time. He'd broken down all the designs into individual components as preparation for his next attempt, and that had provided the inspiration for his second project.

When he took it out of the bag, it looked like a narrow metal Thermos, but a flick telescoped it out into a baton. Another extended it into a long staff taller than he was. The original design for the sections had come from the retractable pole for the wind-powered heaters, but he had changed the order the pieces slid out in so that his collapsible weapon was well-balanced in either baton or staff form.

Armed and armored, Izuku finally felt ready for the practical test. He joined the milling crowd at the starting line, receiving a couple of approving nods from some of the similarly well-equipped students, and wondered if he could take a selfie to show his mom.

"Go!"

"Huh?" Turning around, the other students had already started sprinting into the replica city. He ran after them, a cold sweat running down his back from falling behind as soon as the test began.

As he got a couple of blocks into the city, the front line of students slowed down significantly as they ran into the robots waiting for them in the streets, and clouds of dust started billowing out from where they fought. Some kind of laser tore through the air in front of him, then another student clapped and made a concussive shockwave that blew a robot into the wall of a nearby building. The pileup of people competing for robots was becoming increasingly chaotic, and Izuku could already hear the beginnings of ugly arguments over the resulting wreckage.

He looked around the square, and found that he could see through a relatively undamaged building into the next street. Packing his staff down so it wouldn't get in the way, he clambered through.

The sound of the fighting was muffled but still audible as he reached the other side, finding the road empty and clear. It must have drawn in all the nearby robots, he realised.

"Twenty minutes remaining! That's right, you're one-third of the way through, dear listeners! Make us proud out there, okay?"

Flicking out his baton again, he started to run deeper into the training ground.

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As he turned a corner, a one-point robot burst out through the front wall of a building, showering the street with concrete fragments.

It loomed over him. Izuku remembered seeing the diagram of the single-point robot in the handout with the outline of a person for scale, but he hadn't realised until then that the person was meant to represent an adult man rather than his own short height.

Unlike Izuku, it hadn't frozen in place when they spotted each other. Moving forward with deceptive speed, it rolled over the rubble of the street with its thick single wheel and threw a backhanded swipe with a claw as large as his torso as soon as he was within its reach.

The impact sent Izuku tumbling onto the floor but he rose to his feet, pushing himself up with his baton. It hurt, but it was nothing worse than all the times Bakugo had knocked him down. Extending his weapon into a full-length staff, he stepped back and started to jab at the head of the robot, trying to catch it where he assumed all the fragile components would be.

Evading with serpentine ability, another swipe of the claws knocked his staff to the side and tore the front of his open tracksuit top, but it harmlessly skittered over the rings of his chainmail underneath. The robot cocked its head like a dog, scrutinising the metal, and Izuku took the opening to swing his staff back into the side of its head with all his strength, knocking it a few degrees to the left with a clang. It recentered its gaze on him and pounced.

A hasty step back stopped him being caught bodily, but the claws still came close enough to catch the rings of his armor and in seconds he was lifted into the air by the front of his chainmail pinched in its grasp. Reluctantly, Izuku let go of his staff to squirm and wriggle out of his shirt, dropping out of it to the ground. He flipped the top inside out around the claw as he slipped out, trapping the fingers inside the chainmail to protect himself now he was no longer armored, then scrambled over the broken concrete and slammed a sharp chunk of the debris right into the lens of the head looking down on him.

With a soft "ping" like a microwave timer, the blinded robot powered down and slumped backwards, hunched over around its wheel. Izuku panted on his knees in front of it, catching his breath and calming his racing heart before he disentangled his chain shirt from the claw and picked up his staff. He'd earned a point!

...a single point. How were the other students with their powerful Quirks doing? He could hear more sounds of combat off in the distance. Maybe if he got closer, he could take a robot by surprise or work with someone to take them out.

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Izuku reached the crossroads where the fighting seemed to have moved to, only for the students to turn as one as the street was cast into shadow by the appearance of the zero-pointer robot.

It was taller than any of the buildings in the simulated city. He watched, transfixed, as the examinees nearby abandoned their fights with two- or three-point robots and ran past him back down the street that had brought him here.

Ahead of its massive treads, Izuku spotted a girl trapped under rubble. His body started to move on its own to help her, but what could he do?

[11.50 TRUE BALANCE UNLOCKED - 50 STORED]

Oh, he could do that.

His Quirk had delivered: suddenly, for the tools he made, their original material properties were more like guidelines.

Grabbing a chunk of concrete he bashed the last section of the staff into a crude point, the crumbling debris acting as a far more effective hammer than it had any right to. He ran past the fleeing students and towards the towering robot. Its titanic form drew closer to the girl trapped under the rubble. With a wordless shout, he cocked his arm back and threw.

It wasn't a good throw, it was barely even on-target. Midoriya had thrown perhaps a dozen javelins in his life, and he hadn't remembered any of the advice from those middle school P.E. classes. His improvised spear hit the zero-pointer at an angle with a screech of tearing metal, then dangled down from where the tip had got stuck, looking like a solitary whisker on the side of its massive head. But the zero-pointer's motion stopped. He'd done it.

Then the truck-sized head swung round to focus on him, and Izuku had sprinted halfway down a blocked alleyway before he could form a coherent thought about how maybe he should've planned a little further ahead.

Still, it hadn't gone too badly, had it? The girl was saved, and even if he was trapped, there was no way the zero-pointer could -

A sound like a concrete waterfall interrupted him. Looking over his shoulder, the giant robot was pulling apart the buildings on either side of the alleyway like they were curtains. Izuku's eyes widened as it rolled forward and tore his hiding place even further open to the sky, then they began stinging and watering from the thick haze of dust cascading down. He coughed and tried to swallow, but in an echo of the sludge Villain attack his throat was too dry and dust-choked to do even that.

"The test! Is! Over!"

He had never been so happy to hear a teacher's voice as when the zero-pointer halted in its tracks.

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Word count: 2628/12532

A/N: The Spell Compendium was a bit of a letdown, but there wasn't much Izuku could do to make use of it. True Balance should be fun, though - I'll have to think about how it interacts with any advanced materials that get unlocked.

One butterfly has come home to roost: as he wasn't controlled by the sludge Villain, Bakugo hasn't been so viscerally confronted by how his Quirk and strength can hurt people, and so he's more prone to showing off his power. At the same time, having not been rescued by Midoriya, he's less conflicted about him and still sees him as a useless nuisance to be shut down rather than a potential rival or competitor. Let me know if you have dissenting thoughts on how this would affect him, or advice on how to better convey those changes.

Also, the word count bit is a one-off joke, I'm not planning to give Izuku access to my word count as I'm writing the story! If you'd like to see meta stuff like that, you might enjoy An ordinary novel but every 10,000 words the audience kills the least interesting character.

Spell Compendium (The Irregular At The Magic Highschool) (100): This small PDA-like device contains a large selection of Activation and Magic Sequences for your personal use. Secret or unique Sequences cannot be included in this selection.

True Balance (Earth Girls) (300): Despite how crude the raw materials seem, the finished weapons and tools of your work are perfectly suited for their job. A hammer you make of stone and wood is just as fine a tool as one you could make out of steel, and a stone spear cuts just as deeply as any you could make of carbon fiber and razor-honed alloy.
 
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Hm. I'm not sure he got in - I can't say for sure whether or not the staff would grant enough Rescue points for leading it away rather than finishing it off. Might be interesting to see him in the Support Course for a while and then rise up through the Sports Festival (win it?). That said, a word of caution - if you plan to do that, most authors get really bogged down on the Festival and their stories stall out, so you should consider which moments/scenes are most important (i.e. not elaborating on others' fights, etc.).

Edit: Thanks for the chapter! Keep up the good work!
 
True Balance (Earth Girls) (300): Despite how crude the raw materials seem, the finished weapons and tools of your work are perfectly suited for their job. A hammer you make of stone and wood is just as fine a tool as one you could make out of steel, and a stone spear cuts just as deeply as any you could make of carbon fiber and razor-honed alloy.
...doesn't this mean all his weapons and armors now work as well as true adamantium?
 
Was a bit worried Izu wouldn't get anything useful by the time the exam finished, but luckily he did!

Question! Could you put all of the power he unlocks into an informational post? That way we can just look at it if we ever forget what he's capable of doing.
 
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0.0 Cosmic Warehouse
This is the basic Cosmic Warehouse Jumpchain supplement, with no CP spent. It's just a 40,000 square foot warehouse with fluorescent lightning, accessible from any door you can stick the key in.

9.17 Sexy Evil Tailor (Dungeon Keeper Ami) (200)
This is a deed to a tailors shop with included dark elf tailor, he knows exactly what is needed to make a person look their most sexy, evil, and impressive, able to create clothes for any shape and size ranging from leather strips covering the important bits all the way up to dark billowing cloaks. No matter what look you are going for he can help you pull it off and look good doing it, though he normally works for gold he will accept any currency and at the end of the week he will give you your portion of the profits made from other customers. You will receive a new deed every jump to place as you wish. Beware though, he does try to push the leather underwear look.
13.54 Scrounging (Arcanum Of Steamworks And Magic Obscura) (200): It's a sad fact that finding the right materials and components for your research and manufacturing can be a difficult task. Collecting the necessary tools to create Molotov Cocktails and Healing Salves might be fairly easy, but for more complex devices it can take days to find the things you need. Lesser inventors might need to keep track of every source of tools, from the General Store to the local junk merchant to areas for finding medicinal herbs... but not you! Your keen sense for finding the materials you need means you'll always have a vague idea of just where to go to buy that Minute Steamworks, Tesla Coil, or Spirit Of Camphor, and you're quite likely to walk into the store right when they're on discount. Amazing!
Strange Formula (MCU) (100): This chemical formula is the brainchild of the German scientist Dr. Erskine, and is directly responsible for the creation of Captain America. As is, this is only the formula, and you must make it yourself... but as a result it could possibly let you modify the serum for other uses. Beware its tendencies to amplify the personality traits of the user, or be prepared to find a way to fix that fact.

Engineer's Notes: Avvenire (ARIA) (50): A last set of documents that was kept in the archives – this copy was seems to have been fragmented into components, though as you compile more of it together it will become evidently that this details the specifics of the actual terraforming process, including the equipment and calculations involved in the process of creating Aqua. It does go to note that while the knowledge stored within this could help a new engineer tackle a different terraforming project, each planet presents its own challenges, and this information is better taken as a sample of notes rather than a hard guideline. Each time you take this option your own abilities at controlling the logistic and engineering elements of terraforming improves slightly, though with ten purchases you'll find that the documents will be complete – further purchases won't help you much...unless you had a different use for them.
They're Like Legoes, Right? (Kerbal Space Program) (200): There's robust engineering, and then there's modularity. Pick one. Except for you - you seem to have the gift of designing methods that allow for seamless mixing and matching of modular technology that lack none of the parts incompatibility and fragility you'd expect from such a design paradigm. While this seems focused on Kerbin technology in specific, a little work should have you applying such a paradigm to all sorts of technologies...
Spell Compendium (The Irregular At The Magic Highschool) (100): This small PDA-like device contains a large selection of Activation and Magic Sequences for your personal use. Secret or unique Sequences cannot be included in this selection.

True Balance (Earth Girls) (300): Despite how crude the raw materials seem, the finished weapons and tools of your work are perfectly suited for their job. A hammer you make of stone and wood is just as fine a tool as one you could make out of steel, and a stone spear cuts just as deeply as any you could make of carbon fiber and razor-honed alloy.
Wonder Forging Genius (Generic Exalted) (200): Your crafting abilities need to be seen to be believed. From your hands pour forth miracles given form, works of art of peerless and breathtaking magnificence, works of culinary delight that would leave Emperors sullen at the thought that no other foods could compare, weapons that could last hundreds of years of constant use that would leave men feeling honored to have been slain by them, all these and more take shape under the guidance of your hands. You would be welcomed in any land and by any court for the sheer quality of your work, and you will quickly gain national, if not worldwide, fame for your creations if you bother to advertise them at all. The least of your creations are superior to anything a mortal master might create, and even the simplest and least adorned of your works will be possessed of unmatched efficiency, resilience, and simple elegance. Purchased with the Savant perk this is taken to an even grander height, leaving even the crafts of other Exalted looking as pale and shameful imitations by comparison, assuming you put forth the same effort they did in learning your base crafting abilities.
This Looks Like Every Other Spaceship I Don't Know How To Fly (Schlock Mercenary Rebuild) (100): Except it turns out, you can. You are able to work out at least basic controls for any vessel instantly, and can very quickly familiarize yourself to the point of being able to fly through a busy battlefield. This can extend to figuring out how to ride strange animals.
Crafting Artisan (Demon the Fallen) (100): When it comes to the manufacturing of physical goods, such as blacksmithing, woodworking, basket weaving, etc, you are an expert in dozens of fields. More than that, you have a certain artistic flare to your work that others can't help but notice.

Rapid Growth (Final Fantasy XIV) (200): You can't afford to wait years for a forest to regrow! By the time that forest grows to a state where it's ready for harvest, you won't even need the lumber to build your house anymore! No, in order to make it in time for harvest this season, you're going to need to draw on some more potent forces. It might be a little bit dangerous to use Aether in such a fashion, but by imbuing the saplings with concentrated Aether, you've successfully sped up the growth rate of the trees - to a point where you can harvest them again. Well, unfortunately, the trees did grow a bit bigger than normal, but you expect that's just a normal side effect from using concentrated Aether to grow things.

Precision Tools (MtG New Phyrexia) (200): The exarchs, elite of the Core Augur's creations, managed to create a thought field specifically attuned to the Mirran resistance's minds, disabling their will. While you might not be as versed in the neuroscience involved(yet), you have found a way to attune your creations to a certain group of "targets"- ensuring they will not damage your own allies. This also lets you make your own creations useless against you, ensuring they won ́t be used to fight you... not for long, anyways.
My Watch Doesn't Tell Time (Honkai Impact Third) (100): The further you stray from the intended use of a device's style or look the better a device it becomes by default. If you make a watch that can't tell time you could cram a ton of things into it despite its relatively tiny size. The shape or style must be a recognized thing, like a watch or a phone in order to benefit from the boost.
Weapons Recombination Template (Final Fantasy XIII-2) (200): The shady dealer (Actually it seems like everything he's offered so far is shady) just shrugs when you pick this up. Apparently it binds two weapons together, and allows you to shapeshift the weapon between either form. You're not quite sure how it works, but he demonstrates it to you by showing you how a bow can shift into a sword. You can't help but notice that it also turned into a Moogle afterwards… but apparently yours won't do that. Unless you throw a Moogle into the mix. Wait...does that mean...
Weaponization (Mega Man Classic) (400): Your understanding of machines is such that, given a fairly ordinary lumber-cutting robot, you could easily rebuild and reprogram minor worker robots into trained fighters. A lumber-cutting robot becomes a dangerous axeman, and the equivalent of the average Joe for robots turns into a deadly sniper. In general, you're capable of making machines more powerful while retooling them to suit your purposes. That pipe dream of turning a workforce into an army isn't too far fetched now.
It Floats (Dragon Ball) (200): It's not rocket science! Except it totally is. You now know how to construct the common 'rocket cars' of Capsule Corporation, as well as being able to construct human-sized jetpacks that are safe for commercial use. You don't learn much about space travel, but you'll find it easier to grasp should you start learning.

Gunsmith (Starbound) (200): The point of a gun is simple, take an object, and accelerate it very quickly into another object. Despite your somewhat flighty nature, you've mastered these principles, and can make a truly astounding variety of weaponry, from assault rifles, to shotguns, to flamethrowers and other more exotic guns. You can also add special features and secondary firing modes, mixing and matching to your heart's content.

Duct Tape Master (CATastrophe) (200): Earless relics aren't the only thing that's shiny. You're a master at jerry-rigging mechanical components into an ungodly abomination of gears and circuits that somehow still works as intended. Fixing broken things is a breeze (though they might break more easily now) and making new teknologee by recycling parts from old ones is within the realm of your skills.
Loading Human.exe... (Generic Worm Fanfiction III) (400): You can turn off your emotions at will. This makes it easier to make logical decisions but you have trouble understanding others while they're off. You won't get stuck with them off because turning them back on would be illogical or anything like that. Oh, and you get along famously with robots and AI. You really get them.

Personal Assistant (Portal) (100): This loyal assistant is extremely competent and can handle staggering disorganization without making any mistakes. Don't make them an AI. They are friendly, professional, and don't charge for their services. Don't make them an AI. They take up a companion slot, and you can take Caroline if she still exists in your timeline.
AeroChaser Speeder Bike (Star Wars KotOR) (100): A small, fast hover bike built for a single pilot. Somewhat difficult to control. Faster than a basilisk war droid. Cannot be stored in starfighters.
Miniaturization/Efficiency (Worm) (400): You can miniaturize anything down to levels that any sane man would consider impossible. A fusion reactor the size of a watch battery would be the absolute minimum of what you are capable of, and you'd be able to make it far smaller than that. Your power also makes you a master of technological efficiency, anything you make needing barely any energy to run compared to what it should and continue to do so for a very long time. These specialties also make you a master of nanotechnology and similar pursuits. Of course you aren't barred from building something big like a giant robot, just that it'll be impossibly efficient and crammed full of more weapons and subsystems then should be possible.
Nanotech Wizard (Ratchet & Clank) (200): You acquire a basic understanding of the nanotech of this universe. Use it to fix yourself up when you get hurt, or use it on others. If integrated with weapons or armour, it gives them the capacity to upgrade over time and to potentially change their abilities.
Aesthetic Technology (Revelation Space) (100): Just because something is high tech doesn't mean it can't also be a work of art, no? The functional look has been out for centuries, and with shape-adjusting quickmatter, entoptic displays that need no screen, and custom fabrication, there are very few limits on what a certain item may look like and no reason that one's belongings shouldn't match a certain style. Now all of your possessions fit a certain type of aesthetic of your choice. Perhaps like many Ultras you prefer a Gothic appearance, glossy black metal and leather, or as a former Glitter Belt inhabitant they are richly decorated in high Canasian styles with snarling gold dragons and gilded flourishes; or maybe you've got a retro-punk kick, and your belongings would not seem out of place at a steampunk exhibition. At the start of each jump you may change or reset your belongings' aesthetic. You may choose for any belongings not to be affected by this. Despite any ornamentation, the sale value and functions remain the same.

Powered Productivity (DOOM 3) (200): Why are there so many excessively high-powered systems employed in the UAC Mars base? Well, at its most basic… because it works. Brute force might be lacking in elegance, but there is nonetheless a certain charm to deciphering ancient hieroglyphs with a computer mainframe the size of a ten-story building, or getting started on a terraforming project with what could charitably be called a self-sustaining nuclear fusion system. You're adept at using such immense volumes of raw energy and potential, and can easily find ways to turn challenging but complex problems into… well, equally challenging but decidedly simpler problems with a suitable application of raw power. Not only that, but you also possess a high degree of skill in making sure these kinds of energy use don't lead to further problems, like unbalancing the power grid or burning out the circuitry. It might not be pretty, but without asking yourself 'why not try more power?', would the UAC ever have developed such mighty new technologies as the Plasma Rifle or the BFG-9000?
Hands Off (Starcraft 2 Nova Covert Ops) (100): When one is at the forefront of technological development, one sometimes has to watch out for espionage. Why bother developing a revolutionary new weapon system when a Ghost with sticky fingers walks in and takes it? You are able to design, and seamlessly implement security protocols into any technology or equipment you have access to that would limit use to only authorized personnel. You don't even have to go to the extreme of half-breaking it either, that's for neanderthals and inferior scientists.
Loaded Up (Generic Cyberpunk) (200): It's not enough to have what you need locked away back in the workshop, and even when you have time to prepare you often have to pack light. You have a particular genius when it comes to building and working with tools, gadgets, weapons, armor, and other personal scale equipment. Whether it's cramming a computing setup that would take up an entire workstation into something that a hacker can slap onto their arm for on the fly hacking, or taking a normal pistol and modding it until it's more lethal and effective than most military arms, you're able to cram a stupefying amount of effectiveness into easily ported packages. Your creativity, skills, and genius just seem to skyrocket when dealing with things in sizes that would hamper anybody else. Bigger doesn't always mean better, sometimes it just means cumbersome.

Gadgeteer (Hellboy) (600): I mean, someone's got to make all the cool gear and equipment that the BPRD uses, right? But not only are you a skilled engineer and inventor, capable of making things like Hellboy's Samaritan revolver and the garbage truck they use in the field, but you're also able to create technology that interacts with and perhaps- with time and study- even uses some of the mystical energies found in this world, such as the detectors they use for finding magical creatures and objects. In addition, designing specialty gear meant to be used by one person such as Abe Sapien's breathing apparatus or- again- Hellboy's pistol is much easier and quicker than it would normally be.
 
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I don't think it includes armor. The description of the power states specifically "weapons and tools of your work" so I assume only objects that primarily serve as either weapons or tools Izuku can use to build things will be affected by it.
still the point i am asking stands, since he has potential access to super metals, would all his tools and weapons act like adamantium or vibranium or uru or other such things?
 
1. The V2 is not even completed or optimized if I'm remembering things right. The V1 works just fine and kicks ass on it's own.

2. The growth rate is not the problem, that solves itself, the problem is the 10 interim years of Fucking.Nothing.At.All like myself and some others wrote in a previous post.

3. And you're right, he really needs an intelligence perk, because god fucking dammit that was the dumbest dumbass move anyone could have taken with a honest to god SSS, and I hope it blows up in his face. I can see the guy that creates the noumus using the serum for their creation.
1. V2 needs no optimisation its really OP even without it
2. I agree
3. I agree

I was mostly talking about the hero stuff and his aspirations not how stupid mc is or how dumb his moves are which I agree with fully.
 
I can't say for sure whether or not the staff would grant enough Rescue points for leading it away rather than finishing it off.
I think the staff sort of know Izuku's intentions, so that why his test had stuff concerning mathematics and engineering. Although, the testers need to keep the Rescue to Points conversion fair, so there's a real chance he'll score very low. So low that he's not getting into the Hero's program, but this is not the worst. Izuku's constant studying with the 'powers,' he does have has forced him to get creative.

Was a bit worried Izu wouldn't get anything useful by the time the exam finished, but luckily he did!
He absolutely was cutting it close though as the lack of scenes between this time skip mean Izuku doesn't roll for anything.
still the point i am asking stands, since he has potential access to super metals, would all his tools and weapons act like adamantium or vibranium or uru or other such things?
That implies he has access to these wonder materials. Poor Deku doesn't have these ores, so he's handicapped by the material he does have access to. Based on his jacket, the highest Deku can push a stone tool is up to steel.
 
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I dont think mc got in, he will score pretty low on his theory tests too seeing as he did not prep as well as canon.

Which is a good thing if you think about it, it means he is not bound by the restrictive laws and can stop staying around his bully which I really think he should flat out kill, such a person does not deserve to live or be a hero.

Well if he does not do it stain will so there is that.

I am pretty sure we merged the Spell Compendium in v2 with the required perks so that if rolled it would be together, I guess its not merged in the version the author is using.
 
Its titanic form drew closer to the girl trapped under the rubble. With a wordless shout, he cocked his arm back and threw.
Still, it hadn't gone too badly, had it? The girl was saved, and even if he was trapped, there was no way the zero-pointer could -
Just realized a major issue.

In haste( and justifiably so) Izuku struggles to gain any points, so he rushes to defeat bots whenever he can. Unfortunately, he was always outclassed, so he's scoring low no matter what. However, that means he doesn't think when rushing the 0-point, but he also doesn't spend the effort to rescue Ochako. Izuku doesn't spend the time to dig her out, nor was he as effective in one-shotting the bot as in canon. Ochako was effectively left while Midoriya acted as bait, but Izuku cannot convey his intentions to rescue a fellow student.

Meaning, Izuku probably didn't make a friend in Ochako even though she helped him earlier.

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Has he not gotten the super soldier formula back from the lab yet? It's been almost a year, hasn't it?
The Chemical labs are all busy. They don't say with what exactly, but everyone in the thread believes it's with said formula.
 
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kind of disappointed we are rethreading cannon and not seeing izuku use his time to train or tinker .At least he got a somewhat useful perk, too bad he got it just when the test was ending .
at this point izuku ending in general studies and ending dabbling in vigilantism would be better than just seeing canon with izuku doing nothing with the forge.
 
I wow I feel Izuku is kinda screwed. Like if the author keeps doing these huge time jumps and doesn't give him any basic knowledge of his perks I can't imagine a realistic way for him to do anything
 
That implies he has access to these wonder materials. Poor Deku doesn't have these ores, so he's handicapped by the material he does have access to. Based on his jacket, the highest Deku can push a stone tool is up to steel.
so as long as he can obtain even a small sample of wonder or super metal he would get a huge upgrade to his equipment
 
It should be obvious he was trying to save her. They've got the place loaded with cameras, so they should see him noticing her before he starts sprinting toward the giant robot. At most, Ochako might not have seen him, so she may not ask the teachers about giving him some of her points. She probably did see him though, and it's entirely possible that Izuku will go to check on her/help her out of the rubble now that the giant robot is shut down.
 
I think some folks are frustrated cause he's getting about two perks per chapter and has yet to get rolling in a meaningful way, with his poor luck.

The notes would have been more useful if he had rolled a knowledge perk earlier, for example, but that's not how it shook out.

I think as we're moving into the cannon timeline things will start speeding up for for our wee green Forge-Conduit. It's always a slow start on these things.
 
2. The growth rate is not the problem, that solves itself, the problem is the 10 interim years of Fucking.Nothing.At.All like myself and some others wrote in a previous post.
Yeah, I personally mesh the massive gaps caused by time skips with the growth rate, since the two go hand-in-hand. By completely skipping over the time-frame, there's no growth, no personal development beyond his limited workout plans taken from online notes (not even learning how to fight, just working out), and most importantly: no item crafting. Sure, he started helping out at his clothing store, but that makes it even worse since the most he's done with disposable income and his Perks was find unwanted Hero figurines and make a pyramid from them.

3. And you're right, he really needs an intelligence perk, because god fucking dammit that was the dumbest dumbass move anyone could have taken with a honest to god SSS, and I hope it blows up in his face. I can see the guy that creates the noumus using the serum for their creation.
I genuinely want Nezu to be Izuku's mentor/nemesis/highly influential figure in his life by putting that super-intelligence Quirk to use, sitting Izuku down, and in a pained voice simply asking "But why though?"

1. V2 needs no optimisation its really OP even without it
My point about Perk interactions or there base power really hits with the ones that progress off time or repeated actions. One of my personal claims as the greatest Perk in Jumpchain (especially for its price) is Practiced Practice from the Modern Action Movie Jump. For 100 points, the more you do a specific action, the better you get at (including less negative aspects outside of your control, like weapon jams), and it applies to more than just combat skills. And just imagine 10+ years of getting incredible at everyday actions such as: Breathing, walking, reading, researching, shopping, cooking, going to public restrooms! The last one is probably the silliest yet most impressive example of the reality-warping capability of Perks.

Now: to the newest update!

Summer turned to Autumn, Autumn to Winter, and Midoriya's new study plan-focused lifestyle continued as the date of the U.A. entrance exam inexorably drew nearer.

He reached out with his sense for materials, but thinking about CADs came back with nothing. He had more luck when he considered the components to make one himself, but there was a feeling of incompleteness, and reading further told him about the "induction stone" needed for all CADs which his material sense also came up empty on.
...Yeah, even pulling up the Jump, I can't find a single mention of those stones. And looking at the Forge build, there doesn't seem to be any means of getting a CAD (and there would have to be some serious luck in getting Izuku the needed perk to code one, barring other Technomagic perks explicitly capable of bridging the gap no matter the magic system). Real shame he can't use what might have been his most useful item so far.

Izuku is not doing well so far outside of at least getting ownership of a business to support himself financially.

He was in charge of his Quirk, he reminded himself, not the other way around.

He still slipped the PDA into his pocket, though, just in case his Quirk came through with the other half.
Yeah...

When he took it out of the bag, it looked like a narrow metal Thermos, but a flick telescoped it out into a baton. Another extended it into a long staff taller than he was. The original design for the sections had come from the retractable pole for the wind-powered heaters, but he had changed the order the pieces slid out in so that his collapsible weapon was well-balanced in either baton or staff form
Hopefully he took a class on using either of those modes during his time skip.

Otherwise, alright chapter, just not enough meat in the story yet. It might be able to fill out more if Izuku gets a roll that is actually able to kickstart the crafting aspect, or even just him actually discovering the Warehouse despite literally being unable to lose the key since he was a child, because him stocking up on emergency response gear (first aid kits, rope, various tools for freeing trapped civies, etc) that he locates using Scrounging could fill up a word count.
 
I don't think he made enough points to pass. I would say 12-24 from zero pointer tops, and 1 point from the 1 pointer for a total of 5 tops. Idk if that is enough or not.

Also I do hope that the butterfly effect continues. It's annoying when Some events stay the same when they should change.

So far the story has been interesting, the real challenge begins now.
 
So you guys are guessing that he gets fewer rescue points because he didn't injure himself, Uraraka doesn't ask to share her points, his rescue being straight up less impressive? What's the rationale, considering he actually accomplished his objective more successfully than he did in canon, with a (currently weaker/less impressive) ability. It's not like we know exactly why they decided to give him full points in canon, since we know it wasn't All Might talking him up. Though it's possible Nezu pushed him through regardless of All Might's silence.

Another significant change to consider, Uraraka got rescue points for saving Deku from a nasty fall in canon.
 
Real shame he can't use what might have been his most useful item so far.
The real shame is Izuku rolled for Alchemy Knowledge, but he was to poor to afford it. It would have been a very small chance, but a chance nonetheless, to craft a CAD from scratch. The only other skill which might lead to a CAD is the KH2 Synthesis Crafting; That skill involves conceptual work in the form of shards and crystals.
so as long as he can obtain even a small sample of wonder or super metal he would get a huge upgrade to his equipment
Here's to hope. Izuku may yet bootstrap his way to power, but if that fails then he can always wield clay hammers with a force of steel.

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So you guys are guessing that he gets fewer rescue points because he didn't injure himself, Uraraka doesn't ask to share her points, his rescue being straight up less impressive? What's the rationale, considering he actually accomplished his objective more successfully than he did in canon, with a (currently weaker/less impressive) ability. It's not like we know exactly why they decided to give him full points in canon, since we know it wasn't All Might talking him up. Though it's possible Nezu pushed him through regardless of All Might's silence.
Far fewer. Izuku's goal was to help her, but he doesn't say that out loud. Granted, the teachers may be able to infer he was attempting to help, but he doesn't emerge victorious here.

In canon and despite the grievous self-harm, Izuku is able to immediately end the 0-point. Even though it's not possible for him to participate, Izuku one-shot means the greatest danger has ended, so he's not 'in danger,' so to speak. There's no need for any follow up attack on Deku's part. After all, the other robots are within the capabilities of the other test takers.

Here, Izuku does damage, but it's not enough. Meaning, Izuku needed to have crafted more spears for a follow up, but he didn't think ahead to make ammo. The only upside is he has not damaged his body, but that's overshadowed by the situation he has placed himself in( as opposed to otl). Izuku finds himself with the undivided attention of a giant Robot after his blood and unable to fight back.

Speaking of Nezu, there's no reason he would push Deku into the program. In canon, there is clear evidence that Izuku has a powerful, but untrained quirk( curtesy of All Might). Izuku clearly needs training that may only arrive through the Hero Program. Else, that means there is a power young man who doesn't get taught to use his quirk for heroism. In this AU, Izuku appears to have a low level quirk. He needs training, but not as urgently if he were some kind of Superman. From what is seen is Midoriya appears geared to item crafting. Just look at the baton-staff, his armor, or the fact he built a concrete spear able to pierce metal. If Izuku Midoriya lacks the raw strength to be in the Hero program then it's clear he should go to the Support Program. Why if he handed the spear to Ochako then she could have turn it into rail gun ammo, or drilled through it in melee range!
 
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Yeah, honestly it really does feel like he kinda needed to get a combat-viable perk at literally any point before now for this story to go in the 'hero course' direction. So we're liable to be looking at a story largely divorced from the main cast of MHA beyond Izuku himself if it actually continues in this direction, and lots of OCs. This lack of usable power isn't helped by having timeskips in a story where the MC is, currently at least, literally only capable of getting stronger during a chapter. The fact that he's yet to realize the primary core of his power makes it even more grating.

The Celestial Forge is a very interesting idea for fics, but I feel like it's just being... completely misused thus far. Not even from an In-Universe perspective since thus far the only thing the MC has done wrong is not use the key(which won't really even do much for him without the right perks anyway), but from an outright writing perspective.


The Worm Celestial Forge story felt like it covered too little time, but the whole 'incredibly rapid build-up and showing off power while outside perspectives react' dynamic is fun in its own way(such as in One Punch Man), this feels like it's covering far too much time and the only fun part of it(thought it is a pretty fun part) has honestly just been seeing Amakiir try to adapt to a catering towards heroes in a superhero setting rather than villains in a fantasy one and his gripes about having to cater towards hero and civilian fashion.

... Actually why is it that the best part of both Celestial Forge fics has been the fashion-focused companion?
 
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