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Hey, changed a bit in 1.5, 1.11, and 1.12, wanted to let everyone know bc it'll come up later. These gal pals now have pet names for one another! What good friends!

She hands me a box, covered in hearts, with a pink bow around it. "For you, psikhi mu."

Right. Valentines day was yesterday, so this stuff must be super cheap in the stores.

I open it, reverently, and see a necklace sitting inside

"Oh, cục bạc, it's beautiful" I say, looking up at her with what I can only imagine is the world's dopiest grin. "I don't even know how to thank you."
But no matter how many strangers I rub myself against, and how many unreasonably cheap beers I swill down, I know that it won't help me when my heart feels like fucking ash, and my oli psikhi, entire whole soul has gone and left m-
I growl, fingers digging into my palm. Focus. Always forward, never back: I can't think about…

How my cục bạc, my lovely piece of silver, has left me forever.

About…
 
Hey, changed a bit in 1.5, 1.11, and 1.12, wanted to let everyone know bc it'll come up later. These gal pals now have pet names for one another! What good friends!

Artemis. You keep asking why people think you have the hots for your best friend, then you go and give her a Vietnamese pet name generally associated with romantic partners.

You complain about all her other relationships and tendency to sleep around.

You two cuddle and give each other valentines gifts.

This is why people think you're dating! Because you act like it!

…..

I can't even deal with these two.
 
Weekly updates + poll
The Fall Semester starts this week for me, so I'm going to be moving to weekly updates instead of biweekly. There's a poll at the top, if you have an opinion, please select when you'd prefer for a weekly update, if you have a preference. If you really want a particular day for some specific reason, please let me know in the thread and I'll see what I can do.
 
I have no idea why I care at all about this particular distinction, especially given how inconsistent the actual text of worm is about it, but a 2 on the prt scale isn't necessary superhuman, as a 1 represents a threat that an average, untrained civilian could reasonably defeat, and a 2 is a threat that a trained civilian could reasonably defeat. Arguably, anyone with slightly above average strength or training would be a brute 2, and the trained civilian able to take down a brute 2 would in turn be a brute 3 (someone who is best handled by a team of several well trained civilians). With sufficient training, preparation, and equipment, an unpowered, real world individual could quite reasonably hit 3 or even 4 in many of the prt threat categories. Heck, just having a normal handgun probably qualifies you as a blaster 4

Does all that matter at all? Nope. Does it impact the story and)or my enjoyment at all? Absolutely not. It's just a weird useless and largely irrelevant factoid my brain gets caught on every once in a while.
 

Pretty sure all the author meant by saying that is humans in this version of dc can explicitly train themselves up to the point where they can compete with superpowered people, despite technically having no powers.

There are quite a few hero's and villains in dc who don't have powers, yet fight and win against dudes with powers that often should really be unbeatable by a normal dude. Usually it feels a bit like plot armor to me. I feel like superhero's/ supervillains should have something supernatural going on in the power department.
 
Yup, I agree. What my long winded (and clearly not particularly well worded) previous post was getting at was less "Batman isn't superhuman compared to real life" and more "Batman would be closer to brute 5 or even 6, with an overall threat rating of 10+, despite being ostensibly being an unpowered human"

I don't want to get any further into actual power scaling of dc characters, especially not with the worm/prt system, because the number scaling of that system barely works for worm and immediately falls apart in most other settings.
 
Pretty sure all the author meant by saying that is humans in this version of dc can explicitly train themselves up to the point where they can compete with superpowered people, despite technically having no powers.
Yeah, this is about it. They obviously can't get up to the level of someone with genuine, non-insignificant super-strength, like Bane (let alone Wonder Woman or Superman), but they go just a little bit beyond humanity in our universe. Sort of like Captain America at his lower levels of power, or the lowest levels of xianxia cultivation. So Batman beating Bane is more like Oberyn beating the Mountain that Rides in ASOIAF.

I don't want to get any further into actual power scaling of dc characters, especially not with the worm/prt system, because the number scaling of that system barely works for worm and immediately falls apart in most other settings.
You're fine the Worm power scaling is very very strange.
 
I have no idea why I care at all about this particular distinction, especially given how inconsistent the actual text of worm is about it, but a 2 on the prt scale isn't necessary superhuman, as a 1 represents a threat that an average, untrained civilian could reasonably defeat, and a 2 is a threat that a trained civilian could reasonably defeat. Arguably, anyone with slightly above average strength or training would be a brute 2, and the trained civilian able to take down a brute 2 would in turn be a brute 3 (someone who is best handled by a team of several well trained civilians). With sufficient training, preparation, and equipment, an unpowered, real world individual could quite reasonably hit 3 or even 4 in many of the prt threat categories. Heck, just having a normal handgun probably qualifies you as a blaster 4

Does all that matter at all? Nope. Does it impact the story and)or my enjoyment at all? Absolutely not. It's just a weird useless and largely irrelevant factoid my brain gets caught on every once in a while.
Thats not true at all, a brute 2 is practically immune to guns so the prt guidelines say focus fire him with a whole trained team. Likely to hit weakpoints like the eyes. No amount of training can do that
 
What superhuman or unrealistic feats a "normal" human can accomplish, whether they are justified andhow they are justified varies depending on the work.

When it does get justied I think the explanation is usually secret mystic martial arts learned while away. Possibly from something like the league of shadows or a rival organisation.

Young Justice canon doesn't present an explanation AFAIK but does have Canary defeating Superboy, Robin casually punching a crater into a boulder with his skinny arms, the whole thing with the MONQIS and Amazo, how the league of shadows are treated and more I can't think of off the top of my head. Some form of supertraining makes sense.
 
Young Justice canon doesn't present an explanation AFAIK but does have Canary defeating Superboy, Robin casually punching a crater into a boulder with his skinny arms, the whole thing with the MONQIS and Amazo, how the league of shadows are treated and more I can't think of off the top of my head. Some form of supertraining makes sense.
Yeah, a lot of the combat in the show just plain doesn't make sense if you think Robin and Artemis have the physical stats of ordinary humans.
 
2.1 / Time in a Bottle (Sofia)
ARC 2 / THE MONTH OF BLOOD

PoV: Sofia Falcone

I walk up to the exterior of the bar, and cringe.

Eugh, how does Daddy's territory even have a place like this?

The exterior is crumbling, vines growing through the cracks in the brick. Two of the windows are boarded up with plywood, and they, along with every other square inch, is graffitied with Falcone gang tags.

Even the sign looks dilapidated, the plastic of several letters of the "Mooney's" cracked, and the apostrophe entirely missing, making it more "Muoııevs" than anything.

I push open the door, cringing as my fingers touch the soggy wood.



Oh God, the inside is somehow worse than the outside: chairs with three legs, half the surfaces covered in vomit, and a single, solitary pool table in the corner with half the balls missing.

At the end of the bar, though, I spy the target of my search, nursing a beer. I let out a breath of relief. Finally.

Argyra Morgan is incredibly hard to track down when she wants to be.

I walk into the establishment, brushing past a man who looks and smells like he's spent the past three nights bathing in whatever fluid comes out of a dumpster on a hot July day.

Jesus, this place is a dump. How the hell can Yra stand to actually touch the tables? She's normally so anal about cleanliness.

I make my way up to the bar. The bartender offers me a drink, but I just look down my nose as him until he shrugs and turns away.

I slide up next to my former American History tutor, the girl I'd suspected of being some sort of cape for several months now… Holy fuck, she looks rough.

Her skin is dry and cracked, and her hair looks greasier than I've ever seen it, like she hasn't washed it in days. I almost thought she was one of those new Bertinelli suldati, with how red her eyes are, although of that might just be the contrast with the dark circles under them.

"Sofia" she says, voice low, scratchy. "Can't say I expected to see a Falcone in a place like this."

I raise my eyebrows, sitting down next to her.

"I didn't exactly expect to find you here either, Yra."

She snorts. "Wasn't my first choice. I've gotten kicked out of every other bar on this block."

"You've been missing for over three days. People at school are wondering where you are."

She takes a swig of her beer. "Well 'people' can go fuck themselves. Only one I actually care about knowing I'm alive is Lonnie, and I already texted him to fuck off."

She doesn't talk after that, and I just sit there, watching her drink.

Eventually, she sighs. "Just spit it out already, you look like a constipated beaver."

I shoot her a glare, and she ignores me.

I swallow. Right Sofia, here you go. First recruitment, don't mess this up!

"I… wanted to talk to you about something."

She snorts. "Is it about how you tricked me into revealing that I'm a mage, and I was too stupid and distracted to see it?"

I blanch. "You…"

"Yeah, I figured it out about five bars ago."

Also, magic? Damn, my money was on a metahuman.

Oh well, at least Jinx will finally have someone to talk to about all her weirdness.

She lets out a rueful chuckle, raising her drink to me. "It was real well-done too. Juuuuust enough info that I would have been lost if I didn't have powers, but enough so that if I did have powers, I wouldn't be able to resist the prize. And not enough to give me enough reason to hold myself back"

She nods at me. "Carmine's territory will be in good hands."

I sit down, eyeing her warily.

"Honestly, I didn't expect it to work. But when I heard about some sort of super-fight in a warehouse on the corner of Belmont and Leigh…"

Her lip twitches down. "Well, guess it's just your lucky day, isn't it?"

"You know" she says, taking a swig of her drink, "if I was a less agreeable mage, I'd kill you for trying to fuck with me like that."

She sighs. "Especially after… well, things didn't exactly go well after, to say the least."

Right. That. "…I heard."

She swallows, staring into the mirror above the bar.

"You and Artemis… I don't know what the term would be, broke up? As friends?"

Her chuckle sounds like broken glass scraping over concrete. "That's one way to put it, I suppose. She no longer wants a damn thing to do with me."

She sighs. "Hells, I don't even blame her. I don't want a damn thing to do with me. I'm a huge piece'a shit."

She sighs. "Fated to be one, I think. It runs in the family."

Yra trails off, seemingly not even acknowledging the awkward silence between us.





Right before I'm about to interrupt her, she speaks.

"Did you know" she says abruptly, "that Teddy Roosevelt kept a meticulous diary?"

"I… did not."

"Mhm. He did, every single day he filled that thing out. All except for one."

She takes a swig. "When his mother and wife both died, within hours of one another."

"On that day, the only thing he put was a giant black 'x'."

She stares up at the mirror. "'The light has gone out of my life.' …that's what he wrote above it. Because he has something beautiful, and radiant, and then…"

She snaps.

"In an instant, it was gone. Forever."

She takes another drink of her beer.

"There's an American History fact for you. Consider it the last of your tutoring."

She sits there, staring at the wall, for the next few minutes.

"You know" I say carefully, "several people warned me not to go looking for you, when I was asking around. They said you had some sort of crazy angry meltdown at Brent's party and attacked a bunch of people."

She smiles wanly. "Yeah, sounds about right."

"So…"

"So, why am I sitting in a bar at the ass-end of the ass-end of the neighborhood? Or why am I not screaming at you inside of it blaming you for what happened?"

I shrug. "Both, honestly."

She sighs. "I got all my rage out days ago. Now I'm just…"

She waves her hand around. "Empty, on a Tuesday evening. Like this bar."

She raises a hand, and the barkeep slides her another beer. "I don't, you know."

I turn. "What?"

"I don't blame you."

"If I were a worse person" she says giving a mirthless chuckle "or well… at least a stupider one. If I were, I'd blame you for causing all of it, get real worked up into a steaming fit."

She closes her eyes, sighing, eyes wet. "But I can't. Because the curse of loving Truth is that you can't lie to yourself, even when you want to."

She waves her hand in the air. "All of this? It was…"

She swallows. "Well, those three bitches had their plans. It was weaved into the Loom already, because of everything I'd already done, and I was just too fucking blind and stupid to realize it."

"That's how it works, you know. Fate. No one's pulling the strings, puppetting you around."

"It's just… things happen, because they're the only thing that can happen. Like me and Artie: we were too… too different, deep down.

She sighs wetly. "There was nothing we could have done but come apart."

"It might even have been for the best that it happened like it did" Her voice is tight, and I can feel how much she desperately both wants to and doesn't want to believe what she's saying.

"If it was inevitable… better to have it burn up now than sizzle down to nothing. At leas then… at least then you can know it was real. That it had weight to it. Even if you only know because that weight is crushing your ribs."

She takes another swig, going quiet.

"There were…" she eventually continues "there were two normal human beings who had a normal human relationship. It was Eri and Artie, against the world…"

She sighs. "But those two people never existed. And two fake people can't have a real relationship."

"Turns out it was always Silver Sorceress and Chryssa…" she says with a chuckle "And those two apparently fuckin' hate each other."

I widen my eyes. "Wait, are you saying Artemis is-"

She snorts, cutting me off. "Oh, don't act like you don't already know."

She rolls her eyes. "I'm not an idiot, despite what you must be thinking with how easily you tricked me."

I pause, but eventually sigh. "Fine. I had my suspicions, but nothing confirmed. Then I heard of your breakup, and the fact that two figures were seen leaving the warehouse."

We both politely agree to ignore my attempted manipulation.

Shame, too, I could really worked the whole "revealed my ex-whatever's closely-hidden secret, what can I do to make you forget I said anything and not tell her?" angle.

She takes another drink. "You told your daddy yet?"

I grimace. "I…"

Look, I'm not betraying him.

I just want to… control the narrative, let's call it. I don't want him doing anything rash, that might force a response he's not ready for.

Besides, Chryssa doesn't operate in our territory all that often, so it's not like she's actually all that much of a threat.

I shake my head.

"Good" she eventually says. "It's better he isn't tempted."

"What?"

She shrugs, staring at the bar wall. "I mean, it's better Carmine isn't tempted to do something. He's not the worst guy in the world, so I'd hate to have to kill him."

I choke.

Her tone sounds like she's commenting on the weather. "Wouldn't even be that hard, honestly. I checked out the wards on his office, they're shit. I'd just disable them, sneak in, and then…"

She mimes a stabbing motion.

"Bye-bye Carmine."

She hasn't looked at me throughout her entire monologue.

She… she just threatened to kill one of the most powerful mob bosses in the entire city, in the heart of his territory, directly to his heir's face.

Does she even care about-

I swallow as I realize the truth. She doesn't.

I shudder.

Daddy always said that there's nothing more dangerous than someone half-clever with nothing left to lose.

"Oh, stop giving me that look" she says with a snort, "it's not like Carmine hasn't done worse, hundreds of times. I mean, if I was really doing something karmic, I'd keep him alive and kill you."

I scowl, irritation breaking through the wariness. "Don't. Daddy would do a lot of things, but never that."

I bite my lip. "He may be… he may not be perfect, but he has a code: no wives, no kids, no one uninvolved."

She snorts. "Whatever you say, Princess."

"So," she says, cutting me off before I can respond, "I assume you're here to recruit me, or something? Set me up on a meeting with the big man?"

I nod.

She scrunches up her mouth, thinking.

Eventually, she nods. "…You know what? Fuck it, alright. I'll do it. Give me a day to prepare some, and you'll have your meeting."

She gives me a smile totally devoid of mirth. "Looks like it's time for this predator to return to her natural habitat."



AN: So, three day's post-breakup, and Eri's doing great. Don't worry though, only one more sad-sack chapter (showing Artemis's reaction) before things begin to get a little better.

The poll has a mix of weekend and weekday votes, so I'm splitting the difference and doing Friday.

I'm planning on writing a series of interludes showing Eri and Artie before the breakup. Something like 1.2 or 1.5. Any thoughts on what they should be doing and/or discussing? Something like how in 1.5 they discussed Artemis's father, and gave Valentines gifts.

As always, discussion keeps me motivated, so please let me know what you think. I also talk about story stuff and get writing feedback on my channel in the Gaylor Convention Center.
 
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Eh, Eri seems to be handling their friend breakup just fine

I'm planning on writing a series of interludes showing Eri and Artie before the breakup. Something like 1.2 or 1.5. Any thoughts on what they should be doing and/or discussing? Something like how in 1.5 they discussed Artemis's father, and gave Valentines gifts.
Maybe like sitting on a rooftop somewhere, looking out at Gotham, and thinking while they could leave, well, Gotham has Stockholmed them. They won't leave their home.
 
Perhaps show one of the magic lessons Eri gave to Artemis? I think that could show their previous bond, since it sorta has to be personal.

Also interested in maybe Eri's first meeting with her father or something.
 
It's described in 1.1. Or do you mean her first in-person one? Artemis wasn't there for that.

In person, though my suggestion for the Eri and Artemis past events thing was the magic lessons that Artemis got taught. Like I think that might be a nice contrast between the events of the last few chapters and their previous relationship.
 
Just read the last 4 chapters.

...Ouch.

Really hoping this is leading up to them reconciling eventually, because as I can see throwing themselves into heroism and petty crime (respectively) will just push them even further apart.
 
Oh, that's not ominous or anything... This will go horribly wrong and I love it.

Sorry if you're already mentioned this, but roughly how far is this from when Artemis joins the team in cannon?
 
Sorry if you're already mentioned this, but roughly how far is this from when Artemis joins the team in cannon?
This is an AU, so this isn't operating an canon's timeline or slate of missions; the Team is going to be dealing with entirely different problems, and already has been. It's already been mentioned, but Bane in this fic is a Gotham gang leader, not the leader of a Caribbean island nation, which means, if I was following canon's timeline, no Santa Prisca mission, which would derail everything. Also, the main overarcing plot of the first season of the show was the "mole" plotline, and I want to deal with different themes in my fic so I'm not using it.
 
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