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Wow, you have an incredible update speed, and the writing quality is excellent!
Thanks for writing this interesting story.
Thanks for writing this interesting story.
Jack-Of-All-Trades.Minor bit if anyone cares to help. I've got the 'support' dreamed up, but the other wingman position is still up in the air. Please feel free to suggest titles you think would be interesting for it.
Accident actually. Bolding doesn't come through when I copy it over. It's there now.The "Summoner" line is missing the bold you usually use for them. Is that deliberate?
Honestly, if I was in her position (and actually a girl) I'd probably have the same basic reaction to the clothing issues.
Dunno. It seems that a lot of woman whom got the looks, they don't mind flaunting it. In fantasy and in the real world.
I'd say it's fine now. Each time it's been brought up as part of her integration to a new group of people. Her 'weird' clothing choices are one of the most obvious things for people who don't know anything about her to ask about. Especially if you change her emotions over time as the repetition of the topic keeps intruding on her life, I'd say letting me characters comment on it if fine. If it keeps being brought up after she settles into a consistent group, then that's overdoing it.Oh, before I forget. Did I have Jessy harp a bit too much about the clothing thing? It's not something I wanted to overdo, but it's supposed to be a bit of a 'setting thing' so to speak. Magic substitutes for armor, so you get clothing that would seem out of context for people risking their lives.
Also, it's apparently going to be a quirk of hers now. That was a bit of an accident, but I sorta like it.
Oh, before I forget. Did I have Jessy harp a bit too much about the clothing thing? It's not something I wanted to overdo, but it's supposed to be a bit of a 'setting thing' so to speak. Magic substitutes for armor, so you get clothing that would seem out of context for people risking their lives.
Also, it's apparently going to be a quirk of hers now. That was a bit of an accident, but I sorta like it.
A bit? Given the repeated explanations, I think she's gone too myopic about it. There's a wide range in between giant poofy all-concealing robes and effective fetish-wear that she doesn't seem to want to land in. I can recognize that there's something to be said for modesty and sticking to your principles and maybe even be very shy or body conscious or whathaveyou, but those tend to need to get thrown to the wayside in a hurry when in dangerous occupations for the eminently practical. So, is she good enough for it not to matter, has she not really hit the deep end yet, is she being babied by her friends/guild? Has she just not really looked at all the options out there/found a good example to look up to/needs to forge her own path (leather wearing caster)?Oh, before I forget. Did I have Jessy harp a bit too much about the clothing thing? It's not something I wanted to overdo, but it's supposed to be a bit of a 'setting thing' so to speak. Magic substitutes for armor, so you get clothing that would seem out of context for people risking their lives.
Also, it's apparently going to be a quirk of hers now. That was a bit of an accident, but I sorta like it.
If you're still taking suggestions...Minor bit if anyone cares to help. I've got the 'support' dreamed up, but the other wingman position is still up in the air. Please feel free to suggest titles you think would be interesting for it.
I don't think Seonag's sticking permanently. The team's composition seems to going be Samael, Knuckles, Jessy, the last guy.
Could be? It does seem like they're set up to converge, but I suppose that depends on whether Summoner slots back into South instead of West like how a Mage apparently starts as, using trad assignments, given comments up-thread.I don't think Seonag's sticking permanently. The team's composition seems to going be Samael, Knuckles, Jessy, the last guy.
Better do more research than just that before joining. ;XWith that the woman got to her feet, and Samael braced himself for the next few groups. It ended up being a fairly long night. At least he got an idea of all the clans in the area.