Drip [Worm AU | Alt-Power]

Generally I wouldn't continue with this as you've done the Wards thing AND gotten Danny involved, both of which tend to spend a lot of time pumping the breaks and keeping things from actually becoming interesting, but in this instance so far it's been handled well. Danny was useful instead of being a wet-blanket wrapped cinder block tied to Taylor's ankle, and you didn't let Beardmaster get away with his shit. Watching
 
That's just "I want the liquid described on page 2 of my notebook", which you think won't work.

No, because at that point it`s a distinct liquid rather than a set of conditions describing a liquid. It`s the difference between asking for 'orange juice' and 'juice from the fruit I`m thinking of'.
 
I just realized I made a mistake in the timeline, so I had to go back and change one detail in 1.7; Taylor originally had powers testing scheduled for Friday (the 15th), but now has it scheduled for Thursday (the 14th).

Coincidentally, today is Thursday the 14th, but I don't have the chapter finished yet.

Thanks to everybody again for all the helpful comments. All feedback is very much appreciated.
 
Is it ? Cause it reads like you`re saying they wouldn`t lie, but noone would believe.

Thing is, LUNG knows who took him down. Since it`s nigh well guaranteed he`s not going to remain in custody for long, the gangers now have to choose : Embarass their boss or possibly anger him by lying about Armsmaster finally getting the better of him. Rock and a hard place, some will choose the rock, others the hard place, it`ll make its way to PHO and unless Dragon decides to be actively corrupt as a favour to her tinkertot besty rather than forced to be passively corrupt it`ll get spread around.

At best Armsmaster bought Taylor, rather whatever her cape name ends up being, a few days. At worst he did fuck all.

Ahhhh.... but does Lung realy know who took him out?

(Chapter 1)

Breathing out to steady my nerves, I hurled the balloon at Lung, praying that my aim would hold. If I missed, I was probably dead.

To my surprise, it struck him square in the face.

The balloon exploded, sending its contents over Lung and the ABB goons nearby. Lung and five gangsters collapsed to the ground almost immediately.

Way, way too easy.

After half a second of utter silence, there was pandemonium. The rest of the thugs started shouting and milling around, waving their guns and looking for the source of the attack. I began to fill another balloon, impressed with the effectiveness of the first one. At least, I really, really hoped that it had been effective.

"What was that?"

"It came from above! I saw! Search the buildings!"

"Lung is down!"

To me it looks like he never saw what or who hit him, he may have seen a balloon coming for him, but even that is unlikely.

And none of the goons saw her either, not the ones who came up the ladder, or the ones who ran away.
The only ones who saw her where the Undersiders, and that only because Tattletale "knew" where she was on the roof.
From the perspective of the couple of goons who ran away it could have easily been an ambush from Armsmaster.
 
From the perspective of the couple of goons who ran away it could have easily been an ambush from Armsmaster.

Fair point, but not entirely. Considering how utterly outside 'water baloon from above' is Halbeards standard modus operandi, and there being no other known parahumans who`d do something like this, it`s a reasonable assumption that this was a new player, not Armsmaster. Then there`s the issue that Armsy is not the kind of Tinker who`d be able to make something like this.

Also : if Armsy knew where Lung was going to be that night, that would mean the ABB has a mole. Not like he`s exactly covert while patrolling, so it can`t have been a coincidence.

While gangers aren`t known for their brainpower, six seconds of thinking will lead anyone to the conclusion that, whoever ambushed them that night, Armsmaster is very far down the list of reasonable suspects. 'Fresh trigger or out of towner' is the only logical assumption. 'Yep, it must have been Armsmaster' requires some serious leaps of logic from pretty much the entire ABB. Bakuda is less of an improbability; at least a water baloon is kind of like a bomb, and she`d probably have a decent idea of where Lung would be.
 
No, because at that point it`s a distinct liquid rather than a set of conditions describing a liquid. It`s the difference between asking for 'orange juice' and 'juice from the fruit I`m thinking of'.
She could apply labels to them. After all orange juice is a label. Containment Foam liquid did produce something approximately similar.

"I want Composition 65.1.a with a biological halflife of four hours that does not affect the hypothalamus and suppresses the adrenal glands without causing permanent damage."
 
She could apply labels to them. After all orange juice is a label.
Yes. This is what I`m basically saying she should do.

"I want Composition 65.1.a with a biological halflife of four hours that does not affect the hypothalamus and suppresses the adrenal glands without causing permanent damage."
This on the other hand probably wouldn`t work as it`s mixing a definite liquid with properties not intrinsic to it. If she could isolate and label specific components she could remove those on the fly as needed, but not arbitrarily alter the liquid itself like this.
 
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I knew that the Dockworkers Union was not allowed to hire strong capes as laborers
Which brain-dead moron decided that this was a good idea?! Are they trying to force people into crime?!
Is it ? Cause it reads like you`re saying they wouldn`t lie, but noone would believe.

Thing is, LUNG knows who took him down. Since it`s nigh well guaranteed he`s not going to remain in custody for long, the gangers now have to choose : Embarass their boss or possibly anger him by lying about Armsmaster finally getting the better of him. Rock and a hard place, some will choose the rock, others the hard place, it`ll make its way to PHO and unless Dragon decides to be actively corrupt as a favour to her tinkertot besty rather than forced to be passively corrupt it`ll get spread around.

At best Armsmaster bought Taylor, rather whatever her cape name ends up being, a few days. At worst he did fuck all.
Normally you'd have a point, but in this particular fic, Lung likely saw a something flying into his face before falling unconscious. Not standard Armsy MO, but then again, his standard MO wasn't working so he might have been trying something else. If he absolutely thinks it wasn't actually Armsmaster, he'd probably blame the Undersiders instead. Not what you'd expect given their powers and skillsets, but hey, who knows, maybe they got tinker support back home, or maybe they splurged a bit for toybox stuff just to take him down.
 
Normally you'd have a point, but in this particular fic, Lung likely saw a something flying into his face before falling unconscious. Not standard Armsy MO, but then again, his standard MO wasn't working so he might have been trying something else. If he absolutely thinks it wasn't actually Armsmaster, he'd probably blame the Undersiders instead. Not what you'd expect given their powers and skillsets, but hey, who knows, maybe they got tinker support back home, or maybe they splurged a bit for toybox stuff just to take him down.

If I may direct your attention a few posts further...
Considering how utterly outside 'water baloon from above' is Halbeards standard modus operandi, and there being no other known parahumans who`d do something like this, it`s a reasonable assumption that this was a new player, not Armsmaster. Then there`s the issue that Armsy is not the kind of Tinker who`d be able to make something like this.

Also : if Armsy knew where Lung was going to be that night, that would mean the ABB has a mole. Not like he`s exactly covert while patrolling, so it can`t have been a coincidence.

While gangers aren`t known for their brainpower, six seconds of thinking will lead anyone to the conclusion that, whoever ambushed them that night, Armsmaster is very far down the list of reasonable suspects. 'Fresh trigger or out of towner' is the only logical assumption. 'Yep, it must have been Armsmaster' requires some serious leaps of logic from pretty much the entire ABB. Bakuda is less of an improbability; at least a water baloon is kind of like a bomb, and she`d probably have a decent idea of where Lung would be.

The only thing that doesn`t adress is the Undersiders. As far as anyone other than Coil knows the Undersiders are strictly small time, do not have the money to pay for Toybox stuff, and... who else, exactly, could they get Tinker support from ?. They`re not an IMpossibibility but they`re pretty damn unlikely.

If Lung arrives at any other conclusion than 'likely new trigger or out of town cape' I will eat my hat.
 
Which brain-dead moron decided that this was a good idea?!
In theory, it was a good idea. In theory, the laws were created to ensure a fair market where parahumans couldn't be exploited or exploit themselves to create massive upheaval in the economy and render thousands of workers useless. In theory, you very much do need some sort of control when you have people like, say, Taylor running around putting every pest control company in town out of business.

In theory.

Practically, what happened was people started to panic about all the things that could go wrong, so the government put together some laws that would stop all that stuff from happening. Except that politicians, being the easily bought and sold types they are, had specifically left loopholes in the bills in order to keep the people holding their leashes happy, so while everything looked like it would makes things better what actually happened was parahumans became unable to do basically anything that effected the market in some way (like, say, earning a living, because that affects the market).

Of course, even glancing at the issues surrounding things like gun control, coal mining, and any other part of the market that people have an interest in making a profit from should show you how hard it is to get laws changed in order to male big businesses lose some of their grip on their profits.

As far as I'm aware, the PRT really hate the laws because of exactly what you say: it leaves parahumans with little choice. While they sort of like being able to snatch parahumans up whenever possible, they don't like snatching up people because of random complaints leveled at parahumans just because people feel outdone by them, especially because this just makes hints harder for the PRT.
 
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In theory, it was a good idea. In theory, the laws were created to ensure a fair market where parahumans couldn't be exploited or exploit themselves to create massive upheaval in the economy and render thousands of workers useless. In theory, you very much do need some sort of control when you have people like, say, Taylor running around putting every pest control company in town out of business.
No. It really, really isn't. In theory it's about as good of an idea as banning machines to ensure employment of artisans, or banning cars to ensure horse breeders don't go out, with the combined issue that you create a class of superpowered but undereducated individuals who have been banned from manual labor their skills are best qualified for, leaving them with crime or enlisting in "law enforcement" except far riskier. And likely to be resentful to boot.

It's the worst of luddism combined with marvel level antimutant legislation...
 
Faucet 1.8
As it turned out, being home-schooled required prior approval from an official of my school district before I could actually be removed from school. Legally, I was was still enrolled at Winslow until they agreed to let me leave, which was infuriating. Fortunately, nothing prevented Dad from sending more permission slips excusing me from classes while he negotiated my withdrawal. I think he was a little frustrated at not having been at my second meeting with the PRT, so I suspected Principal Blackwell was about to have a rather unpleasant meeting. I didn't think she would resist my withdrawal too much, though; after all, it wasn't like I didn't have a really, really good justification.

I had made sure to get the PRT's agreement to secure an unconditional transfer to Arcadia in writing, though not as part of the Wards contract. Once we verified that everything was legally binding, Dad and I signed both documents. While he dealt with the school, I would be undergoing power testing. My experimentation with the containment foam had given me a few more ideas, and I thought I finally had a way to use the more unpredictable aspect of my power safely.

In the morning, while Dad went to meet with Blackwell, I visited the library to compile a list of materials I would need to study the subjects required by law. I had agreed that my studies would need to continue through the summer months in order to be ready for Arcadia, so I needed about four and a half months worth of materials. Resources for History and English were fairly easy to find; Science was a bit harder, and I would probably have to buy a math textbook. Computer Science (though not required by the state curriculum) was a subject with plenty of materials online, but unfortunately we didn't have an internet connection at home. Or computers. But there was no issue with me taking my "classes" in the library, so that would be no obstacle.

With the homeschooling research out of the way, I turned my attention to powers research. My new idea called for knowledge not so much about specific liquids, but rather about the professionals who were likely to know about them. In medicine alone, there were over a hundred sub-disciplines, and understanding their specialties was necessary for my new plan. I looked at the descriptions of various sub-disciplines of medicine,
pharmacology, chemistry, biology, and engineering. I was skimming, for the most part - I didn't need a detailed description yet, just an overview of the subject matter covered by each sub-discipline.

A little bit after lunchtime, I headed down to the PRT building to sign the paperwork and have my powers tested. The PRT had a threat assessment system which they used to classify capes according to the types of challenge they would provide in a fight. The idea of labeling people according to the danger they posed sounded a bit hostile to me, but I supposed that one couldn't be too paranoid when dealing with capes. I was also curious about what my own rating would be. From the materials I had been given, I was pretty sure I had the striker classification. Would I count as a tinker, though? I didn't actually have any specialized knowledge guiding my power.

Oh, and I had also settled on a name.

After dropping off the signed forms, I went to the PRT building's power testing facility, a room the size of a small gymnasium. There were large weights for testing strength, a high ceiling for flyers, an obstacle course for various types of mover, piles of assorted electronic parts, some target dummies...and in one area near the door, a table with numerous containers. I suspected that was for me. Assault and a labcoat-wearing technician sort of gave it away.

"Hi," I said, shaking Assault's hand. "Hey," he said, grinning. I made sure to shake the lab tech's hand too - his name was Ali, as it turned out. I was a little surprised to see him there, rather than Armsmaster or Miss Militia. "You have a name picked out yet?" said Assault.

I nodded. "Call me Wellspring." I'd picked the name to try emphasize the positive aspects of my power, and to try to get away from any associations with poisons.

"Ooh, I like it. Well, Wellspring -" he paused for a moment, looking pleased at the repetition, "-looks like it's just us today. The rest of the protectorate is busy with an event outside town."

"Sorry if I made you miss-"

He laughed. "Sorry? You gave me a great excuse to skip, kid. I should thank you. I'd take watching cool new powers over boring political stuff any day. Strictly speaking, there doesn't need to be a hero here at all, but...tradition."

I nodded. "So how does this work, exactly?"

"First, you describe how your powers work as best you can," said Ali, "then you demonstrate. We've provided a number of containers for you to use."

I nodded. "Makes sense. So my powers are basically - I have to be touching a container. Then I sort of - ask my powers for whatever I want, and it starts filling the container with that substance. I can only do homogeneous liquids, although the viscosity doesn't seem to matter."

"Man, you must be popular at parties," said Assault. I winced.

"What counts as a container?" said Ali.

"Uh, pretty much anything non-porous with sides and a basin," I said. "It has to be oriented so that liquid will pool in the bottom and not flow out. If I tip the container over, my power stops filling it."

"Could you fill one of these with water?" he said, handing me a glass beaker. I shrugged, and reached for my power. After about ten seconds, he had me stop.

"It always fills at 1.12 oz per second, no matter what the liquid is," I said. "I don't know why."

"Huh," said Assault, "So it isn't like you could flood a street or anything."

"Not immediately, no."

"Wait - is there a size limit to the containers?"

I shook my head. "As long as it's non-porous and enclosed, anything will do. But it's always the same rate, so if I try to fill a room, it takes a while for the floor to even become damp."

Assault nodded. "Yeah, but still, you could glue everything to the floor if you had enough time."

Well, the surface area of the glue would cause it to harden before catching anybody, but it was definitely an application I intended to explore when I found the right substance.

"What about temperature limits?" said Ali.

I shook my head. "As long as it's liquid, it doesn't matter how hot or cold it is." To prove it, I filled two heavily insulated containers with molten iron and liquid nitrogen, respectively.

"Hey, can you do gold?" said Assault. I obliged. "Wow. You know, power like this, you're going to be rolling in the money."

"I was told there are some limits on what I can sell, but basically-yeah."

I showed them a few other examples with various interesting properties. I produced some beer at Assault's request, though Ali seemed irritated by this ("Consumption of unknown parahuman-derived substances is discouraged, Assault"), and some containment foam, which seemed to amaze them both more than I thought it warranted. It wasn't really any different from anything else I had showed them.

"Next, we need to test your Manton limitations," said Ali.

"Manton limitations?"

Ali explained the Manton effect to me. Apparently, most powers did not affect living creatures directly, and the ones that did tended to only affect living creatures. There were exceptions like Narwhal, but those were very rare.

"I see," I said. "Well, I can't fill my own mouth with water."

Ali nodded. "Self limitations are often present even when the power can affect other people, like Panacea's power. We assume that this is to protect the user."

"I, uh, haven't tried using my power on anybody else," I said. Ali picked up a cage I hadn't seen from behind the table. It contained a single white rat. "Can you use your power on this rat?" he asked.

I touched the rat's head, wondering if it was going to bite me. It seemed pretty complacent, though. As much as I tried, my power wouldn't register anything as a container. I shook my head. "No, I can't."

"Got it. Confirmed Manton Limitation." he made a note on his clipboard. I wondered whether to be disappointed or relieved. Being able to generate liquids inside of a human being sounded a little horrifying.

"Hey, Wellspring," said Assault, "Armsmaster said your power can make new liquids too. Unknown ones."

I nodded. "It's a bit more dangerous, though. If I don't know what I'm creating, there can be unpredictable side effects."

"He said you should probably avoid using it, yeah. Sort of like a Monkey's Paw."

"Yeah, that's pretty accurate. I think I've found a way around that, though." I smiled, and explained. "If I was to ask for something that can numb the pain of a toothache, it might give me some deadly toxin that shuts down my nervous system. But if I ask for something that dentists use to numb the pain of a toothache...I mean, it's not new, but it's still something I didn't know to ask for specifically."

His eyes widened a little. "I think you just earned yourself a thinker rating."

"Can you show us?" said Ali. He looked impressed as well.

"Sure," I said. "What should I make?"

"How about something to neutralize an arbitrary acid?"

I partially filled a container with diluted hydrochloric acid, and then paused for a moment. "How will we know if it is neutralized?" Ali opened a box and held up a pH strip. I nodded. Ok power - give me something chemists use to neutralize hydrochloric acid. I was careful not to think would use, since my power seemed to have trouble with the present unreal conditional tense.

The acid started to bubble and fizz. I kept my power on until it stopped. Ali dipped the pH strip, which turned blue. "Over-neutralized a bit into the alkaline, but basically successful," he said.

"Handy," said Assault. "Ok, so you can reproduce tinkertech, as long as it's liquid. What about parahuman substances?"

"Sure," I said. "Although it might be volume limited."

"How so?" said Ali.

"Sometimes, my power just shuts off after a certain amount of a substance is produced. I haven't been able to figure out why. It hurts a bit - like when I ask for something it can't create for whatever reason. It happened with the medicine I made to heal some comatose people - Armsmaster took those for testing. Actually, do you know anything about what happened with that?"

They shook their heads. "Well, I've been thinking that it might have something to do with whether the substance has properties beyond what chemistry would suggest, which would probably include some parahuman liquids. I don't know for sure though - testing that theory is dangerous, and I haven't had that much time since I figured out I could ask for unknown liquids."

"It's only unknown liquids that are dangerous though, right?" said Assault.

I nodded.

"Okay, so let's try a known parahuman-derived liquid. Have you heard of Faultline's crew?"

I had read something about it. Mercenaries, though they didn't take jobs in Brockton Bay, and consequently didn't really qualify as a villainous threat . I had focused more on the gangs.

"Sort of. Why?"

"They have this one Case 53 - you know what those are?"

Monstrous capes cursed with powers that made it impossible for them to have a secret identity. "Yes, I've heard of those."

"Well, his name is Newter. He's orange, and his power fills his bodily fluids with hallucinogens."

Wow. Ok, I'm interested.

"No evidence has been found that his...drug is addictive or has any long-term effects on his victims," said Ali, "and it is extremely potent, even diluted. Skin contact is enough to completely incapacitate pretty much anybody."

My eyes widened. A perfectly safe drug with no side effects that could nonlethally disable any combatant? Why couldn't my power have just given me that?

"Do you think you can produce that drug?"

I thought for a moment. If the hallucinogen was a liquid that was simply mixed with his other body fluids, I could probably produce it directly. If his power was instead causing his body fluids to take on hallucinogenic properties, I would need to replicate the body fluids directly. The first option seemed...cleaner, so I opted to try that first.

"Ok, I'll give it a try."

I touched a glass beaker and focused my power. Give me the substance that makes Newter's body fluids hallucinogenic. A spike of pain. I shook my head to clear it. Ok, option two. Give me Newter's - wait, was this legal?

"Um, is it legal to recreate somebody's body fluids? Don't they have rights over their DNA or something?"

The two of them stared at me. Finally, Ali said, "I don't think there are any laws against this." Assault shrugged.

"Could I have that in writing?"

Ali frowned. "I don't think that is necessary-"

"Please. I've already come close to serious legal trouble once. I don't want it to happen again."

Ali shrugged, and scribbled something down on a piece of paper verifying that the reproduction of Newter's body fluids was done at the request of the PRT. Assault smiled. "You take the law pretty seriously, don't you?"

I nodded. I checked the piece of paper that Ali had signed and slipped it into my pocket. Now the only question was which body fluid to use. I decided that saliva was probably the least disgusting option.

I focused on the beaker. Give me Newter's saliva. My power reacted - for less than a second. A small covering of liquid coated the bottom of the beaker, and my head began to ache.

Unfortunate. This did give me an opportunity to figure out the limits of my power, though. I noticed that the two of them were still waiting expectantly. They hadn't realized that I had already started. Okay, maybe something else? Power, give me Newter's blood.

As I thought this, I realized that it sounded a bit villainous. Maybe I should have done sweat? All body fluids were pretty disgusting.

Surprisingly, there were no issues this time. The beaker filled with blood, albeit slowly. "Hey, nice!" said Assault. "Also kind of gross, but nice! Does that make her a trump?" he asked Ali.

"We'll review her classification later, but probably" said the tech.

"Awesome! It looks like you have a pretty great weapon, kid."

"Actually, there was kind of an issue with-"

My words were interrupted by a ringing sound. Assault frowned, and drew out his phone. "Aaand we're going to have to cut this short. It looks like the Undersiders are attacking Bay Central. Hey, Wellspring, wanna stop a bank robbery? The Wards will be there."
 
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Pretty decent chapter, though still slightly frustrating as they`re almost, ALMOST at a realization but just don`t QUITE make the connection yet.

Then again I may be biased because :
Feels all tingly.

I focused on the beaker. Give me Newter's saliva. My power reacted - for less than a second. A small covering of liquid coated the bottom of the beaker, and my head began to ache.

Unfortunate. This did give me an opportunity to figure out the limits of my power, though. I noticed that the two of them were still waiting expectantly. They hadn't realized that I had already started. Okay, maybe something else? Power, give me Newter's blood.

As I thought this, I realized that it sounded a bit villainous. Maybe I should have done sweat? All body fluids were pretty disgusting.

Surprisingly, there were no issues this time. The beaker filled with blood, albeit slowly.

More evidence for the theory that she can`t actually create anything, just do arbitrary liquid transfer. Newter wouldn`t have a lot of saliva at any given time, but he`s got a lot of blood.

Also this makes Taylors power confirmed to be really, really scary. Mover 9 or 10 scary, as she doesn`t appear to be Manton limited, and pretty much everyone has blood. Just 'give me X`s blood and five minutes later they`re empty and dying'
 
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The rest of the protectorate is busy with an event outside town."
The Undersiders are fucked...

and some containment foam, which seemed to amaze them both more than I thought it warranted.
That's actually pretty crazy, she can recreate TinkterTech if it's in liquid form

Surprisingly, there were no issues this time.
Her power is evil lol
 
My words were interrupted by a ringing sound. Assault frowned, and drew out his phone. "Aaand we're going to have to cut this short. It looks like the Undersiders are attacking Bay Central. Hey, Wellspring, wanna stop a bank robbery? The Wards will be there."
No no no no no!
I really hope she refuses unless she gets it in writing that they won't go after her for her actions in the field. After all, Piggot docked the Wards' pay for collateral damage in this fight so I can easily see her forcing Taylor into the Wards (without any contract fighting from Danny) for any damage/harm she does.

More evidence for the theory that she can`t actually create anything, just do arbitrary liquid transfer. Newter wouldn`t have a lot of saliva at any given time, but he`s got a lot of blood.
Since Tinker's are a thing, this can be easily tested. All they need to do is have a Tinker create a unique liquid (doesn't have to be useful, just unique) in a limited quantity and then monitor it while asking Taylor to ask her power for that liquid. If the original liquid is affected, then it's obvious.
It also means that she's at real risk of being charged with theft for nearly anything she's asked for, especially the metals and the containment foam. Thankfully she has the paper from the PRT guy so she shouldn't be able to be charged with assault for the blood.
 
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Ok, at this point it's pretty clear Taylor's power is summoning, not conjuring. How on earth has she not figured it out?

She clearly can't produce more of a substance than acrually exists, and a 10 second test of "give me the liquid in that cup" should be an obvious check that would show whether it's being teleported or generated.

Good story, but I feel like Taylor carrying the idiot ball for the sake of a dramatic reveal later is coming close to crossing the line into Idiot Hero territory.
 
Forgot to add a section on Manton limits; fixed.
Thing is, she`s either Manton limited or not. No power is just 'halfway' Manton limited, either it doesn`t work when applied to live organics, like Vistas, or it doesn`t care, like Narhwals. If Taylors power is only semi-limited it`d be the very first.

Depending on where you want the story to go either state serves, but this halfway thing implied here is kind of canon-breaking.

But she created AntiLung, did she just steal that from a random Lab working on it?
IT`s more likely she just grabbed a powerful neurotoxin.
 
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