Deedeequest or The Wonders of Mundus: Be Careful Who You Pretend To Be - A Genderous Isekai Quest

How Dice Rolls Work
Character sheet is here.

Dice rolls are 1d10 + Stat + Proficiency + any applicable bonuses, such as Boons.

You may spend 3 Tension to Overdrive for a retroactive +5 to your roll (a Determination Overdrive), or +3 to an ally's roll (a Teamwork Overdrive). I will also automatically overdrive to avoid exhaustion or unconsciousness.

It is possible to critically succeed (on +5 on skill checks and +10 on combat rolls) or critically fail (by the same margins), but rolling a 1 or a 10 does not automatically crit in either case. It is possible to crit retroactively by Overdriving.

Your stat bonuses have names:
  • Vigor grants a Strength bonus.
  • Agility grants a Dexterity bonus.
  • Spirit grants an Aura bonus.
  • Mind grants an Intuition bonus.
  • Resolve grants a Guts bonus.
Dice are rolled on a first come, first serve bonus. You only roll for Deedee.
 
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(Also that link really drives home why I rephrased the 5th. Great sentiment. Terrible phrasing.)

Quoting it because I found it quite funny
Knox's 5th said:
V. No Chinaman must figure in the story. Why this should be so I do not know, unless we can find a reason for it in our western habit of assuming that the Celestial is over - equipped in the matter of brains, and under - equipped in the matter of morals. I only offer it as a fact of observation that, if you are turning over the pages of a book and come across some mention of 'the slit - like eyes of Chin Loo', you had best put it down at once; it is bad. The only exception which occurs to my mind - there are probably others - is Lord Ernest Hamilton's Four Tragedies of Memworth.

"Detective stories that lean on racial stereotypes or caricatures are bad" is a pretty valid statement, just... phrasing.
 
It's also interesting in this context to see whether the situation is something that arose naturally from Mundus Prime or if it's a Video Game Quest that got out of hand. Because actual, naturally-occurring crime and fictional crime written as a "Detective Story" have about as much in common as me and a potted fern.
 
Yeah.

Sadly, nobody really knew how to do racially sensitive phrasing in those days, even inside their own heads, so even valid statements tended to come out with horrifying baggage because they'd been locked in a room with all the old crap for so long.
 
Crossposting this to Ao3
Since I've already gotten at least one person indignant on my behalf about it, that is, in fact, me putting up the novelization of I/O on Archive of Our Own.

I'm doing it one chapter at a time cause years of watching TV the old way compared to Netflix and Crunchyroll binges have taught me that the best way to maintain interest is to do weekly updates.
 
It's also interesting in this context to see whether the situation is something that arose naturally from Mundus Prime or if it's a Video Game Quest that got out of hand. Because actual, naturally-occurring crime and fictional crime written as a "Detective Story" have about as much in common as me and a potted fern.

I'mma plead the Gold on this one. This is something that wasn't written into the Vinyedo questlines, from a Watsonian perspective, but if it resembles detective fiction that's Doylistically for the sake of a good story.

Yeah.

Sadly, nobody really knew how to do racially sensitive phrasing in those days, even inside their own heads, so even valid statements tended to come out with horrifying baggage because they'd been locked in a room with all the old crap for so long.

When I do Umineko fanfic, the way I usually phrase Dlanor's take on it is "The murderer is not permitted to be one of those people." But then, the character of Dlanor is meant to be a bit stilted and robotic.
 
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I'mma plead the Gold on this one. This is something that wasn't written into the Vinyedo questlines, from a Watsonian perspective, but if it resembles detective fiction that's Doylistically for the sake of a good story.
Yeah, that's actually what makes it philosophically interesting, because what we have here is a story (art, artifice) about another story (art, artifice) that suddenly stopped being art, and stopped being artifice. That's why all these references to the postmodern opium trip whose fandom we share are so appropriate - it's stories all the way down on either side.
 
Turns out plotting a fair-play mystery is complicated! This might take more like a week or two to get together and I apologize!

I'll try to figure out stuff I can put up for you in the meantime.

Speaking of, I've updated Book 2 on Scribblehub to Chapter 12, here.
 
DETECTIVE. ARRIVING. ON THE SCENE.
Things I Should Be Doing To Plan My Decalogue-Compliant Murder Mystery:

- figuring out the rest of the Dramatis Personae
- mapping the village of Vinyedo and the homes of the major characters
- figuring out a timeline of events
- figuring out key clues and red herrings
- reading some Poirot and even some fucking Seacats

Things I Am Doing To Plan My Decalogue-Compliant Murder Mystery Instead:

VIG (Str): Pain Threshold, Half-Light, Endocrine Promenade, Physical Instrument, Neutral Game
AGI (Dex): Hand-Eye Coordination, Espirit d'Escalier, Interfacing, Savoir-Faire, Frame Data
SPI (Aur): Empathy, Drama, Party of Six, Millenium Actress, Lorewise
MND (Int): Logic, Wikiwalk, Perception, Conceptualization, Rhetoric
RES (Gts): Volition, Composure, Authority, Shivers, Endurance

Plotting is continuing to happen, I just thought, you know, it's gonna be a mystery, let's put Dick Mullen on the case.

Fanart of any or all of these faces of Deedee would be lovely if anyone feels like taking a crack at them.
 
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FIGHT IT OUT, book 3 part 1
And for my next trick, I will need some volunteers to wargame this!

Please let me know if anyone can make it this Saturday at 6:30 (ETA: welp 2:00 Pacific works better for my cowriters) to play through the first battle in book 3. I'll need a party of 6. @bii, @FoxHana, you're Sio and Ace if you want it.
 
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> Implying that we're fighting Seedlings, which were the biggest pushovers in the Neverglades battle.
> Calling for volunteers to wargame it out anyway.

 
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I mean, keep in mind your objective is going to be "stop the seedlings from destroying the grape harvest."

Hikaru has Discretion and some Smart AoE, but...
 
And for my next trick, I will need some volunteers to wargame this!

Please let me know if anyone can make it this Saturday at 6:30 (ETA: welp 2:00 Pacific works better for my cowriters) to play through the first battle in book 3. I'll need a party of 6. @bii, @FoxHana, you're Sio and Ace if you want it.
Hmm…

Can't promise that I'm the most familiar with the setting or mechanics, but…
 
And for my next trick, I will need some volunteers to wargame this!

Please let me know if anyone can make it this Saturday at 6:30 (ETA: welp 2:00 Pacific works better for my cowriters) to play through the first battle in book 3. I'll need a party of 6. @bii, @FoxHana, you're Sio and Ace if you want it.
I should be able to make 2pm Pacific, unless Southwest reschedules my mother's flight for a third time?
 
huh that's a lot more characters in the Dramatis Personae of Vinyedo informational threadmark, weird
 
Does anyone else wish there was a seasonal rating for Easter so they could go back and change a bunch of ratings in this thread on posts about DeeDee to "egg"?
 
I may have to put off the game/update due to the FRIDGERDAMMERUNG.

(The inside of our fridge, while empty, is 53 degrees F and has been for a week now. We need to replace the fridge, and a lot of food.)

I'll do my best to post something tomorrow.

Update: Seems like the new fridge may be here soon enough that I can still do this. Will PM people an hour before it's time.
 
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Chapter 3.1.2.1: Justice Grinds Exceeding Fine
"Why should I take you into my confidence?"

Iustina Cabello put away dishes while she spoke with us, because she had to. The work of a lord's chambermaid is apparently never done, and while she was less a soldier and more a lieutenant in the war against dust and grime swallowing up the mansion, that didn't mean she didn't see a lot of direct action. So to speak.

"Because we are here on behalf of the Contessa," Alesha said, gauntleted hand over her heart. "To help your Lord, and your house."

Alesha had a way of saying things softly that still filled a room.

"With her mark in wax on your writs of passage, and your contract," she said. "And the King's mark on every ounce of gold and silver in your purses, too."

I sighed. "I know we offended you. We're sorry about that. If it please you, I'd like to know how, so we can -" I can't throw up my hands, so my fingers curl in my lap, my ears scan the horizon, my tails start to corkscrew. "So we can not do that?"

Sekhmet was, uncharacteristically, quiet. Their eyes were scanning the manor kitchen where our party had gathered to awkwardly sit, the crystal and ceramic and silver stored here, the hanging hams and pans and garlic. Their ears, too. Though they hid it well, I could see my roommate's tells; they were mortified, moreso than the rest of us.

Iustina had been examining us all, as she buffed a serving platter glazed in yellow and floral patterns. Her ears twitched.

"You do not know," she said - to Sekhmet - amazed. "You really did not know how your words could harm."

"I'm starting to put together a guess," Sekhmet says, not meeting her eyes. "I hope I'm not usually that stupid."

And that's how I realized how she took it. "You thought we were implying you were responsible," I said.

"I owe my lord much," she says, stiffening, "much he would forgive this year and more I can never hope to repay, save with my faith and honor."

"Much he would forgive... Then it's a jubilee year," Siobhan says. "When such talk can cause the most harm. I have to wonder if our griefers did it on purpose."

"Gods, the last thing I wanted was to threaten your job," Sekh said, grimacing. "I just thought you were, you know, good at it. Handling problems for the manor before the boss even knew something was wrong."

"My job?" she says, incredulous, imperious. "My boss? Is that what you think of my duty?"

I take a deep breath, before deploying my best raised eyebrows.

"Us fickle Adventurers, right?" I say, deadpan. "Always chasing the next dragon hoard. It's not like a bunch of disinherited bastard nobles who ran away from home to join a mercenary company know anything about loyalty or honor, right? It's not like finding patrons we trust and respect is a survival skill or anything."

Iustina reacted as if she had been splashed in the face with ice water.

"I'll gladly admit that we're fuckups that know less about the culture here than we like, but you've been making a lot of assumptions about what motivates us," I said. "We're sorry we chose our words poorly. Kindly stop imagining we did it on purpose, or that we're here to take the money and run."

Iustina, after a moment, nods. "Then I pray your forgiveness," she says, "for my being uncharitable."

Sekhmet barks out one brass laugh. "Gods, save us from putting our foot in it like that again. We're cool?"

Ace exhales. "Uh, she means, um,"

"As wellwater," Iustina says, the beginning of humor in her voice.



Has it actually been a full calendar month between updates, Aurora take the wheel. In my defense, I had to work out half a novel worth of mystery in advance.

More coming tomorrow if I can possibly help it. This
scene isn't even over yet.
 
What should we ask Iustina?
[] Write-in.

Every member of the party is here, I just couldn't figure out what Hikaru would say. I will incorporate as many of these into the next update as possible, and not all of these out of Deedee's mouth. Voting opens now, and closes this time tomorrow (at 1 Pacific).
 
Vinyedo is, presumably, a tight-knit community where people know each other... for better or worse, as that conversation at the gates showed us.

We came here to investigate an attack on that community. The officially posted Dramatis Personae implies that the attack was, at least in part, a betrayal - one member choosing to turn against the rest. Griefers are still probably involved, sure, but there wouldn't be a point to "playing Knox" if that was the whole solution.

So for that mystery, we have a list of possible "who"s (which I assume DC/AC will learn before long), and we have a fair guess at the "how" (i.e. Erandan magic). But we know almost nothing about the relevant "why"s, and especially if Talia is as influenced by Umineko's approach to the mystery genre as she's telegraphed, the whydunnit is probably going to matter a lot here.

[X] A rundown of social relations in the town, in broad strokes. Blocs and families that tend to stick together, and ones that tend to be at odds. Individual rivalries and grudges that are notorious enough to not be secrets.

(This has the positive side effect of, hopefully, helping us avoid accidentally stepping into another social faux pas as our investigation continues. :grin:)
 
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[X] A rundown of social relations in the town, in broad strokes. Blocs and families that tend to stick together, and ones that tend to be at odds. Individual rivalries and grudges that are notorious enough to not be secrets.

If a better vote comes along and I don't check the thread in time to switch to it, I hope it wins anyway. But this seems important to know and inoffensive.
 
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