Covenant: the World of Abrahamic Mythology

This is amazing, I can't believe I didn't get into it before now. I love the characters, I love the plot, and I especially love the setting. My favorite part is a tie between;

-Actual Satanic Templars
-Magic powered early industrial revolution
-Reverse Christopher Columbus
-Jew-Jitsu in alt-China
-Magic-powered Da Vinci tanks
-The Plague Council
-Everything about this

Looking forward to more.:)
 
What were the Ecumenical Councils such as the Council of Nicea like? Were there angels present to act as expert witnesses? Did the Arians (not to be confused with Aryans) possess some sort of physical evidence for Christ's finity and subordination to God the Father? Did G-O-D weigh in at all?
 
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What were the Ecumenical Councils such as the Council of Nicea like? Were there angels present to act as expert witnesses? Did the Arians (not to be confused with Aryans) possess some sort of physical evidence for Christ's finity and subordination to God the Father? Did G-O-D weigh in at all?

The Council of Nicea was probably really haphazard in this world, if only because of the fact that the Arians and Gnostics never went away. Any angels consulted during the Ecumenical Councils would have given characteristic answers - see this post.

YHWH has absolutely never weighed in on doctrinal disputes.
 
the Guide
The Guide
The Succubus Quarter is a riot of sensations. Not all of them are pleasant - the streets are dirty, and many of the houses are in tatters, but there are banners and pennants hanging from every ledge, strung across the streets from roof to roof, and there are tents, pavilions and striped awnings over merchant's stands, and this helps somewhat. Occasionally one may find some cambions attempting to sweep up a stretch of road, or board up a broken window, but for the most part the Quarter is a scene of urban squalor with a bright coat of paint.

Moishe steps around piles of undefinable refuse and ducks under banners as he weaves through a street that has been given wholly over to the markets. There is hardly even a definition between outdoors markets and houses, as a path through the Quarter can weave its way inside buildings and through them completely, business and pleasure mixing and meeting and spilling out into streets and back again. In the Succubus Quarter, all boundaries are obscured.

The smells of cooking food from a hundred different cultures wafts through the air. Some dishes are merely fried over open fires in their own grease, others are smoked or slow-roasted or stewed in massive cauldrons where spices and vegetables are thrown liberally. The street food in the Succubus Quarter is the best in the city. One will also find restaurants, catering to any palette and offering bizarre fusions of cuisine, from Moorish couscous to Serican stir-fry.

Moishe's guide continues walking, smiling back over her shoulder occasionally. The sensations are overwhelming, and he hurries to catch up with the succubus artist, ignoring the cooks hawking their dishes. He's fairly sure most of it isn't kosher anyway, although the latkes he sees being cooked on a ripping hot skillet smell incredible - then again, the same chef is also cooking a cat on a shawarma spit (the sign at their stand claims that it is a delicacy in Indica). The artist herself doesn't stand out from the crowd as she did on Penitent Street - the paint-stained smock and the wild hair simply become part of the riot of colors, though Moishe can't help but ignore the long whiplike tail trailing from her hips as it flicks back and forth, following her like a serpent as she weaves through the crowds, completely at home.

There is music here, too - ecstatic performances of original compositions, ancient hymns, recitations of epic poetry, and wild, freely improvised sessions between musicians come together for the sole purpose of making harmonic noise. The styles and instruments are just as disjointed as anything else about the Succubus Quarter, and some are impossible to place. They fade in and out as one walks through the street, and all together they blend together with the clamor of the street, becoming the cacophonous background noise of the Succubus Quarter.

Each and every succubus lives their own life first, each striving to be achieve the superlative mastery of whatever they desire. The race is defined by their monomaniacal pursuit of talent and skill - their lust, as their poets call it. Some succubi lust for knowledge, others for art and music, others for food, and of course some lust for more typical pleasures of the flesh.

And, so Moishe has been told, there is at least one who lusts for travel.

"You're very, very lucky," the succubus painter says as she skips up a set of stairs and into a house that seems to be a library hosting a dinner party, "I'm fairly sure she's in town, but you know, she's in and out so often..."

He nods and jerks to avoid bumping into a Marid woman holding a wine glass. There are of course more than just succubi here: there are Djinn, especially Marids with their music and art influenced by the many cultures they have interacted with; there is the occasional Nephilim; there are a few ghouls cracking morbid jokes and cackling over some garish and provocative art piece; cambions, those half-succubi, though hard to tell from humans, are common in the Quarter; and of course there are humans of every race, creed, and nationality, here for research, or artistic appreciation, a good deal, for love, or simply looking for food, a fun party, or an evening with a responsible and discreet partner.

Looking for partners in crime as well, because in the Succubus Quarter the arm of the city guard cannot reach, and the succubi do not have the inclination to police their own streets, so cutpurses, pickpockets, conmen, and fugitives are thick on the ground, while deals in drugs, stolen goods, black magic components, and more obscure contraband are done in the open, while behind closed doors conspirators, cults, and spies gather. Robberies and muggings occur constantly, and fights nearly as often.

Succubi, though, are naturally the most populous inhabitants of the Quarter. They are everywhere - walking or flying, in and out of doors or windows or even taking off and landing in crowded streets and squares, on rooftops, on balconies. They chatter in a hundred tongues, eagerly and animatedly, gesturing with hands and tails and wings, goods and coins traded between deft hands, gathering in groups that split apart just as quickly based on some obscure social calculus that only a race of ardent individualists can form when forced to do business

Their appearances are as varied as anything else they do, with skin colors ranging from the human to the unnaturally vibrant, red and greed and blue and gold, horns in any number of shapes. Some are more human, some seem almost like Djinn, others are unmistakably succubi. Hairstyles, clothing, and even makeup each serve to distinguish individuals, so that no two succubi are alike in form or presentation - and given the propensity for succubi to change their appearance even day to day on a whim, a given group of succubi can be wildly impermanent in appearance. Succubi also possess every range of body type, and identities seem just as obscure as anything else, ranging from male to female to individuals who make no distinction, or who blend features of both genders completely. As shapeshifters, they can change from one to the other at will, and their partners are no less diverse.

As mentioned, in the Succubus Quarter all boundaries are obscured.

To Moishe's surprise, their trail leads them upstairs and onto a balcony, apparently hosting a different gathering entirely. Down below, a parade of Marids wind their way through the neighborhood, accompanied by flutes, bells, and cymbals. Moishe is tempted to ask if there is some sort of festival being held, but in Jerusalem there very well might be.

Finally, they arrive at their destination. The house itself appears to be a gathering for vagrants, itinerants, and the homeless, who wander in and out as they wish. The succubus asks after a "Deborah", and they are led through a kitchen occupied by two succubi. Squeezing past them, Moishe is left at the door.

"She's all yours, alchemist."

The artist winks at him before slipping off into another part of the house. Moishe swallows and grips his walking stick in both hands before entering the room.

Within, he finds an incubus half-asleep on a couch. He pauses, not sure if he's been led to the wrong room, but his artist guide seems to have disappeared, so he clears his throat and speaks tremulously.

"Um...Deborah?"

The incubus' eyes snap open, and he lazily turns his head to look at Moishe.

"Yeah?"

"Sorry, I was just expecting..."

He trails off. The incubus looks down and sighs. With olive-colored skin and black hair, he looks like he could be Greek or Italian, save for the wings, tail, and the small black horns on his forehead.

"I forgot you people get hung up about that. Yeah, I'm Deborah. You can call me by a different name, if it helps."

"...Barak?"

The incubus stares at him, evidently not getting the reference.

"How about 'Deb'," he says dryly.

"Hello, Deb. I am Moishe ben David, alchemist's apprentice," he says, regaining his stride. He elects not to mention his recent initiation into an ancient order of wizard-rabbis.

"Right. Moishe, what can I help you with?"

Moishe smiles and pulls up a nearby stool.

"I'll make it quick. I'm with the crew of a ship, and we're charting a course for Indica. I understand you're...rather interested in travel, and our mutual acquaintance says you've been there before."

Deb nods.

"Kingdom of Prester John. Last trip was 1486. What's the catch?"

Moishe spreads his hands.

"No catch! Well...it's the ship."

"Mmmh, leaky tub, is it?"

Moishe shakes his head.

"Oh no, it's quite new...in fact, it's still being built."

Deb's eyes widen and a small smile crosses his face. Moishe may not be intimately familiar with succubi, but he has heard that succubi are innately curious, especially when they sense something that can feed their interests.

"Is that so? What kind of fancy ship could an alchemist be trying to invent?"

"One that can fly," Moishe says simply, then sits back to let that sink in. Deb chews his lip.

"You're pulling my leg."

"Not at all. I can prove it, if you come to my benefactor's mansion."

Deb shakes his head.

"I don't believe this," he says, but Moishe senses that it's not that Deb disbelieves his story, but rather that he is willing to go along with it.

"Alright," Moishe says, "We're looking for a guide, not just someone who knows the route, but someone who's familiar with the whole territory between Jerusalem and Indica, all the landforms and cities, the dangers, the people..."

"Stop, stop, I'm already sold!" Deb says, springing to his feet, "Do I know it? Like the back of my own hand, I do! I'll be your guide, and you don't even have to pay me if I can see all that from a flying ship!"

Moishe laughs and takes the incubus' hand.

"Then welcome to the crew of the Aliyah!"
 
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The "Going Up", a fitting name for an airship.

I like what you've done with the succubi- lust after all doesn't necessarily mean sex.

One question; Sub-Saharan Africa already has airships ITTL, right? So Sarah's not trying to make something totally new, so much as she is trying to reinvent something she already knows is possible?
 
I love the idea of a non-binary succubus, and Deb seems like a really cool character.

Also, I've really been enjoying the process of getting the gang together, so to speak.
 
One question; Sub-Saharan Africa already has airships ITTL, right? So Sarah's not trying to make something totally new, so much as she is trying to reinvent something she already knows is possible?

The African's Flying Wheels are more like "alchemical flying saucers". Nobody can even start to figure out how to get to them technologically, and steam power has probably never crossed anyone's minds (though they probably have their own steam engines). So it's not quite reinventing the Flying Wheel.
 
the Boss of Little Indica
The Boss of Little Indica
Menander falls into a roll and comes up to his knees, catching the juggling balls and holding them out in his hands. His ears, each one hanging down to his knees, flap about his face like stage curtains.

The Panotii cathces his breath after his tumbling act has concluded, smiling at the cheering crowd. He makes sure to tip a friendly nod towards the children in the front row. As his audience filters out, his admissions clerk gives him a thumbs up. Menander lets out a relieved breath, then picks himself up and steps backstage, dropping his juggling balls in a bucket on his way inside.

From there, the star of Little Indica's most popular sideshow grabs a wet cloth and wipes the makeup from his face. He throws it over his shoulder and walks through the halls of the building that his little stage fronts onto. To most, this is just another nondescript building, but to a select few this is known as the building from which Little Indica, and indeed a healthy portion of Jerusalem's underground economy, is guided.

Menander whistles, pushing his huge, floppy ears back over his shoulders. Panotii are known for their ears, and outside their homeland they are often sought out as jesters and tumblers. In their homeland of Indica, their reputation is less unassuming.

Menander enters a smoky room dominated by a long wooden table. Behind the chair at the head of the table (empty) is a gilded icon of Saint Thomas, patron of all Indica. Several other members of Jerusalem's Indican immigrant races are waiting around the table, however. A Cynocephalid leans his canine head in the palms of his hands, while across from him a Blemmyae sits heavily in his armchair like a corpulent toad. He puts the mouthpiece of a hookah to his lips and takes a pull, then lets out a cloud of the aromatic smoke that already hovers around the ceiling of the chamber. The Blemmyae of Jersualem are descended from prisoners of war carted back to the city by Al-Iskandar the Great, so long ago, and from their new home in the city the neighborhood of Little Indica had sprung up, attracting immigrants from the Kingdom of Prester John over the next thousand years.

Menander coughs politely and sits next to the dog-headed man. Others are joining the meeting - a few more Panotii, a human, and finally the boss himself. Scylax is a Panotii, an aged member of his race, with wrinkled ears that hung down to his knees and a chest covered in curly white hair showing through an open blouse. At his right hand sits an elderly man in a wheeled chair, not a human but a Davalpa, a race with long serpentine tendrils in place of legs. Davalpas are themselves known for keeping these appendages tucked under their bodies, at which point they appear to be mere legless humans. This particular specimen was Antiochus, who it is said has his ears open to every beggar in Jeruslaem, though this is doubtless an exaggeration.

"So, what's this about a ship?" Scylax asks, waving his hand in front of his face. Save for the massive ears, he looks like any other elderly man - smooth, wrinkled skin, white curly hair, but his eyes are keep and sharp, and dark. Combined with those ears, they call to mind the wise face of an elephant.

Everyone around the table looks carefully at their boss. Scylax is a man with his fingers in many pies, and boats are just one aspect of his many ventures. Menander is no stranger to rival ships sunk, troublesome captains fallen overboard, or cargoes gone missing before they can reach the customs officers only to turn up in the black markets.

"Er, is this the Mediterranean or the Red Sea?" asks the Blemmyae across the table slowly, "Or the Persian Gulf?"

"Not the sea trade," comes the whine of Antiochus, "But a ship of the air!"

"Ah, like the Africans have," the Blemmyae says, "What about it?"

Antiochus huffs.

"It's a boat, suspended by a bag of hot air, that can fly through the skies like a ship sails through water! Surely you have heard of it? Fahrettin Bey's latest pet project?"

The Blemmyae gives him a blank stare, peering through the haze of his own smoke.

The Cynocephalid makes a comment to Menander regarding the Blemmyae's wits using sign language, and he is forced to bite his knuckle furtively so as to not laugh.

"Fahrettin Bey thinks this ship will open up trade with Prester John like never before," says Scylax, ignoring the back and forth.

"He wishes to go over our heads, eh?" Menander asks. Scylax gives him a curious smile.

"Quite. Now, I don't pretend to understand the alchemy - I have hired men for that. But this alchemist of his, she has a good reputation."

Antiochus nods.

"My friends in the gutters know very well. Oh, they speak highly of her on Penitent Street!"

"So there's a chance this could work. In which case, a lot of money is about to start flowing into some very different pockets."

The dog-headed man signs something again and gives a barking laugh. Scylax bares his teeth, brown and crooked like a row of tiny bricks. Menander thinks that the expression on his bosses' face could be something like a smile, perhaps in different lighting.

"An idea like this, you can't hope for it to go away. No putting the djinn back into the bottle, pardon the expression. No, something like this you want to catch a ride on and see how far it can take you..."

Menander tips his boss a wink and a nod.

"Ah, I hear you, boss, we want some of that money in our pockets. Maybe get a few ships of our own one day, yeah?"

"You're a cunning one, Menander," grumbles the Blemmyae, evidently deciding to contribute to the conversation again. Menander's smile turns sickly-sweet.

"Learned from the best."

"Which is why you're perfect for the job," adds Scylax.

Menander's face doesn't change, except perhaps that his smile grows a little tighter and his ears twitch imperceptibly.

"Well. I'm honored boss, but-"

"But nothing. Fahrettin Bey is a successful merchant and you don't get there by making a few contacts on our side of town. He'll be looking for a trade contact in Indica, and we have those. So you'll have those. And he'll hire you."

There were no commands now, only statements of fact. And when Scylax said something was true, it was true for good and all, in Menander's experience. On the rare occasions when he was wrong, then someone else had done something wrong.

"Yes, boss. Very cunning, boss," Menander said through his teeth, "We'll go along to Indica and find out what we can. See if we can't sneak some plans or at least learn how it works. And here I am wishing I had paid more attention to alchemy."

"You'll learn soon enough. Everyone is dismissed. Menander, attend me."

The Blemmyae stands up heavily and slings his hookah over his back, striding out of the room. The dog-headed man signs something halfway apologetic at Menander before following the others as they filter out. Antiochus is last to go, wheeling his chair along with quick movements from his appendages.

Menander walks to Scylax's side. The boss of Little Indica is kneeling before the icon of Saint Thomas, lighting a candle before folding his hands in prayer.

"Menander?"

"Yes uncle?"

"You'll make me proud."

Another statement of fact. Menander folds his hands and bows his head, his ears falling around his face like curtains.

"Yes, uncle."​
 
It's back! The non-human species remain one of the coolest parts of this world. And now we get organized crime!
 
the Captain
The Captain
When Moishe returns to Fahrettin Bey's manor with Deb in tow, he finds Shabbar and Lisa waiting for him with what Moishe assumes to be their new bodyguard. A tall European man with dark hair and an unkempt beard sits at one end of a long table in an open room, while Lisa sits towards the middle of the long table and Shabbar leans against a column behind her. The man is wearing armor and a long cloak which may have once been white but has no been thoroughly stained and dirtied by travel and the elements. He is hunched over the table, scribbling away at a sheepskin scroll. Next to him sits a large travelling chest, a sword in its scabbard, and a shield whose blazon is covered by a cloth.

"Shabbar, good to see you are back. Where is Sarah?" Moishe says as he sits down in the middle of the table, across from Lisa. She smiles at him, waving hello. He rather awkwardly returns the gesture and looks up as Shabbar motions towards the door.

"She has gone to wash and change clothes. Our journey took us through...a less clean part of the city."

"And I'm Robert de Villiers, thank you ever so much for introducing us," the knight mumbles.

"We already met!" Lisa says cheerily, "I'm so excited to have a crew again!"

She smiles innocently as Moishe looks at her for a moment before turning back to Robert.

"I'm Moishe, Sarah's apprentice. What are you working on?"

Robert glares at the young apprentice. It is then that Moishe notices the bottle at Robert's elbow, when the knight reaches for it and takes a long pull.

"I'm scribing scrolls. Lots of spells take a while to cast and if we get shot at you don't want to wait while I sit down and do the steps for Protection from Bullets."

Moishe nods, already rather familiar with magic. He much prefers alchemy. So often with magic, it's hard to tell if a spell even works, and then it's almost impossible to quantify the results. Alchemy is so much more. Then again...

He glances at the staff, now lying in the middle of the table.

Robert looks over his shoulder at Deb, who has been hovering in the background, observing the exchange with a bemused smile.

"An incubus, too?" he mutters, looking from her to Lisa to Shabbar, "Saint Mary, this is a strange crew."

"You're a strange one, yourself. I didn't know there were any Knights of the Holy Sepulcher left," Deb replies with a wink. Robert scowls.

"You're a Templar?" Moishe asks, "How can you tell?"

"I'm not talking about this," Robert barks. Cowed, Moishe glances at the empty seat at the end of the table. The pile of scrolls and ledgers shows where Sarah has been working, but his teacher is still nowhere to be seen.

Deb flops down in a chair next to Moishe.

"My, you're an ill-tempered one. Can't say I'll be thrilled at spending the next two weeks in close quarters with you. Hello, my dear, what's your name?"

"I'm Lisa! It's so nice to meet you...?"

"Call me Deb for now. An Undine, eh?"

Moishe leans over and whispers in Deb's ear.

"She's, ah, intelligent. She'll be our pilot."

"Intelligent? How nice for her. I've met quite a few elementals like you in Indica, they're everywhere."

"Ooh, really?"

Lisa leans forward, fully invested. Robert seems almost annoyed at no longer having the incubus' attention directed at him. As Deb starts describing the tribes of Salamanders who live in the deserts of Indica, he slams the bottle down on the table, making Lisa jump.


"Listen, incubus, you should just keep your distance. I don't trust your kind."

"Nobody does, my good knight."

"Perhaps if you weren't always ensnaring men and women with your sensuous ways..."

Deb glances up and down at Robert almost cursorily.

"...no, I think I'll pass on that."

Shabbar grunts.

"I'll have no bickering from you two. Not while we're working for Miss Sarah."

Robert turns his attention to the Djinn.

"Oh, you fancy yourself my superior? Isn't that just like a Djinn."

Shabbar's mustache twitches in frustration. Moishe and Lisa glance at each other with rising distress. However, before the two men can further exchange barbs, the door opens and a new person arrives. This man is a Panotii, one of the fantastic races of far Indica, his long ears hanging almost down to his knees.

"Ah, hello, I'm Menander. Fahrettin Bey asked Sarah if I could join the crew as well as Shabbar."

The Djinn nods.

"Young Menander. Yes, we've met, he's done business with my master before. Have a seat, then."

Robert seems slightly put off by yet another non-human, but eventually realizes something.

"And you're a Christian, are you?"

"Indeed I am, sir. Looking forward to lighting a candle to Saint Thomas once we arrive at journey's end!"

"Very good! You and I can stick together, then."

Menander smiles nervously and sits down between Robert and Deb as the incubus leans in next to him.

"So you're from Indica then?"

"Er...no, not as such, I was born in Jerusalem...but I know men in Indica! You see, I've been sent along to speak with Fahrettin's trade contacts! Purely ancilliary to your mission, but I assure you I'll help in every way I can."

He tilts his head to the side, letting his ears flop around comically. This elicits a polite giggle from Lisa.

Silence reigns around the table. Robert goes back to his scrolls, while Lisa sits quietly, humming tunelessly. Moishe looks glumly at his staff, while Menander sits back and inspects his fingernails. Shabbar stands perfectly still as always, while Deb fidgets in his seat.

The pause is thankfully broken when Sarah bat Binyamin enters, dressed in fresh clothes. She pauses to look over her crew.

"Alright, eyes on me. You're my crew, and I'm your captain. Moishe is my apprentice, which means as far as the engine is concerned he's my second-in-command, but Shabbar is in charge of everything else when we're in the air. That includes supplies. Any opposition to that?"

Robert looks as if he wants to protest, but he shrugs and rolls up his scroll instead. Sarah nods.

"Good. Lisa, you're our pilot. Deb, you're the guide, you and I will go over the route before we launch. Menander, what actual skills do you have?"

"I'm good with a bow, miss."

"Then you and Robert are our guards. Anyone else?"

There's a chorus of assent, and Sarah smiles and sits down in her chair at the head of the table.

"Good. Now, I don't need to tell you all that what we're doing is massive. This is a historic voyage, and there's far more to be gained here than just riches. More than fame, even. I know that if we work together and have faith, we can see this to the end. We're going to change the world with this voyage. I'll give you all a moment to pray."

Everyone silently bows their heads in prayer, even Deb. The only exception is Lisa who holds a moment of respectful silence while the others sink into silent contemplation, each turning to God with their own concerns and burdens. They pray for protection, guidance, wisdom, success, strength, a steady hand.

One by one, they finish their prayers and look back to Sarah. She sighs and collects some of her papers.

"Now. Who's ready to fly?"
 
This needs to update more often!

I'm interested that Lisa doesn't seem to have a religion, this doesn't strike me as a world that's nurturing to agnostics.
 
This needs to update more often!

I'm interested that Lisa doesn't seem to have a religion, this doesn't strike me as a world that's nurturing to agnostics.

Covenant does have agnostics, of a sort - they mainly think that the true will of God is unknowable and that the various religions are all just attempts at interpreting it. They're also the closest this world has to atheists.

Elementals don't even have souls, so they when they gain intelligence they don't feel the need to hedge their bets towards a particular afterlife.
 
the Launch
the Launch
Seven people climb aboard the Aliyah as it prepares to sail for the Kingdom of Prester John.

There is a decent crowd watching. Fahrettin Bey and his household are there, along with several other merchant princes, Muslim, Christian, and Jew alike, eager to see if this gamble succeeds. Many of them have brought their retinues, and no small portion have hired alchemists who strain to take notes on the construction of the ship. Perhaps by the time the Aliyah returns, they will be in the process of testing several prototypes of their own between them.

The ship these alchemists are observing is ten feet long and made of reinforced wicker. Suspended above it is a now largely-inflated gasbag made of tightly-woven silk, strong and secure. The vessel hangs from the gasbag by strong fibers. The deck of the ship is the most solid part of the ship, wooden planking over a frame, but beneath it is the storage space where lightweight stores of unleavened bread and more mundane materials such as rope are tucked away.

At the rear of the ship is the engine, a compact mass of ironmongery, with brass attachments of uncertain purpose. Partially covered by a tarp, the engine has two chambers. The first and smaller of the two simply pumps hot air into the gasbag through a tube, also woven of silk. The second and larger chamber is connected to a water tank and is attached to a durable pulley system, which by a series of gears turns the propeller at the back of the ship.

For the most part the Aliyah will rely on this to power it as it flies across land and sea. The long rudder will allow the crew to steer it.

Also in the crowd are several inhabitants of Penitent Street including the rabbi, along with a decent number of connections scattered across the city who have made the trip out to Fahrettin Bey's estate to watch the launch. Also tagging along are several curious passers-by, such as any notable event in Jerusalem is sure to attract.

Sarah is the first into the ship. It sways slightly, but she steadies herself by placing her hand on a rope and looks along the length of the ship, smiling with pride. She offers a hand up to Lisa, who takes her place by the engine and awaits her orders. Moishe climbs aboard alongside his teacher, giving a smile and a wave to Rabbi Eleazar. He holds his staff close to him and steps towards the railing cautiously.

The others follow. Robert de Villiers stands at the railing amidships, scowling in vague disapproval of the spectacle. Jabbar attends to the hawser, ready to cast off as soon as the signal is given. Already the gasbag is near-completely full, and the ship is straining at her mooring rope like an eager horse. Menander does not recognize anyone he knows among the crowd but sees several beggars standing nearby, watching with interest, and knows word will be passed back to Antiochus, his uncle's spymaster.

"Deborah?" Moishe asks as the succubus steps aboard. Now appearing to be a typical female of her race, she gives the apprentice alchemist a wink and sweeps past Robert to position herself dramatically at the front of the ship, her batlike wings spread to catch the breeze.

"Damn succubi, why can't they act naturally?" Robert mutters as he checks his gear compulsively.

"Seems like she changes pretty naturally, if that's what you mean," Moishe replies off-handedly. His own mind was forced to pause as he registered the succubus' change in appearance, but he changes tack quick enough.

"Enough talk, everyone do your final checks!" Sarah barks as she adjusts some valves. There is a hissing, gurgling noise deep within the engine, and Lisa smiles and begins to work. Shabbar unties the hawser and holds it firmly in his hand - the ship sways but remains where it is, as if moored to a rock. Sarah gives a glance at Fahrettin Bey, who is merely watching the proceedings with eyes alight with wonder and curiosity.

Somewhere in the background an impromptu band strikes up a jaunty tune.

"Everything ready, captain," Moishe says after checking a scroll and tucking it in his bag. A chorus of agreement answers him, and Sarah takes a deep breath and throws a lever.

"Cast off, Shabbar!"

The Djinn lets the rope drop, and the Aliyah lifts gently into the air like a cloud of smoke. The crowd gasps, in total awe at an object of such size defying gravity - and one built essentially in the backyard of a home in Jerusalem, by a native at that. The ship lifts higher and higher, above the cheers and farewells of the crowd, until the spires and minarets pass below them. For a moment the ship floats on the breeze, and the crew are able to look down and see Jerusalem spread out below them like a tapestry in perfect detail. They can count the streets and see people walking around, mere specks now, and see each of Jerusalem's seven hills from above. Those with the keenest eyes, like Menander, can see pedestrians stop and point, and wonder at the flying ship that now floats gently over their city.

Then Lisa and Sarah are working, and the engine is grumbling as it works to turn cog and pulley. The propeller turns, and the ship jerks and begins moving off towards the east. The city rolls away beneath them like a map being furled up. Hill and tower pass by, becoming smaller, until eventually the ship reaches an equilibrium and rises no more, but continues onward, along an unseen trail through the sky.

The crew checks instruments or adjusts ropes or simply watch as the countryside beyond Jerusalem, the hills and crags and little farming villages and herds of sheep and goats on the distant slopes, passes by, seen from a vantage point that, they think privately, was once only appreciated by God and his angels.​
 
Two updates in as many days- you spoil us.:)

One question I've forgotten if it was asked already; Are any of the minor Abrahamic Religions extant in this world? The Druze, the Bahai, the Yazidis, or the Samaritans for instance? Are the Kararites around?
 
Two updates in as many days- you spoil us.:)

One question I've forgotten if it was asked already; Are any of the minor Abrahamic Religions extant in this world? The Druze, the Bahai, the Yazidis, or the Samaritans for instance? Are the Kararites around?

Definitely! Bahai hasn't arisen yet, but there are Druze, Yazidis, and Samaritans for sure. And Kararites, along with plenty of other sects and syncretic faiths and so on. They're also more numerous and somewhat more influential.
 
Definitely! Bahai hasn't arisen yet, but there are Druze, Yazidis, and Samaritans for sure. And Kararites, along with plenty of other sects and syncretic faiths and so on. They're also more numerous and somewhat more influential.

Cool.:)

What about non-Abrahamic religions? We know they must have existed at some point; there need to have been Roman idolaters to kill Jesus, and wicked Dagon-worshiping Philistines for Saul and David to fight. Any still around? It looks like you have some Arabian Nights influences here, I remember there was a "not-Zoroastrianism" in Arabian Nights that actually worshiped fire (instead of using it as a symbol of their faith like real Zoroastrians) and "would swear by the sun and moon". Any sign of them ITTL? Any Hindus (spelled presumably, "Hindoos") left in Prester John's Indica?
 
Cool.:)

What about non-Abrahamic religions? We know they must have existed at some point; there need to have been Roman idolaters to kill Jesus, and wicked Dagon-worshiping Philistines for Saul and David to fight. Any still around? It looks like you have some Arabian Nights influences here, I remember there was a "not-Zoroastrianism" in Arabian Nights that actually worshiped fire (instead of using it as a symbol of their faith like real Zoroastrians) and "would swear by the sun and moon". Any sign of them ITTL? Any Hindus (spelled presumably, "Hindoos") left in Prester John's Indica?

The various Caananite deities (Moloch, Baal, et al) were revealed to be archdevils and are still worshiped, in a way, by diabolists. The Zoroastrians and various pagans were on slightly better footing - they didn't have any diabolic backing, but they couldn't produce any actual divine results like the Abrahamics could.

They're pretty much all gone nowadays.

Though Hindus do remind me of something from the journals of Vasco de Gama, describing his embassy's first visit to a Hindu temple.

They took us to a large church and this is what we saw: the body of the church is as large as a monastery, all built of hewn stone and covered with tile. At the main entrance rises a pillar as high as a mast, on the top of which was perched a bird, apparently a cock. In addition to this there was another pillar as high as a man, and very stout. In the center of the body of the church rose a chapel, all built of hewn stone, with a bronze door sufficiently wide for a man to pass, and stone steps leading up to it. Within this sanctuary stood a small image which they said represented Our Lady. Along the walls, by the main entrance, hung seven small bells. In this church the captain-major said his prayers, and we with him. We did not go within the chapel, for it is the custom that only certain servants of the church, called quafees, should enter. The quafees wore some threads passing over the left shoulder and under the right arm, in the same manner as our deacons wear the stole. They threw holy water over us, and gave us some white earth, which the Christians of this country are in the habit of putting on their foreheads, breast, around the neck, and on the forearms. They threw holy water upon the captain-major and gave him some earth, which he gave in change to someone, giving them to understand that he would put it on later. Many other saints were painted on the walls of the church, wearing crowns. They were painted variously, with teeth protruding an inch from the mouth, and four or five arms. Below the church there was a large masonry tank, similar to many others which we had seen along the road.

Odds saints in the Kingdom of Prester John, wouldn't you say? ;)
 
Grandmother Lilith
Grandmother Lilith
The Holy Land comes and goes, but the Aliyah is travelling far too fast for the crew to stop and make notice of any of the landmarks - the famous buildings, each with their own holy sites (or multiple holy sites), the desert monasteries, the communities of religious dedicants or simply just shepherds and farmers, the strings of merchant caravans, a few Djinn or Succubi watching the ship pass with curiosity. At one point they pass over a tribe of Nephilim, spread out across a broad plain, tending to massive herds of sheep, goats, and camels, the signs of a relatively wealthy tribe.

All of this land was theoretically administered by the Mamelukes of Egypt, but Jerusalem has such a political importance that the city itself and a decent hinterland surrounding it are effectively independent, as it has been multiple times in the past.

As the Aliyah is swept south and west by the wind and its own engine, Sarah decides to tack further south and circle around the Dead Sea. While the Aliyah can easily make the crossing, Sarah wants to take no chances this early in the trip. She also expects to use the opportunity to run some drills on routine maintenance.

And so, Moishe helps Sarah banish the old fire elementals and summon new ones and Lisa refills the water tank, while Deborah stands on a weathered pillar of stone and scans the badlands on the south shore of the Dead Sea. After a while she looks back over her shoulder.

"Captain, permission to have a look around?"

Sarah wipes down her forehead and neck.

"This is going to be quick, right?"

Moishe looks up from the engine, having secured the seal on the second elemental's chamber.

"Teacher, may I go with her?"

Sarah looks back at Lisa, still filling the tank, water rushing through a hose laid out to the beach. A summoned earth elemental helps separate salt from the water, but Sarah intends to banish it once its purpose is done.

"Shabbar! Go with them!" Sarah calls. Jabbar looks up from his supplies and nods. Deborah hops down from her perch and starts hiking uphill, followed by Moishe, while Jabbar steadily brings up the rear. They pass Menander and Robert de Villiers, standing on watch with weapons ready. Menander tugs one of his ears at the exploration party, while Robert keeps his eyes fixed professionally on the horizon.

Deborah seems to poke her head over every cliff and glance up every wash and canyon.

"Are we...looking for something out here?" Moishe asks after a while.

"Oh, you never know what you might find out here..." she says, half-distracted. Moishe grunts and clambers uncertainly up a scree slope, using his staff to give himself leverage. A chunk of slate gives way under his foot, and he totters backwards for a moment before Shabbar grasps his elbow to steady him.

"You definitely seem like you have something in mind!" Moishe calls after Deborah, who has simply flown up the slope and is waiting for her companions at the top.

"Well, she lives out here, doesn't she? Isaiah said so."

"Isaiah?"

Moishe's eyes cross as he searches his memory, trying to recall something. Who used to live in this region anyways? Lots of people over the years....

"She rests and finds rest..." Deborah murmurs in a sing-song voice. Moishe gasps as the verse jumps into his mind, but before he can say anything, the trio turns a bend and sees her.

Perched on a rock, knees drawn up to her chest, is a women with black skin and braided black hair, the sides of her hair shaved. Two wings like those of an owl are wrapped around her, concealing her body, but two taloned feet can be seen gripping the stone. She is staring at a craggy vista, bleak stones piled up on top of each other forming the horizon beneath a blue sky streaked with white clouds.

Lilith, the first succubus, turns and gives them a smile.

"Hello there, granddaughter. And to you, travelers."

Deborah gasps and steps forward excitedly.

"Grandmother! Is...is now a good time?"

She pauses mid-step, a sudden look of uncertainty crossing her face, as if she is afraid of being sent away.

Lilith smiles reassuringly.

"It's fine, granddaughter, I was just in the middle of my meditations. Please, come closer."

Shabbar remains motionless, and even Moishe can only take a few steps closer before halting, growing silent and looking from Shabbar to Deborah in confusion. He feels as if he is intruding on something almost sacred.

Deborah falls to the ground and crosses her legs. She rests her hands on her knees and looks up at Lilith eagerly.

"I'm one of Na'amah's line, grandmother! Six generations!"

"Is that so?" the ancient succubus replies. The smiles playing faintly around her lips is almost sad. Deborah nods eagerly.

"Mmhmm! I've been travelling all over the world! Oh, grandmother, I've seen so many sights! Cities and people and creatures, and...would you like to hear all about it?"

Lilith reaches out and ruffles Deborah's hair.

"That all sounds lovely, I would love to hear about it, darling."

"We should go," Moishe whispers to Shabbar. The Djinn grunts and the two turn and retreat behind a rocky outcrop. Moishe grips his staff and thinks about what he's just seen - Lilith, Adam's first wife, cursed with eternal life for her disobedience to God. Moishe never really considered that she was still around, after all one never really heard tales of her, but the succubi certainly had kept in touch - they were her descendants after all. That was another strange thing to consider - Deborah was far, far close to Lilith than Moishe was to Adam, and it wasn't as if Moishe could drop in on Adam in order to have afternoon tea with him, like he would the rabbi or his own grandfather.

Succubi were a strange race, all things considered.

Eventually, after perhaps half an hour, Deborah joins them. Her hair is now grey and her skin is pale, almost washed-out. She no longer seems feminine either, rather her appearance is nondescript, almost unrecognizable as either male or female.

"Are you okay?" Moishe asks, "How did it go?"

"Hmm? Yeah, I'm fine. Let's get back to the ship."

A few hours later the Aliyah is making its way east again. Moishe and Deborah sit against the railing, Deborah resting her head on her arm, trailing a hand over the side. Robert de Villiers leans against the railing nearby, sharpening his sword.

"So...that was Lilith?" Moishe asks by way of conversation. The sun is getting low in the sky.

"Yeah. She doesn't really go in for appearances like...like we do," Deborah says. She's regained a bit of her own color.

"Have you met her before?"

"...no. That was the first time."

The tone in her voice suggests it may be the last time. Moishe moves further down the rail, towards de Villiers, to give Deborah a little space. The succubus starts singing under her breath, a mournful tune whose words Moishe can't make out.

"It's in pseduo-Adamaic," Robert says finally, "More closely linked of all languages to that spoken before the Tower of Babel. It didn't effect succubi, but there's been some drift."

"Is she...okay?" Moishe asks Robert. For once, Robert puts down his sword and seems to take an interest in the succubus. He clears his throat.

"In the beginning," he says quietly, "God created Lilith to be Adam's wife. She didn't want to submit to him, or to God, so He cursed her."

"With eternal life, right."

"More than that. Every day, a hundred of her children would die. As it happened, she thought to work around that. She only had three direct daughters - Na'amah, Agrat, and Eisheth."

"The Brides of Samael," Moishe whispers hoarsely. One does not speak the name of the Angel of Death lightly.

"That's right. Samael was sent to ensure the curse was fulfilled. Lilith's three daughters joined with him, not knowing of the curse, and so the race of succubi was born.

Every day, a hundred succubi die. Nobody knows which ones. Samael shadows their steps every moment of their lives."

"Is that why they're...you know, like that? Do they try and get the most out of life because it could end at any moment?"

He looks at Deborah, and shudders to think that they may wake up any day on this journey and their companion will be dead. To be human was to be mortal...but at least a man was assured that if he avoided disease, famine, and war, death would only come from him at the end of his allotted lifespan. Succubi don't even have that.

Robert blinks, and seems to recall where he is.

"Who knows? Succubi are a vexatious people."

Moishe watches Deborah as she sings, perhaps reciting a mournful song for her sisters...or for Lilith, who has probably met thousands of her children and grandchildren, knowing any of them could be dead the next day. No wonder she stayed isolated in the desert, staying among her children would seem a torture after enough time. And yet her children sought her out, eager to meet with their Grandmother and tell her about their lives and experiences.

"There shall Lilith repose, and find for herself a place to rest..."
 
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An interesting depiction of Lilith for sure, kindly grandmother (?) is not what I was expecting.
 
I assume the "killing the children of Adam" phase is over.

Yeah most depictions of Lilith are either baby eating harpy, seducing enchantress, or like superwoman for 2nd Wave Feminism. Nice to see something that avoids those tropes.

I was inspired upon discovering that in ancient times Lilith's name was actually used on amulets that were thought to be a ward against infant mortality. The story goes that the prophet Elijah (or in one version the Archangel Michael) comes across Lilith and either compels or tricks her into giving up her secret names, so that Jews can write them on amulets and compel her to leave their children alone.

Her full secret name, by the way, is "Lilith Abitu Abizu Hakash Avers Hikpodu Ayalu Matrata".

In Covenant, Lilith used to be a pretty mean character and an actual villain until Elijah met her, but the exact circumstances of her change of heart are between her and the prophet.
 
I was inspired upon discovering that in ancient times Lilith's name was actually used on amulets that were thought to be a ward against infant mortality. The story goes that the prophet Elijah (or in one version the Archangel Michael) comes across Lilith and either compels or tricks her into giving up her secret names, so that Jews can write them on amulets and compel her to leave their children alone.

Her full secret name, by the way, is "Lilith Abitu Abizu Hakash Avers Hikpodu Ayalu Matrata".

In Covenant, Lilith used to be a pretty mean character and an actual villain until Elijah met her, but the exact circumstances of her change of heart are between her and the prophet.
Yeah the earliest versions of Lilith are as a demon/spirit that eats children (taken from Mesopotamian myth), and there's like tablets and such from older Judaism with various names of Lilith inscribed on them as wards against her. The story developed more in the middle ages as she was used in the midrash to explain why God created Man and Woman and then created Eve later. And of course various texts later on gave Lilith that more feminist tinge, and the association with Succubi comes from the Kabbalah IIRC
 
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What happened to Deb? She didn't seem very happy when she came back. Did Lilith hurt her in some way? Perhaps inadvertently since she seemed fairly friendly?

Also; "Is... is now a good time?" I laughed at how casual that was.:rofl:
 
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