I think we can just wait.

Yeah, no further questions, your honor. We should follow up with the green sorceress later though.
(Also @Zam)
What do you think, leave it be or:

Yay know, we might be able to deal another strike to the aspiti by getting bureaucrats whose main motivation for staying is "it takes too long to get out of their reach and If they get me they will kill me" out of there.

Maybe goodbye him by mentioning a neutral place having good weather and A Royal Highnesses travel planning cutting down tremendously on paperwork If the guest wishes so.
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I'd like him to trip and find a horse apple with his face, too.
But if we can save lives by bribing him with a safe exit...
And the stuff not getting signed due their ambassador taking a permanent vacation can't be bad for us.
The why he would agree would probably be related to the negative health Impact of being the scapegoat when the empire starts failing.
Just need to be careful to not be too aggressive when making our point (not honouring the "please stop talking about that" would most likely lead to him complaining to the servants about us), just a nod to it.
 
I think it might be a little too early to make any promises about bribing people with safe exits, at least off just one conversation with an ambassador. But figuring out a way to start undermining the empire's power by offering safe exits to people? Well, "The greatest victory is that which requires no battle," as they say.
 
Maybe goodbye him by mentioning a neutral place having good weather and A Royal Highnesses travel planning cutting down tremendously on paperwork If the guest wishes so.
Hmm. Is there anyone else who likes this idea? Or should I just have Elys say goodbye?
But figuring out a way to start undermining the empire's power by offering safe exits to people? Well, "The greatest victory is that which requires no battle," as they say.
Yeah, cart before the horse here. I am of two minds on this:
1. It's devious and tricksy and nonviolent, so it's really cool
2. I am wary of allowing ringleaders and the corrupt to flee and begin rebuilding their powerbase in our allied nations and reconstructing their ideology on the sly, setting us up for this same conflict again in a hundred or two hundred years. We can't let that happen. So ideally, what we'd want is to recruit or insert an agent on the inside that we can trust, and get them to vet people for exits. That's a process for another time (maybe we contact someone like Nerya who could give us a good read on someone who truly protects the innocent), but we can gloat next time we see this guy that he gave us the idea.
 
Yeah, cart before the horse here. I am of two minds on this:
1. It's devious and tricksy and nonviolent, so it's really cool
2. I am wary of allowing ringleaders and the corrupt to flee and begin rebuilding their powerbase in our allied nations and reconstructing their ideology on the sly, setting us up for this same conflict again in a hundred or two hundred years. We can't let that happen. So ideally, what we'd want is to recruit or insert an agent on the inside that we can trust, and get them to vet people for exits. That's a process for another time (maybe we contact someone like Nerya who could give us a good read on someone who truly protects the innocent), but we can gloat next time we see this guy that he gave us the idea.
Also true.
We could spread rumors about him where he can't hear us do it.
Increase the rate of attrition.
 
I wanted Melifors Quistano to be something of a one-scene wonder. He's supposed to be a funny guy, witty and amusing, despite the fact that he's quite an unpleasant person underneath. His remarks about the amount of paperwork involved in a defection were inspired by the Embassy Lament song from the Chess musical.

By the way, I've started writing the next update, in which Elys finally gets to meet the God-Empress, but it's occurred to me that I should probably give you the opportunity to decide what Elys should say to her. What questions do you want her to ask? How are you going to ask her to help in the war against Aspitolm? And so on.
 
What questions do you want her to ask? How are you going to ask her to help in the war against Aspitolm? And so on.
Our general plan is clear enough I'd think - we ask her to withdraw any official sanctions for trading with Aspitolm. She's a god-empress, I am sure she knows the arguments, that slavery is bad and Aspitolm is rotten fruit ripe for a fall, but I think another appeal could be that the world is changing - the balance of power is no longer stable, and it's tilting towards the forces of Creation, life, and freedom - ask her, not to be on the right side of history, but to help ensure that this new era comes to pass with as little bloodshed as possible. Our grandfather told us, and we can echo - in war, it is often the common folk that suffer. We have no desire for that.

Huh yeah, I wonder if we apologize for inadvertently alienating one of her guests or not :/
I feel like we handle that by asking after her emotional well-being, then apologize if the situation feels right. Better to lead in, I think, give the god-empress enough time to show what she thinks before we respond.
 
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Interview with the God-Empress (Part Nine)
Interview with the God-Empress (Part Nine)
"If you disapprove of what they're doing, there must be something you could do. Defect, for example."

"Defect? Do you have any idea how much paperwork is involved in a defection? I wouldn't put those poor bureaucrats to such trouble." He looks amused at that. "Now, Your Royal Highness, I would prefer it if you didn't get me ritually strangled to death with a silken cord. By which I mean: would you mind if we talked about something else? The weather, perhaps. Or your uncle's latest squamous creations. Anything that isn't likely to end in my incriminating myself. I'd hate to be summoned back to Tolmar and 'forcibly retired'."

"Very well." You nod. "Thank you for taking the time to talk to me. This conversation has been most enlightening."
You bid farewell to the Aspiti ambassador, return to your own table and settle down to wait. Soon, Varaglok of the Khabandari tribe goes for his meeting with the God-Empress, then Falin Dero goes a little while later, then Jarranda and Ralena, and finally Melifors Quistano. He gives you an insouciant wave as he passes by. Then, you have to wait another half hour before it's your turn. In the meantime, you amuse yourself by considering which of the servers is most likely to be a spy. 'All of them,' you decide, after much thought. 'No doubt all of them report to the living goddess everything they see and hear.'

At last, you are summoned into the presence of the God-Empress, Avanna Amranth. One of the servers leads you to the throne room, which is the most ornately and opulently decorated place you have ever seen: every available surface is covered in mosaics, tapestries, carvings, gemstones, mirrors, precious metals moulded and sculpted into various artful shapes, so much lavish finery that it hurts your eyes to look at it. It's as if you've stepped into a jewellery box. There are a few guards and attendants standing here and there, but otherwise the room is largely empty. Hundreds more people could fit into this space, if they needed to, but this is a relatively private audience. Even with Jana, Catharne and Raef accompanying you, you feel rather exposed.

The God-Empress herself is lounging on her golden throne and appears to be perfectly at ease. You think she must be a beautiful, stately woman, much taller than any mortal man or woman you've ever met, but it's hard to be sure. She shines even brighter than the gold she's sitting on. Except for her eyes, which are dark pools of age and wisdom. As far as you can tell, she's dressed in an elaborate robe of the type worn by Avanni women of high rank during formal situations. Atop her head, she wears a ruby tiara.

"Welcome," she says, in a warm contralto that seems to resound through the silence like the ringing of a bell. "Welcome, Chosen of Mishrak."

"Thank you for receiving me, Goddess of the Avanni," you reply, curtseying to her.

"I'm sure you have many questions, as well as the request you came here for. You may ask."

You take a deep breath. "First of all, on behalf of the Coalition I represent, I had hoped that you might be persuaded to end all trade between the Avanni Empire and that of Aspitolm. We are winning the war, slowly but surely, and we hope that by depriving our enemies of their sources of wealth and materiel we can achieve our final victory much sooner. For centuries, the Aspitis have been the main proponents of the slave trade. When they are defeated, we will be a step closer to ending the vile practice of slavery once and for all. The world is changing, day by day, and with your help we can make sure it changes for the better."

"The Aspitis have historically been enemies of the Avanni," says Avanna Amranth, meditatively, seeming to gaze past you and into the mists of distant memory. "There was a time when they invaded and conquered all of the north-east coast, including the great city of Bakhasis. So, we bided our time and a few decades later we repelled them, reclaimed all the land we'd lost, and forced them to flee across the sea, back to their island home. I wondered if we should pursue them, but decided against it. They were still a mighty empire with an enormous fleet of warships whereas we had hardly any. It was a war we were certain to lose. We could only ready our defences and make sure that if they invaded us again they would regret it. In the centuries since then, they have tried to gain favour with us, to pretend that we were never at war and that we can be friends. Never mind that they would gladly conquer us – all of our lands – all over again if they had the power." There is a pause. "I'm surprised you haven't asked us to join your coalition. The Aspitis were quick to ask us to take up arms against you, even before they realised they could lose the war."

"The Avanni Empire would of course be welcome to join the Coalition, if they wished to do so," you reply. "But it seemed too much to ask for. War is expensive. Its cost is not just money but the lives of soldiers and innocent bystanders. I would not ask you to spend the lives of your people unless it was for a cause you – and they – believed in. Besides, it was recently pointed out to me that the Kingdom of Rivayne has more than enough soldiers to defeat the Aspitis on the field of battle. What it lacks is way to utilize its strengths, to bring its soldiers to where they are most needed, and take the fight to the enemy. I suspect that more soldiers wouldn't make much of a difference and wouldn't solve the underlying problem. On the other hand, if you were willing to let us hire several dozen warships and skilled sailors to crew them…"

The God-Empress laughs warmly at that. "Your name is Elys Allardyne, yes? Chosen of Mishrak, Princess of Ismar and Windskil, and many other things besides. I wonder how much your legend will grow, given enough time."

Unsure of how to react, you murmur, "Um… thank you?"

"I dislike the fact that certain of my people seek to profit from the war with Aspitolm," she says. "There will be no more trading with them. Not until the end of the war and the beginning of a new era."

"You are most gracious, Your Majesty," you say, bowing your head to her.

"And I should thank you for the aid you have given my loyal subjects in Dharta Thennir," she adds. "Especially with regards to freeing their mother goddess. A heroic deed worthy of an epic poem, I'm sure."

"I'd like to think so," you admit.

She gives you a thoughtful, considering look. "Now, while you're here, is there anything else you would like to ask me?"



What do you want Elys to say next? What questions do you want to ask?
 
The God-Empress laughs warmly at that. "Your name is Elys Allardyne, yes? Chosen of Mishrak, Princess of Ismar and Windskil, and many other things besides. I wonder how much your legend will grow, given enough time."

Unsure of how to react, you murmur, "Um… thank you?"
Whoa. She really deserves her title. I feel her power on the other end of the screen.

My list of questions is a little... well, we can start out by asking if the Green Sorceress is feeling better. And if we're not dismissed I want to ask her a little bit about herself - she's perhaps the fourth or fifth god we've met in person, but she gives off a different feel. I'd kind of like to ask her what it's like, being both a goddess and an empress, and what she likes or dislikes about it - if you think about it, Elys's current situation is kind of similar, though a rank or three down in all respects - empress --> princess, goddess --> chosen, empire --> tinpot kingdom. I think if Elys plays her cards a certain way she could end up a lot like the god-empress, so it'd be handy to know if that's something she might like being, or even something she could emulate a little as she is. There are few out there who mix divine, political, and personal power in the same individual, and it'd be a shame not to learn from her.

Also, do we know the God-Empress's name? If we don't, and it's not a taboo to ask, I'd like to ask.
 
Also, do we know the God-Empress's name? If we don't, and it's not a taboo to ask, I'd like to ask.
Her name is Avanna Amranth. It's mentioned in the above chapter.

Btw, do you want to ask something like 'what was the point of that whole puzzle with the other petitioners? Why was I encouraged to speak to them?' Or something like that. Not in those exact words, obviously.
 
Hmm... I'd like to say hugs, but that seems a little premature. We must also learn about the case of the Green Sorceress and tell her what we learned about its case, as well as about the agreement that we concluded. Even if she probably heard everything, it's only polite.
 
I learned a new word today!

And to add to the conversation: maybe ask about future relations too? An "in the future, after the war, we would be honored to maintain relations on a more positive note."
 
Her name is Avanna Amranth. It's mentioned in the above chapter.
Oopsie! Yeah that's fair, the later portions of the chapter obliterated that from my mind.

Hmm... I'd like to say hugs, but that seems a little premature.
Ooo, yeah. A little premature, but if she ever visits us or she's standing up, then it's ask for hugs time.

And to add to the conversation: maybe ask about future relations too? An "in the future, after the war, we would be honored to maintain relations on a more positive note."
Something like that can be near the end of the conversation, I think.

Btw, do you want to ask something like 'what was the point of that whole puzzle with the other petitioners? Why was I encouraged to speak to them?' Or something like that. Not in those exact words, obviously.
I would be happy to listen to the answer to that question, but I'm not sure how to ask it without being awkward.
 
Interview with the God-Empress (Part Ten)
I learned a new word today!
What new word would that be?

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Interview with the God-Empress (Part Ten)
She gives you a thoughtful, considering look. "Now, while you're here, is there anything else you would like to ask me?"
"How is Lashierra the Green Sorceress?" you ask. "I'm sorry I upset her earlier."

"I recommended that she should rest, for now, while I consider exactly how I can help her. Now she has asked for my aid and protection, it behoves me to do something, though I haven't yet decided what." The God-Empress looks contemplative, gazing down at her steepled hands. "Your arrival – and that of your associate, Bellona Kachalskey – seemed fortuitous to me. Either Mishrak the dragon-god or Teryn the necromancer should have the necessary expertise to be able to remove her affliction. Perhaps I could come to an arrangement with one of them. A cure for Lashierra in exchange for… ah, a suitable fee or favour, to be negotiated."

"Is that why it was heavily hinted to me that I should talk to the other petitioners?" you ask. "Did you want to see if Mishrak or I could do anything for Lashierra?"

"I wanted to take your measure. What you did next showed me exactly what kind of person you are: good-hearted, eager to do the right thing – or eager to solve the puzzle that had been put in front of you, at least – but somewhat rash and overhasty. You do not always consider the possible consequences of your actions as carefully as you probably should."

"She's got you there, Elys," Jana mumbles out of the corner of her mouth.

"Still, there are much worse sins. I was not unimpressed," says the God-Empress. "Whatever you chose to do in response to my agent's 'heavy hinting' would have taught me something about you, even if you'd decided to sit down and do nothing. Of course, if you'd done that, I would have drawn some very different conclusions."

"Lazy or too cloth-headed to understand even the heaviest hints?" Catharne suggests.

The God-Empress gives her a small nod. "Precisely."

You're not sure how to feel about that. She was studying you much like your uncle studies his creations before releasing them into the wild. She put a set of interesting props in front of you and watched to see what you would do with them. Should you be offended? Probably not. You got what you came for and it's not as if she forced you to do anything. Besides, on the whole, she's been a fairly gracious host.

"I'm curious as to what it's like to be both a goddess and an empress," you say, making an effort to change the subject. "I've met a few other gods, but you seem different from them. I hope you don't think it's impertinent of me to say so, but I almost feel like I've taken the first few steps on the road to being like you. You're a goddess and an empress whereas I'm a princess and one of the Chosen. I'm like you in miniature."

She laughs politely at that, but seems distracted, as if lost in thought. "I'm not quite sure how to answer. I have been a God-Empress for so long that I can barely remember what it was like to be anything else. In the earliest days, I was a desert spirit worshipped by the Avanni as their goddess. I was curious about them and one of their priestesses agreed to merge with me so that I could truly understand what it was like to live as they did. We became one. She is me and I am her. And there have been various others I have merged with over the centuries. I am all of them as well. Their desires, concerns, memories and perspectives are mine. Which is why – after I merged with that first priestess – I sought to elevate the Avanni, to defeat their enemies and protect them from anything that might threaten them. And so, we defeated our old rivals: the Varzi and the Khabandari. Some of the Varzi wanted to join us. Over the centuries, they became some of our most loyal subjects. In fact…" She gives you a considering look. "Do you know the difference between the Avanni and the Varzi?"

"No, I don't," you admit. "Except that the Avanni Empire is named after them and not the Varzi."

"Good point. But that's because of how it all began, not because nothing has changed since then. The truth is that, for nearly two thousand years, the Avanni and the Varzi have intermarried so extensively that it would take a powerful life mage, such as your patron, to tell the difference between them. These days, it seems as if being 'Avanni' or 'Varzi' is something people choose to be rather than anything to do with their family history. They have an image in their minds of what it means to be 'Avanni' or 'Varzi', which has more to do with starry-eyed legend than reality. They imagine that the Avanni are all fierce warrior women, beautiful and deadly, wise leaders and canny negotiators, whereas the Varzi are all brave, muscular men, strong and handsome, intrepid explorers and mighty warriors. Little girls want to be Avanni and little boys want to be Varzi." She shakes her head in bemusement. "Here I am, sitting on my throne, surveying my empire, and there are many things that make me wonder: 'When did that happen? How and why? Is it because of something I did?' Here in the heart of my domain, I am a powerful goddess and the ruler of one of the largest and most prosperous nations in Creation. I am expected to know everything and to be able to do anything. However…"

Her voice trails off into silence, which becomes increasingly oppressive and fills the entire room. During this uncomfortable pause, you glance around at your friends and notice that they seem just as uneasy as you.

"Even before she came to me, I was vaguely aware of Lashierra's story. Parts of it, certainly. But I was never sure if I should do anything about it. There are multitudes of problems I am expected to deal with, many of which are more tragic than hers, so why should I prioritize her over anyone else? Besides, her mother is Anyssar, one of the most powerful deities in all of Creation, who is surely much better equipped to help her than I am, so why should I interfere? It was none of my business." She folds her arms, puts on a slight frown, and continues, "But then she came to ask for my help. Then it became my business."



What will Elys say next? Should she just say her goodbyes and express her hope for future positive relations, or is there anything else you want to ask?
 
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Can I just say that I really like the God Empress and her approach to observation and overall sense of duty, let alone general vibes with letting other speak for themselves, dos I do, I really like her.
 
Well, whatever we do will give her more information about what Elys is like. I think that we should ask her for advice about integrating the Aspiti with the rest of the world after the war is done, as this isn't a war of extermination.
 
I am expected to know everything and to be able to do anything. However…"

Her voice trails off into silence, which becomes increasingly oppressive and fills the entire room. During this uncomfortable pause, you glance around at your friends and notice that they seem just as uneasy as you.
However...
No one person controls Creation, even the gods. You can't fix every problem or you'll spread yourself too thin and collapse. Then, nobody's getting helped. A hard lesson for any helpful person to learn.
She folds her arms, puts on a slight frown, and continues, "But then she came to ask for my help. Then it became my business."
It's like she's inviting the Elys comparisons! She can't ignore people suffering in front of her.

Can I just say that I really like the God Empress
Same. Big same.

Uh... maybe we ask what she does for fun? I feel like there's paydirt in this conversation somewhere but I'm not sure how to get to it, or what exactly it is.
 
Elys should probably offer to help the Empress with people's requests that she is better suited to handle. Elys helps the people he meets, but when people are looking for your help purposefully, it's a little different level.
 
Elys should probably offer to help the Empress with people's requests that she is better suited to handle. Elys helps the people he meets, but when people are looking for your help purposefully, it's a little different level.
Does Elys have the time for such generalized offers?

When Mishrak gets started with his biomancy priest project we could make sure there are some that help the God Empress with problems falling into that area.
Get the empresses people systematic help for the biomancy-solvable problems.
 
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