Canned Sunshine (a Going Nuclear spinoff/remake)

Chapter 12 Tuesday 12:15 AM
Ten minutes after we'd peeled out of the hotel parking lot like 'Them no good Duke Boys', Erwin spoke up. "Stop the car, Lacey. Right here. Gotta take a piss."

"Now? Can't you keep your dick in your pants for five minutes? We're on a bridge for crisakes!"

"That's why it's the best place to do it."

"I'll stop at the next gas station!"

"They're not open this late. You rather I take a leak in here?"

"NO! Fuck! Fine." Lacey pulled over to the side of the road and flicked her hazard lights on. Thankfully there wasn't any other traffic. "Hurry the Hell up you incontinent ass or you can walk home!" she yelled to him as he clambered over the guardrail to the walkway. She then turned to face Taylor in the back seat, which also let her keep an eye on any cars coming up behind them.

"Taylor. Honey. I'm going to assume Friday was a Very Bad Day. You don't have to say nothin', but I am curious as Hell as to how you wound up a hundred and fifty miles north of where you were supposed to be?"

"I got kidnapped..."

"BY WHO?" Lacey roared back. "is that why that hotel was giving me and Erwin the heebee jeebies? Some asshole grabbed you and took you there? I'll go back and string 'em up by their intestines!"

"No, it wasn't anybody there. I got away from them on my own. Sort of. Mister Carpenter and his family were very kind to me. That hotel was a little bit creepy though. Erwin had me do the Stanger Danger Dance. Maybe it was something like those old Hitchcock movies where the family goes on vacation but the place they're staying at is really run by a bunch of wackos. I hope they're okay. Maybe we should call the police?"

"Just did that." Erwin replied as he got back in the car. "It's not our problem anymore."



Toronto, Ontario

A rather statuesque woman rolled over in her bed and groaned as her phone started ringing loudly. She'd been in hated teleconference calls all day coordinating the Guild's disaster response to Albany while Dragon was busy using her remote suits to directly help with the effort.

She frowned at the unknown number. Who the hell would be calling her on her private line at this time of night? "Allô? C'est qui?" <"Hello? Who is it?"> No answer.

"Dammit." she muttered as she hung up. She then blinked as her call log showed there had been a text sent just before from the same number. "If that was some drunken wrong number asking for a ride home, I'm going to be very upset." she grumbled as she opened the message.

From: Ed in High School
MST3K

Narwhal's blood went cold. She immediately hit the speed-dial for the top number on her contacts list.

"Tess? Are you busy?" Nicole said after Dragon answered.

"Not at the moment, is there something wrong?"

"God, I hope not but I'm not that lucky. Can you check my private phone logs for the last number that called me?"

"Of course. One moment. It seems to be an unregistered burner phone. I can try calling it back."

"Do that and trace it. Right away."

"Does this have something to do with the text they sent you?"

"Almost certainly."

"Okay, The phone currently is on the Alburg-Swanton Bridge in Vermont."

"Can you track where it's been?"

"Referencing the cell phone tower pings. It was turned on just outside Burlington, heading north on Interstate 89 at well above the speed limit. Passed through Swanton, crossed the bridge, then moved south on US Highway 2. It's stationary for seven minutes in North Hero before backtracking."

"How soon can you get a suit to North Hero?"

"I can have one in the area in fifteen minutes. Why?"

"You read the text?"

"Yes. Who's Ed?"

"That's not his name. The only person I know of as 'Ed in High School' told me that if he ever used that he was Elbow Deep in Horse Shit."

"And the Mystery Science Theater 3000 reference?"

"Wrong. Master/Stranger Threat. 3 of them. Kill orders. That HAS to be Heartbreaker."

"I'm taking off now."



A little bit later, Lacey pulled into a parking garage in Burlington, driving around like she was looking for something.

"There we go." she finally said, putting the car in park. She stepped out, ran around the back of the car and grabbed... a green license plate? She then stuck it ('KIK 455') on over the plate of the blue sedan she'd stopped next to somehow, then got back in the car.

"I may have tripped a few traffic cameras getting up here. Cops are usually lazy, but they'll be on the lookout for a blue 4-door sedan with Vermont tags tonight." Lacey explained as they left the garage. "But, a lot of cars in the dark look the same unless you get up close. Some models have distinctive lights and shit but a mid-size sedan looks like any of a half dozen other models except for the color and tags. Now though, if anyone decides to pull us over and ask questions, we're just driving back home after checking in with family out-of-state."

"Wasn't that a fake license plate though?" Taylor asked?

"Yeah, but if there is a prick with a vanity plate like that he deserves to get a few tickets. It's amazing what one can do if you have access to a metal shop and some good magnets..."



As we headed out of town, Lacey, now no longer driving like a maniac called back to Taylor. "All right, you said you were kidnapped, and you obviously managed to get away. Was that summer camp really some kind of cult or something?"

"If I tell you you'll be in danger. The sort that brings people who wouldn't hesitate to kill you. You can't talk about this. EVER. I... Too many people are already gone because of me. I have to stay dead. Disappear."

"Bullshit. I know there's some secrets the government would kill to keep, Erwin's head is probably full of them." The old man cocked his head in silent agreement. "But Taylor, I can't think of anything you might know that's worth..."

"I heard that speech the President gave tonight. It's a lie and I know the truth. I know who Alexandria really is. And she's already tried to murder me because of that."

That brought looks of shock to both of the adults. Lacey then gave Erwin a questioning look before turning her attention back to the road.

"No... That's... Okay, yeah that's a pretty big secret if it's true. But KILLING you over it? That's more like 'Area 51 is real.' or some of the Lovecraftian woowoo Erwin tells suckers to get free drinks out of them at Pat's. And believe me, your mom, Zoe and I knew about some dark shit back in college."

Erwin leaned around to face Taylor, his craggy face grave. "Lassie... what happened?"

Taylor shied her head away in shame and spoke in a pitiful voice. "I did it."

"Did what?" Erwin asked without heat or judgement. Just a statement.

"It... Albany. It's my fault." Taylor gave a tiny nod.

"How?"

"I DON'T KNOW! I mean, I kinda know how, but I've got no clue to make it that big. Behemoth's never done it that big! I don't want to find out how to do it that big."

Lacey and Erwin sat quietly for a moment before Lacey called back. "Then it isn't your fault."

"What?"

"Honey, sometimes the universe just decides to say 'Fuck You' and there's nothing you can do about it. You can't blame yourself for something totally out of your control. And while some people might try to pin blame for whatever it was on you because they're petty or jealous or scared, it doesn't make them right."

Erwin chuckled. "Indeed. Shit happens. Been burned way too often by the Powers That Be myself. I'm still around pissing on their graves though. Did school teach you anything about Oppenheimer?"

"He's the guy who came up with the atom bomb isn't he?"

"One of 'em. Before they tested it, the eggheads all made a bet on how big the gadget would be. One of them didn't play. He joked: 'It'll set the air on fire and kill us all.' Point is even those those guys, who were arguably a lot smarter than you or me, weren't sure what they were doing. So if you didn't know what was going on and just did something instinctive, fight or flight, you can't truly blame yourself, right?"

Taylor sniffled. "I still killed all those people. They told me Dad... I don't want to believe them but, it's true, isn't it?"

Erwin's face turned grim. "Yes. I'm sorry."

Taylro lip began trembling. "Mom... Dad... Emma... Everybody's gone because of me."

Lacey spoke up. "Wait, who told you about Emma? Zoe called me this afternoon. She and Anne are at Boston Medical Center."

When she'd heard Erwin confirm her father's fate the flame of hope in Taylor's heart had guttered. Now though, it flared. "What?"

"Emma's alive."

Ironically, had Alec and Cherie NOT decided to make a break for it when they did, the delay would've allowed Dragon to catch the Vasils. Instead, she found a burning building containing several unidentifiable bodies. (the hotel staff)

Also. I've never EXPLICITLY said in story that Emma was dead. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
 
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Oooh,this is getting good!
Now,Emma in canon can't trigger but this is not canon soooo....
She's in the hospital for radiation poisoning I suppose,she was in the car,right?
Now we have 4 Albany survivors.
 
Chapter 13
Warning: Lacey has just a tad bit of a potty mouth in this chapter.

[Taylor]
I blinked in shock at what Lacey had just said. A tremendous weight suddenly lifted from my heart. After I'd been through so much this past week I felt practically giddy, like when I'd been soaring above the clouds. It was unbelievable. And then I remembered the words 'Boston Medical Center' and that soul crushing despair came back.

"How bad?" I whispered, fearing the worst.

"Bad. Zoe said that she was found with a few other survivors near the edge of the blast zone. Alan apparently covered her from most of the blast. He didn't make it. There's a Tinker in Boston who'd come up with something for burns and offered it to the hospitals. Normally the PRT would keep useful shit like that under lock and key for years at best, but with so many victims they agreed to limited volunteers. Doctors told Zoe Emma probably had a good chance of responding well to it."

"I need to see her."

"Okay. It's about three more hours to Boston. Pat's coffee will get me there but I'm gonna have to crash for a bit once we do and there's no way I'm letting Erwin drive. We've got some time. So, Taylor, do you feel okay telling us what all happened to you? Starting from where somebody kidnapped you?

"Okay... Well, Alexandria is the one who found me and..."



[Alexandria]
T +0015:00

"Where are we?" the young teenager in her arms asked as they landed. She'd not given a name and to be fair she couldn't have asked her with how fast they'd been flying. That the girl seemed to have not even noticed the fact they'd been flying at supersonic speeds spoke volumes about what powers she might have.

"This is an old PRT facility. It's not in use currently so there's no one around to see us like this." She went over to a cabinet and pulled out a packet of disposable hospital scrubs. "Here, put these on."

"Um... Miss Alexandria, ma'am? Aren't you going to wear anything?"

"I need to report back to Legend and the Protectorate about this and I don't have time for modesty right now."

"You've leaving me here?"

"This is a safe place for the moment. I will be back shortly with a doctor I implicitly trust who can check you over to make sure you're not hurt. I've known her since before I became a hero."

"Okay... What's her name?"

"I've always called her Doctor Mother."



"Door to Cauldron" Rebecca told the air the moment she'd flown out of sight, emerging into the main conference room where Number Man and Doctor Mother were beginning to receive reports from Albany. Kurt merely raised an eyebrow as the strongest woman in the world shamelessly walked past him to a closet containing a spare costume.

"What happened?" Amanita asked.

"The Simurgh is dead."

Number Man and Doctor Mother gaped at her. "What? How?"

"I'm not certain, but I saw her shattered remains. Kurt, time is of the essence. We need to collect them before anyone else can find them. Amanita, I need you with me, right now. Where is Fortuna?"

As though summoned by her name, Cauldron's troubleshooter stepped out of another portal. "You rang?" she said in a deep monotone.

"Follow me. Door."



[Taylor]
"Alexandria came back with somebody she'd called Doctor Mother. I guess she's a cape? Maybe a healer or a... diagnosis guy like House is on TV? There was another lady in a suit and hat. Neither of them had on masks though. The doctor looked me over while Alexandria and the other lady stood off in the corner watching us and talking about something I couldn't hear."

"What about the doctor. What do you know about her?"

"She's about your age Erwin. She was black, and looked like a doctor with the lab coat and all. She had a French accent, so she might be from Canada? She said that she and the other lady worked with the PRT as consultants. Alexandria was only gone for about ten minutes. Maybe the other lady was like... Strider? He's the guy who teleports people to and from Endbringer fights, right?"

"Yeah, that's what he does." Lacey said. Erwin just hmm'd and nodded.

"After that, Doctor Mother said she'd need to talk Alexandria and the other lady in private. They discussed something for about a minute and then the suit lady went outside and didn't come back. Alexandria then said she needed to leave to help Legend and Eidolon and flew off. Doctor Mother stayed and asked me a few basic questions. Name, home town, family. Basic stuff you might tell the cops. I know you both said not to talk to anyone like that without an adult I trusted being with me but it was Alexandria. She's trustworthy! I thought it'd be okay!"

"It's all right Taylor." Erwin said, "You didn't know and had no reason then to think otherwise."

"Yeah. Of course I figured out I was wrong about that shit later." Taylor groused before continuing.

"Anyway, Doctor Mother sat with me for a while before what sounded like a helicopter was landing outside. Then a dozen PRT guys came in with some equipment and started turning everything on and such. There were three ladies in lab coats with them and Doctor Mother said they were her colleagues. The first was a Doctor Wells. She said she was from the New York PRT and that she'd be in charge of everything, the other two ladies where her assistants, Nurse Combs and Chapman. In a few minutes they had gotten the place up and running and took me down to a... I guess it was really a cell but they called it an isolation room in case I might have something dangerous going on about me I wasn't aware of."

"And then what happened?"

"Well they gave me something better to wear than cheap paper scrubs and did a few more basic tests. Tried to prick my finger for blood which didn't work. Then they did that swab thing in your mouth, followed by an X-ray and an ultrasound. They left me alone after that saying they needed to bring in an MRI scanner. The next morning they started out with having me drink a lot of water and then this syrupy shake thing that tasted really good before they put me through the MRI. They ran me through it three times. It was pretty noisy and I was getting a bit nervous since I couldn't move around much. Afterward, the nurses brushed through my hair and gave me a manicure, or tried to anyway. It didn't look like they could file my nails. They were calling it a spa treatment to help me relax after all I'd been through."

"They said they'd be doing more physical tests in the morning like how long I could hold my breath."

"I... kinda freaked out a bit when they tested that."

"The got me calmed down and said they were calling in a Doctor Yamada to talk to me. She's supposed to be some famous therapist that the PRT uses?"

Erwin spoke up. "Jessica Yamada?" Taylor nodded. "I've head of her, yeah."

"Well... she was the one who told me about Dad and Emma and Uncle Alan.. This would've been... Sunday afternoon? I yelled at her, then she said it was okay to be angry or scared and that I could talk to her about anything. I mentioned that I knew what Alexandria looked like under her helmet, and right after that someone called Doctor Elliot wanted to talk to her. She apologized, then left and I kind of sulked for a while."

"Go on."

"They got me a FourFall game I fooled around with for a bit and then I pretended to be asleep. But later that night realized I hadn't heard about a Doctor Elliot before, So I got up and asked to speak to Doctor Yamada again. Nobody answered. I asked if there was anyone awake and got nothing. I got a bit angry then and sort of blew up a door."

Lacey spoke up then. "Yeah, that's the Hebert Temper alright. Slow to build but when it finally goes off, be somewhere else. You blew up a door?"

"Yeah, I've got... Explodey Hands? I can make them really hot too. So I just sort of started burning my way out of the cell and that's when they started trying to gas me and shit. That didn't work."

"I'll bet." Erwin chuckled.

"Well, when I got out, Doctor Yamada's clothes were sitting right there all piled up on the floor. And alarms were going off and I sort of charged at the elevator and blew that up. So now I'm at the bottom of a shaft with what looked like the doors on an Endbringer shelter blocking it off.

"Did you blow those up too?"

"No... I melted through the first one. That's when they started spraying me with acid."

"ACID?"

"It was really sour like vinegar and fuming really badly. Definitely wasn't something you'd want to be breathing."

"Shiiiiit. Then what?"

"Well, there was another blast door. And I'd managed to squeeze halfway through that one when the whole place blew up. Like "BIIIIG BADABOOM!" and all of a sudden I'm like The Great Gonzo. That explosion was NOT me by the way."

Erwin was just staring at Taylor. "And you landed in the lake?"

"Yeah. There's a little island about a mile across the lake from the hotel. Nobody was there, so I just... spent all of today trying to get my head together after... everything. God has it only been three days?"

Lacey just inhaled and let out a long sigh of exasperation. "Holy Fuck. That... That is fucking hands down the most fucked up fucking shit i have ever fucking heard. Just... FUCK! Erwin? Don't you dare tell me that's not at least a fucking nine-point-oh your personal weird shit-o-meter!"

Erwin let out a deep breath, "I think we all need to relax a bit. How about some music..."

The radio began playing Elvis Presley as the three of them drove on into the night.

Exposition chapter ran a bit long, but it sets up Boston a bit better.

Yes, I did go see DP&W. Lacey's dialogue reflects that.

I always intended for Emma to survive, but NOT unscathed. Just to twist the knife in Taylor a little more, because this is Worm.
 
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so,can contessa Path her or there some weird quantum shenanigans blocking her off?
Right now,The PRT still thinks that Taylor is buried under the facility so is going to be a clusterf*ck when Taylor goes public.
 
Now we have 4 Albany survivors.

There were a lot more than 4 'survivors'. We're talking about a quarter million dead instantly or within 24 hours. Another quarter million dead within a month barring intensive care or Parahuman treatment. Emma's in this category. Another half million less seriously injured and/or displaced.

Still... Compared to Kyushu... That's a GOOD DAY. That the Simurgh is dead too? CELLLLEBRATE GOOD TIMES COME ON!

so,can contessa Path her or there some weird quantum shenanigans blocking her off?
Contessa cannot Path Taylor. Becky and Fedorable both thought it was because of recent Trigger Disruption at first. Interlude 1 is when Cauldron suspects Taylor's unPathable.
 
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"One of 'em. Before they tested it, the eggheads all made a bet on how big the gadget would be. One of them didn't play. He joked: 'It'll set the air on fire and kill us all.' Point is even those those guys, who were arguably a lot smarter than you or me, weren't sure what they were doing. So if you didn't know what was going on and just did something instinctive, fight or flight, you can't truly blame yourself, right?"
IIRC Teller proposed this idea but later dismissed the possibility after modeling it more thoroughly.

IIRC the story really took on a life of its own as a kind of knowing mockery of the most alarmist members of the project that got traction among the non-physicists. By the time of the Trinity test the eggheads were pretty much all in agreement that nothing that catastrophic would happen.

Castle Bravo is the most striking error/blunder I can think of from that era, underestimating the yield by more than a factor of two...

Taylor can't be blamed, though if she had made the decision to do it with knowledge of the consequences it would be more praiseworthy than anything else. That's a low low cost to get rid of Ziz!
 
Chapter 14 Tuesday 3:15 AM
IBEW building, Dorchester, MA

🎶 'Cause every girl's crazy about... 🎶<click>

Lacey turned off the radio and let out a long yawn as she pulled up to the security gate. One of the two guards in the booth stepped out to talk to her as she rolled down the window.

"Mornin' Lacey. Bit early for you to be makin' a run down here from the Bay."

"Early for you maybe." she replied, then calling a greeting to the other man in the guard shack. "Hey, Bill." before turning back to the first. "Sorry, Bob. I've been driving this curmudgeon around all night and I'm about to pass out at the wheel. We've got some business in town later this morning and I was hoping we could borrow a couple of bunks for a few hours. Maybe snag a shower and a donut later?"

Bob leaned forward to look inside the car, seeing the man dozing in the passenger seat.

"Is that Erwin?" he asked.

"Yup."

"There somethin' I should be made aware of?"

"Probably not. I sure as shit won't be sleeping well for a while. Right now though, I'm too tired to care. Mind hooking us up?"

Bob nodded to Bill and the gate started to open. "I'll let Steve know so nobody bothers you."

"Thanks Bob, I'll have Pat run a couple cases of the latest brew down here this weekend for you guys."

"Much appreciated, Lacey. Have a good nap."

Lacey drove into the lot and found a parking space near the main building. She punched Erwin in the shoulder. "Wake up, old man we're here." Erwin grumbled and smacked his lips sleepily.

"Where is here anyway?" Taylor asked.

"International Brotherhood of Electrical Workers Local 103. When the Union had to start downsizing a lot of the guys moved to Boston. There's always something going down needing linemen and electricians and all so this place is busy 24/7/365. We're good."



5:11 AM
Taylor sat still on a concrete bollard facing out over Boston Harbor, her eyes closed, contentedly drinking in the dawn's light as the sun rose over the water.

"Couldn't sleep?" one of the guards said as he approached her.

"Oh, hi Steve. Yeah, sorry to bother you. I just needed to get out and watch the sunrise."

"We do get some pretty ones out here. But a young lady shouldn't be wandering around by herself in here."

"I understand." Taylor nodded, then pointed over to a large natural gas storage tank. "What's the deal with that though?"

"The Rainbow Squash? You've never been to Boston, have you? Well, some artsy-fartsy guy back in the Seventies made it and claimed it was the 'largest copyrighted piece of art' in the world. It's somehow become a real tourist draw and nobody wants to bother it, not even the capes when they fight. This whole neighborhood's considered neutral ground."

"Huh, neat. Brockton Bay kind of has the same thing going on with the buses and such."

"The Marquis' Peace still holding up after a decade? Gotta admit that the Bay really started going downhill after he got 'Caged. Well, come on then, let's get you inside so I can get back to my rounds."



Roof level, Crosstown Center garage, South Boston
8:30 AM

"That's a LOT of PRT vans moving about." Erwin stated with a grim look as he gazed over the area while leaning against the car and sipping at his Dunkin' Donuts coffee. "Makes sense if they got some experimental TinkerTech going on over there that they want to keep a lid on. Don't think you'll be getting in to see Emma today, Taylor."

"I just left a message for Zoe to meet me in a half hour over there." Lacey chimed in, pointing at a baseball diamond about half a mile west of the hospital. "Should be good for us to go unnoticed."

Erwin nodded then turned to Taylor. "You sure you want to do things like this, Taylor?"

"You two told me that everything's not my fault. But... I still did that. Even if it was an accident. The PRT and Protectorate are lying to everyone about what really happened though. I can't fight that right now and they'll want to put me away somewhere to make sure I can't tell my side of the story. It's like when Aunt Kimmie stayed at our house that summer. I have to disappear. Taylor Hebert has to be dead. At least for a while. I... really don't know how to do that though."

"When we get back to the Bay I'll teach you a few tricks. I know a couple of guys who owe me favors too. I'll... convince them to help you out."

"Thanks Erwin. Lacey, you think you can get our bug-out bags from the house?"

"Police shouldn't have tossed the place that much. Where they at?"

"Mines in my closet behind a ceiling panel. Dad's should be in the laundry cabinet, under the floorboards."

"You got it, kiddo."



Ramsay Park, South Boston
9:00 AM

Zoe walked over to the bleachers where Lacey was and sat down. She looked haggard and drawn, like the life had been wrung out of her, and in a sense it had. Still, she was able give the other woman a smile and a simple greeting.

"Hey. Did you come down to see Emma?"

"I'd like to, but I'm guessing they're restricting visits?"

"Immediate family only. Anne's there now. The doctors are hopeful but... it could be weeks before they're sure. With Alan, Danny and Taylor gone... There's nothing left for me in Brockton anymore. I'm going to put the house on the market. Find an apartment with Anne here while she goes to school so I can be close to Emma."

"You may want to rethink that." Lacey replied, motioning to the dugout where Erwin stepped out and behind him...

"Taylor?" Zoe was barely able to gasp out in disbelief.



Zoe just pulled Taylor into a crushing hug and began weeping hysterically. Lacey and Erwin stepped away to given them their space. When Zoe finally pulled back and properly looked at Taylor her face flickered with confusion.

"How? Emma called me after dropping you off, then the sirens started and a few minutes later all the phones went down for a while. After Alan hadn't gotten back I went over to Danny's house to use his phone and..."

"I know. Dad's gone. And Uncle Alan and all those other people. And... I hurt Emma. I can't face her. Not now. Maybe not ever."

"Taylor, sweetie..."

"No, Aunt Zoe. Listen..." Taylor pressed Zoe's hand to her chest and stopped breathing. She held it there while she stilled her heart. Becoming not unlike a statue as comprehension, then horror bloomed on Zoe's face.

"I'm a monster. A freak. How can I ask my sister to forgive me for what I did to her before I forgive myself? When... WHEN Emma wakes up, you need to tell her that I died. She needs to believe I died. Because maybe I did, and I'm... Damned. Jinxed. Fated like Odysseus to never return home until I've earned Penance. You can't tell anyone else I exist. Swear it to me. SWEAR ON MOM AND DAD'S GRAVES THAT YOU WON'T TELL ANYONE." Taylor pleaded.

"I... swear it, Taylor. But where will you go?"

"I don't know. I'll figure out something. Seems like I've got a lot of time on my hands now." Taylor idly quipped before turning serious again. "I mean it, Aunt Zoe. Anyone who knows I'm alive could be in danger. I'm sorry for doing this to you but... you needed to know."

Zoe was trembling. "I'll... I'll keep your secret Taylor. I promise."

Taylor nodded. "Goodbye, Aunt Zoe." She got up and started walking behind Lacey and Erwin

as they headed out of the park, leaving Zoe to sit there on the bleachers numbly.​



"No, Aunt Zoe. Listen..."
Realization dawned. Taylor had Powers. She'd Triggered in that cataclysm and survived, where Alan and so many others hadn't.


[Destination]
"How can I ask my sister to forgive me for what I did to her before I forgive myself?"
Taylor blamed HERSELF for what happened? That... That made no sense?


[Agreement]
"Goodbye, Aunt Zoe."
The fear in Zoe's heart turned to quiet fury as she remembered Taylor's face... Unblemished.


[Trajectory]
Taylor had FOREVER SCARRED her baby girl.

[Agreement]
In that moment Zoe Barnes saw stars.



When a major cape fight or an Endbringer attack could suddenly break out in your area, disaster prepping is a thing. So just about everyone has a bug-out bag. Annette's flute is in Taylor's, while Danny's has copies of various important papers, photos, jewelry (his and Annette's wedding rings), some emergency cash and his grandfather's pocket watch. There's no engraving yet though.

The Tinkertech treatment Emma and others are getting is from Blasto, which is why the PRT is being extra careful. It's a "symbiotic bandage" based on radiotrophic fungus found in the ruins of Moscow. Emma suffered Two-Face level burns on her left side.

Zoe Elizabeth Barnes née Montgomery ('ZeeZee' back in the day) Triggered as a Thinker. Taylor didn't see the [Entities] because she's not exactly human (or Parahuman) anymore. She just turned 'off' for a couple of seconds and didn't notice.

Zoe has Scion's copy of [Sensor], the same shard Cauldron used to give Clairvoyant and Mama Mathers their powers. As a 'Tier 2' shard, it can be spoofed similarly. Zoe can't find Taylor directly with it.

Whenever Zoe makes skin contact with a person, she establishes a connection with them, at a 1:60 ratio. One second equals one minute of being able to access that person's senses. This can be broken up as needed but it is cumulative. Normally this would result in massive sensory overload and Thinker headaches but Zoe got a [Multitasking] ping from [Queen Administrator]. It'll be overwhelming at first so Zoe will be keeping herself from people. But, like Canon Taylor, she'll start getting a handle on it after a couple of weeks.

Whether Zoe goes Hero, Rogue or Villain with this... that's gonna be a few months of in-story time later.
 
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Ooh nooo... Taylor you fool...
Anyway, Taylor is not human (or at least as human as Alexandria or Weld),does that mean the Manton effect does not affect her,like Vista could stretch her or Rune move her?

"HEY JACK SLASH!"
"WHAT?!"
"FUCK YOU!" *Proceeds to false vacuum decay his ass*
 
Vista could stretch her or Rune move her?

Taylor counts as both living and non-living with regards to the Manton effect. Whichever is LESS beneficial to anyone trying to affect her.

Vista can't turn her into a taco passing through a tesseract, Rune can't draw a squiggly line on her and send her flying, and Panacea can't heal her or melt her into a puddle of goo. (Note, Amy and Tammi haven't Triggered yet.)
 
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Aah, Panacea doesn't exist yet. That makes the FOREVER SCARRED make so much more sense.

Without that understanding I'd found that part of the chapter disconcerting. Yes, it was the logical / illogical mess of real emotion, but somehow seemed not %@#$&… (can't think of the word I'm looking for).

* It's too early for any of the 'famous' parahuman 'healers' to exist, so Zoe obviously cannot have the hope that Emma will ever get back to normal life.
 
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FUCK NO! Not that song.......that song has made me cry like a baby when I was younger and it came on the Incredible Hulk, it always, always made me think of being alone with nowhere to go.

Taylor too much information and stop sliding into the classics..........you've created a nemesis. :facepalm: :facepalm: :facepalm: :facepalm: :facepalm: :facepalm: :cry::cry::cry::cry:
 
Oh boi, I hope Zoe can stay sensible enough to not go after Taylor.
Hopefully she will. The families & children had a pretty tight bond going before the feces hit the rotating air mover. Zoe has lost her husband, and her daughter was a near miss. Taylor has lost Danny & Alan, and feels responsible for killing Alan and nearly killing Emma. Pretty sure Zoe can empathize with Taylor enough to know it wasn't intentional, and will eventually want to comfort her, not kill her. Wouldn't matter much anyway, since Zoe can't do anything to hurt Taylor directly, but that doesn't mean she can't contact the PRT in worst case. Zoe needs to come to terms with everything that's happened, and with luck, she won't turn on Taylor too.

All Taylor has to do now is find a way to re-invent herself as someone else, that's NOT immediately recognizable by RCB.

Will Cauldron ever figure out that Eidolon dropped out of the sky at the same instant that Simmy went 'kablooey', since he crashed BEFORE enough radiation would have nearly killed him?

Now that the smartest of the 3 Endbringers is out of action, will the other two stay sidelined permanently. {High Priest} might be dead, but the first two [Conflict Engines] are still online, even if they're currently without orders. Will they stay that way?

It's gonna be a bumpy ride!
 
Anyway, Taylor is not human (or at least as human as Alexandria or Weld)
My canon for this story is that when Eidolon healed Alexandria after the Siberian, he burned through the entirety of Eden's [Shaper] shard to do it. The power to heal hundreds of millions of people from the brink of death wasted on one Bitch's Face. And he couldn't even do that right.

you've created a nemesis.
Those are the best kind though, aren't they?

Will Cauldron ever figure out that Eidolon dropped out of the sky at the same instant that Simmy went 'kablooey'
Nope. The only person who might've been able to figure that out is Becky. The time between Simmy going KABOOM and the heat bloom/radiation pulse reaching them was less than even her better than human reactions to notice.

Will they stay that way?
One can but Hope that. :whistle:
 
For me the funniest end of Jack is when the main character does not even know Jack was there. Just accidentally clapped him with plasma bomb or that one where Jack was mistaken for an ordinary guy and brought to jail where police recognize and shoot him.

This story may just go that way with Jack just croaking due to all the radiation going around
can you give the name for that story ? i remember reading it but cant remember the name
 
Hmm not sure how I feel on Mrs Barnes deciding it's all Taylors fault enough to trigger out of rage. Focusing your hate on a child of fourteen is a bad look.
 
Hmm not sure how I feel on Mrs Barnes deciding it's all Taylors fault enough to trigger out of rage. Focusing your hate on a child of fourteen is a bad look.

That's fair. But, consider that it wasn't just a moment of hatred.
The Endbringer Sirens go off, which is enough to make anyone anywhere a bit nervous, even if it's Bangladesh and not Brockton Bay.
Alan and Emma are late getting home and she can't reach them.
Zoe finds Danny and realizes Alan, Emma and Taylor are probably also dead.
Zoe gets word that Emma's alive, but only just. Her likely only chance is untested BioTinkering from a Villain. She's still likely crippled for life.
Then she finds out that Taylor's alive. Untouched.
Because she had the Worst Day Of Her Life.
And she blames herself for some reason.
And Taylor (for Zoe's own protection) walks away from the closest thing she has to family now without explaining WHY.

If any of those are different, that one moment of jealous hate isn't the straw that breaks the camel's back.
 
Would be cool if Zoe's power has a trump aspect to it like: for 1 minute of using the power on a cape, she can use the cape in question power's for 1 second.
Example:
If she uses her ability on Glory girl,for each minute that passes with the power on,Zoe can use 1 second of Glory girl's power.
Maybe a limit on how many capes she can use it on...
 
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