PS: I really didn't want to do this in this thread. But when you actually tried to go quote for quote, this became out of proportion.

So we're doing this in this thread, and you're blaming me for it, when I told you to take it to PMs? Okay.

It's twisted to say that Obito's intentions were pure and now he is doing it for Rin again.

He did it to save Naruto and Sasuke's lives. Mentioning Rin was both a joke as well as a cliche soldier line - 'I'm going back to her before you', 'Don't come back too quickly and mess it up for us, you hear' that kind of thing. This isn't rocket science.

Both cheesy and expects the reader to accept Obito as a hero. No.

I'd consider sacrificing one's life to save the lives of those who can save the world fairly heroic, yes.

Obito died saying he would see Rin and didn't want Kakashi to be there as a rival.

The fact that you think the joke is supposed to be the real reason really makes me facepalm.

Sorry, if this was expected to be seen as cute. Let me say no to that.

It was, and you took the joke too seriously.

Obito did everything to get things to that point.

Yes, this whole convoluted plan, decades in the making, was so he could die! Genius!

The world is in danger because he could do the right thing numerous times and said no every time.

So, we're trivializing everything that happened to him again, pretending people aren't what they are, but are actually divided into 'good' and 'bad' and not what their circumstances and environment makes them into? And we're also ignoring the fact that Obito was always Madara's patsy, and if he hadn't been there, Madara would have just used someone else?

Did we miss how he said no in the beginning? That it was Madara's actions - his brainwashing, his machinations, and everything else, that slowly warped Obito over to who he was?

Then we got the bullshit retcon that Madara had chosen Obito because he was too good.

'Thing I do not like because it doesn't support my hate' is not a retcon.

Except Kishimoto didn't stop there. He made a third brother to Hagoromo and said that brother had manipulated Madara and Uchiha clan all along. Failure at story telling.

Actually, that was a good bit of storytelling, and worked with the first bit of philosophy we were imparted (underneath the underneath), explained the tablet, explained how Madara knew about Infinite Tsukyomi in the first place, and tons of things besides.

Once again - 'I do not like this because it doesn't support my headcanon and hate' is not a retcon.

Obito's death didn't even make up for one tenth of his body count.

Try hundreds of times over. Since, you know, if he hadn't been there, Naruto and Sasuke would have died, and the world would have ended.

Did he die a hero?No. He just did just one thing right.

Which is the qualification for a heroic death.

Zabuza comes to mind. And the setting was deliberately set up to make him that way. If Kaguya wasn't the blatant puppet that she was, Kakashi and Obito jumping in the way stone spikes would be the least of their problems.

So their actions were perfectly justified by the story, but you're bitching that it happened ... why again?

Well done, kishimoto. You made Kaguya a failure at villain genre to have Obito doing a good act and get to be with Rin. Wow.

As always, your inability to distinguish jokes from motivations and parse villain motivations and actions makes me facepalm.

People lie to themselves according to Naruto.He said so to Sakura.

And ...? Danzo wasn't lying when he said what he wanted for Konoha, and neither was Obito lying (especially when we have whole chapters dedicated to his motivations).

Danzou and Obito are champions of that. They are assholes. Kishimoto knew how much extreme the character was. So he had Obito giving a speech about none of it matters. That way, we get an out for the guy who killed thousands upon thousands.

No, Madara killed thousands upon thousands. Obito might have, we don't know, but given all the people killed by White Zetsu (who are Madara's) and who died due to Madara's plans are Madara's fault ...

And Obito gave that speech because he ... was objectively right? Simple statistics would tell you that if this plan brought about eternal world peace and indefinite happiness for everyone, without problems, then the people who died fighting against it are statistically insignificant.

They aren't well intentioned extremists. They are villains who call themselves the right ones in the swirling chaos.

Please learn what well-intentioned extremists means before using it in an argument.

The definitive villain type. My way or highway.

So is Naruto, you realize? Or pretty much most protagonists in fiction?

The difference is in the damage and benefits 'my way' leads to, and how it's couched and presented in-story.

Naruto saying that and meaning it is different than acknowledging a heroic deed.

Naruto certainly was.

Kishimoto broke SoD on that one.

To you, certainly.

He drew parallels to Pain whose life was ruined by both Obito and Danzou. Good one.

As opposed to Obito, whose life was ruined by Madara (or, more pertinently, that rock nin)? And Pain's life was ruined by Danzou, Obito did fuck all besides form Akatsuki with him on Madara's orders.

Sorry. No. That's a difference of opinion and many share that. That's why we call it values dissonance.

People understanding what's being told isn't a 'difference of opinion'. You talked about understanding - well, they'd understand easily. No values dissonance here.

That's how you explain all the lives you have ruined.

And the lives you've saved and helped?

And a sociopath's standing point.

No, just a pragmatist and realist's standing point. And someone who can actually look at a situation objectively.

I liked a girl who liked me as a friend. And maybe could love me if not for the rival. So I'm going to destroy the world and remake it in my image!

Do you ... have any idea what happened in Naruto at all?o_O

Kakashi was not a rival! Obito outright tells us, with corroborating flashbacks and internal musings and the whole shebang, how he's doing this, not for Rin, but because he wants to fix this world and bring about a lasting peace.

And he's not even remaking it in his image - he's letting everyone else make the world in their image.

Hello Gendo Rokubungi or whatever. We definitely didn't miss you.

Pointless tangent is pointless.

That plan wouldn't have worked and everyone knows that.

Sure, considering Kaguya and everything else.

But, from his perspective, it would have easily worked out. And even then, his perspective is shown to be wrong because of Kaguya and what's involved - Naruto's protests about it weren't about 'it won't work', but 'by doing this, you lose all this, and ignore all this'.

Madara brainwashing thing was also a crutch that was retconned hundreds of chapters later.

Lolwut? Obito being manipulated by Madara was blatantly obvious since Madara was revealed, let alone since when Obito was. We're even told that Obito was supposed to follow Madara's plan perfectly, but diverged in one specific instance. Before Tobi being Obito was revealed.

That was so blatant, Obito somehow died after Minato had become hokage.

Now what are you talking about? Obito never died until the bit with Kaguya!

Let me tell you, that was hilariously bad in obvious meddling being obvious.

Given I'm pretty sure you're talking about nonsense, I'll take your word for it.

Then after Obito denying every time Naruto wanted to talk,we get how woe is Obito. And we should totally understand after he failed to end the world a few times! Yeah great parallel/callback to the past there Kishimoto. Good work.

You mean one time, right? And he failed that one time, by deciding to abandon a plan he'd spent decades working on and dedicating his life to? Because Naruto convinced him to?

After Obito knows that there is no future. He gets to die in a meaningful way when it's obvious he is going to die anyway. And his reward is waiting for him in the afterlife. What the hell is this? Redemption story? No. Just no.

So, are you against the very idea of redemption stories or what? And he abandoned the plan before Kaguya came into the picture, so it's not like he suddenly jumped ship when he realized it's not going to work. And you're bitching about him trying to make his death mean something? Wut. What, you think it would have been narratively more apt for him to die in a ditch somewhere, with everyone cursing his name, and we completely go back on the one consistent message throughout the whole manga?

They already did that when they went back on the whole 'Naruto is an underdog, getting all he got in life through guts and hard work'. Doing it again would have just ruined the story.

His 'reward', after death, is to go to the Pure World, same as literally everyone in the Narutoverse. How is that even a reward?

Immature is all of that above being somehow equal to being forgiven and being called a hero.

No, immature is holding onto a revenge fantasy and hate boner when the guy you're hating on has given up on his life's work, which he spent decades on, and sacrificed his life to save the world.

It's immature to call this the rehabilitation convicts get.

You're right. Convicts don't end up saving the world when they get rehabilitated.

This is either a story telling failure or just no holds barred Uchiha clan worship. Both are immature.

The fuck? A story talking about failure is the opposite of immature. This story does that, BTW - Itachi admitting his fuckups, the thing with Obito too.

As for 'no holds barred Uchiha Clan worship' ... um, since you're not talking about abilities, but on how people are treated ... did we miss Madara? Or the whole 'Uchiha clan members, strength through trauma bit' talking about how every Sharingan user is mentally damaged? Though that bit might just be Nidaime's bias ...

He wasn't brainwashed at first.

No, he was always brainwashed. The exact circumstances and situation were not explained till then.

We got that explanation after everything to make Obito sympathetic.

So we were given Obito's motivations and the understandable reasons of why he did what we did ... and you want to decry that because he became more sympathetic to you?

If you want to only read/watch about Always Chaotic Evil villains, go watch saturday morning cartoons or kids' novels or something.

Once again - 'I don't like how this part doesn't support my hate of the character' is not a retcon.

He was brainwashed to believe while he was bombing bijuu dammas killing thousands? No,he knew full well at that point. Otherwise,he wouldn't have devised a way to con Madara and become ten tails jinchuriki. That's the problem with bad story telling. You somehow forget what you just told means.

This, um, somehow contradicts his motivations and heroic actions later how, again?

And you do remember this was a war situation, he bombed the Ninja Army secret base which was co-ordinating everyone. Nor does this, again, somehow change the fact that he had changed by the end, saving the world ... which is, um, quite a bit more than what you're talking about.

Obito was going to die anyway.

If you mean he was suicidal, certainly.

He chose to do something with his death and after seeing his own way wrong after numerous times being told so. He went to be together with Rin. Really? At least don't show it to us and make it uncertain. Then what was the point?

The point was that after a near lifetime of pain and hardship, he found peace with his death, doing what he could to save the world from Kaguya ... and it was reflected in the afterlife, where Rin accepted him.

Yeah and Sasuke deserves that treatment.

Sasuke, who was mentally tortured by his trusted elder brother into seeing his family die at said brother's hands for three days straight at a young age? Sasuke, who was twisted by the Cursed Seal, and his continued impotence against Itachi, then mind-raped again? Who, even after all that, could not bring himself to kill Naruto when he had him dead to rights, even though it would make him stronger? Who refused to kill people Orochimaru sent against him in the beginning? Who then got further mind-whammied by Obito, when he revealed that all his hate and rage had been for nothing, that he'd killed the person who'd guaranteed his safety and wasted his life, when the people who'd ordered his family dead were perfectly fine in Konoha?

Sasuke, who ... I don't think has actually done much damage so far.

Instead he got both Itachi and Hashirama to whitewash him.

If by 'whitewash', you mean 'tell him the truth about everything and explain things to him, giving him something to work with", sure. Please stop misrepresenting what actually happens.

Which would be acceptable if he became different.

?

... Um, he did.

No, he just decided that he was right.

No, that is categorically not what happened, considering his original plan was to kill Itachi, then to destroy Konoha. Both of which he decided not to do.

And all of the world were morons.

Stop making shit up.

He was going to kill all the bijuu with Amaterasu.

I'm not even sure what you're talking about here, but it probably doesn't matter even then, considering you can't permakill Bijuu with Amaterasu.

Then lectured Naruto for saving Kakashi and Sakura.

Yep, he told Naruto that, as harsh as it was, the fate of the world was resting on their shoulders as they were the only two who could beat Kaguya, and so they couldn't sacrifice themselves for Kakashi and Sakura. Which is totally true.

Instead this Sasuke gets both new techniques

Indra.

and attaboy from everyone.

Because being pointlessly antagonistic isn't going to help much? What did Sasuke even do?

And Naruto is hopelessly reciting words from 4 years ago. Good one.

So, Naruto is being Naruto? How horrible.

Ugh. I wasted far too much time on this argument. I'm done. This argument's going nowhere.
 
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So we're doing this in this thread, and you're blaming me for it, when I told you to take it to PMs? Okay.



He did it to save Naruto and Sasuke's lives. Mentioning Rin was both a joke as well as a cliche soldier line - 'I'm going back to her before you', 'Don't come back too quickly and mess it up for us, you hear' that kind of thing. This isn't rocket science.



I'd consider sacrificing one's life to save the lives of those who can save the world fairly heroic, yes.



The fact that you think the joke is supposed to be the real reason really makes me facepalm.



It was, and you took the joke too seriously.



Yes, this whole convoluted plan, decades in the making, was so he could die! Genius!



So, we're trivializing everything that happened to him again, pretending people aren't what they are, but are actually divided into 'good' and 'bad' and not what their circumstances and environment makes them into? And we're also ignoring the fact that Obito was always Madara's patsy, and if he hadn't been there, Madara would have just used someone else?

Did we miss how he said no in the beginning? That it was Madara's actions - his brainwashing, his machinations, and everything else, that slowly warped Obito over to who he was?



'Thing I do not like because it doesn't support my hate' is not a retcon.



Actually, that was a good bit of storytelling, and worked with the first bit of philosophy we were imparted (underneath the underneath), explained the tablet, explained how Madara knew about Infinite Tsukyomi in the first place, and tons of things besides.

Once again - 'I do not like this because it doesn't support my headcanon and hate' is not a retcon.



Try hundreds of times over. Since, you know, if he hadn't been there, Naruto and Sasuke would have died, and the world would have ended.



Which is the qualification for a heroic death.



So their actions were perfectly justified by the story, but you're bitching that it happened ... why again?



As always, your inability to distinguish jokes from motivations and parse villain motivations and actions makes me facepalm.



And ...? Danzo wasn't lying when he said what he wanted for Konoha, and neither was Obito lying (especially when we have whole chapters dedicated to his motivations).



No, Madara killed thousands upon thousands. Obito might have, we don't know, but given all the people killed by White Zetsu (who are Madara's) and who died due to Madara's plans are Madara's fault ...

And Obito gave that speech because he ... was objectively right? Simple statistics would tell you that if this plan brought about eternal world peace and indefinite happiness for everyone, without problems, then the people who died fighting against it are statistically insignificant.



Please learn what well-intentioned extremists means before using it in an argument.



So is Naruto, you realize? Or pretty much most protagonists in fiction?

The difference is in the damage and benefits 'my way' leads to, and how it's couched and presented in-story.



Naruto certainly was.



To you, certainly.



As opposed to Obito, whose life was ruined by Madara (or, more pertinently, that rock nin)? And Pain's life was ruined by Danzou, Obito did fuck all besides form Akatsuki with him on Madara's orders.



People understanding what's being told isn't a 'difference of opinion'. You talked about understanding - well, they'd understand easily. No values dissonance here.



And the lives you've saved and helped?



No, just a pragmatist and realist's standing point. And someone who can actually look at a situation objectively.



Do you ... have any idea what happened in Naruto at all?o_O

Kakashi was not a rival! Obito outright tells us, with corroborating flashbacks and internal musings and the whole shebang, how he's doing this, not for Rin, but because he wants to fix this world and bring about a lasting peace.

And he's not even remaking it in his image - he's letting everyone else make the world in their image.



Pointless tangent is pointless.



Sure, considering Kaguya and everything else.

But, from his perspective, it would have easily worked out. And even then, his perspective is shown to be wrong because of Kaguya and what's involved - Naruto's protests about it weren't about 'it won't work', but 'by doing this, you lose all this, and ignore all this'.



Lolwut? Obito being manipulated by Madara was blatantly obvious since Madara was revealed, let alone since when Obito was. We're even told that Obito was supposed to follow Madara's plan perfectly, but diverged in one specific instance. Before Tobi being Obito was revealed.



Now what are you talking about? Obito never died until the bit with Kaguya!



Given I'm pretty sure you're talking about nonsense, I'll take your word for it.



You mean one time, right? And he failed that one time, by deciding to abandon a plan he'd spent decades working on and dedicating his life to? Because Naruto convinced him to?



So, are you against the very idea of redemption stories or what? And he abandoned the plan before Kaguya came into the picture, so it's not like he suddenly jumped ship when he realized it's not going to work. And you're bitching about him trying to make his death mean something? Wut. What, you think it would have been narratively more apt for him to die in a ditch somewhere, with everyone cursing his name, and we completely go back on the one consistent message throughout the whole manga?

They already did that when they went back on the whole 'Naruto is an underdog, getting all he got in life through guts and hard work'. Doing it again would have just ruined the story.

His 'reward', after death, is to go to the Pure World, same as literally everyone in the Narutoverse. How is that even a reward?



No, immature is holding onto a revenge fantasy and hate boner when the guy you're hating on has given up on his life's work, which he spent decades on, and sacrificed his life to save the world.



You're right. Convicts don't end up saving the world when they get rehabilitated.



The fuck? A story talking about failure is the opposite of immature. This story does that, BTW - Itachi admitting his fuckups, the thing with Obito too.

As for 'no holds barred Uchiha Clan worship' ... um, since you're not talking about abilities, but on how people are treated ... did we miss Madara? Or the whole 'Uchiha clan members, strength through trauma bit' talking about how every Sharingan user is mentally damaged? Though that bit might just be Nidaime's bias ...



No, he was always brainwashed. The exact circumstances and situation were not explained till then.



So we were given Obito's motivations and the understandable reasons of why he did what we did ... and you want to decry that because he became more sympathetic to you?

If you want to only read/watch about Always Chaotic Evil villains, go watch saturday morning cartoons or kids' novels or something.

Once again - 'I don't like how this part doesn't support my hate of the character' is not a retcon.



This, um, somehow contradicts his motivations and heroic actions later how, again?

And you do remember this was a war situation, he bombed the Ninja Army secret base which was co-ordinating everyone. Nor does this, again, somehow change the fact that he had changed by the end, saving the world ... which is, um, quite a bit more than what you're talking about.



If you mean he was suicidal, certainly.



The point was that after a near lifetime of pain and hardship, he found peace with his death, doing what he could to save the world from Kaguya ... and it was reflected in the afterlife, where Rin accepted him.



Sasuke, who was mentally tortured by his trusted elder brother into seeing his family die at said brother's hands for three days straight at a young age? Sasuke, who was twisted by the Cursed Seal, and his continued impotence against Itachi, then mind-raped again? Who, even after all that, could not bring himself to kill Naruto when he had him dead to rights, even though it would make him stronger? Who refused to kill people Orochimaru sent against him in the beginning? Who then got further mind-whammied by Obito, when he revealed that all his hate and rage had been for nothing, that he'd killed the person who'd guaranteed his safety and wasted his life, when the people who'd ordered his family dead were perfectly fine in Konoha?

Sasuke, who ... I don't think has actually done much damage so far.



If by 'whitewash', you mean 'tell him the truth about everything and explain things to him, giving him something to work with", sure. Please stop misrepresenting what actually happens.



?

... Um, he did.



No, that is categorically not what happened, considering his original plan was to kill Itachi, then to destroy Konoha. Both of which he decided not to do.



Stop making shit up.



I'm not even sure what you're talking about here, but it probably doesn't matter even then, considering you can't permakill Bijuu with Amaterasu.



Yep, he told Naruto that, as harsh as it was, the fate of the world was resting on their shoulders as they were the only two who could beat Kaguya, and so they couldn't sacrifice themselves for Kakashi and Sakura. Which is totally true.



Indra.



Because being pointlessly antagonistic isn't going to help much? What did Sasuke even do?



So, Naruto is being Naruto? How horrible.

Ugh. I wasted far too much time on this argument. I'm done. Your continued insistence to trivialize the situation, your insistence that things you don't like are retcons and all that pointless character hate are too annoying to waste time with.

Continue if you wish, I'm done.
TLDR take your whining elsewhere please folks cause you are cluttering up the thread
 
OK,first of all I didn't see your note about PMs. And I wasn't really blaming anyone. I told exactly what happened instead of giving a precise answer you decided to pinch at things you liked to post paragraphs. Now i can't answer here, because the thread actually went up in the page count and people are getting alerts.

Thanks for keeping it nice and simple.

And I'm really hoping for you actually wrote something thoughtful. Instead of you know,answering in really inane ways.

Really? I read one third of your post and you just misinterpreted everything up to that point. Now reading on, haven't decided if there is really anything to answer to.

Let's hope there is.

Hahah, really?

"Pointless tangent is pointless."

"Now what are you talking about? Obito never died until the bit with Kaguya!"

Really?

"So, are you against the very idea of redemption stories or what? And he abandoned the plan before Kaguya came into the picture, so it's not like he suddenly jumped ship when he realized it's not going to work. And you're bitching about him trying to make his death mean something? Wut. What, you think it would have been narratively more apt for him to die in a ditch somewhere, with everyone cursing his name, and we completely go back on the one consistent message throughout the whole manga?"

I don't care about Obito or his redemption. Bitching?

Really?
I'm not posting here in answering this blob of words.

When you don't have an answer. You don't answer. You don't actually say no that didn't happen. Cite source. You don't reject facts. Cite counter source.You don't misquote or misinterpret someone. No citation can save that one.

You obviously lied or you don't know the manga. Or you don't remember stuff and you have the gall to say that the other party made it up.

Really,you couldn't have remembered wrong . It's good that you stopped where you already posted this. Otherwise it would be not fun for any of us.

http://mangafox.me/manga/naruto/vTBD/c654/6.html

Obito is this. Get used to it.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Wallbangers/Naruto

Go,take it up with them. Obviously they are all lying.
 
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Hey guys, chill out. Relax, it's just a game. Nobody is 'right', nobody is 'wrong.'

And yes, we encourage the use of PMs for tangential topics, especially in a writing project.
 
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Chapter Forty

"Gryffindor!" the Hat screamed, and I blinked. I was pretty sure Harry wouldn't have gone with the 'Not Slytherin' jibe, but still...he had ended up in Gryffindor. Then again, it had to take a special amount of 'bravery' to leave behind your adoptive family and strike out on your own.
As Harry Potter sat at the Gryffindor's table, I floated quietly behind him, humming as I watched the proceedings finish.
"Gryffindor, uh?" I remarked. "The hat was proud of your bravery?"
"I'm sorry," Harry mumbled, his face down to stare at his plate. "I tried to tell him..."
"It's not a problem," I replied with a shrug. "Can't change who we are. And you were very brave in following my directions anyway."
Harry nodded and then looked at the teachers' table. He winced when his eyes met Quirrell's, but then moved to where Dumbledore was -smiling by himself.
"You ready for this?" I asked.
"Uh-uh," Harry mumbled.

Dumbledore gave his usual warning about the third floor, and soon that was followed by the four words spouted by him, and the feast began.
It really was all as greasy as the films depicted -but frankly, greasy was good when you had to put your mind at ease.
Like I was doing.
Eating fried chicken.
But pumpkin juice was really beyond me -didn't like pumpkin, never liked it, never will- and thankfully, there was something other than pumpkin juice at the table.
"Oh, the staff table has wine! Why can't I have wine too?" I whined, "That looks like really good red wine to boot!"
I frowned. "Well, never mind," I hummed. "I wonder if they serve the older years coffee in the morning."

Harry remained quiet.
"So you're Harry Potter?" Ron asked, and Harry blinked, before nodding.
"Cool," Ron said. "I'm Ron, Ron Weasley," he added.
"Are you really Harry Potter?" Hermione asked, her voice childish and lightly petulant -mostly it was her tone that was naturally so, I doubted she had anything to be 'petulant' about. "I read about you in books."
Harry made a half-smile and half-grimace at the attention, and I shrugged when he gave me a pleading gaze. "Oh come on, fraternize. Be brave and strike up conversations -I'm sure you're going to make friends quickly."
I eyed a strange-looking poultry-like thing covered in gravy. "Is that turkey!? I'm coming!"

I didn't usually have the occasion to splurge -what with not actually feeling hunger, or being in need of sustenance, but I was cutting Harry a break. He needed it.
And he'd make his canon-friends and everything would be all right, provided the core problems were solved before they could even become real problems.

With dinner over, I gave Harry a nod and he quickly scampered to his feet, rushing towards the teachers' table.
"Headmaster Dumbledore," Harry said meekly, "I really need to talk with you tonight, it's very important!"
Dumbledore blinked his eyes once, made a small smile, and then hummed. "I suppose, mister Potter, that it cannot wait tomorrow?"
Harry shook his head. "No Headmaster, it's really important. Oh," Harry blinked as I gestured towards Snape. "Professor Snape should come too sir."
Here, Dumbledore raised an eyebrow. "Oh? Well, Severus," here he turned towards Snape, "Would it bother you to come in my office? Mister Potter has something urgent he wishes to tell us both."
Snape was half-inclined to say something snarky, but actually managed to cool his expression -especially with the other teachers still nearby- and gave a nod.

Dumbledore brought both Harry and Snape up to his office, walking at a sedated pace -his face amused and his eyes literally twinkling, in whatever sorcery he had managed to master to make them do so.
"So, Mister Potter," Dumbledore said once the Gargoyle moved aside and they were in his office, "What bothers you?"
"Uhm," Harry grimaced, and gave me a pleading look. I gave him a reassuring nod.
"Well, Headmaster," I spoke, and Harry repeated after me. "I need you to listen to what I have to say until the end, because it's very important you take this seriously. I asked for Professor Snape to be present because he will add to my proof that what I'm saying is true, and also because the things I'm about to say might be a bit difficult to understand at first."
Snape rolled his eyes, "I do not have all the night to listen to a child's ramblings-"
"Your patronus is a Doe, isn't it?" I remarked, and Harry repeated my words.

That shut Severus up.
Dumbledore's eyes turned curious.
"After all this time?" I said, and then added, "Always."
"How can you know-" Severus murmured, before turning to look at Albus, who shook his head.
"You showed magic to Lily Evans when you both were children, and you snapped a branch on Petunia's head when she earned your antipathy," I said, and Harry dutifully repeated my words.
"Now this is most curious," Albus said, "But Mister Potter, was this what you wanted to say?"
I shook my head, and Harry mimicked my movement.
"Horcruxes," I said, and as I said it, and Harry said it, Dumbledore's eyes widened, if briefly. "There are seven of them, Headmaster."
"S-Seven?" Dumbledore choked on the word as if it were a curse, and then looked at Harry. "H-How, how do you know that, Harry?"
"It would be complicated to explain the concepts, Headmaster, but I must tell you what they are and where they are located. At least, to the best of my capabilities."
I took a deep breath. "There is a Diary Horcrux, held by Lucius Malfoy. There is a Diadem Horcrux, held in the Room of Requirements, seventh floor of Hogwarts, in front of the tapestry of dancing trolls. Walk thrice in front of the tapestry while wishing for a room to hide something, and you will find the Room of Requirements, and the Diadem of Ravenclaw -the Horcrux- within. There is the Cup Horcrux, the Cup of Hufflepuff, within Bellatrix Lestrange's vault. There is the Slytherin's Locket, which was located inside Black's House, taken by Regulus Black to spite Voldemort and that Kreacher delivered to your desk, didn't he? There is also the Gaunt's ring, hidden and protected by a powerful curse, who I think is somewhere near the Riddle House. Do be careful, headmaster. The Resurrection Stone lies embedded in the ring, and the desire of its use might bring you to your end."

Dumbledore gasped, but I wasn't finished.
"Diary, Diadem, Cup, Locket, Ring, Nagini is the sixth, Voldemort's snake, hidden until her master calls for her. And finally the Seventh Horcrux," I looked at Harry. "is exactly as you fear. Harry Potter's scar."

Dumbledore remained silent for a long while.
"Who are you?" he asked in the end.
"I'm asking Harry to relay my words," I said, "I'm not really in control of him or anything, if you're fearing that. I am an entity that ignores matter, and that you cannot feel nor see nor find with magic. But, and here's the important thing, I have knowledge. A lot of it will not help you, but what can is what I'm giving you."
"I need time to think about-"
"You don't have time," I said, and Harry repeated my words bluntly. "Professor Quirrell is Voldemort, right now. The shadow of Tom is inhabiting his body as we speak, and it is essential he is removed. There is no other choice. You might have hidden the stone well inside the Mirror of Erised, but that still doesn't change the fact that Quirrell is a risk."
I hummed. "That, and you have a Basilisk in your castle's sewers. Second floor girl's bathroom, need a parseltongue to access. Leads to the Chamber of Slytherin, but at the moment he slumbers...and will keep at it, provided nobody wakes him up. Like Quirrell could do, if he isn't stopped now."

Dumbledore's hands were trembling, "What is your name?" he asked in the end.
"I am Shade," I said calmly. "And I know, Dumbledore. I know about the Greater Good, and the Prophecy, and I know about the plan, and about Severus' true loyalties, and I know, I know about the Shrieking Shack, and Remus Lupin, and I know of Sirius Black's innocence, of Peter Pettigrew's guilt. Oh, right, I nearly forgot."
I clapped my hands together. "Ron Weasley has a rat named 'Scabbers'. That rat is in fact Peter Pettigrew in animagus form, he was the Potter's secret keeper. And he's the one who revealed the information to Voldemort."
And Dumbledore collapsed.

I blinked.
"Uh," I mumbled. "He's not dead, is he?"
Dumbledore took a shaky breath, and brought both hands to his face. "I-There's just so much...so much...wrong I did...if Sirius' innocent, so much I'll never...how will he forgive me for that?"
"Oh, I'm sure he will," I said. "He's a Gryffindor. Brash, brave, stupid, arrogant, loyal, honest-to-god naive," I hummed as Harry gave me an affronted look, but repeated my words precisely.
Severus actually smirked at that.
"That said..." I remarked. "There's nothing to fear really. The only way to get the Seventh Horcrux out of Harry is to use the Avada Kedavra on him. Don't you worry, he'll be fine."
Harry bristled.
I shrugged. "He'll get to see the 'Great Beyond' for a few moments. It's a train station for him. Trains come and go and all that."
"T-There is a great..."
"Yes," I said. I was pretty sure Dumbledore would have a heart-attack if this kept up, but I was on a roll, and so...
So I decided to add a little white lie.
"And it was Gellert's spell that killed your sister, Dumbledore. Not yours."

I shouldn't have said that.

Dumbledore sank on his seat, and exhaled a long, very long breath I didn't know a human could ever exhale.
And then he stopped moving.

I blinked.
My eyes widened.
They widened as-no-it couldn't-

Clunk.

I had given Dumbledore a heart attack.
And I disappeared as Harry's eyes widened in the realization that through my words, he had just killed Dumbledore with a heart attack.

I just...I just remained there, in the darkness, and then I began to laugh.
I just laughed.
I laughed as tears fell down my cheeks at the realization of just what the fuck I had done.
I had fucking killed Dumbledore.
And without wanting to.
My heart drummed in my chest as I laughed and cried, as I couldn't hold it in, and I just let it all go, bit after bit, incoherent laughter and screaming following closely after my throat became sore.

And then the darkness disappeared, and I watched as Jane Shepard slammed a full-auto of clips into a guard in the Prison-Ship 'Purgatory'.
Miranda and Jacob were by her side.
And I just couldn't help my shoulders hunching over as I took a deep breath, before whispering.
"Good Morning, Vietnam."

//Parameters are all over the charts. They are still holding within acceptable limits. You two brutally fucked up probability!
//Corruption cannot be allowed to spread. Contingencies are required to hold Corruption within limits. You still brutally fucked up probability!
//Within limits, it was an acceptable course of action. It was a mere Heart Attack, elderly, shocked, too much information-all within limits. Nobody will believe that! YOU. FUCKED. UP. PROBABILITY.
 
... I think this is the first HP snippet of this story I liked.:D

It's just so ... random. I don't think I've ever seen someone give Dumbledore a heart attack by shock in fanfiction before.
 
Chapter Forty

"Gryffindor!" the Hat screamed, and I blinked. I was pretty sure Harry wouldn't have gone with the 'Not Slytherin' jibe, but still...he had ended up in Gryffindor. Then again, it had to take a special amount of 'bravery' to leave behind your adoptive family and strike out on your own.
As Harry Potter sat at the Gryffindor's table, I floated quietly behind him, humming as I watched the proceedings finish.
"Gryffindor, uh?" I remarked. "The hat was proud of your bravery?"
"I'm sorry," Harry mumbled, his face down to stare at his plate. "I tried to tell him..."
"It's not a problem," I replied with a shrug. "Can't change who we are. And you were very brave in following my directions anyway."
Harry nodded and then looked at the teachers' table. He winced when his eyes met Quirrell's, but then moved to where Dumbledore was -smiling by himself.
"You ready for this?" I asked.
"Uh-uh," Harry mumbled.

Dumbledore gave his usual warning about the third floor, and soon that was followed by the four words spouted by him, and the feast began.
It really was all as greasy as the films depicted -but frankly, greasy was good when you had to put your mind at ease.
Like I was doing.
Eating fried chicken.
But pumpkin juice was really beyond me -didn't like pumpkin, never liked it, never will- and thankfully, there was something other than pumpkin juice at the table.
"Oh, the staff table has wine! Why can't I have wine too?" I whined, "That looks like really good red wine to boot!"
I frowned. "Well, never mind," I hummed. "I wonder if they serve the older years coffee in the morning."

Harry remained quiet.
"So you're Harry Potter?" Ron asked, and Harry blinked, before nodding.
"Cool," Ron said. "I'm Ron, Ron Weasley," he added.
"Are you really Harry Potter?" Hermione asked, her voice childish and lightly petulant -mostly it was her tone that was naturally so, I doubted she had anything to be 'petulant' about. "I read about you in books."
Harry made a half-smile and half-grimace at the attention, and I shrugged when he gave me a pleading gaze. "Oh come on, fraternize. Be brave and strike up conversations -I'm sure you're going to make friends quickly."
I eyed a strange-looking poultry-like thing covered in gravy. "Is that turkey!? I'm coming!"

I didn't usually have the occasion to splurge -what with not actually feeling hunger, or being in need of sustenance, but I was cutting Harry a break. He needed it.
And he'd make his canon-friends and everything would be all right, provided the core problems were solved before they could even become real problems.

With dinner over, I gave Harry a nod and he quickly scampered to his feet, rushing towards the teachers' table.
"Headmaster Dumbledore," Harry said meekly, "I really need to talk with you tonight, it's very important!"
Dumbledore blinked his eyes once, made a small smile, and then hummed. "I suppose, mister Potter, that it cannot wait tomorrow?"
Harry shook his head. "No Headmaster, it's really important. Oh," Harry blinked as I gestured towards Snape. "Professor Snape should come too sir."
Here, Dumbledore raised an eyebrow. "Oh? Well, Severus," here he turned towards Snape, "Would it bother you to come in my office? Mister Potter has something urgent he wishes to tell us both."
Snape was half-inclined to say something snarky, but actually managed to cool his expression -especially with the other teachers still nearby- and gave a nod.

Dumbledore brought both Harry and Snape up to his office, walking at a sedated pace -his face amused and his eyes literally twinkling, in whatever sorcery he had managed to master to make them do so.
"So, Mister Potter," Dumbledore said once the Gargoyle moved aside and they were in his office, "What bothers you?"
"Uhm," Harry grimaced, and gave me a pleading look. I gave him a reassuring nod.
"Well, Headmaster," I spoke, and Harry repeated after me. "I need you to listen to what I have to say until the end, because it's very important you take this seriously. I asked for Professor Snape to be present because he will add to my proof that what I'm saying is true, and also because the things I'm about to say might be a bit difficult to understand at first."
Snape rolled his eyes, "I do not have all the night to listen to a child's ramblings-"
"Your patronus is a Doe, isn't it?" I remarked, and Harry repeated my words.

That shut Severus up.
Dumbledore's eyes turned curious.
"After all this time?" I said, and then added, "Always."
"How can you know-" Severus murmured, before turning to look at Albus, who shook his head.
"You showed magic to Lily Evans when you both were children, and you snapped a branch on Petunia's head when she earned your antipathy," I said, and Harry dutifully repeated my words.
"Now this is most curious," Albus said, "But Mister Potter, was this what you wanted to say?"
I shook my head, and Harry mimicked my movement.
"Horcruxes," I said, and as I said it, and Harry said it, Dumbledore's eyes widened, if briefly. "There are seven of them, Headmaster."
"S-Seven?" Dumbledore choked on the word as if it were a curse, and then looked at Harry. "H-How, how do you know that, Harry?"
"It would be complicated to explain the concepts, Headmaster, but I must tell you what they are and where they are located. At least, to the best of my capabilities."
I took a deep breath. "There is a Diary Horcrux, held by Lucius Malfoy. There is a Diadem Horcrux, held in the Room of Requirements, seventh floor of Hogwarts, in front of the tapestry of dancing trolls. Walk thrice in front of the tapestry while wishing for a room to hide something, and you will find the Room of Requirements, and the Diadem of Ravenclaw -the Horcrux- within. There is the Cup Horcrux, the Cup of Hufflepuff, within Bellatrix Lestrange's vault. There is the Slytherin's Locket, which was located inside Black's House, taken by Regulus Black to spite Voldemort and that Kreacher delivered to your desk, didn't he? There is also the Gaunt's ring, hidden and protected by a powerful curse, who I think is somewhere near the Riddle House. Do be careful, headmaster. The Resurrection Stone lies embedded in the ring, and the desire of its use might bring you to your end."

Dumbledore gasped, but I wasn't finished.
"Diary, Diadem, Cup, Locket, Ring, Nagini is the sixth, Voldemort's snake, hidden until her master calls for her. And finally the Seventh Horcrux," I looked at Harry. "is exactly as you fear. Harry Potter's scar."

Dumbledore remained silent for a long while.
"Who are you?" he asked in the end.
"I'm asking Harry to relay my words," I said, "I'm not really in control of him or anything, if you're fearing that. I am an entity that ignores matter, and that you cannot feel nor see nor find with magic. But, and here's the important thing, I have knowledge. A lot of it will not help you, but what can is what I'm giving you."
"I need time to think about-"
"You don't have time," I said, and Harry repeated my words bluntly. "Professor Quirrell is Voldemort, right now. The shadow of Tom is inhabiting his body as we speak, and it is essential he is removed. There is no other choice. You might have hidden the stone well inside the Mirror of Erised, but that still doesn't change the fact that Quirrell is a risk."
I hummed. "That, and you have a Basilisk in your castle's sewers. Second floor girl's bathroom, need a parseltongue to access. Leads to the Chamber of Slytherin, but at the moment he slumbers...and will keep at it, provided nobody wakes him up. Like Quirrell could do, if he isn't stopped now."

Dumbledore's hands were trembling, "What is your name?" he asked in the end.
"I am Shade," I said calmly. "And I know, Dumbledore. I know about the Greater Good, and the Prophecy, and I know about the plan, and about Severus' true loyalties, and I know, I know about the Shrieking Shack, and Remus Lupin, and I know of Sirius Black's innocence, of Peter Pettigrew's guilt. Oh, right, I nearly forgot."
I clapped my hands together. "Ron Weasley has a rat named 'Scabbers'. That rat is in fact Peter Pettigrew in animagus form, he was the Potter's secret keeper. And he's the one who revealed the information to Voldemort."
And Dumbledore collapsed.

I blinked.
"Uh," I mumbled. "He's not dead, is he?"
Dumbledore took a shaky breath, and brought both hands to his face. "I-There's just so much...so much...wrong I did...if Sirius' innocent, so much I'll never...how will he forgive me for that?"
"Oh, I'm sure he will," I said. "He's a Gryffindor. Brash, brave, stupid, arrogant, loyal, honest-to-god naive," I hummed as Harry gave me an affronted look, but repeated my words precisely.
Severus actually smirked at that.
"That said..." I remarked. "There's nothing to fear really. The only way to get the Seventh Horcrux out of Harry is to use the Avada Kedavra on him. Don't you worry, he'll be fine."
Harry bristled.
I shrugged. "He'll get to see the 'Great Beyond' for a few moments. It's a train station for him. Trains come and go and all that."
"T-There is a great..."
"Yes," I said. I was pretty sure Dumbledore would have a heart-attack if this kept up, but I was on a roll, and so...
So I decided to add a little white lie.
"And it was Gellert's spell that killed your sister, Dumbledore. Not yours."

I shouldn't have said that.

Dumbledore sank on his seat, and exhaled a long, very long breath I didn't know a human could ever exhale.
And then he stopped moving.

I blinked.
My eyes widened.
They widened as-no-it couldn't-

Clunk.

I had given Dumbledore a heart attack.
And I disappeared as Harry's eyes widened in the realization that through my words, he had just killed Dumbledore with a heart attack.

I just...I just remained there, in the darkness, and then I began to laugh.
I just laughed.
I laughed as tears fell down my cheeks at the realization of just what the fuck I had done.
I had fucking killed Dumbledore.
And without wanting to.
My heart drummed in my chest as I laughed and cried, as I couldn't hold it in, and I just let it all go, bit after bit, incoherent laughter and screaming following closely after my throat became sore.

And then the darkness disappeared, and I watched as Jane Shepard slammed a full-auto of clips into a guard in the Prison-Ship 'Purgatory'.
Miranda and Jacob were by her side.
And I just couldn't help my shoulders hunching over as I took a deep breath, before whispering.
"Good Morning, Vietnam."

//Parameters are all over the charts. They are still holding within acceptable limits. You two brutally fucked up probability!
//Corruption cannot be allowed to spread. Contingencies are required to hold Corruption within limits. You still brutally fucked up probability!
//Within limits, it was an acceptable course of action. It was a mere Heart Attack, elderly, shocked, too much information-all within limits. Nobody will believe that! YOU. FUCKED. UP. PROBABILITY.
Well that's a way to kill Dumbledore that I have not seen before.
 
PFFT-HAHAHAHA! :D

You know, after that line about Dumbledore getting a heart attack, I was waiting for the moment to pass and for Snape or someone to do something and save him. Not for him to actually die. For a bit, it broke my SoD, then I read the line "You two brutally fucked up probability!" and I laughed my ass off as it all sank in.

Can't wait for the return visit to HP World. :D

Now, let's see what Jane is up to.
 
Well...ouch. I'll admit, I didn't foresee this happening. Harry's reaction upon the SI's return will not be a happy one. So glad Snape heard that though, as the SI has someone besides Dumbledore knowing the important stuff now.
 
Well...ouch. I'll admit, I didn't foresee this happening. Harry's reaction upon the SI's return will not be a happy one. So glad Snape heard that though, as the SI has someone besides Dumbledore knowing the important stuff now.

How's Dumbledore dying in the first year within acceptable limits anyway?
Snape still heard everything necessary and will probably do something about it, perhaps just out of spite for Voldemort.

For better or worse, I don't know.
However, the timeline didn't change overly much, from whatever point of view the unknown entities have.
 
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It seems to me as though shade is going through an experiment to test how much stress the human mind can take before cracking. It also seems to me that he is close to cracking right now.
 
It seems to me as though shade is going through an experiment to test how much stress the human mind can take before cracking. It also seems to me that he is close to cracking right now.

uh it seemed to me that shade was already cracked from the first chapter....oh well......are the fictional worlds you've chosen the final list or are you planning on going anywhere else....I would find Shade connected to Clark Kent in Smallville interesting or Sam and Dean Winchester.
 
uh it seemed to me that shade was already cracked from the first chapter....oh well......are the fictional worlds you've chosen the final list or are you planning on going anywhere else....I would find Shade connected to Clark Kent in Smallville interesting or Sam and Dean Winchester.
I apologize it appears i was not entirely clear. Cracking of the human mind as in completely gone and separated from reality, I also meant that he is more cracked now than he already was. I do apologize if I was not clear.
 
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