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[X] Plan Grossly Incandescent
-[X] Serial number (write in what it is), can include numbers and letters, please no more than 10 total characters. 1 CP
--[X] 5H1R0
-[X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit. 1CP
-[X] Human looking metallic face, think Exos from destiny. 1 CP
-[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
-[X] Charisma Lv 1
-[X] Wisdom Lv 1
-[X] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
-[X] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
-[X] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
-[X] Overdrive, a spell which builds up power then pumps it into your flight and enhancement spells, making you waaayy stronger, faster, and more durable for a little while. It has a high ish cost and takes a bit to cast though (elemental power will cause you to be shrouded in the chosen element, boosting melee damage, rip and tear, rip and tear until it is done) 1CP
--[X] Elemental power (Tints a spell's effect with the chosen element. On non combat spells this can allow the spell to deal damage or boost things it otherwise couldn't)
---[X]Radiant (Shorter range, mildly higher cost, but will rip the target apart with a little time)

Picking up the level 1 skills is oof, but I think a little cleverness and a Radiant Power Overdrive should do.
 
[X] Plan: In the Image of the Creator(s)/Playing God
Name:
-[X] Serial number (write in what it is), can include numbers and letters, please no more than 10 total characters. 1 CP
--[X] 13-TH
Body design:
-[X] You are in fact a cyborg, with cloned biological components. More arcane hommunculus route. 4CP
Face:
-[X] Fully human looking face, but an utterly average one. 2CP
Voice:
-[X] (Default) Mute/Text only to communicate.
Body stats (you can invest up to 4 CP here):
-[X] Mana capacity (you need more of this if you want to cast a lot of spells)
-[X] Mana efficiency (ranges attack power/cost.)
Personality/mental stats: (each of these costs one character point for the first level.)
-[X] Guts Lv1
-[X] Piloting/flight skills Lv1

This is an anime, hell did you expect?
Edit: Switched Body stat: Sensors to Personality/mental stats: Guts Lv1, thought about it think it fits a bit better.
 
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[X] Plan ARC-U: Autonomous Room "Cleaning" Unit
-[X] Serial number (R00-MB4)
-[X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit.
-[X] (Default) One eyed robotic face.
-[X] Robotic voice
-[X] Speed
-[X] Melee enhancement (how good the melee weapons you have are, if you have any)
-[X] Science (Knowledge of scientific theorems and equations, allows you to use elements of advanced science in your plans(I.E knowing that shooting X will cause chemical reaction Y)) Lv 1
-[X] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
-[X] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
-[X] Magic blade, a weapon of pure magical force, gives you an option for short range engagements. (Cheaper melee boosting option, compared to overdrive)
--[X] Vorpal blade, a few modifications to the blade allow it to negate and pass through magical defenses with rather, disturbing ease.
--[X] Lightning (Higher Mana costs, way more damage, especially to technological foes)
 
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X] Overdrive, a spell which builds up power then pumps it into your flight and enhancement spells, making you waaayy stronger, faster, and more durable for a little while. It has a high ish cost and takes a bit to cast though (elemental power will cause you to be shrouded in the chosen element, boosting melee damage, rip and tear, rip and tear until it is done) 1CP
--[X] Elemental power (Tints a spell's effect with the chosen element. On non combat spells this can allow the spell to deal damage or boost things it otherwise couldn't)
---[X]Radiant (Shorter range, mildly higher cost, but will rip the target apart with a little time)
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This, +the ripper upgrade, is basically the highest unarmed melee boost you can get through magic at this point. Also, could people please refrain from voting until I can get on my computer tonight and do some edits to the update?
BookDragon5 said:
X] Magic blade, a weapon of pure magical force, gives you an option for short range engagements. (Cheaper melee boosting option, compared to overdrive)
--[X] Vorpal blade, a few modifications to the blade allow it to negate and pass through magical defenses with rather, disturbing ease.
--[X] Lightning (Higher Mana costs, way more damage, especially to technological foes)
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This, compared to Radiant overdrive, will allow you to punch through most magical defenses with ease, and has a lower Mana cost which means you can sustain it for longer. The lightning aspect will also mean it can negate certain electronic defense systems. Overall, this will let you deal a good amount of melee damage if you can get close enough.
 
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Plan: Not a human, but a person
[x] (Default) No name, you're just a bot after all.
[x](Default) Skeletal and clearly robotic
[x] (Default) One eyed robotic face.
[x] (Default) Mute/Text only to communicate.
[x] Mana capacity (you need more of this if you want to
[x] Mana efficiency (ranges attack power/cost.)
[x] Charisma Lv 1
[x] Wisdom Lv 1
[x] Science (Knowledge of scientific theorems and equations, allows you to use elements of advanced science in your plans(I.E knowing that shooting X will cause chemical reaction Y)) Lv 1
[x] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
[x] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
[x] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
[x] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
[x] Long range (Can only be taken with spells that have range.)
[x] Magic beam, a beam of magical energy, nuff said. Higher damage and cast time than magic bullet, and deals constant damage while consuming a constant stream of Mana.
We can learn more spells later.For now we need just one really effective one, also grabbing any personality i can, also long rage explains how we survived.
 
[ ] Plan: the ancient Owl
[ ]Callsign: Owl (2CP)
[ ] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit. (1CP)
[ ]Voice: (Default)
[ ]Body: (4CP)
-[ ]Mana capacity
-[ ]Mass-Production Status
-[ ]Armor
-[ ]Carrying Capacity
[ ]Personality (2CP)
-[ ]Wise
-[ ]Arcane
[ ]Signature Spells (3CP)
[ ]Barrier
-[ ]Circular Barrier
--[ ]Quick Casting
-[ ] Wizard's fortress
-[ ] Space fortress

The idea is basically a tanky spell-caster mook that's great for area denial and being a very hard target to break, hence whyOwl's survived where many of his fellows have not.
 
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Right, I've fixed the update a bit, looks like I didn't screw up as badly as I thought. Though we will need to hold a vote about the main character's gender (Or which gender they identify as) later.
 
[X] Plan: Melee Burst
-[X] Serial Number 'HK-45'
-[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
-[X] Body: (4CP)
--[X] Speed
--[X] Sensors
--[X] Mana capacity (you need more of this if you want to
--[X] Melee enhancement (how good the melee weapons you have are, if you have any)
-[X] Wisdom Lv 1
-[X] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
-[X] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
-[X] Elemental power (Tints a spell's effect with the chosen element. On non combat spells this can allow the spell to deal damage or boost things it otherwise couldn't)
--[X] Radiant (Shorter range, mildly higher cost, but will rip the target apart with a little time)
-[X] Overdrive, a spell which builds up power then pumps it into your flight and enhancement spells, making you waaayy stronger, faster, and more durable for a little while. It has a high ish cost and takes a bit to cast though (elemental power will cause you to be shrouded in the chosen element, boosting melee damage, rip and tear, rip and tear until it is done) 1CP
 
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[X] Plan: One job bird.
[X]Callsign: Canary (2CP)
[X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit. (1CP)
[X]Voice:
-[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
[X]Body stats: (4CP)
-[X]Mana capacity
-[X]Mass-Production Status
-[X]Speed
-[X]Sensors
[X]Personality (2CP)
-[X]Arcane
-[X] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
[X]Signature Spell (2CP)
[X] Mana Ping, a sensor spell which sends out a pulse of Mana and reads the return. Signature version has higher range and resolution. It costs more though meaning you can't entirely ditch the normal version. (Note, adding elemental power to this will make the Mana pulse damage enemies somewhat.)
-[X] Disruptor ping, a modification to the Mana Ping spell which allows the pulse of Mana to disrupt other spells, in particular it scrambles enemy sensors in an area for a time. 1CP
-[X] Quick Casting

Basically, instead of a walking tank, a speedy scout!
 
Alright, I can update more consistently and with higher quality over the weekend, so I would recommend you guys consolidate your votes. Not that I don't like the diverse set of ideas though. I like that people are actually discussing this and this seems to be a harder vote to figure out what to do in.
 
Right, doing some initial tallying.
Edit: Looks like Plan grossly incandescent is in the lead, but only by one vote and with four votes for other things outweighing the 3 votes for it. So I either need another vote for that plan, or for people to consolidate their plans and votes in order to get a lead. Also, just so people know, talking to the protag with a robot voice could very well cut off social options with them, or at least make them way more difficult. And you can choose not to spend CP if you want to save it for later.
Edit 2: Alright, if no further opposition to the plan is raised then I will be going with plan Grossly incandescent and updating tomorrow.
Adhoc vote count started by someplaneguy on Jan 18, 2020 at 10:35 AM, finished with 20 posts and 9 votes.
  • [X] Plan Grossly Incandescent
    -[X] Serial number (write in what it is), can include numbers and letters, please no more than 10 total characters. 1 CP
    --[X] 5H1R0
    -[X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit. 1CP
    -[X] Human looking metallic face, think Exos from destiny. 1 CP
    -[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
    -[X] Charisma Lv 1
    -[X] Wisdom Lv 1
    -[X] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
    -[X] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
    -[X] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
    -[X] Overdrive, a spell which builds up power then pumps it into your flight and enhancement spells, making you waaayy stronger, faster, and more durable for a little while. It has a high ish cost and takes a bit to cast though (elemental power will cause you to be shrouded in the chosen element, boosting melee damage, rip and tear, rip and tear until it is done) 1CP
    --[X] Elemental power (Tints a spell's effect with the chosen element. On non combat spells this can allow the spell to deal damage or boost things it otherwise couldn't)
    ---[X]Radiant (Shorter range, mildly higher cost, but will rip the target apart with a little time)
    [X] Plan: In the Image of the Creator(s)/Playing God
    -[X] Serial number (write in what it is), can include numbers and letters, please no more than 10 total characters. 1 CP
    --[X] 13-TH
    -[X] You are in fact a cyborg, with cloned biological components. More arcane hommunculus route. 4CP
    -[X] Fully human looking face, but an utterly average one. 2CP
    -[X] (Default) Mute/Text only to communicate.
    -[X] Mana capacity (you need more of this if you want to cast a lot of spells)
    -[X] Mana efficiency (ranges attack power/cost.)
    -[X] Guts Lv1
    -[X] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
    [X] Plan: One job bird.
    [X]Signature Spell (2CP)
    [X]Personality (2CP)
    -[X]Arcane
    -[X] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
    [X]Body stats: (4CP)
    -[X]Mana capacity
    -[X]Mass-Production Status
    -[X] Speed
    -[X]Sensors
    [X]Voice:
    -[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
    [X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit. (1CP)
    [X]Callsign: Canary (2CP)
    [X] Plan: Melee Burst
    -[X] Serial Number 'HK-45'
    -[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
    -[X] Body: (4CP)
    --[X] Speed
    --[X] Sensors
    --[X] Mana capacity (you need more of this if you want to
    --[X] Melee enhancement (how good the melee weapons you have are, if you have any)
    -[X] Wisdom Lv 1
    -[X] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
    -[X] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
    -[X] Elemental power (Tints a spell's effect with the chosen element. On non combat spells this can allow the spell to deal damage or boost things it otherwise couldn't)
    --[X] Radiant (Shorter range, mildly higher cost, but will rip the target apart with a little time)
    -[X] Overdrive, a spell which builds up power then pumps it into your flight and enhancement spells, making you waaayy stronger, faster, and more durable for a little while. It has a high ish cost and takes a bit to cast though (elemental power will cause you to be shrouded in the chosen element, boosting melee damage, rip and tear, rip and tear until it is done) 1CP
    [x] Magic beam, a beam of magical energy, nuff said. Higher damage and cast time than magic bullet, and deals constant damage while consuming a constant stream of Mana.
    [x] Long range (Can only be taken with spells that have range.)
    [x] Piloting/flight skills Lv1
    [x] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
    [x] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
    [x] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
    [x] Science (Knowledge of scientific theorems and equations, allows you to use elements of advanced science in your plans(I.E knowing that shooting X will cause chemical reaction Y)) Lv 1
    [x] Wisdom Lv 1
    [x] Charisma Lv 1
    [x] Mana efficiency (ranges attack power/cost.)
    [x] Mana capacity (you need more of this if you want to
    [x] (Default) Mute/Text only to communicate.
    [x] (Default) One eyed robotic face.
    [x](Default) Skeletal and clearly robotic
    [x] (Default) No name, you're just a bot after all.
    [X] Plan ARC-U: Autonomous Room "Cleaning" Unit
    -[X] Serial number (R00-MB4)
    -[X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit.
    -[X] (Default) One eyed robotic face.
    -[X] Robotic voice
    -[X] Speed
    -[X] Melee enhancement (how good the melee weapons you have are, if you have any)
    -[X] Science (Knowledge of scientific theorems and equations, allows you to use elements of advanced science in your plans(I.E knowing that shooting X will cause chemical reaction Y)) Lv 1
    -[X] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
    -[X] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
    -[X] Magic blade, a weapon of pure magical force, gives you an option for short range engagements. (Cheaper melee boosting option, compared to overdrive)
    --[X] Vorpal blade, a few modifications to the blade allow it to negate and pass through magical defenses with rather, disturbing ease.
    --[X] Lightning (Higher Mana costs, way more damage, especially to technological foes)
    [X] Mana Ping, a sensor spell which sends out a pulse of Mana and reads the return. Signature version has higher range and resolution. It costs more though meaning you can't entirely ditch the normal version. (Note, adding elemental power to this will make the Mana pulse damage enemies somewhat.)
    -[X] Disruptor ping, a modification to the Mana Ping spell which allows the pulse of Mana to disrupt other spells, in particular it scrambles enemy sensors in an area for a time. 1CP
    -[X] Quick Casting
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    Winning plan: [X] Plan Grossly Incandescent
    -[X] Serial number (write in what it is), can include numbers and letters, please no more than 10 total characters. 1 CP
    --[X] 5H1R0
    -[X] Your design conceals the fact that you are a robot, you mostly look like a human in a suit. 1CP
    -[X] Human looking metallic face, think Exos from destiny. 1 CP
    -[X] Robotic voice 1 CP
    -[X] Charisma Lv 1
    -[X] Wisdom Lv 1
    -[X] Technical (knowledge of technology, mundane and magical. Allows you to try and exploit vulnerabilities in enemy gear or upgrade your own given time.) Lv1
    -[X] Arcane (Knowledge of magic) Lv 1
    -[X] Cleverness (underhanded schemes and anything related to intelligence not covered by the above) Lv 1
    -[X] Overdrive, a spell which builds up power then pumps it into your flight and enhancement spells, making you waaayy stronger, faster, and more durable for a little while. It has a high ish cost and takes a bit to cast though (elemental power will cause you to be shrouded in the chosen element, boosting melee damage, rip and tear, rip and tear until it is done) 1CP
    --[X] Elemental power (Tints a spell's effect with the chosen element. On non combat spells this can allow the spell to deal damage or boost things it otherwise couldn't)
    ---[X]Radiant (Shorter range, mildly higher cost, but will rip the target apart with a little time)
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    You remember now, lying here in a corner of the hangar, the falling of the colony. You were fighting alongside a squadron of your fellow robots and some normal human mages. You remember the ambush, how a routine patrol turned into a massacre with you as the only survivor, you remember flying back to headquarters, desperately trying to follow your last command and get the message about what was going to happen next back to HQ. You remember watching the colony fall, the massive station hurtling towards earth. You remember arriving barely in time to convey your message. But, you also remember that you couldn't think like this before. Something has changed. Where before you simply followed orders to the letter, now you can think, and act, and react. You also have a new spell, Radiant Overdrive, a thing you apparently developed at some point between now and when you got back to HQ. But, there are holes. Many, many holes. One thing you are certain of is your serial number is 5H1R0. And the fact that you are currently in a remote corner of the ready hangar, fully repaired, and that you are currently connected to the carrier you are serving on, the EDF SS Daedelus. What do you do while you wait to be deployed?
    [ ][Do] Write in
    (Additional vote, does 5H1R0 Consider themself
    [ ][Gender] male
    [ ][Gender] Female
    or
    [ ][Gender] Other )
     
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    Additional vote, does 1H3R0 Consider
    [ ] male
    [ ] Female
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    I'm going to assume this is about how 1H3R0 sees themself and will not result in standing around and considering genders.
    [X][Gender] Other
    (Also I'd highly recommend the use of tasks, i.e. us voting with [X][Gender] <Vote> and [X][Do] <Vote>)
     
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