AN: People keep thinking that I'm the one coming up with the start-of-chapter quotes, and I don't want to keep possibly stealing APGTE's thunder by using canon epigraphs when one of my goals of this is to get more people reading APGTE and writing APGTE fanfic. All the epigraphs prior to this have been canonical, but further epigraphs will be new.
TBH the actual effect has been that I want to look up APGTE and do a quick read of all the epigraphs back to back, without paying any attention to the chapters.
 
I blinked and tried to pay attention to Roma's lecture. I had the niggling feeling that there was an important idea I should bring up, and I hated that I couldn't remember what it was supposed to be. Well, maybe I'd figure it out later and could ask then.
She's going to forget to ask, isn't she?
 
Damn, Roma is a manipulative smug bitch, and I can't help but like her anyway. I really want her to meet Lisa now. Whether they liked each other or not, the proverbial, or not-so-proverbial, fireworks would be very entertaining.
 
I get that Roma was a Dread Empress and all, but I think she's still been pretty good influence on Taylor, even if she's manipulative at times. Earth Bet is a rather awful place. Teaching Taylor some ruthless cunning probably isn't a bad thing.

She seems pretty genre aware. It's doubtful she'll betray Taylor. They'll probably have many future disagreements about what constitutes ethical behaviour though.

Funnily enough, I actually think it could have been worse if a dead Hero was sent to this universe instead. Most were murder happy zealots and would be telling Taylor to hunt down villains and kill them in their sleep.
 
Funnily enough, I actually think it could have been worse if a dead Hero was sent to this universe instead. Most were murder happy zealots and would be telling Taylor to hunt down villains and kill them in their sleep.
Most Heroes aren't all like the Saint of Sword and the Mirror Knight. Also, nearly all of the people they murder are absolutely monsters.

Tariq would have asked her to be a hero, and would have been a great mentor. It's kind of his thing, and under his guidance Taylor would become a compassionate yet pragmatic Hero.

Hanno post-Keter or Roland would have been also great. But most other Heroes wouldn't have the Story knowledge to efficiently help her.
 
She's going to forget to ask, isn't she?
It took the end of the world to break the masquerade in canon :V
Damn, Roma is a manipulative smug bitch, and I can't help but like her anyway. I really want her to meet Lisa now. Whether they liked each other or not, the proverbial, or not-so-proverbial, fireworks would be very entertaining.
Tattletale would have a field day with Fate.
They'll probably have many future disagreements about what constitutes ethical behaviour though.
Morality arguments: the fic?
 
I mean nothing really stop Taylor from becoming a Hero or gaining a Hero name I think
Like Squire, Heiress is a transitional name though more open that Squire
And well the Evil Mentor teach the hero is a trope even known by Preasi
Example I remember Black telling something about how Transitional Names were dangerous because it could be that it a alignment Evil Squire could reject Black Knight and becoming White Knight
Though he talked too about the Natural Mentor Hazard trope
 
I get that Roma was a Dread Empress and all, but I think she's still been pretty good influence on Taylor, even if she's manipulative at times. Earth Bet is a rather awful place. Teaching Taylor some ruthless cunning probably isn't a bad thing.

She seems pretty genre aware. It's doubtful she'll betray Taylor. They'll probably have many future disagreements about what constitutes ethical behaviour though.

Funnily enough, I actually think it could have been worse if a dead Hero was sent to this universe instead. Most were murder happy zealots and would be telling Taylor to hunt down villains and kill them in their sleep.
I mean, it is following in aPGtE's wake with how Black and Catherine's relationship developed to the point that they both admitted that Black was effectively
her father figure
. It's just that said development in no way stopped Catherine from admitted that Black did have some great flaws. Some which she picked up, and some that she moved past because they were not how she wished for things to develop.
 
I mean, it is following in aPGtE's wake with how Black and Catherine's relationship developed to the point that they both admitted that Black was effectively
her father figure
. It's just that said development in no way stopped Catherine from admitted that Black did have some great flaws. Some which she picked up, and some that she moved past because they were not how she wished for things to develop.
Black can be seen throw willful ignorance and the main pov bias as a decent enough person that maybe even has some good points instead of classical villain whining about how above "cheats" and one sin, one grace is the way.
Roma even from just what we have seen here is a self-aware believer in the dogma of below and the ways of the Dread Empire which in universe can be showed in a good light to a degree to manipulate Tay but her actual views makes her the reverse of sympathetic.
 
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She seems pretty genre aware. It's doubtful she'll betray Taylor. They'll probably have many future disagreements about what constitutes ethical behaviour though.
With Roma getting a body soon fate has the opportunity to create a 'family drama' with Roma as the 'mom' Taylor as the 'child' and (with a bit of manipulation on fate's part to cause a misunderstanding) a hero as the 'father'.
 
Most Heroes aren't all like the Saint of Sword and the Mirror Knight. Also, nearly all of the people they murder are absolutely monsters.

Tariq would have asked her to be a hero, and would have been a great mentor. It's kind of his thing, and under his guidance Taylor would become a compassionate yet pragmatic Hero.

Hanno post-Keter or Roland would have been also great. But most other Heroes wouldn't have the Story knowledge to efficiently help her.

Even Tariq started an angelic plague to kill a villian, murdering an entire innocent town in the process. I have no doubt he would be encouraging Taylor to be a hero, I just don't think the PRT would agree with his definition of one. He was also perfectly willing to kill Kat despite her giving extremely generous terms for peace, because he was threatened by her sheer existence as a villian.

There's no way the heroes of Calernia (at least before the later books in the series) would ever fight non-lethally against the villians, especially those like Hookwolf or Lung.
 
Either that is QA... or the Powers that sent Roma to Earth Bet and gave Taylor her Name are actively participating... Interesting.
Pink is QA, we know it from the author's other stories, it could be different here, but I think the author would have used a different shade if she did it to avoid confusion.
Hello there QA, glad to see you're doing all right. Might you be interested in learning about how narrative tropes are amazingly useful for turning your life around even when you've spent the last several billion years being a genocidal mad-scientist-type villain with no free will?
QA has a role in thr cycle which is pretty horrifying, crippling all other shards under Scion's hands, before being nearly destroyed by him when she is last, thrown aside and weakened while all the other nobles can give powerful noble because she is too dangerous to leave whole in the cycle and she tends to destroy it.

Turning this around is great for her because she would call the shots, but don't fool yourself into thinking she is a good person and lacks free will, she isn't malicious, in that her morality is different, but she would likely easily torture entire worlds rven without Scion, she isn't against the cycle, and if she controlled the entity she would likely continue as normal with only a few changes.
Why would it necessarily be the Entity? It could be another Power sending Roma to Earth.
Roma mentioned things similar to shards about how she came here (namely them eating hell or chunks of it but not understanding much about magic, at least at the time), Taylor got her powers from trigger, and Roma seems to be under the leash of QA.
 
Even Tariq started an angelic plague to kill a villian, murdering an entire innocent town in the process. I have no doubt he would be encouraging Taylor to be a hero, I just don't think the PRT would agree with his definition of one. He was also perfectly willing to kill Kat despite her giving extremely generous terms for peace, because he was threatened by her sheer existence as a villian.
Yes, Tariq doesn't hesitate to do horrible things, but he does so only after trying everything else. There wasn't another way to stop Black from escaping and causing hundreds of thousands of innocent deaths.

And he's pragmatic and smart enough to not do so where the PRT can see Taylor. Or at all, given that the risk of discovery is very high. Tariq isn't a moron.

He wasn't offended by Cat's existence as a Villain, he was perfectly willing to ally with Cat at the Third Liesse. He was concerned that being a Villain and a ruler, she would make Callow's Story a Villainous one. Given that the other Villainous nations of Calernia are Praes, Stygia, the Everdark, Bellerophon, the Chain of Hunger and Keter, he's right to be afraid.
There's no way the heroes of Calernia (at least before the later books in the series) would ever fight non-lethally against the villians, especially those like Hookwolf or Lung.
All Heroes aren't idiots, they could very well see how impractical it would be, and that Taylor wouldn't go with it. And they would likely be more focused on protecting the actual people.
 
There's no way the heroes of Calernia (at least before the later books in the series) would ever fight non-lethally against the villians, especially those like Hookwolf or Lung.

Would they be unjustified in doing so, though? A fight against Lung or Hookwolf necessarily involves lethal force (at least on Lung or Hookwolf's part).

There's a place for less-than-lethal options, but who would suggest that people fighting Lung or Hookwolfs' IRL equivalents limit themselves to tasers, tear gas, and harsh language?
 
Would they be unjustified in doing so, though? A fight against Lung or Hookwolf necessarily involves lethal force (at least on Lung or Hookwolf's part).

There's a place for less-than-lethal options, but who would suggest that people fighting Lung or Hookwolfs' IRL equivalents limit themselves to tasers, tear gas, and harsh language?

If I was writing the laws on Bet, it would absolutely be legal to defend yourself with lethal force against known mass murderers that are in the process of trying to kill you.

Unfortunately, Cauldron basically wrote the laws, and all they cared about was building a massive cape army. Dead capes can't be in the army, so everyone's gotta stay alive or go to the birdcage instead. They don't really care how many civilians someone like Hookwolf kills as long as they don't undermine faith in the PRT too much.

Honestly, we hate on Tagg a bunch, but he has the most believable reactions of everyone. In real life if someone robs a bank and threatens hostages, that's enough for a manhunt and lethal force. The stuff the Bet government let the Undersiders get away with was insane by our standards.
 
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I had a hard time keeping myself from happily humming on the bus ride home, an embarrassing habit I hadn't been at risk of for several years.

I love this little bit of character building for Taylor. It's tragic, but in a really sweet way.

Nothing we did today needed to be done by you alone—your father could have initiated inquiries of his own accord, and utterly failed to do so. You are amazed this was so easy? It should have been.

I love this as a manipulation tactic because it's both so easy to sucker Taylor with and also so easy to imagine how information Roma and Taylor don't know might have made the situation more complicated than this.

She'd even said it herself: I could take her out of the bottle. I could damned well put her back if I needed to.

Hahahahaha, Taylor. Taylor no. Taylor she told you that you could put her back in the bottle. Never trust the ancient trapped evil when it tells you the conditions of its "temporary" release.

Roma finally seemed to have figured out that I could feel when she experienced a strong enough emotion, and had started literally radiating affection while restating all the compliments I'd previously dismissed as lip service.

See, I still don't trust this. Because the link is still very much one-way, Taylor isn't reading Roma's thoughts, and the emotional link from Roma (if it's honest) is only provided at her discretion.

...

And yet I'm still not sure it would actually be a bad outcome for Taylor if Roma were released. Because she is very, very good at this game.
 
I get that Roma was a Dread Empress and all, but I think she's still been pretty good influence on Taylor, even if she's manipulative at times. Earth Bet is a rather awful place. Teaching Taylor some ruthless cunning probably isn't a bad thing.

She seems pretty genre aware. It's doubtful she'll betray Taylor. They'll probably have many future disagreements about what constitutes ethical behaviour though.

Funnily enough, I actually think it could have been worse if a dead Hero was sent to this universe instead. Most were murder happy zealots and would be telling Taylor to hunt down villains and kill them in their sleep.
It'll depend on if Earth Bet can or can not let her keep her name without Taylor, seeing as the name shennanigans seem to be operating on Taylor's shard juice. Roma is unlikely to betray Taylor unless she actually gets to know capes that can keep Taylor's powers working, seeing as the only cape with that level of passager knowledge right now is bonesaw, Taylor's odds are good here.
 
It'll depend on if Earth Bet can or can not let her keep her name without Taylor, seeing as the name shennanigans seem to be operating on Taylor's shard juice. Roma is unlikely to betray Taylor unless she actually gets to know capes that can keep Taylor's powers working, seeing as the only cape with that level of passager knowledge right now is bonesaw, Taylor's odds are good here.
There is also Ciara, but she is unlikely to help Roma become independent of the administrator.
 
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