Adapt (SMT/Worm AU)

Bittersweet, yeah, but worth it in the long run.
No it's not. It turns the Demi-Fiend into an Omnicidal Maniac. Which is very abrupt and horrible.
The funny thing about Nocturne is that the three Reason endings seem to correspond to classic SMT Law/Neutral/Chaos, but really the trick is that all three of them are actually Law endings.
Then you've never actually seen the Neutral Ending. Lucifer sends you a message that tells you that by restoring the Earth to how it was you went against The Great Will's designs.
 
Then you've never actually seen the Neutral Ending. Lucifer sends you a message that tells you that by restoring the Earth to how it was you went against The Great Will's designs.
True, but the Demi-fiend didn't end the system Kagutsuchi presided over. All he did was reset his world back to how it originally was. Kagutsuchi is still alive and worlds are being destroyed and remade.
 
Then you've never actually seen the Neutral Ending. Lucifer sends you a message that tells you that by restoring the Earth to how it was you went against The Great Will's designs.

I have, but that's not one of the Reason endings. As I said the three Reason endings are all secretly Law endings, despite them seeming to each be one of the three aligments.

Both Freedom and Demon are Neutral endings, albeit Demon is just a really disappointing nothing of an ending. (Which is good. It is meant to be disappointing.)

Freedom The Great Will certainly isn't happy with you, but you aren't actively trying to destroy its works. It opposes you simply because you didn't go full meme-paladin Law, and the Great Will can only tolerate full 100% Law robots. Still doesn't make it a Chaos ending.

True Demon Ending is the only Chaos ending.
 
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I have, but that's not one of the Reason endings. As I said the three Reason endings are all secretly Law endings, despite them seeming to each be one of the three aligments.

Both Freedom and Demon are Neutral endings, albeit Demon is just a really disappointing nothing of an ending. (Which is good. It is meant to be disappointing.)

Freedom The Great Will certainly isn't happy with you, but you aren't actively trying to destroy its works. It opposes you simply because you didn't go full meme-paladin Law, and the Great Will can only tolerate full 100% Law robots. Still doesn't make it a Chaos ending.

True Demon Ending is the only Chaos ending.
The point is CHAOS ENDINGS ARE AS BAD AS LAW ENDINGS. Neutral is the way to go in SMT games.
 
The point is CHAOS ENDINGS ARE AS BAD AS LAW ENDINGS. Neutral is the way to go in SMT games.
I dunno, while you aren't helping either side(which is good cause both side have issues), you also aren't opposing them. The neutral ending of Nocturne is basically just pressing the "universe reset button" which I find disapointing in it's own right. The end will still come and the demi-fiend won't be there to stop it this time. My conclusion is: All alignement suck. Chaos is too destructive, Neutral is too passive and Law is too constrictive. Which serve as a good lesson about why going to the extreme of any ideology is an awful idea.
 
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So basically if I'm understanding this right a bunch of random people are being handed out demon servents effectively causing a mass Trigger scenario, and now a bunch of formerly powerless people are probably going to go on a rampage believing their now invincible.

Sounds like fun times.
 
So basically if I'm understanding this right a bunch of random people are being handed out demon servents effectively causing a mass Trigger scenario, and now a bunch of formerly powerless people are probably going to go on a rampage believing their now invincible.

Sounds like fun times.
Yep, demons are pretty much sentients mass of energy, so they got really good synergy with technology. They went from blood circle on the floor to an app on your phone that you can just carry with you. Which make it easier to summon them and easier to hide the fact that you are a summoner.
 
So basically if I'm understanding this right a bunch of random people are being handed out demon servents effectively causing a mass Trigger scenario, and now a bunch of formerly powerless people are probably going to go on a rampage believing their now invincible.

Sounds like fun times.
Yep, demons are pretty much sentients mass of energy, so they got really good synergy with technology. They went from blood circle on the floor to an app on your phone that you can just carry with you. Which make it easier to summon them and easier to hide the fact that you are a summoner.
Traditional demon summoning is still viable, but summoning in SMT is mostly used with electronic devices, either being gauntlet-shaped devices called COMPs or cell phones, like in Devil Survivor 2.

...you know, now that I think about it, I wonder how a DeSu2/Worm crossover would go.
 
0.5 Occult (Prologue)
Sophia could not remember the point in which her life took a turn towards the shitter, but if she had to guess, it started when she met Taylor Hebert.

Things used to be so simple before she enrolled at Winslow and finding herself forced to work with a bunch of goody-two-shoes to avoid Juvenile Hall. The regular criminals looked at her with fear and the gangs gave her the respect she deserved, being predators themselves. They knew the score; they did not mess with her, she did not mess with them. Not that Sophia thought she could. She knew that some fights were better off avoiding and any fight involving Lung or Oni Lee was better off staying out of. She was not an idiot with some sort of death wish.

At the time, the PRT did not think much of her. They gave her offers here and there, but it had not been until they noticed how she dealt with her prey that they started getting annoying. Warnings, slaps on the wrist, the usual bullshit talk her mom and everyone else gave her. She paid them no mind and went about her business. They got really pissed when she brutally injured some nameless thug no one would give two shits about and pinned him to a wall with her crossbows. Once they learned who she was under the mask, they gave her an offer that she had no choice but to accept.

Working with the Wards and taking orders infuriated Sophia to no end. She thought that Miss Militia and Armsmaster, one being some hardcore nationalist chick and the other more machine than man, would be the predators she aspired to be like, but to her dismay, they were just as soft-hearted. The Wards weren't much better. Clockblocker was too fucking annoying, Kid Win was obnoxious, Vista was as bratty as she looked. And those were just the worst of the bunch, and by far the most flattering she had to say about them.

It was not all bad, thankfully. Her meeting and subsequent rescue of Emma and Alan Barnes had been a stroke of good luck. The man felt indebted to her and managed to give her some leeway in the PRT. Saving a lawyer and his daughter made it look like she was "learning her lesson." They were idiots if they thought she was getting soft.

Alan Barnes was useful, but his daughter was…interesting, to say the least. By all rights, she was just some ordinary girl with no powers. All she had were her good looks and that was it. Yet when push came to shove, rather than run, she had the strength to fight back. That was all the proof Sophia needed to know she was a survivor. At first, she thought she could leave Emma alone, but for a reason Sophia couldn't fathom, the red-headed latched on her to life she was some kind of lifeline. Not as a leech like so many other useless idiots, but as someone she wished to learn from.

Being a predator, Sophia did not see any reason to deny her. As time went on, as strange as it was to say, Emma Barnes became less of a "student" and more of a "friend". Of course, the girl still held on to some sentimental attachments it seemed, what with her trying to convince Sophia that someone as useless and weak as Taylor Hebert could be a predator as well. First impressions told Sophia that the girl was as plain and weak as they could get. Not even prey, just worthless fodder. Why Emma thought she had some fangs on her she had no idea, but she humored her.

To Sophia's surprise, Emma proved more than willing to give Taylor the "push" she needed. She used every dirty trick she could think of, even bringing up her dead mother into the equation. She applauded the girl for her ruthlessness, especially when after a year of doing so, Taylor Hebert proved just why Sophia thought she was fodder. She fought back a few times, but they were so pathetic and weak it would be more appropriate to say she floundered like a fish out of water.

A year went by, and Sophia decided she needed to prove to Emma why Taylor Hebert wasn't worth their time. She pitched the idea to Emma and Madison, the latter only joining their escapades for no other reason than to hang out with the "cool kids", though they had been hesitant at first. It took some convincing, but near the end of winter break, she finally convinced them.

It went off without a hitch at first. It seemed like Emma finally got the message.

It was not until after Taylor Hebert had been hospitalized that the PRT realized what they had been up to and put their foot down. She didn't know how they knew about it or why they would get involved, but they did. What leniency they gave her thanks to Alan's suggestion vanished in an instant. They got wind of the incident, grilling Principal Blackwell for answers and when they did, they put literal shackles on her.

Sophia just could not understand why the PRT would get involved in something like this. The teachers considered it to be bullying, albeit taken too far after what happened, so they shouldn't have even knew about it unless some in school blabbed about the whole thing or a PRT agent was keeping tabs on her even while she was at school. The last one seemed to be the most plausible case, which only angered her more. Her infuriation grew when that fatass Piggot screamed at her for causing a PR stunt waiting to happen.

Did they actually believe that wimp could Trigger? As if.

The feeling of indignation continued to grow until Sophia couldn't stomach it anymore. The moment she saw her opportunity to blow off steam by ditching her so-called "teammates" she took it. Granted, Armsmaster and Miss Militia were likely to have words with her, but fuck them.

Sophia glided over a rooftop before touching the edge, peering down below. The alleys were as dark and filthy as ever, the usual scum finding it to be an excellent place to conduct their business. To her joy, she found two prime punching bags for her to vent her frustrations on; a Merchant drug dealer and some twit looking to get high. The dealer looked like he hadn't bathed in days and the twit was some stupid kid in an honest-to-god high school uniform.

A rich kid looking for cheap thrills. What a big surprise, Sophia rolled her eyes beneath her mask before double-checking to see if her equipment was combat-ready. Alright, fuckers. Showtime.

She wasted no time in busting the deal, dropping down between them and immediately getting to work. She clocked out the drug dealer first, ramming her knee into his stomach while he was still in a shock about her sudden appearance, following up and grabbing a fistful of hair and breaking his nose with her fist before finally clocking his lights out with a punch to the stomach and knee to the face. He hit the ground with a dull thud.

"W-what the hell?!"

Sophia craned her head and glared at the twit. "Two choices, fucker. Get on your knees and beg, or try fighting me. See which one will earn you more bruises and broken bones." She took great pleasure in the look of fear in his eyes, filling with glee as he started to step back away from her like cornered prey.

She was about to deal with the twit until she heard a strangled noise from behind her. "Y-you fucking bitch! You broke my nose!" Sophia frowned and turned back to the Merchant as he stumbled up to his feet. He was more resilient than he looked. The Merchant took in her features and his anger skyrocketed. "Y-you! I remember you, you bitch! You were that psycho vigilante who pinned me to a wall!"

"Oh, was that you? Sorry, I don't remember all the pansy-ass weaklings I've had to deal with," Sophia growled. "And after this, you'll wish you were dead."

Despite the bashed-in nose and blood leaking down his face, much less the fact he was staring death in the face, the Merchant somehow had the balls to look smug. "Not this time, cunt!" He reached into his pocket and pulled out a phone, making Sophia scoff. Did he really think having friends was going to make this easier for him? "I got something special for myself if I ever saw your pasty white bitch ass again!"

"You wish!"

Sophia was not going to bother wasting her time dealing with this idiot. She aimed her crossbow right as he started to dial for his friends and fired. The crossbow hit him square in the chest, piercing deep into his chest and right into his lung. He coughed up blood almost immediately, losing his bravado in an instant and falling to his knees. His phone fell from his hand and clattered to the ground.

Just as she was about to advance toward him, the phone started to puff out red-and-black smoke.

"What the shit?"

"Kakakakakakakakakaka! Kakakakakakakakaka! Free at last, baby!"

Before Sophia had time to register the warped, child-like giggling that came from the phone, a black shape erupted from the cell phone and lunged towards the Merchant drug dealer, briefly obscuring Sophia's vision. Seconds later, blood and flesh flew into the air as the dealer's head was subsequently reduced to mush. The twit behind Sophia screamed and ran like a bat out of hell, but she paid him no mind. She knew immediately that she had bigger fish to fry.

A writhing mass of black smoke stood over the dealer's corpse, vaguely shaped like a person. Glowing red eyes, accompanied by a smile made out of sharp teeth, formed the "face" that looked back at her with malevolent intent.

"So, you're one of those parahumans I've been hearing about, huh? Thanks for weakening this dipshit for me! He was so pathetic I could hardly stand him!" the parahuman(?) sneered. "I guess I should thank you, huh? Come here, let me give you a hug! I promise I'll be gentle."

After having said that, the villain lunged at her. Sophia ducked beneath the swipe and fell into a somersault, rolling past them and retaliating by putting a few crossbows into his back. To her dismay, the crossbows seemed to fly right through him, making her curse.

Fucker must have a similar power, must make him intangible.

It reminded her far too much of that Undersiders fucker Grue. That solidified her thoughts of killing this bastard where he stood. She need only wait for her golden opportunity.

The villain came at her again, this time going for a full-on swing as his body seemed to expand slightly, his arm doubling in size and becoming like a giant claw. Sophia shifted into darkness, waiting for the blow to phase through her.

To her shock and dismay, the blow hit her dead on and sent her flying, even smashing through the brick wall of a building adjacent to the alley. She spilled out onto the floor, groaning and disoriented as she rose to her feet.

"What-" she gasped. "What the actual fuck? How the fuck?!"

"Kakakaakakakakaka! Surprised, are you? I gotta admit, being able to turn yourself into living shadows is pretty nifty, but unfortunately for you…!"

The villain stepped inside the building, his demonic expression all the more manic.

"Shade of the Sprit Clan is a living shadow too! KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKA!"
Couldn't have happened to a nicer girl. Anyway, I'm leaving the chapter off here, because I'm a sadistic fucker.

The next chapter will be the finale of Occult (Prologue), and after that is two interludes, one being a PHO segment and the other focusing on the PRT dealing with Taylor.
 
Traditional demon summoning is still viable, but summoning in SMT is mostly used with electronic devices, either being gauntlet-shaped devices called COMPs or cell phones, like in Devil Survivor 2.

...you know, now that I think about it, I wonder how a DeSu2/Worm crossover would go.
Both demon summoning devices and rituals will be used, though for the most part, most of the demon summoners Taylor will encounter use cell phones or Tinker tech that is compatible with the Demon Summoning Program.

As for the Devil Survivor 2/Worm idea...not gonna like, that sounds like it would be perfect crossover. Then again, it depends on what kind of story idea you're going for. If it's Alcor on Earth Bet, he would easily be in the same weight class as the Triumvirate, if not Scion himself (which isn't far from the truth since Alcor is technically an alien being of sorts).

If its Taylor becoming an Administrator...whooooooooooo boy.

OP much?
 
Sophia's getting her tutorial battle fighting a Shade. Sadly, I doubt she'll figure out anything about how to Press any openings she finds. Still, seeing Sophia getting dunked on will be enjoyable.

On a separate note, I can't help but wonder why really ratted Sophia out to the PRT. I highly doubt it was her Agent like Sophia suspects. I think Dragon might be able to dig something up if she's given a half decent reason to believe Sophia was doing some nasty stuff, but I once again doubt that...

Still, it is nice to see her getting utterly dunked on. Hope she survives for a while though. Do she can keep getting dunked on.
 
Sophia's not going to survive unless she shows her true colors and runs. IIRC from every game I've played, you can't hurt Demons unless you have the Demon Summoning App yourself. Mainly due to a feature of the App that makes you and Demons have the same wavelength so their attacks don't insta-gib you. At least I think that was the explanation.
 
Sophia's not going to survive unless she shows her true colors and runs. IIRC from every game I've played, you can't hurt Demons unless you have the Demon Summoning App yourself. Mainly due to a feature of the App that makes you and Demons have the same wavelength so their attacks don't insta-gib you. At least I think that was the explanation.
That's only in Devil Survivor, I think.

Honestly, even a normal human could put up a decent fight against a demon...provided its a scrub. In this case, though, Sophia is picking a fight with a monster that's an even worse match-up for her than Grue was since it is literally a living shadow and can hit her even when she's intangible.
 
Sophia's not going to survive unless she shows her true colors and runs. IIRC from every game I've played, you can't hurt Demons unless you have the Demon Summoning App yourself. Mainly due to a feature of the App that makes you and Demons have the same wavelength so their attacks don't insta-gib you. At least I think that was the explanation.
That's only in Devil Survivor, I think.

Honestly, even a normal human could put up a decent fight against a demon...provided its a scrub. In this case, though, Sophia is picking a fight with a monster that's an even worse match-up for her than Grue was since it is literally a living shadow and can hit her even when she's intangible.
Stranger is correct. The harmonizer function was only introduced and used in Devil Survivor. Aside from that, normal humans could put up a decent fight against a demon, assuming it was a weak one. The program in Adapt does not have a harmonizer function.

Not that parahumans need one, depending on their skillset. Eidolon could easily take on mid-to-high tier demons.

And as for Sophia's fate...you're going to have to wait until next chapter.
 
Ah yes, SMT. The series that will hold fast to its word shortenings even when it doesn't make sense. Looking at you, SMT IV.

So I'm interested, but bringing out Louis Cyphre (shouldn't it be Louisa Ferre? Like in SMT: Strange Journey) so early sets a high bar.
 
Ah yes, SMT. The series that will hold fast to its word shortenings even when it doesn't make sense. Looking at you, SMT IV.

So I'm interested, but bringing out Louis Cyphre (shouldn't it be Louisa Ferre? Like in SMT: Strange Journey) so early sets a high bar.
That it does, and honestly, I don't think I'll be able to keep setting myself to that bar. At the very least, I hope to write something that is at least worth reading.
 
That it does, and honestly, I don't think I'll be able to keep setting myself to that bar. At the very least, I hope to write something that is at least worth reading.
Personally, it fits the "Person of No Consequence" Archetype. Someone comes up to you, gives you advice, disappears, Knows your name when you never gave them it, And is probably one of, if not the most important person to the overall backstory/Reasons to the plot. We'll either see them revealed as an Antagonist, or a Major Supporting Character that tried to stop the events from happening. With her, it could go either way, what with her SMT being in love with humanity.
Edit: And they usually are seen right before things go to shit.
 
0.6 Occult (Prologue)
It was in the afternoon that I decided to head back home. If I stayed away any longer, I feared Dad would call the police again and start a manhunt. I honestly did not want to go back home, but in spite of my misgivings with him, I did not want to put Dad through another scare. As complicated as my feelings were towards him, I knew he was scared all to hell when he found out what I had been through at Winslow for the last year. Odds were that he nearly lost the only family he had left after Mom passed away.

I still was not sure what made me lose my temper at him. The last couple of days had been frustrating for me, yeah, but I did not think they were that bad. I am usually better at holding things in. Or maybe Winslow just loosened the cork, who knows?

Still, I definitely did not want to walk into something seriously awkward, especially after I went off at Dad like that. Thus my first order of business was to get him something that might make things less troublesome for the both of us. It would not be an apology gift by any means, but it would help smooth things out.

I took a small detour on the way home, running by the bakery just outside the Boardwalk. I bought Dad a small pack of pastries that he mentioned he wanted to try a while back, then resumed my march back to my home.

During my trek back to Castle Hebert, I thought back to my meeting with the strange blonde woman who called herself Louise Cyphre. She obviously knew who I was if she knew my name, but who was she? She obviously was not a local. There was also the possibility that she was a cape, seeing as how I practically spilled my guts to her. I mean, why in the world would I tell what's happening in my life to a complete stranger?

I wonder if the PRT does Master/Stranger screenings for civilians?

It would be a good idea to inform someone about what happened, but the thought gave me pause. What if the PRT didn't believe me and thought I was pulling some kind of prank? Would they just write me off? Thinking that, I grew a little angry—not at the PRT, but at myself.

Had Winslow made me this much of a defeatist?

Damn it.

Shaking my head, I hastened my way back to home. I ducked into an alleyway to take a shortcut that would lead me to a bus stop, my hand deep in my pocket and holding the can of pepper spray firmly. Stereotypical as it was, all sorts of thugs hid in the alleys or made them their homes. More often than not, Merchants would sequester themselves here, calling out to anyone they thought looked like somebody who wanted to get shot up. They weren't as dangerous as, say, the Empire or the ABB, but they were still people that would not hesitate to beat me bloody.

I made it halfway into the alley when I felt the ground shake from underneath my feet; too weak to be an earthquake but too strong to be a shockwave. I stumbled, nearly falling flat on my face and finding myself at a branching path in the alleys.

"What the hell was that?" I asked myself and looked around. "Is-is there a fight goi-"

The words died in my throat.

I stared, horrified and paling at the sight of the corpse of a Merchant lying not far away. Half his head was gone, leaving behind only his lower jaw. A crossbow bolt sat in his chest, right over where his lung would be. Around him looked like the aftermath of a fight, walls torn down and bits of concrete upended from the earth. The sounds of wicked laughter bounced off the walls of the alleys, accompanied by loud crashing noises and glass shattering. Each time the noises rose in pitch, the ground would shake.

"Oh fuck. Oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck!"

Capes were fighting nearby, and I did not want to be in the middle of it. I turned on my heel, ready to get out of the alley, but I found myself thrown to the ground when the wall next to me exploded into flying bricks and shrapnel. I bounced off the ground and smacked into a concrete wall back-first, eliciting a yelp of pain. My spine felt the brunt of the impact. It did hurt as much as I expected it to, but it was still unpleasant.

My sight was slightly obscured by smoke and dust. Bits and chunks of what remained of the wall spilled out unto the alleyway. I saw a dark-clad figure lying on the ground, gasping and whimpering. As the smoke and dust started to clear, I saw the figure and found myself gasping in shock.

I could never forget that face, even if I tried. Shock ran through me, but the sight of Shadow Stalker distracted my thoughts. She was missing her left leg and her right arm gone. Both were reduced to being bloody stumps that looked as though they had been torn off rather than chopped off. What was even more shocking was the expression Shadow Stalker had.

Every time I saw her, she bore a condescending, arrogant look that made me think she thought she was at the top of the world—that no one could possibly hurt her. The face she was wearing now betrayed that image, utterly fear stricken and overwhelmed by pure horror. Tears were running down her face, either by the fact that she was fighting someone that terrible or that she was missing a leg and arm.

"Awww, are done already? Kakakakaka…"

The cape I assumed was responsible for Shadow Stalker's state stepped into view. A body made completely out of shadows, moving and shifting as though it was alive, and sporting a smile made out of fangs and glowing eyes full of malice. He stepped towards Shadow Stalker, humming some dainty little tune while his fingers slowly grew in length and his smile growing wider.

Shadow Stalker pulled away, pushing herself against the wall behind her and searched for an escape. She turned her head towards me and stared.

Our eyes met.

"H-hel-"

The cape grabbed her by the face, fingers wrapping all around her head like vines.

"Game over."

He squeezed. I was unable to scream, too consumed by the mind-numbing horror overwhelming me at this moment, watching as Sophia Hess' head was crushed like a grape. Skull fragments, bits of flesh, bloody muscles and gray matter oozed from the cape's fingertips. A white ball fell from his grasp, bouncing off the ground and landing in a puddle of liquid. I did not realize it was an eyeball until I saw a red fleshy string attached to it.

I did not know how to process what just occurred before my eyes, nor did I even have time to address it. The cape took a moment to admire his handy work, smiling with childish glee and lapping a tongue across his digits before he craned his head and looked at me.

"Oh? And what have we here? Another tasty little morsel? A stray cat?"

Ba-bump

Oh no. Oh, god, please no.

Ba-bump

"Kakakakakakaka!" The cape threw his head back in laughter. "God? Do you think someone like that will answer your prayers? Sorry, little girl, but I'm afraid you didn't get the memo!"

Ba-bump

"God can't hear you anymore," the cape sneered and approached me.

BA-BUMP BA-BUMP BA-BUMP

I could not move. It did not matter how much I screamed at myself; trying to force my legs to stand up or my fingers to curl into fists or reach for my pepper spray as if it would do something. No matter how hard I tried, I could not move. I was terrified. I just sat there, watching as the cape walked toward me while curling his fingers and uncurling them.

BA-BUMP BA-BUMP BA-BUMP

I saw my life start to flash before my eyes. The days when Mom was still alive, when Emma and I were still kids that played with one another, when life used to be so simple. I saw Mom's funeral and how broken and I Dad had become. I saw how Emma casted me aside like I was garbage. I saw how Winslow broke me down and made into a shadow of who I used to be.

BA-BUMP BA-BUMP BA-BUMP

Dad's face flashed through my mind.

I don't want to die.

BABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMP

I don't want to die.

BABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMP

I don't want to die!

BABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMP

I DON'T WANT TO DIE!



BA-BUMP


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The moment he saw smoke in the distance, Triumph dropped everything and made a beeline straight for the disturbance.

"Console, this is Triumph! I see smoke near the Boardwalk! Could be a battle between capes! Do we have any details?!"

"We got nothing, except that it might be Shadow Stalker," Clockblocker told him. "She went AWOL not too long ago. Armsmaster is on his way."

Triumph scowled. Dammit, I told the Director Hess was a risk! As much as he wanted to lambast his superior about Shadow Stalker, he had bigger fish to fry. He could not tell how bad the damage was from here and could only hope things did not escalate. With the utmost haste, he ran as fast as he could. He ignored civilian attempts to garner his attention and told them to flee the area in case things got out of hand.

He arrived on site a few minutes later, not even breaking a sweat. The fight appeared to have started from the alleys and escalated, moving into an empty shop that was for sale before spilling out on to the open street. A few cards parked by the sidewalk were overturned and a street lamp was removed from its position, bent and twisted and impaled deep into the ground. The ground was cracked and upended, signs pointing to immense physical strength.

In the middle of it all were the capes responsible. One was a shadow figure, one he briefly mistook for Shadow Stalker until he saw the elongated fingers and limbs and a mouth made entirely of teeth. Above him, bearing him down with savagery reminiscent of Lung, was a teenage girl wearing a tattered hoodie and sweat pants. Her skin was marked by black tattoos akin to tribal markings, albeit glowing dark blue. Her eyes were dark orchid, burning with raw fury. The most eye-catching thing was the horn sticking out from her neck.

By the look of it, Triumph arrived to see the tail end of it as, with one final roar, the girl brought down linked fists atop the cape's head. His head exploded, followed by his body, in a shower of black liquid. Most landed on the girl's face, but she did not appear to care. She was breathing heavily, glaring at the spot where the cape had been, bearing her fangs.

Triumph stared, unsure what was happening. He heard Clockblocker calling him over the comm.-link, but ignored him for the moment. Ideas about what happened passed his mind, but he could not be sure which was the most plausible. For the moment, he needed to intervene. The girl was a potential danger, and he could not risk her going on a rampage.

"Miss," he called out. "Miss, would you please put your hands behind your head?"

The girl stopped and stared at him, looking ready to leap at him before she stopped herself. She looked at him more closely, confusion settling in over her features before she looked around at the results of her battle with the cape. She then looked at the ground beneath her, at the black bloody stains that were made by her own hands before looking at her hands, finding them dripping in the blood of the cape she had just murdered.

To Triumph's confusion, panic appeared in her eyes. Her hands shook and her shoulders trembled. It took him a few seconds to realize she was hyperventilating and a few more seconds to realize exactly what had happened.

Before he could do anything, the girl's eyes rolled to the back of her head and fell to the ground. "H-hey!" He rushed over to her, immediately checking her condition. Aside from some minor injuries, such as a few bruises and scratches, she appeared to be fine. Up close, he saw how young she was and grimaced. "Fuck, she's just a kid…"

"Triumph, what happened?" Armsmaster called in over the comm-link. "I'm five minutes from your destination. Have you identified the capes?"

"It just ended. I think we got a fresh Trigger. Female, looks like she's Shadow Stalker's age, has glowing tattoos over her body and a horn on her neck. Suggests she's a changer, possibly a brute. As for the other one…"

He looked at the bloody black stains and frowned. He did not know who the cape was or what he was capable of, but even he knew that a body disintegrating into a black bloody puddle was not natural. He did not know if it was the girl's doing, but either way, he had bigger concerns at the moment.

"I don't see Shadow Stalker anywhere. For now, call the ground troops and the police, tell them to cordon off Ali Street."

"Roger that."

With that done, Triumph looked back at the girl. Although he had not encountered very many Changers during his career as a cape, he had to admit that this girl was perhaps the most unique. The glowing lines amid the markings pulsated with light, almost as though they were alive. The horn was curious, especially when he felt how it throbbed under his touch. Looking at her closely, though, Triumph found himself frowning.

Where have I seen her before?

After a moment, it finally clicked in his head. He promptly cursed under his breath, realizing why the girl seemed so familiar when he saw her picture in the report he, Dauntless, Velocity, Assault, Battery and Miss Militia were given. Armsmaster did not receive the report due to him being more preoccupied dealing whatever he was up into his workshop.

Before he could call it in, his comm-link sparked to life.

"Triumph, I need a sit-rep." Director Piggot did not sound happy. "What the hell is going on?"

"…we have a problem, Director. Our new cape. I think I know who she is. It's the girl mentioned from Shadow Stalker's activities in Winslow."

Piggot went quiet for a moment.

"It's Taylor Hebert, ma'am."

What she said next perfectly summed up the situation.

"Fuck."



"My oh my, what a show you gave," Louise purred as she lowered her phone. She stared at the sight of carnage—the maiden battle of Taylor Hebert as she awakened at long last to her newfound potential. "A splendid birth cry if there ever was one. It appears there were no complications with the Magatama integrating with the [Admin]."

"Did you know this would happen?"

"It was an assumption I had. At the very least, I expected her to develop a different power, but this is acceptable." Louise hummed thoughtfully. "I imagine Beelzebub will be interested in her if she survives the days to come, considering the possibilities."

In truth, Louise did not know what would happen when the Magatama would awaken. She believed that it would influence the Queen Administrator to some extent, perhaps alter Taylor Hebert's abilities to an acceptable extent. Or perhaps the Queen Administrator would attempt to understand the properties of the Magatama, finding some way to integrate it. For the Magatama to subsume the Shard entirely and incorporate itself into the Network was not something she expected, but it was a welcome surprise.

At the very least, she wanted to see how the Warrior would react to discovering the aberrations occurring within his Network.

For the moment, her curiosity was satiated. She interfered enough, believing the girl might learn something from their discussion. She would continue to observe and see what the girl would do when the Promised Day arrived. It was to be the day of reckoning after all—to see whether or not man was still bound by the strings of their Maker and the Others.

"Let us depart, my friend."

The hooded teen nodded and turned on his heel, waving his hand. A swirling mass of shadows with a red tint gouged itself open, tearing through reality and opening its maw for them. He stepped inside the threshold first, vanishing into the shadows. Louise stepped in after him, though not before casting another look at the aftermath of Taylor Hebert's new beginning.

Louise smiled. "I look forward to seeing what you will do…"

The portal began to collapse around her. She removed her sunglasses, revealing silver irises with narrow slit-like pupils.

"…second generation Demi-fiend."

The portal disappeared entirely, leaving naught a trace of the observers as the PRT and first-responders finally arrived on scene.
Little to no action here in this chapter, and that was intentional to be honest. This chapter isn't meant to show Taylor fighting the Shade, but give you an idea of what happened. The actual fight itself won't be shown until the PRT interlude, and even then I won't go into too much detail. The purpose of the arc was to build up to what comes next.

I understand this might piss some people off, and that's fine. Just so long as a couple people enjoy what I've written.

On that note, the PHO Interlude is actually ready to be published. I just need to finish writing the PRT interlude and post them both back-to-back.

On an unrelated subject, I have to admit, I do believe that this is the most work I've done in a month. Usually I pump out around under ten chapters a month, but I've been on a fucking roll recently. It makes me happy that I'm getting into the groove of things, but on the other hand, I worry that I might be putting a little too much attention into my Worm fanfics. I've been holding off on writing Pendulum's Fifth Swing because I want to work on these ones more.

Is that bad?

Let me know what you guys think about this chapter. Any thoughts or criticisms?
 
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Let me know what you guys think about this chapter. Any thoughts or criticisms?
I'll be honest: as prologues go, this one was not a good one.

There are no issues with the grammar or prose. It simply fails to capture a reader's interest in the first one or two thousand words. Frankly, starting off with a Danny and Taylor home argument scene is a pretty good way of minimizing your readership.
You'd probably have more success if you'd started with Sophia getting splattered and then backtracking to how things got to that point. It's a classic introduction to all sorts of books, fics and films for a reason.

I hope that helps with future fics :)
The premise itself seems interesting, though I'm not familiar with SMT.


Also: Is Shadow Stalker too spattered for Triumph to make the connection, did the fight move that far, or did something happen to destroy her corpse entirely offscreen?
I hope this gets addressed in the next chapter or two, because right now it's just confusing.
 
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It's fairly good for a prologue. Not much else to say.
Though I'd have to ask if it's Wards!Taylor fic. 'cause that's the vibe I'm getting right now.
 
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