Personally i want to try to find some plants to hijack; Stick some non-living microorganisms in some seeds and/or spores, get them into the bay or something, and have them photosynthesize for the Host. Have them soak up local nutrients. Somewhat like how Shards work now i that i think about it.
From what I've figured out about worm, most high speed regenerators have a minor secondary effect that their flesh rapidly deteriorates when separated from their core, such as Echidna or Lung. Making systems that are detached from our body will most likely be impossible, and also the exact reason that limit was probably put in place.
 
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From what I've figured out about worm, most high speed regenerators have a minor secondary effect that their flesh rapidly deteriorates when separated from their core, such as Echidna or Lung. Making systems that are detached from our body will most likely be impossible, and also the exact reason that limit was probably put in place.
We shouldn't even need to have it be made out of our flesh; We could just put some compounds/venoms into some seeds or something and have that be used instead. It worked for Canon!Crawlers acid; This would just be a more constructive version of that.
 
We shouldn't even need to have it be made out of our flesh; We could just put some compounds/venoms into some seeds or something and have that be used instead. It worked for Canon!Crawlers acid; This would just be a more constructive version of that.
So basically just make some organic nets that can catch the bacteria/plankton in the ocean for Host to snack on, right?
 
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So basically just make some organic nets that can catch the bacteria/plankton in the ocean for Host to snack on, right?
Nah. We would be getting/making and cultivating something, or rather a set of somethings, keeping them in a organ, and setting them up to take power from a system (Tidal force? Solar?) and use it to collect environmental resources, Minerals; Oils; Gases; Anything that we could harvist and use to make something work really, and spray it into the bay. It could be some chemically treated microbes or "bacteria/plankton" or really small plants. We would basically be bulding up a seed culture for a ecosystem that the Host can then feed off of.

Something dependant on the Host for something in their life cycle would probably be best. Maybe we could make it so that they can't actually reproduce, so that the only way for them to make more of themselves is to feed themselves to Host, and have her body make more of them after pulling them apart. It might work, if a system can be worked out.

Edit: Or we could just output some compounds in interesting layors and use those instead.
 
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{--Create additional oral outlet slot below teeth, held shut by muscular pressure. Extend tongue length by 200%, anchored to the new slot. Expand lower jaw volume to retract tongue when not extended. Improve tongue's resilience to damage by increasing muscle density of outer tongue, toughening the skin and transferring muscousal functions to inner mouth. Sound modulation functions performed normally through inner tongue portion.--}

^^ Some kind of drawing to indicate more clearly the intended design would help me a lot. I'm taking some liberties with the idea as it's not wholly clear what's going on with the inner outer tongue, etc.
Basically, tongue extends THROUGH the lower jaw rather than through the gap int the teeth:

Horrible sketch below.
 
Basically, tongue extends THROUGH the lower jaw rather than through the gap int the teeth:

Horrible sketch below.
I would think that any way to pull things into the jaw would work. Like that little gap that danger noodles stick their tongue out of. And if that's going to be the case then maybe we should use the "two tongues make a straw" thing that butterflies do.
 
Don't quote me on this, but i think that it's basically like the shatter points i wanted to put in the Hosts bones; A new shape to put the jaw in to keep if from being fail-dangerous. Personally i think that having the jaw able to fully split would be a better option. I actually had some ideas about having a line up of jawbones going up the neck, like shark teath, and useing them to put extra pressure into a bite by pressing on the lower most one and having it go through them all. Which may requier having the teath and jaw be somewhat modular.
 
Don't quote me on this, but i think that it's basically like the shatter points i wanted to put in the Hosts bones; A new shape to put the jaw in to keep if from being fail-dangerous. Personally i think that having the jaw able to fully split would be a better option. I actually had some ideas about having a line up of jawbones going up the neck, like shark teath, and useing them to put extra pressure into a bite by pressing on the lower most one and having it go through them all. Which may requier having the teath and jaw be somewhat modular.
Sorry, I am not seeing it. Deliberately weakening the structure for the sake of weakening the structure is a rarely used practice in itself (off the top of my head I can only really name automobile manufacture with how the front of the car crumples in impacts), and here I don't see what the purpose of an extra hole (that will weaken the jaw, and thus would make it more likely to break) is. Jaw can't even really break in any dangerous way, I don't think?
 
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Sorry, I am not seeing it. Deliberately weakening the structure for the sake of weakening the structure is a rarely used practice in itself (off the top of my head I can only really name automobile manufacture with how the front of the car crumples in impacts), and here I don't see what the purpose of an extra hole (that will weaken the jaw, and thus would make it more likely to break) is. Jaw can't even really break in any dangerous way, I don't think?
I agree. Having it be that way because of a hole in the jaw bone is a bad idea. However, having it be because of a gap under the jaw, or some other way of getting around it, could work. Like in my plan, where i had the jaw bone come fully apart as a part of its function, and had those two parts push into the head? You can't hurt someone by breaking their jaw if there isn't a solid structure keeping it in one piece in the first place.
 
I agree. Having it be that way because of a hole in the jaw bone is a bad idea. However, having it be because of a gap under the jaw, or some other way of getting around it, could work. Like in my plan, where i had the jaw bone come fully apart as a part of its function, and had those two parts push into the head? You can't hurt someone by breaking their jaw if there isn't a solid structure keeping it in one piece in the first place.
I am still not seeing a reason to change it from the default (tongue goes between the teeth). Can even use tongue as a grappling tool in that case later.
 
I am still not seeing a reason to change it from the default (tongue goes between the teeth). Can even use tongue as a grappling tool in that case later.
I just thought the design was to keep Host from biting her tongue again.
The point is to have options other then "bring tongue back into mount" and "lose tongue" if the jaw takes a hit. Having more ways to move, without breaking, is part of that. But yeah, just having it have a place to go when not being used* is a good way of stoping that if we don't want to solve any other problems while we are at it.

*And speaking of which: I had some thoughts about some of the interesting things we could do with something like the throat valves of crocodiles.
 
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I think you forgot to add the organ that actually produces electricity. Not much point in conductive knuckles otherwise.

I determined that such a structural change would be far too broad even with the large number of changes in this go - the current plan is very large, and therefore, adding the conduction / electricity generation would create too vast of a change in this run. Players can attempt to co-op and further the plan in the future.

I'm working on a more effective body management system to keep more clear track of these changes. It'll probably be ready in 2-3 weeks.

Also: Yay! I'm impressed someone came up with the secondary brain so early. The secondary brain will be instinctual and merely used as a second connection point between the host and the shard, but it's better than one.

Basically, tongue extends THROUGH the lower jaw rather than through the gap int the teeth:

Horrible sketch below.

Thanks, that clears up my question.

Is this a good description:
Front two teeth will have hole which will be wide enough for the slim portion of the tongue to fit through. The tongue will have to snake a bit to fit through the lips, but will allow host use without opening their jaw.

Tongue will naturally slide back into the mouth, it will use the air pipes to eject out of mouth. Resting tongue and host control of tongue is best on the front portions and edges. Tongue is slimmed down and lengthened by 200% to fit in hole and allow air molecule analysis.

As a side note, at a certain point we're literally breaking physics, if we haven't already. Also, each time we regenerate, there's a flat immunity level added to the previous type of damage the host received which is something we can allocate to various body parts. Just helps keep things simple instead of having to create complicated structures for every single change. (The literal Crawler power)

For future plans: The host might be able to fly by increasing the span of the split arm, + arm thrust time faster than natural bodies + physics (even refined ones) would allow. I'd probably allow us to break physics a bit for that provided adequate concessions (although I haven't identified what they are quite yet) were made, or allowing the host to glide when falling from a high place.

In the next vote It would be cool if people's plans could integrate some kind of proposed side effects as part of their plans. I (as QM) can adjust the quantity of those side effects to appropriate levels.

Story status: Story will update on Tuesday or Wednesday.
 
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The point is to have options other then "bring tongue back into mount" and "lose tongue" if the jaw takes a hit. Having more ways to move, without breaking, is part of that. But yeah, just having it have a place to go when not being used* is a good way of stoping that if we don't want to solve any other problems while we are at it.

*And speaking of which: I had some thoughts about some of the interesting things we could do with something like the throat valves of crocodiles.
So, just checking, but are you talking about the palatal valve, the receded nostrils, or something that wasn't on the first search result I found?

EDIT: I think that was more condenscending than I wanted. I jist want to know, so it doesn't catch me by surprise, because we can all agree that adding aligators to the strange mix that is Host's biology can't go wrong.
 
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Is this a good description:
Looks excellent!
For future plans: The host might be able to fly by increasing the span of the split arm, + arm thrust time faster than natural bodies + physics (even refined ones) would allow. I'd probably allow us to break physics a bit for that provided adequate concessions (although I haven't identified what they are quite yet) were made, or allowing the host to glide when falling from a high place.
Sounds like fun, though harder to adjudicate. Might be easier to justify if exotic damage is taken though!
 
The best thing about non Newtonian fluids is some like corn starch and water solidify with hard sudden impact and others liquefy. So our skin can get really hard really fast but our bones can become temporarily gushy so they don't break. The are others that get really hard only when current is applied. See the electric knuckles idea. (Cadillac uses this electro sensitive fluid in their shock absorbers)
 
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Chapter 4
Chapter 4

"...Do I have permission to heal you?" I lay there, in the PRT slash hospital room.

"No." I said. My tongue flicked a little bit. Panacea, who sat down next to the bed I was in reeled back in surprise. I could taste the antiseptics in the air.

"...Are you certain? I might be able to return your body to normal…"

"This is my power, and it's awesome. You'd just reverse it when I want to see what it can do." I didn't even look at her face. I tried looking away, honestly. But every time people entered and left places I could tell by now. Breathing with an open mouth brought more chemicals with each breath..

"-And besides, my power is creative. Yours just restores bodies. This-"

-I threw my leg up, showing my extended foot/leg/ankle thing- Nozzles in the ceiling angled towards me.

"is creative. I mean, look at it. Lost a bit of rotational range, but I bet I can fucking book it down the street. The claws, the freaking claws coming out of my toes are awesome." I gave my now longer toes a wiggle. They didn't seem to have much meat to them, but I bet that, just like my hands, they'd be just as functional as before.

She was looking me in the eyes, it was kind of creepy. After a second of silence, she spoke up. "I'm not going to heal you then." She got up to leave.

"Come back for a second-"

She paused.

"I saw that look on your face. You want to see what I'm like, don't you?"

She turned around with a look on her face.

"Wha-No! Not like that! I mean, come here-" I held out my hand. "I don't want you to heal me, but I am interested in knowing what's going on as much as you do, if not more so."

A nurse came in with some food and protein- the third time since Sophia took me in. The section for capes- I didn't care whether or not my identity was known- At this rate I would probably end up unrecognizable before I even hit the scene. Even if I was recognizable, I would probably end up looking like my Dad.

"You can do that, can't you?"

"Yes, I can…" she trailed off, sounding unsure.

"You'll get a better understanding of what's going on than any doctor will. And plus, i bet I'm going to be the most interesting thing you've looked at in a while…"

I was smiling.

"How about it?"

A faint smile back at me. "I am pretty curious about what's going on with your power and body…"

She came back in the room.

"You're here, right? I mean, why not? The most powerful striker in the world, stuck in hospitals all day, doesn't that get kind of, you know, boring?"

"It can, i'll admit. But what can I do? Not heal people?" she responded, sitting back down next to me.

"That's.... Actually a good point, Panacea. I'll think about it while you see what's going on." I held out my hand. She reached out and grabbed my hand. I reflexively pulled back. "-Oh, uhhh, might want to grip my wrist."

"Okay. This might take a while. I'm just going to look and see what's going on. Usually I ask you to be still, but you're not changing anything. Eating the food the nurse brought shouldn't cause any problems."

She closed her eyes. In the meantime, I just downed some of the protein and other food while Panacea sat with her eyes closed, holding my left wrist as I ate with my right hand.

The food was gone in about five bites. I could taste the antiseptics in the air with each mouthful, ugh. I was pretty full by the end, but I knew better than that at this point. I'd probably be hungry again in the next ten minutes. Not completely or permanently filling, but each meal I felt a little bit better and it took longer to get hungry. The pain had gone away by now at least.

My left wrist had been put into a sling- doctors had considered putting it into a cast, but I told them they could fuck off unless Panacea here was willing to look at me first… My power had been just fine restoring me up to this point- wanted to ensure it would continue to work… A full cast would probably mess it up somehow.

A couple minutes went by as the pain in my left arm from the break and concussion subsided. She was still sitting there, holding my wrist.

Another minute.

The boredom. The hunger. I was honestly getting kind of tired from the boredom. Nothing to do here. Kind of wanted to leave.

Another long minute.

Oh, right, she talked about what she could do? Hmm. Well, I mean, not healing people? She's not limited to it isn't she? Like, I bet she can do more than that…. If she can, she could just, like work out other solutions right? I mean, even surgeons can only do so much. Isn't she like the most powerful and capable surgeon in the world?

Was she asleep?

Hmm. Actually, the most powerful surgeon part is a good point. Some of the most important doctors and scientists aren't the ones on the front lines. Why not angle yourself differently? It'd be more interesting, at least, I think.

The minutes kept passing by and I kept going, that line of reasoning.

Food came again, for the fourth time. I ate some more. Also, getting bored and ready to leave the house, er, I mean hospital. The pain had gone a long time ago, and I had been growing in energy.

Glory Girl even came in, looking for her sister. She looked at me, as I waved with my right arm.

"Whoa. What happened to you?" She said. Panacea jumped in surprise.

"Hi Glory Girl!" I said, giving her a smile as only I could.

"You can talk?" she said, looking at me.

"Glory Girl!" Panacea said, looking at her in disdain.

"Well, uh, yeah. That's not the only thing I can do. Look at this!" Stuck my absurdly long tongue at her. Then touched it to the bridge of my nose. Got a decent taste of the scales now growing in that area. The middle finger on my right hand conveniently popped up as well.

Glory Girl frowned. Panacea did too.

"You know the rules Glory Girl, I'm with a patient, I'll be out in five minutes!" She got up and shut the door, leaving her sister on the other side.

"I can probably take her down, too." I muttered. Panacea looked at me in horror. Ugh, not again.

"No, I mean, I'm not a villain or anything. And that's not a threat either. I'm just a little competitive. What do you think? What's going on?" I asked her.

She took a breath, sitting back down in the chair. "You're probably the most fascinating case I've ever seen, honestly. Oh, and about the last comment about taking my sister on? No, I was worried she'd hear you and force a challenge- she takes those kinds of comments seriously! Also, sorry that took so long. Your biology is absolutely fascinating. Your body was actively changing, growing, and repairing all at the same time! It was slow enough for me to see what was going on, but it was fascinating. So interesting to observe and just watch what was going on, honestly."

"Uh- huh." I said. "So, can you tell me what that means?"

"Sure. So, here's an example. Your left arm was broken right?"

I nodded. "Yeah, and?"

"Well your whole left arm is kind of splitting, at the break- but it's still connected at your wrist- there's your circulatory system is weaving itself around the bones, and it's creating minor structurally weak sections along the way… Your lungs, your whole body… It's absolutely fascinating, honestly, the claws in your hand, the whole mechanism for retracting, there's little pipes that lead from your lungs to your claws… Your lungs- they're more like internal tanks filled with water and gills. When you breathe it forces the water inside to froth a bit, and that's how you're getting oxygen."

This was a bit more than I was ready to take in at the moment.

"Your digestive system, it's incredibly efficient. I wouldn't be surprised if you only needed to excrete waste once a week at this rate, if it weren't for your massive caloric needs. Your blood, oh your blood is ridiculously thick. Your heart is probably twice as strong Your brain-"

"You're losing me there, hunny." She glanced away from me. Her cheeks a little rosy. "Okay, Pan, let's slow down before we get too ahead of ourselves here. I know I'm eating a lot, and even now I'm starting to feel hungry again… Let's take this from the top, starting with my diet..."

She refocused and looked back at me as I trailed off. "Your body is reorganizing itself it seems, and it's using a lot of mass as its increases your efficiency, but at this rate of change, your increased heart rate, pockets of adrenaline next to major blood vessels…"
She must have saw the look on my face as she dialed back a bit.

"You will need a higher daily calorie intake. Given the body profile you gave the doctor earlier I'd bet you only needed about 1700 calories a day to maintain a healthy lifestyle before you gained powers. That's obviously false now. Your body has consumed three thousand at least in the last hour alone, but from what I could tell I bet you will only need about 2300 calories per day once it's done. You expend more energy, but your body is also a lot more efficient too.."

"Can you tell me where those calories are going?"

"I can. I saw how your body was using them as you ate."

"And?"

"It's complicated, but to keep it simple, your food is being digested the moment it enters your mouth, even as you chew. Then, when it gets put down your esoph- I mean throat, it kind of breaks it down even mo-"

"Sorry, let's dial it back again. That's over my head. What's happening to those calories? Going straight to fat?"

"Right, right. Your heart is consuming a lot, your brain, which was harder to get a read on, is too. There's a secondary, compressed mass along your spine behind your right lung, similar to your brain which is also consuming a smaller but still significant portion of calories. Not a tumor. Too much variety in the cells. That's probably about a quarter of your passive calorie burn."

The thought of having a second brain sounded pretty interesting, if not really creepy. Keeping her on track though, as I did not have knowledge of human biology or biochemistry, I asked:

"But that's not where all these calories right now are going to, are they?"

"Actually, they were going to those regions. The secondary brain-mass seems to have stabilized and requires less caloric mass than before. No, I think your body is responding to the damage you've received and not just repairing it, but actively devising counters for the damage that happened."

My front teeth were coming loose as I chewed. I looked at the clock- been in the PRT wing of the hospital about two hours now, probably thirty minutes with Panacea I'm guessing. The sun in the window had been setting.

"Yeah, I figured something like that." I looked at my hands and played with my fingers a bit.

"I think my power is responding to problems proactively. Is that true?"

"Yes, I think it is. It's cold outside, so your blood has a certain type of protein floating around. One that i've only ever heard about in bugs and some kinds of reptiles. I wonder why your body decided to do that..."

"Probably when I got my powers, rather not talk about it right now." I said.

"Sorry. Don't mean to bring up any negative feelings or memories. Just assumed you were always in a coat or something. Anyway, you're right. I think your power tries to not just respond to the damage by making it harder for you to take it, but it seems to be giving you tools along the way."

"That explains my sprained and unsprained ankle changing into this. But what's going on with my arm?"

"I think it's turning into some kind of retractable wing."

"...huh?"

"Take it out of the sling, I'll show you what I mean."

We did so. The arm looked mostly fine- didn't see anything too wrong with it, really.

"See it?" she asked.

"Not really?"

"Here, let me show you."

She reached the base of my elbow and pressed down. Clack!

"Holy SHIT!"

"Yeah, pretty awesome, huh?"

I felt like I had a normal hand and arm, but apparently I had a wing now too.

"That's fucking amazing Panacea!" She was beaming.

"You are the coolest thing I've worked with in so long… uh.."

"Call me Beast for now. I'll figure out a real name later."

"Beast, I'll remember that. So refreshing to see something new that's actually biological and not from Bonesaw or another twisted tinker.."

More food had arrived, and I was scarfing it down. It had been twenty minutes since I had last eaten. Body must have been slowing down I guess.

"Uh-huh. So do you think I can fly?"

She shook her head "Not really. Your arm didn't change, among other problems. Might be able to glide with forward momentum, but I don't know how you'd control yourself while in the air."

"Awww…" But then a thought came to me, a grin that spread across my face, looking at her mischievously.

"What? No- No no. I just fix people. I'm just a healer, that's all." She said.

The grin went away, slightly at least.

"Buuut-"

"No, no no. no no no." She said, sitting there. "I can't make it so you can fly, sorry."

"No, I'm not asking you for that, Panacea. You said you're a healer, Right?"

"I am a healer, but exotic body parts aren't healing either!"

"When a kid comes to you with a gimpy arm do you let them just run around with only a gimpy arm?" -She gave me a look- "That's what I'm asking here, Panacea- Think of it like a gimpy arm..."

She sighed at me. In return, I smiled to give her some comfort. She was a soft girl, who I'm willing to bet, responded best to hugging and positivity. I could probably own her in a fight before I had any powers. There'd be no meaning or point to it in either case.

"Fine, I'll do it!" She said, exasperated "Wouldn't want Miss Scaleface here to look weird."

I giggled a bit, "Hey! It's not about looking good!" I told her in my now high-pitched and rhaspy voice. "... It's about function."

This time, she giggled. "Watch out, we're going to have a flying Beast over Brockton soon!"

"Oh jeeze, it won't be that bad. I'll just look like a Pterodactyl or something."

After some more banter and laughing, we calmed down and she put her hand on my wrist again.

"Okay, this is going to take a bit more concentration in usual, so just close your eyelets and relax."

I think she was smirking at me. Whatever, I had a new friend. One I couldn't rough around with like Sophia but a friend nonetheless.

After about ten minutes she opened her eyes. I was hungry again. We continued to chat about nothing, like school and whatnot.

"Well, it was fun to meet you, Beast. I should probably have been gone about two hours ago."

"You two, Panacea."

She was looking around sheepishly.

"Yes?"

"I… I was wondering if you'd be willing to join New Wave. You're kind of recognizable. And you could probably do more with us than with the Wards."

That… Actually seemed pretty appealing. But, something was off. If I joined a Hero Organization at all, I probably wouldn't have as much fun.

"Thanks for the invite. I'll think about it, Panacea. I like getting into fights a bit too much. Probably wouldn't do well in either New Wave or the PRT. If you think we could make it work with your family, I'm willing to hear you out."

I hadn't been hungry in a while. Huh.

"Okay. Yeah, I'll talk to my family about it. Though Glory Girl does like to get rough and I bet you'd get along with her in that regard."

Hmmm…. "Do you think she'd be interested in a fight?"

She had a "Well, I bet she would..." She had a look of concern on her face.

"Are you worried about me hurting her?"

"No! I'm worried about you, Beast! I don't think she'd hold back, and she's really strong."

This, now this was a challenge. I flexed my muscles. I was much larger than Glory Girl was… Though, I did know of her feats.

"No way. And even if she could, I doubt she'd be willing to do any actual harm." She was looking out the window, frowning

"Oh, sorry. You're probably wanting to go home. Can I go with you?"

So we did. Glory Girl was waiting downstairs. The PRT wanted me to stay for more screenings and whatnot, but I told them they could eat a chode. I was fine.

While we were walking, Glory Girl asked me, "So Beast, why don't you wear a mask?"

I thought a bit more about it then shrugged. "Probably for a couple of reasons. The biggest, because I don't care that much about it. The second, is that if my power continues, I probably won't even look human much longer."

Glory Girl glanced at me, then at Panacea. "I mean, if you go too out of the way, and you joined New Wave, we could probably take care of that." she said, volunteering Panacea's assistance.

Oooh, this was an opportunity for me. Let's see where I can go from here. Emma was better at this stuff than I was, but her skill had rubbed off on me quite a bit. I was a blend of both Sophia and Emma at this. Moreso Sophia, but I think I could get her a bit up and going.

"I don't want to take advantage of Panacea. That should be something she should decide on her own. Right, Panacea?" She was frowning.

Glory Girl looked at me with anger in her eyes. "Panacea is a member on her own free and helps people because she wants to!"

She took the bait! This was going to be fun.

"Right, Pan?"

Panacea was doing her best to look very small. She didn't even look up at her sister. Glory Girl put her hand on Panacea's shoulder, holding her.

"Look, Glory Girl. I don't think Panacea even wants to be a hero. Look at her. She's tired, and instead of spending the rest of her time helping others, she spent it with me, hanging out and chatting! She. Doesn't. Want. To. Do. It."

I was a bit taller than Glory Girl right now, and looked down at her. "No. You did this to Panacea. What have you done?"
"What are you talking about? I haven't done anything to her. All I did was talk to her!"

"Stop it, both of you! Vicky! Turn down your Aura, it hurts!" Huh. I hadn't felt it. Weird.

"You can feel it, Ames?" Glory said, surprised.

"Yes! And it's hurting me!"

Glory Girl looked sad, then glanced at Panacea. "I'm sorry Ames. Let's just get you home- we can talk about all this later." Ames just nodded. Her blonde-haired sister turned to me.

"You can walk yourself home, bitch." she said to me. Panacea just nodded as she grabbed her sister. I smiled as they rose into the air.

I had Panacea's phone number. With the seeds set, Glory Girl was going to be really fun.



Next chapter is GG vs Beast

Need a better name. Also, we have agitated a very strong opponent, and have decided that while we are finishing repairs, it may be wise to break physics in some way in order to give host higher chances for survival.

Current host stats (Not exhaustive, see past plans for full list):
  • Full body regeneration will take two days from being left with just a core.
  • Host requires 2500 calories a day to remain functional.
  • Legs are extremely stable, can run faster than most Olympic runners. Testing required for exact speeds.
  • Host is currently about 5' 10"
  • Resistant to significant human-based blunt force (primarily fists)
  • 180 lbs body fat percentage w/ about 12% to account for cold weather and provide some passive energy storage.
  • Host can hold approximately 1200 calories (variant upon type of food) at any one time in their body on top of extra body fat.
  • Arms are not fast-twitch muscles. Fast enough for a boxing match, not faster than human.
  • Three extendable claws in each hand.
  • Extendable and retractable limb which pops out and turns the arm into a small wing. Not enough mass of flesh in the wings to do more than soften the blow as they crash into the earth. Wings must be manually folded after being extended. Also must be manually extended. Latching mechanism holding them together.

Vote #1 PHYSICS BREAK! - PICK ONE

[] Create pocket storage dimension for near-instantaneous regeneration. Can hold about five lbs of repurposeable mass for the body at any given time.
COST: About 8000 calorie intake required per day for about one weeks' time. Host may begin to consider other beings food.

[] Hyper-Dense Bones: More dense than lead.
COST: Bone breaks takes full day to regenerate individually, limb regeneration takes full week to regenerate on average.

[] Time Slow - When host is threatened and senses are heightened, they are able to react with fine control 50% faster than any other human being.
COST: Burn a pound of body fat per five seconds while Time Slow is active.

[] Drop passive caloric requirements by 1/3.
NO COST

[] WRITE-IN (INCLUDE SOME KIND OF COST) - Must be a direct counter to some type of damage which Glory Girl can inflict.

Vote #2
[] Write-in: Give Beast a new cape name!

Edit: This is a proposal period for discussion. Votes will open Saturday with separate post.
 
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[X] Drop passive caloric requirements by 1/3.

[X] "Beast" is fine
 
Vote #1 PHYSICS BREAK! - PICK ONE
[] Create pocket mass storage dimension for faster regeneration. Can hold about five lbs of repurposeable flesh at any given time.
COST: Half-Speed regeneration and about 8000 calorie intake required per day for about two weeks' time. Host may begin to consider other beings food.

This is one of those things that's better to do if we have the PRT or other organization feeding us. Mass pocket has a lot of uses.
If we're staying independent, then no, 8000 calories would only be anywhere near affordable if she started drinking cooking oil by the bottle.

[] Hyper-Dense Bones: More dense than lead.
COST: Bone breaks takes full day to regenerate individually, limb regeneration takes full week to regenerate on average.

High density bones adds more force to attacks and has a stronger frame to build stuff on, but makes limb reconfiguration and flight much much harder as we need enormously more mass and force to break them

[] Time Slow - When host is threatened and senses are heightened, they are able to react with fine control 50% faster than any other human being.
COST: Burn a pound of body fat per three seconds while Time Slow is active.

This imposes some SEVERE operating costs, we're talking about a per deployment calorie intake comparable to a tank, considering how much energy goes into a pound of fat.

[] Drop passive caloric requirements by 1/3.
NO COST

This is more of paving the road for further upgrades without going so far as to start thinking of people as food. Cutting passive caloric requirements means greater ability to add features without hitting critical energy demand thresholds

[] WRITE-IN (INCLUDE SOME KIND OF COST)

Hmm...
I can think of a few options:

[] Universal digestive system. Able to breakdown any object physically capable of fitting into digestive tract for utilization, including inorganic substances.
COST: Increased passive calorie requirements. Not actually immune to harmful(as opposed to simply indigestible) materials consumed without further adaptations. Host may begin to consider inanimate materials as desirable food based on their caloric content.

The idea being that she'd be able to consume wood, petrol, oil, etc for caloric demands, making her more reliable to refuel. After all, high energy burn has it's own costs if she's stuck in the wilderness.
Additionally, this provides for more adaptation triggers as she experiments with food and gets poisoned, burned or other unpleasantries.
And later on, the ability to eat metal and exotic materials provides means to expand adaptations with new materials.

Originally I thought of adding the ability to meet caloric demands via absorbing electricity, but that seems a little out there compared to the other adaptations

[] Kinetic charge. Able to store and release limited amounts of kinetic energy on the impact site in the opposite direction an instant after the moment of impact. Only affects extremities(arms, legs, tail).
Cost: Host experiences deadened sense of touch on affected areas. Fine manipulation of fragile objects more difficult

This basically reduces damage by flinging away bullets and blades after they hit, but before they penetrate deeply. It also lets us exert more force, approximately double when punching or jumping.

It's totally a coincidence that this will give us automatic doubletaps on Victoria. :p

@dwood15

Thoughts?


Vote #2
[] Write-in: Give Beast a new cape name!
Thinking something like Evolve. It's not like that quality is going to be unknown.
 
[] Universal digestive system. Able to breakdown any object physically capable of fitting into digestive tract for utilization, including inorganic substances.
COST: Increased passive calorie requirements. Not actually immune to harmful(as opposed to simply indigestible) materials consumed without further adaptations. Host may begin to consider inanimate materials as desirable food based on their caloric content.

if this one is allowed i'm voting for it!
 
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