Just reread this, honestly love it and grave is such a cutie that deserves all the hug <3

On a more speculative note, has her power plant been discussed at all? It sounds like she runs on some ichor/fuel hybrid from what I can tell, but if she's actually a cyborg more than she is a ship, maybe she can replace some of it with fission/fusion power? Abyssal's are literally magic, so that might let her get around some of the material limitations, and if she can do that, she might be able to teach the squishy humans how to fusion power. Or just give herself some Casaba howitzer missiles xP
 
On a more speculative note, has her power plant been discussed at all? It sounds like she runs on some ichor/fuel hybrid from what I can tell, but if she's actually a cyborg more than she is a ship, maybe she can replace some of it with fission/fusion power? Abyssal's are literally magic, so that might let her get around some of the material limitations, and if she can do that, she might be able to teach the squishy humans how to fusion power. Or just give herself some Casaba howitzer missiles xP
Grace's class of BMINT uses an "ichor," which is basically blood except it doesn't have a red blood cell analogue. Fuel just gets mixed in from her tanks or leached out of her reserves, then pulled out when needed by membranes. And her fuel is weird. It doesn't vaporize easily, yet has low viscosity. Also, the properties of her fuel and power systems allow her to operate underwater without needing to breathe. Which actually makes her the only surface ship capable of moving at a decent clip underwater. (She can't go too fast since hydrodynamics.) Retrofitting to fusion is a possibility, but only so far as retrofitting a real carrier with a fusion powerplant would be.

Casaba howiters wouldn't be that effective in atmosphere. But if Grace could drop thermonuclear bombs the navy would definitely be interested.
So, Grace is less shipgirl/abyssal and more a biomechanical being masquerading as a spiritual ship in human form. This is certainly a very different take from the usual shipgirl "biology".

Grace right now is a very unique individual.
Yeah, shipgirls, demons, and princesses are mainly ship overlaid with girl, with a bunch of weird conditional layer masks. (So going underwater at 20+ knots... well that's impossible for both girls and ships so not possible.)
Grace's design started with "what if we made a biological cell out of steel?" and went from there. You cannot get a pure girl layer-image from her or a pure ship-layer image from her because she only has one layer. (Well sorta?) Like the ultrasound and the heartbeat listening? The doctors were expecting pure girl from those and didn't get it. They were seeing her crew passages and the ultrasound didn't have any software to compensate for that.
 
Yeah, shipgirls, demons, and princesses are mainly ship overlaid with girl, with a bunch of weird conditional layer masks. [...] You cannot get a pure girl layer-image from her or a pure ship-layer image from her because she only has one layer.
This framing of things makes me wonder whether our protagonist exists because whatever force is behind the existence of shipgirl phenomena is finally trying to explore/evolve a synthesis position from the dichotomies it's created (ship vs girl, kanmusu vs abyssal, etc).
 
Also, the properties of her fuel and power systems allow her to operate underwater without needing to breathe. Which actually makes her the only surface ship capable of moving at a decent clip underwater. (She can't go too fast since hydrodynamics.)
i wonder if theres a way to get the other shipgirls running on that fuel, at least temporarily?
 
Saw this when it came out, it seemed interesting so I watched the thread, but wasn't in a great spot to read it at the time. Finally did so properly a couple days ago, and finally commenting now ^.^;

Anyway, I really, really love this! Cool and unique premise, I really love Grace so far, and I can't wait to see where this all goes!

I really love the weird mix of culture shock and offhanded "oh huh neat" non-reactions to her weird new biology Grace is having; it's probably a good thing, all things considered, that there's some built-in psychological easing of the process given how freaky some of the changes would probably feel normally.

And that she's been so disconnected from the war up to this point, too. Just the general fact of like, waking up to discover yourself as an eldritch demon thing probably responsible for untold deaths, just on its face would be A Lot to have to process, if she had more emotional investment in the conflict beforehand than just "oh my god mom shut the fuck up about microchips already, please." As Itmauve said:
What kind of person would cosplay as an Abyssal? Do you want to present yourself as that kind of person?
In all of the transfics I've read, (which isn't many but still) I haven't seen one that really delves into the question of "what if miracle magic sex-change... but mixed feelings because that comes with an aesthetic shift you still kinda dislike anyway, undercutting the gender euphoria?" And I don't expect this to be that fic, but it is still interesting that in its own way, what with just the Political Implications™ of such a look, the possibility is here. So again, probably a good thing that she doesn't have the same kind of intense feelings about Abyssals that most people probably would.

Though I also wonder if that was a contributing factor to this transformation being able to happen in the first place... Hmm.

Have only had Grace for three chapters, but if anything happened to her I would kill everyone in this universe and then myself.
While it may well be for Crab Reasons as was insightfully pointed out, I have to say I am jokingly pumping my fist at coffee disliker representation.
Absolutely same here!

Uhm, there's a whole gundam anime where the protagonist is a lesbian Mary Sue.
What's it called? I'd love to watch it. We unironically need more lesbian mary sues in fiction.
 
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It's called… Witch from mercury? I think?

Yeah, the political reactions are going to be… interesting, let's call them interesting.
No one's ever accused the American public of thinking things through before they poor vitriol and hate on people, and Grace is going to be a *super* tempting target once news gets out.

Not that attacking a warship with a mob of angry civilians is going to do… anything at all, but still, it won't be good for her mental health if that happens, so hopefully Naval PR is a little bit more on the ball than fuller and her boss.

I do think she should probably tell her friends sooner than later but that assumes the navy bothers to remember that she's fourteen and needs her support network in order to grow.

Edit: corrections
 
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It's called… Witch from mercury? I think?
It's called witch from mercury.
Yeah, I know ^.^; WfM is the only Gundam show with a girl protagonist, so that kinda inherently narrows the options a lot. I was more commenting on the choice of descriptor for Suletta, which seems both inaccurate to her and kind of an antiquated concept in general. Like I said, we unironically need more mary sues in fiction.
 
Yes, but I don't think she wants one as of end-of-chapter, and I don't think anyone else wants to risk that.

Abuse-brain is a helluva drug.

I'd love to say I thought the military would be smarter than to try to fucking probe a traumatized teenage girl...but we've historically accidentally dropped a nuke on our own soil.

It didn't go off...but still. 32 nuclear mishap events. And that's only the official ones.

www.pbs.org

Broken Arrows: How Many Nuclear Accidents Have We Had? | American Experience | PBS

All-out nuclear war may be the greatest risk we face with modern weaponry, but it’s not the only one.
 
I do think she should probably tell her friends sooner than later but that assumes the navy bothers to remember that she's fourteen and needs her support network in order to grow.
I just realized I had Grace kick the ball into Barker's court with the latest writing, so expect something soon on that front. Ish.
i wonder if theres a way to get the other shipgirls running on that fuel, at least temporarily?
No, and you'll find out why in Chapter 6.
Not that attacking a warship with a mob of angry civilians is going to do… anything at all, but still, it won't be good for her mental health if that happens, so hopefully Naval PR is a little bit more on the ball than fuller and her boss.
Admiral Constance's plan is slightly more... cynical.
It's called witch from mercury. I was confused by MC because it's somewhat popular.
You don't read the author's notes, do you?
O-5 walking into a hospital room with 5 O-6, 3 of which are medical, and proceed to attempt to execute orders despite objections from the medical O-6s...
Fowler and the destroyers are O-6. The other two doctors were civilians who signed on after awakening, so they haven't been here that long.
That said, Cass can easily pick up any ship and put her into Ceiling Jail, and that alone is reason to respect her.
 
I just realized I had Grace kick the ball into Barker's court with the latest writing, so expect something soon on that front. Ish.
Yay! Personal interactions and support networks are important after all.
Admiral Constance's plan is slightly more... cynical.
So they're… planning on her being mobbed by angry civilians at some point and just prepping for the fallout…?
Sorry, am kinda dumb sometimes so I'm not sure what you're getting at, but I'm sure it will be awesome to read whenever you get there<3
 
Fowler and the destroyers are O-6. The other two doctors were civilians who signed on after awakening, so they haven't been here that long.
That said, Cass can easily pick up any ship and put her into Ceiling Jail, and that alone is reason to respect her.
So 3 O-6 (one of whom are medical) and two medical O-3 (or higher depending on just how qualified they were as physicians when they awakened).
 
So they're… planning on her being mobbed by angry civilians at some point and just prepping for the fallout…?
They're planning under the assumption that no matter how much they try on the PR front, someone will try to take a swing at her. In fact, PR attempts could make things worse, by drawing attention to her.
So 3 O-6 (one of whom are medical) and two medical O-3 (or higher depending on just how qualified they were as physicians when they awakened).
Yeah. Both probably at least O-4, since even Wayne, who was a physical therapist (and therefore has changed her field a bit), has time in the service. SMF Norfolk's CO is going to send the rookies to handle routine refit work on a newly awakened cruiser joining SJOTC, not to handle this task. (And Fowler would have asked "excuse me, why the rookies?" if she did.)
 
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That said, Cass can easily pick up any ship and put her into Ceiling Jail, and that alone is reason to respect her.

IT IS kind of Sad Fowler didn't drop a "We're gonna need a bigger boat" on laying eyes on Grace, but I suppose she might've done that offscreen.
Not gonna let that deter her, obviously.
 
IT IS kind of Sad Fowler didn't drop a "We're gonna need a bigger boat" on laying eyes on Grace, but I suppose she might've done that offscreen.
Not gonna let that deter her, obviously.

Yeah, Fuller kinda forgot one of the basic rules of navigation: Little Ship gets the hell outta the way of Big Ship.

O-5 walking into a hospital room with 5 O-6, 3 of which are medical, and proceed to attempt to execute orders despite objections from the medical O-6s...

Fuller is going to be lucky to be busted down to O-2, if she's going to be acting like one.

And if she'd blown off an admiral, she'd be lucky to have a job at all. Military spokespeople talk a good game about how you can reject unlawful orders, but they're terrible at backing it up. Especially when there's an active war going on.

Shipgirls use repair baths and the special water to regenerate.
i wonder what she uses?

Your guess is as good as mine. Abyssal logistics are almost completely undocumented. Bmints even more so.
 
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Your guess is as good as mine. Abyssal logistics are almost completely undocumented. Bmints even more so.
The souls of the innocent A beagle maybe two.
perhaps since she seems more biological, she just uses Time and available Biomass to speed things up?
not as Fast as the Repair Baths, sure.
But slow and steady Constant healing has its place as well...

something something endurance hunters, something something victory through endurance.
 
perhaps since she seems more biological, she just uses Time and available Biomass to speed things up?
not as Fast as the Repair Baths, sure.
But slow and steady Constant healing has its place as well...

something something endurance hunters, something something victory through endurance.
More like something something starfish something check if you cut of a limb and you get two of her something something.
 
IT IS kind of Sad Fowler didn't drop a "We're gonna need a bigger boat" on laying eyes on Grace, but I suppose she might've done that offscreen.
Not gonna let that deter her, obviously.
Grace is big, but she's "Fleet Carrier" big. Not even Cass's "Floating drydock" big. So everyone has already seen this big of a boat here.
Shipgirls use repair baths and the special water to regenerate.
I'm kinda iffy on that. Like, shipgirls do get actual holes in their actual bodies from battle damage that would fill with actual water if they went into a bath.
On the other hand, the idea of a shipGIRL's hygiene reflecting, and perhaps improving, said SHIPgirl's readiness and maintenance... doesn't that make some nice sense?

And it's not like they need repair baths, since they have so many support ships. Right now I'm thinking (numbers subject to change), STC has trained 2-3 times as many support ships as combat ships, and support ships only enter the navy at a rate of maybe 40-50%.
 
I'm kinda iffy on that. Like, shipgirls do get actual holes in their actual bodies from battle damage that would fill with actual water if they went into a bath.
On the other hand, the idea of a shipGIRL's hygiene reflecting, and perhaps improving, said SHIPgirl's readiness and maintenance... doesn't that make some nice sense?

And it's not like they need repair baths, since they have so many support ships. Right now I'm thinking (numbers subject to change), STC has trained 2-3 times as many support ships as combat ships, and support ships only enter the navy at a rate of maybe 40-50%.

One thing all the official sources agree on is that a shipgirl with any level of damage up to and including "just seaworthy enough to drag back to base" can be brought back to 100% health by marinating them in magic healy juice. This can take anywhere from a short soak to a couple days depending on the size of the ship and degree of damage. Said sources also agree that construction ships and the like can fully restore a shipgirl's condition, but it'll take several times as long.

The outright fastest way to bring a shipgirl back up to prime condition is to douse them with a bucketful of what I assume is a super-concentrated version of whatever's in the bathwater, colloquially known as the "instant repair bucket" because that's the turnaround time. Predictably, that stuff tends to be in very short supply.
 
One thing all the official sources agree on is that a shipgirl with any level of damage up to and including "just seaworthy enough to drag back to base" can be brought back to 100% health by marinating them in magic healy juice. This can take anywhere from a short soak to a couple days depending on the size of the ship and degree of damage. Said sources also agree that construction ships and the like can fully restore a shipgirl's condition, but it'll take several times as long.

The outright fastest way to bring a shipgirl back up to prime condition is to douse them with a bucketful of what I assume is a super-concentrated version of whatever's in the bathwater, colloquially known as the "instant repair bucket" because that's the turnaround time. Predictably, that stuff tends to be in very short supply.
Yeah.

i like to imagine the super healy sauce is a mix of minerals and materials the ship bits are made of, various fuels and cleaning oils, and actual magic.

also, at least temporarily, Boss Abyssals had a regeneration ability.

Boss Bar Regeneration

Boss Bar Regeneration was an Event Only Mechanic that was introduced during the Summer 2013 Event and Fall 2013 Event. This mechanic introduce a more difficult form of battle in which players had to race against the clock to defeat Abyssal Boss Fleets as every hour that passed the Abyssal Boss...
 
One thing all the official sources agree on is that a shipgirl with any level of damage up to and including "just seaworthy enough to drag back to base" can be brought back to 100% health by marinating them in magic healy juice. This can take anywhere from a short soak to a couple days depending on the size of the ship and degree of damage. Said sources also agree that construction ships and the like can fully restore a shipgirl's condition, but it'll take several times as long.

The outright fastest way to bring a shipgirl back up to prime condition is to douse them with a bucketful of what I assume is a super-concentrated version of whatever's in the bathwater, colloquially known as the "instant repair bucket" because that's the turnaround time. Predictably, that stuff tends to be in very short supply.
While that's what the official sources have, I don't think the official sources include things like "this hole/wound goes all the way into her machinery spaces and is leaking smoke." Because at that point dunking them into a bath is just going to flood the section of the ship, which would kind of preclude any sort of repairs. Like yes it gives you an excuse for bath fanservice... but you don't need that for a good story. And it always kind of struck me as the weirdest part of the concept. Not only for the above bits, but also where does the information for this formula come from? What other information came from this source? (Because at least if my superior officer ordered me to their office and ordered me to develop a method of summoning past ships as anime waifu warriors, I could at least use fictional summoning methods as a starting point. This? No clue.) (Also, Barker mentioned she "manifested," and as far as anyone else is concerned historical shipgirls just appeared out of thin air. No summons here. (Mostly kinda moot because it's been a dozen years; how many shipgirls are left on the list?))
 
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