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Yon is a low ranking disciple at the Lotus Eye Sect, no one special. But everything is about to change
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When Yon was six, he was sold by his family to the Lotus Eye Sect, partly so that they could feed their remaining children, and partly in the hope that he might be able to benefit from mere proximity to the ancient masters of one of the Four Great Sects. It was a harsh life and he wept bitter tears of resentment for his lot in life, even if later he would understand the cold logic of it all. Better to be scared, lonely, nearly starve, and be beaten by senior servants for failure to perform than to definitely starve with his family.

When Yon was eleven, one of the core disciples rounded up a number of servants in an attempt to force enlightenment upon them to test a theory. The theory and experiment both proved poorly thought out, and Yon was the only survivor due to a pre-existing spark of enlightenment. Now a person of some value rather than a thing of little value, he was made to take the initiations or die trying.

When Yon was fourteen, he finally completed the initiations that fanned his fragile spark of enlightenment into something more enduring, and was made an outer disciple. Heavily indebted with a lifetime of toil for the sect ahead of him, Yon's circumstances had fundamentally not changed even though he was stronger and in a more comfortable position than had he remained an unenlightened servant.

Now that Yon is eighteen, things are looking up. While still owned at a fundamental level by the sect, he is no longer at the bottom in the division where he worked, even if he still mostly did routine scut work. He had friends and even a few contacts among the actually important people in the sect, even if he was aware that any limited benefit he got out of the relationship was purely asset protection by a patron. Most of all, while most of what he earned has gone into chipping away at his debt, he has managed to secure a few special techniques and treasures. Nothing spectacular, nothing that can't be found elsewhere in the sect, but things that make things a bit easier altogether.

He's going to need every advantage he gets though, since things are about to change.

Where has Yon been working? (Choose 1)
[ ] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[ ] [Work] Artisan Annex - long hours shaping materials
[ ] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[ ] [Work] Scriptorium Complex - copying out basic texts

Who has Yon made a connection with? (Choose 1)
[ ] [Contact] Young Master - the great-great nephew of an old monster likes trading pointers with Yon
[ ] [Contact] Genius Outsider - a nobody with surprising talent leans on Yon for favours
[ ] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[ ] [Contact] Noble Scion - the heir of an allied clan uses Yon as a gofer within the sect

What treasures has Yon accumulated? (Choose 3)
[ ] [Treasure] Fortunate Pendant - things always go a little better than they should
[ ] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[ ] [Treasure] Insightful Leader's Monocle - a curious object that clarifies orders to subordinates
[ ] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[ ] [Treasure] Ghost Cutting Xiphos - this short sword can cut even the intangible
[ ] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[ ] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible
[ ] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[ ] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[ ] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
 
[X] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible
 
[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing

[X] [Contact] Genius Outsider - a nobody with surprising talent leans on Yon for favours

[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
 
Plan :Luck is a Lady
[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey

[X] [Treasure] Fortunate Pendant - things always go a little better than they should
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body

The important part of being in a cultivation series is to be someone that is more useful alive than dead.
Serving the Jade beauty means we are not as likely to be murdered to send a message to our contact, the fortune pendant means someone else is more likely to be used as an example.
Medicine means that we are not fighting with someone else about our job or a sudden secret find , and we are likely to gain some power on a steady drip. The recipe means that we can give it also to others, thus keeping usefullnes and the Kudzu might have medical properties.

Be the third henchman from the left , not the target.
 
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[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Fortunate Pendant - things always go a little better than they should
[X] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
 
Okay, gonna put some actual arguments down for these choices.

Where has Yon been working? (Choose 1)
[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing

I won't try and cast this decision as a no-brainer; all of these choices have potential. Copying texts gets us access to information, hunting means we can filch spiritual cores and harvested materials, crafting is always useful. But we're in a xianxia here, and that means two things: first, that people are gonna get hurt, and more importantly, that the traditional attitude of "repay an insult tenfold, but repay a kindness a hundredfold" is going to be in effect with at least some people. Traditionally, "I found the loser of a duel and patched their beaten carcass back together so that they could go Protagonist at whoever beat the stuffing out of them" is a pretty solid way to get a very powerful person indebted to you - and even if we don't get an opportunity like that, medics are valuable. If we get too skilled that makes us a target for enemies of our sect (as any TF2 player knows, you shoot the Medic first), but at this level it just means we have a better shot of not getting flattened by a superior for no reason.

Who has Yon made a connection with? (Choose 1)
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey

Young Masters and Noble Scions do rather more fighting each other and making enemies that I want to get involved in, and that goes double for the Genius Outsider. All three stand a high chance of getting us to take sides in some kind of rivalry that we are not high-levelled enough to come out of unbattered just yet. By contrast, while Jade Beauties absolutely get involved in the same kind of shit, it doesn't turn brutally violent quite as often and is more likely, if we get pulled into any kind of political shenanigans, to be more along the lines of people trying to court her and threatening information out of her lackeys, etc. Which is still not great, but being one of the young mistress's unimportant lackeys is better than than being someone a young master is known to trade pointers with, or the guy doing favours for the genius outsider who just showed up the sect heir. Note that these two may come with increased benefits - trading pointers with a young master will see us improve faster, while a genius who owes us is potentially very useful - but overall I prefer to be cautious with who we know. "Noble scion's gofer" is a second-place for "unimportant enough to not get into too much trouble", but yeah, I'm sticking with the jade beauty.

What treasures has Yon accumulated? (Choose 3)
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows

General rule of thumb: stick to a theme. The sword, the razor palm, being hotblooded or diamond-bodied - those are sword path merits. The monocle would be for if we're planning to do a lot of leading people - useful, but not very useful now, and not too suited to the medical path. The spirit path is, again, not the one I'm angling towards here, so the tome is out.

A budding medic with a secret elixir recipe, on the other hand, is very good traditional stuff. The ability to keep pills and exotic qi-rich food down better is also useful. So that leaves the last choice between a weird plant seed teacher thing and a lucky pendant, and... on the whole, I think the former is just more interesting than "things go a little better than they should". A specific buff that teaches specific things tends to be less bland and more character-focused than a general flavourless buff across the board. And being interested in plants fits with the focus on medicine, elixirs and digestion as a route to power.

Thus, my proposal: The Path Of The Foodie Gets The Girl!
 
Beyond Aleph's arguments, I do really like how this combination sounds.

[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
 
[X] [Work] Scriptorium Complex - copying out basic texts

My reasons for this are simple - I'm studying for a Master's in Library Science, I basically gotta go for the one that might lead us into becoming a Xianxia Librarian. Also, we might introduce archival standards into this world! Imagine that, becoming a master keeper of knowledge and information, freely giving it out to all and sundry in defiance of the typical 'hide all your secrets' logic of Xianxia worlds. It'll be great.

[X] [Contact] Noble Scion - the heir of an allied clan uses Yon as a gofer within the sect

Noble Scion + gofer = connections and incidental meetings galore! We can get our hands on so much stuff by doing this.

[X] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows

This is how the Way of the Librarians starts, by getting books of knowledge (and also eating healthy).
 
[X] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible


mc2rpg spitting for real lol.

A body cultivator sounds cool.
 
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[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body

Magic Medic with an employer and a really healthy body.
 
[x] [Work] Scriptorium Complex - copying out basic texts
[x] [Contact] Young Master - the great-great nephew of an old monster likes trading pointers with Yon
[x] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[x] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body

Big brain nerd build
 
[X] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible

Aleph put together a very good and convincing explanation, but being a violent minion just sounds fun.
 
[X] [Work] Scriptorium Complex - copying out basic texts
[X] [Contact] Young Master - the great-great nephew of an old monster likes trading pointers with Yon
[X] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
 
[X] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible
 
[X] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible

I think leaning into the whole 'dumb muscle' and subverting it in how we leverage it is actually a really interesting path. Sometimes its more interesting using basic tools and options in a clever way than trying to create a specialized niche for our peon to make themselves useful in from the outset.

I want to see what goes into being a successful crony because it seems more nuanced in a way than what goes into being a successful magical pharmacist who just happens to be more reliant on their patron than most for instance.
 
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[X] [Work] Artisan Annex - long hours shaping materials
[X] [Contact] Young Master - the great-great nephew of an old monster likes trading pointers with Yon
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
[X] [Treasure] Razor Palm Technique - a will of iron produces a sword body
 
[X] [Work] Hunting Division - routine harvesting of spirit beasts
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Boiling Blood Meditations - hot blood accelerates the muscles and makes one less edible
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
 
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable body
 
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Young Masters and Noble Scions do rather more fighting each other and making enemies that I want to get involved in, and that goes double for the Genius Outsider. All three stand a high chance of getting us to take sides in some kind of rivalry that we are not high-levelled enough to come out of unbattered just yet. By contrast, while Jade Beauties absolutely get involved in the same kind of shit, it doesn't turn brutally violent quite as often and is more likely, if we get pulled into any kind of political shenanigans, to be more along the lines of people trying to court her and threatening information out of her lackeys, etc. Which is still not great, but being one of the young mistress's unimportant lackeys is better than than being someone a young master is known to trade pointers with, or the guy doing favours for the genius outsider who just showed up the sect heir.

Ah, but you see, that sounds like fun.
If it gets really really bad, hope the young master likes us enough to burn a favour calling in their grand-uncle? Though the best thing is to be able to defend ourselves properly, of course.

[X] [Work] Artisan Annex - long hours shaping materials
[X] [Contact] Young Master - the great-great nephew of an old monster likes trading pointers with Yon
[X] [Treasure] Tome of Enlightenment - the Spirit Path is long, but this helps along the way
[X] [Treasure] Ghost Cutting Xiphos - this short sword can cut even the intangible
[X] [Treasure] Diamond Body Manual - a clarified soul should be housed within an unbreakable

No, we definitely don't use our treasure sword for cutting spirit stone blocks, that would be ridiculous. Besides, it makes really clean cuts.
 
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[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey

[X] [Treasure] Fortunate Pendant - things always go a little better than they should
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
 
[X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
 
By contrast, while Jade Beauties absolutely get involved in the same kind of shit, it doesn't turn brutally violent quite as often and is more likely, if we get pulled into any kind of political shenanigans, to be more along the lines of people trying to court her and threatening information out of her lackeys, etc.

Alternatively, we have to deal with an endless string of suitors all thinking they can impress the beauty if they beat the shit out of that guy who is suspiciously close with her and obviously blocking their chances of success. But that would be funny, I guess.
 
X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
 
X] [Work] Medical Pavilion - grinding up medicine and providing basic healing
[X] [Contact] Jade Beauty - one of the sect's fairies counts Yon as a reliable lackey
[X] [Treasure] Strangling Vine Seed - the indomitable and deadly weed has much to teach
[X] [Treasure] Dreaming Orchid Elixir Recipe - a potent draught for focusing the mind and enhancing the body
[X] [Treasure] Iron Kettle Stomach - the first fundamental of life is digestion, all else follows
Missing a [ on tbe first vote
 
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