Ok so I changed it a bit and I made him keep most of his personality traits abilitys only making him more violent and hungry as well as want the same things the void wants
From Genesis (Riot God Quest)
- Thread starter Mannan
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- A Pit Of My Own Making
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- He/Him
[] Rebirth of Gnomes
The Gnomes at present at barely a race of their own - they are the children of Goblinda, and so carry her kindness, but in form they are still Goblins, creations of Gobbus. This, however, changes over successive generations, as the Gnomes take on a new fairer form. They now stand taller than Goblins, with pale skin and dark hair. Their noises are bulbous instead of pointed, and their eyes sparkle with joy, of which they feel deeply. Their minds become clever, instead of cunning, and their fingers are deft and quick. Even Goblinda undergoes these changes, matching her children's children's children, and in time takes on the new name of Gnominda. But the greatest change is hidden; all claim the Hated Tyrant had on the Gnomes is severed, removing any previous claim he had upon their souls and flesh.
The Gnomes at present at barely a race of their own - they are the children of Goblinda, and so carry her kindness, but in form they are still Goblins, creations of Gobbus. This, however, changes over successive generations, as the Gnomes take on a new fairer form. They now stand taller than Goblins, with pale skin and dark hair. Their noises are bulbous instead of pointed, and their eyes sparkle with joy, of which they feel deeply. Their minds become clever, instead of cunning, and their fingers are deft and quick. Even Goblinda undergoes these changes, matching her children's children's children, and in time takes on the new name of Gnominda. But the greatest change is hidden; all claim the Hated Tyrant had on the Gnomes is severed, removing any previous claim he had upon their souls and flesh.
- Location
- USA
I could make a race of Semi-Aquatic Horrors with a few extra abilities tacked on.
- Location
- 𐌂 ̢͎̩̤̲̙͓̑̀͂͒̀͆̏𐋏 ̛͏̫̚𐌀 ̛͉̥̩̤̰͈̂̅͒͊͟𐍈 ̣͛𐍃 ̡̅̈́
Can you maybe make them sexy?
- Location
- USA
- Location
- 𐌂 ̢͎̩̤̲̙͓̑̀͂͒̀͆̏𐋏 ̛͏̫̚𐌀 ̛͉̥̩̤̰͈̂̅͒͊͟𐍈 ̣͛𐍃 ̡̅̈́
You know, there are all sorts of stories about sirens luring sailors into deep waters... On the other hand - there are demons of lust. So maybe fusion of these two categories may create some interesting species with interesting culture. 
Edit: Looks like I'm in a weird, playful mood today.
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I'm thinking of something like, Void matures, gets avatar, realizes Gobbus's plan and tricks him into being imprisoned forever within the Void, always trying to escape
It's just the evil he did, I didn't realize how much suffering Gobbus would cause, he killed the first snails, the Blood God(who kinda deserved it), tortured the snails, tortured the dragons while pissing of Pyralis, and made an entire race who he could torment and bully and they also torment and bully others. He goes against my principles and the biggest thing he did to make me mad was to bring the Void, something I made, into this.
Ya let's try and make the void destroy him!!!!!!
Or trap him forever!!
What happened there?
I'm afraid I can't say exactly. In short - there was a genocidal war where no one was to blame, but we blamed the bugs and banished them into space.
Then there were debates about how morally it was and why we did it at all.
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- 𐌂 ̢͎̩̤̲̙͓̑̀͂͒̀͆̏𐋏 ̛͏̫̚𐌀 ̛͉̥̩̤̰͈̂̅͒͊͟𐍈 ̣͛𐍃 ̡̅̈́
Sounds worse then one goblin god... Maybe we should not? 😅
No-no, it's actually great for future stories! He is a perfect antagonist, a villain. Any story must have an antagonist, some kind of evil. It can't be removed, because nothing good would happen to the quest if we did.
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The void is a better villain that that goblin
Convenient. I'll try that and something else.
I wouldn't say better. He seems like an objective evil, which is nice to have in stories. Sometimes a punching bag to stand on a moral high-ground for is cool and all. Plus, going back and trying to fix "mistakes" that were purposely made usually sours the situation in these quests, unless done in a very fine manner.
In the beginning not a lot of things existed save for the bugs and an immortal guy. They proceeded to use the guy and their own bodies for parts to make stuff. After a while they were starting to chill and realize that life had meaning and all that but they'd already killed off a race and also couldn't exist under normal atmosphere.
So we removed them from the face of the earth. After a lot of debate we didn't kill them off entirely but they got yeeted.
[] link to the void
Slowly over the age the swarmlings get a link to the void, there minds connecting not just with it but with eachother increasing there wisdom, they still could not think like a dragon can but there cunning has evolved, they can no longer be herded by the dragons and instead attack them once they try, the chaotic energy's inside of there bodys making it so they can assimilate a fraction of the power and ability's of what they eat there hunger growing more and more as the swarm slowly become a hive mind learning to put the swarm before the self there feral bodys hungering for flesh and bone, as some know hunt the goblins there abilitys making it so they can swarm goblin strongholds with pure numbers
(Aka the swarm know has the technique and instincts of a termite colony
Slowly over the age the swarmlings get a link to the void, there minds connecting not just with it but with eachother increasing there wisdom, they still could not think like a dragon can but there cunning has evolved, they can no longer be herded by the dragons and instead attack them once they try, the chaotic energy's inside of there bodys making it so they can assimilate a fraction of the power and ability's of what they eat there hunger growing more and more as the swarm slowly become a hive mind learning to put the swarm before the self there feral bodys hungering for flesh and bone, as some know hunt the goblins there abilitys making it so they can swarm goblin strongholds with pure numbers
(Aka the swarm know has the technique and instincts of a termite colony
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[X] Create Wisp Weed. A black flower that grows both in reality and in the dark dream. It grows in dark spaces and is said to taste like smoke and ash. Notably it's able to enhance certain other plants by gathering discarded threads and if cooked skillfully binded together.
In short a neat plant that will work as the basis for an alchemy system. I'm going to add in other plants that when mixed with the Wisp create a potion.
Supporting
[X] The Gift of Light: alter 3 random living, sapient, non-divine beings such that they become a continual, steady, and eternal source of Light, of the same type given off by the First/Primordial Sun and grant them the ability and knowledge of how to shape and use it. When they die, their bodies cease to emanate Light, and another living, sapient, non- divine being is granted the Gift, both the Light and the knowledge to shape and use it, till their own deaths, then the cycle repeats.
[X] The Spark of Time Bending
In short a neat plant that will work as the basis for an alchemy system. I'm going to add in other plants that when mixed with the Wisp create a potion.
Supporting
[X] The Gift of Light: alter 3 random living, sapient, non-divine beings such that they become a continual, steady, and eternal source of Light, of the same type given off by the First/Primordial Sun and grant them the ability and knowledge of how to shape and use it. When they die, their bodies cease to emanate Light, and another living, sapient, non- divine being is granted the Gift, both the Light and the knowledge to shape and use it, till their own deaths, then the cycle repeats.
[X] The Spark of Time Bending
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- Location
- USA
Authored
[X] The Thassalians
Within the waters, a new race is born. Aquatic beings that have a humanoid form with mesmerizing visages, and somewhat resemble orca whales in appearance. Males typically look more bestial while females look more humanoid, though both possess an aura of fascination that charms others who look at them, making them more vulnerable to suggestions and commands to a degree (similar to hypnosis, they can make them do something they wouldn't do like jump off a cliff or hurt a loved one). The mesmerizing effect doesn't work on others of their kind. They are capable of living on land, but are moderately slower compared to when in water. Their skin is somewhat rubbery and very resistant to physical impacts and deep sea conditions. They possess echolocation and can focus it into a weaponized sonic blast to disrupt and stun other organisms. They can produce and shoot out jets of highly pressurized water from the palms of their hands with enough force to cut through solid granite stone and plates of steel. They are highly agile while underwater, being extremely adept swimmers on an instinctual level. Their physical strength is enough to kill a great white shark (or local equivalent) with a single punch to the head. They are also fully sentient.
Support
[X] The Elemental Fish of Life
@Planetary Tennis
[X] A System of Spindles, Wheels, and Spools
@MangoFlan
[X] The Spark of Time Bending
@Andre Chaos
[X] Rebirth of Gnomes
@Dragonofelder
[X] The Thassalians
Within the waters, a new race is born. Aquatic beings that have a humanoid form with mesmerizing visages, and somewhat resemble orca whales in appearance. Males typically look more bestial while females look more humanoid, though both possess an aura of fascination that charms others who look at them, making them more vulnerable to suggestions and commands to a degree (similar to hypnosis, they can make them do something they wouldn't do like jump off a cliff or hurt a loved one). The mesmerizing effect doesn't work on others of their kind. They are capable of living on land, but are moderately slower compared to when in water. Their skin is somewhat rubbery and very resistant to physical impacts and deep sea conditions. They possess echolocation and can focus it into a weaponized sonic blast to disrupt and stun other organisms. They can produce and shoot out jets of highly pressurized water from the palms of their hands with enough force to cut through solid granite stone and plates of steel. They are highly agile while underwater, being extremely adept swimmers on an instinctual level. Their physical strength is enough to kill a great white shark (or local equivalent) with a single punch to the head. They are also fully sentient.
Support
[X] The Elemental Fish of Life
@Planetary Tennis
[X] A System of Spindles, Wheels, and Spools
@MangoFlan
[X] The Spark of Time Bending
@Andre Chaos
[X] Rebirth of Gnomes
@Dragonofelder
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Could I get a rating for link to the void
Authored Act:
[X] Stone of Law
Enhance the God of Stone with Law and Science as domains.
Supported Acts:
[X] Create Wisp Weed. A black flower that grows both in reality and in the dark dream. It grows in dark spaces and is said to taste like smoke and ash. Notably it's able to enhance certain other plants by gathering discarded threads and if cooked skillfully binded together.
[X] Void Awakening: The Void matures, beginning to rapidly understand the world around it. From contact with the God of The Broken and suffering, it decides no one should suffer, it gives a bad taste. It then creates an avatar and decides to meet with the other primordials, making a dragon shaped avatar for the Pyralis meeting. It aso sees what Gobbus does and decides to yeet him away from civilization so he may terrorize no one else.
[X] Rebirth of Gnomes
[X] A System of Spindles, Wheels, and Spools
[X] Stone of Law
Enhance the God of Stone with Law and Science as domains.
Supported Acts:
[X] Create Wisp Weed. A black flower that grows both in reality and in the dark dream. It grows in dark spaces and is said to taste like smoke and ash. Notably it's able to enhance certain other plants by gathering discarded threads and if cooked skillfully binded together.
[X] Void Awakening: The Void matures, beginning to rapidly understand the world around it. From contact with the God of The Broken and suffering, it decides no one should suffer, it gives a bad taste. It then creates an avatar and decides to meet with the other primordials, making a dragon shaped avatar for the Pyralis meeting. It aso sees what Gobbus does and decides to yeet him away from civilization so he may terrorize no one else.
[X] Rebirth of Gnomes
[X] A System of Spindles, Wheels, and Spools
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Greater Act
Greater Act to make a large population, Lesser act to create a small seed population.
Grand Act
Lesser Act