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Fire Emblem: Last of the Manakete
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[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
How did Sypha cock our head?
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Ryza: "Why can't it be both?"
I'm pretty sure there was only supposed to be one "to plan" here.
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Having "say much" and "know much" in the same sentence, especially this close in proximity, feels repetitive. I recommend rewording this a little, but I don't know how.
The double-negative threw me off here, since it sounds like Mantrae's saying that they're supposed to visit and we should expect at least one not to, but later she makes it clear that they aren't supposed to visit (even if I don't remember her saying that supposed to not visit) but we should expect at least one of them to anyway.
"what"
"off"
"Whales are mammals, not fish." ~ Bernard, probably
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One of these is redundant.
Kelton's girlfriend, that's who.
[X] Stick with only Agrithian escorts. You can even justify it that Legerius needs all its soldiers to protect its own borders. You can take care of yourself.
My thought process here has less to do with whether or not Mantrae can be trusted and more to do with wanting to avoid drawing more attention than necessary.
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How did Sypha cock our head?
She's just that good.
TaliesinSkye
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That was a fun update!
[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
Might as well have the extra help at this point. I had anticipated Ryza doing the trip alone, so that she could move fast and fly away from trouble. But we've already got some people with us, so we might as well add a few more. It might be good for newly restored relations to have a joint project, too.
I have a funny feeling we're going to see a military engagement before this errand is over, though.
[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
Might as well have the extra help at this point. I had anticipated Ryza doing the trip alone, so that she could move fast and fly away from trouble. But we've already got some people with us, so we might as well add a few more. It might be good for newly restored relations to have a joint project, too.
I have a funny feeling we're going to see a military engagement before this errand is over, though.
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TaliesinSkye
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Thank you, fixed
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I feel like this world would be a much better place if everyone had that kind of attitude towards the people under their authority.
Also cheaper—sails don't eat nearly as much as mules or porters.
Yeah. Friends are nice, but they come with all kinds of drawbacks.
Anyways, let's make some more friends.
[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
In the interests of long term diplomacy, it's time to start playing nice with the neighbors. Trying to keep the party small and subtle is a valid point, but I don't think adding another three or four guys will make a difference. We've already got a big cart clunking along.
In the interests of long term diplomacy, it's time to start playing nice with the neighbors. Trying to keep the party small and subtle is a valid point, but I don't think adding another three or four guys will make a difference. We've already got a big cart clunking along.
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[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
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[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
TaliesinSkye
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For some reason, my first 'how to disguise an armed party with a cart' idea was to dress them all up like Monty Python peasants, and when someone gets close have everyone jump into the cart and pretend like they're dead bodies, and pull the "Bring out yer dead!" routine.
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I can't decide if that plan would work better or worse if the people of this world were familiar with Monty Python.
Mind, I don't think it would work very well in either case. There isn't a plague on, nor many people around our destination to die (and be brought out).
Mind, I don't think it would work very well in either case. There isn't a plague on, nor many people around our destination to die (and be brought out).
[X] Accept some escorts from Countess Mantrae: preferably ones you know and have worked with before.
I'm actually a bit split on this. I did kind of want to travel in a small group for this trip and the concern about Legerius's border with the Empire seems valid. ...But they're also our neighbors now so may as well start off working together.
I'm actually a bit split on this. I did kind of want to travel in a small group for this trip and the concern about Legerius's border with the Empire seems valid. ...But they're also our neighbors now so may as well start off working together.
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[x] Stick with only Agrithian escorts. You can even justify it that Legerius needs all its soldiers to protect its own borders. You can take care of yourself.
We already had the mage rummaging around our home and are going to have more from the Agrithian now. At least we know and trust most of those. The best way to keep our home secret is fewer people being shown the secret
We already had the mage rummaging around our home and are going to have more from the Agrithian now. At least we know and trust most of those. The best way to keep our home secret is fewer people being shown the secret
Pre-Chapter Narration: Ryza couldn't have known that the spider she zapped when she and Artemis were making their escape had friends. Big friends.
TaliesinSkye
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Cue an angry isekaied Queen Administrator. XD
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It's all in the cards
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