The mangaka rolls up their manga stats based on their experience level, adds in all the relevant bonuses or penalties, and hands it over to the editor.
Each editor has an
Editor Bonus, a pool of points that they can spend to add a flat bonus to any of the mangas that they are currently reviewing. Due to his lack of experience, Maeda starts with a relatively small Editor Bonus of
20 points.
Example:
Maeda is currently reviewing 3 manga (Manga A, Manga B, and Manga C).
With his Editor Bonus of 20, he can choose to either go all in on one aspect of one specific manga ("I add +20 to Manga A's Setting!") or spread it out among multiple scripts and stats ("I add +5 to Manga A's Setting, +5 to Manga A's Characters, +5 to Manga B's Dialogue…")
Notes:
- Your character's Editor Bonus can be improved over time as they learn and gain experience with the job
- No matter how big your Editor Bonus gets, the maximum bonus that you can give to any one stat at a time is +25. If you need to put in more than that, you might want to consider asking the mangaka to just redo it instead
- Experienced editors may develop extra bonuses linked to their own personal traits. For example, Shion Kazane's "Industry Veteran" trait lets her add a free +5 bonus to the lowest stats of any manga that she reviews
If you don't feel that that's enough, you can force a mangaka to do
Crunch Time, which forces them to reroll a stat altogether. Note that doing this too often can have negative effects on the mangaka's health. Each crunch action taken will add to the mangaka's "Overwork" stat.
If Overwork reaches its max, the mangaka gains a trait called Burnout, which will apply increasing higher and higher penalties based on the number of Burnout levels they have. When a mangaka reaches Burnout level 5, they will be forced to put their work on hiatus or maybe even quit altogether due to health issues.
Overwork will naturally decrease each week as long as the mangaka doesn't take any more Crunch actions. However, the Burnout trait will require special actions to remove - this usually involves taking a vacation, which means the mangaka won't produce any work for a short time while they're recovering.
If a mangaka has any unused rerolls after doing their script rolls, they can be cashed in as "Free" Crunch Time actions which won't generate any Overwork. However, note that these free Crunch Times only apply to the same chapter as the rerolls. You can't save a Free Crunch Time for any future chapters.
You can use the Crunch Time reroll multiple times for the same stat. In this situation, only the highest result is used.
Edit: If the work quality is too low, you may also choose to Reject it. This will have the following effects:
- You lose some Favor cause you're basically giving the Editor in Chief more work to handle. This Favor loss can be reduced if you can give him a good reason for doing so. For example, if the stats are just SUPER terrible, you can argue that it'd require taking away too much effort from other, more successful series to shore it up. Doing this too often will piss him off though. Also, if a specific series gets rejected too many times, he might decide to give that series the chop since it's obviously not performing to standard.
- The mangaka obviously won't be happy about getting rejected, though once again this can be somewhat mitigated if you can point to an actual good reason for the rejection. So rejecting someone for turning in bad work is usually understandable, while rejecting someone just because you feel like being a dick is not. Regardless of reason, if a mangaka gets their work rejected too often they're going to get disheartened. This may cause them to ask for a new editor or even drop the series altogether.
- On the reader's side, delaying a chapter will cause a Popularity penalty since they'll move on, forget details about the story, etc. The longer the gap between chapters, the bigger the penalty (though it only goes up to a certain point). For obvious reasons, this wouldn't apply if the rejected chapter is the very first chapter, but the other two effects (the Favor loss and mangaka unhappiness) will still apply.