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Fire Emblem: Last of the Manakete

What would readers prefer?

  • Pure narrative quest: no dice will be used, the author will have free reign to decide what happens.

    Votes: 25 59.5%

  • New dice system: the author will design a new, better dice system to add some randomness and risk.

    Votes: 17 40.5%
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Herofox said:
[X] "There has… has to be someone…"

How long has Ryza known Artemis anyways? Like a couple days? What a fast relationship.

I don't think Ryza would be capable of being rational here.

Edit: Speaking of, I can totally imagine that by revealing Ryza in what is essentially chapter 1, instead of getting some awesome plot twist, we ended up forcing the QM to move up the schedule of some events.
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Actually if I have read the story correctly then Riza has known Artamis for about a month or two.
 
So that was quite a depressing chapter, in a good way. Judging by the quote at the beginning it looks like tomes are made from dragonstone, which fits with how Ryza was surprised that humans could use magic - they couldn't until after she was sealed away because it required dragon slaughter.

Finding out that your species is entirely gone is quite traumatising, so I'm going to go with:

[X] "There has… has to be someone…"

Additionally, narrative laws suggest that there probably is one or two dragons around in secret. Maybe the what's his name is secretly in charge of the empire? Idk.
 
FicreaderL5 said:
Actually if I have read the story correctly then Riza has known Artamis for about a month or two.
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No, it's actually only been a few days, but Artemis was there when Ryza desperately needed someone to comfort her over the death of her family, and Ryza not only saved Artemis, but is ticking a lot of "must protect small child" instincts in Artemis, so they bonded fast.
 
So first guess at what happen, a faction of manaketes hated their heart forms and human and decided to say fuck them all and promptly went crazy, they started a war between all manaketes and humans which they eventually lost.
 
SoaringHawk218 said:
No, it's actually only been a few days, but Artemis was there when Ryza desperately needed someone to comfort her over the death of her family, and Ryza not only saved Artemis, but is ticking a lot of "must protect small child" instincts in Artemis, so they bonded fast.
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Now Im have the image of Ryza complaining to Artemis like a child would complain to their mother.
 
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    Adhoc vote count started by SoaringHawk218 on Jan 15, 2022 at 6:43 PM, finished with 33 posts and 25 votes.
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    Clinging to hope that others survived is currently winning almost 2 to 1.
     
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    • Adhoc vote count started by SoaringHawk218 on Jan 16, 2022 at 6:46 PM, finished with 36 posts and 27 votes.
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    While there are technically ten minutes left, I'm calling it now. "There must be someone" wins in a landslide.

    In other news, the new combat dice system will (hopefully) be finalized soon. I won't have any fights until it is, so with any luck there won't be any unexpected issues.
     
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