There are ten cohorts. "The worst offenders" from each cohort is going to be, oh... several dozen men.

Pretty massive.
It still would be less than a one percent of the legion, so not very massive at all, in my eyes.

At least from the name, Admonishment is a lesser punishment than, well, Punishment. And I don't believe we need to focus on exact wording of what we're admonishing them for as it is - decimation is not the only punishment we can dole out for disobedience, and we can reword the option so we're flogging worst offenders more for not stopping sacking the city when ordered, less so for the sack itself.
 
I don't want alienate our legion and I remember that our boss is popular with the mass in Spain but get betrayed by his men...


So think that is the lesson.The love of population is nice but that not protect you form harsh reality.


I want to flog ourselves too like Cao Cao cutting his beard when the army disobey the order but I don't know how that will translate in roman culture.
 
Omake: Fate/Res Publica
Guess that's as good enough a cue as any.

Fate/Res Publica: Campaign March Secundus


"Our assailant waited for Kiritsugu to leave so they could mount a direct attack. More dishonorable conduct from this war."

Artoria looked up from the collapsed Irisviel to the forest outside the castle, where an army marched through the bounded field.

As Artoria rushed to the entryway to the castle, armor fully manifested, she saw Roman soldiers lining the foyer entrance. Every eighty men was joined by a man with metal greaves and a feather crested helm. "Caster's army." But they were not in the tight, dense squares of a unit about to enter battle. Instead in two long columns, less a battle formation… than an honor guard.

A man in a toga stepped into the room and gestured grandly, his nearly feminine high-pitched voice carrying surprisingly well.

"HAIL THE GREAT IMPERATOR! HAND OF MARS! SCION OF MINERVA! VOICE OF APOLLO! PRINCEPS AUGUSTUS PATER PATRIAE QUINTUS CINGULATUS ATELLUS IMPERATOR GALLICENSIS!"

"HAIL! HAIL! HAIL!"

Each shout was punctuated by synchronized stomping of feet and the beating of shields from the legionaries.

As the chanting fell away, the herald fell to one knee as before a lord, and Artoria looked down the lines of armored men to catch sight of a young man entering at a stately pace.

He was clad in Tyrian purple robes embroidered in gold, his head concealed by a hood. A prominently displayed knife on his hip was the only indication of weaponry on him Artoria could see; the Caster of Rome completely at ease in in the face of a Servant from the class designed to beat him.

"Caster, what is your business here?"

The man chuckled. "Even in this era, the best of men cannot escape their titles." He extended his right hand, as if offering charity. "I greet you, King of the Britons. And you as well, Lady Irisviel Von Einzbern. I have come to make a proposal of peace and goodwill."

Artoria raised an eyebrow inquisitively.

The mage chuckled in response. "Well, a man of my standing must always go with a certain amount of protection and ceremony when he is away from his home. As do all rulers… but that would be the subject of tonight's feast."

The emperor spread his arms wide as if to encompass the vista around him, eying the entrance hall's decorations like an art critic in an auspicious gallery. "The gothic architecture is quite lovely. This marvelous tiled floor, the crystal chandeliers make the room awash with light, the gold-plated railing are pleasing to the eye, and as a Roman I cannot help but appreciate these marble busts and bronze statuary. With but a few additional items, your banquet hall would be set for hosting royalty indeed." He then inclined his head, the closest Artoria knew he'd ever get to bowing. "Lady Irisviel Von Einzbern, may I impose upon you to have your castle serve as the location for my little gathering? I swear on my honor before Juno that I shall restore the castle to its former state, no trickery or magecraft done."

"Saber…" Artoria narrowed her eyes. Irisviel was still weak from the toll of being the vessel for the Holy Grail's defeated servants, and kept a hand on Artoria's shoulder for support as she stood. She was unsteady on her feet, wincing in pain. Still, Artoria could see no dishonesty in the priest.

"Very well. But tread carefully, Roman. I will not tolerate treachery in my master's home."

Artoria could see the small grin from beneath the Caster's hood.

"Splendid. Centurion?"

One of the more ornate men stepped forward and saluted. "Yes, my Emperor."

"Take your men and locate a suitable room for the banquet. And assign someone to begin the assessment of the castle repairs."

"Yes, my Emperor." The man saluted then turned to the two columns of men. "Alright you lot, you heard your commander! Spread out and find a big room for the banquet. And no looting, damn it! We're the hosts, what kind of hosts steals from his own home, particularly before he has guests over!? You there, Marcus. Pick twenty men and get documenting the damage for the engineers. I want this place looking fit enough to be a Roman palace! Because it is now! Move, move, move!"

Like a well-oiled machine, some legionaries marched back to the doorway and stood sentry, while the rest set their shields and arms down at the ends of the hallway, then took off up the stairs and down the branching hallways, shouting out reports to officers carrying pen and parchment.

Behind the soldiers came, to Saber's keen eyes, less-professional looking men. Rather than armor, they wore brightly-colored tunics. Their long hair was braided, and their beards and mustaches were all rough-looking. These kinds of men Saber could easily imagine facing from the Saxon or Pict invasions.

"Gee Chief Veniximaeus, this place sure looks fancy. So much gold! It really sparkles next to those glowing things." A man with arms as thick as wine barrels and a chest like an ox marveled at the castle. "Hey Gobanitio, take your sandals off and feel this rug! It's like a cloud!"

"Those are tamed nature spirits, Segovax. Don't touch them, or you'll get burned." A man whose aged beard belied his fitness gave a reply that to Artoria sounded somewhat rehearsed, familiar.

"Seems like a waste of a candle. Disrespectful too."

"They last longer than a candle, and only blow out when you want them to." The third figure, Gobanitio, chided good-naturedly.

"Oh, oh, oh! Do you think they have more baths?"

"Yes Segovax, they'll have baths." Gobanitio pointed at her and Irisviel. "Just ask the chief's permission first."

"Um… Chief? Chief's wife?" The large man self-consciously ran his hand through his hair. "What time do I need to show up in order to use your baths?"

Gobanitio laughed. "They're not Roman baths, Seggy, they're like the ones the new kid had. One person only."

"I am no mere chief." Artoria corrected. The warrior was clearly of strong body, but simple mind. "I am a king."

"Oh! So you are a chief!"

Irisviel held a hand over her mouth as she tried to stifle a giggle. Artoria concealed her exasperation at the scene unfolding in front of her, but looked over worriedly as her Master's laugh broke off into a cough. The homunculus waved her off, though Artoria remained concerned but returned her attention to the warriors in front of her.

"He's a Servant. Like you, but smarter," The elder warrior Veniximaeus corrected his subordinate this time. "That one is clearly the Chief's wife, but the Chief's not here."

Artoria saw Segovax think about that information for a long time, before realization seemed to come over his features and a sneaky look came over his face. "Ah, and look how the wife is leaning on the warrior. Clearly they were doing something… naughty." He then turned to Artoria and Irisviel, and cupped his hand around his mouth, as if to somehow deaden his boisterous voice. "Don't worry, we won't tell if you won't."

The wink he added to that was Artoria's last straw. "I am insulted and outraged that you'd imply I'd seduce another man's wife! You will address her as Irisviel Von Einzbern, or Lady, or better yet not at all!"

"Uh…" Irisviel hesitantly spoke up. "Just speak with one of the maids, and they'll show you to a bath."

"Woohoo! Bath time, here I come!" Artoria tried not to think about how gleefully the Gaul ran down the hall, the filth he might be tracking into the mansion, and how he'd conduct himself around the homunculus maids.

"Saber." Artoria turned her attention to Emperor Caster, still standing in the middle of the foyer as more soldiers streamed in. "I had hopes the discussion of kingship would have a genteel air rather than a martial one. Would you consider changing back into your suit rather than your armor?

"I'll keep it on." Artoria growled.

Atellus gestured widely, palms open. "As you wish… king."

******

A few hours later, Artoria sat next to Irisviel as the Roman banquet was laid out before her. But despite the cornucopia of foods, her attention was only for Irisviel; her master was laying down on one of the couches, her head resting almost in Artoria's lap. Saber ran her hand through her pale locks of hair, fighting a grimace noticing how strained the Homunculi's breathing was. The scene was hauntingly reminiscent to Artoria of an earlier time when she had been in the same pose trying to offer comfort to Guinevere, as helpless now as she had been ignorant then.

A pointed reminder on the eve of a supposed discussion of her 'kingship' of how those near her always suffered as she carried out her duties. Saber was taken out of her ruminations as one of the servants brought yet another dish to her place, this one some sort of beef-meatball dish she didn't recognize.

The table the food rested on was set off in center of the three U-arranged couches. Atellus' side held three servants with food and drink, her end had two sets of servants for Iri and herself, and the middle held a fifth set for a guest she only surmised would yet arrive. It did not escape Artoria's notice that these women were all attractive and dark-skinned, though the ones assigned to her and her master had been unintrusive, waiting off to the side.

"Now then, King of the Britons." Artoria turned to face the Emperor as he polished off a glass of wine. "The Grail War is a contest of arms, a test of prowess and cunning to fuel a miraculous wish given to the winner. I would choose another path, one that does not rely on the bloodthirsty temperaments of these secluded old men. If all remaining servants can agree to a criteria that can be fairly judged, then the war is at an end. And the victor's wish swiftly granted."

"And you've chosen me as your first opponent." Artoria did not trust the emperor for one moment. His mysterious defeat of Rider, how the two vanished into thin air, before reappearing an hour later with Rider's master in tow as some sort of supplementary mana source-slash-aide.

Atellus grinned like a wolf with its prey in front of it. "Your pride as a knight and king won't allow such a challenge be unmet. And yet," He reclined back to retrieve a plate of grapes, and when he sat back up his mood was one of casual ease. "This is more a 'Holy Grail Debate.' By the end of the meal, we shall all know the others' worth. And our own."

"That is quite enough hot air from you, mongrel."

"Archer, why are you here?" Artoria turned to see the golden-haired and armored Servant reclining back, already gesturing for a cup of wine.

"The royal archer is our third and final guest!" Atellus replied excitedly, before turning to Archer. "Fashionably late, as is your wont."

"Surely you don't mean to hold a feast of kings in this depressing excuse for a palace. How do you intend to make amends for dragging me out here?"

"Come now, my good king. Drink up, enjoy the… company."

Artoria felt her blood boil at the way Gilgamesh's eyes roved over the servant girls surrounding him. One knelt to pass him a goblet of wine, her face steeled and still as granite. Archer sipped once. Then took a second. "Barely adequate, mongrel. This is the drink of royalty."

From the golden portals of Gate of Babylon, similarly colored pitchers and cups emerged on the servants' plates.

"Wine, swords, jewels, and the best of all things are within my treasury. This alone proclaims me as the one true king."

"Again with that claim. Why does it follow me?" Artoria heard Atellus murmur. He took a strong gulp of Gilgamesh's wine. Artoria took one herself, and found herself surprised by how rich and flavorful it was.

"Yes, this is fit for only the finest rulers. But mere food and drink is not what shall decide this contest. I propose that motive be the deciding factor, and we all share and compare ours. As the first to speak of his kingship, would it not be fitting for you to start us Archer?

"You speak of 'fitting' yet if you could discern anything of worth you would yield, recognizing the True King before you." Gilgamesh gave a lazy glare to the emperor as he drank his wine. "I certainly see no reason to entertain your proposal! We're all fighting for the Holy Grail, motive is irrelevant. But even if we did hold them in high regard, it does not change the fact that the Grail is mine by right, as is every treasure the world over."

Artoria couldn't tell if Atellus was mostly taken aback, or if he was almost successful in concealing his glee.

"Ah, then you could summon it with your Noble Phantasm? Detail its composition? Its true appearance?

Archer scoffed. "You overstep yourself. I have restrained myself out of respect for hospitality, in spite of the paltry display before us is, but do not think I cannot see your covetous eye, nor how you try to lead me on. My treasury has long been uncountable for even my mind. However, that something is considered valuable is all that's needed for it to be mine. Only the most foolhardy of thieves would claim that something of mine is theirs. There is no reason for my desiring the Grail."

Artoria shook her head. "Apparently this servant suffers from delusions."

Gilgamesh gave her a nonplussed look, reminding her of one of the 'meme' portraits Irisviel had shown her while browsing her 'smartphone'. "Were you really such a poor and ignorant child that to behold the king who sat atop gods is as a figment of the mind?"

Artoria noticed Atellus' smile was open and unrepentant. Had he trapped Archer somehow?

"No Saber, I think that's just him being him. And I am absolutely certain of his true name as well. Which means, King of Uruk," Atellus turned to face Archer. "Your statement that you have no motive for the grail is a lie!"

Archer frowned. "Who gave you the authority to make such a bold claim, mongrel? I'll have you know the punishment for those who steal from the king is the same as those who would slander him."

"And I would ask of you the same: Under what justice would you have me condemned?"

Gilgamesh merely smirked. "The law I enacted as a king still stands. Humanity has degraded, but none shall avoid being held to account. As the king stands, and so does his justice and his judgment."

"Yes, just like you enacted the law concerning the Right Of First Night."

"It would be an honor to be chosen by the king to bless their lineage," Archer said matter of factly."

Artoria shot to her feet. "HE DID WHAT?"

Atellus turned to Artoria and shrugged. "Why do you think the gods of Mesopotamia sent the beast who would become his 'only friend'?"

She turned to the King of Heroes, who was looking very murderously at Atellus. "You're Gilgamesh?"

"Yes, I was quite surprised by the lack of braided hair, long beard, and great musculature as well."

"The egoism of kings that followed me, projecting their likeness onto my features in hopes it would reflect some of my grandeur back onto them."

While Artoria looked agog at the two of them, Atellus sighed.

Artoria noticed a new servant walking into the room with a tray holding a pitcher of wine and some goblets. But what stood out was her dress and stature. The girl was very young, almost younger than Artoria when she pulled the sword of selection from the stone. Second, the white toga she wore dragged along the ground like it was made for a taller person and had a hood-like veil concealing her features. She walked with a slow, sedate pace of ritualized formality, yet Artoria could see her hands were tightly gripping the tray, her knuckles white.

Then the suspicious servant tripped, dropping the tray with a clatter and sending the wine splattering everywhere. But Artoria could tell it was all a feint, and the servant's intentions were made clear by the bulge within the folds of her outfit poking out along the back. A bulge she recognized from her years at court: A concealed long knife.

Her suspicions were confirmed as she saw the servant slip a hand behind her back the other ripping off her veil and throwing it toward Atellus' face. Artoria's eyes widened, and she shouted "Caster, behind you!" Yet for some reason, Atellus did not move. But before she could leverage herself up and charge the assailant, the servant drew the knife and lunged off her bended knee like a sprinter. "DIE ROMAN OPPRESSOOOOOOOOH!" To Artoria's amazement, the girl tripped on her toga, and fell flat into the spilled wine, sliding under Atellus' couch and into the middle of the three Servants. Atellus himself merely removed the article of clothing from his face and grinned.

"Hello Visellia Tertia. I was wondering where the daily stabbing attempt was."

Gilgamesh raised an eyebrow, a show of great surprise for him. "You keep this one around?"

Atellus nodded. "Oh yes. Unlike you, I am not one to trifle with gods, and by showing mercy and fairness to the defeated, others are encouraged to bend the knee."

"Weakness from a mongrel. How utterly unsurprising." Gilgamesh shook his head like a parent admonishing a child. "If you annihilate them, and make an example of any survivors, then your fear will bring the others into line."

"Tried that once." Atellus waved Gilgamesh's insult off as Veniximaeus silently entered, picked up the priestess like a sack of flour, and carried the kicking and screaming bundle out of the room. "Not worth losing veterans to farmhands and fishwives with nothing left to lose. In any case," Atellus readjusted his position. "If motive is not a valid reason for you, then another must be found." He snapped his fingers. "What about the nature of a true leader, and which of us embodies it?"

"Then I am, as always, the superior to you mongrels." Gilgamesh confidently replied. "I am absolute, immutable and flawless. My title is King of All Heroes and Possessor of All Treasures. It is only by my strength that humanity survived the predations of the earth, and so all accomplishments since are mine to claim. All Servants from the Throne of Heroes are my subjects, all Noble Phantasms but a drop in my treasures. I alone am the true measure of worthiness in this world."

He then finished his wine glass, and glared at Atellus. "And you are no Enkidu."

Atellus sighed. "Yes, I am no friend of yours." He then turned to his other guest. "Well King of Knights, what say you? What is the nature of a leader?"

Artoria knew the answer to this since Merlin had appeared before her on that fateful joust. "To be a king is to not be human."

Atellus blinked. "You'll have to explain that to me."

"To unite fractious, warring times, there can be no room for error. The king must settle disputes and destroy invasions. By getting results without fail, even those who resent the king will fall in line."

Atellus looked at her contemplatively. "And what does that cost?"

Artoria started at the red liquid in her cup for a long moment. "... All wars have victims. One must minimize that cost, but to eliminate them entirely is something beyond even a miracle. For the enemy to be most efficiently and utterly crushed, sometimes ground must be given."

Atellus nodded. "Trading space for time to muster forces is a universal stratagem." Artoria didn't think her redirection fooled him.

"You, a perfect king. Such an arrogant woman you are." Gilgamesh's tone held not only his usual disdain, but an air of… interest that sent slivers of ice down her spine.

"Very interesting answers, you two." Atellus politely interrupted. "Say, I think one other person should contribute here. Veniximaeus," Atellus called out into the next room. "What would you say of being a merciful man to your soldiers?"

"If you're not willing to fire a volley of arrows into a melee engagement with your own men in it, you're not fighting to win." Was his prompt reply. After a pause, the man added, "However, a soldier will only complain about such things so long as they're given good food and prompt pay."

Atellus chortled. "Ah, never change Veniximaeus. Never change." Artoria wondered if the Gallic mercenary would have been willing to serve as a knight, had he lived in her time. Gilgamesh just drank his wine and ignored it all.

"Well, I should give my own answer." Atellus handed his cup back to a servant, then leaned forward. "It's in my titles, you see. Princeps. Pater Patriae." Artoria remembered from her Latin lessons under her father what those meant. 'First Citizen'. 'Father Of The Fatherland'. "I am not a god, nor a demigod of any stripe. I am just the man the people chose to guide them."

"Heh. For someone claiming a higher authority as 'emperor', you even admit you're nothing more than a slightly bigger dog."

"Well, even an emperor needs the people's support, Gilgamesh. After all…" Atellus jabbed an accusing finger at Gilgamesh. "Wasn't it because your people beseeched the gods' intervention for your injustices that Enkidu was sent out?"

"And when the gods' supposed check on me saw me as a worthy leader, it made their complaints rather foolish. And what grounds does someone who seized the reins of power have to complain about my supreme self?"

Atellus nodded begrudgingly. "Yes, I took power by military force, however implied. The same as my predecessor, and the one before him. However, the difference between me and them is that I had the will and support of the Roman people." Atellus chewed on a grape before continuing. "We had kings once, you know. Absolute monarchs. But Rome did away with them for that much power in the hands of one man was too reliant on character. The Republic honored the will of the Roman Citizens. Noble and commoner alike were represented. A Dictator, an Emperor, these were merely people temporarily given the power to fix the system in a time of crisis… that lengthened and lengthened in duration. "

"It is human nature to demand a strong ruler." Artoria stated, shaking her head.

"That's just it though." Atellus replied. "The people have to want it, and keep wanting it. If a leader simply demands extraordinary things with no thought to their subordinates, then they will become only a leader of one person: Themselves."

Artoria nodded. "That is acceptable. A king will sacrifice herself for her beliefs. To rule a country is to give up living for oneself. You-"

"That is Merlin talking."

Artoria was shocked to silence momentarily at Atellus' interruption. Merlin? The man who mentored her? What did he have to do with this?

"Look, Arthur Pendragon, Artoria I should say, this is the problem with the Christianity of your time and the Hellenic religion of mine."

"What does religion have to do with this?"

As Atellus began his explanation, Artoria couldn't help but be reminded of her own mentor. "Merlin trained you to be a saintly king. A godly king. A king as close as possible to the omnipotent, perfect, and utterly inhuman God that arose after my time. And you were, absolutely. Nobody in your court found fault with you."

A perfect opposite of her mentor.

If you draw that sword, you will no longer be human.

"By contrast, every hero and god of the ancient world, as far back as Gilgamesh's time, is someone who is larger than life, every vice and virtue of humanity taken to the extreme. You think I overlook the fact Jupiter is a serial rapist when I make my sacrifices to him?"

A miracle has a price. In exchange, you will lose the thing most important to you. You will be resented by all the world, and die a miserable death.

"Merlin made you sublimate any trace of Artoria the girl in order to make Arthur the King who would be the last gasp of the gods to live in peace with humanity. And in the end, he made you a damn martyr, like you medieval Christians love so much."

No. Many people were smiling. If I can make people happy, I'm sure it's not the wrong decision.

"And that's not something that the common man can easily latch onto. A Roman citizen could look up at me and see the path they themselves could follow in, to one day stand where I stood. But how can anyone look up to you, the perfect king?"

If the king is perfect, you shouldn't have any complaints towards him.

"Artoria Pendragon. King of Chivalry. You gathered the finest knights, built the Round Table, crushed Saxon invasions, and created an empire that superseded the Burgundian puppets of the Western Empire. From Ireland to the frozen northlands to the southern forests of Gaul, all followed you. But what happened next?"

I was happy just being in your shadow. Yet you never turned around to face me!

"You never led them. You never showed them the way to act. The Round Table was the example people followed! And when that was shattered, you never picked up the pieces."

"King Arthur does not understand human feelings."

"You were content to stand alone and composed, preferring your own private delusion. You are, now as ever, the same naive little girl that did everything Merlin asked of you. Artoria Pendragon, you are no leader."

There was only one reason I would not give you the throne. You didn't have the capacity of a King.

Artoria's tears were interrupted by the feeling of a blade at her throat. As she focused on her surroundings, she saw everyone else in the room held hostage with blades to their throats as well. Individuals in black bodysuits and skull-face masks filled the room. Irisviel looked fearfully at her as a lithe feminine figure holding her shoulder firmly and kept her blade pressed firmly to Iri's armpit, likely aiming for the Axillary artery. Yet, Artoria could see that Atellus and Gilgamesh were completely calm. Gilgamesh didn't even seem to acknowledge their presence, while Atellus appeared like a man given a pleasant surprise.

"Well now, I do not remember buying this many Persian slaves. And you do not carry the poisoned blades of Visellia Tertia. Are you all our new guests?"

"We are the one, who has become many. We are the many, who are one Servant." The voice was masculine, yet mixed with many pitches and tones, and Artoria couldn't pin down who it came from.

"Tokiomi degrades himself yet again by consorting with you assassins." Gilgamesh grumbled, before taking a large quaff of his wine.

"We are His Shadows."

"Ah, a symbolic representation of Hassan-I-Sabbah's group being many identical and unknown individuals stuck into a single Assassin container. Marvelous what the Throne of Heroes can come up with." Atellus was still at ease in his demeanor. "Now then, Servants of Islam. I know your religious tenants forbid you from drinking, but we have non-alcoholic wine and fine bread. Princeps Atellus welcomes you to this banquet. This Holy Grail Discussion would concern you as well. Come, recline, eat, drink, and be mer-"

In one fluid motion, the throats of every servant and slave in the room was slit at once. Artoria made to pull Irisviel away from her Assassin, but the two threatening them both merely tightened their grip. While Artoria might survive due to her nature as a Servant, it would debilitate her enough that she wasn't sure she could save Irisviel without hurting her or being faster than the assassin. And then there was the toll the mana for regenerating and the subsequent combat would take on her…

Atellus frowned, staring at the bleeding corpses on the floor as they slowly disintegrated into mana.

"Aelia was due for her contract being re-negotiated. Marcus was going to take his daughter Juliana to a local cultural festival. Livia worked customer service for a communications company from the estate, and was due for a raise. We were going to celebrate little Prisca's fourteenth birthday this weekend."

Artoria could now see behind the philosopher and orator the man who succeeded Octavius Augustus and wrestled Mark Anthony for the throne of Rome. A face of marble promising only ruthless retribution.

"So be it, Assassins."

A roar of wind enveloped the room.

"One final question tonight, my guests, before I deal with our very rude intruders. Does the absolute ruler, king, saint, or emperor, stand alone?"

Father...

She had to hold on. It was all she had. "For the king, there is no other way."

Atellus shook his head. "I see we shall have to have some remedial instruction, Artoria. Merlin's grip on you is still strong."

A flash of light enveloped the room, and Artoria's vision whited out. When she recovered her sight she stood in an open field.

"I am Emperor. I am the head of the state. But what is the state but the people within it? I was called by the people, and so to thunderous applause I rung down the Republic and ushered in the Empire. And it is the people of the empire that made me, made Rome, what I am.

IMPERIUM TRUMPHUS!"

"A… Reality Marble? He has a forbidden magecraft like that as a Noble Phantasm?" Irisviel tugged at the fresh green grass, scarcely believing this was Caster's power.

"Welcome, Irisviel and Artoria, to the plains of Gaul. Here, Samnite, Gaul, German, Iberian, Carthaginian, and many others fought and died. Thus, it was preserved in our souls forever more. The world knew far and wide what was done here, because I made sure they never forgot."

Taking in the vista around her Artoria saw arrayed around a hill an army far larger than the one that had invaded her master's doorstep. Glancing behind her she could see the Assassins grouped together in the empty field, further past them a familiar mass of long-haired men with wild eyes on horseback at full gallop charging down upon them.

"The empire was defined by the foreign people it conquered, both those who served as true allies and those who honorably stood in the way of our armies. This was the life I embodied, so too did the people who met Rome."

"HAIL! HAIL! HAIL!" The assembled Legion beat their shields and cheered wildly.

"Dead or alive, I made sure they followed me into the future. The Samnite Legion, the Effective Mercenary Company of Veniximaeus, the last High Priestess of Mephitis, the Shadow of the Pentri. All tied to me."

"HAIL! HAIL! HAIL!" Behind the Assassins Artoria could even see the Gallic cavalry cheering wildly.

"Therefore, the answer to my question is thus: An absolute leader is never alone, for enemies and allies alike surround him!"

"HAIL! HAIL! HAIL!"

Atellus exhaled like a boulder had been taken off his shoulders. Then he met the gaze of the Assassins. "You have nowhere to run, and nowhere to hide. Ours numbers are greater than yours. Mortal they may be, but you cannot best them all in open battle."

He raised his hand, extended his thumb and then sliced it down.

With a great roar, both contingents of the army charged forward. Some of the Assassins tried to flee to the sides, but to Artoria's eyes, the wind sweeping over the left flank was suddenly tinged with rolling clouds of black smoke which gave all but one of the Assassins pause, the stupid, overconfident, or desperate one entering the noxious cloud.

"Foolish Roman, making me do your dirty work for you." A young girl in white clothing stepped forward from the smoke, seemingly unaffected by the gases that the Assassin who ran into it choked on. The Assassin spat up blood, then collapsed to the ground, twitching in his death throes. As she turned to face the Caster who summoned her, Artoria saw a sign hung around her neck. Written upon it in gold Latin script read: 'Spared from fire and pillage by the grace of Quintus Cingulatus Atellus.' "Are you trying to make me kill you even more?"

"But my dear Tertia, I do so enjoy your tests of my security."

"IDIOT ROMAN! ONE OF THESE DAYS I'LL MAKE YOU CHOKE ON THOSE WORDS AND MAKE YOU REGR-!"

Tertia's vicious tongue-lashing was interrupted as short lived clouds of dust kicked up by horse hooves upwind of the poison cloud came into view. They were the only warning before cavalry surged in a coordinated sweep of the plains, the swift pass killing two of the slower assassins, one impaled by a spear, another decapitated by the sword.

One choose to retaliate, jumping atop a horse and wrestling the rider, but one of his fellow riders in close formation slammed a spear through the Assassin's head before he could bring his blade to bear. They spasmed briefly before the body was thrown off into the stampeding hooves of the charge.

Another disappeared in the confusion, only to reappear after the waves of horsemen, breaking into a mad run towards the source of the poisonous smoke. His sprint covered about five hundred yards before the assassin collapsed as if had been slammed by a hammer. Over his prone form towered a different shadow, a trained killer of different origin and allegiance before diving into the grass disappearing as swiftly as he appeared.

On the other flank, two more fell victim to different shadows, one briefly parrying his assailant before two more piled on him. The one to deliver the final blow rising to his feet and flicking his short sword to get rid of the blood. "What happened to not harming women and children, Arabs? Did you forget that part of your oaths?" The man in his mid-fifties growled in annoyance, seeing his comrades catch another of the enemy killers before he signaled them not to pursue further.

He let them run, but not escape. They simply fled into the lethal range of archers and crossbow bearing mercenaries. Living but minutes more.

Scattering hardly served them better as the Gaulic cavalry made a second pass between volleys, this time closing ranks, leaving no space where one could escape.

And those few who escaped the cavalry, the legion were already positioned to cut down like wheat before the scythe.


*****

When the Reality Marble dispersed, Gilgamesh retrieved his wine and tableware through his Gate of Babylon. "That was an amusing enough distraction, Mongrel."

Atellus grinned. "Gilgamesh, one query before your departure?"

Gilgamesh paused. "Very well. The king shall be generous to this mongrel. Just this once."

"You are the son of the demi-god king Lugalbanda, and the goddess Ninsun, yes?"

"What of it?"

"So are yourself not a mongrel?"

Before Artoria could blink, she could see a weapon in Gilgamesh's hand. The handle was golden, but the lance-like 'blade' was black with red designs that resembled magical circuits.

Was it…

"You…" When Gilgamesh turned, Artoria was taken aback by how utterly demonic he looked. "YOU DARE!"

Atellus grinned smugly. "Master, I believe the banquet has ended." And with that, he and all the items he brought with him disintegrated into astral forms. As Gilgamesh shot off through the roof and out of the bounded field, screaming about divine vengeance, Artoria could only lean on Irisviel for support. Gilgamesh was the strongest servant in the war by far, but Atellus… he may very well be the most dangerous.

Next time, on Fate/Atellus:

A man made a god, and a god of men fight.


"Your doom is nigh!"
But a pawn in their games has her own plan.
"I offer… everything I have left… to you, my lord."
Such a lust for revenge can only grow…
"I want the world to burn. This unclean abomination must be purified in blood and fire!"
When it meets a counterpart across time and space.
"I would be a very poor priest if I did not tell you of our incubating god."


A/N: So about a a year ago in April, I read the amazing Fate/Hollow Order. Around that same time I was reading this quest, so I figured I had to do something Fate related... and then I saw the perfect servant to inspire this version of Atellus. @Telamon loved the sheet I made, so I kept going into this. A few tweaks later, much learning about Roman names and culture, four hours of religious transcription, and here we are. I'll post his character sheet and Fate/Grand Order dialog tomorrow, so for now... enjoy Palpatine!Atellus.
 
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Just caught up with this whole thing today, it's really cool and interesting. For the destruction of Nola, i think we can't really punish the legion in any significant way because we took part of the sacking and razing of Nola. I like the idea of commissioning a plaque to show what happens to those who defy Rome.

For personal actions, I say we focus on getting support for elections, and maybe try to keep the cult of Mars going.
 
I don't want alienate our legion and I remember that our boss is popular with the mass in Spain but get betrayed by his men...

So think that is the lesson.The love of population is nice but that not protect you form harsh reality.
I say we dock the ones we can make the "disobeyed orders" charge stick against a large chunk of their pay. If we ourselves are guilty, we should give up a comparable chunk of our loot.

I want to flog ourselves too like Cao Cao cutting his beard when the army disobey the order but I don't know how that will translate in roman culture.
Badly.

Roman culture is very... machismo-oriented. To have reputation and respect, a man has to be a Real Man who takes no crap off of nobody, who fucks with other people but is not fucked with in return (literally and metaphorically), who is in control of his household and his servants and so on, whose property and body are inviolate.

Indeed, a lot of the "macho" attitudes and ideas found in European civilization today have their origins in Roman attitudes and ideas.

For a man to physically degrade or humiliate himself is to take his own respect and reputation and damage it. He may get a grudging sort of perverse admiring-non-admiration for being really hardcore about his moral virtue, but at the same time, he loses respect. This is basically what happened to Cato the Younger, for instance. To oversimplify a bit, everyone agreed that he was ethical, but he was obnoxious and kind of an asshole and not really impressive except for how incredibly ethical he was.



[] Plan Reflection
-[] Write-In: Discipline. It is said soldiers ignored Sertorius and his officers' commands to cease during the sack. There must be a punishment for such insubordination. You have the pay of all men who ignored orders heavily docked. Gold speaks louder than blood.
-[] Write-In: Memorial. Have a stone monument erected outside the ruins of Nola, with an inscription in large letters, high enough off the ground that a man cannot easily reach it. "Here stood the city of Nola, spurning the outstretched hand of Rome. Here came the sword of Rome, in the year of Flaccus and Marius. Here fell the city of Nola."
-[] The Cult of Mars: You attempt to solidify your small cult, turning it into an organization which may survive the transition from military life to civilian. Having brothers bound by bonds deeper than blood in the killing fields of the Senate may prove useful.
-[] Expand Journal: You begin expanding your journal to include more than strictly military matters, such as political happenings or philosophical musings.
-[] Write Home: You take the opportunity of remaining on the Italian Peninsula to write back home to your friends and allies in the city. You wrote to...
--[] Cicero
--[] Proserpina

The Discipline and Memorial write-ins are there to establish a pattern that Atellus is not proud of what happened, but isn't going to lie about it, or his own role in it, or be hypocritical about it. The thing happened. Make of it what you will. Self-flagellation is not a virtue Romans respect, but grim, stubborn honesty is, as I understand it.

Expand Journal is intended to help Atellus reflect and grow as a person; The Cult of Mars is there so that he can begin to cultivate a network of clients and allies. Write Home is intended to give us information on events in Rome, and also hopefully XP- Cicero's letters seem to be good for XP in some areas that are otherwise difficult to advance.
 
I want to flog ourselves too like Cao Cao cutting his beard when the army disobey the order
That's something we can do when we have reached the level Caesar was at during his Civil War when he had reached divine charisma levels (and had ties to more than just one legion). And even then it would be us shaming them, and not punishing ourselves. We are still young, just barely starting our career, we can't afford alienating the legion we'll be serving with for years right now. A bad roll could be a massive set back.
Write Home is intended to give us information on events in Rome, and also hopefully XP- Cicero's letters seem to be good for XP in some areas that are otherwise difficult to advance.
We should replace this with another social action, leaning connections. We are already heading for Rome, we can get the information there.
 
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We should replace this with another social action, leaning connections. We are already heading for Rome, we can get the information there.
I suppose. What do you say about [] Make Connections:? The optimates faction may or may not be where our future lies, but we're in a good position to make connections among the young aristocratic types- we have their respect and their undivided attention, given present circumstances.
 
[] Plan Optimat Politics
-[] Write-In: Discipline. It is said soldiers ignored Sertorius and his officers' commands to cease during the sack. There must be a punishment for such insubordination. You have the pay of all men who ignored orders heavily docked. Gold speaks louder than blood.
-[] Write-In: Memorial. Have a stone monument erected outside the ruins of Nola, with an inscription in large letters, high enough off the ground that a man cannot easily reach it. "Here stood the city of Nola, spurning the outstretched hand of Rome. Here came the sword of Rome, in the year of Flaccus and Marius. Here fell the city of Nola."
-[] The Cult of Mars: You attempt to solidify your small cult, turning it into an organization which may survive the transition from military life to civilian. Having brothers bound by bonds deeper than blood in the killing fields of the Senate may prove useful.
-[] Expand Journal: You begin expanding your journal to include more than strictly military matters, such as political happenings or philosophical musings.
-[] Make Connections: Ever aloof and arrogant, the aristocrats of the equtii, the knights of Rome, have come to respect you as a leader to look up to over the course of this campaign. You could try to make some deeper connections that might serve you well in the city.

[] Plan Populares at Heart
-[] Write-In: Discipline. It is said soldiers ignored Sertorius and his officers' commands to cease during the sack. There must be a punishment for such insubordination. You have the pay of all men who ignored orders heavily docked. Gold speaks louder than blood.
-[] Write-In: Memorial. Have a stone monument erected outside the ruins of Nola, with an inscription in large letters, high enough off the ground that a man cannot easily reach it. "Here stood the city of Nola, spurning the outstretched hand of Rome. Here came the sword of Rome, in the year of Flaccus and Marius. Here fell the city of Nola."
-[] The Cult of Mars: You attempt to solidify your small cult, turning it into an organization which may survive the transition from military life to civilian. Having brothers bound by bonds deeper than blood in the killing fields of the Senate may prove useful.
-[] Expand Journal: You begin expanding your journal to include more than strictly military matters, such as political happenings or philosophical musings.
-[] Drum Up Support: You attempt to solidify the men's idea of you as someone they follow and support. They love you already, but having a solid voting bloc in future elections might prove very useful.

The stone monument is important as it alludes to our speech to the Pentri. Bovianum was fed and defended by Rome as it was willing to submit. Nola wasn't...
 
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Wow. Talk about a blast from the past. I never expected to see this updated ever again. Which is nice as I recently finished Mike Duncan's The Storm Before The Storm, which goes in depth about this period. An excellent book that I can't recommend enough.

As for the vote, I think a quick investigation and docking of pay for insubordinate soldiers is appropriate.
 
[] Plan Optimat Politics
[] Plan Populares at Heart

I quite like both of these. Not sure which I prefer.
 
"Here stood the city of Nola, spurning the outstretched hand of Rome. Here came the sword of Rome, in the year of Flaccus and Marius. Here fell the city of Nola."
did you chose that for the reference to Omake: Fragments from Atellus' Speech to the gathered elders of the Pentri?
 
If we can still choose what we do with the city we just destroyed, I'm thinking that Annihilation would be a good idea, the old trick of showing your enemies the ruins of Rome's past ones does not exactly have a good track record, so I'm thinking that instead of leaving the ruins as a reminder of Rome's strength, leaving nothing at all would be more effective. It could be seen as, instead of leaving martyrs for the enemy's cause, the Legion would leave nothing at all, the enemy shall be wiped away from history, almost never to be remembered, sounds a lot more intimidating to me.
 
-[] Write-In: Discipline. It is said soldiers ignored Sertorius and his officers' commands to cease during the sack. There must be a punishment for such insubordination. You have the pay of all men who ignored orders heavily docked. Gold speaks louder than blood.
I'm not sure that would be any different from just Punishment, because from what I see, the entire legion ignored orders.
 
And now, ladies and gentlemen, have:
Class: Caster
Master: ??????*
True Name: Princeps Augustus Pater Patriae Quintus Cingulatus Atellus Imperator Gallicensis
Noble Phantasm: Lex Divinia - The Law is Divine, Imperium Triumphus - Rule over the Foreigner
Keyword: Judge, Lawyer, Peerless Orator, Blessed, Emperor

Strength: C
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: A
Luck: A

Skills:

Territory Creation: C

At this level Caster may create a Workshop, a sympathetic area wherein mana is more easily gathered and Mysteries more easily manufactured. Taking the form of a Greco-Roman temple with an extensive archive of religious texts that ignores the laws of time and space, the smell of incense and sacrificed animals is pungent. In the archives one can find the texts and tools of priests, druids, and prophets from Britain to the Middle East. Within it, the gods themselves watch, and blasphemous action struck down.

Item Construction: C

While the construction of minions, magical items, or other magecraft is of little use to a priest, Atellus possesses a True Magic talent: Divination. By constructing the proper tools and conducting the right Augury rituals, the future's paths are laid out more clearly. Or rather, they're narrowed down. Atellus can also cast his vision into the past to discern the truth of events and people. His gaze cannot be set upon any entity with Divinity, for they will know they've been watched and may lash back at him.

Divinity: C++
Through his own pre-death deification, multiple blessings from the Olympic Pantheon, incorporating foreign deities into Roman culture, or subjugating and stealing their rituals, Atellus gains a measure of divinity. While his Caster Class container negates much of his combat prowess, Atellus' strikes still gain piercing properties, while becoming more resistant himself.

Revelation: A (C)
Prophecies from Jupiter, Mars, Minerva, and many other gods laid the path for Atellus' rise to emperorship, and some say they directly whispered competing paths in his ear. Thus, a life made of prophecy was not a life lived for him, for Atellus became very adept in seeking out and interpreting the will of heaven. And in some cases, even subverting it. He may apply the Instinct skill to all steps and rationale towards the achievement of a goal, on or off of the battlefield. However, while the optimum path will be given to him, it will lie among dozens of others, requiring his own wits and skill to uncover. His Revelation degrades to the level of 'gut instinct' when put against a Divine target.

Imperial Privilege: B+

The related Skills are Mana Burst, Swordsmanship, Charisma, True Name Discernment, Military Tactics, and others.

While his container's current limitations of his life as the religious head of Rome limit the extent of his skills as a warrior, he may still cross swords with less combat-capable classes like assassins or archers, and even with lesser Servants of the Saber or Berserker class.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Imperium Triumphus - Rule over the Foreigner: B

Many scholars debate the definition of an empire. But for Rome, it was the promise, the destiny, the oath Romulus handed down to them upon the unification of the seven hills: To seize the world and make it Roman. Thus, all barbarians would bend the knee, ascend and serve gloriously, or die. In his own life, Atellus won the hearts and made mortal enemies of many non-Roman people. He may call upon these people, even those who passed into the Throne of Heroes, as Servants with the Independent Action skill Rank C+. As they only came to be remembered through the personal writings of Atellus and the monuments he commissioned of them, an unbreakable bond of servitude is tied to both enemy and ally alike.
Class: Saber
Strength: D
Endurance: C+
Agility: C
Mana: E
Luck: E
While the Heart of Samnium came into Rome's possession, not all of them gave up their pride, but neither did they rebel. As the Samnite Legion, they consider themselves Samnite and Roman both. They fight with near-unbreakable morale, poisoned blades, and great skill in fieldcraft. But they are still mortal soldiers.
Class: Rider
Strength: C
Endurance: D
Agility: C+
Mana: E
Luck: E

From the mercenaries in Italy, to the allied auxiliaries against Vercingetorix, to the grateful descendants of the Alesian civilians saved by Atellus' disobedience, the horsemen of Gaul have always held him as an honorable leader who will lead them to plunder and glory, if still an uptight Roman. Legend has it that Basil the Bulgar-Slayer got the idea for the Varangian Guard from the retinue of Gaulic forces that Atellus made into to the Germanic Bodyguard of his life.
Class: Avenger
Strength: N/A
Endurance: C+
Agility: D
Mana: A+
Luck: E-
While the Independent action skill leaves Visellia's propensity to try and murder Atellus in life unchecked, he had used her so often as a test of his bodyguards and poison-testers that her attempts all result in, often comical, failure. Still, she serves him as a priest of vengeance, summoning smoke, crafting poisons, and clouds of toxic gas. She swears that one day she will kill him.
Class: Assassin
Strength: C
Endurance: C+
Agility: B-
Mana: E
Luck: E
A Samnite patriot who waged guerrilla warfare and assassination campaigns against Roman occupiers since before the time of Sulla. He only qualifies for the Throne of Heroes due to Atellus' writings of his previous campaigns. His eternal mystery of how he was able to sneak into a fort and nail a letter above Atellus' head qualifies him as an assassin. He serves Atellus out of the mutual respect they gained for each other upon their final battlefield, though Gemino still claims he was right in the end.
Class: Assassin
Strength: B>C
Endurance: C>D
Agility: A>B
Mana: D>E
Luck: D>E
Noble Phantasm: A>B

When Ptolemy XII arrived in Rome as an exile, Atellus took the young woman under his wing as a sponsor and mentor. It was here she honed her limited, by the standards of the time, mage-craft. When she was able to charm a great snake, it was taken as a sign she was blessed by Apep. It is said that upon Caesar departing Cleopatra's bedchambers after consummation of their relationship, Atellus was waiting to congratulate his superior on taking the responsibility of making an honest and fine ruler out of her. This teenage version represents her years in Rome, where her combat skills were more seriously instructed and she became capable of manifesting a blue and gold serpent to Stand By her. It was not until the end of her life that she realized it was the symbol of the inevitable demise of herself and her kingdom. Because she is a proper Servant acting in subordination to another, her parameters and Noble Phantasm are ranked down by one.
Class: Rider
Strength: C++
Endurance: C
Agility: B++
Mana: E
Luck: E
The fastest rider in Gaul, the Pheidippides of all barbarians. While a skilled cavalry commander in his own right, the feat which enshrined him in myth was riding from the northernmost reaches of Gaul down to the boot of Italy in less than a week, proclaiming the victory of Caesar. While his feat and legend is ultimately an imitation of another hero, the mystery it contains is still potent in its diminished state.
Class: Berserker
Strength: A-
Endurance: B+
Agility: B-
Mana: E
Luck: E
A simple and kind-hearted man, Segovax was bathed in a cauldron containing a druid's secret potion as a child. While the burns from the boiling concoction healed with time, the contents enhanced Segovax's strength and durability massively as he grew older. While known in Roman times as the Gaulic Hercules, his legend faded with time until he was only known as the inspiration for a children's storybook character. Thus, his mind is always simple and innocent. But when his childish sense right and wrong is challenged, his berserk nature is revealed. When he discovered allies of Vercingetorix had burned his village and massacred all within for allying with Rome, he flew into a mighty rage, and slew every one of Vercingetorix's troops he could get his massive hands on.
Class: Lancer
Strength: B
Endurance: A
Agility: A
Mana: E
Luck: E
The legendary Effective Mercenary, Veniximaeus never claimed to be loyal to anything beyond oaths and coin. While he'd always loudly state he'd serve against Rome if he'd find the right client, Atellus' ambition and justness never made him waver from fighting for Rome's behalf. His "Mercinarius Maxims" were translated into every language and distributed across the known world.
Class: Saber
Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Mana: E
Luck: C
The eternal bodyguard never truly leaves his Emperor's side, and is always there when the threat is greatest. He can appear at his emperor's side when Atellus is attacked automatically, without the need for a command seal, and defend him. As he never stopped fighting until all his limbs were hacked from his body, he possesses Battle Continuation.

Lex Divinia - The Law is Divine.

A Reality Marble encompassing the Forum of ancient Rome. Here, the accused is put on trial, their conduct and sins laid bare for all to witness. The judgement passed down can be of their local laws or of Roman laws, but only those with divine nature, a skillful defense, or saintly innocence can escape their just punishment. The more guilty the defendant, the harsher the damage dealt.

This Noble Phantasm requires a third party to either be the judge or the prosecution, for Atellus cannot step into both roles.

Summon:
Emperor Atellus of the Caster Class has been summoned. Let us take back our history. FOR ROME! FOR THE SENATE! AND FOR THE PEOPLE!

Leveling: Did you know I once started out as a merely better than average boy in Rome?
Level Up: As before, a steady, clawing climb to the top is how I must go forth.
Ascension 1: Hear the voice of the Gods!
Ascension 2: No Roman of good lineage is without servants.
Ascension 3: The toga I wore upon being crowned Emperor... I suppose I was due to wear this again.
Ascension 4: I only wanted the Republic to be healed. I never desired my post, however much I came to rely on it.

Battle
Start 1: Ave!
Start 2: Steady men, steady.
Skill 1: This is the house of all the gods. They stand with us!
Skill 2: Take these, they're blessed.
Skill 3: I am made a god by man and god alike!
Skill 4: The whispers of the future, the rattle of knuckle bones... YES! I SEE IT!
Skill 5: The Emperor commands, so shall it be done!
Attack Select 1: Strike swiftly!
Attack Select 2: Charge!
Attack Select 3: Deus Vult!
Noble Phantasm Select: The state of an empire... is the dominion over others!
Noble Phantasm Select: Divine punishment is upon you!
Damage: Close ranks! I am hit!
NP Damage: AAAAAGH! Healer! I need a healer here!
Defeat 1: We may yet rise from the ashes of this... mark my words.
Defeat 2: Where did we go wrong?
Finish 1: I think that warrants a Triumph.
Finish 2: By the decision of fate do we still stand.

My Room
Bond LVL 1: Yes, I give you permission to enter my temple. Don't touch the virgins or I'll castrate you.
Bond LVL 2: To know the gods and to know fate is to know this: They are fickle, and can easily wrap the unprepared mind in shackles of metaphor.
Bond LVL 3: Ah, I was needing someone to help me with this augury. Here, hold the pig steady.
Bond LVL 4: I became the first emperor to retire voluntarily. I was tired of presiding over the corpse of the Republic.
Bond LVL 5: ... at the end of my life, there is a blur. Something I do not recall. I think I was making a visit to... the eastern provinces. Could it be?
Dialogue 1: If you seek a rest, the baths are down the hall and to the right. A slave will guide you.
Dialogue 2: Jupiter, Thor, Ishtar, Hachiman, so many deities in the world... and yet what are they to Alaya and Gaia? Heh, at least we got the last one right.
Dialogue 3: Treasure your relationships, Master. They are what make human life livable, and will be what lets us Servants win this war.
Dialogue 4 (Arturia): Remember my words at the banquet, child of Britain. I know of your deal with the COUNTER FORCE.
Dialogue 5 (Arturia Alter): Oh, what has become of you. You've fallen to your vices and doubts. And in its place, Merlin got what he wanted.
Dialogue 6 (Cleopatra): My little girl's all grown up ANDYOUSTILLCAN'TCONTROLTHATTHING! CENTURION! GET A DRUID NOW!
Dialogue 7 (Gaius Julius Caesar): By Juno's toga man, how did you gain all that weight? Where is the strapping elder statesman I once was about to stab in the loins?
Dialogue 8 (Atilla the Hun): So the ever-capricious Mars ended up choosing a side, and created a doll to wield his sword. You honor me with your presence, Daughter of Mars.
Dialogue 9 (Alexander): You are everything I desire to be, and yet not be. I suppose that is all you wanted. Just don't lose the baggage again.
Dialogue 10 (Merlin): I would have words with you over what you did to that girl, Incubus. Centurion, escort him to my quarters very roughly.
Something You Like: The United States. It's been the closest thing to a successor to the Republic I've seen.
Something You Hate: Gilgamesh. Reminds me too much of someone I had to put up with in life...
About the Holy Grail: It is the wont of Mages to break the rules in order to get what they seek. I should know. No matter the iteration, it is better left untouched.
Event: The voices of the gods whisper in my ears. A new campaign is upon us! Prepare the treasury for mass expenditures!
Birthday: May you live beyond fifteen!

And because these were easy to make, have a bunch of lines for the F/GO roster circa 2018.

Mashu Kyrielight (Shielder): A homunculus Demi-Servant… I may have a prophecy for you.
Artoria Lily: Come little one. Spend some time with this old man.
Nero Claudius (Saber): You… not only did you ruin Rome, shirk your responsibilities, and break Rome's ancient traditions of respecting religion, but you somehow got your lineage down to the Artoria family which would become the Pendragons! How in Hades' name did you do that?
Nero Claudius (Bride):... Tertia, I require some of your poisons. No, it's actually for me.
Gilles de Rais (Saber): I have no quarrel with the god of Israel or his Saints. Let us follow her to glory, man of god.
Siegfried: What is it with Sabers and sacrificing your own happiness for ungrateful others?
Chevalier De'Eons: Good sir knight, if I could impose on you to touch base with my cook, I believe you will have a most enlightening conversation. (Now to test if Merlin's magic is at work…)
Okita Souji: Your commitment to the law, peace, and service of the state is commendable, and a credit to your nation.
Fergus mac Róich: Fighting, procreating, eating, and drinking… you're from Gaelic tribes alright.
Mordred (Saber): You're so blinded by your daddy issues you've lost sight of your goal, you foolish little girEEEEEEEEEEEEK!
Ryougi Shiki (Saber): A woman who can slay gods. Eyes who behold the death of all… and a very loose bond upon this world. In Rome, you'd have been worshiped as a Goddess incarnate.
Rama (Saber): No matter the world over, the forces of darkness will always steal away the loved ones of great heroes.
Lancelot (Saber): I have received the texts you sent over for your case. While Chaldea takes the priority of my work, I am making progress. I shall have fair judgement for you, your love, and your king. That is an Emperor's oath.
Gawain: Men like you are the reason nations and empires grow… and put the same expectations on others.
Belvidere: … Merlin's to blame for this, I just know it.
Elizabeth Bathory (Brave): … Merlin! You gave this woman the wrong size on purpose, didn't you?
Miyamoto Musashi: A void is invincible because it is nothing… you must tell me more.
Arthur Pendragon (Prototype): Guess the Throne of Heroes really does ignore time and space.
Suzuka Gozen: A child of a demon is… perfectly fine being a high school girl? Just don't let Gilgamesh see your Noble Phantasm.
Frankenstein (Saber): A perpetual motion machine… encounters performance difficulties in hot weather?
Yagyu Munenori: A peerless servant, stoic, and swordsman. Rome would have honored you greatly.
Archer (EMIYA): Are you going to throw your swords or your tongue at them, boy? Because both are equally deadly!
Robin Hood: I have familiarized myself with Druidic lore, you know. While you are many men, I can tell the forest flows through your veins.
Euryale: Honored Goddess of Cerna, guardians of the gate to the Underworld, this priest humbly greets you.
Atalanta: Little Cleo has taken a liking to you. Someone who doesn't bow to her antics would be good for her. Please continue to spend time with her.
Arash: A great peacekeeper, powerful archer, and possesses the humility and charity of a saint. I am honored to meet you, Arash of Persia.
David: The champion of Israel, advisor, and music maker. Just… be aware that if you so much as look at my daughter, I'll stab you in the loins.
Oda Nobunaga: Ascended to demonhood to tear down the old order in a roar of gunfire… I think we'll get along great.
Nikola Tesla: Rome's engineering achievements pale to your mind, good sir. But there is something to be said for being a good speaker.
Orion: Great Hunter, you honor us wi-MY GODDESS ARTEMIS! Please, let this lowly one show you to the gardens.
Arjuna: I see a son of heaven before me, a man of great strength and personality... so who is this unseen figure I sense beside you?
Kid Gil: … no, you're still an insufferable little shit.
Billy the Kid: There is no shame in defending your family boy. Did I ever tell you the time I was about to stab an emperor in the loins?
Tristan: A knight using a bow. Unconventional, but sensible.
Tawara Touta: Please speak with my cook, she can help get you the meals you want.
Artoria Pendragon (Archer): Uh… I know I said you should be more of your own person, but this…
Anne Bonny & Mary Read (Archer): Tch. Pair of nymphs, those two.
Chloe von Einzbern: PUT SOME PANTS ON, CHILD! I'll be having words with Irisviel...
Ishtar: Great and beautiful Venus, you honor us with your arrival. Is the host body to your liking?
James Moriarty: Such wasted talent. He even wants to destroy the world!
EMIYA (Alter): You're not so rare as you make yourself out to be. Many a well-meaning youth finds themselves committing great evil as an adult.
Helena Blavatsky (Archer): I know not which hurts my soul more: That swimsuit on a young girl, or where she's holding that minigun.
Tomoe Gozen: A demonic concubine who is also a renown archer? With a past like that, your beloved can't be too far behind.
Attila the San(ta) (Archer): If I am quiet and focus, I can hea- yup. Mars is screaming bloody murder at this atrocity. And while I agree, I find myself transfixed into watching to the end.
Asagami Fujino: While you are in this temporary existence, I would most appreciate the assistance of another priestess. Please consider my offer.
Cu Chulainn (Lancer): An aura of death surrounds you. You will die very so- No, wait, that's just your spear.
Elizabeth Bathory (Lancer): … eh, sure. I'll pencil you in for hanging out with Cleo at two.
Musashibou Benkei: Both our cultures condemn running away from a battle, but you've proven a capable successor and a valuable witness. Now then, let us return to the shrine.
Cu Chulainn (Prototype): The shadow queen had many students, indeed.
Leonidas: Fear not, King of Sparta. Rome's discipline and strategic genius shall see your muscles properly directed.
Romulus: Divine father, are… are you pleased with the republic? Have we fulfilled your will?
Hector: Honorable Hector! The children of Aeneas come to take up his ancient burden. Our shields are yours to command!
Scáthach: Honorable teacher, we welcome you to your ranks. We hope you will find students of potential and strength here. Also, the dog ran thatwaway.
Diarmuid: A previous title-holder to King of Knights? An enchanted beauty mark that seduces maidens? Better stay away from my Cleo then.
Artoria Pendragon (Lancer Alter): Oh great. Like giving Excalibur to Artoria Alter wasn't bad enough.
Karna: Your discernment of character is an ability any faction in history would have greatly benefited from… no, I am well aware of my character flaws.
Fionn mac Cumhaill: Yes, I will try to assuage your concerns as best I can. Especially the relationship ones. First Step, stay away from Cleo.
Brynhildr: I am a priest in service to the gods. But when I see the mangled abomination that is your soul, I am reminded of why this is a thankless and unenviable job.
Li Shuwen (Lancer): Well, is you desire to fight me, I hope you don't mind this old man relying on seconds.
Artoria Pendragon (Lancer): … you're somehow even more disconnected than normal Artoria. Still, there are many worse choices for a goddess to worship.
Tamamo no Mae (Lancer): … I have the knowledge implanted from the Grail, yet shit like this still makes no sense.
Kiyohime (Lancer): *quietly backs away silently*
Vlad III (EXTRA): Funny how the Counter Force interprets one's legend, isn't it?
Jeanne d'Arc (Alter) (Santa Lily): … Nope. Nope, nope, nope, I am not dealing with this Christmas BS.
Enkidu: Moderating Gilgamesh, at last.
Medusa (Lancer): Yes, young goddess, Cleopatra would love to spend time with you.
Jaguar Man: A divine concept's container is… this? Who is making these decisions?
Minamoto no Yorimitsu (Lancer): … clearly Merlin didn't learn his lesson last time.
Parvati: Interesting… so there is a relationship between these divine containers after all.
Houzouin Inshun: Sacrificing one's desires and wants to take one's martial arts to the height of heaven. An ideal many cultures can embrace, but many will also find impossible.
Nezha: You have the flaws of both man and god. Do not worry though, I am willing and able to help you grow out of them. Just look at little Cleo… actually never mind, let's just go.
Ereshkigal: Rivals in myth, rivals in life… I wonder if there's a prophecy if all of these Divine Containers are united.

Lancelot (berserker): Are you sure you're not limiting yourself with just that one machine? Surely there are other war machines of the modern era which would be of use.
Frankenstein (Berserker): Prometheus' flame still burns within you, my dear. May you find the bridegroom you seek.

Ryougi Shiki (Assassin): Milady, my servants await your directives. How shall we strike?
Gilgamesh (Caster): You've matured into a fine adult. You are still no Emperor, but one who commands the gods themselves is certainly one to acknowledge.
Jeanne De'Arc (Ruler): Ah, to meet another who has been honored with the words of heaven whispered in their ears and dreams… please, follow me to my temple. I would benefit greatly from a Saint's revelation of some prophecies.
 
I'm not sure that would be any different from just Punishment, because from what I see, the entire legion ignored orders.
Good question.

@Telamon

What do you say about this? Is Discipline write-in functionally equivalent to Punishment because everyone in the legion disobeyed direct orders?

did you chose that for the reference to Omake: Fragments from Atellus' Speech to the gathered elders of the Pentri?
I don't remember whether the sword-and-hand metaphors originated in @Telamon 's post or a subsequent omake, at this point, but yes, the choice to reference that metaphor was deliberate.

If we can still choose what we do with the city we just destroyed, I'm thinking that Annihilation would be a good idea, the old trick of showing your enemies the ruins of Rome's past ones does not exactly have a good track record, so I'm thinking that instead of leaving the ruins as a reminder of Rome's strength, leaving nothing at all would be more effective. It could be seen as, instead of leaving martyrs for the enemy's cause, the Legion would leave nothing at all, the enemy shall be wiped away from history, almost never to be remembered, sounds a lot more intimidating to me.
My own reason for voting Memorial is that I don't especially want Atellus to evolve into the kind of guy who thinks it's a great idea to intimidate enemies by slaughtering everyone in a city, then tearing it down until no stone stands atop another, then burying the stones so that no one sees a city.

This isn't about intimidating the Samnites.

"These are the facts. This happened. There was a reason, but the reason matters little now. Why the sack of Nola happened can never be as significant as the fact that it happened. Nola is dead. This is the gravestone."

The Samnites, the Romans, and everyone else can make of the facts what they will. They happened, and all the words in the world pale in their shadow.
 
My own reason for voting Memorial is that I don't especially want Atellus to evolve into the kind of guy who thinks it's a great idea to intimidate enemies by slaughtering everyone in a city, then tearing it down until no stone stands atop another, then burying the stones so that no one sees a city.
I interpreted annihilation as the opposite of that. We already burned the city, but with annihilation the people living there aren't constantly reminded of it by the ruins. Less intimidation, more "forget we were ever enemies"
 
I interpreted annihilation as the opposite of that. We already burned the city, but with annihilation the people living there aren't constantly reminded of it by the ruins. Less intimidation, more "forget we were ever enemies"
I don't know if it'd really go over that way.

Also, I was debating someone who apparently advocates Annihilation for the intimidation factor; take it up with him.
 
I think that Annihilation is a good idea- not only for a possible intimidation factor of wiping out one's enemies from the face of the earth, but also it removes an area that could be used as a base of operations for bandits or rebels. The burned out remains of a city is a pretty good place to hide and can be relatively quickly repurposed to store or house bandits.
 
Alright, so I decided to make a few plans of my own. I slept on it, and decided celebration would be too morbid after all, and I do like the whole memorial idea. My preference would be the first one, with the same popular idea of punishing for disobedience, only explicitly those that were the worst and with whip instead of gold. I even don't think it's a more severe punishment - those are legionaries whose daily job is to risk and get bodily harm for coin. Though, of course, whip is much different from honorable battle. Also, I strongly feel that if we choose to do any punishment, we ought to pick Drum Up Support, so our reputation with the soldiery doesn't suffer too much.

[] Plan Whip for disobedient
-[] Write-in: Admonishment for disobedience: An army should control itself. A Roman army should know better than to sack a city ostensibly meant to be Roman, disregarding their orders to stop. You have the worst offenders from each cohort, those who ignored their orders for longest and most severely, selected and flogged. It will not win you any love, but it may teach them a lesson of discipline and obedience.
-[] Write-In: Memorial. Have a stone monument erected outside the ruins of Nola, with an inscription in large letters, high enough off the ground that a man cannot easily reach it. "Here stood the city of Nola, spurning the outstretched hand of Rome. Here came the sword of Rome, in the year of Flaccus and Marius. Here fell the city of Nola."
-[] Drum Up Support: You attempt to solidify the men's idea of you as someone they follow and support. They love you already, but having a solid voting bloc in future elections might prove very useful.
-[] The Cult of Mars: You attempt to solidify your small cult, turning it into an organization which may survive the transition from military life to civilian. Having brothers bound by bonds deeper than blood in the killing fields of the Senate may prove useful.
-[] Expand Journal: You begin expanding your journal to include more than strictly military matters, such as political happenings or philosophical musings.

However, we can just do nothing. It is not the first time an army lost itself in the pillaging, and it will not be the last. It might very well serve everyone better if we just shrug and go our way, at least publicly. Privately, we can write our feelings on the situation in the journal, like in the first plan.

[] Plan Vae Victis
-[] Nothing: To the victor go the spoils. So it has always been. So it will always be. (Incompatible with any other choice)
-[] Make Connections: Ever aloof and arrogant, the aristocrats of the equtii, the knights of Rome, have come to respect you as a leader to look up to over the course of this campaign. You could try to make some deeper connections that might serve you well in the city.
-[] The Cult of Mars: You attempt to solidify your small cult, turning it into an organization which may survive the transition from military life to civilian. Having brothers bound by bonds deeper than blood in the killing fields of the Senate may prove useful.
-[] Expand Journal: You begin expanding your journal to include more than strictly military matters, such as political happenings or philosophical musings.

I think that we maybe do celebration?

We are victor in this.It is time to celebrate not moping.
Thing is, even by Roman standards, what we did just now was not a pretty and honorable thing that ought to be celebrated. There is a reason Livy in his future writings called it "The most barbarous of barbarous acts". Sacking an ostensibly Roman city and murdering everyone in it to a man, woman and child is a kind of act that makes everyone stop for a second and think on the cruelties of war, even in these times. Holding a celebration after it feels a bit too morbid, and might, if not damage our reputation, then send it and our character the way we as players might not want to go.
 
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I had a mini heart attack when I didn't see the thread on page 1 and thought that it went on hold again.:p

[X] Plan Optimat Politics
-[X] Write-In: Discipline. It is said soldiers ignored Sertorius and his officers' commands to cease during the sack. There must be a punishment for such insubordination. You have the pay of all men who ignored orders heavily docked. Gold speaks louder than blood.
-[X] Write-In: Memorial. Have a stone monument erected outside the ruins of Nola, with an inscription in large letters, high enough off the ground that a man cannot easily reach it. "Here stood the city of Nola, spurning the outstretched hand of Rome. Here came the sword of Rome, in the year of Flaccus and Marius. Here fell the city of Nola."
-[X] The Cult of Mars: You attempt to solidify your small cult, turning it into an organization which may survive the transition from military life to civilian. Having brothers bound by bonds deeper than blood in the killing fields of the Senate may prove useful.
-[X] Expand Journal: You begin expanding your journal to include more than strictly military matters, such as political happenings or philosophical musings.
-[X] Make Connections: Ever aloof and arrogant, the aristocrats of the equtii, the knights of Rome, have come to respect you as a leader to look up to over the course of this campaign. You could try to make some deeper connections that might serve you well in the city.

As you can see I went with the Optimates here since throughout the whole war we got closer to the Populares (which was also pointed out to us in the narration) and I want to straddle that line until we have a better picture of how Sulla and Marius are handling themselves in the east. I'm also not married to the discipline choice. In fact I find it a bit problematic, but until someone gives a good explanation as to why not to vote for it, I'll keep it in.
 
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