Okay, I'll try my hand at votecrafting.

[X][Plan]Circling the wagons

RESEARCH(3)
[] Lightless Circuits
[] A World of Secrets
-[M]Tasting Lightning: [625/???]
[] Practice in Unity

MINOR (4)
[] Mother of Circles
[] Tinker: Woven Humanity
[] Write-In: Gondor Calls For Aid: Tinker Assistance
[] A Healers Fire [226/250]


PERSONAL (3 Personal Action)
[]Mentor[LOCKED]
[]Those Great Creations: [169/200]
[]Lyrics of Fire:

HEROES
Vision: Lightless Circuits
Vega Cant: Practice in Unity
Mary Alessandra D'reve: Tasting Lightning

ANSWER
[X] [Answer] Who are the people Amanda and Mary most often visit as guests? What are their homes like?

Main changes from uju32's are swapping out Skin of Steel for Practice in Unity, and changing the artefact to Woven Humanity. I think it's worth the shot, especially if we're using a second slot to help. I'm hoping there might be some synergy between the two as well. And of course changing Vega over as well, her Harmony should be very helpful in Practice in Unity, I think.

And sorry, couldn't resist the plan-name pun. :oops:
 
Hmm.
Caliburn autocompleted. That's ominous. Convenient, but ominous.
As I said, it's an ominous time to be alive. Iris is pretty clearly grown up, and the oncoming Shiplords are a threat to her survival as much as anyone else's; she has a right to work on weaponization in light of that.

Went with Mender's Soul as a Tinker project because there seemed to be a majority leaning towards it after the GM said it didn't lock is out from any of othe others. And because it's basically Rho Aias and Avalon in a blender.
I don't know what those are.

Added an assistance project on top, just in case, because the GM said we could do so.

Mother of Circles synergizes with Gondor Calls For Aid..
Could you explain what "Gondor Calls For Aid" actually does and how it would affect things and in what way?

Vega is on Skin of Steel because of the conceptual similarities with the original Unison platform project.
As long as she doesn't overdo it.
Again.
The thing is, we don't want the product of Skin of Steel to be a Practiced artifact because we simply can't make enough of them that way. The entire point is that this is advanced Sixth Secret based armor that doesn't rely on Practice the way the stuff we improvised during the Shiplord boarding action at Second Sol did.
 
[X] [Plan] Communal Practice

RESEARCH (3)
[M] Lightless Circuits [121/???]
[] A World of Secrets
-[M] Tasting Lightning [625/???]
[] Practice in Unity

MINOR (4)
[] Mother of Circles
[] A Healers Fire [226/250]
[] Tinker: Mender's Soul
[] Write-In: Gondor Calls For Aid: Tinker


PERSONAL (3, 1 Locked)
[] Mentor [LOCKED]
[] Those Great Creations [169/200]
[] Lyrics of Fire

HEROES
Vision: Lightless Circuits
Vega Cant: Practice in Unity
Mary Alessandra D'reve: Tasting Lightning

This is the plan I've been making back a few pages ago - except I picked up the Gondor option as well.

Artifact is Mender's Soul, third Research is Practice in Unity. Middle ground between uju32 (same artifact) and Shwaggy (same 3rd research).
 
As I said, it's an ominous time to be alive. Iris is pretty clearly grown up, and the oncoming Shiplords are a threat to her survival as much as anyone else's; she has a right to work on weaponization in light of that.
Fair.
I don't know what those are.
Avalon is the modern mythological name for the Fate/Stay Night version of Arthur's sword Excalibur's scabbard.
The one with protection and healing properties.

Rho Aias is supposed to be Ajax the Greater's shield, as seen through a Japanese anime's lens.
One moment:

There.
Could you explain what "Gondor Calls For Aid" actually does and how it would affect things and in what way?
I quote:
Are there ways to boost that chance of success, like delving deeper into related research or something?
Oh certainly.
You also have a Minor Action that lets you reach out to people around you. I'm sure that could be used to get help.
Requesting help with a Tinker action.
The thing is, we don't want the product of Skin of Steel to be a Practiced artifact because we simply can't make enough of them that way. The entire point is that this is advanced Sixth Secret based armor that doesn't rely on Practice the way the stuff we improvised during the Shiplord boarding action at Second Sol did.
It doesn't have to be. Vega doesn't just produce Practiced shit. When she restored Vigil he didn't become Practiced,

Harmonials primarily improve people's efficiency at working together by linking them. The way Vega was enhancing the efficiency of the Fleet during Second Sol. They don't necessarily pull out Miracles. Odds are it just ends up as enhanced mundane material, since Vega knows what we're aiming for.

And even if it ends up as a product of Practice?
Do remember that a product of Practice is not the same thing as a Practiced Artifact anyway.

Prologue was the product of a Practiced Miracle from back when we hadn't cracked the Sixth Secret.
And we still made enough for every man woman and child in the Sol System.
A number in the billions.

We only have millions, maybe tens of millions, in the military.
Our casualty numbers in Second Sol were less than a hundred thousand IIRC.
 
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Main changes from uju32's are swapping out Skin of Steel for Practice in Unity,
third Research is Practice in Unity.
This can wait. We can beat the current threat without it.

Skin of Steel is apparently not finishing on it's own, amd we need it operational and in mass deployment before the Regulars get here.
Skin of Steel is basically Iron Man Extremis on steroids. It's a mass produced version of Mary's suit from Turn 17, with armor, forcefield, the ability to fly and flashfab weapons:
Turn 17 Curiosity's Wings said:
"Because her entire system is capable of absorbing the shock of a bad landing without a scratch. It might hurt, but she's got control over her pain receptors. You don't, even with what you've been working on for yourself," you broke off as Mary chuckled.

"I finished it, actually." She told you, and you stopped abruptly in mid-air. "Why do you think I asked to do this today?" You'd thought she was still months away from completing it. "Iris' upgrades helped." She said, as if that explained everything.

"Oh." It did, actually. Iris' upgrades, as given testimony by the young AI rocketing in circles around the sky, had done more than surpassing all expectations. Mary had, it seemed, been able to use some of their monumental shattering of the envelope to finally complete the nanomaterial skin project she'd been working on in her own time over the last several years. "How close to your projections did you get?" You asked.

"Passed them." Mary's grin was that of the proverbial cat that had gotten the cream. She touched one of the silvery circlets at her wrists, one that you'd not really noticed. "They're part of the reservoirs. My glasses are one too, and my clothes are seeded with it. They provide the link to my flight system and the glasses give me a display. It's how I knew that the software was finished calibrating."


"What about the rest of the system? I know you designed it to help protect you-"

"I designed it to try and mimic your Aegis, Mandy." She corrected, smiling slightly as she cut you off. "I've not matched it, I never expected to, but I've come a lot closer that I thought was possible before we started building Iris' shell. Her body is responsible for…a lot of this being possible."


"Something else to thank her for," you murmured as you both continued to climb, and she nodded, smiling fondly.

"Are you talking about me?" The object of your fondness dropped down into speaking distance, her eyes dancing with sheer joy. "You've both got those funny expressions you get whenever you talk about me." She paused, cocking her head. "Or I guess it could be the other thirteen percent of the time, but I can't see how that would be a topic of conversation right now."

"For your information, we were." Mary said, floating across towards your daughter with a suddenly quite dangerous smile. "Now what's this 'other thirteen percent' about, my dear?" Iris' eyes flew wide and she mouthed 'help' as Mary closed in. You weren't insane enough to try and get in Mary's way, however, and you knew she wouldn't do anything too bad. Watching them chatter, Iris trying to deflect and Mary having none of it, let you consider the absurdity of where their conversation was taking place. And more importantly, how.

When you'd committed to the new upgrades to Iris' frame, you'd known Mary had… ideas. She'd wanted to take the technology further, but buried in that commitment to protect her daughter had been a spark of the furious curiosity that made her such a brilliant scientist. Iris' body was utterly unique, and that was true even now, as the advancements she saw her work leading towards had made constructing another one something of a waste of time. If Iris had wanted another, that probably would have been different, but she didn't. So, she'd focused her work on bringing the first set of upgrades forward, and then used those developments to piggyback her own project into full functionality. At least that's what she'd just told you.

Avatar: 91 + 42 + 35 = 168
Government support: 89 + 21 + 26 = 136. 168 + 136 = 304 + 277 = 581/300


With the government's help, Mary had been able to build on the work you'd done the year before exactly as the three of you had planned, and then some. The largest change was a considerable alteration to her frame's structure, with almost the entire shell now being made up of a new version of highly adaptive nanomaterial. One of your greatest concerns when you'd given Iris a physical form had been the durability of it, and the performance upgrades the two of you had poured into it over the last year and a half had been heavily focused on increasing that. In this, you'd surpassed yourselves: Iris' skin could now 'harden' into the same non-standard composite that was used for naval hull plating, and her nanomass could supplement its thickness with ease. When fully extended, a process that took less time than it took to blink, the shell would be able to stand up to everything smaller than strategic munitions or outright naval weaponry. Not quite a match for your Aegis, as Mary had said, but far closer than you'd thought possible a handful of years ago.

But the changes didn't stop there. Part of the redesign had made Iris as capable of complex construction as any fabber, and you honestly weren't sure if that was heartening or terrifying. The construction library at her fingertips was extensive. On a happier note, related modifications had expanded her cosmetic nanosculpt features and would let her properly simulate growth at a rate currently pegged to human normal. That had been one of her requests, together with a vastly expanded set of sensory reaction sets that she could use at leisure. You'd given her both.

None of that explained how you were all up here, though, a full twenty meters above your new home. That was the fault of a final piece of Mary's genius; a set of miniaturised Fifth Secret gravity manipulators integrated into your daughter's frame. Properly configured, they could create a low-intensity shield similar in application to those commonly used by starships. On a less practical note, although Iris probably disagreed with that assessment, they also meant that she could fly.

She'd had the upgrades for a week, and had been begging you to teach her how to use this final system, but Mary had asked you to wait until you were both free. Little had you known that she'd had her own surprise to unveil. She'd worked out a way to copy that system… and more.

Mary's Tinkering: 92 + 35 + 15 (Daughter of Secrets) + 31 (Iris 'mother must only have the best!') = 173 + 152 (Avatar + Support synergy at half) = 325/300. Just please kill me now.

If you weren't mistaken, what Mary was wearing had the same capabilities as Iris' outer skin, supplemented by reservoirs that could strengthen it or add additional layers to reduce and safely distribute impact force or other effects that simple strength wouldn't be able to handle. You'd have to ask about fabricator capacity. The idea of Mary walking around with the ability to flash-forge a micro-disruptor was… surprisingly less worrying then you'd thought it would be. She knew the dangers of those weapons, she'd been involved in designing their prototypes. If you could trust her to do that, you could trust her with one.

It gives everyone, from those Potentials who haven't matched to a Unison platform to our baseline soldiers, vastly improved chances of survival. We WILL take casualties. This reduces them.
Especially important given how long it takes to train skilled personnel.
 
They don't exist to the best of my knowledge.
And even if they do, they wouldn't work for Potentials.

We have less than a hundred thousand Potentials spread across four Awakening waves and a population of roughly ten billion.
Our total navy during Second Sol on both the ships and Orbitals was around four hundred thousand people. We took eighty five thousand dead and another hundred thousand injured.

Forty six percent total casualty rate.
Twenty-one percent fatality rate.
All of which fed into that horrific number that you weren't sure would ever stop burning in your mind. Perhaps that would be for the better though, being able to forget would make you a far worse example of humanity.
Eighty-five thousand, three hundred and seventy-four dead; you'd made yourself memorise the number. Over a hundred thousand wounded, and even with the miracles of Prologue, Sixth Secret medical nanotech, and the Restorer Focused, it would take months or years for all of them to recover.
Something to take into account here would be the timeframe involved. The entire battle took all of fifteen to twenty minutes. You also lost a lot of auxiliary craft in that time, and their crews aren't exactly small.

It's without a doubt (one of) the largest casualty counts resulting from a single engagement in human history. It's also far better than it could have been. Sixth Secret defensive systems meant that far more crew were able to reach escape pods before their ships went up, which meant a lot of wounded but not so many dead.

The total wounded and dead count is well over two hundred thousand, and closer to a quarter of a million. In, as noted before, all of twenty minutes.
Re: this and all other talk on casualties. You're right, compared to what could have been, your losses are very light. Compared to the total number of military personnel who were actually engaged in the battle, you got savaged. Total personnel count for the entire First Fleet and the Orbitals was somewhere around the four hundred thousand mark. You lost almost a quarter of that outright.
Almost all our fighter pilots died outright.

We've been training this current generation for almost twenty years, since Second Sol.
We REALLY can't afford unnecessary losses.
So survival gear is paramount.
 
I meant, Snowfire is asking for Research actions. Make skill chips one; they would be wonderful for the majority of humans. ... Potentials going to fight can get a unison platform mk2 after third sol.
 
[X][Plan]Imminence

Skin of Steel needs to finish with time to outfit everyone. As it is we are cutting it close.

One thing that I am wondering is if we can get some Insight Potentials to help with our Void Crystal like with making a new Artifact. The only thing that makes me consider against it is that if we get a critical 1 we might end up losing Project Insight for the battle. And with our luck when it comes to the Void Crystal I'm seriously worried about that:).
 
A point of rather considerable import: Skin of Steel is not going to allow you to outfit every member of your military with it. It will vastly increase the survivability of your combat Potentials outside of the Unisonbound and military command staff, but there simply aren't the applicable resources at this point to outfit much more than that.

You were never going to manage full deployment to the entire navy, but leaving this so late applies crunch to the entire matter.

Edit: you might also get your fighter pilots, or at least some of them. It'll depend.
 
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A point of rather considerable import: Skin of Steel is not going to allow you to outfit every member of your military with it. It will vastly increase the survivability of your combat Potentials outside of the Unisonbound and military command staff, but there simply aren't the applicable resources at this point to outfit much more than that.

You were never going to manage full deployment to the entire navy, but leaving this so late applies crunch to the entire matter.
Edit: you might also get your fighter pilots, or at least some of them. It'll depend.
It would have been nice to have known this earlier.
It would have changed some of our research priorities. For example, I would have dug Lina's old spacesuit, the one that Amanda Practiced, out of storage in order to attempt to reverse-engineer it for general deployment.

We're looking to fight a prolonged war at home and abroad.
Reducing our casualties is a military imperative, because it allows experience gained to be utilized in future conflicts.
 
It would have been nice to have known this earlier.
It would have changed some of our research priorities. For example, I would have dug Lina's old spacesuit, the one that Amanda Practiced, out of storage in order to attempt to reverse-engineer it for general deployment.

I made it clear at the time of the development of Mary's suit that developing it further would not allow it to go to blanket deployment. This has not changed since.
 
There will be more fights after 3rd Sol, so, the action isn't wasted in the narrative.
But in the meantime we suffer irreplaceable losses if we don't have Skins deployed during Third Sol.
We can't just replace a dead Potential by putting a normal through boot camp. Someone like Marcus, for example, has no platform.And high level officers like Lina are at least as important to our war effort.
I made it clear at the time of the development of Mary's suit that developing it further would not allow it to go to blanket deployment. This has not changed since.
Nope.
You did say, and I quote:
Mary was only able to actually build one of these because she's a strategic scale asset. Handing these out like candy is going to take a while, as the 6th Secret tech used to build them is ruinously expensive. Special forces, yeah, I can see that - if you can find a purpose for them. Handing out to everyone? Less so. Combat armour and space suits is quite enough.
So it was somewhat ambiguous.

Did anyone take a look at the combat armor Amanda modified for the bridge crew?
 
So it was somewhat ambiguous.
Not all that ambiguous. At the time, special forces were the only ones who might get it. I don't think it should be a surprise that, as time passes, the fraction of our military which might get it in time will keep decreasing.

I think I'd still like to research it, partly because Mary has shown it to be a general boost to productivity and partly because I'd like it fully rolled out by the time of the fourth battle of Sol.
 
I think it's safe to say I've had a few thoughts on this over the years. :) Arcadia hasn't really been focusing on this side because for the most part it's structured to be a skunkworks and/or deep research institution, doing mostly blue-sky work where even the theory doesn't yet exist. In other words, our mission is to research stuff like the Third Secret, and Lightless Circuits, where we don't even really have the map of how to get there from our current understanding of the world.

When it comes to skill chips and the like, however, after Bio-inorganics completed and especially after enough of the brain's functionality was demystified to have both direct brain-computer interfaces and the sorts of perception enhancers that Adriana used during Second Contact, all of which happened before Arcadia even got off the ground, there's really not much theory left to discover in that field. We're down to the elbow-grease side of science: scanning brains from the inside and out, programming direct-interface computers that take the knowledge of seasoned combat veterans and tightly integrate it into end users' mind-brain gestalts, and doing endless rounds of quality control, longitudinal studies, and improvement cycles to best figure out how to "teach" people by loading software directly into their brain.

Now, what's going to make @Snowfire's eyes twitch is that, with accelerated learning as a thing, we've basically removed the last barrier to turning Humanity 2.0 society into Mid-Childa. Remember Chrono Harlaown, a "highly experienced" MP officer at age 14? This is how you get there: by having a relatively young, growing population with skill chip schools who desperately need to secure a 1.6 x 1017​ km2​ area (roughly the surface area of a sphere drawn out from the Sun to the asteroid belt; in other words the stellar exclusion zone) with defensive emplacements.


[X][Plan]Imminence
I agree with @uju32's assessments, and thus his plan. Skin of Steel is incredibly important, and if I had known that @Snowfire's statement above would still apply after actually researching the technology I'd have probably been advocating to handle it much sooner.
 
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