A Song of Dragons and Duty (Dragon Age Quest - 3rd Thread)

To be fair, there's many more in the nobility opposed to the idea of giving the City Elves better lives than in the Chantry, and my take is that there are many more backing Vaughan despite rumours to the contrary - racist nobles who are pretending to be better than they appear to be. Furthermore, considering King Cailan's character, I thought of him as the type to completely ignore the real backdoor dealings among the nobility, allowing so much rot to pile up over the years of his rule.

Therefore, those same corrupt nobles are able to outnumber Serah Ruby and her Knights with sheer force of numbers, and they could easily bribe the city guards to ignore it as well - I've studied the wiki and some other stories, and I find this correlates to that. Truth be told, though, this will be the last dramatic event that will happen before the Blight, just a minor spoiler.
Except that only a few people went Vaughan. And the whole most noble are racist thing is bull. Most didn't care enough to make things bad for the elves and left them to do as they pleased. It is specifically noted that the Elves in Ferelden are much better off and have higher living standards than any other kingdom. Making the nobles constantly trying to be evil to the elves is a cheap gimmick to try and make Aedan seem better. It is lazy at best. Again you had a chance to do something unique with the encounter but you didn't and went with the easy and cheap option.

Vaughan is also almost universally despised by most people noble and commoner alike. So no most people would not support him because he is just that bad of a person and being connected to him would hurt more than it would help. He was imprisoned in his own home and no one gave a shit.
 
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Vaughan is also almost universally despised by most people noble and commoner alike. So no most people would not support him because he is just that bad of a person and being connected to him would hurt more than it would help. He was imprisoned in his own home and no one gave a shit.
Well, consider that in this timeline, there are far more players wanting to control Vaughan as a puppet, despite him being despicable. But I will take your opinion into mind.
 
We have a unanimous vote. Will get to working on the next part.
 
21. Week in Denerim, Day Two, Part IV
Week in Denerim

Day Two, Part IV

[X] Have your spies and the more nimble Elves sneak into the estate, and let your men stream in unopposed and with little trouble.

Plans were made, discussions had, and nods were exchanged. And at once, soldiers moved to surround the Arl of Denerim's estate and block every possible entrance and exit.

From outside the estate, you, Cauthrien and Loghain waited with baited breath as Adaron and his spies and the more nimble City Elves snuck inside, armed with dagger and leather armour.

"I don't mean to doubt your spies' skills, but can they truly do their job?" Asked Loghain.

"They can, Loghain," You said, "Don't worry."

"My Lord, if Lord Aedan says with certainty they can do their job, should we not trust him on this?" Said Cauthrien.

Loghain sighed, saying, "I suppose."

Screams rang out from the estate – all of men and women screaming their death throes as chaos ensued, and all tightened their knuckles on their weapons.

"Get ready, men," Said Loghain, "On my mark…"

The gates were thrown open, and the bodies of two guards fell to the ground.

"Now!"

And war cries were shouted as the men stormed the estate, swords drawn and bows primed with arrows. The guards tried putting up a resistance, but caught unaware and weakened by Adaron's spies and lacking the same training that Loghain's men had, they were cut down like lambs to the slaughter.

Before long, the guards were pitifully overwhelmed and your party streamed in unopposed into the different parts of the Keep, ensuring that all resistance was permanently silenced.

Using the chaos to his advantage, you went into the prison complex, where you saw Serah Ruby, her Knights and many female Elves being imprisoned inside.

"Get them out, now!" You ordered.

The prison gates were pried open, and the female elves were quick to embrace their freedom as they were led outside and away from the estate.

"Thank you for freeing us, my Lord," Said Serah Ruby, "I never did expect Vaughan would have so many powerful backers."

"They merely want him as a puppet, I'd wager," You said, "But where's Shianni? Did you see a red-haired Elf?"

"Shianni… oh shit! Vaughan just took her to his bedroom a while ago!" Shouted Ruby, "We have to hurry!"

"You heard her, men! With me!" You ordered.

Not long after, you caught up to Adaron and the others as you hastily made your way deeper into the estate. When you entered Vaughan's bedroom, you saw Shianni pinned down by Vaughan as she struggled against his stronger grasp.

"Get off me, you bloody bastard!" She shouted.

Adaron, seeing blood, violently tackled him to the ground and punched him repeatedly with such brute strength that his facial bones were shattered and blood spilled in rivers across the bedroom.

"Ruby, check on her," You said.

After a moment's inspection, Ruby then said, "She's fine, thank the Maker."

You let out a sigh of relief, then turn to Adaron and briefly halt Adaron in his beatdown as he slowly turns to you, his shoulders stiff with tension.

"Shianni's fine, as are all the other Elves," You said.

At this, Adaron deflated visibly, relief awash on his face, though he yet glared at Vaughan.

Loghain and Serah Cauthrien then entered the room, and after a brief explanation on what transpired in the bedroom, Loghain nodded at this. He then walked to Vaughan and slowly knelt beside him, fury boiling in his eyes.

"Vaughan Kendells," Loghain said in an even voice, "You stand accused of multiple counts of rape, attempted rape and even murder. What say you in your defence?"

Despite his damaged face, Vaughan managed to spit at Loghain's feet.

"I see," Said Loghain, who took out a dagger and handed it to Shianni, nodding at her.

Shianni took the dagger in hand, and slowly kneeling before Vaughan, she said in a low, menacing voice, "I told you, I would gut you like a pig."

The rest of you then leave, knowing what fate would befall Vaughan.

Not once did you look back, even when the gurgling and spilling of blood reached your ears.

IIOII​

With King Cailan now away on his march to Ostagar, it fell to Loghain to oversee court affairs in his stead, and in the King's Palace, a Landsmeet was called as all nobles in Denerim were assembled before the court – Loghain standing in front of the Throne, Serah Cauthrien by his side, and Queen Anora before them.

You stood by the side with Adaron, his eyes scrutinising the assembly for any bad apples among them.

"I wonder who among them wishes to plunge my people into despair…" Adaron muttered, "As if it wasn't bad enough our King is such a buffoon…"

"Wait and see, Adaron," You mutter, "They have it handled."

Adaron nods at you in response, a slight comfort in his eyes.

"This Landsmeet is called to order because of current trying circumstances that has forced me to call it early," Said Anora, her voice reverberating across the throne room's halls, "Particularly, the judgement of nobles guilty of horrid deeds."

Cries and fierce murmurs were exchanged between the nobles, and soon those whispers intensified as a few of Vaughan's lackeys were brought forward by Loghain's men, bruised and beaten and clapped in stocks.

"These were the lackeys of Vaughan Kendells, a noble who has notoriously gotten away with multiple counts of rape and even murder," Said Loghain, "And they are guilty of the same; none of us will stand for it. As such, Queen Anora calls for their execution."

"I say they die!" Shouted one woman, "They and Vaughan tried to rape my sister, and only my timely intervention prevented him from doing so!"

You recognise the voice as belonging to Bann Lucile Armstrong of Strommeadow, her eyes burning with anger at the sight of the nobles, her mouth frothing at the chance of vengeance against the wicked nobles.

"Bann Lucile is correct!" Shouted another voice, "I say they die, make sure they can never get their grubby hands on another innocent maiden ever again!"

The number of voices actively advocating for their deaths were not few, yet not many – less than half of those gathered, and you resisted the urge to groan severely at this.

"I see," Said Anora, "Those who advocated for their deaths, they are to be taken away."

"Wait, what is the meaning of this!?" Cursed one of the nobles as they were taken away, "Loghain! My Queen! Answer me!"

The remainder of the nobility merely gave shrugs and nods, giving nonchalant responses of "Why not kill them?", "Let them die," and "Give them what they deserve." All half-hearted words and no sustenance beneath them.

You nod at Adaron, who nods in return and swiftly disappears, and you turn to face the remaining assembly as Loghain sighs.

"Very well," Said Anora, "Cut them down."

At once, steel rang as swords and daggers were drawn, and carnage ensued as the gathered nobles were all butchered one by one, no mercy shown to stragglers or others despite their pleas for mercy. By the end of the carnage, neither of Vaughan's lackeys or the corrupt backers remained alive, their corpses pooling in their own blood.

Loghain nods at you, and he says to his men and yours, "Surround the estates of the corrupt families and place them under house arrest one by one – I shall determine their fate later. If they show any resistance, suppress it."

They nodded, and went to perform their grisly work, leaving Loghain and Anora to heavy a sigh of relief.

"Maker, it's finally done," Said Loghain, "Should have done this much earlier; it'd save us so much grief."

"And I'm finally glad to be rid of these fools," Said Anora, "Some of them made my skin crawl."

"At least it is finally done, My Lord, My Queen," Said Cauthrien, "Now we can truly devote our power to preparing Ferelden for the war to come."

"Aye, it is," Said Loghain, "If Duncan's words are to be believed, the horde is yet amassing in greater numbers, and we cannot avoid this war."

Loghain then turns to you, and said, "Thank you for your help, Aedan. We'd never have managed this without your help."

"You ought to give thanks to Adaron, Serah Ruby and my men as well," You replied.

"True, but if you had not come, this would never have been possible," Said Loghain with a smile, "I've already dispatched a messenger to the Alienage – we'll soon have the first new recruits for our new Night Elven corps."

"Glad to hear it," You said, then turned to Queen Anora, "Just curious, My Queen, what do you plan to do with the City Elves?"

"Isn't it obvious?" Said Anora smilingly, "I'm signing new laws to renovate the decrepit place into a quarter that's an actual city quarter and not a slum – the Elves will have better housing soon enough. Furthermore, these Elves can now live in other parts of the city or Kingdom that accepts them, and gain full citizenship rights. If they want to, they can even enlist in the army, if need be."

"Now that's what I'm looking for," You said, "Thank you, My Queen."

IIOII​

"I must admit, in all my years I never thought this'd even be possible," The haggard voice of Valendrian said, "And we have you mostly to thank, aside from Queen Anora and Lord Loghain."

Around you, old and worn down houses were being demolished in favour of proper houses of stone, brick and mortar, the streets being paved with stone. The old gate was demolished as well, replaced with a proper gate of metal and wood and guards from Loghain's men stationed to keep the order.

No longer would Elves remain confined in the Alienage, no longer would this blemish remain; now a proper city quarter was taking its place, and the Vhenandhal looked healthier than before.

Many Elves – young and old alike – bathed in the new springs of clean water conjured by the mages in service to the crown, and the smell of wet dog – something foreigners always complained about – was becoming noticeably less severe.

"It just goes to show we need to take matters into our own hands, for things to change," You said, "If not, who would?"

"None can gainsay you, in this case," Said Valendrian, "And should you need our aid, do not hesitate to call upon us; we shall strive to answer."

"I'm looking forward to that," You said.

Reward: Alliance with the City Elves gained, Night Elves restarted and currently seeing a surge of recruitment, City Elves now able to live higher standards of living and migrate to other parts of Denerim and Ferelden in general, and corrupt nobility culled.

What shall you do tomorrow? (Pick Two)

[] Mark political enemies among the Nobility (outside of Denerim) to target.
[] Mark opponents in the Chantry to eliminate.
[] Acquaint yourself with Loghain's men in Fort Drakon.
[] Find mercenary bands for hire.
[] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
- [] Bann Lucile Armstrong
- [] Bann Theresa Hubbard
[] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
- [] Sister Denise Mayer
- [] Mother Vera Kent

A/N: As always, a three-hour moratorium is in effect. Use this time to discuss your plans.
 
When the dumbass King is away playing at war, the mice will come out and enact The Night of the Long Knives.

At least the Royal Treasury is gonna get a boost from the seized estates and riches of the culled nobility.
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent


The Bann is the closer of the two and the one with access to very good horses who needs need crops and growing methods for food and herbs and other plants.

The Mother is someone we want to increase the power of so we have a greater shield since we will want to get the Chantry on our side best to start making an effort to actually understand the chantry instead if just deciding they are all worthless which is what Aedan has been doing so far.
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
- [X] Sister Denise Mayer
- [X] Mother Vera Kent

I'm going for both in the Chantry. We're running a but blind. In the Nobility, we have our own contacts. In the Elves, we had our brother but with the chantry? We don't have a strong connection or any proper information, and with Denerim being the capital, everything we do will have an echo.

The situation with the Chantry is already sensitive enough without even putting our own plans for the King at the table, so I think going this way will at least help us prevent making mistake when we actually move.
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
- [X] Sister Denise Mayer
- [X] Mother Vera Kent

I'm going for both in the Chantry. We're running a but blind. In the Nobility, we have our own contacts. In the Elves, we had our brother but with the chantry? We don't have a strong connection or any proper information, and with Denerim being the capital, everything we do will have an echo.

The situation with the Chantry is already sensitive enough without even putting our own plans for the King at the table, so I think going this way will at least help us prevent making mistake when we actually move.
We can talk to the other sister the next day. This is day three of seven only.
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
- [X] Bann Lucile Armstrong
- [X] Bann Theresa Hubbard

the chantry can wait until tomorrow's meetings
 
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent
 
Alright, voting is now closed.
Adhoc vote count started by Ebanu8 on May 12, 2020 at 10:05 AM, finished with 13 posts and 9 votes.

  • [X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
    -[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong
    [X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
    -[X] Mother Vera Kent
    [X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
    - [X] Sister Denise Mayer
    - [X] Mother Vera Kent
    [X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
    [X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
    - [X] Bann Lucile Armstrong
    - [X] Bann Theresa Hubbard
 
We have a winning plan. Will start on Day Three as soon as I can.
 
22. Week in Denerim, Day Three, Part I
A/N: Pardon how long it took to upload this, was busy writing some omakes for other quests.

Week in Denerim

Day Three, Part I

[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Bannorn.
-[X] Bann Lucile Armstrong
[X] Meet your prospective allies in the Chantry.
-[X] Mother Vera Kent


Today seemed like a good day to meet with prospective allies that Queen Anora recommended you, and so you would do just that; first on the agenda was Bann Lucile Armstrong of Strommeadow.

You quickly met her in the palace, in your private quarters where your spies eavesdropped, watching intently for any enemy spies or eavesdroppers. Two of your knights stood guard outside, decked in full steel plate and sword and shield.

Bann Lucile was a very youthful woman; barely past seventeen years of age, she was a less prim and proper noblewoman and more a brash warrior, her red hair tied in simply braids to the back of her head. Her blue eyes, on the other hand, betray the burning ambition within them.

"It's good to meet you, Bann Lucile," You said, offering a hand.

"Same, Aedan," Said Lucile, shaking your hand, "So you want to form an alliance with me?"

"That's right," You said, "I heard from Queen Anora you want to take control of a third of the Bannorn region, don't you?"

Lucile nodded, saying, "That region's too unruly and unpredictable for my liking; King Cailan doesn't give a shit either, and I say it's time we take matters into our own hands. At least Queen Anora's better than her shitty, wimpy-ass husband."

You sweat-drop at that.

"Well, regardless, would you agree to this alliance?" You asked, "Both of us are uncertain about the future, and with the state of Fereldener politics, it is prudent for us to ally with each other as acquaintances."

"On two conditions," Said Lucile.

"Alright, name them," You said.

"First, I need funding and a temporary loaning of your best blacksmiths and architects," Said Lucile, "As for funding, I need a few hundred Sovereigns in total. You don't have to pay it all at once; instalments are acceptable."

"Okay, but how much minimum would you like in instalments?" You asked.

"Thirty to fifty Sovereigns," Said Lucile, "And in cold, hard cash; no credit letters or that sort of thing."

"And the second condition?" You ask.

"…"

"Lucile?" You ask.

Lucile remained uncomfortably silent, her lips pursing slightly as if debating her next words.

Eventually, however, she mustered the courage and said, "I need you to recommend to me Dalish allies."

You quickly raise your eyebrows in response, and at that Lucile replies, "I know what you might be wondering, and my answer is that I don't care who my allies are – Human or non-Human. As long as they're not my enemies, I'd be willing to have them as my allies."

A simple answer from a simple woman, You thought, I'm glad she's my ally, at least.

"Before we go any further, however, I just want to satiate my curiosity," You said, "Why the Dalish? Why not as for help from Queen Anora's circle? And before you answer, I want a more explanatory answer."

"I thought you'd ask that," Said Lucile, "Very well. If you must know, it's on request of my Dalish lover."

You nearly fall of your chair at Lucile's bold declaration; you had never been more grateful for the privacy of your quarters and Lucile's soft words.

"O-Oh… I see," You said, rubbing your head awkwardly, taken off-guard by her sudden declaration, "Umm…"

"I'm keeping all other specifics about a secret, save that he's a handsome boy and a wonderful lover," Said Lucile, a mischievous smirk on her lips, "Especially in bed."

"Okay, let's stop there," You hastily add, "I don't think we came here to discuss how our lovers perform."

Lucile giggled – a most unwomanly gesture, before saying, "Aye, I agree. In any case, do you agree to these conditions?"

Shall you agree to Lucile's conditions?

[] Yes. They seem reasonable.
[] Discuss the conditions with her further.
- [] Write-in how.
[] No, they seem shallow to me.

A/N: Short, but simple. As always, three-hour moratorium before voting. Take your time to discuss your plans before voting.
 
[X] Discuss the conditions with her further.
- [X] I can give you coin and let you borrow my people, but what are you willing to offer in exchange?
- [X] I can give you an introduction to the Dalish but how they will treat with you will depend on what you can give them.


I get that Fereldan are kind of blunt and prefer straight forward negotiation, but this Bann Lucille hasn't even given us a reason why we should give her everything she is asking for. We're negotiating from a higher position, we have what she needs and in the case of the Dalish recommendation, which only we can give as a human (which makes it a unique and valuable negotiating tool), and while she may have the recommendation of Queen Anora, no matter how loosely or distant, she didn't even mention what she could give us except for an alliance? Like can we expect her to open her borders? Give us favorable trade conditions? Military support? and I'm not talking about mutual military support as an alliance because mutual means it's an equal trade.

TL;DR I'm not sold on the 'negotiation' since she hasn't said what she can offer us. An ally we have to pull to our level is not an ally but rather a vassal. If she can give us her fealty as her lord, this trade can go forward.
 
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