Wormverse ideas, recs, and fic discussion thread 1

Have there been any records of a normal human killing a Cape?
Danny's Interlude mentions the first hero, Vikare, taking a lethal brick to the head.
I've always earmarked Skidmark as the guy who got too blitzed on god knows what and got beat within an inch of his life or more by Dockworkers guys.
Nah, he was killed by a combination of Jack Slash cutting his throat open and slipping on his own blood into an active helicopter propeller. Squealer had made a particularly stupid one that had a second lift propeller underneath the hull, so...
 
Serious things can be really funny, especially people who are so serious they can't stand being laughed at. In fact, they are probably the funniest of all.

Please...just use your best judgement. If someone is trying to discuss something and trying to keep it serious then just treat that user with respect and don't respond with a funny rating. It just comes down to that.

Regardless, this is not on topic at all, so please stop discussing it and move on with the main topic of the thread.
 
Serious things can be really funny, especially people who are so serious they can't stand being laughed at. In fact, they are probably the funniest of all.

The reason staff posts are a thing (besides auto thread mark and the giant box) are so mods can draw a line between their "normal person" persona and "remorseless and impartial enforcer" persona.
Danny's Interlude mentions the first hero, Vikare, taking a lethal brick to the head.

IIRC, also marked the end of the golden , more innocent age of Heroes, and towards the cops and robbers nonsense we see in canon Worm.
 
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Just don't rate things that are meant to be taken as serious with funny ratings. That's an all-encompassing rule that's meant to be upheld regardless on whether or not the post is from a moderator or another user.

Practice common sense basically. Rating serious things with funny ratings is kind of really rude and disrespectful to the poster, ya know?
It's depressing how strong my urge is to rate your staff post as funny after seeing all of this. Some days I wish I didn't have that mischievous instinct. I'm the sort who touches wet paint right next to the sign, and follows cats onto wet cement. >.<

Anyway, urge controlled!
 
So, to change the subject here are two ideas for fanfiction ideas. I would develop them myself but due to having a recent promotion at work and a baby on the way (wife's due date was yesterday), I don't have time.

Idea #1: SAO/Worm crossover. Uber and Leet are testing a new device for gaming but due to power requirements and trying to keep their base a secret, are doing it on top of Winslow, stealling the school's power. They, along with Taylor, are pulled into Sword Art Online when Taylor's Triggering interacts poorly with their game. They are stuck in game until the game is beaten. Afterwards, they learn that the e tore thing happened over the course of days, not years. They also learn that due to be parahumans that they retained all they learned and gained within the game. They then find themselves in Alfhiem Online in normal time scale, whenever they go to sleep, retaining the gear/abilities from that as well because of its use of the Cardinal system.

How they interact with SAO characters and story is up to those who take up the idea.

Idea #2: Taylor gains the abilities of a dragon slayer from the anime, any of the ones that have some one with the title of dragon slayer.
 
If we are talking ideas, I'm back on the 40k Train and I'm trying a story idea with AU Taylor In Necromunda. Might lean towards Venator!Taylor. Here, have one of my experimental openings. I'm trying out several approaches to the idea of a literal Alternate Universe Taylor and how to tie canon to this. As for the overarching plot for much of the story, I have a really good idea to use that I got from one of the Kal Jericho Books.

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Hiveborne

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Momma said there's a heaven above where there is peace,
but until then, I'll keep my own piece in arm's reach


~~~~~~~~~~~​

She felt it before she saw it from any of her several point-of-views, a low mournful buzz in the back of her skull as it reached out to connect and started pulling on her senses with a desperate wailing desire to be found.

"Yes," she answered back, even if whatever it was couldn't physically hear her "I hear you. Just a moment, I'll dig you out and we'll get you cleaned up."

She called out over her connections to her Skulls even as she started to close in on where she could feel the pull coming from, converging them on the location with a comforting buzz of their anti-gravity systems filling the musty air even as she ordered them to start digging away at the pile of scrap. She cherished her Servo-Skulls, but better them then her when it came to this kind of job. There were plenty of horror stories about the kind of creatures that loved to burrow and nest in mounds just like this one.

Thankfully, that wasn't the case here. Letting the auspex readings filter into her thoughts, nothing stood out. No heartbeats, no heat signatures, no movements. Just the gentle pulse of a near-dead power cell that flared to life with relief and joy as her Servo-Skulls uncovered it after who-knows how long. Reaching down and plucking it from it's hole, she smiled wanly and ran a thumb over the Forge Mark that told of it's homeworld.

"Triplex Phall? You are a long way from where you are supposed to be. You have no business being down here in the Underhive." She said as she cradled it close.

The Lasgun was in poor condition. It looked like someone had taken a saw to the stock and snapped off the scope, before replacing the barrel with a custom one of low quality. She couldn't be sure, since most of it was a sagging mass of fused metal but it looked like some idiot had used the high-power settings with a stutter barrel and just threw it away when it had melted under the heat.

"Stupid. Someone spent a lot of money to get you here, and they went and wasted you. I know better though, and so does Chu. Triplex produces some of the best Lasguns around, so we'll get you fixed up and off to someone who knows what they are doing this time round. You'd like that, wouldn't you?"


The Machine Spirit trilled back to her in joy, and she smiled more fully when it did. It might have only been the effect of her powers, bolstering the Spirit and giving it more life and self, but it was better than most other interactions she'd get this far down in this strata of the Underhive. The Machines she bonded with loved her, and forced or not it was somewhat cute. She'd gotten better conversation from a door terminal then she had from a living person ever since the quake.

"Pack it up everyone, we're heading back!" She called out, her Servo-Skulls bobbing enthusiastically at the command as they kicked their propulsion into high before they started racing circles around her. As they did, she unrolled a bit of cord and did up a rudimentary strap to sling the lasgun to her back before she started heading back to her Hive Crawler, the little four-wheeled one-man still idling where she left it just a short jog away and stacked up with assorted containers and bags to hold all her salvage.

Taylor Hannette swung herself into the seat, and paused for a moment to adjust her robe and let the Skulls settle in before she gunned the engine and took off down the tunnels of Necromunda.


~~~​
 
Idea #1: SAO/Worm crossover. Uber and Leet are testing a new device for gaming but due to power requirements and trying to keep their base a secret, are doing it on top of Winslow, stealling the school's power. They, along with Taylor, are pulled into Sword Art Online when Taylor's Triggering interacts poorly with their game. They are stuck in game until the game is beaten. Afterwards, they learn that the e tore thing happened over the course of days, not years. They also learn that due to be parahumans that they retained all they learned and gained within the game. They then find themselves in Alfhiem Online in normal time scale, whenever they go to sleep, retaining the gear/abilities from that as well because of its use of the Cardinal system.

How they interact with SAO characters and story is up to those who take up the idea.
A direct shoehorn like that would be a bit jarring, especially since floor bosses would have parallels to Endbringer battles that might prevent the game from getting off the ground. The SAO core concept of people being trapped in a game is actually made easier in a world with parahumans, though, and there's no reason that the characters from SAO (Abridged?) can't be imported. Perhaps, rather than SAO itself, Uber and Leet made a bootleg server of a game that's already canon, and has some interesting parallels to Sword Art Online. CITATION!
PHO Sunday 5 said:
Ransack (2G) - Content patch for Ransack. There will be no inter-world Ransack tournament this year. Statement [here.] Content patch adds Whiterock, Ancient City, Lantern Town, Black Swamp, and City Under Siege overlord packs. Adds Temptress, Electrician, Raider, and Arbalester classes, play to unlock constituent parts. Tuning allows specific Ransack leagues to adjust the game's auto-balance feature to competitive, innovative, and explorative directions.
Auto-balancing, inter-world suggesting online multiplayer, and character classes means some sort of MMO. My thinking is that Uber and Leet set up a bootleg Ransack server. It wouldn't only draw in the students and staff of Winslow due to fuckery with Taylor's trigger, but also the people abroad who might've been playing it. Word of mouth endorsement among the ABB might've popularized it with local gamers in their recruiting demographic, so teens looking to destress from their attention might be active, which would explain the disproportionate number of Japanese names from the canon SAO characters. It also provides an opportunity to include canon Worm characters from outside Winslow, as well. Do recall that the Simurgh attack pulled the Travelers from participating in a Ransack tournament, so the drama of Noelle finding an escape in her game avatar would be all sorts of interesting.

As for the temporal element, that could be explained as Taylor triggering as a high-tier technopath who's overwhelmed by the data until she has her... I believe the term is 1.5 trigger, where the power makes a subsequent adjustment for how terribly wrong it got it the first time around, shortly after the first time. So, while a lot of time might have passed for those sucked into the game, for everyone else it'd be... hours? Let's call it three hours, as a nod to locker fanon. Trigger event... I'm thinking Taylor getting sent to the office to find out that her schools records have all somehow been deleted, discovered when her homeroom teacher (who was also her first period teacher in canon) discovered she was no longer on her attendance list for the homeroom. Breaker/Shaker, with Thinker cognitive acceleration to cope after they escape the bootleg Ransack server.

I'd personally drop the Alfheim element as well, in favor of the Travelers beelining to Brockton Bay to try to get Uber, Leet, and Uptime to figure out a way to fix Noelle.
 
A direct shoehorn like that would be a bit jarring, especially since floor bosses would have parallels to Endbringer battles that might prevent the game from getting off the ground. The SAO core concept of people being trapped in a game is actually made easier in a world with parahumans, though, and there's no reason that the characters from SAO (Abridged?) can't be imported. Perhaps, rather than SAO itself, Uber and Leet made a bootleg server of a game that's already canon, and has some interesting parallels to Sword Art Online.
Actually, the idea was that the the interaction with some sort of vr machine that Leet was making for currently available games and Taylor's Triggering caused the to be sent into SAO, mentally at least, and once there, their shards reacted with the world of SAO and the game to give them some basic gamer stuff based off of the Cardinal systems. The exact details would be up to anyone who wants to take up the idea.

I'd personally drop the Alfheim element as well, in favor of the Travelers beelining to Brockton Bay to try to get Uber, Leet, and Uptime to figure out a way to fix Noelle
Um didn't see this part at first but anyone who takes up the idea would be free to use or discard things from the overall idea as they choose. The biggest thing was the idea that Taylor would have a gamer package based off of the Cardinal system within the games of SAO, not being a technopath or something along that line
 
Actually, the idea was that the the interaction with some sort of vr machine that Leet was making for currently available games and Taylor's Triggering caused the to be sent into SAO, mentally at least, and once there, their shards reacted with the world of SAO and the game to give them some basic gamer stuff based off of the Cardinal systems. The exact details would be up to anyone who wants to take up the idea.
I know. I had concerns about how realistic SAO's existence in Earth Bet would be, though, and was presenting a variation on that core concept as an alternative.
Um didn't see this part at first but anyone who takes up the idea would be free to use or discard things from the overall idea as they choose. The biggest thing was the idea that Taylor would have a gamer package based off of the Cardinal system within the games of SAO, not being a technopath or something along that line
If the biggest part of an idea is it being a Taylor with Gamer Powers, you might want to mention that in the post where the idea is presented.
 
I've seen a lot of Isekai stories lately with the premise of a woman being reborn into a villainous character from a story she's read. So here's a question - given that Annette Hebert was a Professor of English Literature and thus Taylor has a firm grounding in classic literature, what classical female villains that Taylor is intimately familiar with could she be reborn into?
 
I've always wondered about all those fics where taylor is teleported somewhere else. Is there any that deal with the fallout of what happens back home now that she's gone. and I'm talking top billing not 1 interlude every other story arc about how things are in brockton. I'm mean main plot or b plot at the least.
 
I've seen a lot of Isekai stories lately with the premise of a woman being reborn into a villainous character from a story she's read. So here's a question - given that Annette Hebert was a Professor of English Literature and thus Taylor has a firm grounding in classic literature, what classical female villains that Taylor is intimately familiar with could she be reborn into?
Not just stories they read, but stories that they liked. So, it can't be anything that'd be assigned as homework in Winslow, for association with the bullying, if nothing else. We know that she read Oranges Are Not The Only Fruit with her mom, but that... wouldn't be a good story to live the villain's life in, since the community as a whole was an antagonist force, with the MC's mother just being a focal representative of their homophobic attitude.

Perhaps the in-setting Maggie Holt books?
 
I've always wondered about all those fics where taylor is teleported somewhere else. Is there any that deal with the fallout of what happens back home now that she's gone. and I'm talking top billing not 1 interlude every other story arc about how things are in brockton. I'm mean main plot or b plot at the least.
After I'm done reading the original story, I'm thinking of dropping Taylor in a homemade RPG setting.
But not just her.
Pretty much every cape that has died between her Triggering and her being killed by Contessa.
 
I've seen a lot of Isekai stories lately with the premise of a woman being reborn into a villainous character from a story she's read. So here's a question - given that Annette Hebert was a Professor of English Literature and thus Taylor has a firm grounding in classic literature, what classical female villains that Taylor is intimately familiar with could she be reborn into?

Well, off the top of my head...

1. Irene Adler from Sherlock Holmes A Scandel in Bohemia: An opera singer who had a one time fling with the king of Bohemia and he's afraid she might use a photograph of them together to blackmail him, though she never intended to. Notable in that she's one of the only people who manage to outsmart Holmes in the original stories. Later adaptations tend to make her more villainous or put in some sort of dating catwoman thing with Holmes.

Considering she wasn't really a villain in her initial appearance and was just a woman who didn't want the king sending thugs after her, it's hard to tell how Taylor would react to such a setup if it happened post Golden Morning and all the other paranoid stuff she had to deal with. Or she could be familiar with the original story, but not familiar with the more recent adaptations where Irene is more villainous and gets irate about how she has to be stuck in this crummy knockoff of her favorite series.


Other ideas would be

2. The Wicked Witch of the West... which could easily be turned into a crossover with Wicked.

3. The Queen of Hearts from Alice in Wonderland. The Queen doesn't actually die in the story, but I can easily see Taylor getting tired of being in Wonderland for too long and just wants to get the heck out. Being Queen is okay, it's just the general insanity of being in Wonderland that gets to her.


Actually, most of the female villains I can think of consist of fairytale witches, queens, and stepmothers. So she could probably derail most of stories instantly.

Taylor: Mirror mirror on the wall, how do I get out of this dimension?

Magic Mirror: Um, don't you want to know who the fairest woman in the land is?

Taylor: Not really. Is it Snow White?

Magic Mirror: Actually, yes it is.

Taylor: That's okay, as long as I'm in the top ten I'd consider a big improvement on what I was before.

Magic Mirror: Who are you and what have you done with the Evil Queen?!
 
I've seen a lot of Isekai stories lately with the premise of a woman being reborn into a villainous character from a story she's read. So here's a question - given that Annette Hebert was a Professor of English Literature and thus Taylor has a firm grounding in classic literature, what classical female villains that Taylor is intimately familiar with could she be reborn into?
Morgan Le Fay is the name that first popped into my head. The vampire Carmilla. How classical are we talking here?
 
If we are talking ideas, I'm back on the 40k Train and I'm trying a story idea with AU Taylor In Necromunda. Might lean towards Venator!Taylor. Here, have one of my experimental openings. I'm trying out several approaches to the idea of a literal Alternate Universe Taylor and how to tie canon to this. As for the overarching plot for much of the story, I have a really good idea to use that I got from one of the Kal Jericho Books.

~~~~~~

Hiveborne

~~~~~~

Momma said there's a heaven above where there is peace,
but until then, I'll keep my own piece in arm's reach


~~~~~~~~~~~​

She felt it before she saw it from any of her several point-of-views, a low mournful buzz in the back of her skull as it reached out to connect and started pulling on her senses with a desperate wailing desire to be found.

"Yes," she answered back, even if whatever it was couldn't physically hear her "I hear you. Just a moment, I'll dig you out and we'll get you cleaned up."

She called out over her connections to her Skulls even as she started to close in on where she could feel the pull coming from, converging them on the location with a comforting buzz of their anti-gravity systems filling the musty air even as she ordered them to start digging away at the pile of scrap. She cherished her Servo-Skulls, but better them then her when it came to this kind of job. There were plenty of horror stories about the kind of creatures that loved to burrow and nest in mounds just like this one.

Thankfully, that wasn't the case here. Letting the auspex readings filter into her thoughts, nothing stood out. No heartbeats, no heat signatures, no movements. Just the gentle pulse of a near-dead power cell that flared to life with relief and joy as her Servo-Skulls uncovered it after who-knows how long. Reaching down and plucking it from it's hole, she smiled wanly and ran a thumb over the Forge Mark that told of it's homeworld.

"Triplex Phall? You are a long way from where you are supposed to be. You have no business being down here in the Underhive." She said as she cradled it close.

The Lasgun was in poor condition. It looked like someone had taken a saw to the stock and snapped off the scope, before replacing the barrel with a custom one of low quality. She couldn't be sure, since most of it was a sagging mass of fused metal but it looked like some idiot had used the high-power settings with a stutter barrel and just threw it away when it had melted under the heat.

"Stupid. Someone spent a lot of money to get you here, and they went and wasted you. I know better though, and so does Chu. Triplex produces some of the best Lasguns around, so we'll get you fixed up and off to someone who knows what they are doing this time round. You'd like that, wouldn't you?"


The Machine Spirit trilled back to her in joy, and she smiled more fully when it did. It might have only been the effect of her powers, bolstering the Spirit and giving it more life and self, but it was better than most other interactions she'd get this far down in this strata of the Underhive. The Machines she bonded with loved her, and forced or not it was somewhat cute. She'd gotten better conversation from a door terminal then she had from a living person ever since the quake.

"Pack it up everyone, we're heading back!" She called out, her Servo-Skulls bobbing enthusiastically at the command as they kicked their propulsion into high before they started racing circles around her. As they did, she unrolled a bit of cord and did up a rudimentary strap to sling the lasgun to her back before she started heading back to her Hive Crawler, the little four-wheeled one-man still idling where she left it just a short jog away and stacked up with assorted containers and bags to hold all her salvage.

Taylor Hannette swung herself into the seat, and paused for a moment to adjust her robe and let the Skulls settle in before she gunned the engine and took off down the tunnels of Necromunda.


~~~​

I dig this.
Moar.
 
Morgan Le Fay is the name that first popped into my head. The vampire Carmilla. How classical are we talking here?

Whatever Annette might have had laying around really. It was just an idle thought I had when I realized how many "Woke Up as the Villainess" stories I'd been seeing lately and how all Isekai were based on in-universe stories rather than some real classic novel. It's not like there aren't thousands in the public domain after all.
 
Well, off the top of my head...

1. Irene Adler from Sherlock Holmes A Scandel in Bohemia: An opera singer who had a one time fling with the king of Bohemia and he's afraid she might use a photograph of them together to blackmail him, though she never intended to. Notable in that she's one of the only people who manage to outsmart Holmes in the original stories. Later adaptations tend to make her more villainous or put in some sort of dating catwoman thing with Holmes.

Considering she wasn't really a villain in her initial appearance and was just a woman who didn't want the king sending thugs after her, it's hard to tell how Taylor would react to such a setup if it happened post Golden Morning and all the other paranoid stuff she had to deal with. Or she could be familiar with the original story, but not familiar with the more recent adaptations where Irene is more villainous and gets irate about how she has to be stuck in this crummy knockoff of her favorite series.


Other ideas would be

2. The Wicked Witch of the West... which could easily be turned into a crossover with Wicked.

3. The Queen of Hearts from Alice in Wonderland. The Queen doesn't actually die in the story, but I can easily see Taylor getting tired of being in Wonderland for too long and just wants to get the heck out. Being Queen is okay, it's just the general insanity of being in Wonderland that gets to her.


Actually, most of the female villains I can think of consist of fairytale witches, queens, and stepmothers. So she could probably derail most of stories instantly.

Taylor: Mirror mirror on the wall, how do I get out of this dimension?

Magic Mirror: Um, don't you want to know who the fairest woman in the land is?

Taylor: Not really. Is it Snow White?

Magic Mirror: Actually, yes it is.

Taylor: That's okay, as long as I'm in the top ten I'd consider a big improvement on what I was before.

Magic Mirror: Who are you and what have you done with the Evil Queen?!
I've seen a lot of Isekai stories lately with the premise of a woman being reborn into a villainous character from a story she's read. So here's a question - given that Annette Hebert was a Professor of English Literature and thus Taylor has a firm grounding in classic literature, what classical female villains that Taylor is intimately familiar with could she be reborn into?
I actually had two versions of a story where Taylor basically goes full Maleficent; the first where it's because when she was a kid she encountered some fae while at the park with mom, and got their attention. Yadda yadda yadda, years later she ends up getting dragged into the fae-lands, taught magic, and then escapes, while greatly changed.

The other version had her get pulled into another world when she died (either by failing to get the Shielded during the Leviathan battle, or post-GM, couldn't decide) and then wake up on the other side, learn magic, go on adventures, and eventually return to throw things out of whack, pick up Lisa, and then go back to adventuring.

I may revisit that latter idea.
 
Hello everyone! I just got a interesting idea i felt nobody else has thinked about it!



Is about a Darker and Grimmer WORM:



In the years 1998 the "super hero" Scion was killed by the triumvirate; after the death of the "hero of humanity" the laws against Parahumans get even worse,going so far as giving a "new trigger" who don't join the goberment sended to prisions with inhuman sentences or the birdcage for misgivings , and in order to destroy any chance of second gen Triggers the families are send to the prisions with them, soon, at the Year 2005 the numbers of Immates of the Birdcage is over 20000, a third of them are children, and a half of them, had born in prision.



In the Year 2007, Taylor hebert and Emma barnes became immersed in a fight between the government "Hero" Alectro (OC) and the "villain" Chariot (he just broke a window by accident) when The "Hero" kills "accidentally" 20 people, Taylor, seeing one of the "hero" Lighting going to Emma push her away and Triggers with a Powerfull Trump/Breaker ability(the ability to copy the powers of Parahumans and transform then into Breaker/Changer powers), in the confusion, Chariot manage to run away and Taylor is punished for "murders" and the escape, and became the inmate 10569 of the Barahum Containment unit (the birdcage).



The story divides in 2 after that: the part of Taylor in the Birdcage (who would be a "civilization in the prision") who is taken by Gastling Uaine block (every "big" villain has a personal block where the Parahumans who they chose became their "citizens" and follow their "rules", a few examples I think a few would be would be:



  • Lustrum block (the amazon zone, principal rules: only womens, girls and Surgeon (Bonesaw would be taken to the BC before Jack had managed to conscript her) Transgender illuminated).
  • the Marquis block(I will put than both he and the BB brigade are the leaders here (Carol is not with them but the rest (including Vicky) decided than better evil know than tentative good Unknown ); name "the Brockton Zone; P.rules: no drugs or damage to children (this acts as "the nanny zone" for the recent birth ones), no rape and Zero racism)
  • the Rightfull Block (Carol and a few of the "we don't want to be with Villians) (P.rules: 0 villians or Villian friends)
  • the Dragon zone (I think this is obvious)(P.Rules: only Asians, woman serve mens)
  • the "Nazi" Zone (Allfather and Kaiser(Iron rain and Purity will escape from here to Lustrum zone)) also called "the ubermench zone" (P.rules: only "Aryan" lesser races are treated like slaves; no Gays or lesbians, you can't leave once here)
  • the Dinner (directed only by dragon, the ultimate neutral zone, where the things from outside are brough) (from here comes the Inmates)
  • and the Fairy garden (only the persons chosen by the Fairy Queen )the safest and Luxiorious zone, here comes all the Trumps Thinkers and Tinkers, the resistance zone and Taylor "home" (P.rules: you have to talk with your "Fairy" (one of the trumps there allow the shard and the person to talk and "grow" becoming more Human-like) once at day, you will follow cortesy rules and they will always treat the others as family (referring them as "brother, sister, aunt, uncle, father or mother).
Taylor here will accustom to the life in "hell" and after a few chapter, she will plan the escape and destruction of the Prision.



The second character (I fell it should be written In 2 perspectives) would be Emma Barnes who deals with the lost of her "sister" (and the implicit death of Taylor parents) and trigger with the power set of "Garou" of "one punch man", now with the help of a breaker vigilante (Sophia Hess) a rune-away Tinker (Madison clements) a pair of Child of Heartbreaker (Alec and Cherish) and a motor boat thinker, she will change the "hero" system by killing all the corruption and showing them the true monsters to the world.
 

Thank you. I'll put up some more when I'm happy with a few more details. I have a few rough thoughts on plot and where I want to take it that I'm churning through. This WAS going to start as an Escher Taylor fic, but it didn't feel right.

For the compliment, I'll give you a teaser of sorts. Taylor Hannette (40k Taylor Hebert) both is and isn't a Parahuman. She's a rare kind of human mutation that has had her abilities enhanced by Parahuman power. I HIGHLY doubt anyone will know what kind of Mutant she is, since it is a fairly obscure kind that only appears in the 40k Roleplaying System material.
 
Hello everyone! I just got a interesting idea i felt nobody else has thinked about it!



Is about a Darker and Grimmer WORM:



In the years 1998 the "super hero" Scion was killed by the triumvirate; after the death of the "hero of humanity" the laws against Parahumans get even worse,going so far as giving a "new trigger" who don't join the goberment sended to prisions with inhuman sentences or the birdcage for misgivings , and in order to destroy any chance of second gen Triggers the families are send to the prisions with them, soon, at the Year 2005 the numbers of Immates of the Birdcage is over 20000, a third of them are children, and a half of them, had born in prision.



In the Year 2007, Taylor hebert and Emma barnes became immersed in a fight between the government "Hero" Alectro (OC) and the "villain" Chariot (he just broke a window by accident) when The "Hero" kills "accidentally" 20 people, Taylor, seeing one of the "hero" Lighting going to Emma push her away and Triggers with a Powerfull Trump/Breaker ability(the ability to copy the powers of Parahumans and transform then into Breaker/Changer powers), in the confusion, Chariot manage to run away and Taylor is punished for "murders" and the escape, and became the inmate 10569 of the Barahum Containment unit (the birdcage).



The story divides in 2 after that: the part of Taylor in the Birdcage (who would be a "civilization in the prision") who is taken by Gastling Uaine block (every "big" villain has a personal block where the Parahumans who they chose became their "citizens" and follow their "rules", a few examples I think a few would be would be:



  • Lustrum block (the amazon zone, principal rules: only womens, girls and Surgeon (Bonesaw would be taken to the BC before Jack had managed to conscript her) Transgender illuminated).
  • the Marquis block(I will put than both he and the BB brigade are the leaders here (Carol is not with them but the rest (including Vicky) decided than better evil know than tentative good Unknown ); name "the Brockton Zone; P.rules: no drugs or damage to children (this acts as "the nanny zone" for the recent birth ones), no rape and Zero racism)
  • the Rightfull Block (Carol and a few of the "we don't want to be with Villians) (P.rules: 0 villians or Villian friends)
  • the Dragon zone (I think this is obvious)(P.Rules: only Asians, woman serve mens)
  • the "Nazi" Zone (Allfather and Kaiser(Iron rain and Purity will escape from here to Lustrum zone)) also called "the ubermench zone" (P.rules: only "Aryan" lesser races are treated like slaves; no Gays or lesbians, you can't leave once here)
  • the Dinner (directed only by dragon, the ultimate neutral zone, where the things from outside are brough) (from here comes the Inmates)
  • and the Fairy garden (only the persons chosen by the Fairy Queen )the safest and Luxiorious zone, here comes all the Trumps Thinkers and Tinkers, the resistance zone and Taylor "home" (P.rules: you have to talk with your "Fairy" (one of the trumps there allow the shard and the person to talk and "grow" becoming more Human-like) once at day, you will follow cortesy rules and they will always treat the others as family (referring them as "brother, sister, aunt, uncle, father or mother).
Taylor here will accustom to the life in "hell" and after a few chapter, she will plan the escape and destruction of the Prision.



The second character (I fell it should be written In 2 perspectives) would be Emma Barnes who deals with the lost of her "sister" (and the implicit death of Taylor parents) and trigger with the power set of "Garou" of "one punch man", now with the help of a breaker vigilante (Sophia Hess) a rune-away Tinker (Madison clements) a pair of Child of Heartbreaker (Alec and Cherish) and a motor boat thinker, she will change the "hero" system by killing all the corruption and showing them the true monsters to the world.
I'm not sure that counts as darker, or grimmer.
Sounds potentially interesting though.
 
Thank you. I'll put up some more when I'm happy with a few more details. I have a few rough thoughts on plot and where I want to take it that I'm churning through. This WAS going to start as an Escher Taylor fic, but it didn't feel right.

For the compliment, I'll give you a teaser of sorts. Taylor Hannette (40k Taylor Hebert) both is and isn't a Parahuman. She's a rare kind of human mutation that has had her abilities enhanced by Parahuman power. I HIGHLY doubt anyone will know what kind of Mutant she is, since it is a fairly obscure kind that only appears in the 40k Roleplaying System material.

Technopath?
 

It does manifest as a form of Technopathy, though Taylor's version of it is as I said rather pumped on Shard Power making it much more.

Since I don't like leading people on, I'll admit that it is an INCREDIBLY rare mutation known as a Discordant. Discordants are, normally, the equivalent to Blanks but against Technology. A powerful Discordant can outright kill the Machine Spirits of just about anything. Entire Manufactorums have been shutdown because of them. The really powerful ones are especially dangerous to the Mechanicus. A Mechanicus Assassin went after a Discordant once, and just exploded when they got too close to the Discordant.
 
I'm not sure that counts as darker, or grimmer.
Sounds potentially interesting though.
I think it counts as Both, after all, here almost all "heroes" are Bully cops who don't care about the true heroes are In the birdcage, where they have to join a block leaded by a villain (or a really stiff Carol Dallon) to survive.



By the way: PRT RATINGS! (this ones are the "public" ones)



Taylor aka Thunderbird (her first breaker state give her the form of this mythological beast):



Brute 1: will absorb the first hit of a parahuman, only one time for every parahuman.

Breaker/Changer Variable: will gains different Breaker/changer powers by trump effect.

Trump 10: gains diferent powers by absorbing powers effects of other parahumans. Give her form based on mythological figures



Breakers states by the start of the story:

Alectro; [The thunderbird]: absorbs electricity in a 5 miles radius and transform into a thunder bird (brute 4, striker 3 and blaster 4)

Victor [The doppelganger]: transform into a "blank like" person (imagine a mannequin in pure white) until it touches someone, then it became a perfect copy of the person (with all skills memories and powers) if reversed still possess the knowledge, but lose the powers (striker 3 trump 6)

Oni lee [The shadow man]: Transform into an amorphous shadow, it can duplicate and teleport between shadows (mover 9 shaker 3)

Tattletale [The sphinx] became a wingless Sphinx, gains insight of weakness thoughts and knowledge of a person, only can talk in riddles (thinker 9)

Marquette "Amelia Lavere "(here she was not Adopted, she stills is in love with Vicky though, but in a saner way; Vicky already rejected her) [The Frankenstain monster]: allow to morphs the body of Taylor in anyway she decide, the change still are after she deactivate the power.

Lumminous "victoria Dallon" (here she triggers with Tinker powers after a lot of pressure thanks to her mother); [The Aphrodite]: up to this day, we are not sure how the Tinker Luminous (speciality Light manipulation) became this power, but is a master 9 who makes any male or Female who see her (even by picture or memory) became Aroused and she can control them with words.



And Emma's one:



The beast:



A powerfull killer/supervillian

Brute 10: she manage to break down steel walls and anti tank bullets ricochet from her body; she has show than she can absorb kinetic energy and transform it into a Blue energy who enhance her attacks.

Tinker 2: she create her own equipment (Speciality: hunting weapons)

Mover 8: supersonic speed.

Thinker 5: battle precog.
 
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