I do hope this story updates at some point, wherever it ends up being; it's quite enjoyable.
I haven't read all the non-story posts in this thread so forgive me if this was already asked, which it probably was:
Why is Taylor's gem on her head and not her stomach like for Rose and Steven?
Also, I'd have thought Amethyst would appear before Bismuth. If Lapis is coming too, then she'd presumably come third instead- it's mainly Bismuth's position in appearance that doesn't seem to track with the superluminal mass rankings. Garnet gets a pass for me because I can see Ruby and Sapphire holding on to each other even through space-time and reality, because of the power of love.