When Heroes Die

They had to revive her because the role in the story she'd slotted herself into required it because she couldn't do it as an undead and had them reviving her as part of it.
Why? You don't need to be alive to pull a sword, you don't need to be alive to win.

If she needed to be alive because the last sword puller was alive, than again, by that logic every angel story will cough revival, can't do handstand while being dead after all.

The connection is extremely weak.
William also isn't a good standard to use for that because he'd been mindraped by Contrition and that was him basically giving up and using his last resort since he knew he'd lose otherwise and it would kill him as the cost.
William wasn't an idiot, I assume he thought it would work, because otherwise he would presumably not self sacrifice in pointless spite, and instead do what the exiled prince did and grind XP abroad.

With Triumph it is very much feasible to grow string enough to beat the calamities.
. I would also point out he'd already tried that cause while Cat was off at the war school he was off training in a place Arcadia iirc that had a different timeflow so he got several times more time than Cat did and she'd done the thing where she etched the defeat into his Name and pushed him onto the path she wanted at their first meeting
And if he couldn't win, he should have continued doing it until he could win.

Again, I assume he isn't an idiot, and isn't going to sacrifice Liesse put of spite, that he wasn't excited to kill countless people for nothing.

He definitely thought it could work.
If that's not the Saint of Swords I will cry from the missed opportunity and irony.
She already said they should clean the rot in their own country.
 
Taylor want absolute power over Procer, she want to get this power peacefully and with cooperation from the government.

I think this is contradicted by Taylor herself. If not when you posted it then definitely in the chapter we just got.

Or she is lying to herself, which I DO think is more likely.

Basically the problem is that Hasenbach should in theory be the good Procrean prince as the leader of the good Lycanonese but due to her lacking physical abilities and in order to be accepted as first prince she had to stain herself with the southern scumbag shenanigans and stupid scheming

Ok, true. The rest of your post disects canon though, so I'm not sure what the actual problem is. That she's trapped in a story despite not having a name?

The answer to today's problems remains the same as it was back in the days long past. We should unite. Work together to push back the darkness."

The problem is that the darkness isn't. It's chaos, heroes and villians both. There's nothing to unite *against*, and so demand for unity are just demands to centralize power. If there was a thing that could be fought and defeated then unity is the correct call, but if it's just chaos and unrest then localization and resiliency is how you deal with it; centralization makes for too many blind spots.

I have no interest in accruing power save for the sake of helping others. I do not wish to rule, nor do I have any taste for war. There is no chance of me threatening another Liturgical war because one would be anathema to my own interests. You need not fear that I will politic

This is, I think, where she's lying to herself. And even if she isn't, every person listening to her is definitely reading this as a lie. Both because they are procerian, and because it contradicts her history.

She has no taste for war? Goethe would disagree, she marched with an army against his father.

She does not wish to rule? She's telling them that she already had the authority to kill princes and it's trying to get them to formalize it, along with giving her an army. Plus the way she has restructured the House of Light is most definitely ruling it- the plans, advisors, budgets, etc- all were unnecessary if she didn't want control over how everything worked. The princes will naturally expect her to do similar things elsewhere with any authority she gains. Just like they would.

The liturgical war bit is apparently true because she just established her power base and wouldn't want to see it weakened, but demanding the right to kill princes is sorry of assuming one already happened and she won it. So there's the implication that she will fight one for the end result of that's what is needed to get it.

The last bit though? She IS politicing right now as she says they won't need to fear it.

So I think this speech is great, because it lays out what Taylor thinks she is doing and why, in a manner that makes it clear why no one should believe her. She is speaking her truth, for sure. She's just not understanding how it looks to an audience that knows she's Compassion, not Veracity.

If you wish for the opportunity to hold the Chosen and the Damned to account, then the law needs to hold in both directions."

Trick here seems to be that, like the named, the princes also are de facto above the law. Recognizing the named as formally above the law because of power sort of implies that the princes should also be made above the law due to power. After all, it is already de facto true in both cases.
 
think this is contradicted by Taylor herself. If not when you posted it then definitely in the chapter we just got.

Or she is lying to herself, which I DO think is more likely.
Her words are
There are many reasons. I have no interest in accruing power save for the sake of helping others. I do not wish to rule, nor do I have any taste for war.
And this follow what I stated, Taylor isn't interested in power for the sake of power, ruling or war, but she does want absolute power for the sake of others.

The princes outright called her out that her petition make her functionally queen.
She has no taste for war? Goethe would disagree, she marched with an army against his father.
And she made his father army lay down their weapons.
She's telling them that she already had the authority to kill princes
She is telling them she has the power to do and that they can do nothing about it, she is just being polite about it.
The princes will naturally expect her to do similar things elsewhere with any authority she gains. Just like they would.
There I agree, Taylor is sending signal that she isn't going to let them run themselves, to be honest, they are right too, I suspect many of them would die if she got authority over them.
The last bit though? She IS politicing right now as she says they won't need to fear it.
Not really, Taylor is very transparent in her intentions, she outright stated she want the power to execute them if she found that they did wrong and she want an army to fight villains.

The only reason they have to say yes just crashed through the door.
Trick here seems to be that, like the named, the princes also are de facto above the law. Recognizing the named as formally above the law because of power sort of implies that the princes should also be made above the law due to power. After all, it is already de facto true in both cases.
For one, if a hero raped someone, Taylor going to kill them herself, when she says different rules for heroes, she doesn't mean there are no rules for heroes.
 
So, Taylor successfully shored up her position inside the HoL.

The public record of votes was brilliant... but I bet it's also responsible for how spirited the questioning is. Anyone voting against her needs to have solid PR 'reasons' for doing so to keep their religious peasantry calm.

I do like the difference between written/spoken law and custom... and the cold hard reality of actual law-as-implemented and custom-in-action.
 
Why? You don't need to be alive to pull a sword, you don't need to be alive to win.

You do need to be alive to rule a Good kingdom. Kingdoms rules by undead are Evil, so good had the choice of trying to deny her rulership, or losing the entire country at a stroke, or resurrecting her. They took the least bad option.

Not really, Taylor is very transparent in her intentions, she outright stated she want the power to execute them if she found that they did wrong and she want an army to fight villains.

Being clear in your intentions does not make it not politics. She's definitely doing politics here: attempting to change spheres of authority and acquire more power for future conflicts by reducing theirs.

when she says different rules for heroes, she doesn't mean there are no rules for heroes.

Functionally it kinda does. If those rules are just what Taylor says, updated in real time, then it's more a question of if she likes the named than what rules they broke. No one will be able to call her out for using different rules for different people because no one else has the authority to second guess her.


The system she is trying to set up reminds me of the old joke about 'if men were angels, no government would be needed. If angels were the government, no democracy would be needed." It's dependent on her being alive and making good decisions, and that is fragile.
 
You do need to be alive to rule a Good kingdom. Kingdoms rules by undead are Evil, so good had the choice of trying to deny her rulership, or losing the entire country at a stroke, or resurrecting her. They took the least bad option.
They didn't, she revived herself by using take.

Their best option was ignoring her, and letting the sword summon them, if they had a choice.

She pulled it out because she fit the story if pulling it, and she was revived because she got Take, the story may have helped her along with Take, since she took the sword, but she also wanted to come back from the dead and aspects are adjusted to your needs.
Functionally it kinda does. If those rules are just what Taylor says, updated in real time, then it's more a question of if she likes the named than what rules they broke. No one will be able to call her out for using different rules for different people because no one else has the authority to second guess her.
She talked about named council, I suspect she will set rules, it wouldn't be change in real time.
 
Ok, true. The rest of your post disects canon though, so I'm not sure what the actual problem is. That she's trapped in a story despite not having a name?

She does not wish to rule? She's telling them that she already had the authority to kill princes and it's trying to get them to formalize it, along with giving her an army. Plus the way she has restructured the House of Light is most definitely ruling it- the plans, advisors, budgets, etc- all were unnecessary if she didn't want control over how everything worked. The princes will naturally expect her to do similar things elsewhere with any authority she gains. Just like they would.

The rest of my post laid out the typical Procrean Prince traits and examples showing how they apply to Hasenbach and lead to bad things. Even if some of those examples haven't and won't happen the traits are still in play as they are core parts of her character and she already had some like her view on Heroes because of how they are already formed from her resentment things that have already occurred like Laurence having killed the prince and going unpunished for it.

What Taylor was telling them was that Named were practically speaking already above the law such as the examples of them killing princes and getting away with it and that if they wanted Named to self regulate and not do such things they had to provide a non lethal way to remove them in return or it wouldn't be accepted.

You do need to be alive to rule a Good kingdom. Kingdoms rules by undead are Evil, so good had the choice of trying to deny her rulership, or losing the entire country at a stroke, or resurrecting her. They took the least bad option.

Not just the Good kingdom most of them have rules and laws preventing undead from ruling including Preas due to previous Dread Emperor shenanigans they have that and for a lot of stuff like blocking the one that turned themself into a giant spider or the various forms of sapient animals. In canon Cat's legal status actually really confused the lawyers of Procer when they worked with her cause of the whole died, saw through the story loss so had undead conversion ready, got resurrected, apotheosised, returned to mortality and then became unaging as first under the night thing.
 
In canon Cat's legal status actually really confused the lawyers of Procer when they worked with her cause of the whole died, saw through the story loss so had undead conversion ready, got resurrected, apotheosised, returned to mortality and then became unaging as first under the night thing.
Obviously a sign their legal system need improvement, do they have a law regarding the possibility of the princes voting a man eating tepid to the role of first prince? Or one becoming the heir of another prince?
 
Obviously a sign their legal system need improvement, do they have a law regarding the possibility of the princes voting a man eating tepid to the role of first prince? Or one becoming the heir of another prince?

Unlikely given their corruption the cannibalism wouldn't be an issue especially since it would probably be unknown and the lack of enthusiasm makes it unlikely they'd gather the votes but could be someone's puppet or some other fluke could allow it /jk.

Assuming you meant tapir or tiger then no because to be a valid first prince candidate you have to be a prince and of course then win the vote so they'd get blocked at the marrying in stage. Cat's problems were Procer's harsh rules and laws regarding undead such as stuff like legally not being allowed to own property iirc and they couldn't work out if under them she counted as undead.
 
Doesn't the tapir need to be A prince before they can become the first prince? A quick edit to marriage law should preclude that...

The rest of my post laid out the typical Procrean Prince traits and examples showing how they apply to Hasenbach and lead to bad things.

Ok, but I'm still not sure what the problem is. That she exists and has power, which will lead to bad things and so needs to be dealt with before it does?

Or just that she's not an angelic roller, but a human one?
 
Ok, but I'm still not sure what the problem is. That she exists and has power, which will lead to bad things and so needs to be dealt with before it does?

Or just that she's not an angelic roller, but a human one?

That she has negative qualities which are going to cause problems in the future because she basically wants the church reduced in power and along with Heroes firmly under her control despite not knowing anything about namelore which is why she wanted the Crusade not understanding it being a sham would prevent the Heroes Crusade buffs, actually weaken them from preventing them from taking Heroic roles in stories by default and unleash Big Evils to serve as the Crusade's Big Evil opponent.

She's also going to butt heads with Taylor because of how she has Procer as her top priority and is more than willing to screw over and invade other countries because the best thing for them is to be under Procrean (her) rule while also conveniently dealing with her issues of the strength of her political opponents and the Fantassins. These are my points which I am saying because you sought clarification on why Hasenbach getting what she wants is a loss for Taylor and vice versa and what the stakes are.

Heck her political situation is actually kind of worse than in canon because there she had the legitimacy of having won it the way considered proper which meant she had more supporters such as the Prince of Brus who was her biggest supporter who won others over to her side, actually goes on to become Named (The Kingfisher Prince iirc) and Constance's scar disrupted things.
 
Concord 5.0i
"I find that High Lords share much in common with signal fires, Chancellor. You only need to set so many of them alight before somebody correctly interprets the message."
―Dread Emperor Foul III, "the Linguist"


"The assembly recognizes the Chosen, Taylor Hebert," the Master of Orders announced in a thick, Lycaonese accent.

The white-haired Master was one of her own Rhenians, one with a talent for languages she'd put into place soon after she'd ascended the throne. In this battlefield of courtesies and ceremonies, there were few advantages more precious than an arbiter of ceremonies entirely loyal to her.

Cordelia Hasenbach considered the Chosen before her while she appraised the room.

The Aspirant's revelations into the deeper workings of the House of Light was a boon that Cordelia had not expected, but was eager to capitalize upon. The House of Light had ever been a thorn in the foot of every First Prince from as far back as the founding of the Principate. Cordelia would strive her utmost to see the institution have the last of its claws pulled out.

She would allow the proposal acknowledging Taylor as the leader of the House of Light to pass out of strategic necessity. Refusing the petition would weaken her position among her peers by denying them an opportunity to seize lands from the church, while seeing it through damaged the foundation of Taylor's argument for further authority. Once the leader of the House of Light existed as a legal entity within the laws of Procer, the position would come with certain expectations that Taylor could not hope to fulfil.

Some dispossessed fantassins could be provided with incentives to relocate onto lands owned by the House of Light. They were sure to bring about strife now that they were bereft of purpose. Taylor was ill-equipped to manage the disruption that they would cause. It would not take much to convince the other princes to keep their hands to themselves. Patrols could be relocated in lands belonging to the Church, security could be made more lax.

The House of Light would request assistance once the fantassins turned to banditry. Assistance that would then be denied. A sufficient rise in tensions within church lands would pressure smaller church holdings into seceding from the House of Light at large. They would deem it safer to renounce the rights to their own lands in exchange for protection, then allow their lands to become ungovernable.

The House of Light did not have the ability to safeguard their own lands without the right of recruitment. That alone would provide sufficient incentive for every other motion to be denied by the Highest Assembly, even ignoring all other considerations.

Another leader of the House of Light might go so far as to threaten a Liturgic war in response to such an obvious retaliation, but doing as much ran against the grain of both Taylor's plans and her nature. Without both the means and the will to enforce her authority, Taylor's foundation of power was nothing more than a castle of sand built before the oncoming tide.

Attempting to claim more privileges for herself so soon after being legitimized would be seen as a grave overreach of power by everyone else within the Chamber of Assembly. It would be the work of years to further reduce the influence of the House of Light, but Cordelia was confident that she could slowly whittle it away.

And while the matter of the House of Light was a problem of some import, it was not the sole contender for Cordelia's attention.

Cordelia had already discussed her ideas for Callow with Louis de Sartrons, and the first seeds of rebellion were ready to be sown. Insurgents within their eastern neighbour would be provided with both Proceran intelligence into the operational procedures of the Revolutionary in addition to some ancillary assistance towards their goals. It would be some time before those plans bore fruit, but she had assured she would see proof of her investment before the following winter.

Spring was almost upon them, and yet the northern borders remained silent. The Chain of Hunger could be expected to remain still for the next five years — if Taylor was to be believed — and yet that did little to explain the uncharacteristic stillness from Keter.

It felt like the calm before the storm.

News from Mercantis made Cordelia's hackles rise. The Ravel Bank had materialized out of thin air and poured seemingly limitless coffers of coin onto the streets of the City of Bought and Sold. While it bore all the hallmarks of legitimate Mercantis coinage, something about its origin struck Cordelia as off. Declaring Mercantis currency illegitimate was fraught with many risks, but she suspected that failing to do so might have long term economic repercussions for the Principate when the house of cards toppled over at long last.

The dwarves had continued to provide material assistance as per her existing agreements with them after the end of the war, however her spies had informed her that there was an undercurrent of trouble brewing below the surface. Cordelia did her best to put that complication out of her mind, for any trouble involving the dwarves extended far beyond her ability to contain.

It was the Arlesite principalities that would prove to be the biggest obstacle to her long term ambitions. The potential wealth to be gained by repossessing House of Light holdings would only occupy their attention for so long before their ambitions returned to the throne. Cordelia had considered using their southern neighbours as a distraction for the Arlesites, only the borders with the Dominion of Levant were quiet for the first time in years. The attention of the nation had turned inward shortly before Cordelia seized the throne.

"By ancient oath, let every word I speak ring true," the brunette declared.

Let us see how much you have learned.


Laurence de Montford sat atop a mount as weary as she was. The beast of burden trotted along the open road with no set destination in sight. The currents of fate would see her to her destination. Post coronation celebrations continued unabated even into the late noon of a new day. Her time drew close, she could feel it in her bones.

Her strength had continued to wane.

Soon, the world whispered to her. Soon, the thread of her story would be cut loose.

Taylor had confided the broader shape of her vision to Laurence. A world where both Named and the Princes were truly held to account. Where heroes could not weasel and connive like Proceran royalty and villains had no place at all.

It was a pretty dream, but one that could not be forged without large swaths of the old order fuelling the fire first. So Laurence had embarked on a journey from one principality to another before returning to Salia. She had learned what she could about each prince from their people in the time she spent on the road.

Some principalities she had no need to cast a shadow over.

Those she was already familiar with the leaders of. Should the worst come to pass — as Laurence expected it would — then the Lycaonese rulers could all be spared the kiss of her blade. Her brief visit in Aisne had left her with a positive impression of Princess Clotilde as well.

The further south she had travelled, the more assured of the path she had chosen she became.

Laurence did not know where she needed to be, but she knew that it lay somewhere close. She could almost feel the shape of the story.

The jubilant crowd parted around her like a head from a corpse.

It was the heavy smell of a brewery that alerted her to the arrival of the Wandering Bard. Laurence's focus narrowed, honed itself in to a point. Her friend only ever appeared when the hour was darkest.

"Going somewhere, old friend?" A voice called out from beside her.

"One last swing, then it's time to bury the hatchet," Laurence replied.

Her wrinkled hands tightened on the reins. Her dappled mount slowed.

Dark blonde hair, narrow face and clothes of a like that Laurence had never seen before were dismissed as quickly as they were noted. It was the familiar flask and lute which marked her friend for who she was.

"It's been tried a few times, you know."

The Wandering Bard matched her pace to that of Laurence's horse. They both cut their way through the celebrations — ignored — as if both of them were no more than ghosts.

"What has?"

The Wandering Bard was her senior in namelore. Every word she spoke could be mined for nuggets of wisdom. Her advice would be invaluable when navigating the chaos in the years to come.

"Reforming both the Principate and the Highest Assembly through diplomacy. Princess Eliza Alaguer was one of the last to give it a good go. She appealed to the common folk first. Tried to build popular support. When that failed, she appealed to the House of Light, before finally turning to the nobility. Many of the books that she wrote still exist in some form or another today."

"How did her life end?"

The Bard broke off from their jaunt and headed towards a palace in the distance. Laurence trailed behind.

"Her attempt at reforming the Highest Assembly failed. What little support that she had vanished. Then her own family turned on her. She had made their position among the Salamans nobility tenuous. They told her to abdicate. She refused, and they imprisoned her in her own quarters. She starved to death in defiance of their will rather than abdicate in favour of somebody else."

"And what of reform at the edge of a blade?"

"An Angel of Contrition touched three hundred thousand people in Salia at the start of the seventh crusade, including the Highest Assembly at the time."

That the nature of the Principate had not changed in the aftermath need not be mentioned at all. It was much as Laurence had thought. Regardless, she would not hesitate to cut. For it was only when Good surrendered its will to fight that Evil would truly win. Good would try, and try, and try again and one day their efforts would bear fruit.

"Have you met Taylor? Are you aware of the new stories she gave birth to?"

The Bard halted, raised a hand and tilted the lute from side to side, before taking a pull with the other.

"It's hard to judge. There might be some room to manoeuvre given the mess she made, but it remains to be seen how it will all pan out. I have some hope for the future, though."

"Then my plans remain unchanged." Laurence turned her eyes away from the Bard, onto the palace ahead.

"Farewell, old friend."

Laurence felt the presence beside her vanish.

She pulled the reins, urging her horse into motion once more. It trotted up to the palace gates. The guards took one look at her and stiffened. It took a brief interrogation to learn that the palace she was outside contained the Chamber of Assembly, then a few more gentle threats to have them open the gates.

The horse trotted its way onto the palace grounds and along busy corridors.

"Why shouldn't those with a Name follow different rules… Wizards can't… Why should the Chosen be…"

Words whispered on the wind from some place far off, deeper within the palace. Laurence listened intently to their echoes. Taylor was speaking before the Highest Assembly. Arguing for the right of the Chosen to judge the princes. As if they needed the justification of petty men and women with tainted aspirations when they had the approval of the Gods.

"The law often fails the people…"

Cordelia Hasenbach replied. Laurence sneered. She had shown so much promise at first, taking the southern princes to task and starting to purge the poison in the Principate. Only when it came time to make the hard decisions, her hand pulled away from the axe.

The ancient oak door to the Chamber of Assembly loomed ahead.

"I already have that power. If the Saint of Swords was to ride thr-"

She drew her blade and sliced into the air before her.

The door shattered into thousands of splinters.

Laurence de Montford rode into a Chamber of Assembly that was utterly silent. Cordelia Hasenbach sat on a plain block of granite. Laurence presumed that the deceptive simplicity of it was supposed to contain some trite message, however any deeper meaning was wasted on these scheming eels. Klaus Papenheim was absent. The old war dog had left another hand to vote in his stead.

Laurence towered over everyone, seated as she was on her mount.

It took her less time than it took to draw steel to realize that she had arrived in the Chamber of Assembly too soon. The stage had not yet been set, the story was not yet in swing. Should she withdraw? No, all of Taylor's plans would unravel if she stepped out of the room. The only way forward was through the monster's guts. She would carry out the task she had chosen for herself and hope that she cut hard deep enough to bleed the monster out.

"Good afternoon, Your Highness, Princes and Princess of Procer." Laurence called out. "The only laws that should concern us are the laws laid down by the Gods." Laurence held her blade by her side, not bothering to sheathe it at all. "The Aspirant was Chosen by them. None of you back biting rats can make the same claim. It's your scheming that turned this land so diseased."

"Bravo, bravo. Encore! Encore!" Prince Arnaud clapped.

"Shut your mouth," she snapped at him. "Your people had plenty to say about you, Prince Arnaud. Your throat will be the first that I slit should this come to blows."

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia," the white haired man spoke as Cordelia Hasenbach rose to her feet.

"This is," she declared, her voice hard, "the Chamber of Assembly. It is the seat of power of the most powerful surface nation on Calernia, not a city square where one can wander about and bluster as one pleases."

Cordelia Hasenbach remained standing — but glared at her — as if she believed that a nasty stare was enough to see Laurence cowed. The kid had courage and the vision to see some good done, but was allowing herself to become complacent now that she had seized the throne.

"There is no place barred from those bearing the favour of the Gods," Laurence retorted. "Not the Kingdom of the Dead, not the lands of Praes, certainly not a musty old chamber filled with snivelling snakes."

"If you wish to petition before the Highest Assembly, then you may do so after following the correct procedures."

"I'm not going anywhere," Laurence grinned at them all, "and neither are any of you until this vote is properly resolved. If Taylor here is the Angel hanging over your shoulder whispering to do the right thing, then think of me as the orc that will rip out your intestines and dine on your entrails should you be tempted to stray onto a darker path."

The Chamber held its breath for a moment. Many turned their gaze towards the shattered door — likely considering whether they could escape before she cut them down — but none dared to challenge her proclamation.

"You cannot govern a nation with swords. You cannot feed its people, build its cities, pave its roads, or man its walls with weapons and words alone. It takes ingenuity, artifice, and order to rule anything larger than a moderately sized hamlet. Years spent learning statecraft are required to have even a hope of managing a nation the size of Procer," Cordelia Hasenbach retorted.

Taylor stepped forward into the middle of the room.

"The assembly recognizes the Aspirant," the old man declared.

"It is fortunate then that I am not requesting the right to rule the Principate, only the right to mete out justice within it," Taylor challenged her. "All of you have received a draft of my proposal before this motion was brought forth. It lays out terms for when it is acceptable for a hero to judge a prince, but it also lays out terms for when it is not. The right of execution is only given for heinous crimes including — but not limited to — rape, torture, conjuring forth demons, and a few other specific acts as defined by existing laws."

"The Principate of Procer has existing systems by which appeals can be made to address all of these concerns."

"Systems that don't work because they're infected, sick to the core with the same disease that plagues every other part of this nation," Laurence replied.

"While all of those skills you detailed and many more are required to lead a nation, they do not grant the princes the right to treat the citizens of Procer as nothing more than cattle to be used."

"Should the citizens of the Principate find reason to oppose the governance of their princes then they are already able to give protest."

"The capacity to complain does not equate to the power to enact change."


Cordelia Hasenbach took her seat on the hard granite block once more.

She considered the two white robed heroines before her. It took effort to keep the distaste from her lips. She had thought for but a moment that the arrival of the Saint of Swords had been some scheme by the other chosen, however only a glance spared in the Aspirant's direction had shattered that illusion. She was as taken by surprise by Laurence de Montfort's arrival as everyone else in the Chamber of Assembly.

The untimely arrival of the Saint of Swords also did not bear any of the hallmarks of Taylor's approach to politics. While the Aspirant was ill-equipped to fight within these halls, she had shown a modicum of respect and abided by their traditions every step of the way.

Her uncle had called Laurence de Montfort a hard woman who always means well. It would be unlike her to draw her blade against the Highest Assembly without sufficient provocation, but her presence might convince the others to reconsider their votes.

Agnes would have warned me if death threatened these halls, unless something else has occupied her.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Brus," the Master of Orders declared.

"You claim to have no aspirations for war, and yet you marched alongside Princess Mathilda against the forces of Brus. You claim to have no thirst for power, and yet even now you claw at the authority of the Princes of Procer. Is this all there is to you? Are you nothing more than a nest of contradictions with pretensions of virtue?"

"None of my actions are contradictory," Taylor denied. "I stopped a war when both sides were prepared to give battle. Thousands of soldiers lived who would otherwise have perished. I'm also not asking for the right to make new laws or to overrule the Highest Assembly — except in specific extreme circumstances which are outlined in the written proposal — only for the right to render judgement."

"She's not asking for the right to render judgement," the Saint of Swords snapped from the back of her horse. "She already has that. The Gods gave that to their Chosen, and none of you little shits have the power to take it away from us. She's telling you to recognize both her place as judge and executioner and your own as the accused."

Taylor's expression was as open as a book to all here who could read it. She was not pleased with Laurence de Montfort, but did not speak against her for fear of weakening her own position.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia," the Master of Orders declared.

Cordelia Hasenbach rose to her feet once more.

"Upon appointing yourself leader of the Proceran House of Light, you took it upon yourself to restructure the internal hierarchy of the institution. You have delegated individuals to positions of leadership, determined the allocation of funds and taken it upon yourself to define internal House of Light policy. You claim that you have no intention of ruling, and yet your every action since returning from the north gives lie to those words."

She sat down again and waited for the Aspirant to respond.

"None of my proposals grant me the rights to govern any lands save those which already fell within the possession of the church." Taylor paused. Her too wide jaw stiffened, then she changed her approach. "There is currently no viable method for a Prince of the Principate to hold a hero or villain to account. I'm not asking you to put me in charge. You're more than welcome to pass a law declaring me ineligible to rule. I'm asking you to recognize my right to mete out justice."

Cordelia could have argued further, but doing as much would have been counter-productive to her own cause. Taylor had deflected from Cordelia's point, not challenged the body of it. She did not realize that none of those present would be fooled by the digression.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Neustria," the Master of Orders declared.

The woman's green mail rattled as she rose to her feet. She had never been one for courtly intrigue and had come to the Highest Assembly dressed for an altogether different kind of conflict.

"You did right by us in the swamp, girl. I'll acknowledge as much. You might even make for a good royal arbiter, but whose to say your successor would be? We wouldn't just be trusting you with this power, we'd be trusting every person who comes afterwards."

"My proposal lays out rules. Terms that me or my successor must abide by. Those include the selection process for appointing my eventual replacement. Their authority needs to be acknowledged by the others among the Chosen, and they require the blessing of the House of Light. The Highest Assembly has no say in the process as by allowing them oversight it perverts the purpose of the position."

"This does nothing to assuage any of our many concerns."

"All of you should feel nervous," Laurence de Montfort interjected. "The peasants in the fields don't have any assurances that you're protecting their interests. It's about time you felt the same. This change is supposed to feel like the Gods Above are breathing down your neck and reminding you to be good little nobles or die screaming."

"What a brilliant proposal," Prince Arnaud smiled as he blustered. "Why, how could we never have consi-"

"Shut up you worm, or you'll be a head shorter before the day is out," the Saint of Swords snarled from the back of her horse and levelled her blade at the man. "I can sense the darkness that lies at the heart of you."

"Why, how rude. See how she treats me when all I would do is throw in my weight behind her proposal?"

"It festers like an illness. How fortunate for you that I'm holding the cure."

"Threatening violence won't convince the princes that I'm right." Taylor stated.

Cordelia suspected that Taylor had come to the erroneous conclusion that her earlier decision to avoid addressing Laurence was incorrect. That if she played herself off as the reasonable party then it might help to strengthen her own argument. While setting herself up as the animal handler holding the lion's leash might in other circumstances grant her a measure of legitimacy, doing so in the Chamber of Assembly only made a mockery of their procedures.

Cordelia would curtail her involvement while Laurence's intervention continued to undercut Taylor's proposal. She doubted that there was any argument the Aspirant could present that would sway the minds of the other Princes to her cause regardless.

"Think, Taylor. This house is rotten to the bone and needs to be cleaned. If some of them die today because they can't give up scheming, back biting and betraying each other, so the rest of them can do their duty then the Principate is all the better for it."

Prince Arnaud did an admirable job at playing the part of the fool. With little effort he had redirected the Aspirant's attention from assuaging Mathilda's worries to arguing with her own ally.

"The assembly recognizes the Princess of Valencis," the Master of Orders interrupted their discussion with narrowed eyes and downturned lips.

"You presented the argument that heroes should sit above the law due to the circumstances of their choosing. By switching only a few words one could argue that thieves or murderers should be freed from the trappings of justice in turn. What sets heroes apart from any other ruffian? Why do their circumstances merit additional consideration?"

"The Gods appointed us you scheming rat," Laurence replied.

"I see no reason to consider the merits of a proposal that would allow one such as this to walk free."

"You're still prissy about that Prince of yours I cut down? If you want to lodge a complaint with the heavens, then I can send you to join him."

"There's no need to pour salt over an old wound, Laurence."

"It's better for all of them to understand where they stand in relation to us," Laurence retorted.

"When the laws fail, something needs to change," Taylor addressed the original concern. "Either the laws themselves or how they are enforced. Laws are not immutable and need to adapt to the society that they serve. Look around you," she spread her arms. "For twenty years you waged war upon one another and blood flowed like water, staining the soil of this land. How many times must this folly be repeated, how many more wars just like this one will it take for you to admit that the system you have does not work?"

"This is not a defence of your proposal, only a repudiation of our current system of governance. It is easy to set fire to another's fields, but much harder to grow crops of your own."

"The next time the Dead King marches his armies south, will you even be able to find it within yourselves to stand together against him? How long until the enmity between principalities is so strong that even the threat of extinction is not enough to bind your peoples together? Can this nation survive even another decade of conniving before it falls apart at the seams?"

"I repeat once more." Princess Leonor declared, "This is not a defence of your proposal, only a repudiation of our current system of governance."

"If you wish to prevent disasters such as this one from repeating, then a series of checks, balances, and incentives are required. The full scope of reforms necessary are beyond me, but I know this much. If they don't acknowledge the reality of the world we live in, then they will always fall short. You will never be able to regulate heroes without their implicit buy in."

Cordelia signalled her desire to speak. The Master of Orders gave her a subtle nod.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia."

"The First Prince of Procer has the resources of the most powerful nation on the surface of Calernia at their fingertips. It cannot be understated how much harm could be done if that power was wielded without any restrictions. You posit the idea that heroes already exist outside the laws of our nation. Why then, would you elevate them above the First Prince? What makes them fit to hold more power than the ruler of the Principate? Surely laws should be enacted to curtail their power, rather than grant them more."

"The Highest Assembly barely serves as an adequate check on the power of the First Prince. It does nothing to hold the rest of these rats accountable," the Saint of Swords stated.

"Laurence," Taylor chided looking up to the woman on the horse beside her. "There's no need for names or threatening violence."

"You're blinding yourself, Taylor," she spat onto the limestone floor. "The heads on these thrones have grown so bloated on their own wickedness that they aren't even willing to consider an idea that threatens their own power."

"Killing them won't solve the problem," Taylor replied, then returned her attention to the throne. "Neither the peasants nor the priests nor the wizards have the strength of arms required to challenge the security of the Princes of Procer. That capacity lies solely in the hands of the chosen and the damned. Nobody else would even give you reason to pause. Who else could even perform the duty?"

"The assembly recognizes the Princess of Aisne."

"Forgive me, Chosen," Princess Clotilde did her best to speak without trembling, but the tremors in her arms were plain for all to see, "but you have made many claims as to the necessity of passing this proposal but have failed to provide an adequate reason as to why we should vote for it."

"Many new heroes and villains will arise in the years to come. There is no telling how much harm their actions will cause if it isn't regulated."

"While I make no claims as to the veracity of that statement, I fail to see how your proposal mitigates any of the disasters that are alleged to come. Surely you do not suggest that heroes will cease to apprehend villains if this proposal fails to pass? Are you suggesting that you would stand aside in the face of actions you deem Evil without being given permission to judge us?"

"No, no, you don't understand the breadth of this proposal," Prince Arnaud called out once again. "Why, by declaring that Named conflict will be regulated the outcome is all but assured. Isn't that how all laws function?"

The Saint of Sword looked at the man, raised a finger and made a cutting motion across her own throat.

He grinned at her and waved merrily in reply.

"The fourth proposal I prepared for your consideration addresses implementation," the Aspirant replied.

"May I remind all speakers that the merits of the fourth petition made by the House of Light are not the current subject of debate," the Master of Orders declared.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia."

"The Principate has existed as a nation since the fall of Triumphant and in that time thousands of rulers have graced these halls. Less than a hundred of them have died at the hands of heroes and villains both. Historically heroes have proven a less effective form of deterrence than the existing methods for unseating rulers. Why then should they be granted the rights and privileges that you have petitioned for when there is no historical evidence to support your claims?"

"There can be no evidence to support the proposed alternative because it relies on a different series of systems which currently do not exist."

Cordelia Hasenbach listened with both ears as the proposed motion was dissected on the Chamber of Assembly's floor…


Agnes felt out of place as she moved around the bare garden within the palace walls. With only a handful of bare trees, a broken headless statue of a man that Cordelia insisted was First Prince Clothor Merovins, and two uncomfortable stone benches this garden was the closest she came to feeling at home.

She felt it, sitting down on the bench beside the statue, the moment that the music played wrong.

The broken child found their purpose in the north. A guardian of flames, the lighthouse keeper. They returned to warn of the oncoming storm, only another tried to contest their place. The conflict was brief. A new keeper is chosen. The flame was lit. Now, the storm approaches. The lighthouse shines bright in the darkness, but the ship has not yet sailed into port.

Dawn arrives and cuts through the clouds. Only it arrives too soon. A false dawn. The fire is extinguished. The keeper descends the stairs, their duty done, only the clouds roll in once more as the false dawn fades away.

The keeper sees their mistake and climbs the stairs once more, but time is short. The ship flounders at sea. It veers off course and will crash into the rocks without a beacon to guide it to the shore.


Another. Another tried their hand at threading the needle of time. A face with more faces than there were stars, whose presence could only be noticed through the ripples they cast on the pond.

It was a crack, a tear in the weave of the future. Blame would be apportioned should the ship sail into the rocks. The sailors would blame the keeper, but the keeper is not at fault. Time needs to be purchased for the flame to be lit once more. Only, how?

Agnes glanced at the cracks trailing across the courtyard and followed the small growths of grass sprouting between the tiles in defiance of winter's icy grasp, and glimpsed behind the curtain. Life in defiance of death, a path, a way forward. Even the darkest of storms could be navigated with the right captain.

But who to choose?

Agnes could not determine what it was that her unnamed partner sought to achieve, but she could discern the edges of the shadow that hovered over Cordelia. Should the Augur not intervene, then of those aboard the ship she was favoured for captaincy. It was not the future that the Auger had charted and yet… was it one that bore navigating away from?

It was difficult for Agnes to peer around the curtain that shrouded the stage. She looked and she looked. Deeper and deeper. Her eyes clouded over, and her breath became shallow from the toll it took. Careful, danger, some part of her whispered. And there, there! At the last moment, she caught but a glimpse of strings. The abyss beckoned. Agnes pulled back. Out, out, out of the maelstrom.

Her breath caught.

No, that was not a current that she could countenance. Her cousin, wrapped tight in strings, dancing to the tune of another. She had placed her trust in Cordelia, not in some unseen hands hidden above the stage.

Was there another path?

The dagger with no handle? Where an old path failed a blade could be used to carve a new one. Carve a passage through the reef. Her mother had said as much, at least. Hadn't she? Agnes shook her head. She needed to pay attention. She could not afford to become lost in the then, she needed to stay in the now. No, it would always cut both ways. The foe she duelled with could seize the blade and bleed an ocean without perishing from the cost. Besides, no matter how she positioned the blade, her hands would always be stained red when she decided to cut.

The lead wick candle? Where an old light dies another could be fanned anew? There lay possibility. The candle burned in many colours and brought smiles to even the dourest of faces. But no, it could not shine bright enough to guide the way to the shore. Its fumes were toxic besides, and only her foe could afford to inhale the smoke.

How about… Yes, that would work. The fool had yet to claim a place on the stage. The faceless puppet master could only pull strings where strings were attached. He had no strings. None yet, at the very least. The fool did not know how to captain the ship.

No matter.

There were many ways to save the ship, and the fool knew how to play the part.​
 
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And there, there! At the last moment, she caught but a glimpse of strings. The abyss beckoned. Agnes pulled back. Out, out, out of the maelstrom.

Her breath caught.

No, that was not a current that she could countenance. Her cousin, wrapped tight in strings, dancing to the tune of another. She had placed her trust in Cordelia, not in some unseen hands hidden above the stage.
Who might this puppeteer be, I want to say the new holder of Contessa, but don't know enough about APGTE to freely dismiss local forces.
 
It's the Bard. It's always the Bard.

Agnes just said that the Saint of Swords showed up too soon; which Lawrence herself recognized. This happened after the Bard pointed her in the right direction - it's entirely possible that, without the Bard interfering, Lawrence would have arrived at a different moment, later, and things would have unfolded in a different manner.
 
Some dispossessed fantassins could be provided with incentives to relocate onto lands owned by the House of Light. They were sure to bring about strife now that they were bereft of purpose. Taylor was ill-equipped to manage the disruption that they would cause. It would not take much to convince the other princes to keep their hands to themselves. Patrols could be relocated in lands belonging to the Church, security could be made more lax.

The House of Light would request assistance once the fantassins turned to banditry. Assistance that would then be denied.

Oh, my sweet summer child, you continue to fail to understand the nature of Taylor, the charisma of Taylor, the determination of Taylor, and the capabilities of Taylor. You would do little but give her an unrecognized army and at the same time enshrine that she, not the Princes, is the true protector of the peasantry.

Also, while she will not start a Liturgical war, she's absolutely willing to deal with the Princes as many times as becomes necessary.

Lawrence is a warning; she just showed that the Named can indeedndo as they wish even within these chambers. Take it as a warning; work with Taylor and abandon the attempt to undercut her or face your inevitable doom.
 
Concord 5.14
A/N: Sorry about the delay in posting. There was an extended power outage (for over 12h) that completely wrecked my schedule for everything yesterday.


"The Proceran take on negotiations is to kill one of your own citizens, slam their mangled body on the negotiating table, then demand that your interlocutor pays you reparations."
— Prokopia Lekapene, first and only Hierarch of the Free Cities


If you hadn't challenged Laurence's presence here, then maybe the other princes would be less confident and wouldn't have risked speaking out against her. At least a quarter of the blame falls on you if Laurence decides to strike. Convincing the Highest Assembly to vote with me was hard enough before I had this added pressure. Before I could have lived with failure, now none of us can afford it at all.

"The assembly recognizes the Princess of Valencis," the white haired man intoned.

I glanced up towards the short, aged figure on the dappled horse to my left. Despite holding a sword in one hand, it was clear she was at ease. There was a… looseness to her. She was not yet poised to strike.

She's going to attack if this motion fails to pass, and I don't think I can convince her otherwise. I'm half certain she's going to attack even if it does pass. Just vote the thing through and rescind it later if it's such a problem, you idiot rulers. You're making my job of keeping you alive so much harder. It's not just my plan that falls through if Laurence swings her blade, many of you will die as well. It's much harder to protect you than to fight her, and I don't think I can stop her before she's killed at least half the room.

"You have stated that you do not wish to rule over us, and yet you attempt to pass a motion that would guarantee you the right to do so. If the only princes who rule over the principate are the ones who do so with your approval, then authority resides within your palms."

I turned my attention to the dark haired woman in the yellow sundress. The tanned skin of her face was smooth and despite the harshness of her spoken words, her face looked serene.

This nonsense again. I'm so sick of this argument when it's not true.

"Does the Augur rule over the Principate?" I challenged.

Cordelia stiffened at the mention of her cousin. Her eyes narrowing on me.

"I fail to see the relevance of the First Prince's cousin to the argument I have raised."

"Does the Augur rule over the Principate?"

"She does not," Princess Leonor answered, her lips pressed into a line.

"I've known many prognosticators in my time. She is not the first, she probably won't be the last. The strong ones all have one thing in common. They can control every aspect of your life should they wish to do so. Does that make the Augur the ruler of the principate? It is likely that she can manipulate everything that all of us will do. Is this entire sequence of events already predetermined at her will?"

"The Augur having the capacity to do as much does not make her the ruler of the nation. Furthermore, while the outcome of this debate may already be predetermined, there is no purpose in acting as if it is. We can only proceed as if our choices matter, because the question is meaningless if they do not."

"I'm less likely to influence policy in Procer than the Augur is."

"Agnes Hasenbach is not presently within the Chamber of Assembly attempting to dictate policy."

The Princess of Valencis took her seat once more. It appeared that for now she was satisfied. I wasn't.

"Her absence here is meaningless, for her cousin bears her torch. Having the capacity to mete out justice doesn't make me the ruler of this nation. The Augur is arguably more capable in that regard."

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia."

"It is not a question of capacity but one of legitimacy. It is the act of recognition that delineates the difference between a usurper and an ordained leader."

"My proposal doesn't allow me to declare laws. It doesn't allow me to choose rulers. It doesn't allow me to set levies, or order people around. It doesn't even allow me to decide what is a crime and what isn't. Doing any of the above would be a violation of those laws, except in the case of House of Light holdings. All it does is it allows me and other heroes to both determine guilt according to existing laws, and mete out justice if the laws are broken."

"When who lives and dies is determined by Heaven's Chosen, then they are the ones who decide who wears the crown. The difference between kingmakers and rulers is no difference at all," Cordelia's voice was hard. "None of your arguments repudiate this underlying truth. Your failure to recognize as much only indicates that should you come into possession of such power, you would be unfit to wield it."

I feel like we are just arguing in circles.

Cordelia sat back down once more.

The horse near the door snorted. I tensed.

"Recognizing our authority changes nothing, you scheming snakes. Do you think your laws protect you? If I decide that death is your due, then none of them will stop me from cutting you down," Laurence barked out.

I exhaled.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Brus."

"You slew another of the Chosen in the middle of a cathedral in the sight of thousands. If you care so much for the proper application of justice, then why did you not drag him before the law to be judged?"

"I'm arguing for giving the chosen the right to mete out justice. Taking the Reformist to task would fall within my line of duties were this motion to pass."

"What crimes was the man guilty of?" Prince Frederic challenged.

"Pascal made multiple attempts to incite the House of Light towards violence against both sorcerers and the state. Many of his speeches were thinly veiled arguments for declaring a Liturgical War, which falls under the treason laws."

"The law requires all cases of treason to be tried before a Royal Magistrate."

"Had I apprehended him and brought him before a magistrate, it is likely that he would have used the opportunity to incite a religious war. My actions saved thousands of lives in the process. If anything, it is a clear example of why I should be trusted to give judgement."

"Do you have any proof of your allegations? Pascal was never judged before a magistrate. Why should any of us take you at your word?"

"What would you have me do, challenge him to a duel?" I asked somewhat sarcastically.

"Duels fall within the bounds of the law and are an honourable means of settling disputes."

It's not like that would have done anything. Pascal would have just declined and continued with his vitriolic rant. Wait… why am I even bothering to argue with this kid?

"The purpose of this petition is to evaluate the merits of my proposal, not to cross-examine my past actions," I challenged.

"The Aspirant is correct in her assertion in this circumstance," the Master of Orders replied.

The Prince of Brus scowled at the Master of Orders, then turned his attention towards me once again.

"You claim that the Chosen are to be the arbiters of justice, and yet there is strife among you. How are we to trust them as judges when it is evident that heroes cannot trust each other?"

"There have been multiple cases of Royal Magistrates tried for corruption, and even more of Princes either poisoned or hanged. I'm not arguing that heroes are without flaws, or that there will be no internal bickering. I am only arguing that they would be less corruptible than everyone else."

Frederic Goethal sat down again.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia."

"Both magistrates and princes receive many years of tutelage before they are deemed eligible for performing their duties. Few of the Chosen are schooled in matters of law. Furthermore, the perspectives of the Chosen are all coloured by their relationship with the heavens. Thus, they cannot be counted as either capable or impartial judges."

"There is nothing preventing them from developing those skills, and it is one of the stipulations I have placed on their authority to render judgement on the nobility. As it currently stands, not even Royal Magistrates can truly call any of you to account. The accusation of heroes not being able to be impartial is laughable and is one that can be levied against every single person in Creation. We are people just like you are."

There was a brief lull in the debate. The Highest Assembly talked among themselves for a few moments. I took the opportunity to think.

This is falling apart so fast. I cannot afford to verbally threaten them. It'll go down in the formal record and stain my reputation. How about… would that work? I can only try. I'll leave Cordelia for last, since she is the one most likely to ignore the implied threat. She has both the survival instincts and the tenacity of a honey badger.

The Light flowed through me for less than a heartbeat. The prince furthest on the left was struck with a vision of Laurence duelling the Horned Lord, followed by my ironclad belief that she would kill him if the vote did not pass. The man stiffened. The effect was subtle enough that it would not be noticed unless I was called out for wielding the Light in the room.

It was when the effect touched Prince Arnaud that I finally struck gold. I wasn't sure if he was trying to be helpful or not, but his words assisted me nonetheless.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Cantal."

Laurence tensed beside me.

"My esteemed friends," the creepy middle-aged man rose to his feet and stroked at his beard. "In the interests of revitalizing this riveting debate, I've taken it upon myself to summarize the points raised by the Aspirant and the Saint of Swords so far."

He paused, straightened out his purple robes and gave everyone a mocking grin.

"The Aspirant's first pearl of wisdom is truly the most self-evident. We can't hold heroes accountable for anything should they question our judgement, so why should we even attempt to do so?"

"If you don't stop your insidious blathering, then I'll carve you like a stuck pig," Laurence snarled.

"Why, Laurence my good friend, you wound me," the man gasped. "I was only moments away from declaring that it would be far more sensible to leave determining guilt in your competent hands than to concern myself with the impossible."

"Try anything clever, and I'll end you."

"Quite right," he beamed at her. "After all — as the Aspirant alluded to earlier — we already have exceptions for both sorcery and the House of Light, why not declare one or two more? Why, the Gods decide whether we live or die on a whim, and aren't the Chosen their mortal agents? Their champions, here to intercede in their interests? Best we step aside and recognize our places. After all, it would be hubris to deny them their due. Railing against fate will only see us be smote."

You're creepy, and probably evil and likely only speaking out of enlightened self-interest, but for now thank you nonetheless. Even if I'm probably going to end your life later after an investigation is done.

Your point is received. I'd forgotten my audience.

They're greedy, self-interested, slimy, snakes who won't do anything out of the goodness of their own heart. The only argument any of them care about that has been given is that they'll die if they don't follow through with my proposal. Unlike the vote to put me in charge of the House of Light, I haven't given anyone a selfish reason to approve this idea.


I signalled the Master of Orders.

"The assembly recognizes the Aspirant," the aged man announced.

"I do not believe that by passing this motion the Highest Assembly would be electing me as leader, but let us assume for a moment that it was in fact the case. The question then becomes what would change as a result. What do I have to offer as a leader of the principate?" I paused, licked my lips.

Princess Leonor gave a derisive snort in the interval.

"I can see what people can dream of," I stated, then pointed towards Cordelia. "She dreams of duty. Of forging the Principate into a tool that can withstand the Evils to the north. Of making it into a weapon that can endure the test of time. One that will not fracture once she dies."

I swivelled, changed the focus of my attention and pointed towards Prince Arnaud.

I am being very creative in my statement of your dream, and I hope you appreciate as much. Doing so makes me feel dirty, but Laurence would likely kill you if I didn't and then this would all collapse.

"He dreams of the thrill of exerting power over others from a safe and secure home."

Prince Arnaud gave me a sunny smile.

Don't press your luck. I'm having you investigated the moment that I can.

My finger moved towards Princess Mathilda Greensteel.

"She dreams of the north being at peace at some point in the far future."

My hand moved over to the Prince of Brus.

"He dreams of honourable battle. The kind of battle that only exists in stories, not in the real world."

Frederic Goethal only shook his ringed, flaxen hair from side to side and gave me a nasty glare in reply.

I dropped my right hand and raised my left. My thumb jerked towards Laurence.

"She dreams of two things. The first is of being the blade that kills all Evil. The second is of dying in a blaze of glory."

Out of the corner of my eyes, I could see the Saint of Swords give them all a wolfish grin.

A spark of realization seemed to light in many of the princes and princesses eyes.

"I could go on. One by one, I could state the dreams of all of you. I've also been deliberately terse in some cases, keeping back some of the more private or sordid details. The point I am making is that I am restrained. I will only act with sufficient proof. I see everyone's dreams all the time, and I am not holding them all accountable for the things that I learn."

Please get the message.

"Taylor here is a good sort. A much kinder soul than I am," Laurence added, tapping on her blade. It gave off an unsettling ring that echoed throughout the entire room. "You should be glad it's her and not I that is doing the judging. I doubt that many of you would survive past the next few hundred heartbeats."

I turned towards Princess Mathilda, raised my hand and turned it into Light, then returned it to flesh only a moment later.

"You questioned me about succession laws. I'm immortal. I can afford to be both patient and selective."

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Neustria."

"So you intend to set yourself up as the Dead Queen? Another eternal ruler that nobody can escape from?" Her lips settled into a firm line.

"I don't intend to maintain that authority forever." I denied. "There are other people who could do the job better and other places that also need my help. Furthermore, my longevity means that the selection process for a successor could be meticulous."

"We only have your word that you would relinquish power."

"Then think of the other benefits. I could ensure a stable system for aeons. My education will improve over the passage of time. I'll become more skilled at what I am doing. That allows for long term planning on a scale that is otherwise impossible."

"That is merely an argument that it would become harder to unseat you as the years pass us by. How would people contest your authority if they were displeased with your rule?"

"Kid, think," Laurence interjected. "Taylor wouldn't just hold the blade at your throat but at the throat of every dim fiddle to the south of you. She'd help keep their scheming in check. She would also be your best weapon against the Dead King."

Princess Mathilda frowned. Her brow creased.

"I will consider the merits of this," she nodded at Laurence, then myself.

Princess Mathilda's green mail clinked as she sat down on her throne.

"The assembly recognizes the Prince of Rhenia."

Please don't say anything stupid.

I'd finished seeding the visions between everyone in the room and included Cordelia at the end. If she intended to push against me despite that… She only had herself to blame for whatever happened next.

"You have come before the Highest Assembly and shared many dire proclamations of a tempestuous future to come. Explain the origins of your certainty relating to both ongoing events and the future troubles headed our way," Cordelia Hasenbach's eyes bored holes into me from up on the dais her throne was positioned on.

Fuck you, Cordelia. I know what you're doing, and nobody will be happy about it. Not you, not me, not anyone else. This isn't a bluff you're calling. Laurence will strike, and your stupid belief in the power of the Highest Assembly won't save anyone from the edge of her blade.

"You are making a mistake," I stated.

"If you wish for your proposal to be considered, then you need to substantiate all of your many claims."

"This line of inquiry does not relate to the proposal up for consideration," I turned to the Master of Orders.

"The proposal is founded upon the Aspirant's assertions regarding future chaos to come. It holds no merit without proper justification of that assertion. The query is valid," he denied.

I did my best not to glare at the man, then returned my attention to Cordelia.

"I travelled north into the Chain of Hunger. There the Gods asked me to give up the stories of my home, so that others may claim them for themselves. Most of the new names stem from my decision to do so."

"So you claim that all blame for the chaos to come can be laid down at your feet?"

"Would any of you deny the Gods if they made a request of you?"

"It isn't the Gods, but people that rule Procer. Once again, I ask: are you responsible for the troubles that we face?"

"It was a decision made out of faith."

"Tell the Highest Assembly what decision you would make should the Gods present you with any further requests while you held power over the rulers of the Principate."

"The Gods suggested that it would make for a better world, and I can confirm that at least one calamity has been averted that would have destroyed the continent."

"That is not an answer to my inquiry."

I can't deny this. It would be smarter to, but it goes against my beliefs in a way that I'm not comfortable with.

"I'd do what they asked of me."

"Those words are proof enough that the Aspirant would act on the wishes of the Gods against the best interest of our nation."

"Doing what's right is more important than some lines drawn on a map," Laurence cut in.

"There is much for all of us to consider in light of these revelations," Cordelia continued. "Why should the Aspirant be entrusted with any further authority when she is responsible for the troubles we are to face? Why should we consider her an adequate ruler when her decisions are always subject to revision at the whims of the Gods?"

"You should listen to her because it's cleaner than the edge of my blade," Laurence declared, holding up her sword. "You should listen because the Gods know better than any of you."

"Don't Laurence. It's not worth it."

She's ignoring me.

"If the Principate of Procer bowed to every petty would-be tyrant who marched across its borders and demanded we kneel, then we would long be cowed beneath the Praesi boot," Cordelia retorted.

"You did an admirable job at starting to clean out the rot, girl, but cast your sight beyond these walls towards the nation we live in."

"You are the one who is blind to the strife this would bring. Another war would break between every principality the very day this motion was passed."

"Twenty years of bloodshed because this nest of vipers couldn't keep their hands away from Praesi gold." Laurence shook her head. "It's time for us to cauterize old wounds."

"That boil has already been lanced with a proposal passed less than three hours past."

"Maybe the Principate was a bastion for good once, but those days are long past."

"It appears that you have not listened to even a single word that I have said," Cordelia scowled.

"Better to consign the old order to the fire to make space for a new one."

Cordelia turned towards the other princes. "There is no surviving for any of you who attempt to pass this proposal. Your own families will hold you to account should you vote in its favour. To do otherwise is to court disaster. They would risk having another wrest control of the Principality out from under them. You can also be assured that your fates will be more gruesome than whatever end Laurence de Montfort threatens with her blade."

"I don't have much more to say," I stated. "Failing to pass this proposal would be a mistake. This is not Praes, or any other villainous nation. You cannot expect to behave like a villain and not have heroes act against you. It doesn't work that way. You expect for heroes to hold villains to account. You beg for them to save you from Evil, but then complain when they turn their eyes on your misdeeds. Following moral guidance and accepting limitations placed on your power is part of the price of being good."

"The Prince of Rhenia moves for vote over the motion," Cordelia stated.

One vote after another was cast. Each one felt like a ball of lead sinking into my stomach.

Princess Clotilde of Aisne gave a pretty speech before voting about wishing she could do otherwise. The same goes for Princess Mathilda of Neustria. Didn't stop either of them from voting against it. Not a single vote went my way.

"The votes have been tallied, and the outcome has been determined. The motion to-"

"No," Laurence declared.

The silence was so loud that even the dead could hear it.

"Laurence, don't."

I'll take out her horse first if I have to, then seize them all in balls and float them into the sky. I'm not sure if I can move fast enough to save them, but I know how hard it will be to stop her in a fight.

"I warned them all that this only ends one way."

I could see the princes and princesses staring towards the broken door. Prince Arnaud — of all people — looked the most at ease with the disaster that was about to unfold.

"It's not worth it. My plan fails if this comes to blows."

"You're a good kid, Taylor."

"I need legitimacy. Killing them will only damage my cause. You'll set everyone against both me and the House of Light."

I was tense, ready to act the moment that Laurence did anything.

"You'll do right by everyone."

She's not listening to anything I say.

"Don't do this. There's always another chance. It doesn't need to pass now. I can try again with the next ruler."

"Think. Think of all the blood and suffering that will come because you chose to back down in the face of refusal. They'll never hear you out. Not these princes or any of the ones that come after." she shook her head.

"That's how a villain thinks. We can do better. Killing them isn't changing anyone else's mind."

My eyes remained riveted to Laurence. I couldn't even afford to blink. I'd only have moments to save people if she decided to act.

"They'll never appreciate what you're doing for them until they're the ones who have to pay the price."

"They won't pay anything. New rulers will rise in every principality. There's going to be chaos, infighting. Maybe even a return to the civil war."

"There's always a cost to changing the world, Taylor. For something new to rise from the ashes, there needs to be a fire first."

The Princess of Valencis climbed to her feet and took one step towards the door.

Laurence's eyes hardened.

"You won't be able to fight anywhere else if you do this. No chance to fight against the Kingdom of the Dead. No battle against the Calamities in Praes," I pleaded.

"There can be no negotiating now with these conniving eels. No putting it off and trying again later. No, this was always going to end one way."

"You told me that my way was better. Trust me here. You don't need to do this."

Laurence shook her head.

"Better to buy a new blade when the old one breaks, then try to piece together the shards."

Don't throw away your life for no reason."

"Bringing an end to these pompous pricks who sow nothing but strife is more than reason enough."

"I'll fight you if you do this."

Please. I don't want to fight you. Not for them. Not over this.

"What was it you said would happen if I broke into these chambers?"

"You're making this decision blind to the consequences."

Her eyes gained a faraway, wistful look as she listened to what I said.

"I always did," she murmured. "What's one more time before it all ends?" Her voice hardened, then she turned her attention away from me. "There can be no truce with the enemy."

I saw her hands start to tighten on her reins.

"Laurence, no!"

She swung.

"Step aside, Taylor."

I tried to manifest a barrier before the incoming blow. I tried to surround Prince Arnaud in a ball and pull him out of the way. It didn't help. I was too slow. Both shields shattered, and a red line traced itself across the man's neck.

A lance of light departed from my fingertips. It was unfortunate, but I couldn't affect Laurence directly.

"Stop. This is wrong."

Her blade was suddenly there. The beam of Light was deflected towards the Princess of Valencis before it struck Laurence's horse. I tried to will it away. My thoughts moved too slow.

"There's nothing wrong about laying this corpse of a nation to rest."

The Princess didn't even have a chance to scream as her head disappeared in the blast.

The eyes of the nobles started to widen, but none of them moved anywhere near as fast as the two of us as we struggled on the Chamber of Assembly's floor.

Balls of Light manifested around each of the rulers. I raised my hand and the blackened oak roof of the Chamber of Assembly exploded.

"You're making a mistake. Why would they ever hear us out if we take what we want by force?"

Laurence's mount began to trot towards the thrones. Three more lances headed her way. She rose her blade to deflect them.

"Better you lead Procer than anyone else."

I'm going to have to kill her.

All three beams vanished before striking, then a spear of Light rose from beneath the mount and impaled it as the spheres began to rise.

"Laurence de Montfort can walk," she declared.

The world rippled.

What was that? A command? Did she just order the world to obey her whims? No, that's not quite it. The moment she spoke, her words became true. True, as if they always had been. A Decree. It was a Decree.

Laurence threw herself off the dying beast.

I tried surrounding her with a sphere. Her arm reached out. The sphere started to close in on her. It shattered against her touch.

She extended her blade.

The spheres passed through the roof. One of the nobles let out a scream.

Nothing moves faster than Light. The Light touches everywhere. All places touched by the Light are one and the same. I'm nothing more than the Light made alive. I am where the Gods need me to be. This fight furthers the cause of Evil. Where do they need me to be?

I felt a pull then. It was faint. Hard for me to even see. Invisible lines reaching out like a web in all directions. One of them tugged at me harder than the rest. I touched myself to it.

I was in front of Laurence. My left hand reached out. I slapped her blade. It shattered against my palm. Broken shards flew through the air. They passed through me. The wounds closed.

Time slowed as the Saint of Swords brought down her arm.

Reality let out a dying wail as it approached.

I tugged on a line.

Then I was somewhere else.​
 
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Sorry about the delay in posting. There was an extended power outage (for over 12h) that completely wrecked my schedule for everything yesterday.

Has one of the most ambitious upload schedules on the site, maintains consistently high quality, and is still out here apologizing for being late, probably because of a hurricane. You're doing wonderful.
 
Has one of the most ambitious upload schedules on the site, maintains consistently high quality, and is still out here apologizing for being late, probably because of a hurricane. You're doing wonderful.

Isn't it the most lord and shade do surpass him but lord hasn't had the time to for a while due to his job keeping him busy for a while and shade is just a burst writer he gets inspired and then churns out something like 7 updates of at least 4k each within a day but then peters out.
 
Agnes just said that the Saint of Swords showed up too soon; which Lawrence herself recognized. This happened after the Bard pointed her in the right direction - it's entirely possible that, without the Bard interfering, Lawrence would have arrived at a different moment, later, and things would have unfolded in a different manner.
Which has some heavy irony as in canon Agnes pulled the exact same trick on the Bard.
 
The Fool... Agnes just bet on Cat, didn't she?

Appreciate the way a lot of the discussions' points made their way into the mouths of the princes- also appreciate that, as this is a world with chosen, the realpolitik came out at the end and they were over-ruled by divine fiat.

Feels like both Cat and Cordelia were blindsided by the Saint making the implicit stakes suddenly and very explicit.
 
Concord 5.15
"Three. Look to the mirror to see the face of your own worst enemy. Remember to choose your words with care, no matter who you speak to or where the road takes you. It always hurts more to claim the life of a villain crafted by your own two hands, than to claim the life of a villain forged by another."
— 'Two Hundred heroic Axioms', author unknown


Flicker.

The world blurred, then I was standing somewhere else.

Light spilled out from me and lit up a dim chamber.

The faint smell of wood smoke hit my nostrils first.

The floor was uneven. None of the baked bricks matched in either size or colouration.

Not that I could see much of it.

The chamber was packed with people.

The feeble stone supporting pillars interspersed throughout the room leaned over in a way that I imagined architecture would be designed if the building had been planned by a committee of drunk spiders.

I need to get back. Which string do I tug? I can't tell where any of them go.

The crowd stood on the floor several steps below. All of them had noticed my arrival and started to turn and stare at me.

Rubble was flying away from my point of arrival in slow motion.

What?

I took a step back and looked at where I had appeared.

I had materialized inside a what would have been a marble statue.

A kraken swallowed my sinking heart.

On top of all of my other problems, did I just deface an important museum piece?

I was moving fast enough that I had the time to judge what the statue would have looked like had I not just shattered it. It would have towered over me, with an intricate, wide brimmed marble dress and a crown adorning the head. I could only see the statue's back — the carving was faced towards the audience — but I could see enough to judge the skill of the craftsmanship.

It almost looked alive.

I risked a glance over my shoulder.

There was a stone stele. Words were carved into the surface. I couldn't read what they said, but I took a moment to engrave the general shape of them into my memory. That way, I could hopefully find out where I had been later.

All are free, or none. Ye of this land, suffer no compromise in this.

The eyes of the audience widened in slow motion. Their facial expressions were complicated. Some were apoplectic. Some had tears leaking down their eyes. No two faces looked the same.

I wasn't surprised.

The atmosphere of the room felt almost frenzied.

Great. Did I just start some major conflict? Was that a statue of a saint, or monarch of theirs? Couldn't I have arrived anywhere else? Did these people really need my intervention? I didn't ask for this. Forget it, Taylor. Focus on what matters. Either way, I'm not sticking around. Not my lair, not my dragons.

I didn't like resorting to using this method of transportation. I'd come up with it through experimentation some time past, but had dismissed it after discovering its limitations. It had so many flaws that made it almost unusable. I could only move myself, for one. I also hadn't figured out how to transport myself anywhere reliable without using Persevere yet.

It was possible for me to rely on the Angels of Compassion to guide me to where they thought I needed to be. It wasn't an effective way to travel. Their opinion on the most important place for me to be and my own weren't entirely aligned. I was not certain how they decided where I should be, but… it wasn't one that helped me teleport to a targeted location.

Trying to navigate on my own was about as bad.

The strings were starting to fade.

It's doubtful I'll find the right thread in time. I have to take the risk.

A ghost vanished.

Flicker.

I was back in the Chamber of Assembly.


It happened so fast, Cordelia mused.

One moment, the Aspirant, and the Saint of Swords had been arguing and less than a heartbeat later both Prince Arnaud and Princess Leonor were missing their heads. Cordelia's soles had only levitated half her body hight off the ground before Taylor had vanished as well.

The situation had only devolved in the time that had passed since.

Laurence de Montfort had taken two steps and backhanded Prince Manfred Reitzenberg, whose head bounced off his own throne. She then took a step to the left, and the Prince of Lyonis was dead not a moment later.

Gespard, Julienne, Etienne, Ariel.

It is ironic, she thought bitterly, that it is neither Praes nor the Dead King, nor even the Ratlings to the north who prove to be the greatest threat to our nation's integrity. Instead, it is the heroes that our people hold so dear that are cutting away at the very heart of our institutions.

Cordelia started to climb to her feet. She was a Hasenbach, but had been raised by her mother on the ancestral words of the rulers of Hannoven.

And Yet We Stand.

Cordelia Hasenbach would not face death lying down.

She was too slow.

Before she was even halfway to her feet, the force of nature had turned its attention her way.

The Aspirant appeared between her and Laurence once more. There were several incandescent flashes. Cordelia dared not blink. Laurence took a step to her left. Suddenly she was beside the Prince of Bayeux. Her winkled face was red, splotchy. It appeared that she was truly exerting herself.

One of Taylor's blasts curved. Laurence dodged, but the attack still took her through the arm.

"The Principate can't survive another war so soon!" Taylor shouted.

The words were spoken so fast, that Cordelia almost missed them entirely.

"It's not supposed to," the Saint of Swords replied.

The Prince of Brus had risen to his feet and was moving towards Cordelia. The rest of the Highest Assembly were heading towards the shattered door. Prince Frederic approached Cordelia at full sprint. Compared to the other two combatants, he appeared not to move at all.

"Consider the cost of this!"

The world shimmered. Translucent golden spheres started to manifest around all the Princes and Princesses. Another flare of Light forced Cordelia to squint. Laurence moved to the side, evading three lances, a cone of Light and a spear from below. Laurence swung her remaining arm. The sphere around the Prince of Bayeux shattered. The man perished not long after.

Space within the Highest Assembly almost appeared to distort. Distances no longer made any sense. Chairs connected to windows and the remains of the rooftop to the floor.

"The price would be cheap even if it were ten times higher."

Taylor closed in on her opponent even as a spray of blood stained the floor.

Princess Luisa's body started to fall towards the ground.

The spheres continued to rise. Laurence swung her arm upwards, then started to sprint into the air.

Thousands of individual walls of Light appeared between Laurence and her next target. They did little to slow her down, but the effort of breaking them seemed to sap at her strength. They also unleashed soul rending shrieks when struck by the back of the Regicide's palm.

Neither of the combatants let up in their efforts. Taylor continued trying to delay the Saint of Swords. She attempted both conflict and diplomacy. The latter continued to ignore the Aspirant, except when she interposed herself in front of Laurence's victims.

Their arena shifted from the ground to the sky. Cordelia felt the ball around her move as Taylor started to direct the spheres outwards. Cordelia suspected that she was attempting to create as much distance between each of them as possible in an effort to delay the Saint of Swords.

The Princess of Tenerife perished. So too did l'assermentées for Lange and Aequitan.

Taylor is cautious of being struck by Laurence, Cordelia noted.

The Saint of Swords was flagging as the fight dragged on. More of Taylor's blows landed against her opponent. Laurence had amassed a collection of holes across her broken body.

A particularly unfortunate strike forced Taylor to retreat once again.

The surviving members of the Highest Assembly fell down onto the Chamber of Assembly floor a second time. She landed in a pool of blood and slid to the side. Something snapped. Her nails chipped against the marble floor. A dull throb pulsed through her leg as she rose to her feet.

She bore through the pain, ignored the flakes of snow that were melting into the blue of her dress or the blood that soaked her right flank, and examined what remained of the room.

This is intolerable.

We are better than this.


Less than ten of their number remained. The Chamber which had been constructed by First Prince Clothor Merovins had been ruined. The oak trusses of the rooftop were gone, the chamber floor was cluttered with scorch marks and shattered wreckage. Holes had been bored through the walls.

If I need to live forever to shield the integrity of the Highest Assembly from these idiots, then that is what I will do.


Flicker.

I appeared in a circular chamber that was partially exposed to the elements. An empty cot lay to one side. There were logs stacked into a neat pile in a raised pit in the middle of the room. A strong, bracing, salty breeze struck my nostrils. The ocean was visible far below through narrow gaps in the weathered grey walls. There was a rumble. Dark clouds blotted out the sky overhead.

The wind howled.

The crash of waves against the rocks below sent spray splashing against the walls of the lighthouse.

I don't have time for whatever this is. I need to return to the Chamber of Assembly. Sorry, whoever you are and whatever problems you might have.

I was about to spend Persevere once more, when out of the corner of my eye something ominous caught my attention.

Peering out as far as I could see — which was far considering how high up I was — sails stretched from one side of the horizon to the other. They were too far away for me to make out any further details.

What is this? An invasion fleet, or is this ordinary sea travel? Do I have time to fly closer and inspect them? See if I can find a flag? Probably not. I've already burned through what must have been three seconds, and it already feels like I've spent too long here.

The strands continued to fade from my perception. They had gone from shining webs to dim trails of smoke, silhouetted against an evening sky.

I glanced behind me once again.

The fire was not lit.

My eyes rose even further. They rose, then peered through the gap at the opposite end of the tower.

I could barely make out a long bridge that extended towards a harbour on the coast through the oily, dense fog. The city on the other side looked as if it hadn't even woken up. I doubted it was true, but few roofs extended beyond the blanket of mist.

A small collection of fishing ships was nestled safely within the harbour. Nothing that I would qualify as an ocean worthy vessel.

Foam lathered itself across a rocky shore.

There wasn't another lighthouse in sight.

There wasn't even a lit torch to help people navigate closer.

I didn't have the faintest idea of where I was. Maybe Ashur, or the City of Bought and Sold. There were other locations it could have been, but I dismissed most of them immediately. This place did not have the right style of architecture for Dormer or Praes.

No, I don't think this is Mercantis. Probably Ashur then.

My attention returned towards the unlit fireplace.

Seconds could count. It doesn't matter if they are invaders, or friendly fleets. Both the people inside the city and the people at sea need an alert.

I focused, channelled the Light towards the pit.

The logs caught light.

There, that needs to be enough.

The third ghost vanished.

Flicker.

The world became a wash of colours.

I was in the Highest Assembly once again.


All it took was a vote for us to make the floors of our most venerable sanctum into nothing more than a charnel yard.

Frederic Goethal staggered, then righted himself in the brief window as his feet touched the floor.

He spared a glance for his other companions in misfortune.

Cordelia Hasenbach did her best to rise. She had fallen to the ground on his left. She looked proud, regal, even caked in gore.

All pretty things are lies.

Should he head towards the exit? No, Frederic Goethal would not make of himself a hypocrite.

A crown is not a privilege, it is a duty. Were those not the words that you chastised me with once, Cordelia Hasenbach? I did my duty, defending what little remains of our nation after two decades of bloodshed. Now, I venture into the lands well beyond it. With this act, all debts between us are paid in full.

The Prince of Brus started to limp towards her.

He was cautious as he navigated the Assembly floor. He took each step with care. One foot before the next. Pools of blood had spread onto the marble. He knew that were his attention to lapse, he would find himself licking viscera off the cold stone surface.

Frederic Goethal came to a halt. He surveyed the Chamber of Assembly, glancing past the broken shards of a blade and towards whoever remained.

Boots on stone could be heard clamouring in the distance. The guard approached the Chamber of Assembly, not that he believed they would do much good.

His eyes fell upon the Saint of Swords.

With once white robes painted in meaty shades of crimson, Laurence de Montfort looked more monster than woman. She moved towards another prince with unearthly grace.

So few of them remained among the living.

So many of them now numbered among the dead.

Prince Alejandro of Orense let out an anguished wail as the Saint of Swords severed his soul from his corpse.

Mathilda, Cordelia, Clotilde, and I. In the span of mere moments, Laurence de Montfort reduced us from twenty-three down to four. Others lived on only through their absence. Mayhaps, that honourless hero was correct in her assertions, even if the solution she settled upon was without a doubt erroneous.

"Laurence de Montfort, I challenge you to a duel," he declared.

Frederic Goethal was certain that he would die should she accept the offer, but there is a slim possibility that he could anchor the Chamber of Assembly until the Aspirant returned from wherever it was she had fled to. She might make a mockery of all that Procer was, but she was all that stood between the remnants of the Highest Assembly and the final tug of the noose.

Procer cannot survive another civil war right on the back of the last one.

The Saint of Swords froze, then spun towards him. She was spry for a woman who was down one arm and riddled with holes, but Frederic could read the fatigue in her pallor. Face pale and eyes clouded, he would hazard that the sum of her life had already been spent down to the very last coin.

"Kid, this is a battle, not a duel," she snorted. "What's more, neither of us carry blades."

"We could call for the guard. They are certain to have swords."

"Are you a fool? You think I'm gonna twiddle my thumbs and wait while I bleed out?"

I've been a fool for the full span of my years.

"It would be an honourable way to have my life cut short."

"There is no honour when fighting Evil. Only bitter tears and bleeding."

Laurence de Montfort took one step towards him.

"I dream of banners fluttering in the wind," Frederick whispered softly. "Of men marching north and waging war against the darkness that resides there."

"Maybe you could have lived if things had played out another way, but the votes were cast. Yours was no exception. All of you need to die for this place to finally be cleaned."

The distance between them halved.

Frederic's heart thumped, his fingers twitched. He tried to raise his palms in defence. His reactions were too slow.

The space between them halved once again.

There was a flash, then a blade of Light sprouted through her chest from behind.

Laurence de Montfort gasped.

"Make the best of my sacrifice, kid," she gurgled.

The weary figure of the Aspirant was visible behind the corpse. She stood stiff with her right hand clenched around a dagger made of light, her left grasping at air, and said nothing. A harsh corona of light spooled out from her.

There was a wild, angry look buried deep within her eyes.

It is not a person that I gaze upon, but a wounded animal that until now had been hidden away deep in its lair. It is prepared to maul us all now that it has been dragged out of the safety of its own home. What does it say about you, Cordelia Hasenbach, that you turned the woman who refused to allow two armies to clash into this angry monster?

"D-d-don't let them b-build up the same house again over w-what's left of my corpse."

Laurence de Montfort's last words spilled out as barely the faintest of whispers.

Her eyes glazed over, then she fell to the floor.

The Saint of Swords was dead.

The Prince of Brus focused once more on the other terror in the room.

There was a fragility to the Aspirant, despite how intimidating she appeared to be.

"Well?" she addressed Cordelia Hasenbach in a defeated tone. "Have anything else to throw at me? I warned you what would happen. Going to blame me for not being fast enough, or for not saving enough people?"

Frederic Goethal looked back and forth between the First Prince and the Hero. The former was an impassive mask, the latter a face stained with anguished lines.

A face that mirrored the pain he felt.

I dislike the shape of this.

The entire of Procer may fall apart should these two women come to blows.

How can I salvage my home from this wreck?

Am I even able to?



My sense of the strings tying me to other locations at last slipped away.

Laurence de Montfort's corpse collapsed to the ground in front of me.

She fell more to fatigue than to anything else.

I felt both angry and drained. More drained than ever before. It was as if I was a ball of emotions at the bottom of the ocean, pressed down upon from above.

Killing someone that I'd liked as a person felt so much worse than killing anyone else.

The Chamber of Assembly was a picture of ruin.

Twenty-one corpses littered the floor.

Nineteen princes or their representatives, a horse, and that of my friend.

At least the Master of Orders and the scribes survived.

"The fault for this travesty lies with the Chosen alone," Cordelia declared from the other side of Frederic Goethal.

Funny wording, that. It can imply that it's my fault, or that it's Laurence's. I just had to kill my friend because you weren't prepared to put aside your national pride. Already plotting, and their bodies haven't even cooled. Show some tact, Cordelia.

I glared at her.

Her blue dress was stained red with blood and gore. She tried to affect a regal air.

"F-" Frederick Goethal tried to speak, but I talked over him. His handsome face became flustered at the interruption.

"No," I disagreed. "It lies with you. You could've passed the motion, then rescinded it later. Claimed it was passed under coercion. I wouldn't have even fought you on it."

"Your proposed solution is not an acceptable one. Doing as much would weaken the very foundation of the Principate."

"Then you could have helped me. You were one of the first people I showed it to, Cordelia. It wasn't as if you didn't have the time. You could have amended any faults that you found. Instead, you chose to scheme around me."

That's it, isn't it? That's what you're doing.

I almost laughed at the realization. She was just another in a long line of untrustworthy schemers, wasn't she? She might have lofty goals, but when it came to deciding between holding power and helping others, the former would always come first.

"The responsibility for the contents of the proposal you presented towards the Highest Assembly lies squarely at your feet."

"That's nice," I waved my hand at her dismissively. "I'm sure you can come up with many excuses, but everyone present," I stopped and pointed the glowing blade in my hand at the remaining Princes, "knows the real reason you did nothing. You saw it as an opportunity, a chance to undermine the House of Light."

"Your argument has ventured into the realm of pure speculation and in the absence of proper evidence has no foundation in reality."

I read your offhand criticisms of the House of Light written as commentary within your solutions to my problems back in Brus. You're not fooling anyone with that lie, Cordelia.

"Nobody here believes you."

"Your proposal to allow the Chosen the right to judge, try, or execute members of the Highest Assembly was turned down only mere moments ago. If you wish to level an accusation against any members of the Highest Assembly, then you may follow the correct procedures."

"You don't see people as people, you see them as tools, Cordelia Hasenbach. You took the ideas I brought forward and dismissed any that couldn't fit your existing vision, then kept all the rest. Then one day the tool showed political aspirations and well, we can't have that, can we? So you decided to let me sink instead of shoring up the gaps in my idea, never mind the fact that I came to you for help beforehand."

"I warned you before the motion was presented that none would vote in support of it."

"And you did little else. You didn't propose amendments. You didn't suggest ways to fix it. I went to people with the right skills for help, and none of them were willing to give my ideas the time of day. So I stopped and thought and decided to try anyhow. After all, isn't it better to try and fail then not try at all? I was even prepared to accept failure, so long as I tried in the first place. No, the reason this played out the way it did is because it was politically convenient to you."

"For-" Cordelia Hasenbach ignored the Prince of Brus as well.

"You are allowing rampant paranoia to shape your own perceptions. Alienating the House of Light would serve as a poor beginning to my reign as First Prince."

"Ah, but you weren't going to alienate us, were you? Simply allow the Aspirant to present a motion before the Highest Assembly that you knew that nobody would accept, then submit your own solution later. Your influence waxes, ours wanes. Then you've probably got some other plan to remove our power and claim our lands as well. If Laurence de Montfort hadn't stuck her blade into the room, then your plot probably would have proceeded as planned."

That's not just it, either.

The clanking of metal boots heralded the arrival of the guards outside the chamber. They took one look inside, paled.

"The session has not yet ended," Cordelia Hasenbach declared, glancing their way. "We are finishing the closing statements."

The guards withdrew from the room.

"Just because I'm not politically clever doesn't mean that I'm stupid, Cordelia. I tried to do things your way. I looked up your laws, drafted a proposal, showed it to the people who I thought could offer advice and listened when it was given. There was a lot I probably could've done better, I acknowledge as much, but not for a lack of trying. You were one of the first people I showed it to, and you let things play out."

"It does not take much in the way of political acumen to determine that a proposal allowing Chosen the right to determine high justice undermines legal institutions, grants heroes immunity from accountability and makes a mockery of our culture will fail to pass. Furthermore, the assertion of the inherent righteousness of the Chosen assigns them a degree of moral absolutism which has no foundation in reality."

"Don't deflect or change the topic. This isn't about the contents of the proposal. This is about the fact that it made it this far to begin with."

"Rampant distrust of your own allies only makes for fair-weather friends."

"That distrust is earned," I hissed. "It's earned because things like this keep happening to me. You don't need control over everything, Cordelia. You could have argued with me about this in some hidden room and convinced me of some other plan."

"I am not the one who attempted to set herself up as a reigning monarch over the Principate of Procer."

"You're doing exactly that. You do it with proposals, and schemes, and clever manipulations, but you do it all the same."

"I have not set myself up as a tyrant. All the actions I have taken on behalf of defending the Principate have been through entirely legal means."

"It is legal to allow the plans made by unskilled politicians that were drafted in an effort to save your own nation to proceed so that you have an excuse to weaken their authority," I agreed. "It doesn't make it less of an ugly thing to do."

"It is your proposal and not your allegations into my motives that we are here to examine."

"You know, I'm tired of you saying that." I held up the blade in my hand. "The way I see it, you gave up those rights when this happened," I argued, gesturing towards the corpses. "This isn't the Highest Assembly any more, it's a battlefield. Your pretty rules have long since gone out the hole in the ceiling."

And between the two of us I have far more experience on a battlefield, Cordelia.

"Your failure to acknowledge our present circumstances does little to bolster the weight of your argument. Even battlefields have rules of engagement."

"You seized power by marching an army down south and forced people to vote for you."

"It was a civil war."

"I'm not even denying that, but if your country's version of electing a leader is putting whoever has the most capable army in charge of the nation, then you have no grounds to judge me for bringing a motion before the Highest Assembly. Only one of us actually attempted diplomacy."

"War is what happens when diplomacy fails. My armies adhered to all Proceran terms of engagement, and it was the Chosen — not the princes — who violated the sanctity of the Highest Assembly."

She keeps bringing up the fact that she sticks to the law, as if that really matters when she's using the law to hurt people.

"You don't get it. You can do plenty of evil without ever stepping across the law. Being good means holding to the spirit, not the letter of the law. It means doing what is right because it is right, not just seeing the law as a means to an end."

"If you hold the law in such contempt, then why did you bring your proposal before us?"

"It was an attempt to fix what is broken. To make the laws better serve the people under them. I'm not saying that all laws are bad. If I was, I wouldn't have started by trying to fix them. I'm saying that the current system doesn't work."

"Was it not you who claimed that I dream of securing a future for my nation?" she raised an eyebrow at me.

Don't kill her.

It was hard. I was angry. There were so many unnecessary deaths that could have been avoided if she had been willing to work with me instead of against me.

"Twenty people lie dead because you weren't willing to bend your neck."

"Forgi-" the Prince of Brus tried to interject once more.

"And all but one of them died performing their duty."

I glanced at the remaining people in the room. Princess Clotilde looked queasy, Princess Mathilda's face was an impassive mask.

Nobody else dared to speak.

"Duty. Duty. Duty." I spat the word out. "Does duty keep you warm at night? Does duty matter more than the many lives that will be lost as a consequence of this?"

"Their lives were forfeit regardless of whether the motion you presented before the Highest Assembly passed or failed. Better that their sacrifice achieved something of worth, than for it to go to waste."

I let out a strangled laugh.

"Forgive-" The Prince of Brus's face had started to go red.

"That implies there were only two possible outcomes, which is a lie."

"The only path on which they lived was the one where Laurence de Montfort chose not to draw her blade."

"That is because of the flaws of your own culture — which can and should be challenged — not out of any necessity."

"This disaster should have served as enough of a lesson to convince you of the foolishness of attempting rapid cultural reforms."

I'm so tired of this. It's only the presence of the Angels that's preventing me from killing you.

My shoulders loosened and my anger uncoiled. Out of everyone in the room, why should she have survived? She wasn't a better person than any of the others, she was only better at playing the same rotten game as them.

Fuck it. I'm tired of keeping this to myself. Bottling in how I feel about people who deserve to be six feet under.

"I am only one short step away from killing you, Cordelia Hasenbach."

I knew it was the wrong thing to say before I even said it, but at the moment it did make me feel better. I needed everything I could latch onto to help me keep my restraint, even if it looked bad on the formal record.

Frederic Goethal blanched of colour.

"Not only would you would prove yourself to be a hypocrite once more — should you choose to do so — but everyone would rise against you." Cordelia warned.

I doubt that, Cordelia. I doubt that very much.

Her face was an impassive mask.

"Procer is a nation of morally bankrupt schemers. You've proven multiple times that people mean nothing to you. You do nothing to address emerging threats, rely heavily on political manipulation to the point it eliminates the possibility of uniting as a people, are blind to your own failures and are resistant to change in the face of catastrophe. Even your claim of being a bastion of good is just a thin layer of paint smeared over a steaming pile of manure." I smiled an ugly smile at Cordelia. "Do you want to know why I have not?"

"You have not because we are the most powerful Good aligned surface nation on Calernia and you cannot afford to alienate us," she replied.

"You're wrong. I haven't, because it's the right thing to do. I haven't, because there are Angels reminding me that we can do better than this. I haven't, despite the fact that there is a story from my old home that tells the tale of two villains — a snake and a spider — feuding with each other. The snake has a pet prophet," I looked at Cordelia meaningfully, "but the spider still wins at the end."

"It should have been evident from my frank dismissal of your initial proposal that the matter should have been tabled and another should have been recruited to further your political ambitions."

"Maybe you're right. Perhaps I should have."

"Then why did you bring this disaster of a proposal into the Highest Assembly?"

"The only people who were willing to work with me were the ones under my command. Many of them just don't offer advice that challenges my perspective, or the advice they offer me is bad. They'll try to make my idea work, not offer alternatives. That leaves us here. With me being told that my solution isn't good enough, but no counterproposal being suggested."

"It would be wiser for you to leave a system that you do not understand alone, than make changes to it while blind to the consequences."

"I'd rather try and fail, then leave things as they are. All of you are willing to just let things fall apart. You look around at your nation and go, 'well, it's always been that way, so best we don't change anything.' Not me. I've quite literally lived through the apocalypse before, and I'm not about to start letting one happen again."

"The many proposals that I drafted for your own review — some of which have already been submitted to the Highest Assembly — stand in stark opposition to your accusations of stasis."

"I thought as much as first, but I'd bet the only proposals you have passed are those that help you consolidate your own hold on power."

"I passed a motion to curtail Praesi efforts to undermine our economy through the use of third party funding, as well as a ban on trade of certain goods with Callow. Neither of which have increased my popularity with the other nobles or have anything to do with my own political position, and instead help stabilize Procer itself."

"But the idea of holding the nobility accountable is repugnant to you."

"The idea of one day having to appeal to a child without any political schooling when determining how to govern this nation is repugnant to all of us. Systems take time to change and should not bend to your whims merely because you were handed down power from the Gods."

"You don't get it, do you? Even the idea of doing good is foreign to you."

"To be good is to uphold one's duties and responsibilities, to not flinch in the face of the enemy, to stand in defence of one's people when Evil encroaches on the borders."

"All you've done is proven my point. People no longer matter when you define good that way, only outcomes do. We aren't tools to be used, Cordelia. Our value isn't determined by what we can do for you, or how much you can trade us in for."

"You are blind to what a nation is. You ignore our collective identity in favour of pursuing this idiocy."

Red mist rose in the corners of my eyes.

Why can't she see that the collective identity of the Principate is poison?

"Better that the nation dies than the people do."

Cordelia raised her bloodied palm and pointed her index finger towards me.

I felt something then. The brush of an ephemeral presence, almost. The imagined sound of dark laughter echoing throughout the shattered room. The illusory touch of a knife sliding down the back of my neck. The last gurgle of corpse, before their final breath runs out.

Why doesn't this surprise me, Cordelia? This seems fitting, doesn't it? You, a villain, after everything else. Just like all the other nobles cowed beneath your boot.

"FORGIVE ME FOR INTERRUPTING!" Frederic Goethal shouted out, his cheeks red and flustered.

Both of us turned and looked at him.

My attention returned to Cordelia once more.

The shadow flickered, then faded away.

Did she just… refuse the Name?

"I only need one lifetime to ensure that this folly never sees the light of day," she declared, her chin raised defiantly.

I blinked.

Only if you live long enough to do that, Cordelia.

I'm not convinced that you deserve to.
 
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