Water slide

I don't remember Taro being all that skilled or strong. If I remember correctly, the only reason they had trouble with Taro was because he used water traps to his advantage. I guess your Wrecking Crew are saner but weaker than canon?

Kodachi is about the same level of skill as cannon, but with her crazed viciousness muted she's not as good as she used to be, Uyko's focused on her resturant and isn't training as much, Ranma has kicked a lot of the crazy out of his life and isn't improving as quickly as cannon, and Ryoga has more or less made peace with Ranma after he broke up with Akane and the cursed spring thing and thus isn't in a martial arts arms race with him.

Their personal lives are all a lot better then cannon and their in a better head space but it came at the cost of their skills.
 
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Water slide


A flock of crows flies over a small beach To the normal observer these crows look like normal crows, but to the observant there is something off about them. The feathers are not quite right, they're normal black just a little too uniform, a little too inky, because those crows were of course not real. Sensei once told me this story about a jewish mage in Prague, who created a man out of clay to defend the community. It turns out that the story was true and that many other cultures and people came up with the same idea.

The crows were silent and I switched from viewpoint to viewpoint, using passive information to carefully map out every single trap he had set for us.

"There's a snare trap here."

I marked the section, Taro had claimed a small island, nothing more than a sand bar, not that far off near Tokyo. I wondered how much time and effort went into these traps.

"Pit traps here, here and here, and some more deadfall traps."

I continued my search until I was satisfied.

"That's the last of them."

We looked at the map.

"That's a lot."

I nodded, and looked at the girls, Ryoga was reluctantly tied to a chair, we simply did not trust him to be reliable, it sucked but what could you do right? I looked at the girls.

"Were you able to find anything?"

I grimaced at the hair I received and carefully drew up runes and made a small doll, I had just enough for some sympathetic magic. I almost laughed at myself, I was back to using voodoo dolls pathetic huh? If I had only known then just how limited it was, how weak. Three dolls were complete, I would be able to do just three hits against him. I wanted to go with them to get some glory, some comradeship.

"I'm going to stay here and do overwatch."

But I knew that I wasn't going to be any use in a direct fight, I had to support the actual heroes.

"Really, your water magic would-"

"Not be enough, I can't match his speed and I won't be able to effectively set off all of his traps and distract him."

I went outside with them and formed a cloud, the four of them went off, flying to glory while I went back into my dark basement and prepared for war. I watched the map of the island as my cloud approached.

"Ranma, do you have the earring on?"

"Yeah, but it's girly."

"It's for communication, and it's nowhere near as girly as actually turning into a woman."

"Ru don't go there, don't ever go there."

There was an undercurrent of anger in those words.

"It's for the mission Ranma."

I heard some grumbling.

"Activate your seal clones everyone."

Their cloud grew and seven teams were formed, each with their own cloud.

"The clones can only take one hit, make them count."

I closed my eyes and one by one thousands of black crows exploded. The traps they uncovered were destroyed along with them. I kept a few in reserve, I would like to say that this was all the result of my hard work, but honestly copy machines are a thing. Just load the right ink and charge the result and you're good to go.

"Traps are gone."

I activated the music... hmm yeah, let's go with Ode to Joy, stick to the classics and all that. I tracked Taro as he chased after the music, the decoy teams ran in. My birds went into the cave he had left and started to carefully disarm all of his traps until I got to Akane and....

Ugh.

"Akane, you're tied up with rope."

She blinked.

"I um... who are you?"

"The cage incident? I was there."

She blinked.

"I'm sorry, I um kind of forgot your name."

I blinked.

"Hikaru, I go to the same school as you."

"A lot of people go to school with me."

"I sat behind you during the entirety of middle school."

She shrugged.

"Point is, we have Taro distracted so just break out of the ropes and get yourself out of there."

"But-"

"They're normal, non magical ropes....seriously did you just believe what he said?"

Akane blushed and flexed. The rope snapped, she looked somehow disappointed.

"It wasn't supposed to be this way."

"And how was it supposed to be?"

"Well Ranma would rescue me and..."

I cringed, ugh Ryoga you owe me one.

"Ranma has a girlfriend, the only reason I came is because Ryoga asked."

"The boy with the bandana?"

"Yeah he has a crush on you.. a bad one."

"Why?"

"Because when you're not being crazy you're actually pretty all right, but seriously work on that temper."

She sighed.

"I'm going to anger management classes, I'm working on it."

"So the others..."

I caused more explosions.

"Akane Tendo is leaving the cave."

"Got it Ru, we're going to take down Taro."

I sighed and brought a cloud down to the outside of the cave.

"Step on it."

She looked at the cloud and stepped on it and smiled as she rose in the air. She seemed happy as I flew her back home. I sighed as the decoy teams were destroyed one by one. Until Taro fought the four remaining real ones. I brought out on of the dolls, Kodachi immobilized him for a bit.

"Going after his legs."

Ranma moved forward and kicked his left leg right at the monsters kneecap, I pinned a needle into the dolls kneecap at the same time. Normally there would be a slight flush and weakness of the leg, but with Ranma's kick and the ki reinforcement disrupted...

"ARRRGGG!"

And there goes his leg. I got the next doll ready as the wounded Taro continued to attack. Ryoga attacked his right leg and another snap. I think he's cussing now, I kept the final nail in reserve, this wasn't my fight now, and with two broken legs even with his cursed form Taro went down. The four of them tied him up and took him into the clouds, some warm water brought him back into his human form.

I went to my family's roof top and opened up a cardbord box large enough to hold a man. Taro was placed inside and we smiled at each other.

"So, what now?"

And just like that Ryoga killed the mood.
 
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Water slide


Taro woke up surrounded by us, he was not afraid despite his bindings, despite having his power drained.

"You lost."

Ranma was holding court here, honestly out of all of us he had the most raw charisma, he was the leader, the center of the storm. I felt a hand fall on me and smile, but maybe it wasn't so bad.

"Happosai will pay."

"For what?"

"My name, for naming me Pantyhose Taro, do you have any idea, any clue of the hell that my life became because of that name? I thought I could force him to change my name."

Ranma frowned.

"and if you could change your name what would it be?"

He closed his eyes deep in thought.

"Awesome Taro."

I blinked it was still really stupid, and I mean really fucking stupid, Ranma looked at me.

"You have connections, you think you could get him a name change?"

I shrugged, I had a phone number, I was owed a couple favors I could do it.

"Yeah, I could do it but why? I mean he attacked a family friend what's in it for us?"

Ranma turned back to Taro.

"My wizard friend has a point, we might have been willing to help you but you went out of your way to piss us off."

Taro tried to get up and winced in pain.

"We broke both of your legs today, the only way you're getting out is if we let you get out."

He looked at us with defiance.

"I will escape."

"Then what? You're still going to have that shit name, you still have two broken legs. We're the ones with all the power here."

Taro frowned.

"If you help me change my name I will leave you alone."

Ranma got out of his chair and loomed over him.

"That kind of sounded like a threat, give me what I want or else. I don't..."

He lightly tapped Taro's broken leg, Taro gritted his teeth in pain.

"Respond well to threats, and begging well that option stopped being an option when you fucked with us. Whats going to happen is this, you want something, we can give you that thing. What are we going to get in exchange?"

Taro closed his eyes.

"I know the cursed springs, I have studied them intensely and I have divined their secrets. There is a spring that offers a cure, a true cure, not the treatment you undertook. I have a map of the spring. I will give you the location of the cure. In exchange I want my legs healed, and my name changed to Awesome Taro."

Ranma nodded.

"And you agree to leave us alone, you want to get Happosai? Leave us out of it."

"Your terms are agreeable."

All eyes turned to me.

"Ru, can you make a magic contract?"

I thought over my lessons, I had some training but the effects were limited to minor curses...but he didn't know that. Taro turned red.

"You doubt my honor?"

Ranma shrugged.

"You attacked me, kidnapped a girl, if you told me the sky was blue I would still check it."

"Very well, I agree to sign a magical contract."

I got to work and by the time I was finished the sun was starting to rise again. The contract was signed in blood and then I healed Taro's wounds. With that done he vanished. I brought a contact number out of my wallet and called.

"Who is this?"

"I need a favor."

The voice on the other line was silent.

"It wont be free."

"I need a lawyer to get someone's named changed."

There was silence and then.

"You heal three people of choice and five repair jobs."

"Three people and three repair jobs, I know how Nerima gets."

"You drive a hard bargain but deal, meeting place?"

"Ukyo's resturant."

"Ok kid."

He hung up and when Taro came back we traveled to the restaurant, Ranma handled all the talking and then the rest of the day was spent doing paperwork. When it was over Taro handed over a canister.

"The location maps, dangers, a copy of everything I have learned."

Awesome Taro put his hands together.

"This is fair, I will be leaving now."

"Where too?"

Ranma asked.

"I can not go back to China the war is...rather ugly. I think I will wander the world."

With that he left, one by one the others left too until it was just me and Ukyo. She locked the door and shut off the lights, she shut the blinds until the moonlight hid most of her features.

"So, want to have breakfast with me tomorrow?"

My heart beat...but I smiled.

"Yeah...that sounds great."

I took her offered hand and went downstairs.
 
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Water slide


We stared at the ceiling, I wiped the sweat off my brow and smiled in contentment, Ukyo was drapped over me, nuzzled into me. She took a deep breath and got up.

"So do you have any, um?"

"I'm out."

Ukyo sighed.

"We're going to need to stock up."

I chuckled and sighed tired.

"I promised you breakfast didn't I? Japanese or western?"

"Western would be great."

We got out of bed and got dressed, Ukyo winced.

"You Ok?"

"Yeah I'm ok, I just pulled some thing."

"During the fight?"

She blushed.

"No during um..."

She motioned to the now destroyed bed, she kicked one of the damaged metalic legs that used to hold the bed up.

"Yeah..."

We went upstairs into the resturant and Ukyo started cooking.

"People like my breakfast burritos."

I nodded in approval, and let her cook, we ate the meal in silence, thinking about things.

"It wasn't a mistake."

I blinked.

"I didn't say it was Ukyo."

"Oh good...."

She put the food in front of me.

"So us?"

She looked worried.

"You're still my girlfriend."

"I know, I'm just....wow it's big you know?"

I nodded.

"So have you ever um?"

Her face grew dark.

"No... you're um..yeah."

"Yeah..."

The restaurant remained dark, the shadows caused by the sun rise made the mood off.

"I love you."

The words came out rushed, I remained silent.

"Why?"

She blinked.

"What do you mean why? Arn't you suposed to say it back? Was this a ga-"

"It isn't, I just want to know why? You can have any man you want, and-"

"That simply is not true."

She sighed and looked tired.

"Ever wonder why Ranma has so many girls chasing him?"

"Because he's strong, handsome, and is a devilish rogue?"

She snorted and started laughing.

"Oh no, seriously no, by ki user standards Ranma's the boy next door. You're the dark, mysterious, exotic bad boy."

I stared at her.

"Huh?"

"No seriously, you never use any honorifics, you basically dress how you want, you were trained by a mysterious mentor from a far off land, I'm sorry but by martial arts standards your the exotic one."

"Huh never thought of it that way, but still you-"

"I can't, first of all I'm not very educated, I dropped out of middle school. Second I don't have a lot of money."

"But you're beautiful."

She turned beet red, and looked away.

"Thanks, but most japanese men well if they're not in the community they're not interested, and it's also not well safe. I'm super strong and I could end up well breaking them, and then I have to compete with the mundane girls for our guys which means the available pool of men is, well not high. We kind of have to take what we can get yah know?"

She took another bite.

"I love you too."

She smiled and we continued to eat breakfast.
 
Hikaru's parents win, Im going to let the posting go on until tomorrow, then I will count posts and the winner will get an interlude of choice.
 
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Parents
Hikaru's Parents


Father



Once upon a time in the far distant past, there was a boy who wanted to learn the arts of magic, or ki, he wanted to be special and wanted it with a fevered desperation. He went to a witch and asked to learn the arts of magic from her, she agreed to teach him if he served her loyally for three years. The boy agreed and served her hand and foot, diligently working himself to the bone to please the old lady and after three years had passed, he eagerly awaited lessons, smiling at the old witch. The witch though wasn't smiling, she was angry, enraged. "how dare you presume that you would be worthy of such power! I curse you and all of your decendents to never find a teacher from Japan." she screamed.

This was the Edo period, and since then the Gosunkugi name has been one of mediocrity, always attracted to the occult, but never quite acheiving our goals, always having our hopes and dreams just out of reach. I actually met the witch's decendents once and well....the family story was confirmed and they apologized but no, they didn't have the power to over ride the curse. No, my ancestor didn't do anything wrong it's just well, she was a massive bitch. They were honestly kind of ashamed of her.

They were nice people, but we have lived in the Nerima ward for centuries and like our ancestor served and served without reward. Desperate for some glory by proximity, a family line of wannabees who grew up into neverbeens and died neverhaves. I remembered grandfather talking about magic with a fevered manic glee. I remembered my uncles who died undergoing rites of passage, I remembered my brother dying on the road to some guru in the mountains. I was not immune to the lure either, but I figured I could go into construction content to watch from the outside. I married a blunt, plain woman who was kind and overlooked my daydreaming and watched another generation of Gosunkugi grow into mediocrity.

Like his father, his grandfather, like those before, he too was bullied, he too was attracted like a moth to the flame of the paranormal. He too would suffer until he gave up and married and raised the next generation of nobodies.

"I'm willing to take Hikaru as my apprentice."

And then our world was shattered, the old witch's curse only applied to masters from Japan. The loophole had been staring us in the face the entire time. My father was old and dying from old age, still sharp ,still smart but he was passing away. Hikaru would never forgive me if I passed on this, father would never forgive me, and in the afterlife so many would feel rage, and of course I would never forgive myself either.

"Is it safe?"

Coward, I was a coward.

"Magic is never safe, It will be hard and at times it will be incredibly painful. Power has a price Mr. Gosenkugi, but if Hikaru is willing to endure then I am willing to share my wisdom with him. But I expect him to work hard in his studies."

My mouth was dry...

"So how long until you start teaching him magic?"

I dreaded the thought of a long period of service, it was completely normal and even traditional in the magical world, but we had been burned multiple times.

"Today, I would unlock his aura today, his training would start immediatly."

I should have brought some water, it was too good to be true, it was everything we had ever wanted.

"He has my permission."

My wife frowned and took me aside.

"He said it wasn't-"

I pressed a finger against her lips.

"I love you, more then anything but on this issue I will not budge darling...Hikaru wants this, needs this. I want to give him a future, for him to have it better then us."

We went back to the kitchen in our cramped appartment.

"We agree, to allow our son to learn from you."

I love you Hikaru, please earn this.

"Good now its time to talk about money."

I didn't have a lot, I was in construction, electrician to be exact, but we could put aside whatever we could for lessons. I would make this sacrifice for my son.

"We're willing to pay for lessons."

The man blinked.

"I think there is some miscommunication, I'm not asking you to pay me. I'm going to talk about Hikaru's stipend, and his supplies for his studies and of course he's going to need a full lab and study."

He pulled out a bag and poured out some gold coins.

"I'm going to need you to buy a plot of land, I will handle the construction of the house itself."

My wife had gone pale white, she closed her eyes deep in thought.

"I'm in."

The blond man nodded his head, his green eyes shining in the light as another train went by.

"Hikaru, come here."

The boy ran his face full of glee, the man pressed his hand against his forehead.

"Your training starts today. It will be long, it will be difficult and you will have to learn many things, not just magical things so please no whining. It all serves a purpose, math, crafting, other skills are vital knowledge."

"I understand."

He seemed to vibrate with energy, the man Sensei Macguffin glowed, then my son glowed and for the first time the Gosunkugi family had magic.

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It's been a year now, the news about my sons apprenticeship has reached my boss. I stand firm, ready to be fired, I can find another job, I will make what ever sacrifice I must for his sake, for my sons sake.

"You're being promotted."

I blinked.

"Into management, apparently you're getting special treatment because of your boy."

My boss sneered, he had never liked me. He enjoyed messing with me and insulting me. He threw a folder at me.

"We're equals now, here's your district."

He said it with a pained expression.

"This is the part where you leave Gosunkugi."

I went out the door into the night air, a spring in my step as I walked towards our house.

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It's been two years, we're holding a family reunion, Gosenkugi's from all over Japan are here, from all the special districts in Japan. They watch him with awe as he manipulates the water in the rooftop pool. He's not doing well, his sensei expects better, but he's the golden child, the hope of our clan. We hold him in awe, he is our Hikaru. I gather the adults and tell them about the loophole, the escape clause of our family curse.

I have saved some money, and we agree to pool our efforts, New Orleans, London, China, India a few of us quit their jobs to search for sensei's, the Gosunkugi clan will at long last become great. I watch my son with pride.

"Again."

He trys again and again, the drinks come out and MacGuffin sensei moves over to them.

"Hikaru, more training, cool everyone's drinks."

He nods and we watch in awe as our warm beers are cooled as ice is created for our amusement. We watch our families hopes and dreams come true, in the back I watch as my father cries, tears running down his face, he is not alone.

The mother


I met my husband when I was six years old, he sat next to me and grabbed a cookie out of my bag and I was outraged, angry but I said nothing. I grabbed a another cookie and ate it, I wouldn't back down. Then he ate another one until we were down to the last cookie. Then he calmly broke the last cookie in half and gave me the other side. I was pissed, and then I noticed that my original bag of cookies was untouched. Some unknown boy had given me half his cookies without complaint.

Perhaps that was a sign, I didn't have many friends. I wasn't able to coddle the delicate sensibilities of the other girls. I was perhaps a little too honest, a little too free with my opinions, but my future husband took it all in stride. We were both picked on, both outcasts, he was in time my only friend. So after high school I thought nothing of asking him to marry me, we were not a conventional couple so it felt right. The fact that he didn't know my deep dark secret helped. We got married, my husband got into a good college, not a great one, but a good one. He got a degree in electrical engineering complete with scholarship and then went to work in construction.

We had dreams of a better life, which were cut short by his asshole employer, we watched as less qualified friends were given important jobs ahead of my husband, people with less education, less hour, less everything.

"You deserve more."

An conversation we had before.

"If I have to choose between a bigger paycheck and being with my family, I'm going to choose you and Hikaru every time."

Even if he went drinking and carousing they still wouldn't promote him. The man was a bully and so we lived, my husband did electrical work, Nerima was cheap and people didn't ask to many questions here, which suited me. My son got bullied at school and it was aggrevating, that he was following in my footsteps and in his father's footsteps. Was it our destiny to just be stepped on?

I frowned as a television show came on and some igorant shit made speech about how only true blooded people could be japanese. There was going to be another push to kick out foreigners. I turned off the television and sulked in the darkness. The bullying got worse, Hikaru grew up as a sullen depressed child, fascinated by magic like his father's side of the family. Soon enough that would be crushed out of him, Japan would hammer him down.

"I found a wizard!"

I blinked at his excitement, he was tugging on a man's arm. I studied him, a Gaijin, a westerner with blond hair, green eyes, glasses, and a blue trench coat. I saw faded scars on his hands, slight burns, this was a dangerous man, he practically hummed with power.

"A few boys were messing with your son, so I took care of it."

I could trace the accent, american.

"I'm sorry my boy has a wild imagination and-"

The man teleported to a lamp that had broken and brought out a wand, I watched as the broken lamp was fixed with a single word. He teleported back to me.

"Sorry, but that looked like a safety hazard."

My heart beat rapidly, an actual wizard, I didn't know the yanks had those.

"Mom, can I please learn magic?"

The american sighed.

"Kid, I just got here, I have to get a job and other things."

He turned to the man.

"Please, please, please teach me magic!"

He turned to look at me frustrated.

"Kid, magic is not a toy, it's not a game. It's a tool, one that carries with it grave responsibilities, to others, to the community at large and to yourself."

"Please?"

He stared at my son and then looked at me.

"I refuse to teach you unless you have your parents permission. You will have a week to think it over, really think it over."

He stared hard at him.

"This is not some slight whim boy, this is a ten year committment, and I would expect you to work hard."

He clicked his heels together and looked at me.

"See you in a week."

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I heard the warnings, but my husband stands firm. It's rare for him to do that, to put his foot down, but in this case I won't be able to sway him, won't be able to change my son's mind. The offer is too good to be true. A house of our own, power? I know enough though to know that this is a major deal. An apprenticeship is almost akin to adoption.

We agree, the legal papers are signed and my son is now an apprentice mage. I watch him glow and watch the start of his journey. His sensei allows me to watch him train, it's actually kind of boring. There's a big focus on academics, other languages. I watch my son learn how to cook, how to sew, how to knit. His grades improve markedly. Along the way my son's master becomes a family friend.

The bullying continues but it levels off, the bullies become fewer in number until only the horrid Kuno boy remains. It worries me to have the attention of someone that rich and powerful, thank god he's an idiot. The training continues, my boy gets taller and stronger, he gains definition.

My son graduates middle school at the top of his class, he can go anywhere and he goes to Furinkan high, because that's where his master teaches.

"It's not safe to be around Kuno."

Macguffin nods.

"You honestly think that it's possible for him to be safe?"

"Well um.."

"It isn't, threats will come jealous rivals, others enemies. It's best for him to learn how to defend himself against a minor threat."

"But the bullying-"

"I can make sure that he can defend himself without some school bullshit penalizing him. Most bullied children are not allowed to fight back, Ru has a fighting chance."

I sigh in frustration, I want to stop it, but this is the price I had to pay.

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I get a phone call in the middle of the day.

"I must say you hid it well."

I keep calm.

"You must have the wrong number."

"You parents changed their names, changed their files, if you didn't know better you would never know that you're korean."

"I was born and raised in Japan, I am japanese."

"You will never be Japanese."

Her voice is cold.

"It wasn't easy but I found out your real idenity, I wonder how much your family paid to get a false japanese registry?"

My heart pounds.

"You have the wrong number."

I hang up the phone terrified, I watch my steps, keep away from strangers I relax only after the police raid that horrid little girl's home. A police officer arrives with some paperwork.

"This says your an unregistered korean national."

"My birth certificate clearly states I was born in Japan."

He nods.

"You know... my girl had cancer, terminal she was about 7 years old. There was no cure."

My son volunteered at the hospital...

He took out a lighter and burned the files in front of me.

"It was a clever forgery Gosunkugi-san, but I don't think I will allow a little yakuza whore to bismirch your reputation."

He nods his head and heads out the door, and for now my deception remains in place.
 
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The normal chapters were good. That interlude was great, an extremely interesting glimpse into the world. Very good work.
 
That was a cool interlude. Shining hope, our Hikari :)

By now he has Aura, Bending(water) and Wand Magic. I think that i'm forgetting something, can anyone point to it please ?
 
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