Victories of the Soul [Worm/Avatar/ME/Multicrossover] [SI]

Hmm why would the MC had a harder time being friends with Taylor and as for Athena that is pretty good
Hmm…honestly it might just from issues with her probably overprotective dad, and awkwardness from being the opposite gender. A lot of how she started interacting with Taylor was because she wanted to focus on things other than what had happened to her, and she would lack that if she remained her original self.
 
Hmm…honestly it might just from issues with her probably overprotective dad, and awkwardness from being the opposite gender. A lot of how she started interacting with Taylor was because she wanted to focus on things other than what had happened to her, and she would lack that if she remained her original self.
Ah okay also I find it funny that Taylor is still insecure somewhat of her body and is envious of basilla body
 
Ah okay also I find it funny that Taylor is still insecure somewhat of her body and is envious of basilla body
Well it takes time and work to get over the kinds of issues she has. Though…I'll have to finish off this nice conversation since it's getting quite late, so yeah…
 
Hmm…I'm not too sure about that myself, since in Worm Taylor was about fifteen and still growing. This Taylor is older and more physically fit, and probably a lot more confident. Canon Taylor also has much lower self esteem, which makes her opinion on herself…suspect. She's closer to average definitely, but not ugly.

It depends on several factors really.

A) Well done makeup can do wonders in improving someone's looks. Sometimes difference can be pretty... drastic. Here you see some examples. Although to be fair in some cases... I don't think I would say it helped that much. But it's a proof of the concept. Although again, Taylor doesn't strike me as someone who would wear heavy make up of any kind. Or even moderate one. But light make up alone can also help. But again, I don't think this is it.

B) Body language. This one can't be underestimated. We commit and learn lots of things through our subconscious, so we don't even realize how much more someone is attractive by their movements and actions. We find confident people more attractive even if they naturally aren't. Also this Taylor is FAR more confident then canon one, so it shows.

C) Our own realistic expectations. This one is also important here. We may say how we would love to date and have sex with this woman/man. But if we ended up in a situation in real life where you believe them to be 'way above your league', most would instantly back off. This is actually an issue for some women as ironically they are too pretty to find any serious relationships, in a way that is almost like someone who is too ugly. Or they end up being completely sexualized and some less then honest people mostly want them for their bodies and don't really care about personalities behind, which unfortunately for those people is a serious issue. Being pretty may be as much of a curse as being completely ugly.

How it is connected here? It's pretty simple. Taylor being on average side is actually her best advantage, especially if it's closer to pretty side, which I suspect is the thing here. Because she doesn't intimidate potential love candidate, by being so pretty 'she is out of their league', but still JUST pleasing enough look wise to be admired. And this 'averageness' ironically make her that much more pretty, because people find potential relationship something to be actually possible and not an impossible dream.

As for her powers, they're all modified expressions of her bug control. She basically uses them as conduits for different effects, like a wand essentially but made out of horrific swarms of chitinous death.

Pretty much bug based Trump.

Damn, I can't find the title, but I remember COMPLETED (I know, SHOCKING) Worm story where Taylor ended up as a Trump, who could cast Harry Potter magic (or rather fake it) and command her bugs to copy those effects with voice commands like she would cast genuine HP spells. She did it because it allowed her to escape her trauma by acting that her power is like genuine magic. Sad thing really.

Hmm for Dinah yeah but your Taylor is far more powerful than canon Taylor as for sting it makes sense since it's the Entities greatest weapon also does Taylor realize she has any feelings for basilla/ Brandon

I think Taylor does realize, but doesn't know how she can approach it, with her zero experience when it goes to romance, so she doesn't want to overstep. The way her body language is described, like putting her hand on Basilia's hear for example looks pretty intimate.

That first thing is actually spoilers, but I imagine as as a guy the MC might have a harder time trying to be friends with Taylor, then again maybe not. And yes Athena has been prospering in-story.

It depends really. Some people have easier time to have friendships with people of the opposite gender. I remember in high school I was buddies with a girl, who pretty much only had one female friend and rest were guys.

Or that they can only do with the person of the same gender.

In canon Taylor does have closer friendships with girls, so I think this is the case here as well, which becomes a bit more complicated as Basilia is a woman now, so Taylor subconsciously trusts her more this way.
 
Hmm to the first one @Kejmur yeah that's true but this Taylor doesn't really seem to be that girly or care about make up that much
To the second one true this Taylor has about Weaver level of confidence (and is quite strict in her training albeit not to the same extent as Weaver ) and basilla does frequently make MANY comments on Taylor being attractive in x or y situation and also this Taylor has an atlethic figure which does clearly attract basilla who is bi
To the third one I'm not sure about that one since basilla is very attractive probably the hottest female in the setting although I see your point
But anyway yeah I can see your point anyway I like the ship and I usually don't like Yuri Taylor fics
To the Harry Potter one That fic sounds interesting
Anyway yeah Taylor is really affectionate with basilla in some ways more than she was with anyone in worm sans Brian and Taylor is smart so maybe your right especially considering she's thinking she looks mannish and still isn't really confident in her looks and also she was staring at basilla chest Soo.....yeah there is that
And if the MC was a guy he probably could have been friends with Taylor but a bit slower than here
 
Hmm to the first one @Kejmur yeah that's true but this Taylor doesn't really seem to be that girly or care about make up that much

Yep, I said it. But she may be one of those ladies that look perfectly fine without any makeup whatsoever.

To the third one I'm not sure about that one since basilla is very attractive probably the hottest female in the setting although I see your point

I would also mention how no one really flirts with Basilla here, so what I said may apply to her. But I mostly aimed it towards Taylor.

But anyway yeah I can see your point anyway I like the ship and I usually don't like Yuri Taylor fics

I'm tired of Taylor!Lesbian thing and here it works ironically as Basillia is pretty much a guy in female body and both know it.

To the Harry Potter one That fic sounds interesting

I found it!

Reparo! (aka Mend!)

As I said, about the warning. This Taylor is one of those very heavily depressed Taylors. It's bad early on. It slowly improves later on with New Wave, but you deserve fair warning.

Anyway yeah Taylor is really affectionate with basilla in some ways more than she was with anyone in worm sans Brian

That whole Brian relationship is that before he second triggered, he wasn't really interested. And later on when they hooked up, she did it to improve his confidence and try to make him happy. It was... really not healthy in overall. And Brian is one of the most boring characters in the story, which doesn't help as well.
 
I would also mention how no one really flirts with Basilla here, so what I said may apply to her. But I mostly aimed it towards Taylor.



I'm tired of Taylor!Lesbian thing and here it works ironically as Basillia is pretty much a guy in female body and both know it.
Well for Basilia, she's very much a recluse and rarely leaves for anything besides groceries and cleaning supplies.

As for Taylor? Honestly I thought of her here as Bi but with a preference towards men. Still I get what you mean…because I've read more than enough Worm fanfic to figure out certain trends.
 
Well for Basilia, she's very much a recluse and rarely leaves for anything besides groceries and cleaning supplies.

As for Taylor? Honestly I thought of her here as Bi but with a preference towards men. Still I get what you mean…because I've read more than enough Worm fanfic to figure out certain trends.
Hmm makes sense she did check out basilla chest and let's face basilla is basically a Guy in a girl body hmm also is basilla Spanish
 
Yep, I said it. But she may be one of those ladies that look perfectly fine without any makeup whatsoever.



I would also mention how no one really flirts with Basilla here, so what I said may apply to her. But I mostly aimed it towards Taylor.



I'm tired of Taylor!Lesbian thing and here it works ironically as Basillia is pretty much a guy in female body and both know it.



I found it!

Reparo! (aka Mend!)

As I said, about the warning. This Taylor is one of those very heavily depressed Taylors. It's bad early on. It slowly improves later on with New Wave, but you deserve fair warning.



That whole Brian relationship is that before he second triggered, he wasn't really interested. And later on when they hooked up, she did it to improve his confidence and try to make him happy. It was... really not healthy in overall. And Brian is one of the most boring characters in the story, which doesn't help as well.
Hmm to the first one : eh true I can definitely see that
To the second one true
To the third one I'm also very tired of lesbian or bi Taylor but I'm okay with it here also thanks for the link
And yeah brain and Taylor romance is just bad

Eh @AEM does Queenie have the potential to control shards like Khepri and how is her Personality and appearance like
 
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Hmm to the first one : eh true I can definitely see that
To the second one true
To the third one I'm also very tired of lesbian or bi Taylor but I'm okay with it here also thanks for the link
And yeah brain and Taylor romance is just bad

Eh @AEM does Queenie have the potential to control shards like Khepri and how is her Personality and appearance like
Yes for QA she does have the capability to control shards, though it's not an easy process since spirit shards are a lot more independent. She's less a controller and more…well an Administrator. She helps with keeping Alaya stable, working with other shards in modifying their powers as well as rearranging their corpus, Shaper plays a role in this as well.

Edit: Every shard plays their part in this though, regularly exchanging data between themselves to see how to improve the power of a Host, or how to make a new power set for a Bud.

2nd Edit: Sorry I forgot the second question, QA's Avatar more or less resembles a more angular faced and taller Taylor, but she's made out of blue crystalline hyper-dimensional insects. She also has a jagged crown over her head made out of black crystal. Personality wise she's a lot like her Host, though a little calmer and spacey.
 
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Yes for QA she does have the capability to control shards, though it's not an easy process since spirit shards are a lot more independent. She's less a controller and more…well an Administrator. She helps with keeping Alaya stable, working with other shards in modifying their powers as well as rearranging their corpus, Shaper plays a role in this as well.

Edit: Every shard plays their part in this though, regularly exchanging data between themselves to see how to improve the power of a Host, or how to make a new power set for a Bud.

2nd Edit: Sorry I forgot the second question, QA's Avatar more or less resembles a more angular faced and taller Taylor, but she's made out of blue crystalline hyper-dimensional insects. She also has a jagged crown over her head made out of black crystal. Personality wise she's a lot like her Host, though a little calmer and spacey.
To the first one huh I guess that makes sense
To the second one ah so she's a cooler looking version of Taylor cool also oh God another Taylor Hebert great now the world has another thing to fear
Hmm also @AEM is Taylor and Queenie a control freak and how is Veda and Queenie relationship like
 
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To the first one huh I guess that makes sense
To the second one ah so she's a cooler looking version of Taylor cool also oh God another Taylor Hebert great now the world has another thing to fear
Hmm also @AEM is Taylor and Queenie a control freak and how is Veda and Queenie relationship like
Well of course they're control freaks, though they're not neurotic about it. Basilia does not tend to notice it, because she just doesn't find it that important. As for Queen and Veda they're friendly enough since they're both Administrator's though with differing ancestors. They exchange data at times too.
 
Well of course they're control freaks, though they're not neurotic about it. Basilia does not tend to notice it, because she just doesn't find it that important. As for Queen and Veda they're friendly enough since they're both Administrator's though with differing ancestors. They exchange data at times too.
Hmm makes sense I mean Taylor did say she likes to boss people around and queenie is literally made to control other shards albeit it can't do that as easily now also Queenie should get closer to Taylor since they are similar hmm also what are the most destructive things basilla has built so far
 
Hmm makes sense I mean Taylor did say she likes to boss people around and queenie is literally made to control other shards albeit it can't do that as easily now also Queenie should get closer to Taylor since they are similar hmm also what are the most destructive things basilla has built so far
Destructive huh…well that's mainly been some antimatter tipped micro-missiles, warp missiles, and plasma explosives. But that isn't much more powerful than a conventional missile, though far more compact due to their greater energy/power density. But besides that it would have to be the Asari-derived Adroit cannon, since it fires with some 15 kilotons of kinetic energy.

Unfortunately while she can build weapons with immense yields, they cause too much collateral damage to be practical. Biological weapons, black nano plagues, nuclear fusion bombs, mass drivers and beyond. Thanix cannons are a possibility too but again unpractical. The only people who have greater firepower would be String Theory and Phir Sē.

Eidolon too of course, and Ash Beast with his matter-energy conversion.
 
Destructive huh…well that's mainly been some antimatter tipped micro-missiles, warp missiles, and plasma explosives. But that isn't much more powerful than a conventional missile, though far more compact due to their greater energy/power density. But besides that it would have to be the Asari-derived Adroit cannon, since it fires with some 15 kilotons of kinetic energy.

Unfortunately while she can build weapons with immense yields, they cause too much collateral damage to be practical. Biological weapons, black nano plagues, nuclear fusion bombs, mass drivers and beyond. Thanix cannons are a possibility too but again unpractical. The only people who have greater firepower would be String Theory and Phir Sē.

Eidolon too of course, and Ash Beast with his matter-energy conversion.
Interesting so she's almost on Tony Stark level of brilliance and also do Queenie and Taylor interreact more
 
Eventually, but then again how do you know they don't? It's not like Basilia is omniscient.
Hmm true she is clueless 89 Percent of the time which is why Taylor loves her also it's nice to see a confident yet nice Taylor even though I consider Taylor to be a bit overrated myself also does Taylor have brute strength and how strong is basilla biotics
 
Hmm true she is clueless 89 Percent of the time which is why Taylor loves her also it's nice to see a confident yet nice Taylor even though I consider Taylor to be a bit overrated myself also does Taylor have brute strength and how strong is basilla biotics
She does, same way that people in ATLA and LOK can jump across building, fall from hundred a feet and break steel chains with their feet without hurting themselves. But…they're not bulletproof so without shielding she'd qualify as about a 3. With biotics and shielding it's higher.

As for Basilia, her strongest elements would be fire and void(aka Biotics) with air being a close third, earth being sufficient and water being her worse. Her biotics are actually stronger than Taylor's, but she's specialized towards different aspects of the biotic martial arts. Taylor is a prodigy in Dimensional Control, charges and blinks and other weird mass effect tunnel effects, and is almost just as good at Gravity Control. She's good enough at Kinetics(Pull and Throw) and effective at Molecular Manipulation(Warp)

Basilia has talent with Molecular Manipulation, and is starting to dabble with High Order Energy Manipulation(think biotic Flares and Annhilation) and her kinetics are about equal with Taylor. Her Gravity Control is slightly worse but not by much. Her main thing is her far stronger barriers due to her cybernetics.
 
She does, same way that people in ATLA and LOK can jump across building, fall from hundred a feet and break steel chains with their feet without hurting themselves. But…they're not bulletproof so without shielding she'd qualify as about a 3. With biotics and shielding it's higher.

As for Basilia, her strongest elements would be fire and void(aka Biotics) with air being a close third, earth being sufficient and water being her worse. Her biotics are actually stronger than Taylor's, but she's specialized towards different aspects of the biotic martial arts. Taylor is a prodigy in Dimensional Control, charges and blinks and other weird mass effect tunnel effects, and is almost just as good at Gravity Control. She's good enough at Kinetics(Pull and Throw) and effective at Molecular Manipulation(Warp)

Basilia has talent with Molecular Manipulation, and is starting to dabble with High Order Energy Manipulation(think biotic Flares and Annhilation) and her kinetics are about equal with Taylor. Her Gravity Control is slightly worse but not by much. Her main thing is her far stronger barriers due to her cybernetics.
Interesting so they are pretty strong then also it kinda explains a lot since Taylor survived attacks that would kill cannon Taylor and can also lift up basilla with ease also it's pretty scary that on top of all there versatility Taylor and basilla have enough strength to probably go toe to toe with captain America

Hmm Also @AEM how dangerous are the slaghterhouse 9 in the setting
 
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Precog are annoyingly stubborn in that way.
Precogs
though based on what my drone's saw many of them were abandoned
drones
I couldn't move as pain racked my body
wracked. I think.
and it's Eezo core was ruinously expensive.
its
My eyes didn't even register the slug, only catching sight of the after trail of heat and torn apart air.
That's kinda obvious... You can't see a bullet moving at mach one, how does anyone expect to see something moving at fractional-c? Aside from the impossibility, it's probably redshifted too!
an awful shriek like a banshee made my heart die so in my chest.
remove "so"?
I shut the door and with my firebending I inflamed the nice smelling candles
ignited?
Bakuda had obviously been made into our heavy weapon's specialist, she carried most of our explosive's
weapons, explosives

This is getting even more interesting. This new enemy is a neat idea, and I look forward to seeing the Voyagers show up. I'm surprised that Basilia didn't figure out that Cherish-2 was part of the group, though. I got that at least half right, and I've not even read the original story. :p

The "Alaya" part was a nice touch with the name. I'm not sure who the "him" referenced was, though.
 
Precogs

drones

wracked. I think.
its

That's kinda obvious... You can't see a bullet moving at mach one, how does anyone expect to see something moving at fractional-c? Aside from the impossibility, it's probably redshifted too!

remove "so"?
ignited?
weapons, explosives

This is getting even more interesting. This new enemy is a neat idea, and I look forward to seeing the Voyagers show up. I'm surprised that Basilia didn't figure out that Cherish-2 was part of the group, though. I got that at least half right, and I've not even read the original story. :p

The "Alaya" part was a nice touch with the name. I'm not sure who the "him" referenced was, though.
Thanks for clearing up some of the little errors that slip past me when I write. I don't really have a Beta so things like that happen. As for not being able to catch the sight of a projectile at that kind of speed?

You'd be surprised.

Now about Basilia, to be fair she has ridiculous amounts of tunnel vision, and she finds it a little unexpected to have someone like that on a team. We are talking about someone who joined the Slaughterhouse Nine. Still mostly the tunnel vision though, Basilia's the type of person to deal with what's in front of her and nothing else though she can look to the future just fine.

And the him would be a certain golden boy. There's not really any spoilers there.
 
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Thanks for clearing up some of the little errors that slip past me when I write. I don't really have a Beta so things like that happen. As for not being able to catch the sight of a projectile at that kind of speed?

You'd be surprised.

Now about Basilia, to be fair she has ridiculous amounts of tunnel vision, and she finds it a little unexpected to have someone like that on a team. We are talking about someone who joined the Slaughterhouse Nine. Still mostly the tunnel vision though, Basilia's the type of person to deal with what's in front of her and nothing else though she can look to the future just fine.

And the him would be a certain golden boy. There's not really any spoilers there.
Hmm basilla having tunnel vision makes sense considering she lived a fairly easy and normal life heck Taylor herself has tunnel vision since she tends to be stupidly focused on one thing and doesn't let go such as the idea to fight lung in combat his power countering hers and him being obviously stronger physically also funnily enough this Taylor need for control seems to be something like she said always since her mom died (which I suspect was just a latent desire to correct her life and take care of her city) had but thanks to her life being considerably better than canon Taylor and basilla it's normally suppressed in a way she's kinda like Robin from Teen Titans also Queenie seems pretty chill and laid-back albeit not easily embarrassed like Taylor is considering she actually thought of seducing a guy Twice Taylor age and also how powerful is Taylor Precognition and would she get more powers in the future
 
Hmm basilla having tunnel vision makes sense considering she lived a fairly easy and normal life heck Taylor herself has tunnel vision since she tends to be stupidly focused on one thing and doesn't let go such as the idea to fight lung in combat his power countering hers and him being obviously stronger physically also funnily enough this Taylor need for control seems to be something like she said always since her mom died (which I suspect was just a latent desire to correct her life and take care of her city) had but thanks to her life being considerably better than canon Taylor and basilla it's normally suppressed in a way she's kinda like Robin from Teen Titans also Queenie seems pretty chill and laid-back albeit not easily embarrassed like Taylor is considering she actually thought of seducing a guy Twice Taylor age and also how powerful is Taylor Precognition and would she get more powers in the future
Well the Queen Administrator isn't that much younger than Chevalier's shard, though their hosts are a different matter. Also...I don't think Taylor has Precognition…are you talking about Dinah?
 
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