Under Heaven [JJBA/Undertale] Quest

Failing to Trust
Normally crying only makes your father beat you harder, but in this place where neither your mother and father are around the tears begin to bubble forth. In seconds you're bawling and crying pathetically, horrified at being alone in the dark and horribly lost at the same time. Nobody is around to see your tears or how utterly terrified of everything you are. Or at least, you don't THINK that anyone is around to see what you are doing.
You don't see a golden flower with a face grimace and vanish back into the ground, annoyed by the constant crying and noise.
Then you notice that someone's coming towards you and you force yourself to stop crying. They would probably beat you for being a crybaby, like your father and mother did. You rub your eyes a few times to get rid of your tears: the only thing that you're good at is hiding your emotions after all. After a moment you look for the person that has come close to you and you freeze.

The first thing that you see is a purple robe with some kind of emblem on it; like the gang symbols that you remembered before you moved from Italy. But then you see white fur and small horns on top of the figure's head with red eyes that look at you with.... something that you have never seen before. It couldn't be concern since nobody has ever cared about you before. So what was it? Who was this.... person that has appeared in front of you?

"Are you alright?" the creature asks you, her voice kind and warm. You don't know what to do. Nobody's ever been nice to you before, you don't know whether or not to trust her. She's just going to hurt you like everyone else. (Trust check 1 failed)

[] "No"
[] Flinch
[] OBSERVE
[] Write-in
 
You don't see a golden flower with a face grimace and vanish back into the ground, annoyed by the constant crying and noise.

Dodged a bullet friendliness pellet there.

[X] OBSERVE
 
[X]Cry.

We'll cry for all the quest! So absolutely no monster will hurt us.
 
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Alone Once More
You flinch instinctively, already anticipating an attack of some kind when she moves forward. The goat thing (she looks like one... if goats stood on two legs and wore clothes) notices this and her expression tightens. She seems to be at a loss of what to do. 'Am I too scary? This has never happened before...' she thinks to herself.

You begin to look for a way to run behind and away from her, but your fear of being in such an unknown place paralyzes you. You can't even move and the... goat woman seems to notice this before offering a hand. You look at it suspiciously and with no small amount of fear. Due to your upbringing, you do not even know how to trust other people. And even though this woman was not, well, human the fact still remained that you refused to trust her. Nobody wanted to help you before out of the goodness of their heart, so why would that change? (Trust Check 2 failed)

"My name is Toriel," she says repeats slowly and calmly in attempt to calm you down. It works briefly for a moment, but then you catch yourself before your hysteria and fear reasserts itself violently. "What is your name?"

You're too terrified to give her a proper answer right now, and so you remain silent and shaking with fear. (Bravery Check 1 failed)

Toriel seems to be very bothered by this and sighs. She glances at you with what seems to be.... concern? No that's impossible.

"I... think you might want to be left alone for a little while..." Toriel sighs before she looks back at you. "I'll wait until you're ready to talk to me. I just want to help you, so please let me do so..." she looks almost pleading. She wants to help you but you keep pushing her away. With those words, Toriel leaves you alone in the dimly lit cavern, disappearing behind a stone arch on the far end of the room.

And now you're alone again. What do you do now?

[] Cry
[] Sleep
[] Write-in
 
'Am I too scary? This has never happened before...' she thinks to herself.

Awwwwww...

[X] Psyche yourself up. You can't stay in this room forever. Maybe things will be different down here.
 
[X] Psyche yourself up. You can't stay in this room forever. Maybe things will be different down here.
- [X] They can't be worse, right?
- [X] Don't think about how things could be worse.
 
[X] Psyche yourself up. You can't stay in this room forever. Maybe things will be different down here.
 
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