To The Ends of the Galaxy: A Space Opera Quest

[X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
 
[X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
Adhoc vote count started by Crilltic on Mar 2, 2018 at 10:46 PM, finished with 27 posts and 20 votes.

  • [X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
    [X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
    [x] The eldest son of one of the senior Peers of Erum, a genetic weakling who has honed his mind and his viciousness to compensate. You are amid the Subjects of the capital of your father's fief, the rich world of Nikia; a world which has grown fat with trade and industry.
    [X] An outsider to the Erumi Court, a confirmed genius taken on by the Qyasar Erum as a secretary from a Cartosian auxiliary force. You are in transit on the world of Pila, a regional capital of Erum, on layover until the next military transport arrives to take you on to Rum.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
[X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
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Since this is one of the most important choices you have, determining to a considerable extent what the Quest will actually look like, I'll close the vote out in seven or eight more hours this evening (my time). If people have any questions please go ahead and ask them.

Also the temporary map of Erum space until such time as I can get a better map made for you all;

 
So, what is the difference between a Citizen and a Peer in rights, and are there non-Citizens, and if so, how numerous are they?

Citizens are enfranchised members of the Erumi population, either recognized as a descendant of the original settlers of Rum or given such status due to contributions to the Erumi State. They can elect leaders on the local and planetary level and provide much of the core of officers in the Erumi Army and Navy. Peers are the heads of particularly outstanding Citizen families who are recognized as such by the Qyasar and the Assembly of Peers; in effect they are nobility, and the Assembly of Peers needs to acclaim the Qyasar's choice of heir and approve taxes and so on, though stronger Qyasars can cow them and they don't really have the independent legitimacy of a proto-Parliament.

Subjects are, of course, those members of the Erumi population who are not Citizens.
 
Well, let's see where things stand.

EDIT: Granted could have hand-tallied. So for the last stretch of votes I'll throw in a bit more information, especially about the kind of quests you can expect from each character.

Theodora is the daughter of Qyasar Philip V, and her role in the Quest is likely to focus on dynastic intrigue unless you wrench her into becoming a strategos. And then it'll probably involve a lot of dynastic intrigue and warfare. Erumi politics are a snake pit; the Queens all hate each other and are doing their best to spread that hate to their offspring, while the Peers will try to claw back power from the Crown any chance they get.

Nicolas, the son of the guardswoman Kynane, is an orphan being groomed for a role as a strategos and possibly a statesman. His Quest would focus more on warfare, maybe also diplomacy and administration, as his position in the Corps of Pages allows him to interact with up-and-coming Peers and royalty. But maybe there are questions about just who Nicolas' father is and why Qyasar Philip is so interested in his career...

Asminia of Cartos, a young genius personally recruited by the Qyasar Philip, would have a freer path of development. Administration, diplomacy, and espionage are all possibilities, as is the chance to become a strategos. Her biggest challenge is being taken seriously by the Peers who make up the strategoi of the Erumi forces due to her foreign origins.

Dmitri of the House of Iolas is the son of one of the most powerful Peers, though rendered comparatively frail by a rare genetic flaw. His quest is simply to claw his way to power and respect by leveraging his skills at intrigue and sheer ruthlessness, either as a Master of Spies or as a usurper. He's very different from the other choices in having an independent power base, but is also more directly opposed to many other characters.
Adhoc vote count started by Broken Base on Mar 3, 2018 at 6:43 AM, finished with 28 posts and 21 votes.

  • [X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
    [X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
    [x] The eldest son of one of the senior Peers of Erum, a genetic weakling who has honed his mind and his viciousness to compensate. You are amid the Subjects of the capital of your father's fief, the rich world of Nikia; a world which has grown fat with trade and industry.
    [X] An outsider to the Erumi Court, a confirmed genius taken on by the Qyasar Erum as a secretary from a Cartosian auxiliary force. You are in transit on the world of Pila, a regional capital of Erum, on layover until the next military transport arrives to take you on to Rum.
 
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[X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
 
[X] The only son of a decorated soldier, one who gave her life to protect the Qyasar Erum from an assassination attempt by one of his many enemies. You have been honored with an assignment to the Corps of Pages alongside his own heir and are watching from the capital world of Rum.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
The vote is closing in quite a bit. I'll extend out for another four-five hours.

Once the character is selected, we'll go back to the past for a bit more customization.

What's going to happen is that you'll make a few more choices that will establish particular values, virtues, weaknesses, and help allocate Stats. As in most Quests with CK2 style character profiles there will be five core stats that establish general competence in broad areas. Some portion of those stats will be pre-allocated; obviously more of those stats will be pre-allocated with the older character choices, Dmitri and Asminia. You'll have more freedom with Theodora or Nicolas to determine which stats to prioritize and grow. There are also Traits which will modify Stats and provide narrative bonuses and drawbacks, which can be gained as a result of particular choices or which are a result of inheritance.

Some choices will involve rolling a d100 against a set difficulty, with one applicable Stat value modified by any applicable traits providing a bonus to the roll of 1/2 value. External and circumstantial factors can further modify the roll, either adding or subtracting from the value of the roll. Arranging favorable circumstances by recruiting assistance from others, taking advantage of variable conditions, laying down groundwork over time, and otherwise stacking the deck may be the only way to succeed at some very difficult rolls.

You can also get other characters to take actions for you, but you will not know their exact stats- your character will only have an impression of their general competence, and may very well be mistaken for good or ill. In some paths managing subordinates and making appropriate use of allies will be a key feature. There are others paths which are more self-reliant, but you'll be forgoing opportunities in favor of micromanaging or limiting your scope of action in the setting.

Every character, NPC and PC alike, starts out at a 5 in each of the relevant stats. That represents a baseline against which training, education, experience, and traits will improve. Falling below a 5 in a stat represents some sort of infirmity or serious failing. A stat with a value of 10 represents basic trained competence, while valuable or particularly capable individual would have between 11-20 in their areas of focus. Any stat over a value of 20 is almost legendary competence. A stat at 30 or above is near-superhuman ability.

Certain other Values will be derived from a combination of Stats, Traits, resources, past experience, demonstrated ability, and so on. Personal Combat Skill is derived from specific training, as well as certain Traits, and determines roughly how skilled a combatant the character is. Reputation covers how the character is seen by the public and those who do not personally know the character, and is derived in part from Traits (especially Virtues and Vices) and in part from successes and failures in various spheres of activity. Authority is a combination of formal legitimacy from position and perceived alignment with the collective good, and is influenced heavily by choices and certain Traits as well as by being appointed to offices and proximity to the royal family. Influence covers one's ability to socially coerce large segments of the population by cultural power or favors or blackmail or deception and is heavily influenced by connections with other characters, as well as Intrigue and Diplomacy skills and Traits. Finally Wealth is simply a measure of the kinds of resources you can use both in your own right and separately as a function of your formal position, and is mostly useful for augmenting other values or helping provide modifiers for rolls.
 
[X] The middle daughter of the Qyasar Erum and his Spartan bride, a tween just now reckoning with knowledge of her fate as a dynastic pawn. You are watching the address with your older half-brother, the heir to the throne, on the border world of Teotihuacan where your father is holding forth with the Assembly of Peers.
 
#2 Birthday Girl
The Year 860 in the Age of the Great Renewal

Her Royal Highness Princess Theodora, daughter of Philip and Olympia, scion of the Argolid and Winslow Dynasties, was doing her best to pout in an appropriately noble fashion as she squirmed in resistance against her mother's comb. The aforementioned Olympia was having none of it, showing the expected Spartan dedication to working out the tangles in her daughter's unruly hair. After a few minutes of effort, and with some tears and yelps from Theodora, the effort was deemed satisfactory.

"There, there," Olympia said, now hugging the birthday girl. "That wasn't so bad, was it? Now you look like a perfect little princess."

Theodora continued to pout as she slid out of her mother's lap, even as she looked at herself in the mirror. The ceremonial peplos she wore draped over her form divested itself of wrinkles, the smart fabric ensuring that only the folds of an idealized ancient statue were displayed. The scarlet of the hem lightened to a deep rose color as it inched up across her thigh and chest, with a sunburst of orange fringing around her neck. It was regal enough, she judged with her five year old sense of fashion.

"Can I wear the tiara too, mommy?" She finally had enough pouting, and so decided to parlay stopping it for another reward.

Her mother smiled sweetly at her and sighed. "Your father spoils you, little dove." But she took up from her dresser the golden crown, fashioned as a wreath of olive leaves circling around a centerpiece of aquamarine, and placed it upon her daughter's head.

Theodora beamed as she preened in the mirror. The preening was interrupted by her mother slipping a leather belt around her waist with a prominent, and in her opinion ugly, grey shield generator. But on the whole she was most satisfied with her appearance.

"Now, we must get to the temple on time," her mother said, gently shooing her toward the door. "Your father has arranged a blessing for you by the Patriarch of Rum and it would not do to be late. Royalty must never disappoint."

Theodora pouted again, she didn't want to go to the temple. She just wanted to get to the part where there would be cake and gifts like mother had promised. But a glance up made it clear her mother wasn't going to budge so she took an offered hand. They walked out of the family bedroom into the hallway leading out through the vestibule of their modest urban villa.

A file of armored somatophylakes waited for them as escort. The four men and women were chosen for their strength, skill at arms, discretion, and absolute loyalty. Her mother greeted them with a smile and a brief wave, which was returned with the clenched-arm salute of Erumi soldiers. Olympia had always told Theodora to memorize those men and women but she was still having trouble keeping up with their names, and anyway the silvered cuirasses and rounded helmets of the bodyguard were distinctive enough she could always find them.

Outside the sun was up and the sky orange with only a few wispy clouds. Their home was just across from the Pontine Sea, in the Sarayburnu district which had been carefully zoned and housed to retain a degree of nature. There were no vast skyscrapers or even larger arcology domes to spoil the view of the sea and the mountains on the island of Rhodos out on the horizon. Alas the colony of Rumi sea weasels that congregated in the area were out elsewhere so Theodora was denied her favorite site of the cute animals being cute before she was hustled into an autochar by her mother.

The drive was relatively short. Sarayburnu gave way to a vast parkland of salt tolerant native trees bearing purple canopies, with roads winding on either side and then converging in the center of the protected zone at a great stone temple of the Concord of Humanity. This particular temple was built as an ancient basilica, formed in sober marble and operated by the Orthodox-Catholic Church of the One God, and dedicated to the theotokos. That was all being blathered out by a computer generated voice in the back of the autochar from a learning tape that her mother had put on and which Theodora was doing her best to ignore. But she was also having to keep her impulse to fidget at bay, since she knew her mother wouldn't like it if she showed she wasn't interested.

Outside of the temple a large crowd milled, kept at bay by lines of lictors brandishing the stylized shock-clubs of their profession and using their rectangular shields as an improvised fence. On one side of the crowd an autochar parking lot had been established, along with spaces for horses both animal and mechanical. Theodora felt self-conscious as she left the cab of the autochar with her mother. She reached instinctive for her mother's hand and was reassured to find it waiting for her.

"All of these people wanted to see you, little dove," Olympia said as she nudged Theodora to follow her example and wave over to the masses. "They are wishing for the One God to bestow his blessings on you. All so that you can help guide the royal family to rule well. Remember what your Spartan ancestors knew, that those who rule are the true servants of those below them."

Theodora waved, nervously, and was shocked by bursts of light from the crowd. But she was soon delighted by a cheer in her direction, and as she walked past the line of lictors soon felt confident enough to let go of her mother's hand and wave vigorously at both sides of the people.

They were ushered up the steps of the temple by another contingent of somatophylakes and passed through an exterior colonnade before entering the through the great sandalwood doors of the temple proper. Where the exterior of the temple was a stately white marble, the interior was richly appointed in a riot of color and art. The walls of the nave were decorated with rich mosaics depicting scenes from the homeworld, of ancient history and saints and martyrs. Ahead of them, back toward the templon enclosing off the altar, holy icons and crosses of the finest goldwork and jewels were displayed to the congregation. Above them on a ceiling a fresco arranged the universe according to the visions of heaven, with galaxies and stars and planets in alignment around the empty throne of the Creator accepted by all the factions of the Concord of Humanity. A haloed female figure stood by the throne, holding a child, as if to stake a claim; for this was, after all, an Orthodox-Catholic temple. It was all very different from the sparsely appointed neocrete Universalist temple that she normally attended with her mother and sisters.

Theodora followed her mother to the first row of pews, taking a seat on the left side of the aisle. Father was waiting in an imperial seat at the front of the nave, just before the templon. The right side of the pews, where other members of the very extended royal family might have sat, were empty. Incense wafted in from the altar, and soon the service began. Her sisters weren't present either, though in their case at least she knew Sophia was at school and Irene was too young to attend.

The chanting of the choir and the priests passing by with censers of incense to bless the temple engaged Theodora briefly, but soon it all became very boring. The Patriarch of Erumi was conducting the mass himself, in the fine purple with gold detailing vestments that were the mark of his station. In between speaking to the assisting priests he sent a few glares at her father, which wasn't very proper. The branches of the Concord was supposed to welcome all believers despite their particular traditions, mother had said. And the mass the Patriarch conducted droned on and on, which was made worse by the way it was given in unintelligible Latin rather than Koine or at least Anglic. Theodora had to fight hard to keep from squirming or even worse nodding off to sleep.

Finally the Patriarch stepped up with his censer to waft incense on her and say his blessing on behalf of the Creator at her. She was ready to go and only too happy to receive his hand on her head. A brief prayer and a nod and it was all over. The congregation proper took Eucharist and after some more chanting she was finally free to get up. Mother swatted her as she stretched as her feet hit the ground. The somatophylakes escorted them out down the aisle in the wake her her father, ahead of everyone else.

Outside the doors she had a rare chance to speak with her Father. He was as tall and powerful-looking as ever, even wearing the purple and scarlet chlamys cloak of his office instead of a set of armor. A single band of iron worn around his forehead only partly tamed an unruly head of shoulder-length hair. He smiled at Theodora and patted her on the top of her head.

"That wasn't so bad was it, Dora?"

"No sir," she said, enjoying the headpats. "Daddy, can I ride with you to the palace?"

Qyasar Erum Philip, the most powerful man within a few hundred light years, chuckled at the request. He looked over to his third wife standing by the doors of the temple and nodded. "Of course, little one. Let's ride."

He swept Theodora up in his arms and let her climb on around his neck as he walked past the still cheering mobs on either side on his way back to the parking spot. The somatophylakes with him watched the crowd like hawks; though Theodora thought she heard some sighing among them.

Theodora's eyes widened at the sight of her father's steed, the chrome-polished mechanical stallion Traveler. It stood up to her father's height, with a seating bench shaped like a horse's back on top of hover-engines and a stylized head where the shield projector was located. Her father slipped her down into the far end of the bench and checked her belt to see that her personal shield was turned on. "Hold on tightly," he ordered as he mounted astride the beast; once he was settled, Theodora grasped his waist as the mount took off.

Skimming along at dozens of kilometers per hour on a cushion of air, and surrounded by an esoteric energy field, with her father grasping the reins was the highlight of the day for Theodora. Her father indulged her by veering off into the park for a bit, riding through forest and grasslands with the sea breeze blowing around them before hitting the main roads. She caught sight of other riders with them, somatophylakes now wielding the lances of Erumi cavalry, but they were far enough away that she could pretend it was just her and her father around.

Of course her father was a very busy man, and soon enough they had to return to the main highway leading east to The City proper. Of course traffic was light, diverted by the lictors and patrolling guardsmen ahead of the Imperial Presence. There was nothing in their way to Argos Palace, the sprawling complex of offices and residences that made up the nerve center of Erum. Theodora hated the place, it was so big and cold and imposing, but she was willing to overlook that for presents. And her mother had assured her there would be many, many presents.

The life of an Argolid princess was not all presents. As her father hoisted her off Traveler after they docked in the exclusive royal hanger running under the palace, he spoke to her of duty. "You're old enough now to start serving as a Princess ought. Enjoy this day, and tomorrow you may have your mother tell me how you wish to benefit the state."



After a long day enjoying the entertainments and presents for her fifth birthday party, Princess Theodora spent the evening before her bedtime discussing what she wanted to do with her mother. In the end, they decided on...

[ ] Giving alms to the poor. There was a long tradition of fortunate Erumi providing financial help to the poor of The City out of the various temples of the megalopolis. Theodora would sponsor alms-giving at the Topi Universalist Temple, in The City's working class district, and meet some of the less fortunate children of the capital.

[ ] Visiting a military hospital. There was no war going on at the moment, but training accidents and border skirmishes and routine patrols saw a steady stream of wounded soldiers arriving for treatment in The City. The Argolid dynasty had been installed at the point of spears and so a special relationship between the Crown and the military must always be maintained.

[ ] Presenting a liturgy to the Sarayburnu Universalist Temple. The Concord of Humanity in its many branches sees to the souls of the population as the dynasty sees to their material needs. A liturgy, an artistic project designed to beautify a temple and uplift its congregation, would strengthen the Concord and remind everyone that the Argolids were rightful protectors of the Ethical Compact.

[ ] Arranging a charity concert. Theodora has been wanting to see Heyali perform in person for a while, and they'd certainly not refuse a request from the royal palace to headline a concert for orphans. It was a perfect alignment of duty and Theodora's own desires.
 
[X] Arranging a charity concert. Theodora has been wanting to see Heyali perform in person for a while, and they'd certainly not refuse a request from the royal palace to headline a concert for orphans. It was a perfect alignment of duty and Theodora's own desires.
 
And with this chapter (and the quality of the writing) this setting has become even better!

[X] Arranging a charity concert. Theodora has been wanting to see Heyali perform in person for a while, and they'd certainly not refuse a request from the royal palace to headline a concert for orphans. It was a perfect alignment of duty and Theodora's own desires.[/QUOTE]
 
We're 5 and thus have leniency to be a little selfish (though to a good end), and we did decide this on our BIRTHDAY, so might as well spoil ourselves a little.

[X] Arranging a charity concert. Theodora has been wanting to see Heyali perform in person for a while, and they'd certainly not refuse a request from the royal palace to headline a concert for orphans. It was a perfect alignment of duty and Theodora's own desires.
 
[X] Presenting a liturgy to the Sarayburnu Universalist Temple. The Concord of Humanity in its many branches sees to the souls of the population as the dynasty sees to their material needs. A liturgy, an artistic project designed to beautify a temple and uplift its congregation, would strengthen the Concord and remind everyone that the Argolids were rightful protectors of the Ethical Compact.
 
[X] Giving alms to the poor. There was a long tradition of fortunate Erumi providing financial help to the poor of The City out of the various temples of the megalopolis. Theodora would sponsor alms-giving at the Topi Universalist Temple, in The City's working class district, and meet some of the less fortunate children of the capital.
 
[x] Arranging a charity concert. Theodora has been wanting to see Heyali perform in person for a while, and they'd certainly not refuse a request from the royal palace to headline a concert for orphans. It was a perfect alignment of duty and Theodora's own desires.
 
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