Enviornmentally-minded Endbringers, you say?

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Behemoth: "Dynakinesis!"

Leviathan: "Hydrokinesis!"

Ziz: "Telepathy/Telekinesis!"

???: "By your powers combined, I am CAPTAIN ENDBRINGER!"


---Later...---

Taylor: "...and what did we learn today, Sera?"

Sera: "Um...that 'Heart' might have been what made Captain Planet a pun-spewing genie with a mullet instead of a horrifying avatar of elemental destruction?"

Taylor: "Okay, new rule: if you have an idea, even if it's just wanting to add a new item to the grocery list, you run it by me first."

Sera: "That's probably a good idea."

Taylor: "It is definitely a good idea."


Because you have made this relevant. Just...


Sera: "It'll work this time, we have Heart!"

Taylor: "Just to confirm, you have the metaphorical Heart meaning empathy and compassion and not a literal heart which is a blood pump critical to life."

Sera: "... I'll put this back."

Taylor: "You do that."
Oh god why? I'm dying.
 
Dinah meets the sisters by Observed
So.... This is brilliant.
I am hoping that after Taylor's powers come in they have a sort of wonder twins-ish thing going on. Like both brutes/tinkers but Sera has telekinesis and Taylor has combat precog (Think short range, local time danger-sense type stuff) and then when they hold hands and use their powers together, they get the full package (the full Simurgh experience minus the shape and being mind-controlled).

I'd also like to see Dinah stumble across them while trying to escape Coil;

Dinah ran down the boardwalk, her clothes dirty and her legs grazed. The young girl holding back tears and trying to avoid the gazes of the shoppers around her.
She'd been on the run for two days and she was thirsty, hungry, tired and she knew her parents were dead.

'Chance of escaping in the next 5 mins: 12%'

She spotted them, the guards along the boardwalk moving, towards her.

'Chance of the guards working for Them: 82%'

Her head ached and she did her best to stumble into a nearby clothing store. She tripped and collided with someone but was caught by their arms.

"Hey, are you alright?" Said the girl. She had long brown hair and glasses. Her mouth was pursed a little and her expression was concerned.

'Chance of Safety if I ask her for help: 50%'

Dinah wished the number was higher but this was the best she'd get, a coinflip. There was a slight rattle as the curtain of a nearby changing room was drawn back but Dinah held the girl's gaze.

"Hey, sis. Check me- Whats wrong?" The numbers then did something they had never done before. They changed.
'Chance of Safety if I ask her for help: 100%'

"Help me," Dinah croaked.
 
So.... This is brilliant.
I am hoping that after Taylor's powers come in they have a sort of wonder twins-ish thing going on. Like both brutes/tinkers but Sera has telekinesis and Taylor has combat precog (Think short range, local time danger-sense type stuff) and then when they hold hands and use their powers together, they get the full package (the full Simurgh experience minus the shape and being mind-controlled).

I'd also like to see Dinah stumble across them while trying to escape Coil;

Dinah ran down the boardwalk, her clothes dirty and her legs grazed. The young girl holding back tears and trying to avoid the gazes of the shoppers around her.
She'd been on the run for two days and she was thirsty, hungry, tired and she knew her parents were dead.

'Chance of escaping in the next 5 mins: 12%'

She spotted them, the guards along the boardwalk moving, towards her.

'Chance of the guards working for Them: 82%'

Her head ached and she did her best to stumble into a nearby clothing store. She tripped and collided with someone but was caught by their arms.

"Hey, are you alright?" Said the girl. She had long brown hair and glasses. Her mouth was pursed a little and her expression was concerned.

'Chance of Safety if I ask her for help: 50%'

Dinah wished the number was higher but this was the best she'd get, a coinflip. There was a slight rattle as the curtain of a nearby changing room was drawn back but Dinah held the girl's gaze.

"Hey, sis. Check me- Whats wrong?" The numbers then did something they had never done before. They changed.
'Chance of Safety if I ask her for help: 100%'

"Help me," Dinah croaked.
I'm sorry but all I got from this was a desire to see the hobo adventures of Lisa and Dinah.
 
Enviornmentally-minded Endbringers, you say?

-----

Behemoth: "Dynakinesis!"

Leviathan: "Hydrokinesis!"

Ziz: "Telepathy/Telekinesis!"

???: "By your powers combined, I am CAPTAIN ENDBRINGER!"


---Later...---

Taylor: "...and what did we learn today, Sera?"

Sera: "Um...that 'Heart' might have been what made Captain Planet a pun-spewing genie with a mullet instead of a horrifying avatar of elemental destruction?"

Taylor: "Okay, new rule: if you have an idea, even if it's just wanting to add a new item to the grocery list, you run it by me first."

Sera: "That's probably a good idea."

Taylor: "It is definitely a good idea."
Bookmarked.
 
...I had no idea how much I wanted this until now.

Fukken watched.
 
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the death of one of your old friend's parents who you knew personally will hit someone hard, no matter how much you've tried to dissociate from it
I don't think this is true. Certainly it would be for Emma here and now, especially since she's just lying to herself and it's barely even been a year since she dropped Taylor, but not everyone works the same way.

I mean, I didn't even try to distance myself from people I'd known from kindergarten to year 12 of high school, and by the end of my first year out of school I could barely remember names and faces of all But a handful. Ten year later and I can't remember anything simply because they make up absolutely no part of my life.

At some point people turn into strangers. If Taylor had managed to drop out of school, I doubt Emma would recognize her in passing after two years apart, much less feel anything about her parents.
 
Sometimes I wish humans could hibernate. That way I could just go into hibernation now and when I woke up there would be new chapters.

If I could have any power from Worm it would probably be Khonsu's. I'd just put myself in a time field for a few seconds and then step out and a year would have past. Sure I'd have lost my apartment and job, but all my favorite stories would be updated. Worth.
 
A promising start. So many fics have bullying angst, it's nice to see this fic's show of the angst punctuated by a fist to the face.
 
Sometimes I wish humans could hibernate. That way I could just go into hibernation now and when I woke up there would be new chapters.

If I could have any power from Worm it would probably be Khonsu's. I'd just put myself in a time field for a few seconds and then step out and a year would have past. Sure I'd have lost my apartment and job, but all my favorite stories would be updated. Worth.
Everything wouldn't be like smelling like roses. Everybody who you know would be older and more experienced if not dead depending how far you would go. There is movie which is close about this. Adam Sandler's Click.

Like ziz story.
 
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