88. Big Sister Is on the Case!
Here's the latest chapter. I hope you enjoy it:

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Big Sister Is on the Case!
On that bright, chilly morning, Bellona had woken with a burning feeling of curiosity like a goad in her side. Somewhere out there was a mystery to be solved; she felt the tantalizing lure of a discovery yet to be made. She'd heard rumours of a ghost ship that had risen from the depths and started attacking Aspiti ships. From the testimony of some of the survivors, she knew it was a warship of a style that had been common a few centuries ago; crewed by the ghosts of Queli sailors and the hate-filled spectre of a powerful wizard, it had become a dark legend among sailors of the Sea of Squalls.

From her own research, Bellona believed that the ghost ship had some connection with Egan Korentyne, a Rivayni admiral who had fought off an invasion by the Aspiti Empire seeking to take advantage of Quellonia while it was ravaged by civil war; according to the official histories, Korentyne had lost the battle and most of his fleet, but in doing so had inflicted such disastrous damage that the Aspitis had been unable to continue with their planned invasion. Indeed, their victory had been so costly, in terms of ships and men, that they had avoided going to war with Quellonia ever since.

Why did this ghost ship only appear recently?
She wondered. It's been two centuries. Most ghosts make their presence felt almost immediately. Why the delay, in this case? Has something changed?

In her visit to Flotsam, she'd expected to pick up a few ritual ingredients and listen to dockside rumours about the ghost ship. She hadn't expected to have to solve the mystery of Moraine's disappearance. She'd been afraid that the alcoholic former prostitute would slip back into bad habits and that she'd have to deal with the consequences, but she hadn't expected her to disappear altogether. Also, Elys' insistence on playing detective and dragging her friends along with her was causing her a great deal of stress. Elys had a wonderful imagination; she often played games of make-believe, dreaming up imaginary worlds where she ruled over her friends like a little tyrant… or something like that. Really, Bellona hadn't paid enough attention to what happened in Elys' games to be sure of what they actually involved; she'd only glanced at them briefly while she'd been busy with other things. Still, she admired Elys's adventurous spirit, but she worried that it might lead her into danger, especially since she showed little awareness of how perilous a town like Flotsam could be. She didn't want to have to protect Elys and her friends from criminal gangs who wanted to kidnap and enslave them, or anything like that. Not because she wasn't capable of protecting them; she was, but she'd prefer not to have to.

While Elys conducted her own investigation, Bellona passed some of the time planning how she'd protect them if it came to a fight. Throw an illusion over them to hide them, shout at them to get behind cover, summon a spirit weapon, mentally dominate one of the attackers and get them fighting among themselves, use illusions to distract or blind my enemies, summon a warrior spirit to aid me… She was confident that she could put up a good fight, if it came to it.

Before long, she came to the conclusion that Elys and her friends shouldn't be involved in this. They were just little girls! Yes, even Catharne the dragon-horse-thing! They definitely shouldn't be investigating something as sordid and seamy as the story of Moraine's disappearance was shaping up to be. She would spare them the grisly details if she could.

'Does she have any friends here?' asked your necromancer chaperone. 'Is there anyone here who knows her better than you?'

The bartender pointed to his regulars, all of whom were listening intently to your conversation. 'Ask any of them. They all know her. Some of them intimately, if you get my meaning.'

Bellona held her head in your hands. 'All right… Elys, I really think I should take you back to your parents. You don't need to be involved in this. Please?'
To her credit, Elys didn't argue. She merely and said, 'Yes, I think that would be for the best.'

Bellona waited until she and Jana had left the Drink. Then, she cast around with her second sight, looking for traces of Moraine's soul. She nodded thoughtfully and said, 'I'll be back.'

Outside, she told Elys and her friends, 'Roylott Flawse has a base up on the hill. Most likely, that's where we'll find your parents. You'll be safe there.' She hesitated. After she'd cast a minor spell to make it impossible for anyone outside their little circle to eavesdrop on their conversation, she said, 'By the way, you should know… somebody lied to you. I looked around the Drink and saw barely any traces of Jana's mother having been there.'

'So… the bartender lied about her going to the Drink every few nights?' said Elys, frowning.

'He lied about her trying to get men to buy drinks for her?' Jana said sharply.

'From what I saw, Moraine had been there once or twice, but not for long enough to leave much of an impression,' Bellona replied.

'Bastard. I'm going to kill him,' said Jana, drawing her cold iron dagger from seemingly nowhere.

'Please don't. Let Belle handle this,' said Elys. 'Put the dagger away, Jana.'

'I'm going to find your mother,' Bellona promised. 'There's still a chance I'll find her alive and well. That'll be more difficult if you start killing people who might not have been involved.'

'But he-!'

'Yes, he lied. Perhaps he was involved. Perhaps he's just a raving misogynist. Perhaps he enjoys telling cruel lies to young girls. I don't know. But I mean to find out.'

Elys glanced uneasily around the filthy, shadowy street. 'Let's just get out of here.'

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In the stronghold on the hill, Elys was reunited with her parents. Excitedly, she told them all about her recent adventures. Jana told them that her mother was missing and asked for help finding her. Catharne seemed glad to have found a building that was large enough for her to go inside. Bellona left them to it.

She spoke to Flotsam's governor, Roylott Flawse. In the years since he'd been given the job, he'd put on weight and a few wrinkles. He seemed to have lost some of his good humour; he wore a near-permanent worried frown. Still, his eyes were as sharp and knowing as ever.

'I asked you to keep an eye on Moraine,' she said. 'Did you?'

'Yes,' he said. 'One of my informants checked in on her just yesterday.'

'Just yesterday? Huh. I got the impression that she'd been gone for longer than that.'

'Yesterday, she was buying a few things in anticipation of her daughter's visit. She seemed happy,' said Flawse, paging back through his notebook.

'Do you happen to know what she bought?'

'Milk, eggs, flour, dried fruit. She said she was going to make a cake.'

'I didn't find any of that stuff in her lodgings. Hmm. Her daughter sent her some money each month. Do you know what she did with it?'

'She spent some of it to supplement her income, but didn't seem to know what to do with the rest. So, she asked me to look after it for her.'

'Why would she do that?'

'Well… she knew that I'd been asked to watch over her. She was renting her apartment from me. Very reasonable rates, I assure you. Almost negligible. And she'd got to know some of my informants by sight; Flotsam isn't a very big town. I suppose she thought the money would be safer with me than under the floorboards or wherever she might have hidden it.'

'May I see it?'

Flawse nodded. He showed her to his strongroom. The door was barred and had multiple locks to prevent intrusion. Inside, there were several large ironbound chests. Flawse unlocked one of them, opened it, and removed a drawstring bag that was filled almost to bulging. He poured out a pile of silver shards onto his desk. 'More than fifty shards,' he said, arranging them in stacks.

'That's a year of Jana's pay,' said Bellona, astonished.

'She loves her mother,' said Flawse with a shrug. 'And, to her credit, it seemed like Moraine was trying to improve herself.'

'So… she hadn't fallen back into bad habits?'

'Not according to any of my informants. She was staying off the drink, trying to support herself by washing and sewing and doing a few other odd jobs. She was doing her best.'

'If she'd gone to a tavern… why would she have done that, if she didn't drink?'

'She was trying to make friends. I don't think she was much good at it, which is probably one reason why she gave so much money to me for safekeeping; she knew she could be overly generous and was wary of being ripped off. But, uh… a tavern is a community hub, where people get together. It's more difficult if you don't drink, or you're trying not to drink, but Moraine might have gone there to meet some of her friends.'

'Or people she thought were friends,' Bellona mused. 'Thank you, Roylott. You've given me much to think about.'

'Anything else you need?'

'No. But I'll probably need you and some of your soldiers later. By the way, do you know anything about Sea Ghoul cultists in this town?'

'I've heard rumours. I suspect them of being involved in a few back-alley murders and killing one of my informants. I've got people hunting for them.'

'Do you know where they might be hiding?'

'Not really,' Flawse admitted. 'Most of what I know about them is based on circumstantial evidence. I'd be grateful for anything you can find out.'

'Back-alley murders?' Bellona paused, considering. 'Can you tell me where exactly?'

'I'll show you a map. I've plotted the locations of incidents the cultists might have been involved in. I can't see any pattern. Maybe you can,' said Flawse.

*

Possibly the next thing she should have done was to find some of Moraine's "friends" and ask them if they knew anything about her whereabouts. However, Bellona knew her persuasive skills weren't the best; she had no real aptitude for wheedling information out of people. On the other hand, she was a powerful necromancer. And there are secrets known only to the dead.

Following Flawse's map, she headed to the back alley where the corpse of one of his informants had been found. A scarred man with only one hand, he'd posed as a crippled beggar. Two weeks ago, someone had stabbed him; he'd run away, found a place to hide, and slowly bled to death. His body had been found by Flawse's men a few days later, when someone noticed the slightly-worse-than-usual stink.

When she found the place where his body had passed away, Bellona used her magic to call his soul back from the Halls of the Dead. Then, she reconstructed his soul – just a little – to give him back his sense of self, so she could talk to him. His ghost looked like the appearance of a grubby old man with a scraggly beard. Phantom blood oozed from a gaping wound in his chest. He only had one hand; apparently, he'd lost the other in a battle against pirates. Seeing her, he gave Bellona a lopsided grin.

'Ooh, what an honour,' he said. 'Never thought I was important enough for my death to be investigated by old King Gareth's court mage. I mean, that's why I'm here, right?'

'You are Kellon Milward?' asked Bellona. 'How did you die?'

'Sea Ghoul cultists, I think. I mean, I was investigating them. I found out they'd been kidnapping homeless people off the streets. And not just homeless people. People they thought nobody would miss. I was going to tell Cap'n Flawse what I'd found out, but… uh, they caught up with me first. Stabbed me. I ran away, otherwise they'd have stolen my soul, but by then I was a goner.'

'Do you know where I can find their hideout?'

'They've got a few meeting places around town, I think. I'm not sure where their actual hideout is, but I'd guess it's underground somewhere: a large cellar, or similar. That's where they'll be making sacrifices to their evil gods: somewhere in the dark and deep.'

'Do you know Moraine Netpicker? Did Flawse ever assign you to keep an eye on her?'

'Yeah. Nice woman. She'd usually drop a few coppers into my bowl. Even when I'm fairly sure she realised I was one of Flawse's informants. She… she'd had a hard life, I could tell, but she was trying to make it better. She was trying to be good, to be kind and sympathetic. She tried to make friends with the other washerwomen 'round here, but they rejected her. So, she made friends with some of the working girls. Never judged them for the choices they'd made, but she wanted to help them. Gave them food when they were down on their luck, patched them up when someone had been rough with them, and was a shoulder to cry on when they needed it. She was like a mother to those girls.'

'If only she'd been a mother to her actual daughter,' Bellona said acidly.

Kellon Milward's ghost winced. 'I'm not saying she was perfect. But she was trying to make up for the mistakes she'd made. She strived to be a better person.'

'That was unkind of me,' Bellona admitted. 'I served as Moraine's counsellor for a number of years; I tried to help her get over her depression and addiction to alcohol, but I feared that she'd lapse into bad habits as soon as I took my eyes off her. Perhaps I should have had more faith in her.'

'And more faith in your own abilities,' said the ghost with an encouraging smile. 'I mean, if you were Moraine's counsellor, you must've done a good job.'

'Moraine has disappeared. Do you know what might have happened to her?'

'Kidnapped by Sea Ghoul cultists? I know they kidnapped a few of her friends, the girls she was trying to look after. Or… I know one of them said she didn't want to be a whore no more. Moraine said she'd sponsor her to move somewhere else and start a new life. Could be her pimp took offense at Moraine interfering in his business. I don't know what he'd have done…' The ghost shrugged. 'I wasn't around for any of that. I was gone, by then.'

'Thank you for talking to me,' said Bellona, bowing her head. 'You've been very helpful.'

'I hope you hunt down the cultists who did this to me,' he said, indicating his chest wound. 'Good luck finding Moraine. And… goodbye, I guess.'

'I wish you well in the next life,' said Bellona. She took a moment to restore his soul to the state it had been in before she'd summoned it. Afterwards, she sent it back to the Halls of the Forgotten God to await reincarnation.

Reviewing her investigation so far, what conclusions did Bellona come to?

1. The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was:
[] Sailor: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Sailor: lying.
[] Sailor: exaggerating.
[] Sailor: mistaken.
[] Sailor: involved in her disappearance.

2. The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was:
[] Shifty: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Shifty: just being nasty.
[] Shifty: involved in her disappearance.

3. The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was:
[] Bartender: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Bartender: lying.
[] Bartender: mistaken.
[] Bartender: trying to get extra money out of you.
[] Bartender: involved in her disappearance.

4. When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was:
[] Flawse: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Flawse: lying.
[] Flawse: mistaken.
[] Flawse: involved in her disappearance.

5. Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was:
[] Milward: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Milward: lying.
[] Milward: mistaken.
[] Milward: involved in her disappearance.

What did Bellona decide to do next?

[] Write in.

What you decide to do next will depend entirely on who you think has been lying to you. But if no one comes up with any ideas for what you might do next, I'll post a list of possible options sometime in the next week.
 
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[X] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was lying or exaggerating

[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.

[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Roylott Flawse had something to do with Jana's mother's disappearance.... Really? Who would believe this? Shame on you Chandagnac. For shame....

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Kellon Milward's ghost had something to do with Jana's mother's disappearance. Really? I'm fairly certain ghosts can't lie to the necromancer summoning them. I might have it mixed up with another story, but I might not.

What to do next:
[X] Focus on the investigation
-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her. He also said that the cultists have been kidnapping homeless people and people others won't miss.
--[X] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken. Or maybe on the working girl that got taken.
-[X] Check in on the pimp for the missing working girl. He might have something to do with Moraine's disappearance.
 
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[] Roylott Flawse had something to do with Jana's mother's disappearance.... Really? Who would believe this? Shame on you Chandagnac. For shame....
[] Kellon Milward's ghost had something to do with Jana's mother's disappearance. Really? I'm fairly certain ghosts can't lie to the necromancer summoning them. I might have it mixed up with another story, but I might not.
Hey! I didn't say that Bellona would think that all of those options were believable, or even remotely plausible. Some of those options are red herrings, some are just so I can see who's paying attention, and some are camouflage for the correct options I thought might otherwise be too obvious.

Shame on me? Why? :confused:

[X] Stake out the locations Kellon Milward's ghost said the Sea Cultists might meet up.
Bear in mind, Kellon Milward never told Bellona where they might meet up. He said, "They've got a few meeting places around town, I think." But he was very vague as to where those meeting places actually were. If you want to find those meeting places, you'll need to find another source of information.

Anyway, I hope to see more people reading this story. It seems to have died down a lot. I'm sorry I can only update once a week at the moment. Sorry!

Please vote!

EDIT: I wouldn't want you guys to think I've been idle while I haven't been writing for my quests. In an effort to unwind after work, I've started painting fantasy miniatures for my friend's Pathfinder campaign. Here's a Dwarf Cleric I painted recently:

 
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*sigh* We went with the wrong protagonist. Would be nice to have someone who could do this:


I guess this is the way I like our investigations. We got several testimonies, and more clues than we know what to do with. I suppose that's the ideal balance - give us a number of actions to pursue certain leads, then ask for conclusions.

Some of them were gruff, unpleasant men who didn't like being roused before noon, but when they saw Catharne the horse-sized dragonling they became remarkably civil, though they wouldn't stop staring at her sharp fangs and clawed feet. From one of them, you learned that Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole.

'What's it called?' you asked, glancing anxiously at Jana; taking this as a suggestion that her mother might have started drinking alcohol again, her scowl turned faintly murderous.

'Dunno. Does it have a name?' asked the grizzled old sailor, scratching his chin. 'We just call it "the Drink".'

'Does she drink?' Jana asked acidly.

'Everyone drinks. You'd die of thirst if you didn't.'

'Alcohol, I meant.'

'Uhh, I guess so. I doubt she'd hang out in a place like that for the pleasure of the conversation. So… yeah.' The sailor looked nervously at Catharne. 'Can I go now?'

'Yes, all right,' you said. You didn't think you'd get any more useful information out of him.
He was scared, and wasn't being malicious at all. Did Moraine go to the bar a couple of times? She did. What do the sailors go to bars for? It was an absolutely natural thing for him to assume. His testimony is supported by Flawse's.

[x] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw it.

The next door was answered by a shifty young fellow who kept glancing past you as if he was expecting another visitor to show up. 'Whaddya want?' he asked.

'Do you know the woman who lives two doors down?'

'Left or right?'

'Um… left. My left, not your left.'

He sneered. 'The whore? No, ain't seen her.'

'My mom's not a whore!' Jana yelled. Then, because she had a streak of honesty which tended to reveal itself at inconvenient times, she muttered, 'Anymore.'

'She used to be, but she changed,' you said supportively.

The shifty young man gave you a sceptical look. 'People don't change,' he said softly. 'They just fool themselves into thinking they've changed.'

Bellona poked her head out of Jana's mother's apartment and asked, 'We're looking for her. Do you have any information that might be useful to us? Where might we find her?'

His lip curled in an expression of contempt. 'Check the back alleys. Check the harbour, see what's floating on the tide. Search through the rubbish, the slurry, and the muck. You'll find her eventually. Of course, by then, you might not want to.'
We know Moraine didn't make any friends among her neighbours, and the locals rejected her, except for the prostitutes. Their company likely didn't add to her reputation. This, too, is supported by Flawse's and Milward's testimonies.

[x] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.

Marching up to the bar, you addressed the large man standing behind it: 'When was the last time you saw… uh… Moraine?'

'Dunno,' he said, wiping the bar with a grimy cloth, making patterns in the dirt. 'What does she look like?'

You glanced at Jana. 'Um… curved nose, dark brown hair, tanned skin…'

'She's my mother,' said Jana, stepping up to the bar and defiantly sticking out her chin. 'She looks a lot like me. Have you seen her?'

'Maybe,' said the bartender. 'What's it worth to you?'

'Are you serious?' asked Bellona. 'She's looking for her mother. And you're asking for a bribe. Have you no shame?'

'You don't get anything for free in this life,' he said with a shrug. 'Not that I'd expect you to know much about that.'

With a growl, Bellona handed him two silver shards. 'What do you know about Moraine?' she asked. 'Apparently, she's one of your best customers.'

'That's a laugh. She hangs around here, making eyes at all the men, hoping that one of them will buy her a drink, but she never pays for anything.' The bartender. 'Just comes here looking for a pickup.'

'Does she come here often?' you asked.

'Every few nights, yeah.'

'When was the last time you saw her?'

'Three nights ago.'

'Does she have any friends here?' asked your necromancer chaperone. 'Is there anyone here who knows her better than you?'

The bartender pointed to his regulars, all of whom were listening intently to your conversation. 'Ask any of them. They all know her. Some of them intimately, if you get my meaning.'

The bartender was actively lying, we already established this. However, he is greedy, and since Moraine didn't come to the bar to drink and only talked to the patrons, there is a reason for him to dislike and badmouth her. I don't think it entirely justifies him lying about the frequency of her visits, though... and courtesy of the eel, we have suspicions that this could have been a meeting place for ghoul cultists.

Still, Catharne traced her to the Drink via smell, which suggests Moraine went there recently. The barman's words about her being there 3 days ago could well be the truth. It's not enough to attribute malicious intent.

[x] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.

Flawse has no reason to lie to us. What does a governor have to gain from it, Jana's salary? Most of his story checks out, though one thing stands out - he said she was seen yesterday preparing for Jana's return, yet we found a pile of dirty laundry in her house, and no sign of items she allegedly bought. Was he misinformed? He obviously does not get his information personally, and his informants are not infallible. If they are hired from the locals, they could well be bribed or be subversive in the first place.

Still, to deliberately attempt to muddle the facts of Moraine's disappearance they'd have to know who was it that they made disappear. It makes no sense for anyone who knew Moraine was Jana's mother and was under Flawse's protection to try and cover it up with something that can be easily checked to be false. It could have been an attempt at revenge against Elys and her parents for either taking the city or destroying the last cult, but it would have been very short-sighted, since it would invite immediate retribution upon discovery. And weren't the Ghouls going after people nobody would miss?

But if it isn't deliberate misinformation, then what is it?

Edit: Another possibility I could think of is that Moraine either discovered the cult, or they bagged her as a random prostitute and then went 'oh shit' when they realized who that was. In that case sacrificing an informant could be seen as logical, as they would have no choice but to delay the inevitable.

Anyway, I don't think Flawse was mistaken about Moraine not touching the alcohol, because the only tavern she was said to go to was 'The Drink', and the spell determined she wasn't a regular there. So on that account he was telling the truth, at least.

[x] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.

The informant... I think it needs no comments.

[x] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.

So we don't actually have much in the way of suspects. However, there is a minor inconsistency in Flawse's testimony regarding Moraine's time of disappearance.

The beggar mentioned the cultists have kidnapped one of her friends... could Moraine have tried to find out her whereabouts?

I believe there is a possibility of Flawse's informant lying to him.

I'll have to think about how to proceed from there, but since Ghouls have interest in souls and tend to store them for sacrifices, it makes sense to utilize our soul vision to try and trace them.
 
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There's a lot of choices. How many can be chosen? Why not just pick every option?
Choose as many as you like. But some of the options are blatantly contradictory, so if you choose all of them your conclusions won't make any sense. Please pick the options you think are correct.

Flawse has no reason to lie to us. What does a governor have to gain from it, Jana's salary? Most of his story checks out, though one thing stands out - he said she was seen yesterday preparing for Jana's return, yet we found a pile of dirty laundry in her house, and no sign of items she allegedly bought. Was he misinformed? He obviously does not get his information personally, and his informants are not infallible. If they are hired from the locals, they could well be bribed or be subversive in the first place.
You peered inside the empty apartment. In it, there was a fireplace, a few pots and pans, a basket containing a pile of dirty clothes, a large bucket, a sewing needle and thread, a few half-melted candles made of cheap tallow, a broomstick propped up in the corner, a small bed consisting of thick blankets over a layer of straw, and there were a few items of clothing strewn haphazardly over the earthen floor.
'Perhaps. I can see traces her soul has left behind,' she said. 'Can you feel the mud squelch under your feet? Smell how it reeks? Hear the cries from the market? Does this world seem real to you? Perhaps it does, but reality is only a thin veneer. This world was designed as a playhouse for souls. What you see is just the stage, the scenery in the background, or the masks and costumes they wear. Someday, you might train your eyes to see beyond…'

'Yeah, all right. What do your eyes see?'

'Moraine didn't spend much time in this apartment. It was just a place for her to sleep. And dream. We won't find any clues here.'
A few hints:
1. Moraine didn't spend very much time in her apartment, according to Bellona. So where did she spend it? If she was working as a washerwoman and seamstress, where was she doing all her work?
2. You didn't find any food in Moraine's apartment. Normally, you might have expected to find a lump of cheese or a bit of stale bread, or leftovers of some description, but you didn't find anything at all. So, where did she eat?
3. According to Flawse's informants, Moraine was planning to bake a cake for her daughter. However, in her apartment, she doesn't seem to have the right equipment for cake-making. Maybe she could use one of the pots as a makeshift mixing bowl, and she could bake the cake in the fireplace if she needed to, but she doesn't seem to have any cutlery or plates (normally, you'd expect those things to be stowed away in a cupboard, but Moraine's apartment doesn't have any real furniture). So how, exactly, was she planning to bake this cake? How was she planning to serve it?
 
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Well that is both worrying and encouraging, good on Moraine, also very sad as she might be dead now :(
Edit: I hit the wrong bracket key and initially posted a smilie, whoops.

[X] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw it.

[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.

[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.[/QUOTE]



I do find how vague Kellon was a bit concerning :/
A few hints:
1. Moraine didn't spend very much time in her apartment, according to Bellona. So where did she spend it? If she was working as a washerwoman and seamstress, where was she doing all her work?
2. You didn't find any food in Moraine's apartment. Normally, you might have expected to find a lump of cheese or a bit of stale bread, or leftovers of some description, but you didn't find anything at all. So, where did she eat?
3. According to Flawse's informants, Moraine was planning to bake a cake for her daughter. However, in her apartment, she doesn't seem to have the right equipment for cake-making. Maybe she could use one of the pots as a makeshift mixing bowl, and she could bake the cake in the fireplace if she needed to, but she doesn't seem to have any cutlery or plates (normally, you'd expect those things to be stowed away in a cupboard, but Moraine's apartment doesn't have any real furniture). So how, exactly, was she planning to bake this cake? How was she planning to serve it?
And now I am even more confused and less sure, I recalled some of this but was kind of glossing over it, arg, how do we square this?


[X] Focus on the investigation
-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her or that a local pimp may have taken offence at her and been responsible for her disappearance.
--[X] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
---[X] Check in on the pimp for the missing working girl. He might have something to do with Moraine's disappearance.
 
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Ugh. I'm really not very good at mysteries, but...

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.
[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.

Pretty damn sure none of those two are lying, at least.

[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
[X] The shifty young fellow may have connections to the pimp or other people with a reason to dislike Moraine.

Probably just being nasty, but if he doesn't like Moraine that could mean he's in some way linked to whoever made her disappear (though he may not necessarily have anything to do with the disappearance itself).

[X] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw its.

This guy has no real reason to lie, so I assume he's telling the truth.

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.

The bartender, on the other hand, I'm pretty confused about, since I'm not sure what reason he has for lying other than either just being a dick or being involved in her disappearance.

[X] Focus on the investigation
-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her or that a local pimp may have taken offence at her and been responsible for her disappearance.
--[X] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
---[X] Try to find out where exactly Moraine stores food and the like.
---[X] Ask about the bartender and the shifty young man.
 
Nope. I got nothing that would help he make sense of these hints.

Alright, Moraine didn't live or work in her house. Since we can be pretty sure she disappeared only very recently, the only conclusion is that she was using it as a roof for the night, while she spent her days elsewhere. Why did she pay rent to Flawse for a building she rarely uses? Because she couldn't have stayed at the place (places?) she works and eats. That excludes the possibility of her, say, moving in with someone else.

Where would she be then? She wasn't working to earn a living, that's for sure. Since she wasn't working at home and was looking for human contact and acceptance, I would suspect her trying to work in a sort of 'worker cooperative' where people pool in their resourses to shave off the costs of individual labor, just to help out... if I knew such things existed in Flotsam, which I doubt. Most of the local washerwomen were shunning her, anyway.

Regardless, it'd have to be somewhere big enough to let her cook (for herself and the prostitutes), sew and wash.

I would have assumed she'd operate out of one of the brothels, what with her close ties to the working girls and trying to become a support network for them, but that'd be a bit too far-fetched for a multitude of reasons. One of them being, with Flotsam the way it is, I don't think she'd stand the company of pimps who would exploit her friends every day.

So I am running out of options for places she could be at. I am wondering about the gatherings of Sea Ghouls cultists and what they are like, though... I had a passing interest in religious cults in the 90s, and a lot of them operated as communes wearing the guise of charity organisations, where they would gather disenfranchised people and offer them what they lacked - human warmth, a place to stay, a sense of community etc. It would not surprise me if she'd fall for that, but I would expect that having prior contact with the Ghoul followers would have provided her some ways to tell them apart.

The sailor said she frequented 'the Drink', and since he wouldn't have a reason to lie, I am considering that it was some building in the vicinity of the tavern that she often went to. After all, Catharne has lost her trail near the tavern, and we just assumed she'd go there, but that might not actually be the case.

That's as far as I can go with the information I have. I might be missing something, maybe even something obvious, but I'll need someone else to point it out for me.
 
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Nope. I got nothing that would help he make sense of these hints.
Those hints weren't meant to help you immediately solve the mystery: they were supposed to help you realise that Moraine lived and worked and spent most of her time away from her apartment. Where exactly did she spend her time? Well, you seem to have thought up some possibilities already.

Maybe you could go back and ask Flawse if any of his informants know where Moraine spent most of her time? I mean, he seems to have overlooked that detail earlier, but it would be easy for him to find out. Or you could talk to some of the prostitutes on the streets of Flotsam, in which case you'll probably find out what you need to know eventually.

By the way, the only reason Bellona is able to trace Moraine's soul so accurately is that she spent a lot of time with her while she served as her therapist. She's very familiar with Moraine. On the other hand, it would be almost impossible for her to trace the soul of someone she's never met.

Here's the vote tally so far:
Vote tally:
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[X] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was lying or exaggerating
No. of votes: 1
Hye

[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
No. of votes: 5
Hye, Nevill, Zam, Bommelom, veekie

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother comes here looking for a pickup was lying.
No. of votes: 5
Hye, Nevill, Zam, Bommelom, veekie

[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother was staying off the drink he was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 5
Hye, Nevill, Zam, Bommelom, veekie

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother a nice lady) was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 4
Hye, Nevill, Bommelom, veekie

[X] Focus on the investigation
No. of votes: 4
Hye, Zam, Bommelom, veekie

-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her. He also said that the cultists have been kidnapping homeless people and people others won't miss.
No. of votes: 1
Hye

--[X] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken. Or maybe on the working girl that got taken.
No. of votes: 1
Hye

-[X] Check in on the pimp for the missing working girl. He might have something to do with Moraine's disappearance.
No. of votes: 2
Hye, Zam

[x] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 2
Nevill, Zam

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother a nice lady) was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 1
Zam

-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her or that a local pimp may have taken offence at her and been responsible for her disappearance.
No. of votes: 3
Zam, Bommelom, veekie

--[X] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
No. of votes: 3
Zam, Bommelom, veekie

[X] The shifty young fellow may have connections to the pimp or other people with a reason to dislike Moraine.
No. of votes: 2
Bommelom, veekie

[X] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was telling the truth as he saw its.
No. of votes: 2
Bommelom, veekie

---[X] Try to find out where exactly Moraine stores food and the like.
No. of votes: 2
Bommelom, veekie

---[X] Ask about the bartender and the shifty young man.
No. of votes: 2
Bommelom, veekie
I'm going to leave the vote open, for now.

If anyone else would like to vote, please do. If anyone who has already voted would like to change their plans or make them more detailed, go ahead. I'm going to try to update more often. See you later.

EDIT 1: I'm in the mood to write something, but I'm waiting for some more votes so I can be sure of what my readers want to do next. Hmm. I get the feeling that this story arc isn't really grabbing people's attention. Oh well, I'll try to get it finished fairly soon. Then, we can move on to the next story arc, after which NOTHING WILL EVER BE THE SAME AGAIN!

EDIT 2: Here's another model I've been painting recently. It's supposed to be a Drow Vivisectionist (a type of Alchemist):

EDIT 3: The longer I go without being able to update, the more stupid shit I post in other parts of this forum. Yeah, I know, it's my own fault really... :rolleyes:
 
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[X] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was mistaken.
[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore had something to do with her disappearance.
[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was just trying to get extra money out of you.
[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.
[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.

I don't know what Bellona should do next really, So I'm just going to shamelessly steal part of your vote @Hye sorry ;)

[X] Focus on the investigation
-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her. He also said that the cultists have been kidnapping homeless people and people others won't miss.
--[X] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken.
---[X] Ask Elys to use her new eel to attempt triangulate where the ghouls are located

Edit: Thanks for the idea with the eel @Nevill :D

As for my justifications I don't really have any and I'm terrible at figuring out murder mystery stories ahead of time so feel free to ignore me, it's probably for the best :D:p:D
 
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What about taking Elys' eel and using it as a locator for Ghoul presence? It can detect if they are nearby, so at the very least it might be able to tell whether we are getting closer/farther from them.

If we can triangulate the location, we could use Flawse's forces to do a sweep of the place, flushing them out.

Edit: I'll cobble something together when I am not on the phone, but for now it's my go-to idea.
 
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[X] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw it.

I don't know about this one.
[] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
[] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore had something to do with her disappearance.

So, I spent some time to thinking about things. The bartender is suspicious. If he was telling the truth, he wouldn't try to be insulting about it, especially to the kids.
I'd guess he didn't want us investigating. He went it off his way to make Jana's mother look like she wasn't worth looking for.
[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" had something to do with her disappearance.

[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.

What did Bellona decide to do next?
[X] Focus on the investigation
-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her or that a local pimp may have taken offence at her and been responsible for her disappearance.
--[X] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
---[X] Try to find out where exactly Moraine stores food and the like.
---[X] Ask about the bartender and the shifty young man.
 
'k. So we have several leads. The working girls would know where to usually find Moraine, seeing how she fed and advised them, and that would help us narrow down where (and maybe why) she could have gotten nabbed.

Another lead it the barman.
If he was telling the truth, he wouldn't try to be insulting about it, especially to the kids.
He could merely be a jackass, and the kids aren't customers and don't pay. What is suspicious, though, is that he lied about Moraine being a regular, which can't be explained away with greed alone. Badmouthing would be understandable, but that tidbit served no purpose except to muddle the waters.

Finally there is an eel compass.

[X] Focus on the investigation
-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her or that a local pimp may have taken offence at her and been responsible for her disappearance.
--[X] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
---[X] Try to find out where exactly Moraine spent her days
---[X] Ask about the bartender

If all else fails, we could take Bellona, Elys and Catharne, and do a quick airborne scan. I still think it is somewhere near 'the Drink'... I can't think of many reasons to kidnap Moraine unless she stumbled upon the cultist plot, similarly to how Milward did.

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[x] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw it.
[x] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
[x] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.
[x] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.
[x] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.
 
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He could merely be a jackass, and the kids aren't customers and don't pay. What is suspicious, though, is that he lied about Moraine being a regular, which can't be explained away with greed alone. Badmouthing would be understandable, but that tidbit served no purpose except to muddle the waters.
So... You're agreeing with the vote but not the interpretation?
 
Somewhat. I agree that of the five people questioned, he is the most suspicious.

I doubt the prostitutes know much about him - why would they? - and I think this might be best pursued separately, but since we are going for that lead first, might as well.
 
Reviewing her investigation so far, what conclusions did Bellona come to?
[x] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw it.
[x] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
[x] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.
[x] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.
[x] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.

Picked these out independently, but I think they align with what y'all are saying. Besides maybe the shifty young fellow--opinions seem a bit split on that one.



I'm less sure about what to do next, besides confronting the bartender, and searching the area around the bar more. Lemme check what has been proposed.

[x] Focus on the investigation
-[x] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her. He also said that the cultists have been kidnapping homeless people and people others won't miss.
--[x] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken.
--[x] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
---[x] Try to find out where exactly Moraine spent her days
---[x] Ask about the bartender

Gonna support both of these--trying to soul trace the taken homeless people, or asking the working girls for more info. Both make sense, though I'm not sure which should be attempted first.

Eel triangulation would be a fun option too. But maybe not viable. I wanna see Elys suggest it, though. ^_^

I think there is a slight risk that Moraine's disappearance is entirely separate from the ghouls, yet we end up triggering a ghoul attack mid-investigation that would impede the search for Moraine.
 
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Reviewing her investigation so far, what conclusions did Bellona come to?
[x] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was exaggerating.
It's easy to see things like that as a pattern but I feel like, when pressed for information, it is better to give none rather than inaccurate information. This meaty fellow gets a 4/10.

[x] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was telling the truth as he saw it.
[x] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
Not a fan of this scurrilous boy, clearly nobody ever taught him manners. Then again, this is Flotsam. He appears to be only slightly below par. 3/10

[x] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was being nasty.
[/] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" had something to do with her disappearance.
Yeah he's the real sticking point in all this. I'm hesitant to believe that he is directly involved but... he fed us random assumptions. After being bribed. That really grinds my gears. Does Bellona have some way to put the screws to someone? Because this corpulent man has some screws missing. 2/10

It's possible that his bar is the front through which the sea ghoul cultists are nabbing people but thus far I see little evidence to support that beyond the fact that he's just... not good.

[x] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.
A good, tired boy in charge of a city of miscreants. 7/10 because he obviously lost Moraine somehow.

[x] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.
Died in the line of duty and helpful to boot; a pleasant, chivalrous boy. 9/10, would summon again.

What did Bellona decide to do next?
[] Write in.
[x] Focus on the investigation
-[x] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her. He also said that the cultists have been kidnapping homeless people and people others won't miss.
--[x] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken.
--[x] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
---[x] Try to find out where exactly Moraine spent her days
---[x] Ask about the bartender

I think this sounds good, unless Bellona has some means of tracking souls in a large area? Were she to have such an ability, even if it only reached, say, 50-100 feet in a sphere, we would be able to go around the city and peep into the basements, looking for masses of souls in underground areas, which would likely lead us to the sea ghoul hideout. Alternatively, does the city have a sewer system? A well? The Sea Ghouls are water-aligned, after all. It would make sense if, say, their agents operated from water-logged tunnels.
 
Reviewing her investigation so far, what conclusions did Bellona come to?
[] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was lying.
[] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was exaggerating.
[] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was mistaken.
[] The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" had something to do with her disappearance.

[] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
[] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore had something to do with her disappearance.

[] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was lying.
[] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" had her mixed up with someone else.
[] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was just trying to get extra money out of you.
[] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" had something to do with her disappearance.

[] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was lying.
[] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was misinformed.
[] Roylott Flawse had something to do with Jana's mother's disappearance.

[] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was lying.
[] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was mistaken.
[] Kellon Milward's ghost had something to do with Jana's mother's disappearance.

What did Bellona decide to do next?
[] Write in.
A minor criticism, now that I'm on a computer, instead of my phone.
This vote was very long and complex. It was something like 6 'pages' of scroll-able text on my phone.

Maybe consider alternate presentation styles to make it easier for people on their phones to vote? It would also save you some typing.

Here's an example, just as one instance of a condensed version. It's about as long on a normal sized computer screen, but on a tiny phone screen, each vote line won't wrap to a new line two or three times.

The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was:
[] Sailor: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Sailor: lying.
[] Sailor: exaggerating.
[] Sailor: mistaken.
[] Sailor: involved.

The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was:
[] Shifty: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Shifty: just being nasty.
[] Shifty: involved.

The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was:
[] Bartender: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Bartender: lying.
[] Bartender: mistaken.
[] Bartender: trying to get extra money out of you.
[] Bartender: involved.

When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was:
[] Flawse: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Flawse: lying.
[] Flawse: mistaken.
[] Flawse: involved.

Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was:
[] Milward: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Milward: lying.
[] Milward: mistaken.
[] Milward: involved.

What did Bellona decide to do next? (Write in.)
[]
 
What about taking Elys' eel and using it as a locator for Ghoul presence? It can detect if they are nearby, so at the very least it might be able to tell whether we are getting closer/farther from them.

If we can triangulate the location, we could use Flawse's forces to do a sweep of the place, flushing them out.

Edit: I'll cobble something together when I am not on the phone, but for now it's my go-to idea.
Finally there is an eel compass.
Eel triangulation would be a fun option too. But maybe not viable. I wanna see Elys suggest it, though. ^_^
Yeah, eel triangulation sounds like it would be fun. :rolleyes:

I think this sounds good, unless Bellona has some means of tracking souls in a large area? Were she to have such an ability, even if it only reached, say, 50-100 feet in a sphere, we would be able to go around the city and peep into the basements, looking for masses of souls in underground areas, which would likely lead us to the sea ghoul hideout.
Bellona's ability to see souls is blocked by solid objects in the way. She needs line of sight.

Alternatively, does the city have a sewer system? A well? The Sea Ghouls are water-aligned, after all. It would make sense if, say, their agents operated from water-logged tunnels.
Flotsam doesn't have any underground sewers (the streets are basically an open sewer, which is the reason for the smell). It has some wells which people get drinking water from, but none of them look large or deep enough to house the secret hiding place of the Sea Ghoul cult.

A minor criticism, now that I'm on a computer, instead of my phone.
This vote was very long and complex. It was something like 6 'pages' of scroll-able text on my phone.

Maybe consider alternate presentation styles to make it easier for people on their phones to vote? It would also save you some typing.

Here's an example, just as one instance of a condensed version. It's about as long on a normal sized computer screen, but on a tiny phone screen, each vote line won't wrap to a new line two or three times.

The sailor who said "Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole" was:
[] Sailor: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Sailor: lying.
[] Sailor: exaggerating.
[] Sailor: mistaken.
[] Sailor: involved.

The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was:
[] Shifty: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Shifty: just being nasty.
[] Shifty: involved.

The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother "comes here looking for a pickup" was:
[] Bartender: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Bartender: lying.
[] Bartender: mistaken.
[] Bartender: trying to get extra money out of you.
[] Bartender: involved.

When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother "was staying off the drink" he was:
[] Flawse: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Flawse: lying.
[] Flawse: mistaken.
[] Flawse: involved.

Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother "a nice lady") was:
[] Milward: telling the truth as he saw it.
[] Milward: lying.
[] Milward: mistaken.
[] Milward: involved.

What did Bellona decide to do next? (Write in.)
[]
I rarely use my phone to surf the internet, so it hadn't occurred to me what my long and complex vote options would look like to anyone using a phone to read this story. I'll bear that in mind in future.

Also, I think the way you've written out the vote options looks neater and more efficient than my longwinded way of doing it. (I just don't want anyone to misunderstand what I'm trying to say, so I put in excessive detail. It's a bad habit of mine.)

I have edited the last chapter, taking your suggestions into account.

Vote closed.
Vote tally:
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[X] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was lying or exaggerating
No. of votes: 1
Hye

[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was just being nasty.
No. of votes: 8
Hye, Zam, Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus, Nevill, Oh I am slain!, Flashkannon

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother comes here looking for a pickup was lying.
No. of votes: 7
Hye, Zam, Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus, Nevill, Oh I am slain!

[X] When Roylott Flawse said that Jana's mother was staying off the drink he was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 10
Hye, Zam, Bommelom, veekie, Kyrina, RideTheWalrus, Tascion, Nevill, Oh I am slain!, Flashkannon

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother a nice lady) was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 9
Hye, Bommelom, veekie, Kyrina, RideTheWalrus, Tascion, Nevill, Oh I am slain!, Flashkannon

[X] Focus on the investigation
No. of votes: 9
Hye, Zam, Bommelom, veekie, Kyrina, RideTheWalrus, Tascion, Nevill, Oh I am slain!

-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her. He also said that the cultists have been kidnapping homeless people and people others won't miss.
No. of votes: 3
Hye, Kyrina, Oh I am slain!

--[X] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken. Or maybe on the working girl that got taken.
No. of votes: 1
Hye

-[X] Check in on the pimp for the missing working girl. He might have something to do with Moraine's disappearance.
No. of votes: 2
Hye, Zam

[X] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 4
Zam, Tascion, Nevill, Oh I am slain!

[X] Kellon Milward's ghost (who called Jana's mother a nice lady) was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 1
Zam

-[X] Kellon Milward's ghost said that the cultists might have taken her or that a local pimp may have taken offence at her and been responsible for her disappearance.
No. of votes: 6
Zam, Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus, Tascion, Nevill

--[X] Seek out the working girls and see if they are willing to talk.
No. of votes: 7
Zam, Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus, Tascion, Nevill, Oh I am slain!

[X] The shifty young fellow may have connections to the pimp or other people with a reason to dislike Moraine.
No. of votes: 3
Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus

[X] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was telling the truth as he saw its.
No. of votes: 3
Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus

---[X] Try to find out where exactly Moraine stores food and the like.
No. of votes: 4
Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus, Tascion

---[X] Ask about the bartender and the shifty young man.
No. of votes: 4
Bommelom, veekie, RideTheWalrus, Tascion

[X] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was mistaken.
No. of votes: 1
Kyrina

[X] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore had something to do with her disappearance.
No. of votes: 1
Kyrina

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother comes here looking for a pickup was just trying to get extra money out of you.
No. of votes: 1
Kyrina

--[X] Attempt to do a soul trace, if possible, on some of the homeless people taken.
No. of votes: 2
Kyrina, Oh I am slain!

---[X] Ask Elys to use her new eel to attempt triangulate where the ghouls are located
No. of votes: 1
Kyrina

[X] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother comes here looking for a pickup had something to do with her disappearance.
No. of votes: 1
Tascion

---[X] Try to find out where exactly Moraine spent her days
No. of votes: 2
Nevill, Oh I am slain!

---[X] Ask about the bartender
No. of votes: 2
Nevill, Oh I am slain!

[x] The sailor who said Jana's mother liked to frequent a local watering hole was exaggerating.
No. of votes: 1
Flashkannon

[x] The shifty young fellow who called Jana's mother a whore was telling the truth as he saw it.
No. of votes: 1
Flashkannon

[x] The bartender of the Drink who said that Jana's mother comes here looking for a pickup was being nasty.
No. of votes: 1
Flashkannon
Thank you for voting, everyone. I'll finish the next chapter as soon as possible. Expect it in the next few days.

See you later!
 
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I rarely use my phone to surf the internet, so it hadn't occurred to me what my long and complex vote options would look like to anyone using a phone to read this story. I'll bear that in mind in future.
I've long since learned to never read Quests on my phone. Well, that's not true. If I don't care about participating or if I'm just catching up to a long quest, then it's fine. I can just ignore the votes and all that. But when participating, I'd rather wait an extra hour to get to my PC so I can properly enjoy and vote. It's not easy over a phone.
 
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