The Steep Path Ahead [Familiar of Zero AU]

I don't understand the hate on Saito. I honestly feel like his character has been handled very well.

I mean, he's an idiot, but in the good way. He's simple, not stupid.

And everyone knows that God favors fools.
 
As the author has likely surmised if he monitors received ratings, I've been reading the story over the past couple of days.

Apart from anything else, the whole thing has been worth it just to see Charlotte giggling. Yes, even if she dies horribly later. (I don't expect it, but judging by the comments, I shouldn't put it past him either.)

I really think this story captures Saito's character. A lot of people focus on how dumb and lecherous he his, forgetting that he's also brave, loyal, and fairly nice. I think the treatment here strikes a nice balance.

I also really like the way the butterfly ripples have been warping the political landscape, especially Charlotte's rise to power and the explanation for a "loyal" Wardes. (That last one may lead to another assassination attempt on Louise, to get the power of the Void into his lineage, but if it fails or can be traced back to him, Eleanore's mother is going to make her a widow.)

I also apologize if I'm just rehashing what other people have said, but I skipped most of the comments to get through the story faster. These are just my general impressions.
 
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I like this saito. A lot of heroic fables have protagomists with characters that are different or somehow stand above the norm. I think that this unique naivety and good-hearted nature born from 21st century morals are exactly the kind of thing that gives Saito some heroic traits.

Not to mention he's the only character that wouldn't kill an Elf on sight for being an Elf.
 
Chapter Eighty
Chapter Eighty

The ship sailed peacefully with the sails billowing, the creaking of the ropes as they swung around the wooden mast echoed by the random cries of birds that took a brief moment of respite upon the wood guards or the deck itself sometimes.

Charlotte remained confined into the 'Royal' room, leaving it up to Josette to impersonate her outside with varying degrees of success. Honestly, whatever form of magic they used to appear so flawlessly like one another, it had to be very tricky, and extremely complicated.

Louise could hazard a guess that it was Square magic, but Square mages were, if not rare, at the very least uncommon. Usually, Triangle mages were the norm among those who had experience, and Line mages among those who didn't.

"I had an idea," Saito said with a smile, making Louise forget all about the blue-haired short-stack who was currently talking animatedly with a few sailors, guarded by Jacques with a glare strong enough to make any 'untoward' expressions noticeably mollified.

"Yes? Does it involve jumping off this ship to ditch her Highness?" Louise replied, looking at the land below stretching far and wide. The plains of Gallia were quite the breathtaking spectacle, as, differently from Tristain who was mainly composed of tall mountains, lakes and forests, it was a grassland that had slowly been turned into farms, with long stretches of grain and vegetable fields as far as the eye could see.

"No," Saito replied. "It consists of us getting the fighter plane from Tarbes and repairing it, and then I'll write something for my parents in a letter or something and jump out at the last moment, letting the plane go back to my world through the portal," he nodded quite wisely as he rattled off his plan. "I'm sure once they've had their peace of mind, everything will be for the better."

Louise blinked. "Uh...Well, if the Dragon Raiment is alive and can guide itself-"

"It's not alive, but all it has to do is just fly past the portal and then-" Saito blinked. "Wait, that would mean it would crash on the other side! If I wrote a letter, it would get destroyed!"

"Perhaps you can write on something different than paper," Louise suggested kindly, "On a rock, or steel? Maybe you could load a safe inside!" Louise clapped her hands together. "The safe should be able to withstand the impact, shouldn't it? So you can write something, put it inside a safe, and then haul it-can the Dragon Raiment carry that much weight?"

Saito nodded, "It shouldn't be a problem," he smiled. "That way it should survive the landing, right? Then I should start thinking about what to write home about."

Louise smiled, and crossed her arms in front of her chest. Her smile faltered just briefly, as she looked away just slightly, hesitating with her next words, but drawing them out all the same, "Could you perhaps begin with an apology in my name? I know your tongue isn't like ours, so it would be meaningless for me to write one, but-"

"Of course," Saito said. "I'll read it to you aloud later, when I've found something to write on, and something to write with-"

Louise chuckled, and then wistfully smiled. "Are you sure about this?" she asked softly. "It's your only chance of-"

Saito shook his head, "I lived a boring, normal life back home. As long as my family knows I'm safe, I have nothing against it."

"We might have to fight in a war, Saito," Louise said awkwardly. "And we might have to fight way more than a single Elf," she whispered. "Can you do it? I-I think I can, but-but I won't force you. I-If you want, we can simply run away after we are done here. I'll write a letter to mother, and we can just..."

"Wouldn't that be unfair?" Saito asked in a soft and concerned tone. "This is important, isn't it? Isn't this what your whole faith is all about? I don't think we could just run away from something like this."

"Maybe it is, but-" Louise stammered, her cheeks quite crimson in color, "It's not as important as us. We can just find some woods filled with nasty things, and hide in there. Nobody would look for us, and we would be safe."

Saito blushed in turn, and coughed awkwardly as he looked around, trying to confirm wherever or not someone was watching. When he realized nobody was paying attention, he drew near to-

"If you are going to kiss her, do it somewhere private," Jeanette said with a huff, somehow appearing from thin air, apparently having been on the upper ropes to look ahead. As she landed, it became clear that her hairstyle now sported two singular curly locks, one per side of her face, and as she spun one lock around of her fingers, she looked shyly at Saito. "Although I wouldn't mind being a part of it. I mean," Jeanette slithered kind-of like a snake, but only with her feet, so fast that even Louise missed it, "Do you not know that sharing is caring?" she fluttered her eyelids at him, her arms around one of his.

Saito was about to open his mouth to say something, but he didn't need to because the young woman that had been glued to his arm was suddenly pried off by something that made him pale internally.

Louise's knee deep in the girl's guts, the young Valliére had a hand firmly grabbing the woman's shoulder, while the knight of Gallia tried to recover her lost breath, panting hard. "In Germania, if you steal someone's property they have this very righteous justice of beating you nearly to death to make the lesson stick," Louise smiled sweetly. "If you haven't learned your lesson, I can show you when we land just how much I took from my mother, the Heavy Wind, concerning violence."

She patted the knight's shoulder as she released it, the one she had squeezed to the point where Saito was wondering whether or not she had also broken a bone, but as Jeanette smiled weakly and stepped away, trying her hardest to steel herself, he turned his gaze towards Louise.

"Wasn't that a bit over the top?"

"She's just faking it," Louise said offhandedly. "Probably to garner your sympathy. I drove my knees a few times in the guts of a couple of rowdy kids back at the orphanage, and she either has a leather corset beneath the dress, or she has a spell to dull blows enchanted on that magical dress of hers," Louise flexed her fingers. "Also, it wasn't over the top, since I hit her below her chest," she huffed, "And she was definitely eavesdropping on us."

"Why would she do that?" Saito asked.

"Why?" Louise spluttered, "You still have to-Oh Founder Brimir, you really are denser than rock. Look, you and I, we're both very, very important, yes? Gandalfr, Void User-Charlotte is one too, and so is Tiffania, I guess-" Louise frowned, "But that would mean-I never asked her! Maybe she's, like, my cousin!"

"What?" Saito blinked.

"The Founder's line can be traced to the main members of royalty. My father, for example, comes from a bastard line of Tristain's royalty. This makes me the Queen's cousin, if with quite the distance. At the same time, this makes pretty much all other royal lines my cousins too-"

"Charlotte-"

"She doesn't count. You can have family you hate, right?" Louise said briskly, glaring at Saito as if daring him to say something different from a 'Yes'. "Well, if that's true, then she doesn't have to be afraid! Come on, Saito. It's time to earn ourselves an ally among this den of snakes. The poor girl must be terrified. She hasn't stepped out of her room since last night."

As Louise began to walk below deck, Saito followed with unease. His eyes moved to the lonely seagull that seemed to have plopped down on the wooden guard of the ship, and was now squawking at him, but the animal's eyes...

There was just that brief instant where Saito felt there was something more to it, but he couldn't place it, and since Louise kept pulling him along, he went together with her.

Squawking indignantly, the seagull flew off.

It was just a seagull after all.

A seagull in the middle of the vast plains of Gallia.
 
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I'm kind of scared of the level of sync Saito and Louise have been showing, and both the psychological and physical effects. It might not be Enslaved, but what we haven't seen of Saito's mind doesn't mean it isn't happening either.

The way Louise has been growing stronger alongside Saito, it might not be long before they approach Brimir and Sasha levels. Saito is no Elf, but he does have other tools...

Also, i'm surprised Charlotte is actually a void mage. Why is her familiar a rhyme dragon, then? Why doesn't she have one of the legendary four familiars?

Something doesn't add up here.
 
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As a sidenote, when was Saito made aware of any portal anyway? I can't quite recall when that happened. Or is he just assuming it exists due to the presence of the fighter plane?
 
I'm kind of scared of the level of sync Saito and Louise have been showing, and both the psychological and physical effects. It might not be Enslaved, but what we haven't seen of Saito's doesn't mean it isn't happening either.

The way Louise has been growing stronger alongside Saito, it might not be long before they approach Brimir and Sasha levels. Saito is no Elf, but he does have other tools...

Also, i'm surprised Charlotte is actually a void mage. Why is her familiar a rhyme dragon, then? Why doesn't she have one of the legendary four familiars?

Something doesn't add up here.
She summoned her familiar before she was the Void Mage. Joseph was the Gallian Void mage before he died and it passed to her.
 
As a sidenote, when was Saito made aware of any portal anyway? I can't quite recall when that happened. Or is he just assuming it exists due to the presence of the fighter plane?

He was told of the possibility of going back home during Louise's self-deprecating rant and that it involved repairing the plane and the moons synchronizing together.

Then after the fade-to-black you can easily assume he was told more in detail when they both calmed down.

*I had to cut the chapter somewhere*
 
Irukuku is smarter than Saito... I don't see why she couldn't be one of the four since we know not only humans are eligible...
 
That all assuming that Charlotte actually is a void mage. Given that Josette in canon was the next void mage and that their identical twins, Charlotte could just be faking being a void mage by switching with Josette as required;)
 
I rather wonder if he can actually spy that way. Even if he can talk to the seagull, it will probably forget whatever he said the next time he sees something shiny, or edible.

"Girl Genius" had a spark who created the emperor of cats, but the cats didn't make very good spies.
 
That all assuming that Charlotte actually is a void mage. Given that Josette in canon was the next void mage and that their identical twins, Charlotte could just be faking being a void mage by switching with Josette as required;)
Josette seemed to be using water magic, if I remember correctly.

But who knows, really. At any point we see Josette it could be Charlotte, and vice versa.
 
Its like the novel the man in the iron mask if the imprisioned prince and the king were gender flipped and working together... How appropriate.
 
Chapter Eighty-One
Chapter Eighty-One

Louise was pretty sure Tiffania was keeping Charlotte -the real one- company. This was the reason she debated for a brief instant on whether it was proper or not to knock at the door. If it had been only Charlotte, she wouldn't have minded being a bit rude and simply opening the door, to hell with good manners, but since Tiffania looked ready to faint at the slightest loud noise, she opted for politely knocking on the door and entering once the 'come in' was given in a half-trembling voice by Tiffania.

Tiffania was wearing a long robe that would have been better suited for an old abbess, but with the way it was made to appear loose, it hid most -but not all- of her bountiful cleavage away from sight. Louise could swear she had heard a strangled sob of despair coming from Saito's throat, but opted to say nothing and stomp his foot down later. If a girl didn't want to have men stare at her chest rather than her eyes, then the act had to be praised.

Charlotte was standing nearby, and they were apparently playing a game of Founder Cradle, passing the string around in different shapes.

"Is something the matter?" Charlotte asked as the duo stepped inside and closed the door behind them.

"The Void is said to pass down along royal lines, belonging to the descendants of Brimir," Louise said. "If Tiffania has the power of the Void, and we found her in the middle of the woods of Albion...wouldn't that make her royalty?"

Charlotte's lips twitched in a small smile, and she nodded briefly. "Yes, that would be the case."

"Then-Shouldn't the King of Albion be told he has a cousin?" Louise continued.

"Telling him would be counter-productive," Charlotte said smoothly, "There are reasons Tiffania was kept secret, hidden within a forest, in the middle of nowhere." She smiled next. "But you should ask her about this," she said kindly, turning her gaze to the fidgeting girl. "If she wishes to share it, then it is her choice."

Tiffania winced, giving an awkward smile. "I-I'd rather not tell anyone," she whispered. "I wouldn't even know what to say to a King, so even if my cousin knew about me, I'd be too embarrassed to say anything."

Louise placed a hand on her hips, and twitched her nose in clear annoyance. "He was pretty easygoing for a King. I'm sure he'd be delighted to find out he has family left after losing his father to the Reconquista."

Tiffania's eyes looked down at the floor and at the tip of her feet, her expression sorrowful. "I-I'd better not."

"You definitely should, but fine," Louise huffed as she plopped down on a nearby bed. "Well, we're cousins anyway from my father's side, so-well, you don't have to feel so lonely any longer."

"Ah," Tiffania's eyes widened slightly, "I wasn't-well, then Charlotte is your cousin too?"

Louise bristled, "Yes. All royal lines are descendants of Brimir, which makes them all connected through blood."

"Wait," Saito blinked. "Didn't Wales say he was going to marry Henrietta?"

Louise blinked, "And?"

"They're cousins," Saito blurted out.

Charlotte cocked her head to the side, an eyebrow raised. "We know that. Their fathers are brothers."

"No, I mean-cousins can marry each other?" Saito asked.

"And why would they not be able to do that? They are not brother and sister," Louise huffed. "Founder Brimir said that it was fine as long as a man slept not with his sister, or a sister slept not with his brother, but he never mentioned 'Cousins'."

Saito shook his head in disbelief, but quietly decided to let the argument drop and sit down on a nearby chair. Charlotte resumed the form of the cat's cradle, and then moved it towards Louise, who was the one closest to her. Louise seemed torn, if briefly, before taking on the game itself and going through the motions with practiced ease.

It was kind of surprising, at least in Saito's modest opinion, how a Queen, an Orphan-Turned-Noble and a descendant of royalty could all play a simple game like cat's cradle with enough expertise to make him wonder just how they had managed to find the time to learn it, but at the same time, he was proud that Louise had let go of her anger long enough to understand this wasn't about the feud between Charlotte and herself, but about making Tiffania feel at ease.

"A familiar," Louise said suddenly, "Do you have one?" she asked, looking at Tiffania.

"Ah-no," Tiffania said softly. "I wouldn't know how-"

"We should fix that when this ship lands," Louise said earnestly. "I'm sure it would be able to help you-"

"A Void's familiar is always a human," Charlotte said softly, the cat cradle in her hands once more. "She can summon one now if she wishes, but it would be best if she simply chose someone instead."

"Chose someone?" Louise asked.

"If she summoned someone now, out of nowhere," Charlotte said softly, "I do not think they would be amenable to helping her. If she already had someone, she would just need to recite the binding oath and finish the ritual, without a need for a summon."

Louise's eyes widened slightly. "It might be another person from Saito's w-homeland," she blurted out. "It-It would be best not to, then."

"The powers of the Void's familiar are many," Charlotte said. "It would be best to have them at the ready for the crusade. It is a unique circumstance for three out of four Void Users to be found. This has never happened before in the history of Halkeginia since the times of the Founder, and that was because the Founder himself held the full power of the Void."

"Can it really do that much though?" Saito asked. He waved his hands hastily in front of him at the shocked expressions of Louise and Charlotte, "I mean! When that Elf attacked, it wasn't that strong. I'm the Gandalfr, but I got a nasty beating out of it-"

"The true strength of the Void lies in all of its pieces," Charlotte murmured. "It wasn't just split across four people, but also across four objects, and four rings. The rings that are proof of royalty, Earth, Fire, Water and Wind, and the items that belonged to the Founder, they are an important part. When all are united, the true power of the Void will reveal itself. It is said that with such power, not even if the Elves mustered their entire people would they be able to stop it."

Saito blinked, "I-I know Louise's capable of making big explosions, but-but is that what the Crusade is going to be about? I mean-it's one thing when they're capable of fighting, but what about the children?"

"There is no innocent Elf," Charlotte said awkwardly. "That is what the Founder said," she added, shaking her head. "I do not think the Crusade will be called on for the following months. The armies need to be prepared, the objects assembled, but when the day will come, I am sure there will be blood."

"Saito-Elves don't think like we humans do, you saw that," Louise added. "The ease with which that Elf-look, maybe the Elves' kids like to eat babies, or perhaps they drink human blood to sustain themselves. Or perhaps they're horrible monsters with sharp, vampire-like teeth and get their nutriment from chewing on the souls of pious virgins, you can't-"

"That's not true," Tiffania said, her hands white and her knuckles trembling. "They're not monsters. They're not different from-from you. Children are children, and even Elves-some Elves aren't bad. Not every human is a monster, but some are, so why don't we consider them all monsters then?!" there were tears in Tiffania's eyes. "I mean! It would make sense wouldn't it? And why are Elves and Humans so different anyway? Because they don't follow the same Gods? Because they're more powerful? Because they were born with the ability to listen to the Spirits? Why must there be blood? Why can't we just talk with them?"

"Sure, because they'd let any of us near them without opening fire first and asking questions later. Just like that kind Elf who slaughtered the Gallian nobility like they were pigs meant for the market, and with the same snob air of a lord trudging on a worker's back," Louise snapped. "And he just appeared out of nowhere, strolling inside as if the place belonged to him, as if our very breaths were bothering him!"

Tiffania took a deep breath, "So-So you think every Elf is like that? You think that they all relish in slaughter and death? That they don't care about human lives? Then-Then tell me, tell me why did my mother die if she could have easily defeated humans as if they meant nothing. Why did my mother have to die, when she could have just killed them all?"

"Your...mother?" Louise frowned. "What does your mother-"

"Tiffania-" Charlotte's warning came, but also went as the girl removed her hat, showing off her slightly elongated ears.

"Yes, my mother was an Elf, and she was the mistress of the Archduke of Albion, the King's uncle. I'm a Half-Elf, which makes me what, a monster who likes to drink the blood of children then?" the tears in her eyes were now visibly rolling down her cheeks. "Is that what I am? Is that what I am supposed to be? My mother was the kindest woman I knew. She loved father, and father loved her. Tell me, if my mother was a monster, why would she love father like that? If she really was so strong, why did she let six men kill her with swords and kick her corpse? Why did she let them? Why did she tell me to hide rather than fight her way out of there?"

"I-I-" Louise stammered for words, staring at the ears.

"You don't know," Tiffania whispered. "You don't know, but you cast your judgment like every other human I've met. That's why whenever I healed someone, I made them lose their memories and sent them on their ways." She shook her head sadly, and put her hat back on.

"S-Saito!" Louise blurted out in the end. "She-We-I-What."

Saito blinked, and raised an eyebrow. "I'm sorry you had to go through that," he said in the end, "And I apologize for Louise too, she does have a kind heart, but she just doesn't know how to properly say things," as he finished speaking, he bowed his head.

Louise's arms raised in the air, "B-But she's an Elf!"

"And you are being rude," Saito replied calmly. "It's not the end of the world."

"She. Is. An. Elf!" Louise flailed her arms, standing up and pointing at her. "An Elf! Pointy ears! Eats-"

"She said she doesn't," Saito said.

"The Founder's Book says they do!" Louise shot back.

"Maybe the book is wrong," Saito answered, making Louise choke on her own spit as Charlotte's face held all the appearances of a giggle that was being held back by a hand hiding it.

A few gurgling noises left Louise's throat as she went through the motions of spluttering and looking red-faced at Charlotte, swooping as low as to seek aid in getting some sense brought back to the table, only to find no allies in the Queen of Gallia.

"Louise," Saito said once more, "Look...that Elf back at La Rochelle was bad, I'm not saying he wasn't. But...I haven't read in the book Charlotte gave us of a single monster that can convincingly cry. Even Vampires cry tears of blood-" as he said so, he pulled out from his pocket Charlotte's handkerchief, handing it over to Tiffania so that she could wipe her tears away. "So please-please reconsider."

"It's the breasts, isn't it?" Louise asked, arms crossed in front of her chest, her eyes narrow and glaring.

"No," Saito said. "It's just...it's just not the right thing."

"Not the right thing?" Louise repeated, perplexed.

"If she really was as horrible as you think, then why would she reveal her identity? Wouldn't it have been better to keep it hidden, like Charlotte did?"

"You make it sound like I'm a monster hiding my real identity," Charlotte said softly, only for Saito and Louise to scoff at the same time. "I am not going to apologize for it," Charlotte added, but then shook her head. "But this isn't about me. This is about Tiffania. I would love to vouch for her, but I am afraid I burned all bridges with you both. You will simply have to make your own choice on the matter, Louise."

"Louise," Saito said once more, "Please, why don't we simply sit back down and talk? Just talk, I'm sure-"

Louise took a deep breath. She filled her lungs, and then she exhaled. She pointed her swordwand at Saito with enough speed that by the time she finished, the wand's steel tip was a blur resonating with a crystalline-like sound. The Dispel hit Saito straight in the face, making him blink as the sudden light washed over him.

Charlotte's long raven hair turned small and blue, making the Queen blink and sigh in disbelief.

"Louise?" Saito hazarded.

"Fine," Louise said crisply. "We'll sit, and we'll talk." She firmly planted herself on the side of the bed, and held her swordwand on her lap, but her muscles were tense, like a coiled spring ready to strike.

"If, by mere theory, had Saito been under the effects of a mind-controlling spell," Charlotte said offhandedly, sounding amused, "What would you have done?"

"Beheaded her and vaporized you," Louise answered quite frankly. "Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me," she smiled softly. "What? Your Highness thinks she's the only one good with Death Threats? I can make them too, even with the 'Fufufu' sound if that makes them more menacing. Fufufu."

Charlotte smiled, and their eyes met, sparks of lightning sailing across the air.

Saito sat back and uncomfortably looked from one side of the room to the other, before finally coming up with an argument that was sure to placate everyone's sour mood.

"So...puppies! What puppy do you think is the cutest?"

When Charlotte's answer of 'Kitten' met Louise's answer of 'Mastiff', Saito knew he'd find peace and quiet only in Tiffania's hesitant answer. The way the poor girl was clutching on to the handkerchief with trembling fingers told Saito all that he needed to know.

Since he was the Gandalfr, and his 'duty' was to protect the Founder, didn't it simply mean he had to protect all of them?

He wouldn't run away from the challenge in front of him.

He wouldn't run away.
 
Man, I wonder how Louise would take it if she heard what Brimir was really like back then, and what he did? Considering she seems rather invested in the religion.

I mean, IIRC, Brimir was an incorrigible perv back then who apparently went insane and was about to commit comprehensive genocide on the elves.
 
That ending line gives me bad flashbacks to a certain series which will go unnamed. Also Louise handled better than I would have expected her family's tendencies and temperament.
 
I am so looking forward to Saito sitting down and actually sharing some mordern science and worldviews like germ teory, basic machine gun principles and mordern outlook on religion.
Honestly, I can do nothing but laugh at any religion that pretends to be serious but doesn't provide any means to call down a flight of angels to beat up your enemies and talk to - or, you know, something other, but substantial.
I do not intend to insult anyone.
 
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mordern outlook on religion

Been waiting for that one since day 1 of sister luise school of reeducation for heritics

Also with tiffania there and out I also really hope saito will take apart this whole elf hate and elf fear, that is going around the void users, because honestly that racsim is more then annoying to me and I hoped it would be the same for saito,
 
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