The Steep Path Ahead [Familiar of Zero AU]

Agreed. Aside from his familiar powers his most useful (and markeable) skill is probably his skills at math, even if they were extremely subpar back in Japan. Not that the areas of math he already learned do not exist in Halk, because they probably do, but the thing is that the vast majority of the population do not have the training he has on it. It was simply not that valued of a skillset outside the basic "don't get cheated while buying/selling stuff.", at least outside academics, big merchants and stewards (most of which are probably minor nobility or even commoners in the retainer of the noble who actually hold dominion over the land). While sadly he probably won't be able to reproduce double entry accounting, he nearly certainly at least good enough to become a steward over smaller fiefs.
Double Entry bookkeeping was inventing around the 1300s, so should likely be present here.
And good math skills are not sufficient for being a steward. The position is really equivalent to a mid-level to upper manager - you need far more in people skills than math. He could be a clerk and keep accounts, but even that is unlikely to require any "specialized" math skills

Useful I don't know,
an advantage definitly not in world where the rule is Willpower<Brawn<Brain
But fact is that saitos incomplete education can still be said to be the best in the whole of Halk





It does make you smarter, just Booksmart , you have a much greater understanding on many different fields(Biology Vitamins, Bacteria, etc. Physics: Gravity, Newtons Laws, Atoms, etc.),but sadly not more intellegent,
Saito can be said to be the most educated individual and the greatest amalgamation of knowledge on the continent (unless of course the elves are also super smart besides being cheatingly good at magic and able to have gravity defeying boobies) but sadly he is not intelligent enough to apply it or even use it

In the hands of a truly intellegent person, Saito and his knowledge could become truly terrifying, especially if only one country has access to it

I mean heck he could go to a big country (*cough*Germania*cough*) and become a renowed sciencist, by simple studying under one and then applying the knowledge of his own world, literally taking the easy and lazy way to be set for life,

But what does he instead, he starts playing adventure and nearly gets himself killed
sigh~~Saito~:sad:

99% of his education is either duplicated, or effectively worthless. And that's assuming things even work the same! This is a world where magic works, the old postulate of "Objects with more of the earth in them accelerate faster because they're more attracted to the Earth" might actually be true. Even if things still work the same, there's one major problem; Saito can't prove any of it. Say you tell somebody about the theory of Gravity. What now? Keeping a patron (for the "easy" life...) requires you either produce results or be well-liked. And even if you can prove it, it's pretty much a mathematical curiosity, because it has no relevance to society at large (yet - give it a couple of centuries).
Knowledge of bacteria is also mostly useless. Okay, you convince somebody, somehow, that little creatures they can't see make wounds fester, or food go bad.... so what? What does that change? Ignoring the use of magic to cover those situations already, Saito can't provide anything to change the outcomes of those situations. He can't produce antibiotics or perform pasteurization after all. "Telling people to wash hands and boil tools would save lives" - except handwashing at least has been in favor multiple times throughout history, so even that might not be anything new.

Here's one of society's secrets - 90% of the stuff you learn in school is useless later in life. We give kids a generalist base so they can pick a path, and are free to forget those parts that aren't applicable.

The vast majority of the education that Saito would have as an average underachieving Japanese student would be absolutely worthless in Halk. Hell, even the more practical parts of the majority of his science and mathematics education would barely rival the commoners in charge of breeding horses or artillery, respectively. Most of the infrastructure necessary to use his education isn't in existence, and he doesn't have a clear enough understanding to make even the most basic of tools.
Agreed. He could give scholars in the kingdom a treatise on what he knows for future investigation.
Calculus is perhaps the most immediately interesting, if they have the data to use it with.
 
Well, this has been an amazing read. Usually when I read stories of this caliber it's been dead for months and never updates again. I've been binge-reading this from the beginning today and it's great to see it's still alive and, based on just what I've read about the author in this thread, does not have a high chance of ending suddenly. This is definitely one of the best Zero no Tsukaima stories I've read, and I am greatly enjoying how it's actually diverging from canon.

I had a bit of a problem with Saito's reaction to Louise in the beginning, with him being a bit more bitter one could probably expect him to lash out a bit more, and I was slightly disappointed when that never happened. I've since realized that was because of his familiar runes as, and I'm guessing it's like canon here, they suppress any annoyance or hatred Saito has towards Louise and forces him to fall in love with her. So my annoyance was unfounded and I've since realized what was wrong with it, basically.

Anyway, really enjoying this so far, and I can't wait for more.
 
Chapter Seventy-Two
Chapter Seventy-Two

Saito fidgeted and groaned, trying his hardest to move and failing miserably at that too. "This is heavy," he groaned, clutching on to the helmet beneath his armpit, the full plate armor that encompassed most of his body strapped on tightly. "Why do I have to wear this?" he asked next, receiving a roll of Louise's eyes in answer.

"It's just twenty, maybe thirty kilos of stuff," Louise said. "And you don't even have to carry your backpack. Come on, it's not that bad."

"Not that bad?" Saito bristled. "It's uncomfortable-I need to scratch my chest something fierce now-"

Louise patted his shoulder-pad and chuckled, "Stop being such a baby, Saito. This was one of the best armors that Albion had to offer. If we are going to dine with knights, then we'll need the best possible armor to make sure they take us seriously."

Louise herself had apparently ended up with what appeared to be a light and small breastplate of sorts, thin-looking gauntlets and leg guards. "If I can wear this-"

"Yours probably weight less than a kilo all put together," Saito said, earning a chuckle from the girl. "The blacksmith just melted a single piece of steel and made do with it."

"Now that's rude to the blacksmith, Saito," Louise said with a huff, a hand on her hip. "As adventurers, we should be thankful to those who provide us with the tools to do our job better."

They were in a room assigned to them by the head butler of the palace, finishing preparations before dinner. "Normally nobles don't wear armor unless they're Earth mages, or knights," she added with her index up, her teacher-mode activated all of a sudden, "That's because against another noble armor is pretty much useless, but with things like arrows and swords, then it can save your life. Careful with maces-armor won't help with that."

Saito chuckled. "I'll be very careful during dinner, Louis," he said. "I am sure we'll be assaulted by Undead roast and we'll need to defend ourselves."

"You'd better," Louise said with a huff. "It's not everyday you dine with royalty."

True to his word, the King of Albion had gathered what army he still had and marched on Londinium, where the Cardinal's own forces had come from behind the blockade to aid in the capture of the city and the breaking of the Reconquista's army. Their leadership mostly murdered, those that had survived the Undead plague were quickly executed for treason, leaving the streets to run red with their blood.

A week later, with the people still flocking in Londinium from the countryside to start again, Saito and Louise had accompanied the King of Albion to La Rochelle, where the meeting with the Cardinal and Princess Henrietta would take place.

"I hope Josette and the others made it back safely to their abbey," Saito muttered as he gave a quick glance outside the window, where the port-city of La Rochelle stood in all of its glory. "And Marteau-I would have liked to go with them."

"When the King of Albion asks you to accompany him, you don't say no," Louise answered primly. "And it's not like they'd have any problem returning home with the blockade broken. Come on now, act more like the Baron you are."

"So you'll remove your mask too?" Saito asked, watching as the girl fidgeted with it slightly.

"I should in the presence of royalty, but if I'm to play the part of the knight, I can't pretty much do that. And if I play the part of the knight, I can avoid having to wear a ballgown. You have no idea how itchy those things are!" she snapped hotly, "I kissed my trousers the next day, I swear-I have a newly found respect for those poor women who have to wear those things."

"I find it unjust," Saito said dryly. "I have to wear this armor, and you get to avoid wearing the ballgown. It's not fair, not fair at all!"

Louise hummed, "You'd rather see me in a dress, uh? Well, I'm sorry to displease you, your pervertedness, but the answer is no." She crossed her arms in front of her breastplate, letting the gauntlets strike it with a soft 'clink'. "I rather prefer the freedom of being a knight to being a lady. Mother was pretty much the same," she added with a giggle. "You could say I'm retracing her footsteps."

Shaking her head, Louise walked towards the window, and opened it up to change the air. "To think there was an Undead army above their heads and nobody noticed it. Then again, that's the point of a blockade, wouldn't you think?"

Saito rattled as he walked, "Yes," he groaned out. "Whatever. Why can't I wear my old comfy armor?"

"Oh come on, you just need to break it in a bit. It should be even more comfortable than the one before!" Louise snapped. "At least, I think. That's what the blacksmith said!"

"Sure, sure," Saito hissed. "But I'm the one wearing it," he added. "Can you scratch my head a bit at least? These gauntlets make me rip my hair off if I try," as he bowed his head down, Louise sighed and did just that, much to the boy's satisfaction.

"There," Louise said after a few minutes, patting her hands. "Now let's get ready. I am a Knight of the North Parterre, so I need to bow to pretty much everyone. You are a Baron, so...you need to bow to pretty much everyone but other barons-"

Saito's shoulder slumped. "Seriously? I want to be a knight too."

Louise glared at him. "No. You get to be the Baron, so you get more titles plopped on your back and that makes you a better catch, which in turn means that other nobles competing for Lady Valliére's hand will need more titles under their fat bellies if they wish me to break off my engagement with you."

Saito sighed. "Fine, but I demand to see you in a ballgown while I get to wear something comfortable," he said firmly.

"What's fair is fair," Louise nodded. "If they are really hashing out a political marriage between Albion and Tristain, they won't decide everything on a single dinner night. There will be other occasions-"

Through the open window, nimbly, a figure with blue hair jumped inside.

Saito and Louise stared at each other blinking, and then looked at the person that had landed neatly inside their room, her red-rimmed glasses firmly planted on her face and a black cloak covering most of her body.

When she turned, staff in hand, she smiled softly.

"Good evening," the Queen of Gallia, Charlotte Helene Orleans de Gallia said. "Forgive my intrusion, but I felt it best if we talked now, rather than later."

There was silence in the room.

Even Louise's brain with all the 'noble etiquette' that needed to be followed came up blank on what to do when a member of royalty jumped inside a room through an open window. She resorted to kneeling, just because it felt the less offensive action to undertake.

Saito took that as the cue to kneel too.

When in doubt, doing as Louise did when dealing with nobility was the optimal solution.
 
Correct me if I'm wrong, but there may be more to the whole marriage thing beyond the incest issue. Isn't the basis of the royal lines in Halkegania that they were descended from the children of Brimir, and that it's only in those lines that the Void element can appear? I don't know if that's common knowledge (it may be limited to church higher ups and royals), but it would give basis for the royal families to encourage first or second cousin marriages just to keep the line "strong" and increase the chances of a Void mage being born while at least reducing the chances of issues with the resultant child. To note, I don't know if that's accurate or not. I don't know enough about FoZ canon to make the call but I think it's accurate.

Honestly, it may be somewhat pointless to try and draw comparisons between our middle ages and Halkegania's middle ages, since aside from the superficial differences, it's in every significant way a different world. It's like saying a tuna is like a shark. Technically they're both fish, but that's about it. There could be a lot of reasons for why incest would be way more acceptable in Halk than it is here, with no small amount of blame being laid at the feet of Magic.

The knowelege about void mages would likely indeed be restricted as only Joesph and the pope both void mages seemed to be aware of the true purpose or nature other than them being created by Brimir.

Also I think after 6,000 years they would at least be aware of the dangers of inbreeding given the nobility and royalty haven't pulled a Hapsburg and literally breed themselves out of existence in less than 800 years.(Note the family Haspburgs that ruled the Austrian Hungarian empire was in fact a Vaudemont branch of the house of Loraine that adopted the name by the son of the last hapsburg married into that family) It got to the point that even distant cousins might as well been brother and sister and often suffered from serious genetic deficits.
 
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Hapsburg and literally breed themselves out of existence in less than 800 years
You can't say it like that, the real problem was that a certain somebody (*cough*Maria Theresia*cough*) carried a genetic defect (bleeder) or married one with it (not to sure who it was of the 2, but pretty sure it was her husband, considering his rather early death) and then married all her children (who were all bleeder too) off to the other royal lineages in order to forge alliances, ensuring every male after them would bleed to death from the tiniest wounds, while every female would continue the carry the genetic defect into the next generation,

Causing the nobility to bleed itself to death in a few centuries due intermarrying

WIthout that, they would most likely still exist even now, but as it is they were just plain unlucky and all died like the dogs
 
Chapter Seventy-Three
Chapter Seventy-Three

Charlotte hadn't changed much. Frankly, it was as if she hadn't changed at all. If it weren't for a small crown on her head, which was apparently so small she could keep it in a pouch of sorts, there were no noticeable difference.

"Please stand," Charlotte said, "There is no need for you to kneel. I am sorry for interrupting your time together, but I do not think we will have much time to talk once dinner starts," she added. "And I felt it important to explain my actions."

"Your...actions?" Louise asked, her brows furrowing together. Her head turned to Saito as she stood quickly up. "You-She-Saito! Seriously!"

"N-Nothing happened!" Saito exclaimed, standing up in turn with both arms raised in surrender for a brief second, "And it's not my fault you didn't believe me!"

Charlotte giggled, a hand to her mouth. "Please, Lady Louise-do not be angry. Lord Saito did nothing wrong," she spoke kindly, stepping closer to them both. "I am the one who has to apologize."

"Apologize?" Louise blinked. "Apologize for what? Your Highness-I'm sure this perverted dog did something that-"

"No, no, it is not that," Charlotte added. "It is something else," she said quietly. "I wished to apologize for having used an assassin to murder Lord Saito," she smiled softly, as if the mention of 'having murdered' someone was something to think back fondly to, "And for having used the forbidden spell Contract on him to have him murder the previous King of Gallia."

"Your Highness doesn't need to apologize for-for-wait," Louise had begun speaking even before her brain, and ears, had connected together the words that the petite blue-haired girl in front of them was saying. "Wait," Louise stammered, "Wait-just a-what."

Charlotte smiled, but the smile wasn't really a 'cute' one. It was sort of icy. It was kind of cold. It made the girl holding on to her staff look slightly less 'cute' and a bit more -a hell of a lot more- 'scary'.

"I should apologize," Charlotte said, "And I will," she added. "It is my understanding that-"

"No! No! Wait just a moment!" Louise's scream made Saito flinch, and Charlotte blink. "You-Your Highness must be suffering from a very high fever-that sort of thing, that sort of-"

"Where would you like me to start explaining, Lady Louise?" Charlotte asked kindly, her staff held in her hands as a cold breeze closed the windows, while thin frost began to form across the doors' edges and hinges.

"From the beginning!" Louise snapped curtly, her breathing uneven. "Like-Like you paid an assassin?! Why!? When!? How!?"

"To ingratiate myself into your eyes of course," Charlotte said. "A savior is usually seen as a good figure, I know that by experience. I was saved by a hunter once, at least-before she died eaten alive by a Chimaera in front of my eyes and I had to kill the beast holding on to that hunter's face," Charlotte shook her head lightly, "the reagents to restart a dead heart are not that typical, and most certainly cannot be bought in a town. One needs to speak with a powerful spirit, like the spirit of water of Ragdorian Lake, to acquire such a thing," Charlotte said. "When I realized how ignorant you both were, or perhaps, how trusting, I decided to give you a list of ingredients to gather for my benefit, in order to toughen your bones."

Charlotte nodded pointedly at that. "I would think that much is obvious now?"

"The Cardinal-" Louise said quietly, "He told you?"

"He was quite happy when you gave him an excuse to stop you from leaving immediately. Had you not angered Count Mott, perhaps I would not have been quick enough to call on to my assassin to do his job, and would have needed to get more inventive," Charlotte added. "I was sure I could come up with something anyway, your horse did have a small spell to track you."

"Just-Just to ask," Saito said nervously, "Why? I mean-why would the Cardinal tell you about it?"

"That...is a misunderstanding," Charlotte said. "The Cardinal is not the one who contacted me first. I am the one who contacted him," she took a small breath. "I needed someone to help me plan my uncle's demise. He-He wasn't really a good King, and there were rumors of treason, but-but before my cousin," Charlotte's face turned slightly green, "Before she died, I wasn't treated much better than the common thug. I knew what he was up to, and I knew he had the traitors all penned down. I couldn't go to them. I-I was glad when he sent me off to Tristain's Magic Academy after the death of my cousin-away from him, free to think."

She took a deep breath. "I-I guess what I'm trying to say is that I wanted to see my Uncle dead with such a fierce passion that when I heard about the Cardinal's movements through the court to isolate the Valliére, I understood he had something I needed, and I had something he needed. So-So I contacted him. And together we came up with a plan to kill the King."

Louise shuddered. "No," she shook her head. "That's-The King is sacred. You can't kill a King, or a Queen-why are you telling us? Queen or not, if this comes out, you'd be sent to the chopping block. And we're not two random adventurers-if the nobles hear of this-"

"Hear of what?" Charlotte asked with a soft chuckle. "There is no proof. Your word might be worth something, but is it truly as powerful as mine, and that of the Cardinal? The same Cardinal who is right now combining a marriage of love between two countries, and whose regents will look up to him like a savior for allowing it?"

Louise clutched her shoulders with her hands. "So," Charlotte continued as Louise chose to stay quiet. "I contacted the Cardinal. He needed a strong political ally, and while he had turned to isolating the Valliére out of a desire to appease the Germanian Emperor, it was clear he wouldn't refuse a powerful ally like the heir to the throne of Gallia. Between the two, he'd choose us over Germania every single time," Charlotte smiled softly. "I wanted my uncle dead, and he wanted Tristain's independence safeguarded, and the royal family safe. I could guarantee both if I rose to the throne," Charlotte smiled. "I am sure he used me for yet one more purpose of his, but what that is isn't something I know, nor did I desire to pry. I know he will deny it until the end however. He is a consummated actor."

Louise shook her head. "I-I don't understand," her eyes moved from Charlotte to Saito, "When did you put him under the Contract spell? That's-that's a forbidden spell, it takes a while to chant, and-and I saw him talk with Wardes when the King was assassinated."

"The Contract spell can be cast and activated upon the use of a command sentence, making for the perfect assassin who does not know he is one, and Lord Saito was so naive he believed me when I told him I had to knight him using 'the tongue of Gallia', so he never suspected I was actually chanting the spell upon him," Charlotte said. "As for the reason he appeared to be in the same room, it was because there are spells like Illusion magic, after all. And all eyes were on you, the returned daughter of the Valliére house," Charlotte added with a smile. "Thinking about it, perhaps you are the one I should thank the most. You made everything so smooth, it felt preordained by fate itself. Again, perhaps the Gods were watching, and smiling, over my actions from the very beginning."

Louise stared at Charlotte's simple smile, and her first impulse was to wipe it off her face with an explosion spell. She held her hand, but even then it kept trembling -and not from the cold, but simply from the sheer fury that emanated across her body.

"Why choose Saito?" Louise asked. "Out of everyone-why him? Surely, the same assassin who had killed him would be stronger, no, most definitely it wouldn't make sense to use him. There was no guarantee -no guarantee at all- that he'd end up in the palace on the night the king was there. You could have poisoned the King's food, or stabbed him in his sleep-you didn't need to use Saito. You didn't need to use me. How could we both make things easier? We were two adventurers with barely a few months of experience-there had to be better choices."

"Perhaps," Charlotte said, "but the power Lord Saito has as the Gandalfr is not something that can easily be ignored. The Cardinal was sure that by using you two, I would achieve everything I needed. And he was right."

Louise faltered slightly, "The Gandalfr? That's-That's just a legend. I mean, if Saito's the legendary familiar of Void, then what would that make me? I can't even cast a simple 'clean blood' spell-"

Charlotte interrupted her, grinning brightly as she kept speaking. "The Cardinal told me that we could use my uncle's obsession with the Valliére to our advantage, and by showing you off as the returned heir, he would desire to be present at your return to society with such strength, that he wouldn't care about having to go without a wand for the evening. Do you want to know something fun?" Charlotte said with a smile on her lips. "My uncle wanted you dead. The 'noble retinue' that followed him were in fact members of Gallia's Knights, used to murdering and assassinating targets of interest. He had given me the order to kill you right in front of everyone in the ballroom, and to use the knights as I saw fit." Charlotte giggled. "He was amusing like that, my Uncle. He delighted in it, you see. It made his heart beat, that's what he said," Charlotte nodded.

Charlotte clicked her tongue against her teeth, looking outside the window with a soft and slightly sad look. "To the last, to the very last, I thought he had managed to escape somehow," she took a deep breath, "I thought that he was lying, hiding and waiting for the chance to pop back up and say how he had enjoyed faking his death and how displeased he was in me for trying to assassinate him. He didn't. He was really dead. The Gandalfr had truly killed him for good," Charlotte smiled, and then giggled. "That was why I was so happy," she made a small twirl, holding her staff with both hands. "He was dead. He was really dead for good."

She drew near Saito, grabbing hold of both of his gauntlets. "But there was still the problem of the letters and of Albion. It was also part of our deal -I had to take care of that problem. The Cardinal really does cherish the Queen and the Princess, not just the Crown, but their happiness too." Charlotte's eyes had that kind of 'innocent' glint that Josette's own had, if for a brief moment before she stepped away from Saito. "So we collaborated in order to get people who could do the job together with people who knew where the job had to be done," she added with a light giggle, "I was not going to let you go alone in the middle of a country at war. I'm not my Uncle."

"Josette," Saito said softly. "Josette was you?"

"No," Charlotte said with a chuckle. "I'm not capable of being in two places at once, but you are right that Josette was involved. You see, the Cardinal honestly had no idea who would have switched the letter meant for the Duchess, and never did I. If he had told you where to go, chances were that whoever had done so would set an ambush up for you. But I did know where the letters were. My Uncle's familiar, you see, was in charge of holding on to them."

Charlotte stopped smiling. "I did not honestly think she'd go mad like that. I thought she might try coming back to Gallia, or perhaps she would go into hiding in Albion. It would have honestly been possible for her to reveal the letters, but since my Uncle had told her not to, and she obeyed him faithfully, I was pretty sure she would uphold her master's wishes until the end." Here the girl sighed, shaking her head. "She was aiding Cromwell as his secretary, and the adventurers that followed you, they were in fact-"

"I knew she was too innocent to be real," Louise said bitterly, "I told you she was too innocent to be real!" she yelled at Saito, who flinched back.

"My knights," Charlotte said. "They knew where to go, and would have directed you there subtly. Even if you had refused their help, Saito would have known where to go subconsciously. And the rest played out pretty much as I had expected, if...without the addition of the Undead."

Saito clutched his chest. "The-That thing-"

"What thing?" Louise asked, her eyes moving from Charlotte to Saito. "What. Thing!?"

"Well, you see," Charlotte said softly. "My Uncle got a ring for his familiar, the Ring of Andvari, by stealing it from the Water Spirit of Ragdorian Lake. When the Spirit took offense, and began to raise the water level, he decided something needed to be done. What he didn't expect was for my familiar to be a Rhyme dragon, capable of talking with Spirits, nor that we would both come to an agreement." Charlotte's eyes hardened. "That was why I carried a piece of her around. I admit-I might have lied to her about not knowing where the ring actually was, but I needed to wait for the right moment. If I killed my Uncle's familiar without killing him, he would just summon another," Charlotte shook her head. "And I would waste my one chance."

"So...you saved Saito's life...by putting a piece of a Water Spirit inside him," Louise said in a quiet voice, the fury already gone past the boiling point, having reached a shimmering level that could only be defined as 'over nine thousand', "So that you could have...your assassin ready...to do the job for you."

Charlotte smiled awkwardly, but nodded. "If it was the Gandalfr, I knew he would do it."

"A lot of things could have gone wrong," Louise said curtly. "A lot of things nearly went wrong. We could have died facing a gryphon! We could have died eaten alive by a monster-"

"If that had happened," Charlotte said with a sigh, "It would have been a mercy, and we would have moved to another plan."

"A mercy?" Louise said, choking on her spit. "A. MERCY!?"

"The Elves have not the tendency of being merciful," Charlotte answered kindly. "As a user of the Void-your duty is to begin preparations for a Crusade against the Elves to reclaim the Holy Land. When you see it this way, you understand I did you a kindness."

Louise stepped forward, and then narrowed her eyes.

The thundering slap that slammed through the air was strong enough to make it ripple as it struck Charlotte's cheek with enough strength to shatter her glasses off the Queen's face, and send the girl to twist in mid-air, tumbling down and emitting a small scream of pain.

Louise held her hand up in the air, the palm an angry red, nothing like the fury that ran across the girl's entire body.

"I hope you weren't expecting anything else from me," Louise hissed coldly. "Not after coming here to gloat in our face how you used us, you bitch. You are the type of person I hate the most in the world. You smile even when you betray others! You laugh even when you ruined someone's else life! You think I'd accept your apologies? You think Saito would? What were you expecting from us? To forgive you and offer you tea and crumpets!?"

Charlotte clutched her reddening and swelling up cheek with one of her hands, and smiled softly. "I wasn't. I was just making sure you would not ask questions to the wrong parties during the feast. I did use you, but you did gain benefits from it. I will safeguard the Crown of Tristain and its family, but you just hit a royal, Lady Louise, and your partner killed one too. If that came out, it would be extremely unfortunate," Charlotte stood up, dusting her cloak a bit. "For what it matters," she added, "I am really sorry I had to use you like this," she shook her head as she headed towards the window, which opened up at her touch. "I hope you will not make this any more difficult and cooperate in the future."

Louise's fists remained clenched even as the Queen of Gallia gave them both a light bow of her head, and then stepped out, leaving behind only a half-frozen room with the doors encased in ice, and a fuming Louise whose sheer anger melted the snow around her.

Saito had remained quiet.

"Say something," Louise said suddenly. "Saito, you would do better to say something."

"Louise," Saito muttered. "Did...Did I really kill someone?" he looked down at his hands.

To that, all of Louise's anger drained away, replaced with a firm determination to see the Queen of Gallia bite the dust.

No one was allowed to make her partner cry.

No. One.
 
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Bwahahahahaha oh Saito you foolish boy, you have slauughtered sentients by the bucketload and get upset for killing someone while mindcontrolled?
 
Oh Charlotte, you poor fool...

Specifically she made an enemy that she really shouldn't have: While, yes, her being a royal helps, Louise not only is a Valliere (and inherited her mother's temperament), but she's also a void mage, as Charlotte very clearly know. That means that the rank thing got very muddled, specially if/when the whole "void mage" thing goes public, and even more so if the church accept her as such.

Hopefully she'll be smart enough to go seriously out of her way to make reparations to at least manage a civil relationship with them, if not a good one, but nonetheless that was not prudent.

And in on a completely different note, turns out that Cardinal Mazarin was only half Danzo, but Charlotte was actually also half Danzo, with the two plotting together making plans worth of a full Danzo. :p
 
She is not that bad. I mean, everything turned out well? Isn't it something?
 
i got the feeling that this is not the last of manipulations...
and its a matter of time till someone tries to restart a void sponsored attack on elves.
though i really want some baron saito and his lady Louise parts...
 
.....bit disappointing with that turn, but, we'll see how it shakes out.

It basically relies on Charlotte going to the Cardinal, AFTER Louise and Saito leave with their death sentence letter, coming up with this amazingly convoluted plan in the span of hours, contacting Wardes somehow, having Wardes kill Saito in precisely the right timeframe and manner that Charlotte can resurrect him, then allowing them to go to Karin anyway, relying on Karin to not kill either Saito or Louise, relying on Karin to be convinced by and acknowledge Louise, relying on all the scheduling events to line up for the announcement party, pull Wardes out of the back pocket again, make sure that somehow Saito goes off with Wardes at the party and no one else notices, relies on Karin to not kill the Cardinal, relies on Karin to allow Louise to go on the scheme to Albion, without backup, relies on them being somehow able to run the blockade, relies on them confronting the former familiar in person rather than at range, relies on the familiar keeping the ring and the letters in close proximity...

And the two of them are her sworn knights. She literally could have just told them what to do. "Hey. You two. You work for me. You're going to Albion. I owe a water spirit, that I used to save Saito's life. You gotta go kill a bitch, and the water spirit will take her ring."

It keeps the plotting down to a more manageable "I saved them from an assassin (that I hired) to ensure their loyalty. Then when I had their loyalty, I ordered them to do stuff for me."

Assassinating her dad? She had an assassin on the payroll, that was good enough to kill the Gandalfr -when he is armed and ready to fight- in a precise and convenient way. I think an old unarmed dude is reasonably within the capabilities of someone with that level of skill and power.
 
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I'm very disturbed by how adept Shadenight is at presenting people who do disgusting things for understandable reasons. You want to hate them, but you understand why they did what they did and you just can't. Wow.

Let's count off: Louise has a temper, but she does care about Saito, she's not cruel for cruelty's sake and she does hold it back most of the time.
Karin almost ruined the country to find her daughter.
Cardinal used Louise for the country.
Charlotte used Louise and Saito yet again for the country and because her uncle really had to bite the dust.

If Louise and Saito weren't the PoV characters we would be even more understanding about what these people did. Can't excuse their actions, but they have real motivations. They don't do it for "the evulz" they don't hold the idiot ball and man is that rare to see.
 
.....bit disappointing with that turn, but, we'll see how it shakes out.

It basically relies on Charlotte going to the Cardinal, AFTER Louise and Saito leave with their death sentence letter, coming up with this amazingly convoluted plan in the span of hours,

No, what she said was that the moment she was at the Tristain magic academy, she found out about someone who could help her. She was in cahoots with the Cardinal from the very beginning of the story, and their plan had taken years to be fully operational. She had no idea there would be a Saito/Louise to help her. She says so herself, citing there was always another plan should they fail at any one point.

contacting Wardes somehow, having Wardes kill Saito in precisely the right timeframe and manner that Charlotte can resurrect him, then allowing them to go to Karin anyway, relying on Karin to not kill either Saito or Louise, relying on Karin to be convinced by and acknowledge Louise

Notice that Wardes is literally in the palace, a call away from the Cardinal. The fact is, Charlotte did not mention it was Wardes because she did not want to implicate him. For the rest, Charlotte was adept enough she simply waited until Wardes reached them, and then the two simply decided to do it at the 'right time'. They both did not know the letter had been swapped too, so for all they knew, the moment they were tough enough, they could just hand it over and for them, the trouble was over.

That it wasn't is what brought on the Cardinal having to be vague about the Londinium trouble, because only a few people could swap that letter.

, relying on all the scheduling events to line up for the announcement party, pull Wardes out of the back pocket again, make sure that somehow Saito goes off with Wardes at the party and no one else notices,

Well, considering the announcement party had to happen at the palace to 'show her off to royalty' it was obvious the Cardinal would know -and arrange- the date. Wardes works at the palace, protecting Henrietta. He is literally there, on call, at any moment.

relies on Karin to not kill the Cardinal, relies on Karin to allow Louise to go on the scheme to Albion, without backup,

Differently from the vast majority of trigger-happy people, real life equivalent of murdering a regent for a country is not a pat on the back and a 'You were justified! Good job!', killing a regent appointed by the Pope himself (which is something a lot of people here seem to not have realized, but that's what a 'Cardinal' is, it's not just a fancy title) is really bad for your PR. Especially so if people have been talking shit behind your back for years.

relies on them being somehow able to run the blockade, relies on them confronting the former familiar in person rather than at range, relies on the familiar keeping the ring and the letters in close proximity...

Charlotte was sure of the last one, because she knew that was what her Uncle had asked Myoz. Passing the blockade was the problem, but she had her knights with a small boat sent to help them with that hurdle. And anyway, she was already Queen by then. Recovering the letters would have earned her and the Cardinal's relation brownie points, but by then she was fully satisfied with her end of the bargain.

And the two of them are her sworn knights. She literally could have just told them what to do. "Hey. You two. You work for me. You're going to Albion. I owe a water spirit, that I used to save Saito's life. You gotta go kill a bitch, and the water spirit will take her ring."
It keeps the plotting down to a more manageable "I saved them from an assassin (that I hired) to ensure their loyalty. Then when I had their loyalty, I ordered them to do stuff for me."

Perhaps, but it doesn't solve the problems of Tristain. And without the Cardinal making the party and loosening security to allow for the death of the King Joseph, it makes everything else meaningless. Charlotte needed the Cardinal's help to deal with her Uncle. Just like the Cardinal needed Charlotte's knowledge of where the letters were to deal with Reconquista.

Assassinating her dad? She had an assassin on the payroll, that was good enough to kill the Gandalfr -when he is armed and ready to fight- in a precise and convenient way. I think an old unarmed dude is reasonably within the capabilities of someone with that level of skill and power.

And that is why she said Saito and Louise would have been normally unnecessary. She had a backup plan. That she and the Cardinal decided to use them is because the Cardinal was sure that the plan would go off without a hitch if those two were involved.

The whole plan could have been done without them, but the Cardinal decided the moment he saw them to add them in.

Course, the back-up plan to get the King to reach the royal palace with his Valliére obsession will probably be explained in the next chapter, but I felt the need to point out that Charlotte does explain her reasoning pretty properly.

And she is under no obligation of doing so. She does because she does feel the need to 'repay' the two for having been used, but normally? Normally even if your plan succeeds, you don't go around 'gloating it' in the faces of others.

You keep quiet and watch as they slowly gurgle their last breath face down against the floor...

Hope this helped explain the plan better. If you still have doubts, just ask. Unless they're to be explained in future chapters, I'll explain them.
 
Alright, here's my hard-hitting question: Why is Charlotte such a bad but more social girl in this fanfic?

As she did state, she had the same backstory as Tabitha until an 'event' happened which basically forced her into becoming 'Charlotte' once more. Said event is probably connected to her fear of doors and the fact she always takes the window, and perhaps also to why her cousin died.

I have been foreshadowing that for a while.

And since she needed a hand in dealing with her 'Uncle', she took an active role. Good old Cardinal perhaps helped her, perhaps didn't, but something most definitely did happen.
 
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