The Steep Path Ahead [Familiar of Zero AU]

lol jeez you are pumping out the chapters like no tomorrow.

Curious why this Saito is so homesick already, i thought that didn't pop up in the original until he died the first time and lost the runes the first time as the runes make the familiar not think/dull the mental concerns on that aspect.
 
Chapter Forty-Five

Saito awkwardly glanced at Louise as they walked on the road. "Nervous?"

"No, not really," Louise replied mechanically. "We are just going to meet with the Duchess and hope she doesn't grow angry at seeing me. If she does turn angry, she'll probably chop us to bits. You know it's true that she uprooted a mountain? It was in the way, so she moved it aside. A mountain-a whole mountain."

"Well, I'm sure it won't come to that. We have Lady Charlotte's letter of introduction," Saito said politely. Louise hesitated, and looked away sheepishly.

"Oh, come on," Saito muttered. "I'm sure everything will turn out just fine," he added with a small smile. "You'll meet, she'll look at you, recognize you, and then you'll embrace and she'll be all teary-eyed and-"

"Saito," Louise whispered, "Please-I understand you just want to lift my spirit, but what if the opposite happens? What if the Cardinal didn't lie in the letter but-no, no," she shook her head and took a deep breath. "What will happen will happen. Let's just hope we can leave with our lives."

The small whispered prayers that Louise began to recite the day before their arrival in Valier was enough of a telltale sign that Saito had no choice but to sigh, shake his head, and renounce the proffered brothel visit in order to stay close to Louise.

There could be other times for the brothel, but this-well, this was more important.

They were huddled together against a tree, between its root and with Saito's back thankfully against a warm and soft surface. Louise was between his arms, covered by the cloak just like he was. It was a way to sleep without lighting a fire, and it was quite needed considering there might be bandits on the road.

Yet Louise was trembling, but not from the cold. "I-" she muttered suddenly, breaking the silence of the night. "I don't know now."

Saito remained quiet. "What if-I mean-I-should I be happy, or sad? Nervous? Maybe not? We're just checking-we still-she might not even be in the city! She might be in the countryside-or-or at her home, mansion, palace, whatever she has-I mean-I-Maybe this is all just one big mistake, Saito."

Saito remained silent, even as he could feel Louise shift between his arms to snuggle closer, gripping onto both of his arms with her shaking hands. "And-And maybe she's not really kind. What if she's a witch? Or-Or she's evil-or she hurts people for fun-I-Maybe my older sister is wicked-or my father is abusive-I-Maybe I'm better off without a family, like always-I mean, I was without a family until now so having one might be too much for me. Who knows, maybe I like being an orphan, maybe this is better, maybe-"

"Louise," Saito said softly. "Everyone should have a home to return to."

Louise remained quiet for a few seconds, the hooting of the nocturnal birds the only sound in the air. "But...But maybe I don't deserve a home," Louise said. "With what I've done-maybe I don't deserve to be happy."

"It's all right," Saito said. "I forgive you. And if you wronged someone else, I'm sure they'd forgive you too."

"You can't be sure," Louise whispered. "You can't be sure."

"Hey," Saito muttered, "I'm still here, right?"

Louise grew quiet once more. "Yeah," she said in the end. "You are."

'For the moment' went unspoken.

Then again, their arrival in Valier the next day was so uneventful to barely warrant description. For all of Louise's nervousness, the Duchess wasn't an entity that could be summoned at will, and while it was true the city was in her lands, it was also true that her mansion wasn't in the city itself, but in the countryside.

Plus, when they said she was patrolling the borders, they were being serious. The Duchess personally marched back and forth across her borders, dealing with troubles with extreme prejudice.

"She usually starts by going west and then goes all the way back east," a helpful guard said, pointing at a map hanging by the wall in an inn near the gates. "That's why she moved a mountain-it was in the way of her patrolling, so-well, she always passes through there with her manticore, so she's hard to miss."

He scrunched his face up in thought. "If you hurry up, you can reach it just shy of her passing by. There's a small outpost that was built there just to deliver messages to her from the Duke," the guard sighed. "Poor man, after his eldest married, he's been left alone in his mansion." He propped a hand beneath his chin. "Though once a week he holds a party for the common folk. I think it's his way to feel less lonely. He's a good guy, our Duke. Isn't he?!"

"Aye! A toast to the Duke!" another man by the counter said with his mug raised, which was soon echoed around the inn.

"Maybe we could start by talking with him," Saito said, "What do you think, Louis?"

"Might be for the best," Louise said gruffly.

"Just so you know, I don't think he's going to answer yes," the guard said, making both Saito and Louise blink. "You're knights from Gallia aren't you? There's always a messenger from there with a message from your king to him or his wife. They always pass by, and they always leave downcast in the end. But, hey, your king's quite insistent I reckon."

"Well, this time I'm sure this time will be different," Saito said with a nod.

"Well, it's the first time there are two messengers, maybe you'll be double as effective," the guard chuckled. "Good luck anyway!"

"Thank you," Saito replied, turning to Louise, who in turn had already begun to walk out.

"We could wait the end of the week and-" as Louise began to speak, Saito simply stared at her with a raised eyebrow. The girl shrunk slightly on herself, and then took a deep breath. "And we'll go right now."

Saito nodded, a fist raised. "This Duke feels like a good guy anyway," he said cheerfully. "He'll probably be happy to have some company."

Louise wasn't that sure about Saito's optimism, but since the boy's smile was contagious, she couldn't help but smile in turn.

One step at the time, she was sure she could keep walking on the path ahead.

The steep path ahead.
Hay a title drop!
 
lol jeez you are pumping out the chapters like no tomorrow.

Curious why this Saito is so homesick already, i thought that didn't pop up in the original until he died the first time and lost the runes the first time as the runes make the familiar not think/dull the mental concerns on that aspect.
It might be because Louise, being more compassionate at the start, is herself worried about having plucked Saito from his home.
 
Damnit Shadenight, how much longer will you tease us with the distant mirage of Louise's reunion with her mother? :p
 
Chapter Forty-Six
Chapter Forty-Six

The Valliere mansion was a palace. It had to be a palace, because it was pretty big. As Louise looked up at the many windows, she saw a figure by a window and shyly waved at it, receiving a wave in return.

A servant by the mansion's gate had taken one good look at them and then sighed in disbelief. "Again," he had mumbled, "Please, come this way Sirs," he had added, guiding them through the garden and past a lake where a boat drifted aimlessly in the middle of it. "The Duke will receive you shortly."

They passed through many hallways, all filled with paintings, vases and suits of armor, the wealth practically oozing out from every single object on their path. Louise couldn't help but stare numbly at the displays of swords and ceremonial weapons hanging from the walls. They were left inside a rather large room with a long table, where they were to wait.

"What might I bring you while you wait, Sirs?" the maid asked gently.

"Nothing, thank you," Louise said gruffly. The maid bowed, and then left the two of them alone in the large room.

"Louise," Saito said.

"Not yet," Louise replied, fidgeting with the border of the her mask.

"Louise," Saito insisted, and Louise grasped at her mask and removed it, letting her hair free from her cloak's cowl. She glared at Saito, and held the mask with her right hand.

"There," she said flatly. "Satisfied?"

"A lot," Saito nodded.

Time passed, and as Louise kept fidgeting for the mask, Saito extended a hand. "Give it here," he said. "Come on, Louise."

"I'm not going to be so rude as to put it back on!" Louise snapped hotly, still clutching on to the mask.

"Louise, hand over the mask," Saito said firmly.

With a tiny groan, Louise did as much. It was strange, but for once it was Saito the one in command and Louise the one following orders. The girl was apparently too nervous to complain too loudly, and as she began to look out of the window, she crossed her arms in front of her chest and closed her eyes shut, taking a deep breath.

When the door opened to admit the maid once more, Louise blinked, and then paled. There he was, the Duke.

"Allow me to present the Duke Pierre de la Valliére," the maid said with a bow as the man stepped inside. He was clutching on to a walking cane that ended with a rather large diamond on top, and his blond hair fell in curls around his face, which held a goatee that -coupled with the monocle- made him look like the stereotypical evil villain in Saito's eyes.

Thankfully, he also had a smile on his face as he stepped inside.

Unfortunately, the smile lasted barely a few seconds.

"We apologize for disturbing you," Saito said. "We have a letter addressed for your wife-the Duchess of La Valliére, but we know not where-"

"Ah, of course," the Duke said, taking a breath and turning his sight away from Louise and towards Saito. "You aren't the usual royal messengers," he added.

"We are knights of the North Parterre," Saito said. "I'm Saito, and this is Louis," Saito added, gesturing at Louise who simply remained quiet, her gaze fixed on that of the Duke. "We have a letter from The Lady D'Orleans, concerning her future visit through these lands-and she wished to exchange correspondence with your Lady Wife, the Duchess," Saito had done his work, ensuring everything would be said properly. Charlotte had been nice enough to help without asking why -really, that girl was too kind for her own good- and so there he was, bluffing with the Duke, only, not really.

"I-I see," the Duke said, his expression having returned to gaze at Louise. "Well, my Lady wife rarely stops by. You would have better luck seeking her out by the mountain pass of the Heavy Wind. It's what they called it after she-well, after she made it," the Duke made a nervous chuckle, "if you are going to meet with her anyway, might I ask you for a favor? I find myself with a few letters I need to deliver her-"

"Of course," Saito said with a bow. "We would be glad to help."

"Give me just an hour, meanwhile, I'll have the servants escort you to the gardens," the Duke added in a slightly hurried tone, before stepping out and leaving the maid to do just that.

Louise had tried to go for the mask the moment the Duke had left, but Saito simply held on to it, shaking his head. "Nope," he muttered, "Not a chance, Louis."

Louise growled, but then exhaled loudly as they ended up in the gardens, large and filled with the most varied of plants. "I think I lost years of my life," Louise mumbled. "No, I'm sure I'm going to die young now. Is my hair turning white, Saito?" she grabbed a lock of stray hair and pushed it up for Saito to examine, before clutching on to it and pulling it a bit. "What do you think is going to happen now?"

"I think we just need to wait," Saito said softly. "Enjoy the flowers, the lake, and-"

"Why do you think the boat's adrift in the middle of the lake?" Louise asked, puzzled. "Wouldn't it make sense if it were ashore?"

Saito blinked. "Or we can be adventurers and query about pointless things, yes, we can do that too, Louis."

Louise did not waste time snatching the mask from Saito's hands and nearing the lake's pier while putting it back on. She hummed and thought about it, "Perhaps there's a monster in the lake," she said.

"Or perhaps the rope simply failed due to use and nobody thought about repairing it," Saito pointed out, gesturing at a piece of frayed rope. "The Duke didn't strike me as the type to enjoy sitting on a boat in the middle of the lake."

Louise's shoulder slumped. "I'm being silly, right?"

"Yes," Saito said with a knowing nod. "You are being very, very silly."

Louise bristled, stomping her right foot on the ground. "Pardon me for being worried!"

"You are forgiven," Saito replied with a teasing smirk, which soon became a half-shocked visage of fear as Louise turned her back on the lake to look at him. Louise froze.

"T-There's a monster in the lake," she said.

Saito nodded fearfully, and as Louise turned...

There was nothing.

"Saito," Louise said sweetly. "Run."

Meanwhile, from the mansion's last floor, the Duke looked down at the two knights of the North Parterre that seemed to act like kids around his lake. He clutched his staff and turned to the shadows of his office.

"They seem too stupid to be spies, or to want something," one of the voice in the dark said.

"I have to agree with my sister-they didn't even say they had found your daughter-we can check, but if you just let them reach Karin she'll do it herself," the second voice in the dark said.

"I'd rather she didn't," the Duke said. "Those poor girls-and these are knights of the North Parterre, I'd really like to avoid a diplomatic incident with the kingdom of Gallia. It's hard enough keeping the Tristain and Germanian crowns pacified-I can't add another to the list," he sighed. "Please do me this favor, Daphne, Amethyst?"

"Fine," the two voices in the dark said at the same time.

The Duke clutched his staff even tighter, if such a thing was possible.

He didn't dare to hope.

But hope was too hard a thing to uproot.

He wasn't like his wife, after all.
 
Seeing as I hear fireworks go off all around me, you think Louise's hidden talent could be making amazing firework shows?
 
I think I spy with my little eye the Vallieries method of checking heredity.
 
So few people use material from outside the anime, this is so exciting. Unfortunately it ends on a cliffhanger... please don't tell me your leaving us to stew on this for a day :cry:
 
Chapter Forty-Seven
Chapter Forty-Seven

The Duke handed the letters over to Saito, who placed them within a leather pouch tied to the inside of his cloak. With the proper goodbyes said, the duo returned to the road with ease.

The sun was starting to set by the time they decided to break for camp. "You know what would be useful right now?" Saito said as Louise huffed, a small bundle of dry wood in her hands. "Something warm to drink."

"I can make things explode," Louise retorted. "I can light a fire. You're the one in charge of finding something warm to drink if that's what you want."

"And where am I supposed to look?" Saito grumbled. "There's nothing around here. I mean-unless we end up with one more mythological monster near us that somehow tastes good in a soup-"

"Oh, hush," Louise said. "Just get some water and we'll throw some dried jerky in it. We have a couple of leeks and that cabbage pilfered from the farm."

"Rice?" Saito hazarded, hopefully.

"Where am I supposed to find rice?" Louise said, rummaging through her backpack, and then Saito's. "Oh? Oh! Look what we have here!" she pulled out a black and thin looking cracker. "Black bread! We have rye bread!"

Saito's face fell. "Stone bread, you mean."

Louise narrowed her eyes. "If you eat it like this, of course. Now let the great chef Louise teach you how to properly cook it -after we start the fire."

From the bushes nearby, a couple of young girls looked on with varied degrees of surprise.

"Sister-tell me they aren't real," Daphne whispered.

"Daphne-it appears they are," Amethyst muttered in reply, "They feel nothing like spies, or opportunists."

They were covered thanks to the illusions that only firstborn magic could weave and create. Even if one of the two ended up walking up to them, they'd remain invisible and unheard. The illusion was so strong they could even end up walked on -although that would be quite an annoying thing- and appear as nothing more than uneven ground.

As the duo ate, the twin sisters remained quiet, waiting until the fire was put out and both knights went to sleep in-

"Oh my," Daphne said. "If-If she's the real deal Pierre will have a fit."

"Sleeping in each other's arms-how romantic," Amethyst muttered, a hand against her chin. They began to walk silently, their footsteps utterly muffled by the wind. For added benefit, a sleep spell was cast by them both, the two knights now definitely knocked out cold.

"Do you want the boy or the girl?" Amethyst asked.

"I'll take the girl," Daphne replied, "my taste's sharper than yours, and I already tasted Karin's blood-it was a long time ago, but I should remember it quite well," she giggled. "Hiding behind a mask-well, she has that in common with her."

"If she's the real deal," Amethyst added in a quick whisper.

"Course," Daphne said. "And if she isn't, we'll let Icarus deal with it."

"That poor fellow," Amethyst muttered. "He really could use some rest."

With their breaths held, the duo gingerly pulled Louise away from Saito's arms, and then laid her on the ground right next to the boy. Daphne's fangs gleamed in the moonlight as she neared the girl's neck, and in that precise moment where they were about to nick the skin, a flash of something slammed through her throat.

"Sister-" Amethyst coughed, and Daphne turned just in time to push her body away from Louise as the boy stood right up, his eyes still closed but his left hand glowing fiercely with a light of its own.

There was a dagger in the boy's hand, and as it shone together with the hand itself, it had apparently struck at Amethyst's heart.

Thankfully, Amethyst hadn't lived a long non-life without taking some preparations, and Vampires were tough because they didn't really need their hearts to beat in order for them to keep working. They had to be burned alive and incinerated for them to die completely.

It still didn't mean that the attack hadn't hurt.

What had hit Daphne's neck had been the boy's hand, which while not strong enough to give her pause, had managed to bruise her -again, an impossibility. She was a vampire. She could easily break the bones of the hand of whatever human just tried to punch her.

Amethyst pulled back, letting the knife slid out of her chest as she rushed to Daphne's side, the other twin locking eyes with the still sleeping boy. He was doing this while asleep, but the runes on his hand-they weren't familiar to her, but it was clear they'd have to get rough.

"Daphne," Amethyst coughed. "I'll pull him away," she said as the wound closed up, "I'm sure I can lure him-"

"I think he's asleep," Daphne whispered back. "His eyes are still closed."

"What? No way!" Amethyst said. She raised both hands, "Oh Spirits-" the air spun like sizzling blades, but Saito nimbly avoided them as if he could see them perfectly, pushing his body straight at Amethyst with the dagger in hand. Daphne's hand gripped on to the dagger, stopping it an inch away from her sister's right eye. The boy had somehow managed to dodge all of the blades of wind, and made his way straight at Amethyst.

"I apologize," Daphne said. "But I will have to get rough," she clenched on the dagger, and as she did, the blade cracked asunder.

In that moment, Saito's body slumped down on the ground.

Daphne blinked at the same time as Amethyst. "Is-Are-Just what-" Daphne stammered out in disbelief.

"Wh-What." Amethyst parroted Daphne, scratching the side of her head just like her twin did the same -if with the other side.

Touching the boy with the tip of her right foot, Daphne gave a hesitant look at Amethyst. "He's...He's asleep, I guess."

"Let me repair the dagger," Amethyst mumbled, "And-well, you drink up sister, I'll put everything back as it was. Still, what a surprise, I never thought there would be a man capable of avoiding a firstborn's magic like this-" she licked her lips, "I'll take just a drop or two. Seems fair since I'm going to repair his dagger anyway."

When the deed was done, it was Daphne who spoke first, a glow on her skin and a hand against her cheek. "Woah," she said with a soft hiccup. "The taste's-well, the taste's quite something."

"You should try him, sister," Amethyst replied with a light blush to her cheeks. "Foreign, exotic-uhm...I'd have another sip, but then I'd never stop. Wouldn't mind bringing a bottle back home of the stuff-"

Daphne giggled. "Now, now, that would beeee-too much," Daphne hiccuped again. She clutched on to Amethyst's shoulders, and grinned broadly. "What...What do you say-We go back to Pierre...and tell him the good news? And-A-And maybe we can get-we can get lucky tonight!" she lifted a hand in the air.

"Th-That new se-servant boy was pr-pretty cute!" Amethyst nodded eagerly, both vampire twins starting to wobble away from the camp with cheerful, half-drunk songs on their lips.

The next morning, Louise and Saito both woke up with deep rings around their eyes.

"I feel sick," Saito groaned, wincing. "Ouch-my hand hurts too-" he flexed the fingers, phantoms of pain rushing through it. "All of my muscles are sore-"

"Don't yell," Louise grumbled, clutching her head. "I feel like someone hit me with a hammer or used me as an anvil. Must have been the soup-I told you-"

"Louise, I'm not in the mood," Saito retorted while rubbing his eyes. "I swear-if it weren't for that dream-"

"A dream? What dream?" Louise asked, now curious even as she began to pack up, "Something lecherous no doubt."

"It did involve twins," Saito said with a lecherous grin, "And they were quite beautiful-coming on to me and you and-"

Louise's roundhouse kick hit Saito squarely in the back of his left leg, sending him down to one knee. "You pervert! Have all the perverted dreams of perversion you want, but don't put me in them!" she yelled, before clutching her head again. "And don't make yell like this," she grumbled, "My head hurts."

Saito winced from the pain of the sudden yell, but inwardly, he was kind of satisfied.

It had been a long time since he had last had such a pleasant dream.

Usually, he just dreamed of his house.

Or of the grief his disappearance had caused to his family.
 
Sounds like he is asking the vampires to taste Louise's blood and see if she is related. Depending on their method, this might see them blown up.

Edit: ninjaed by shade's ridiculous writing speed.
 
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Huh, sounds like Karin either kill/maims imposters on sight, or initially falls for it 90% of the time and then kills/maims them when they fail the blood test.
"Poor man, after his eldest married, he's been left alone in his mansion."
Eleanore is confirmed alive! And she got married, which makes sense as there are no spare siblings to give her wiggle room this time. Wonder how that's going, might Louise have a niece or nephew already?
 
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Hmm good news to bring the duke huh, well, I sort of wonder if it will be good news for the good cardinal though considering certain events...
 
"Good news Duke, your daughter was within arms reach and not only did you fail to recognize her, but your first act as Louise's father was to send the girl out into the wilderness, unprotected, on a courier mission. I hope your wife has better luck recognizing your long lost daughter. Oh, and if she does kill the two of them can I have your son-in-law's corpse? He was delicious."


World's Best Dad, Duke Valliere is not.
 
I get the feeling Louise isn't going to like her mother at all. Especially considering the fact that she apparently maims little girls out of anger (many of whom don't even realize they are not the heir).

I wonder how Karen would react to finally finding her lost daughter after having given up hope only to find out her daughter doesn't actually like her as a person or want to stick around?
 
"Good news Duke, your daughter was within arms reach and not only did you fail to recognize her, but your first act as Louise's father was to send the girl out into the wilderness, unprotected, on a courier mission. I hope your wife has better luck recognizing your long lost daughter. Oh, and if she does kill the two of them can I have your son-in-law's corpse? He was delicious."


World's Best Dad, Duke Valliere is not.

Hmm sounded like Louise must taste quite good as well given the reaction.
 
Well... now karin wont tornado-splode them reflexively.
(Edit: thiugh that doesnt preclude tornado-sploding certain priests)

But then the problem becomes her turning into mama karin, and that doesnt bode well for Lois's freedom of movement... although, the comparisons...
 
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Well... now karin wont tornado-splode them reflexively. But then the problem becomes her turning into mama karin, and that doesnt bode well for Lois's freedom of movement... although, the comparisons...
To be fair, Karin cannot actually keep Louise from leaving if she so chooses. Wandless magic, remember? Louise can use her explosion to literally disintegrate any barriers Karin puts in her way. Preventing Louise from leaving would be excessively expensive in terms of both repairs and manpower, and the moment Louise gets a weapon to Saito actually stopping the pair becomes even more problematic.

Louise is nothing if not headstrong. Karin will learn swiftly that Saito is her greatest ally in reestablishing a relationship with her daughter.


EDIT: I wonder if Louise still has the Cardinal's letter? A shared cause would do wonders to establish common ground zero.
 
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