The Queen of Chalices (Grail War Quest, Fate Series AU)

Yeah, not going after a probable Assassin ourselves. Safest course of alert is to alert our allies to him; Assassins can be tricksy and ideally it's at least 2 against 1 at the moment after all, assuming Rider doesn't enter the fray, given that the skeleton army doesn't seem to be posing too much of an threat at the moment. And I'm sure Avenger would appreciate something closer to a duel appropriate for her skill level.

[X] Alert both Servants to him.
 
[X] Alert both Servants to him.

Is there really a reason not to alert *both* servants to Assassin? We'd just be needlessly endangering Lancer.
 
[X] Alert both Servants to him.

Is there really a reason not to alert *both* servants to Assassin? We'd just be needlessly endangering Lancer.
Eh, between the enhanced senses of servants, Rider knowing about him and us screaming at Avenger to let her know, I interpret the alerting part less as a matter of wheter or not Lancer learns about it and more who to send after him.
Might be reading that prompt wrong though.
 
Got a bit sidetracked by stuff, but anyway votes closed, next post should hopefully be soon.
Adhoc vote count started by Lapin Lune on Mar 24, 2018 at 2:23 AM, finished with 12 posts and 10 votes.
 
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Okay, sorry to have to say this (though you might've seen it coming from how long it was taking me to get around to the next update), but I'll be putting this Quest under Hiatus. Thought I should at least officially say it this time rather than having things suddenly go silent like with most of my other Quests.

My reasons for this are partly to focus more on my College work, which I admit is nothing excessive but still obviously something I should be focusing on but have been neglecting a little, plus the other (more selfish I'll confess) reason of there being some new ideas I want to try writing.
 
Surprise Attack.
Not wanting to give my position away any more, I tried pointing and making rough gestures in the potential Assassin's direction towards Avenger. She was, obviously, a bit occupied with the undead at the time, but through the corner of her eye she did catch the wordless message I was trying to get to her, and so she immediately turned around and targeted our Assassin. Drawing her sword right up to his face, she snarled deeply at him, "So, you are the one sending these ghouls at us".

"Oh what, these 'gentlemen'? I'm afraid not, my regular troops were usually of a much higher standard, but still, best to make do with what you can get right now," the white-haired Assassin sighed, only to then snap his fingers as he eyed a spot right behind Avenger.

I tried to call out to my Servant, but before I could even open my mouth a whole snowbank had burst open in front of her, and from its icy cover a whole swathe of undead sprang forth to pounce on Avenger, denying her the chance to even react. These ghastly corpses began tearing their rotten claws into her, and kept blasting off bullets till she was pinned to the ground, blood trickling down her face.

Oh no, please live... I thought to myself. But wait, why would I even think that? Avenger was already dead as with all Servants, and without her I'd have more than enough excuse to vamoose from this War. Was I really still so fragile a creature, unable to bear the sight of someone dying in front of me?

"Excellent use of terrain, men. It at least seems we're making improvements," Assassin spoke up and looked down at Avenger to say, "Really, for a warrior you're in dire need of brushing up on modern tactics, my dear".
But before Assassin could make another strike on her, the snow all around us was broken up by, of all beasts, a camel that came riding up towards him, trampling the undead in its way. Glancing up however I spotted the familiar face of a dusky brown-skinned woman in a green robe, standing atop an elaborate palanquin of a saddle more elegant than her slumping camel could ever look. So this was Rider's mount then?

"Wretched sinner," Rider hissed down at this Assassin from up high, "How dare you use dirty trickery to sully the rightful field of the warriors of God?"

To this, Assassin let out a chuckle, "Bold words for one who'd side with a blackened knight, and an Avenger it'd look like. Besides, I could hardly fathom whatever era you hail from, but in the modern world anything so quaint as the Age of Chivalry has long been dethroned. Anyway, as much as I'd love to chat, I do believe the battlefield is neither the time nor place for such idleness," he said as he raised his musket at Rider and promptly fired.

The shot hit Rider straight in the heart! And yet... though she staggered a bit from the impact, Rider was oddly fine and most certainly still alive, despite having taken what should've been a killing blow.
Her camel then simply kicked Assassin's gun right out of his hands. As Rider carefully touched her wound to dislodge the bullet, she proclaimed from high onto Assassin, "Age of Chivalry? No, it's an Age of the Divine I hail from".

Assassin, lost for words, took but a step back, only to find he was blocked by a rejuvenated Avenger, I knew she wouldn't go down that easily! *Ahem* I could almost see flames starting to come out of Avenger's nostrils, and I didn't mean that as an exaggeration as I could sense something of a fiery aura starting form around her.
Our white-haired tactician gasped to look down at his gloved hand, which was slowly being burnt even though he wasn't even touching Avenger's flames, that it was simply their presence that seared him.

"So, that's what backward old folk tale you're from," he whispered. "W-well either way," Assassin then snapped, shook his head and stood back up "I think this should be enough enemy knowledge to suffice for a scouting mission, I believe I'm needed back at base," he said as he drew another gun and fired a shot that ricocheted right around Avenger, almost coming over-
-to hit me square in the face! My IM-sight and Gemstone Gauntlets were enough to spot and deflect the bullet, but being a shot from a Servant it still left quite a dent in them.

Well, Assassin had used this distraction to flee, lightning-quick at that too, and any of his corpse minions seemed to have been mopped up. Urgh, this whole ordeal was enough to make me almost collapse, but Rider was swift enough with her camel to have its head prop me up from falling into the snow.

"Er, thanks," was all I could say at that point. Really though, Avenger was more wounded than I was, yet at least she had that regenerating mana ability to back her up. Whereas I was just some human who'd been in the crossfire of a Servant battle, wasn't I?
Avenger herself didn't say a word to me, and simply gave me a cold, fleeting stare. D-did I do something that offended her, or was it herself she was being hard on? Hah, what am I saying, like an Avenger's ever the easygoing type.

Wait, wasn't there also another...?

"Can any of you see any sign of Lancer?" Rider raised her voice. Ah yeah, that was it.

My eyes quickly darted around for any sign of the girl who'd treated battle more like a dance, yet saw nothing. Avenger slowly turned her head from side to side, yet also gave no indication of seeing anything.

"The last I saw her, she was headed to that castle in the distance," Rider stated, "Perhaps to confront whatever Master sent Assassin upon us in the first place?"

[ ] Guess we should go find Lancer then?
[ ] Oh God, I should really be back in bed now, shouldn't I?
[ ] Oh God, I should really be back in bed now, shouldn't I? Maybe I can trust her with Avenger though.
[ ] We might need more back-up if we're headed to that castle. Say, isn't Karisviel on your side?
[ ] Maybe we could scout around for other Servants. I mean, if I am gonna get dragged into this Grail War...
[ ] Write-in.
 
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[x] Oh God, I should really be back in bed now, shouldn't I? Maybe I can trust her with Avenger though.
 
[X] We might need more back-up if we're headed to that castle. Say, isn't Karisviel on your side?
 
[X] We might need more back-up if we're headed to that castle. Say, isn't Karisviel on your side?
 
[X] Guess we should go find Lancer then?

Glad to see this quest is active again, its been pretty good so far.
 
[X] We might need more back-up if we're headed to that castle. Say, isn't Karisviel on your side?

Welcome back!! ^^
Adhoc vote count started by InquiQual on Sep 27, 2018 at 9:22 PM, finished with 9 posts and 9 votes.
 
Okay,since we've got a clear lead, I'll be closing this a vote and trying to get the next update up soon.
Adhoc vote count started by Lapin Lune on Sep 28, 2018 at 7:04 AM, finished with 9 posts and 9 votes.
 
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Castle of Shadows.
"Wait, don't you have allies you can call on? I mean you're not going to head off to the enemy's castle with two people you've only just met, right?" I first spoke up to Rider, "You'd be teamed up with that Karisviel woman, wouldn't you?"

"You know her?" Rider's voice rose, before she nodded and replied, "This is true, though not my Master she is indeed the head of our anti-Nazi faction in this Grail War," She then bent down and sighed "I don't mean to be callow, but it's a bit of a shame which Servant she was handed, a soul who is not the most tolerant of others..."

"Oh, you're talking about Archer, right?" I couldn't help but cut in, only for Avenger to suddenly launch a glare at me.

"Master, do not so easily give away what we know to our potential enemy," the dark princess hissed at me, her piercing eyes upon me.

"Really Avenger? I know this is 'War', but how you can brush off Rider when she just saved our lives?" I whispered back at her. Avenger, almost like she was holding back a tantrum, simply scowled and turned her head to the side, not giving any verbal reply.

It was then we were all cut off by another voice, a voice all too familiar. "'Shame which Servant'? Hah, you may want to watch your tongue, my unfortunate ally, when speaking of one with the senses of an Archer," came the haughty tones of that powerfully-built, bow-wielding woman we'd met just this afternoon, as she came leaping down a nearby slope.

"Oh, my- my apologies..." Rider mumbled when faced with Archer's presence. As for Avenger, her scowling self would've leapt straight at Archer if Rider and I had not reached out to restrain her.

"Hillcrest-Wisteria," came a second familiar voice, as the blonde German homunculus slowly levitated down, on tiny rockets in her feet no less. "I did calculate it would be highly beneficial for us to meet again. Now that you have made an analysis of your in-laws, can you now give an affirmative or negative answer?" Karisviel had grown no less monotone.

"Ugh, this again?" I muttered, then tried to tell her, "Look, I honestly don't know right now, about anything really, but... your ally Rider has given me little reason to doubt you," I gestured with somewhat of a smile towards Rider "Even if Avenger still can't bring herself to trust her.
Anyway, we've just gotten out of a scrape with some white-haired, military-type Assassin," I went on, "Doubt he's one of yours?"

"White-haired military Assassin?" Archer of all people swiftly responded.

"He did appear to be a tactician and leader of men. A quite under-handed one, but he could certainly turn the terrain to his advantage," Rider filled in for me, "He was accompanied by a group of ghoulish undead, and, ah, beings I could only describe as 'Shadow-selves'. Both of these were likely minions of other Servants or Masters, as he didn't seem to have much attachment to them".

"I see..." said Archer with a soft rasp, well soft on the outside anyway, "Anyway, where is that Lancer girl, was she not deployed in this area?"

"Ah, just what I'd been meaning to see you about," I got in before anyone else could, "'Fraid your Lancer's gone off on a little solo venture to a castle full of Nazis".

"What? Reckless child!" Archer snapped out without hesitation.

"I would not employ such a negative tone, but it does compute. Attempting such a mission unaided would be a critical error," Karisviel murmured beneath her Servant's fury, which she was about to get more of.

"That Lancer never seemed the most reliable type. Tell me, in a War like this how can you she has not simply gone over to the enemy's side?" Archer had to bring up.
My first instinct was to interject, but then I thought... well yeah, it was something to consider.
B-but someone as bubbly as Lancer, a traitor? Besides, she's non-white, nor Japanese, what would the Nazis even want with her?

"Are you so quick to lose faith in our own ally, do you have no sense of unity?" Rider on the other hand didn't hold back with her words. "True, either way we must determine what Lancer is up to. It would seem to the castle it is".



And was it some castle.

At first I could barely believe what I was seeing, and I say that as a Magus with a resurrected dead princess on my hands. This castle up in the ranges above Winterwood looked utterly unreal, like someone had taken the mere shadow of a castle and somehow expanded it into the third dimension.

"A flimsy construction," Avenger snarled beneath her breath, "Great halls can collapse much more easily than you'd think, one made of shadows would take even less to knock down". Huh, interesting observation.

As we approached it, I soon spotted that Lancer had not in fact gotten too far ahead of us. For she was standing in front of its tall, midnight doors, her eyes darting all over as she looked at it, I guessed finding to find any way to get in.

"Oh hey, Rider, Blossom girl, Karisviel, er and Avenger and Archer, yay," Lancer's bright expression dwindled as she spoke, "Okay okay, I'll confess that running off like that wasn't me at my most co-operative. But still, if this the enemy's base of operations, 'cause what else would something like this be, we've gotta find some way to crack this egg".

"Huh, awfully eager so early on," I was first to speak, before Archer could unleash whatever nasty comment she'd been storing, "Well, I can certainly see the logic in wanting to get the War over with as soon as humanly possible".

"But do you honestly plan to deal with all the Axis Servants and Masters at once?" Rider followed me with.

"Of course not, what do you take me for?" Lancer had to groan at that comment "No need to tell me that we can't just brute force this nightmare, but still, little infiltration route never hurt anyone, right?"

[ ] "Well, what did you have in mind, Lancer?"
[ ] "Hmm, do you think Archer could set up one of those 'arrow ladders'?"
[ ] "So Avenger, how flimsy d you take this thing for?"
[ ] "Really, I should be heading back for the night..."
[ ] Uh, Karisviel, perhaps we should head back to your base first, let your allies know about all this?"
[ ] Write-in.

QM's Note: Starting to think that maybe 'Chalisviel' might've made a better, and more relevant, name for our Einzbern. But unlike Quinton/Quentin, guess it's too late to change it now.

Also, had to rewrite the later part of this update due to second thoughts about the enemy Servant line-up.
 
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[X] Uh, Karisviel, perhaps we should head back to your base first, let your allies know about all this?"
 
Like we know where this is now, and (chances are) it isn't going to vanish on us. If we're committing to this, it might be better to regroup?

[X] Uh, Karisviel, perhaps we should head back to your base first, let your allies know about all this?"
 
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