The Enemy Within (WHF Witch Hunter Quest)

Omake: I believe I have deduced the real deception of the story: do you remember at the start, when we found the dead man near the road, killed by the mutant bandits, that looked just like us?
That looked... just... like Markus.
Didn't it seem strange to you? Far-fetched, coincidental, even unbelievable?
There, on the road, that man was the real Markus von Bruner.

Our MC is instead the cultist that we believe to be dead; he has taken up the memories of the murdered Witch Hunter as his own with a ritual, to be a deep cover agent. A bit like a Manchurian agent, but above all like the fantasy version of a Replicant/Android.
The cultists compliments us and sends us new communications that he cannot pronounce via the PuRpLe InK, but he cannot know. He doesn't know that the cultist has overwritten his own being and personality so well, that now he is Markus von Bruner. That's all he is, in fact! We can't even receive what he sent us through the Ink, and dismiss it.
Will Markus ever recognize his own origin? Will he even believe it if the cultists throw it in his face? Will he say that it actually doesn't matter?
A question for later episodes^^
 
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Ugh. Might have just realized something. @Maugan Ra was the vacation vote about deciding multi-class opportunities during the timeskip?
 
[X] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
[X] [Excess] Markus develops a serious drinking habit during his time on the docks, impressing his peers with his ability to stay relatively coherent after downing enough ale to sedate a horse. He finds the prospect of being able to forget his woes for a night remarkably comforting. (-1 corruption)
[X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
[X] [Change] Finding himself increasingly uncomfortable with his enforced idleness, Markus throws himself into supporting and aiding a number of different social movements and political groups. It is deeply disquieting to him to discover that such pursuits bring him just as much satisfaction as his service to Sigmar did… was it always thus? Was his faith never more than a convenient cause to dedicate himself to? (-2 corruption)
 
If you want to pick that option you can but please don't make claims about things that aren't said in the option.

[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)
@Stewart9 I think you forgot to take the X out. This voids any previous vote you made.

Did you not read what I have said, their are mutations and defects that are not caused by the influence of the Four or concentrated Dark Magic like Warpstone and thus should not be persecuted for just existing. Once a good portion of both your arms have become Tentacles you have gone pretty far beyond a benign birth defect.

When you have gotten to the point that your hands have become Tentacles their is not much that can be done for you. What would be your cut of point be and how would you suggest a person with their lower arms turned into Tentacles be made a functional member of Imperial Society in the given situation. You could try cutting of the Tentacles and then using the Divine Magic of Shallya and the Green Wind to regenerate their arms as they were before they were changed but I doubt something like that is possible.

Once you have been warped bodily you are much more vulnerable to having it happen again and again and their is not much that can be done about it.
I'm well aware you're talking about Chaos-wrought mutations instead of normal birth defects. It remains degenerate to say that murdering a mutant is the best thing you can do for them. Having a tentacle is ruinous to a person's place in society because of prejudice, but it's never good to euthanise outsiders simply because they're outsiders. That's evil, people who think outsiders should be lynched are evil. The best thing to do is provide them legal protections and treat them like people.

Having a tentacle is not the end of your soul and morality either. It is, for the most part, just a deformity. In game rules, mutations don't make you more likely to mutate further, and by game rules, the average human only falls to Chaos when they get their 4th physical mutation or 4th mental mutation - having a tentacle for a hand or a head growing out of your chest is only a single mutation. What's far, far more likely to push a mutant into Chaos is going through with the persecution you call a mercy, as Chaos cults promise them safety. The Mutant Edict will reduce the number of people who fall to Chaos, not increase it.

Two how in the world does not wanting to do something the Dark Whispers of Tzeentch push us to do mean that Netos would not want to have done something about the Daemon in the Sewers or not help the women we saved in the first update.
"lest that flame becomes the one of a Flamer of Tzeench.": don't go to places where we have to fight a daemon. "He would risk not being a Witch Hunter anymore": don't do anything that'd harm Markus' career.

Third nothing about the option below says the Mutant in question is innocent or guilty or even how much they have been mutated in body let alone spirit.
It's not explicitly spelled out and it doesn't need to be because it's obvious, but Markus wouldn't be killing a priest if the mutant was being fed to a pyre for proven witchcraft or Chaos worship. He's killing a zealous priest who's ignoring the Edict and burning a mutant for being a mutant.

Nothing he said suggests he does not want to fight any cultists we find or let people get abused. He is pointing out that doing what the Deceiver would want us to do and thus picking up traits that make us less trusted by our allies and more like his followers makes us more vulnerable to his influencing Markus further and also harder to fight his cultists Ann's agents.
"It is also the option that further pits Markus against the Cult of Sigmar.": we should let the Cult of Sigmar abuse people, otherwise we'd be pitting ourselves against them. "Giving him of all gods more hooks when his minions and style of corruption is going to be most frequent seems like a very bad idea.": corruption is so bad that we cannot allow ourselves to save innocent people if doing so has a chance of making us more likely to be corrupted. (Here I will point out that stopping the ritual got us 3 corruption points and could've gotten us 5.)

Dutch was very clear that obeying evil zealots and avoiding the chance of corruption must take precedent over saving innocents.
 
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Staff Notice
That choice is saving an innocent from the pyre. Your argument is disgusting. We will be under no obligation to become a Chaos worshipper just because we chose to be a good person at one point in our past.


Cease these degenerate arguments please. No, killing a mutant is not the best thing you can do for them. Stop agreeing with in-setting bad people who make the same immoral arguments.


I'm going to ask you stop being a moralizing wanker. Nothing against your character, but picking the other choices is a perfectly valid options. Even if it were a true innocent on the pyre, we are under no obligation to save them, OOC. You've made your point, now stop harping about it.

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Changing subjects slightly, I'll stop trolling with my vote.

[X] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)

[X] [Excess] While still not convinced he is worthy of love, Markus finds indulging baser needs far more easy to justify. He takes lovers heedlessly and often, drowning himself in desire, caring nothing for anything beyond this night and this indulgence. It means nothing. (-2 corruption)

[X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)

[X] [Change] There's always another agitator, another would-be-revolutionary, but Markus keeps well clear of them all. He's here to get away from higher causes for a bit. (0 corruption)
 
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Dutch was very clear that obeying evil zealots and avoiding the chance of corruption must take precedent over saving innocents.
Andres. If the 'completely moral and righteous' option is a detriment at the same scale as going on a murder spree, almost becoming a slave to addiction & pleasure, and completely giving up on the world. Maybe you should consider why that is and what isn't being said here.
 
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[X] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
[X] [Excess] Markus develops a serious drinking habit during his time on the docks, impressing his peers with his ability to stay relatively coherent after downing enough ale to sedate a horse. He finds the prospect of being able to forget his woes for a night remarkably comforting. (-1 corruption)
[X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
[X] [Change] Finding himself increasingly uncomfortable with his enforced idleness, Markus throws himself into supporting and aiding a number of different social movements and political groups. It is deeply disquieting to him to discover that such pursuits bring him just as much satisfaction as his service to Sigmar did… was it always thus? Was his faith never more than a convenient cause to dedicate himself to? (-2 corruption)
 
[X] [Blood] In a somewhat surprising turn of events, Markus makes it through his downtime without ever getting into anything more serious than a brief shoving match. (0 Corruption)
[X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
[X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption
 
I have put Excess -1, but it is funny to consider that Excess -1 and -3 actually make Markus a bit like Mr. Du Bois, the crashing addict detective protagonist from Disco Elysium.

Now, if you combine that with Change -1 or more:

Empathy: "Altdorf cannot go on like this, there is too much suffering in this struggle"
Authority: "Yes. But what does the city Altdorf need?"
Electrochemistry: "I'd say that it can definitely do with more... disco" ^^
*cue spontaneous Slaanesh crisis
 
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[x] [Excess] While still not convinced he is worthy of love, Markus finds indulging baser needs far more easy to justify. He takes lovers heedlessly and often, drowning himself in desire, caring nothing for anything beyond this night and this indulgence. It means nothing. (-2 corruption)
[x] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)
[x] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)
[x] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
 
Adhoc vote count started by LucidProp on Oct 1, 2024 at 11:02 AM, finished with 105 posts and 58 votes.
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    [X] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
    [X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Blood] The Hooks, one of Altdorf's most notorious and widespread gangs, have close ties to the stevedores and other dockside labourers. Markus gets swept up in one of the city's periodic gang wars, and while at first he fights to defend his new comrades and drinking buddies, the chance to vent his fury on lawbreakers and other lowlife scum is seductively appealing. (-3 corruption)
    [X] [Blood] In a somewhat surprising turn of events, Markus makes it through his downtime without ever getting into anything more serious than a brief shoving match. (0 Corruption)
    -[x] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
    -[X] [Excess] Markus develops a serious drinking habit during his time on the docks, impressing his peers with his ability to stay relatively coherent after downing enough ale to sedate a horse. He finds the prospect of being able to forget his woes for a night remarkably comforting. (-1 corruption)
    -[X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
    -[X] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
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    [X] [Excess] Markus develops a serious drinking habit during his time on the docks, impressing his peers with his ability to stay relatively coherent after downing enough ale to sedate a horse. He finds the prospect of being able to forget his woes for a night remarkably comforting. (-1 corruption)
    [X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
    [X] [Excess] While still not convinced he is worthy of love, Markus finds indulging baser needs far more easy to justify. He takes lovers heedlessly and often, drowning himself in desire, caring nothing for anything beyond this night and this indulgence. It means nothing. (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Excess] One can get almost anything in Altdorf, if they know where to look. At first it is curiosity that drives Markus to experiment, then an increasingly desperate need for the comforting oblivion they bring with them, and while a friend is able to drag him back to the surface before he drowns, the temptation lingers in his mind. (-3 corruption)
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    [x] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
    [X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)
    [X] [Change] Finding himself increasingly uncomfortable with his enforced idleness, Markus throws himself into supporting and aiding a number of different social movements and political groups. It is deeply disquieting to him to discover that such pursuits bring him just as much satisfaction as his service to Sigmar did… was it always thus? Was his faith never more than a convenient cause to dedicate himself to? (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Change] There's always another agitator, another would-be-revolutionary, but Markus keeps well clear of them all. He's here to get away from higher causes for a bit. (0 corruption)
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    [X] Plan: Even Out
    -[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
    -[X] [Excess] While still not convinced he is worthy of love, Markus finds indulging baser needs far more easy to justify. He takes lovers heedlessly and often, drowning himself in desire, caring nothing for anything beyond this night and this indulgence. It means nothing. (-2 corruption)
    -[X] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
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    [X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
    [X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)
    [X] [Decay] One sees and hears all manner of things on the Altdorf docklands, things that might be dangerous to care about, and what starts as simple prudence becomes a growing sense of numb fatalism to the world and its troubles. Why wear yourself ragged worrying about what you cannot change? (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Decay] Plague sweeps the docklands, as it often does, and though Markus falls sick with so many others he finds he hardly cares. A man's fate is not his own, his life and death in the hands of the gods above. Though he recovers from the plague, Markus soon finds that this too brings no great satisfaction. (-3 corruption)
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    [X] Plan: Bloody rescue
    -[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
    -[X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
    -[X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)
    -[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)
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    [X] Plan: Dabbling
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    [X] Plan: Fight for the man beside you, and fight for his future
  • 1

    [X] Plan Reikland Uber Alles


Discarding the votes that aren't formatted correctly, it seems like we're going with -1 for each Chaos God. Tiny margins between 1st and 2nd places though, so that could change easily.
 
[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)

[X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)

[X] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)

[X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)

There's only a little less than 2 hours left before votes are closed, so I decided to change mine. Mainly, I'm supporting -1 for Change since there's only a 1 vote gap between it and -3 Change.

I'm keeping Excess at 0 however, since it's only 2 votes away from tying with alcoholism at -1. Really would rather avoid that. The beast in the bottle is a tough devil to get rid of, and Max is already the drunkard of the party so I'd rather not steal his thing far as bad habits go!
 
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[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)

I think that defending the mutants is morally good and interesting. If any of them are actual cultists, that is a separate issue that will be dealt with accordingly.

[X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)

I hate Nurgle.
 
[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)

Markus has consistently shown a deep respect for the rule of law. If a man is innocent by law, putting him on the pyre is murder, and by extension saving from such is an act of heroism.

[X] [Blood] The Hooks, one of Altdorf's most notorious and widespread gangs, have close ties to the stevedores and other dockside labourers. Markus gets swept up in one of the city's periodic gang wars, and while at first he fights to defend his new comrades and drinking buddies, the chance to vent his fury on lawbreakers and other lowlife scum is seductively appealing. (-3 corruption)

And would you look at this, some influence that makes him more likely to 'vent his fury' on lawbreakers. Like a zealous priest who is burning people who they aren't supposed to burn.

That choice is saving an innocent from the pyre.
While on paper and in the eyes of both the law and Marcus this is true, considering that this is something Markus explicitely does only because of influence of Tzeentch to burn off Corruption points he got from fighting Daemons of Tzeentch, I would be highly surprised if this individual was actually innocent. It would be unlike the Great Changer to only swat a single fly in one swipe when there are so many of them flying around.

At best, we're saving a pawn Tzeentch hopes to use in the future. At worst, a bishop.
 
Adhoc vote count started by LucidProp on Oct 1, 2024 at 11:40 AM, finished with 109 posts and 60 votes.


As a experiment, I did a vote tally by line and merged votes as appropriate in order to involve the votes with wonky formatting. If I did things correctly, they're as follows:

Decay: 1st Place (-1) at 27 votes, 2nd place (0) at 20 votes
Blood: 1st place (-1) at 25 votes, 2nd place (-2) at 16 votes
Change: 1st place (-1) at 24 votes, 2nd place (-3) at 23 votes
Excess: 1st place (-1) at 19 votes, 2nd place (-0) at 17 votes
 
[X] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
[X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
[X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)

[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)

You know what, I want to see an interesting story. Changing my vote to add the option with the most plot hooks.
 
[x] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
 
[x] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
[x] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
[x] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
[x] [Blood] In a somewhat surprising turn of events, Markus makes it through his downtime without ever getting into anything more serious than a brief shoving match. (0 Corruption)
 
[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)

[X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)

[X] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)

[X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)
 
The current winning votes only bring us down to 1 corruption point. If someone could please elevate one of the -2 or -3 action so we can get rid of all of it, that would be appreciated. I'd ideally love to get at least some xp from this but at the very least we should get rid of all our corruption points .
 
You think there won't be any other occasions to lower corruption? I value a serious character fault more than 1 single point of corruption. It won't be the difference between a reserve of 9 or a reserve of 8 that mUtaTes us
 
Vote closed
Scheduled vote count started by Maugan Ra on Sep 30, 2024 at 4:03 PM, finished with 117 posts and 63 votes.
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    [X] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
    [X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Blood] The Hooks, one of Altdorf's most notorious and widespread gangs, have close ties to the stevedores and other dockside labourers. Markus gets swept up in one of the city's periodic gang wars, and while at first he fights to defend his new comrades and drinking buddies, the chance to vent his fury on lawbreakers and other lowlife scum is seductively appealing. (-3 corruption)
    [X] [Blood] In a somewhat surprising turn of events, Markus makes it through his downtime without ever getting into anything more serious than a brief shoving match. (0 Corruption)
    -[x] [Blood] After a hard day's work, the stevedores descend on Altdorf's taverns for a hard night's carousing. Markus finds himself getting involved in the inevitable drunken brawls with increasing frequency. More than that, he finds that he has started to look forward to them. (-1 Corruption)
    -[X] [Excess] Markus develops a serious drinking habit during his time on the docks, impressing his peers with his ability to stay relatively coherent after downing enough ale to sedate a horse. He finds the prospect of being able to forget his woes for a night remarkably comforting. (-1 corruption)
    -[X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
    -[X] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
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    [X] [Excess] Markus develops a serious drinking habit during his time on the docks, impressing his peers with his ability to stay relatively coherent after downing enough ale to sedate a horse. He finds the prospect of being able to forget his woes for a night remarkably comforting. (-1 corruption)
    [X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
    [X] [Excess] While still not convinced he is worthy of love, Markus finds indulging baser needs far more easy to justify. He takes lovers heedlessly and often, drowning himself in desire, caring nothing for anything beyond this night and this indulgence. It means nothing. (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Excess] One can get almost anything in Altdorf, if they know where to look. At first it is curiosity that drives Markus to experiment, then an increasingly desperate need for the comforting oblivion they bring with them, and while a friend is able to drag him back to the surface before he drowns, the temptation lingers in his mind. (-3 corruption)
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    [x] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
    [X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)
    [X] [Change] Finding himself increasingly uncomfortable with his enforced idleness, Markus throws himself into supporting and aiding a number of different social movements and political groups. It is deeply disquieting to him to discover that such pursuits bring him just as much satisfaction as his service to Sigmar did… was it always thus? Was his faith never more than a convenient cause to dedicate himself to? (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Change] There's always another agitator, another would-be-revolutionary, but Markus keeps well clear of them all. He's here to get away from higher causes for a bit. (0 corruption)
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    [X] Plan: Even Out
    -[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
    -[X] [Excess] While still not convinced he is worthy of love, Markus finds indulging baser needs far more easy to justify. He takes lovers heedlessly and often, drowning himself in desire, caring nothing for anything beyond this night and this indulgence. It means nothing. (-2 corruption)
    -[X] [Change] When the student radicals distribute their pamphlets and the demagogues begin spitting vitriol at the ruling classes, Markus finds himself surprisingly taken by some of their rhetoric. For a noble-born agent of the state, such sympathies are uncomfortable and dangerous, but he cannot help what his heart proclaims. (-1 corruption)
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    [X] [Decay] Though he was discomforted at first by his enforced rest, Markus soon finds the prospect of just laying down his burdens and forgetting all higher purposes and grand social obligations for a time surprisingly comfortable. (-1 corruption)
    [X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)
    [X] [Decay] One sees and hears all manner of things on the Altdorf docklands, things that might be dangerous to care about, and what starts as simple prudence becomes a growing sense of numb fatalism to the world and its troubles. Why wear yourself ragged worrying about what you cannot change? (-2 corruption)
    [X] [Decay] Plague sweeps the docklands, as it often does, and though Markus falls sick with so many others he finds he hardly cares. A man's fate is not his own, his life and death in the hands of the gods above. Though he recovers from the plague, Markus soon finds that this too brings no great satisfaction. (-3 corruption)
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    [X] Plan: Bloody rescue
    -[X] [Blood] The fighting pits and betting arenas of Altdorf are always in need of fresh meat, and more than a few dockside labourers take the chance to earn some extra coin by competing. Markus finds himself beating other men bloody for the roars of the adoring crowd, and enjoying himself far more than he would have thought. (-2 corruption)
    -[X] [Excess] Markus keeps his head and cool throughout his time on the docks, regarded by his fellow labourers as a bit of a killjoy, for all that they appreciate having someone sober to watch over them. (0 corruption)
    -[X] [Decay] Markus remains motivated and diligent throughout his time among the common folk. (0 corruption)
    -[X] [Change] With the mutant edict, it is illegal to persecute those whose flesh betrays them, but not all within the church or state agree. Moved by principle, Markus ends up killing a zealous priest in order to defend a mutant from the pyre, an act that may bring his entire future career - perhaps even his life - into jeopardy if it becomes known. (-3 corruption)
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    [X] Plan: Dabbling
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    [X] Plan: Fight for the man beside you, and fight for his future
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    [X] Plan Reikland Uber Alles
 
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