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The Absent Father - A WH30k GSRPG - Claims and OOC Thread

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ZealousThoughts said:
Second question, with Propero astride two sectors which do I assume I am in?
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Split your exploration stuff and send it to the relevant mods. If you're sending one fleet off into Ultima, send that to me, and if you're sending two into Solar, send that to JBO.

Edit: North and South from Prospero you can send to me as well because those Sectors fall more into Ultima than Solar.
 
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Rolling for Lorgar
Maelvona threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: North Total: 92
88 88 4 4
Maelvona threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: West Total: 43
10 10 33 33
Maelvona threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: South Total: 173
79 79 94 94
 
KnightofTempest said:
@Maelvona is English your second language? There's a lot of wrong words in your Necron post and it makes it hard to read. . .
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I fixed some grammatical errors and awkward phrases, but I don't think it was particularly hard to read even with them. The language is a bit tough maybe, is English yours? I wrote it in a certain prose that I would have preferred to extend to capture the gravity of what was happening, but I did write 2,000 words in six hours, which is more then what a fair majority would ever write for a game.
 
Maelvona said:
I fixed some grammatical errors and awkward phrases, but I don't think it was particularly hard to read even with them. The language is a bit tough maybe, is English yours? I wrote it in a certain prose that I would have preferred to extend to capture the gravity of what was happening, but I did write 2,000 words in six hours, which is more then what a fair majority would ever write for a game.
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Like you have the word Illicit, meaning illegal, in place of the word Elicited. There's multiple little slips like that which make me have to stop reading and try and figure out what you meant to say.
 
I would say it is unreadable, damn dude, you need to cut your posts into different paragraphs. It is a literal text wall! Pun intended.
As for grammar, I mean it is readable and the point gets across well enough, it isn't that awkwardly written at all. It is just a text with a few errors which is normal, he can't really do everything perfectly, I don't really see where is the problem on that side.
 
Terran Imperium said:
I would say it is unreadable, damn dude, you need to cut your posts into different paragraphs. It is a literal text wall! Pun intended.
As for grammar, I mean it is readable and the point gets across well enough, it isn't that awkwardly written at all. It is just a text with a few errors which is normal, he can't really do everything perfectly, I don't really see where is the problem on that side.
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Maybe I'm just having a harder time cause its 3:30 am. I guess its not that big a deal.
 
Rolling for Magnus
JBO threw 4 100-faced dice. Total: 172
35 35 34 34 59 59 44 44
 
Rolls for Perturabo.
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: North Total: 146
47 47 99 99
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: South Total: 49
28 28 21 21
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: East Total: 48
47 47 1 1
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: West Total: 78
7 7 71 71
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: North East Total: 139
53 53 86 86
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: South East Total: 114
84 84 30 30
Sidheach threw 2 100-faced dice. Reason: North West Total: 31
21 21 10 10
 
Rolling for Custodes
JBO threw 8 100-faced dice. Total: 441
16 16 61 61 24 24 19 19 75 75 82 82 96 96 68 68
 
Rolling for [THIS PRIMARCH DOES NOT EXIST]
JBO threw 6 100-faced dice. Total: 380
84 84 40 40 73 73 67 67 52 52 64 64
 
Xeno witches exploration
JBO threw 2 100-faced dice. Total: 60
21 21 39 39
 
Dorn rolls
JBO threw 12 100-faced dice. Total: 569
71 71 54 54 51 51 4 4 16 16 59 59 38 38 55 55 58 58 92 92 41 41 30 30
 
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