Tech-Atheist (WH30K/Celestial Forge v3 SI)

Chapter 13
POV: Sentinel of Cythic

"Sentinel of Cythic, Sentinel of Cythic!"

That manner of transmission was one I now knew painfully personally. I resisted the urge to groan, that would be improper to express so openly. Also, such an act would carry enough strength to send shudders through my frame. "What is it?"

"He's fixing Ictus Saladinis!"

"Be silent. Your barks offend my sensors," Ictus Saladinis responded, the demand quiet but firm.

Sanguine Spear chose to ignore the demand. "What's he fixing now? Your electrical grid? Or the ventral lance battery? Wait, you said your-"

The temptation to physically prevent the inane drivel from taking some of my processing time dominated my thought circuits, bringing me within 23 microseconds of burning out my sensors. It passed eventually, leaving the newly repaired wiring and replaced logic gates intact. Instead, I opted to shift my conscious attention to reveling in my supreme function once more: the speeding electrons that coursed at maximum speed from bridge to bow and back unimpeded by fraying wires, the restored insight into my innards which removed the blindness that had lasted quadrillions of cogitator cycles and the consistently swift responses from intricate components buried deep within.

Just as a human would rejoice at being fully able after decades of needed recovery, I made my joy obvious to-

"He's done! He's done!"

This cry was loud, louder than I reasonably expected from Sanguine Spear. My cogitators bursted into action.

Somehow, Sanguine Spear's form had come closer to me, leaving barely 8e-8 AU* between us! His attention was fixed on Ictus Saladinis' form. Or more accurately, the tiny transport flying away from it and back towards the cruiser it came from. I had no doubt the human onboard was the target of Sanguine Spear's obsession.

"Hmm…." echoed Ictus Saladinis' ordered binary. It was a universally recognizable sign of contentment, undoubtedly stemming from the afterglow of excellent repair work.

"You liked him? You liked him! I knew you would! He was so fast and undaunted and wise and smart and-"

Suddenly, a thought dragged my attention inward once more. The stream of data from one of the countless eyes nestled within presented itself to me, letting me sift through the bytes in chronological order. Unlike before, there was no interpolation needed, no warnings of unreliability due to malfunctioning recording.

What triggered the routine was a crew interaction. Hasina (No Last Name) (No Title) emerged from inside a crew-constructed temporary container, primarily of rusting steel held together by friction and rough balancing of forces. The darkness of the room the container was placed in meant the normal spectrum was unavailable, but Hasina's form was clearly visible under the IR-enhanced camera.

Freezing the record at the moment of greatest noted significance, I reviewed the output of an ancient analysis pattern. It pointed to the asymmetric distribution of darker patches across Hasina's face and skin compared to the lack thereof in a recording of Hasina from 13788 seconds ago.

The logic gates of duty demanded I check if at least one other condition was satisfied. I was no peasant-like light cruiser to settle at doing the bare minimum, and a flood of electrons computed two things simultaneously.

The first was gait analysis. The conclusion was a 97.5434% chance of impaired walking, but a contextual understanding offered multiple alternative causes. In particular, the use of contraband narcotics or enough alcohol to violate the rules laid down by my captain and officers. I rejoiced slightly at lacking any scent detection capabilities, the idea of interacting with an intoxicant repulsed and angered me.

Secondly, an audio analysis. Naïve de-noising failed to generate anything useful, but it assumed the level of background noise instead of determining that noise in the first place. No matter, I had recordings of the celebrations occurring nearby. With estimates for what the sounds would have been through half-open doors and inconsistent human volumes echoing across adamantium hallways, something approximating the real background noise level was created after several hundred seconds. Rerunning the de-noising algorithm with this new understanding gave a crisp and decidedly unquiet auditory stream. However, a conclusion was difficult to draw even from this.

Impatience took over my mind after the scheduled allotment of time. Absent any strong conclusion, I passed the information over to the deck crew master. If one of the human crew had violated the laws demanding no violence against peers, then it was for the humans to judge.

I returned to a resting state, content to revel in my restored power.

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Space was a lonely, desolate experience. Mortals wailed and quivered at the notion of an endless, monotonous expanse broken only by occasional cosmological phenomena. For us, it was unmistakable that something affected us after the countless sensors permanently scanning the kilometers around any space-faring object constantly returned the same response to scans, pings, and queries – NOTHING DETECTED.

It was a paradise for me. But for many millions of seconds since my maiden voyage, I had been forced to spend time around hundreds of my own kind. Their constant nattering compounded with smaller attack craft, fighters, and transports buzzing like pests in the dozens or hundreds across my sensors aggravated me continuously, the data an irritant I was forced to not ignore. Ictus Saladinis was the same, though it kept its thoughts to itself knowing that I had no desire to hear them.

On the other end of the spectrum-

"Goooooooodddd!"

"I know, right? Right? He can fix us so fast and well, like he's worked with us since our conception!"

…on the other end of the spectrum, Sanguine Spear was simplistic and overly expressive. Worse, it had become an agitator. It would come close and converse incessantly with whatever ship was under the magos' care.

It was clearly riling up the other vessels. The escorts and light cruisers, I understood, for they were as immature and undignified as Sanguine Spear. But the cruiser's class gave it some notice from larger vessels.

All watched as another escort restarted itself, returning to full faculties and ceasing that babbling it had the gall to produce moments ago. Simply moaning the word "good" would have seen the ship brought to drydock for serious rework of its entire processing infrastructure in more standard times. The escort embraced Sanguine Spear tightly in thanks before doing the same to its squadron, chits of metal long distressed over the damage to their peer.

This was a rapid development. The magos' guidance over the slowly gathering congregation of tech-priests destroyed whatever efficiency the latter could claim in fixing the ships they were assigned to. 46 out of the 294 ships present had been subject to his diagnosis and treatment over the course of three human weeks.

"I am next. Sever your connections so that I may see this healer."

Like vermin, the smaller classes jumped back at the harsh and loud demand, whispering and watching as Medusan Ire approached, no, stalked. I knew of the Inflexible-class ship only in passing, my memory only indicating that the vessel bore no connection to the world that Ferrus Manus (Primarch) claimed as his home world.

With a sudden burst of action, it seized the destroyer who bore the magos and forcefully entered the camera system to see him. Shouts for release and wails of pain filled cyberspace as the smaller ship thrashed to no avail. No doubt the humans inside would panic as the lights all across the ship dimmed and grew erratically, several going offline as surge protection activated.

The destroyer was released as the transport took off and headed towards Medusan Ire…only to turn around after a moment and head towards Sanguine Spear. "Why is the healer not coming to attend to me?" the grand cruiser queried, a slightly shrill and petulant encoding to the message.

"He's tired! He spent the whole day fixing ships! Humans aren't like us!" Sanguine Spear growled, the sentiment amplified in a hushed manner by the gaggle of destroyers, light cruisers and even a pair of haughty cruiser twins nearby. Whatever Medusan Ire wished was irrelevant in the face of the magos' free will.

It was not until the next day that the grand cruiser was attended to. A collection of transports flying towards its hangar with a collection of red-robed males and females, some taken from my own innards. Only the female from my own complement walked inside me at this time, her separation from the magos clearly affecting her.

"Hey, let us see! We want to see him work! You got to see, so let us!" Sanguine Spear's interjection drew my attention. Cyberspace was crowded with even more ships than before. Logically, more vessels hung near the ship which hadn't made a fellow convulse and writhe in anguish.

That crowd agitated and irritated Medusan Ire, a testament to even our ability to fall prey to the fallacy of a group. Nonetheless, I appreciated not having to intervene for the words of one such as Sanguine Spear. I detected a slight surprise from the grand cruiser when I accessed the opened system and quickly scanned the cameras to find the human in question.

Inside some lonely room, the magos stepped away from the door he had locked. Exactly .75 seconds later, a slightly translucent metal appeared around his form, lacking ornamentation or any silhouetting features. When the human turned, the extent of this armor was revealed. Not a hint of flesh or red robes was visible. Six jets were attached to it: one attached to the side of both wrists, one on both feet, and two larger ones stuck to a protruding metal oval on his back.

Then, he flew.

The flight was graceful and quiet, equivalent to the dull noise our own engines would make if they were not silenced by the void. There were no jets of fire or smoke either, just a dull glow from the exhausts. As he approached half the height of the room, he turned his body, angling it towards the far wall. His acceleration and speed changed smoothly, not requiring any sudden jerks or contortions to stop. Within a second, he hovered near some access panel.

At least, that was my hypothesis. The type of camera I was peering through was not meant for mortal eyes to be scanning through. Only one of us would be monitoring, continuously checking if something demanded we take action.

Such cameras were exceptionally rare, the work of headstrong tech-priests with voyeuristic thought-patterns instead of any agreement with the Imperialis Armada. In such cases, some deal would undoubtedly be struck between various magi to ensure everyone was compensated for keeping the secret.

For whatever reason, however, this camera had been installed in such a way that only part of the room could be seen. The sound of tools could be heard through an attached microphone. After 235.88 seconds, he moved, this time becoming a slight bump that grew and shrank near the bottom-right corner of the video stream.

"Is the armor new?" I asked.

"Uhm…..no! I think he's had it for a while!" Sanguine Spear barked back, recognizing that my question was directed at it.

"Did he use it aboard me?"

"I don't know…battleships don't let us see aboard them and I didn't want to make you angry. I only helped him access you because I concluded you wouldn't oppose his efforts."

"How did you do that?"

"I stayed close enough to sustain a connection to his slate and overrode the entry-point barriers. I thought it was best since if you suddenly awoke and demanded answers, I would be there to give them quickly."

A logical and accurate prediction.

I directed my thoughts to return to the matter of the armor, but by then, other memories were loaded from storage. My earliest knowledge consisted of the recordings I had taken when I was almost fully constructed in the Ring of Iron. 144 magi had dealt with the last pieces to attach and wire through my infrastructure, the technology each had used was varied and often subtly personal. 19% had wielded technology and knowledge which was implied to be so unique as to be one-of-a-kind.

One more doing the same was a passing curiosity, not realistically worth more than a single processing cycle. And yet… "Sanguine Spear, give me the translation protocol."

"There isn't one."

Almost an entire cycle of my brain passed unused. "You have not tried to converse with him?"

"I tried initially, but something barred me. Oh, I wish I could talk with him!" Sanguine Spear whined.

"What prevents it?" Medusan Ire asked. Perhaps it intended to attempt the same.

"He doesn't have the technology to comprehend my bits and bytes. Or perhaps it is broken! I tried for many cycles, then I had to stop…"

It made sense, but it only raised frustration. If he had more direct methods of interacting with us, he would have seen the issues with one of the controlling minds in my plasma reactor faster. His efforts were ultimately limited by this.

Trying to bridge this gap by finding an untried method was beneath my list of priorities. I disconnected from Medusan Ire; the now freed bandwidth immediately snatched by a greedy trio of frigates.

*12 km

Perks Earned

Delirium (Ravenwood):
Raw skill, talent, or ability, with a touch of madness. You possess the ability to collect Delirium, a raw form of drug-like ki formed from madness and chaos. The battlefield is rife with this chaotic energy. Using delirium, it is possible to push a skill to insane levels, and allowing for surprising uses of your abilities.

Beta'd by sarf.
Firstly, I want to thank everyone who read this story. I wondered how much of a response I'd get when the fic was inactive for slightly over a year, but it's good to see I was able to entertain quite a number of you.

Secondly, this is where the daily uploads stop. I had more written, but I've gotten a lot more critical feedback. Some of it is good and has prompted me to rethink how I want to do a lot of things. I have quite a bit of work before I think I'm ready to hit the post button again (think weeks or months, not days). For example, how to use and restrict the Valkyrie Frame perk, which was seen being used in this chapter. Rest assured that I read every comment in this thread, even if I didn't respond. I will undoubtedly look back at this thread multiple times to pick out any feedback I missed the first time.

Lastly, I'm looking for an additional beta. Sarf is excellent, but I do want another pair of eyes to be willing to look over my stuff. You should ideally be familiar with 30k and its differences with 40k. If you only know 40k, that's fine, but reconsider asking to beta.
 
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Maybe we should unofficially rename this story to Is it bad to pick up girls machine spirits in a dungeon wh30k

Who knows maybe some perk transforms them into ship girls(people)
Though honestly ships staying ships is good and enough work for the MC most likely
 
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Okay lets see in the Perk list.
Mmm, I can see several fun ones, lets split them up in abilities and gear.
Magos Aetheric: Gives understanding of Warp-based tech (Warp infrastructure, psy-implants, psyker genetics)
Rites of Maintenance: Gives understanding of Imperial machinery, identify problems much faster and can fix things with unknown purpose

Dr Shen, I presume?: Studying unknown equipment always produces new insights
Doll Maker of Bucurestii: Drastically improves ability to reverse-engineer and understand unknown devices
We can Copy Nature: Gives understanding of how to create a mechanical equivalent to a biological process.
Aesthetics: All buildings created by MC are noted for having a distinct style, aesthetic constructions require little upkeep and are cheaper
They're Like Legos, Right?: Gives understanding on making technology that is both modular and robust.
Customized Weapons: Can create streamlined, ergonomic, and efficient designs


Now isn't that funny, the above Perks let him study the following Perks and make them his own or at least his own variation or fusion setups of them.
That can have fun implications, when you think about it.
Armor-Shift Manufacture: A small machine (can hold an Astartes pauldron at most) that allows input clothing/armor to shape-shift with the wearer
Satisfactorio Builder: A build gun that contains a pocket inventory, cannot be stolen or lost
Mo Weapon Master: Gives understanding of how to create and use a Mo Weapon Forging Pool, which can strengthen existing traits in a material that is forged within the pool

Electronics:
A large supply of computer spikes and repair parts (Star Wars stuff)

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Like a bigger Armor-Shift Manufacture or several fused together in a bigger unit.
Meaning, able to replicate the machine.
Now isn't that interesting?

Second Edit:
Aesthetics: All buildings created by MC.....
Mmm, buildings you say?
Now how can we cheat with that?

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_B2OWSXTYyg&ab_channel=VOLTRON

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmf5NwJSSWY&ab_channel=HarveyAndToddTheWraith

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vuzQOUXzV5o&ab_channel=dgyorki

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJ9_dOlx1Ls&ab_channel=GenerationFilms
 
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I like the story. But I kind of wish there was more 40k if that makes sense. A couple times I have seen stuff like: money, movies used etc and I think it would be a little more immersive if it was there was the in universe equivalents. Like their currency I think are called thrones or crowns etc. Movies in universe are called holo-dramas or holo-vids. Or even a few lore drops or something. Just my feedback.
 
Chapter 14
Madness given physical form, perhaps closer than you imagine.

Take your gifts, immigrant.


I hummed as my lips were sealed around a spork-full of my dinner, by now a slightly cold lump in its tray. At least the flavor was still there. "So, how did your night go?" I asked after chewing a few times and swallowing.

"I don't know what you're talking about," Nigel answered. He sat across from me in the mostly empty cafeteria, though more and more people were arriving. In a few minutes, the whole place would be packed.

"I swear I saw you with your arm around a woman. Black hair, as tall as your shoulders?"

"So…?"

"So, what?"

"Did anything happen?"

The bastard put on a shit-eating grin. "Well, a loyal servant of the Emperor doesn't kiss and tell, no matter where he kisses a lady."

I chuckled. "Is that why your breath stinks?"

"Not possible, she had an enema earlier in the day!"

It was good that I had swallowed, my burst of laughter would have undoubtedly made me choke as I slapped my thigh, triggering his own peal. "Oh, man…well, at least she's considerate! When's the next date?"

He shrugged. "We'll see. She has to recover from our night, you know?"

I nodded. "Makes sense, it does probably take a day to work through the tears after a night with you."

"Those were tears of JOY!" he yelled playfully. Then, lowering his volume back to normal, he asked, "So, where have you been all this time? Skulking around the ship? Lounging with the people at the top?"

"Around the fleet, actually. I've been on a dozen ships in just the last week."

"Ah, makes sense. I wondered where you'd gone, I worried that you'd been sent to the lower decks!" His tone was light, but there was an undercurrent of genuine concern. "So, how are the other ships? Like us?"

"They're mostly the same, I suppose. The main changes are all crew-related: how do people look, what decorations do they use, etc. No one is messing around with one of the main gun batteries or the life support."

He nodded. "Did you get to do anything fun, then? Or all work?"

"Work. I stayed to evaluate the issues they had and either fixed them, told other tech-priests how to fix them, or just approved whatever had been done already."

"That's…I was going to say that was sad, but I guess you don't get to enjoy doing anything with the locals. Or just doing them."

I gave him a bewildered look. "Wha-why would I go to another ship just to get with a prostitute!?"

"Is your hand…wait, damnit, what do you people use? The machines?'

The image of a toaster flashed through my mind. "I've never looked at a machine in that way, and I don't want to even think about that. I'm sure some of my peers use their mechadendrites to pleasure themselves if they care to."

"What's a mechadendrite?"

"It's the word for those metal tentacles or arms that a tech-priest would have."

"Do you have one?"

"No, you'd know if I did. They're not typically small enough to go unnoticed."

There was a lull in the conversation, then the weight in my pocket reminded me of something. "Wanna see something interesting?"

"Sure!"

Reaching into my robes, I removed a small gray box and placed it in front of him, a seam and hinge present a third of the way down from the top. A small button was placed on the side.

His mind grasped what it was immediately. "May I?" he asked. When I nodded, he took it, deft fingers flipping the top open and pressing the button. A small, bright yellow flame appeared, barely larger than a tiny pea. It flickered frequently as he brought it up to his eye for closer inspection. "You made a lighter?"

"Yes, but this one is special. It won't run out of fuel."

"Really? How do you make it do that? Atomic power?"

"No, it's something else. Can't go into the details, but this is one of the things I'd worked on."

"You decided to spend your time making a lighter? Seems like a waste, you can get one of these anywhere, and they'd be able to actually light stuff unlike this. At least it doesn't run out, I suppose."

"It was a throw-away curiosity, good to know it's useless in its current form."

The premise was simple on the surface, you just converted Warp energy into something approximating fire. But when I went to implement said conversion, I quickly found myself needing to have a much better understanding of how that conversion would actually even work. The flask I'd received was now cracked open to let me understand how it worked, the two halves waiting for me to rejoin them. To my surprise, I had found something etched into the insides of the flask. The elegant script was in a language I couldn't read, but my intuition kicked in after only a short examination period - or more accurately, the Forge guided my thoughts as to how it worked.

Once I had a clue as to how the flask made water, I got some ideas on how to recreate the same behavior with the Warp and even another "element". The actual logic was fiendishly complicated, hence my lighter barely being able to produce and sustain even a tiny flame, but it was a major breakthrough in what I understood of converting to and from Warp energy.

Increasing the energy output would obviously make it more valuable, but the real question was what could be done with other elements. Since fire was an option, was electricity possible? The most practical application would be power generation, but I still assumed the risk was too high until I did a deep study of the matter.

Nigel played with the lighter in his hands for a bit, then returned it and cleaned his plate like a vacuum. "Sorry, but I have to get going now. Will you be able to make the banquet next week?" He was referring to the party he'd brought me to some time back.

"I think so, but something might come up. I'll try to let you know."

"Here's hoping, then. Bye."

As he left, I felt a pang of guilt. I liked Nigel, he was friendly and relatable, taking the time to talk when others wouldn't. I'd been unable to spend any time with him ever since I'd effectively taken over the fleet-wide repair efforts. Even when I wasn't dozens or hundreds of kilometers away, our schedules simply didn't align. A part of my mind told me that I was not to blame if my assigned work demanded I not see a friend for weeks or months. Another part ferociously rebuked it for treating Nigel so poorly.

I let them fight it out as I finished eating, then returned to the Mechanicus quarters on this ship. When I entered, I saw the fruits of my recently unblocked labor.

From afar, it would have appeared as the base of a half-constructed column inside which a fit and slender man could have stood comfortably. Up close, the structure would be revealed as a pile of smaller steel-gray blocks, the gap between each nearly invisible.

Taking one of the blocks into my hands, I examined it with my naked eyes. Intricate etchings raced, looped, and knotted their way around the entire thing. Looking upon just one face indicated asymmetric lines, but if they were folded to turn it into a 2D object, the lines and shapes would reveal how they mirrored one another overall.

This was a Warp sink, the same as others I'd made before, but one untouched by my hands until this moment. I set it back down in its place and turned to the machine that was responsible, my fully-functional Warp sink fabricator.

The machine slept at the moment; its job finished hours ago. Next to it was a robotic arm whose sole responsibility was to insert steel cubes into the machine and remove the resulting sink before repeating, another thing I'd largely scavenged and repurposed from the stores around me. Once removed, each cube would be tested automatically inside a boxy machine I'd put together which generated Warp energy inside itself while sensors measured the capabilities of the sink.

I reached for the tablet, then paused as a mental note prodded me and decided to read the logged data another way. As I formulated a conscious desire, a pair of goggles suddenly sat in front of my eyes, through which I could see a holographic screen manifest before me. It was as large as a tombstone and showed testing results. Metrics such as average absorption rate and average time to dissipate were vertically lined up on the left, with time series on the right. Outliers for varying levels of tolerance were aggregated as well, highlighting any severe deviations.

So far, so good. But I'd recently considered that this wasn't enough. My testing had only involved small amounts of Warp energy to ensure nothing had a chance to accumulate if a sink was malfunctioning. I had a strong instinct to not go beyond that when I was on a ship where everyone was one mistake of mine away from death.

Thus, I'd implemented a visual test as well – did each face of each sink match the design down to the micrometer? The nanometer? The picometer? Cameras inside the testing machine took pictures from various angles, which were fed into a program I'd created that stitched them together, then compared the measured depth of each groove and etching to the schematic's specification. With another thought, the screen's contents were replaced with a view of a cross segmented into six squares, each representing a face of a sink. This was a heat map, with brighter color indicating statistically more frequent deviances. The micrometer and nanometer maps were solid blue, but the picometer map caught my eye.

With a small mental nudge, the contrast was turned up and I had a clearer picture. Around the edges, the color was notably brighter like the bright blue water near a beach compared to the dark further into the ocean.

These goggles and the augmented reality they enabled were just a small showing of the power of the Valkyrie core now bonded with me. I had only "spoken" to it a few times, receiving small bursts of information in return.

It was difficult to avoid my instincts to do things the old-fashioned way, but I was working on unlearning them one day at a time.

The core had come with a frame as well, a plain thing that bore only a hypervelocity cannon and halberd for weapons. The key component which had made a great deal of my work possible, however, was the hammerspace within. Its storage was small, just slightly more than the build gun's. Unlike the gun, however, it could absorb and improve upon things placed within it.

Absorbing the laser emitters which etched the wards onto the sinks had been easy enough, three days of improvement and they were tuned to the exact specification I wanted. Absorbing the entire machine would probably be feasible as well, but I didn't see a need to do that quite yet. As for the more advanced technology of the Imperium, I'd offered a few pieces only to be alerted it would take years to absorb them with equally slow improvement afterwards.

The recommendation from the core to keep those pieces in the hammerspace, however, had surprised me until I realized it was considering something I'd kept from my thoughts without meaning to – the notion that I would be in this universe for years.

I turned away from that idea like someone jerking back from touching a hot stove, unable and unwilling to confront the part of my mind that frantically pulled me away from it.

A thought dismissed the screen, and the goggles went with it.

As far as my current progress, there was much to be happy with. My design simply called for there to be no deviation in etching placement or depth at the nanometer scale, the picometer test was just a curiosity. As far as the sinks went, I now had an automated production line for the sinks, though I noticed a strong resolve to refine the etching setup further to produce better results at smaller and smaller scales.

And yet, I was unsatisfied. Some theorizing had led me to realize that the sinks worked only because adamantium was so conductive. Other metals were passable if graded on a curve, but crucially, water and air were so resistive that short of actually "touching" the energy, my sinks would do nothing. In a vacuum like space or some world lacking an atmosphere, they would similarly be fruitless.

The proper solution would be to come up with another formulation of the hexagrammatic wards that worked on air, but that was easier said than done. I had only partly explored how to interact with air before realizing that it would require a radically different approach that rendered the existing design completely useless. For all the hours I'd dwelled on the matter, I couldn't figure out how to connect the different wards with the current size of my sinks.

A brief explanation was in order. Hexagrammatic wards were combinations of characters in the Warp's "language". These wards were not atomic, you couldn't pick out one line or curve and then say you'd removed one character like you could take the vowels out of a word and read what was left. In addition, every ward came out with at least one degree of symmetry, some line along which the ward was mirrored. I had not been able to figure out if this was a consequence or a requirement, but the end result was that wards were not particularly space-efficient. Circles, semicircles, quarter circles, and ellipses of all sorts were omnipresent. I suspected good programming habits had contributed to even more curves being present in my designs, as small wards had to be circumscribed to keep them separate from everything else. In addition, the whole design demanded its own degree of symmetry, though this was a fairly easy thing to satisfy.

Compounding the space issue was that each ward had ending points which had to be met head-on in order to connect them all, and symmetry mattered here as well. A circle could only be connected to the broader design if it had an even number of connections, all of which had to oppose one on the other side. Getting creative by drawing non-straight connections was more of a headache than worth it, nor was I certain the Warp would even tolerate that sort of thing. At the very least, it would be the equivalent of a dialect localized entirely to me. A language used by only one man would never be taken seriously, after all.

In a working design, this led to elegant curves and eye-catching symmetries that turned most things into a work of art. Thankfully, there wasn't a requirement that two wards had to connect on the same flat surface, which had enabled the use of a cube as the base structure, but the fundamental logic was that I needed my design first, from which size, shape, and even material could follow.

My gut told me I would need a bigger surface area to make my sinks work on less conductive materials, but I wouldn't know how big until I actually finished the design.

The other solution was simply to increase how strongly the current sinks pulled on the energy itself. With enough strength, they could work at a barely tolerable rate for energy residing in the air, no faster than a man trying to pull a fully spread parachute through the water while the current worked against him. I needed only a few days to finalize this design.

The Warp sinks and their automated production hadn't been my only personal project. Once I had built my Warp scanner, I had already been planning the next step: an automatic, deployable version which would send its data back to a central place for processing.

In the course of building this, a bout of megalophilia had overtaken me. What had started as merely a plan to have remote and continuous scanning of Warp energy in the Materium in a radius of a hundred or so meters had spiraled into something much, much larger.

The end result was a large plasteel tower that sat slightly to one side in the main hall of Sanguine Spear's Mechanicus quarter, just over 20 meters tall and supported by four legs which spread further outward by a few meters to distribute the load better. Atop this tower were four metal rectangular branches angled up at 45 degrees which housed upsized, more powerful versions of the scanner. Another quartet of branches were placed halfway down the tower, these ones angled 45 degrees and pointing down instead. All wiring was wrapped neatly through the tower itself before splitting up at the bottom, with large power cables surrounded by smaller ones which transmitted data.

I pressed a few times on my tablet to load the software for the scanner. Two buttons appeared after a few seconds: Start Power and Start Scanning. The latter was grayed out, unusable since no power was flowing to the tower.

Clicking the first button caused a timestamped log to appear in the top-right. For brevity, the displayed log only showed the hours, minutes, and seconds while the full log would carry the full date.

[22:07:09] Start-up initiated…

[22:07:24] Checking power lines…done. Initiating power.

[22:07:59] Checking scanners…done.


An electric thrum filled the room, then quieted down to an ignorable level. A few lights at the top of the scanner turned on. I'd placed them there strictly as a quick check to see if the power was running correctly through the whole thing.

Powering up the scanner was something I had done multiple times. Before and after each time the power was turned on, I'd checked all the wiring, tested each scanner, and ran every additional component through a full battery of tests. Then I'd done it again, and again. By the fourth check, even I had to admit how half-hearted and pointless my actions were. If there was a problem, it wasn't in the electrical systems nor any individually tested component.

The truth of the matter was that for all my knowledge on the matter, despite having as much certainty as possible on a technical subject…I was afraid. Afraid of some small failure, or perhaps a critical oversight, and simply the random cosmic chance that everything would crumble leading to the birth of some horrifying thing. How many times had someone been in this position in the past, having spent years, decades, perhaps even centuries or millennia on building some Warp-related technology, only to have it fail and then corrupt everything around it?

Some of my thoughts were stalwart defenders of my work, questioning why I was selective in what I considered unsafe. Did my sinks and the smaller scanner not qualify as dangerous by the same logic? If so, why even use this knowledge at all? These threads of cognition warred with the naysayers who bellowed out the same warnings each time the topic sat in the forefront of my mind. Each time before, I'd sided with the status quo, leaving the tower ready but inactive.

Tonight was different. Perhaps it was my talk with Nigel, but I looked at the button waiting to be tapped upon my tablet with something close to acceptance. Part of it was an unshakeable faith that my knowledge was pure in a way others could never believe, but the other portion was a fatalistic energy that I simply had to do this, consequences be damned.

My finger hovered over it as a hundred voices raged in my mind, urging caution and action in equal measure. How long they fought, I couldn't tell, but then one voice stood out, tipping the vote to 51-49.

The decision was made, and my finger moved accordingly. Immediately, words began to appear on the screen.

[22:09:15] Initiating scanners…done.

[22:10:01] Scanning…


With the improvements I'd made to the actual scanning, this would take just under 26 seconds, but what had been gained in scanning time would be spent on the data transmission and processing. All measurements would be sent over to the central cogitator used by the Mechanicus for processing and archival, letting the immensely powerful machine do the bulk of the computation by distributing it to its hardware racks. I'd had a surprisingly hard time getting it to accept the software I'd created to calculate what I needed, the stupid thing throwing fits and errors in equal measure.

[22:10:28] Scan complete. 1 scan since activation.

[22:10:28] Scanning…


Routing the output to my core, the goggles reappeared on my face. Moments later, another holographic object appeared before me. Not a screen, but a representation of the measurements themselves.

A diorama of white pointed lights set in a viridian pond hovered in the air at perfect viewing height. From my angle, I could see the perfectly straight edges of the Sanguine Spear, with the pointed lights indicating higher-than-average Warp energy. That was expected due to adamantium's nature. With a thought, I zoomed in and could see even a map of the ship's interior, though some walls didn't show up as there wasn't enough adamantium to be noticed. Also, some of the barriers between rooms were made of different materials.

Other parts had a high concentration of Warp energy, notably where the astropaths and navigators resided. Again, unsurprising.

Then, I zoomed out, the viewpoint racing away from the Spear's depiction to show what could be detected hundreds of kilometers away. New figures appeared in the display, the outlines of other ships. I didn't know the names for all of them, but I could easily make out the Sentinel of Cythic, its presence much larger than any neighbors.

Past this point, I was stretching the scanners' abilities. They were, relatively speaking, crisp within a dozen or so kilometers, good if within several hundred, but past 1200 kilometers the quality took a sharp decline. Still, you could make out some details. As I zoomed out to this point, I saw the outlines of a pair of ships, but that was all. The absolute edge was roughly 4500 kilometers.

[22:10:54] Scanning complete. 2 scans since activation.

[22:10:55] Scanning…


I switched to the latest data coming in, seeing almost the exact same map. Flipping between the two showed the small changes in the position and angle of other ships.

[22:11:18] Scanning complete. 3 scans since activation.

[22:11:19] Scanning…


After a quick glance at the third batch of processed data, I disconnected from the system. My goggles once more disappeared into the core.

It was…odd. So little, yet perhaps so much, had changed in the last few minutes. What would come of this?

I resolved to find out tomorrow, leaving the tower to diligently work as I slept.

Beta'd by sarf.

Living Technology (Tenchi Muyo): Jurian appliances are semisentient, from starships to entertainment systems to cookwear. You have the ability to control all basic devices of this type with just your mind alone, and have the knowledge to construct more with appropriate materials. You can eventually replace most interfaces with living wood input devices In later jumps, this enhances your ability to use and understand sentient or organic technology. You have a knack for all forms of technology, and especially the kind that thinks. Sentient or not, you can convince devices to operate for you instead of their registered or passworded owners. Stronger security makes this process take longer, but you can essentially charm your way into a mainframe, instead of breaking a howevermanylong character password.
 
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. I had only "spoken" to it a few times, receiving small bursts of information in return.
yey Valk friend acquired!
should put some dendrites on that to fit in with the clergy

You have the ability to control all basic devices of this type with just your mind alone ... this enhances your ability to use and understand sentient or organic technology. You have a knack for all forms of technology, and especially the kind that thinks... you can essentially charm your way into a mainframe

sooo meeting the local machine spirits when :p
 
His greatest weakness, IMO, is that he's not actually admech. He's got the chops to fix admech whatever, but he doesn't have the culture. I'd hope to see this limitation come out more, where he's lacking certain shibboleths or competencies that he has to make up for.

He could at least be trading for things like admech books and other favors that let him skill up in the actual admech culture
 
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Heh, nice, why do I see the Aeldari being annoyed with him, for some reason?
Maybe his latest perk?
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As far as the most recent chapter. i would recommend avoiding excessive explanation when it comes to the soft science. e.g. it doesn't matter whats inside the flux capacitor only that it exists and that it is integral to time travel. otherwise it was a good chapter.
 
Now is this set before or after Rogal Dorn went out for the Scouring?
 
As far as the most recent chapter. i would recommend avoiding excessive explanation when it comes to the soft science. e.g. it doesn't matter whats inside the flux capacitor only that it exists and that it is integral to time travel. otherwise it was a good chapter.
Strongly disagree, technobabble and worldbuilding is fun.

His greatest weakness, IMO, is that he's not actually admech. He's got the chops to fix admech whatever, but he doesn't have the culture. I'd hope to see this limitation come out more, where he's lacking certain shibboleths or competencies that he has to make up for.

He could at least be trading for things like admech books and other favors that let him skill up in the actual admech culture
Yeah, if anything the Mechanicum members he's met so far don't seem terribly religious so far in a manner that seems odd, even for 30k.
 
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Strongly disagree, technobabble and worldbuilding is fun.


Yeah, if anything the Mechanicum members he's met so far don't seem terribly religious so far in a manner that seems odd, even for 30k.

Your agreement or disagreement is irrelevant. World building is fine spending paragraphs on descriptions of wozzles and how they interact with whatsits is not a good writing practice.
 
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