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Please tell me that Armsmaster is the Tin Woodman
That's so Australian it makes me feel foreign.
Well, considering none of the participants seem to have made any connection to what should be a film classic, maybe Frank L. Baum never published any of the Oz stories there? That, or Varga's got a very specific memory suppression spell that's been pulled out for this large scale prank? (Well, that or Cloak really is tripping out on another sugar rush from Kid Win's doughnut maker.)Someone's going to get hurt for casting Linda as the Cowardly Lion...
Congratz! Now hopefully onto 1.5 million more words and 3.5 million more views
Now, all of that stuff? That stuff is part of why I love this fic. It is quite rare to get this kind of body-reshaping or form swapping in any kind of fiction, let alone an exploration that hits edge cases like this.
I get the feeling that Ianthe and Metis deserve the "Clever Girl" meme from Jurassic Park.
With their growing intelligence, I'm wondering if they'll eventually end up being in a Taylor/Varga dynamic with Lisa and Amy: two minds, one body... except they're pseudo-forks of them, and they can separate back into two distinct entities.
Is it me or are you actually trying to slowly make the Meat Puppets both Sentient an Sapient?
How is it that she got away with so much when EVERYONE knows she's trouble? PRT should've had better minders.
Great update. Is it weird I was a little disappointed that it wasn't a continuation of the current omake cross with maul? Trollor is best Taylor.
Congratulations on yet another pair of amazing milestones. This continues to be a lot of fun to read, and it seems that you are continuing to have fun writing it. As always, thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
We still need more likes so many likes per page every other author will weep.
I'm actually surprised that she hasn't done a Turing Option yet and coated some computer interfaces in artificially-grown neural cells, using them to allow for a direct mind-machine interface. Given that Taylor can create things on an atomic level (assuming that she and/or Varga understand them well enough), molecular-circuitry computer chips are within the range of the possible.
I can see L33T's bio-suit boasting an artificial, multi-form prosthetic left arm powered by a dimensional flywheel.
"Oh, this? Yeah, you probably don't want to know how I got it... They still tease me about accidentally sinking Atlantis." (The Atlantis in question actually being the name of a hovercraft L33T tried to build which shorted-out and submerged before he could use it in one of his videos...)
Jesus fucking Christ, I've been reading this one for hours now.
That said, I loved every minute of it, but I ask of you: please, don't make any more chapters that could replace our galaxy's black hole, thanks.
That's a nonsense statement. You can't make something 100% smaller, because it's no longer something at that point. At 400% smaller, you've made the universe larger to accomdate the fact that you just made something with negative volume. And, well, I would put that past the Varga to actually pull that off, but I'm pretty sure that's not what you're getting at.
Excuse me if someone already asked this and i just overlooked it, but does anyone have any idea what happened to Crawler?
I can faintly remember him being on the way to Brockton Bay after the whole S9 got blown to bits and haven't really seen it mentioned after that.
Exactly how anatomically correct are Amy's bio-suits? As in, is there the obvious tell separating the 'genders' of the lizards, other then the voices? And no, I'm not being a perv, I'm actually curious how far Amy's bio-tinkering has gone...
Some specifics missing from Taylor's board of knowledge:
- Prospect knows Taylor has a tail, and that she is unplottable like the family to power-based precogs and thinkers.
- A chunk of the PRT, as well as Leet & Uber and a small number at the PRT know about the whole Athena/wormhole anti-Endbringer plans.
- Missy knows about the Family stranger ability, thanks to helping out with the Merchant safe theft.
- Lung has actually met Varga in Kaiju form -- which he doesn't know, but would be another clue potentially if he learned certain other facts; not sure this matters, as he seems to share Rachel's attitude of, "not the alpha," now.
- The PRT had a very good look at Taylor's reality-warping ability through the take-down of Coil. She basically has a Breaker: YES rating, alongside her equal Brute rating. They don't know, but suspect, her stranger rating, and know nothing about teleportation or duplication yet.
- Not sure if they explained all of the Simurgh- and power-related stuff to Danny yet, as he has been visiting Tony.
This is fairly hypocritical, considering they're discussing a handlebar sized collection of multiple vehicles that only works at all and doesn't fall apart because of Taylor's efforts, not hers.
She's probably talking about how Armsmaster's stuff simply isn't as reliable as hers is to start with; Armsmaster packs a lot more things into one item than it can reliably hold and there are tradeoffs involved. IIRC he was rebuilding his halberd earlier in the fic to get something less than 3 percent increase in something. As Squealer she built stuff out of scrap that could compete on the same level. Sure, the Varga's matter creation helps her build stuff that's more awesome, which I'm not denying but for the omnivehicles it's the space expansion that allows her to pack everything in.
Actually that's just one device with one purpose doing one thing. It's a hardlight projector. Nothing more, nothing less. Armsmaster puts dozens to hundreds of subsystems into his gear. All Vectura does is load different programs into the computer controlling the hardlight projectors. She doesn't use the computer to do anything else nor are there other subsystems.
Now if she needed attachments or hardware modifications to load the extra forms, that'd be comparable.
At this point it's stretching the imagination that she hasn't started killing the drivers or at least firing at the trucks. She's been nothing but incredibly frustrated and annoyed by these people, she's hardly a restrained sort of person, and she definitely has the means to go on the offensive.
Then there's the question of how they're following, or finding, her in the first place. She's a random person in a random car going to random places across a large expanse of land. Stumbling across her one or two times makes sense, sure, but I think you might have prolonged the joke a bit much.
She's trying to stay below the radar and you don't do that in the age of cellphones and GPS being in every single truck by firing on them or attacking drivers.
You can see straight down into every other vehicle's windows when you're driving a big rig. All it takes is one guy doing so and using the secure band to report back for the whole damn company to know exactly where she is and then Antonio can direct the trucks to keep eyes on her. Some trucking companies have hundreds of trucks; the one I worked with for a bit had 30x 18 wheeler rigs and at least a dozen small rigs and it was a small organization that only hauled in three states.
One of the chicken companies around here hires out haulage to six or eight different small companies and has work for every truck every day. Walmart has 6,100 trucks on the road every day, Fedex has 60,000 ... You see where I'm going with this? It depends on exactly how big a haulage concern is for how much territory they can cover; Emerald Isle is backed by Antonio so they likely don't lack in funds, trucks or drivers.
There's also the point that truckers are generally known to communicate across company lines. How many trucks that aren't green have been able to see her as she passed them, and happily informed the nearest Emerald Isle truck?
There is one very distinctive feature that would be VERY visible from a trucks point of view...
She has a very bad (and possibly infected by now) burn on her wrist/hand. Steering wheels are very visible when looking down from a truck as you go past.
All that needs to be seen to start of with is the bandaged wrist against a dark skin and they would then take a closer look.
Once she is seen in an area, almost every truck driver would be on the lookout for the bandaged wrist and be reporting it on the CB network.
I believe the: "Congratulations, you just played yourself" meme should come into play here. By driving so suspiciously to throw off the first, she positively ID'd herself and set herself up as the primary target of an impressive national surveillance network.
Has it been clarified yet, if it's just one truck chasing Sophia, or a whole fleet of them? Are they really that skilled at tracking, or is it just the 'Luck of The Irish'?
Called it! I wonder how long it will take her to catch on. Maybe see two identical trucks at the same time and feel like an idiot.
Antonio probably has a whole fleet of identical trucks driving around just to mess with Sophia and throw her off her game.
Not to mention this:
It's a MAFIA truck company. Presumably, they have the cash reserves to spare drivers going hunting, especially for hunting one who has personally pissed off the head of the organization in such a manner as to become 'creative' in his displeasure. Sophia is fractally fucked all the way down. If the Mafia doesn't get her, the FBI will. If the FBI don't get her, the PRT will. If the PRT doesn't get her, the Protectorate will. If the Protectorate doesn't get her, then Accord and the Elite will. If they don't get her, the Yangaban might. If she manages to slip all of that, The Family is going to have a giggle about her and do unspeakable things in the name of SCIENCE! to her.
It always amazes me how fast sixteen thousand words can go by.
Except Uber started picking up the language and the martial art from Metis, and speech patterns and mannerisms go with the construct as well. The human supplies memory and parahuman powers.
So if they become sentient, they'll wake up with their own language and combat skills, but no history. They'd be very powerful children. Taking a human symbiote could be beneficial for navigating the human world and making long range planning that requires world knowledge. The powers are an added benefit, but Ianthe already has her own healing power and Metis already has a brain superior to human, both already have basic brute and blaster powers so the benefit isn't as big as you or I would get from it. They'd probably have fun borrowing a human with flight, not sure how much they'd care about tinkering. I think though that Ianthe and Metis are fond of their humans, and would welcome joint ventures, just as Raptur gives less conjoined rides from time to time.
No, this thread is quite mellow when it comes to discussions, regardless of postures and positions in any argument. People here are civil even when discussing topics that in other threads would devolve into flame-fests, personal attacks and lots of name calling.
Even Mr. Troy Guffey is polite when exposing his extreme right-wing opinions on basically everything. The problem is that he stepped on an ideological mine and got threadbanned as a result.
One of the issues that seems to crop up every time someone does a PHO chapter is this sort of stupidity. It's like most authors can't imagine a forum where the mods aren't dragging their hammer into literally every page of the forum to ban, warn, censor, or otherwise involve themselves.
Which tends to leave things feeling like authors who do this just wanted to pad the PHO post without actually having to put any effort into things. Two free post entire: one blank and one vague warning. Plus a random number of reactions to it.
That's pretty much how I do it. Well, I don't reach paragraphs, but I reach entire sentences. Paperback book, 1 hour, easy.
One issue I have been considering for a while is how much does The Clairvoyant see of The Family? Obviously the cloak will cover some things but how much? Are they all a blind-spot or perhaps just the Varga? Given Cauldron are really interested and have tried their other thinkers they should logically have tried The Clairvoyant.
So, basically, this can be summed up in three words: They dun goofed.There were people deliberately covering up the more egregious issues, but rumor and direct experience from her victims does get around. And if the PRT was more effective in cultivating informants on the street they might well have picked up on this earlier. Even in canon, Sophia got away with a lot more than she should have done.
So, basically, this can be summed up in three words: They dun goofed.
Come to think about it, why wouldn't they have enough street-level informants to catch that? In a gang-infested warzone like BB, I'd have thought they'd have as many ears to the ground as they could.
From what I know about House... that should prove to be interesting.Because people fuck up. And they lie.
This is a universal constant. Doctor House could explain it in detail
True... we are only human after all.Even in real life, there are constantly examples of LEO screwups where people didn't know something they should have done, or know it but fail to act on it, or pass it up the chain, or lose the information, or can't be bothered to do something with it because it's not high-profile enough, or...
Good point. And Coil messing around behind the scenes probably didn't help either. Bloody snake... I still think Taylor went too easy on him, but alas, they need him sane enough to talk.In a place as corrupt as BB, with people actively trying to lose this sort of information, it's not surprising no one did anything until it was too late.
I smell a new chapter coming! Joy!I'll add a quick note for those who may have been hoping that the above was a new chapter or whatnot. It isn't, obviously, but I'll try to get something out tomorrow. Possibly more than one something. I haven't had any time at all to write for most of this week and I'm starting to suffer withdrawal symptoms
On the other hand, it could be a Simurgh plot.
It's always a Simurgh plot...