Twister Over the Rainbow does allow Dorothy to do exactly that
I mean, can it potentially drop a nearby house on somebody, or does it straight up summon her home just to drop it on somebody? This might just be a random reference, but it's an important destinction none the less. :p
About Dorothy, I was thinking of changing her class from Foreigner to Archer (as I guess 'a water bucket' and 'a house' count as projectiles). While Oz definitely doesn't conform to standard Earth logic, I've been told since it's still on Earth and not space or anything (well, except in that one Heinlein story, funnily enough) that it makes Dorothy a real stretch for the class
That should make sense (as long as tornado is doing the throwing). Maybe Rider could also work, given that she came in riding a storm and shoes/slippers counting as a mode of transportation and thus as a vehicle wouldn't be the furthest stretch in the history of class justification. Either way, the class change would come with the Magic Resistance skill which would do nicely to round out her kit.

Beyond that, it's not like classes actually matter that much in practice without gameplay mechanics attached to them.
I should also note that the Parameters are generally the thing I give the least attention to when writing my sheets. Like I do try to make them at least plausible for the Servant in question, but in a mechanics-lite Quest like this they'd be mostly an afterthought (which'd be different in the event I was running something mechanics-heavier)
Which is fair enough, given that parameters are pretty much the least important aspect of a Servants capabilities. Even setting aside that there's been enough Servants by now that some of the ratings are... questionable, there's basically another hidden parameter in the form of a Servant's combat skills/technique without which it's hard to judge how much leverage they can actually get out of their other stats.

So yeah, I could probably go more into the system, but close enough and plausible is a reasonable goal. Still, Dorothy's skill drew attention to them, so I figured I should say something on the matter.
 
As for who Alchemic Armour is, well obviously I don't want to outright say, but if you ctrl+f search 'alchemy' through my compendium you should probably be able to easily pick them out

To admit my bias, little disappointed that Kafka isn't getting more interest, since I liked her so much I made a second sheet of her (though obviously the option here is for her first sheet)
 
So its Christina of Sweden! I looked at the index earlier but since I was with tiny phone I must have missed her.

Edit: Also as a oneiromancer I was expecting one of the options for Yakumo to be Endymion , the sleeping Prince/King since he would fit with the other servants with the fairytale theme. Even if he wasnt on the index.
 
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Edit: Also as a oneiromancer I was expecting one of the options for Yakumo to be Endymion , the sleeping Prince/King since he would fit with the other servants with the fairytale theme. Even if he wasnt on the index.
Endymion is actually on my to-do list, along with Dornroschen (Sleeping Beauty) and the aforementioned Zhuangzi, but I'm not sure when I'll be getting around to statting them

Also, since she's been figured out, here's Christina's link for convenience:

forums.sufficientvelocity.com

Arlequine Lunaire's Character Compendium

Saber of Codices (Source) "I'm in this War like I'm in any War, to end it and end it quick. It's a shame that such great minds of history should be wasted on pointless brutality..." True Name: Christina of Sweden Alternate Classes: Caster, Rider, Berserker, Archer, Assassin Source: History...
 
Endymion is actually on my to-do list, along with Dornroschen (Sleeping Beauty) and the aforementioned Zhuangzi, but I'm not sure when I'll be getting around to statting them

Nice to see! I wonder if you will go with the Selene version of the myth or lesser known one with Hypnos, perhaps combining the two? Plus either he was a shepherd prince or an astronomer. Dornroschen aka Briar Rose aka Sleeping Beauty!(I have no ideia if they differ enough in stories to be different incarnations when using different names) Another fairy tale character! I think her and Endymion would relate in some points... Although in the most popular version of the myth Endymion asked to be put into a eternal immortal youthfull sleep state unlike Sleeping Beauty.
 
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Okay, currently we have a tie between Dorothy and Bolivar, though the vote still won't be called for a little while now. I do find it funny that both Persona FCs are in the lead, over Velvet Crowe, Sayo Yasuda, and Taylor Hebert

Sidenote on Kafka then, but in a story context I would consider dropping her Kafkaesque NP, or at least have it be sealed away, and put most of the focus on Nichts als Wahr, given having both NPs may be a bit excessive and Nichts als Wahr would be easier to write (er, and not just because it's a writing Phantasm)
 
[X] A horseback warrior anointed by the angels
I just think the interactions between Bolivar and Elagabalus are spicier that Dorothy's.

Also,are the other unchosen servants going to appear as enemies?
 
About unchosen Servants showing up as enemies, I don't want to confirm anything yet, but I'd say there's at least a possibility of that happening. I do have plans to also write a side-story showing what your first meetings with other possible Servant choices would have been like

Also, since Yakumo's Servant picks having to do with dreams was mentioned earlier, that does still fit with Kafka (surreal narratives), Berlioz (Symphonie Fantastique being set in a dream), and Dorothy (the MGM movie ending). It also kinda still fits with Bolivar, Gran Colombia having been called 'Bolivar's Dream'. Christina I guess is the odd one out then
 
[X] A mage slayer blown in by the wind.

Kafka would be my second choice, but Dorothy tho
 
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Ooh, close votes like these kinda make me feel bad for the runner-up side. But anyway, Bolivar it is, which surprised me since I wasn't expecting her to win

Scheduled vote count started by ArlequineLunaire on Nov 23, 2022 at 11:12 PM, finished with 23 posts and 10 votes.
 
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Prologue: A blinding bolt from the sky...
[X] A horseback warrior anointed by the angels.


The platform then shook with what to me looked like a blinding bolt from the 'sky', only later did I see that a white steed had leapt down from above and landed right on top of Gatekeeper. As Gatekeeper, with what looked like 'invincibility frames' (I think they're called) flashing around them, this snow-white horse trotted up right in front of me, giving me the chance to finally see who their rider was.

She, well so I assumed, carried herself with a tomboyish yet noble, I guess you'd say 'princely', demeanour. She wore an elegant yet still military outfit coloured in contrasting blues and reds, I'd put it around the 18th or 19th century from what I knew. Her hair was dark and boyishly short, reminding a bit of Overseer Ciel even if the two projected very different auras.

"Oh, quit your gawking," she then sighed at me, before Gatekeeper began readying another attack. "Summoned right into the heat of battle then? Ah, already this Grail War of yours pulls no punches," she smirked and readied a sword and gun in either hand, "Which suits me fine."

"Analysis… complete?" Gatekeeper then said, "Jump attack indicates 'platformer', mount indicates 'Racing', but military equipment indicates 'strategy'." As they were trying to make sense of her, er, 'gaming genre', they were struck and jumped at from behind by another animal, a dog just as snowy-white with some brownish-black splotches. Stealth game then?

"Bien muchacho!" the rider beamed at her dog, before her attention went back to Gatekeeper. "Hah, even with this Grail updating me, it sounds like you're simply pulling a shibboleth on me," she laughed. Gatekeeper, seemingly fed up, simply put their hands together and shot out what looked like a blue chi fireball, only for the horsewoman and her dog to dodge to either side.

She then opened fire on Gatekeeper's head while her dog bit down at their legs. Gatekeeper responded by stomping the floor, which was enough to send out whole shockwaves across the platform. Both the rider and her dog were swift enough to jump over them, but I… wasn't so lucky. They hit me full force and sent me hurtling back against that door, I could've fallen into the abyss beyond the platform had I been pushed any further.

Fortunately, the horse rider noticed this, and with command to her dog in Spanish, sent him to cover me while she dealt with Gatekeeper. However, she may not have needed to, as what some sort of 'ether bullet' made of compressed numbers, well that's how I'd describe it, then sniped Gatekeeper from the side. Looking where this ether bullet had come from, I could see…

"Sakura!" I called out, seeing her still alive, if right now hanging by one of those stained-glass window frames and scrambling to get back onto the platform. I would've rushed over to help her… but would've put me right in Gatekeeper's line of sight.

Luckily that wouldn't be necessary, as no less than a third Servant now entered the fray "Taste divine judgment, plebeian!" a girl called out from atop one of the glass arches, having somehow been agile enough to get up there despite Gatekeeper's shockwaves. With a cry, she then threw down an entire ancient shield like a discus right at Gatekeeper, and with them now flashing red, this girl now pirouetted right down onto Gatekeeper with what looked like a mana-fuelled starburst emanating from her kick.

"So, trying to copy my tactics without a horse, are we?" the rider had to comment.

However, as Gatekeeper now slumped to the ground (a triumphant jingle sounding from him somehow,) this girl, with star-decced long caramel hair and wearing a glittering gold dress, then shot the widest smirk at the rider and said, "More like I actually made your stupid tactic work, thank you~. I got the finishing blow, after all!"

The rider did wince a little at that comeback and said, "Look, what matters isn't who kills the enemy, what matters is that this enemy's killed," before Gatekeeper then, with ironic timing, suddenly vanished. She then rapidly looked around for where they could've gone to, before she just said, "After them! We can't afford the enemy to escape!"

"I don't think we have to," I said, "They were summoned to test how good our Servants are, and whew, looks like the test was passed."

That caused rider to stare at me, before she breathed in then said, "Regardless of their motive, they still attacked all of us. You'd just let someone like that go free?"

"Eh, course I would," the new girl said, "They were just some jobber who couldn't even scratch an empress like me, so who cares?"

"Empress?!" That word for some reason stung the rider.

"Besides, I don't think we could go after them if we wanted to. They were summoned by the Star-Cell directly, so going after them anymore than we need could be against the Grail War's own rules," Sakura said.

"…You do know a War by definition has no rules, don't you?" Protocols, maybe," the rider said, but then started to calm down, "Still, you have something of a point. I can see how chasing after this Gatekeeper could risk wasting records. Alright then, amigas, I believe introductions are in order," her voice then perked up quite a bit, which eased my nerves what with how scary she'd been coming off, "I'm of the Rider class, as you've probably guessed."

"You can call me Saver," said the girl, "That's with a V, not B, so it's totally different. I mean, being summoned in one of these 'standard classes' would be so boring," she had to shoot a glance at Rider. "Obviously I won't just tell you who I really am, but anyone who's done their history and theology would be a complete doofus not to know who I am."

I didn't want to say this directly to her, but my first thought was, Er, isn't 'Saver' said to be the messianic class? This… isn't what I think of when I think 'messiah'.

Rider held back less, muttering to me, "She's practically a walking advertisement for secular government."

"I-I think I do know," Sakura said as she approached her, "You're Augustus of Rome, right? Or maybe Lydia then I guess?"

Saver simply stared at her a while, before she burst out laughing in Sakura's face, "Augustus? You seriously think I'm that stuffy old has-been? Hah, boy did I get you good!"

"Just as well," Rider said, "Had you been correct, camarada, Saver's identity would've been given away immediately. True, planning how to deal with Octavian would… sure be something, alright."

"I-I know that!" Sakura insisted, then said, "Guess I just got excited about summoning my Servant, that's all."

"Huh, 'your' Servant?" Saver said back, "Come on, what makes you think some squeaky little mouse girl like you could possibly summon a divine Empress like me?!"

"Sakura, ah, sorry to rub it in," I said, "but Saver does have a point. Rider and her were summoned pretty close together, so yeah, we can't be sure whose Servants they are."

"No, that's okay Amemiya, I get where you're coming from," Sakura said, "We could find out through using one of our Seals, but yeah, that's kinda extreme this early on."

[ ] "I'm pretty sure I'm with Rider and you're with Saver. That lottery ticket of yours makes me think this Saver more than Rider."

[ ] "Yeah, could be you're with Rider and I'm with Saver. I saw Rider first before Saver, and since you got here first that could mean you summoned her."

[ ] "I… don't think I summoned anyone. I mean, I didn't even use a catalyst."

[ ] Write-in
- [ ] "Perhaps we should just ask Rider and Saver if they were associated with gambling?" (by Liquid Ooze)
- [ ] Sakura insisted that given what her catalyst was, she might as well throw a coin to decide on her Servant. (by Edgedancer)
 
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[x] "I'm pretty sure I'm with Rider and you're with Saver. That lottery ticket of yours makes me think this Saver more than Rider."
 
I talked before about how I've crossposted to Beast'sLair, but now I've also started archiving this Quest on AO3:

Starless Black - Chapter 1 - ArlequineLunaire - Fate/stay night & Related Fandoms [Archive of Our Own]

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Hm, yeah that image is maybe a bit much and Hisui strikes me as a tad too stoic compared to the level at which Beryl emotes. I haven't spend a lot of time looking for faceclaims, but after a cursiory glance, the best I could find would be this one
Know this reply's a bit late, but the picture you posted also reminds me of this
 
Just to clarify, the votes are meant to be Yakumo speaking. I thought lines like 'that lottery ticket of yours' showed that, but just in case anyone was confused (especially since I had Sakura speak right before the vote)
 
[x] "I'm pretty sure I'm with Rider and you're with Saver. That lottery ticket of yours makes me think this Saver more than Rider."
 
[X] Write-in
"Perhaps we should just ask Rider and Saver if they were associated with gambling?"

This should help us learn more about our servants.
 
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[X] "I'm pretty sure I'm with Rider and you're with Saver. That lottery ticket of yours makes me think this Saver more than Rider."
[X] Sakura insisted that given what her catalyst was, she might as well throw a coin to decide on her Servant.

If we're embracing the chaos, we might as well do it in character and give Saver an actual answer as to why Sakura might be a good match to her. I'm sure if they're meant to be together, fate will provide.

Also, I mean, what's the worst that can happen? Both Servants here made a good first impression... or I guess it might be more accurate to say their second impression lived up to the sheet.
"Huh, 'your' Servant?" Saver said back, "Come on, what makes you think some squeaky little mouse girl like you could possibly summon a divine Empress like me?!"
Come on, Saver. Every Ace needs their Jack. I thought you're supposed to get current era knowledge, so how can you still be so behind the times? :V
Know this reply's a bit late, but the picture you posted also reminds me of this
Oh god, I haven't thought about that show in ever. I get less of a teasy cat vibe from Maria's smile, but I can see the similarity at least.
 
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[x] "I… don't think I summoned anyone. I mean, I didn't even use a catalyst."
 
Oh god, I haven't thought about that show in ever. I get less of a teasy cat vibe from Maria's smile, but I can see the similarity at least.

Know what you mean, almost all the art I could find of Maria or any Hayate character looked years old

On another topic, Cubbyhb1's avatar makes me think I could've snuck in a Glass Joe reference with Gatekeeper, would be fitting being the first fight of the 'game' and all
 
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Okay, so due to formatting, LiquidOoze's vote was recorded as just 'Write-in', I guess due to not being on the same line
Also wanted to say that we just dodged a Game Over here, since oyutright saying you didn't summon a Servant would've lead to a "Are you my Master?" "No" situation

Scheduled vote count started by ArlequineLunaire on Nov 26, 2022 at 7:36 PM, finished with 10 posts and 7 votes.

  • [x] "I'm pretty sure I'm with Rider and you're with Saver. That lottery ticket of yours makes me think this Saver more than Rider."
    [x] "I… don't think I summoned anyone. I mean, I didn't even use a catalyst."
    [X] "Yeah, could be you're with Rider and I'm with Saver. I saw Rider first before Saver, and since you got here first that could mean you summoned her."
    [X] Write-in
    [X] Sakura insisted that given what her catalyst was, she might as well throw a coin to decide on her Servant.
 
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