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The Aquarius Manor Hotel, site of a new Holy Grail War held again in Virtual Reality. Seven rounds of Heroic Spirits and their Masters, but is gladiatorial might all this Grail War tests?

The Gauntlet waits within, The Wasteland lurks beyond...
Prologue: These were the last days...

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QM's Note: I have since abandoned writing for Fate/ altogether, as I can no longer overlook or tolerate how it's a bad and exploitative franchise. Fortunately, I will be continuing to write about characters from myth, history, and the public domain in my own continuing story, Revalkyrie:

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Revalkyrie Original - Novel

Charlotte Chretien is a high school failure with a long-broken family. Now she's learned her world isn't 'real', it's one of many worlds under threat, and her enemies include the greatest figures of the past. However, she may be able to use said enemies' weapons against them... Come join a...



These were the last days of Sakura Tohsaka.

Okay, that's not completely true. The real Sakura Tohsaka would've been dead for hundreds, thousands even, of years at that point. These were more the last days of the one who'd taken the avatar designated 'Sakura Tohsaka'.

Those last days were spent at the Aquarius Manor Hotel, which was a pretty nice place to spend such a time, I suppose. Could even be called a Castle Hotel, honestly. Anyway, she walked with who'd become the other Masters past all its gardens and up to its towering front doors, looking like they'd been carved from sacred oak. Their sheer size made Sakura bite her lip.

The meek, black-haired girl even jumped back a bit when a blue light shone out of the eyes of a doorman. He quickly scanned her, before those eyes then flashed to green. "Confirmed: Player ID Tohsaka Sakura. Welcome, potential Master, to the STAR-CELL Holy Grail War v2!" his computerised voice rang out.

"T-thank you. I- I may not look it, but I'm in this war to win!" Sakura said, her sudden display of confidence largely lost on those who walked by her, just getting the glitch check over with. She knew, everyone knew, that this was all but the next stage in virtual reality… but being reminded of that was something else.

One crimson blush later, Sakura promptly scurried in, only for the inside of the Aquarius to leave her as speechless as the outside. The whole lobby shimmered with a pinkish-gold glow, marble floor crisscrossed by black serpentine patterns, and the stairs, balconies, and glass windows above making her feel just as small as the outside did. She could've just said to herself that none of this was real, physical anyway, but that would ruin the game, the experience of everything, after all.

And it wasn't just the building alone that made her feel all scrunched up. She saw most other players had spared no expense in customising their avatars, looking more like they were here to attend some fancy ball than, well, a tournament. Gents clad in suits, blond and raven-haired women in azure and scarlet gowns, valet and maid NPCs spawned by VR to show them to their rooms. Then amid all this was schoolgirl-ish Sakura, in her red blouse and white skirt. You can, well, see why she'd have felt insecure, most of us would've.

She took a deep breath first, but strode over to the front desk anyway, then said with a bow, "Hello, I'm Tohsaka Sakura. Er, one of the players here, so I'd like to have a room please."

A hologram of Sakura's profile popped up before her, as the clerk inputted some sort of code onto a dark green tablet hidden just under the counter. This code called in, quite suddenly too, a maid with bellhop-style alterations to her dress, who curtseyed and said, "Greetings, Mistress, my designation is Beryl, tasked with addressing all your minor duties too minimal for a Servant. We can head to your room right now if you wish, you'll find your selected inventory all materialised there."

"Wow, that's great," Sakura said, "I- I don't ever think I've been treated so nicely, well, ever. One question though," she then asked, "…How exactly am I supposed to summon a Servant? I mean, I'm guessing there's a tutorial on that later, right?"

Beryl replied immediately. "You'll find more detailed instructions on summoning in your room, but in short, as part of this preliminary round we've wiped your memories of the outside world," she said, though tried to lighten that with a smile, "Don't worry, this is something you and all other players agreed to beforehand. All you need to do is remember what the world outside this virtual reality is like, and you will be granted full Servant summoning access."

Sakura may have nodded along with all that, but it would've been a lot to take in all at once. It was for me. Anyway, you would've expected Sakura head immediately to her room-

[ ] -and so she did. Chance to unwind, more detailed instructions, all her stuff, why not?

[ ] -but instead, she did want to try socialising with other players, potential Masters, first. See what they knew, who she might be up against

[ ] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later

[ ] -but instead, she decided to explore Aquarius Manor itself. Get familiar with the layout, look for clues, and it wasn't like there was any major rush to get to her room

[ ] Write-in
 
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Dramatis Personae
The players assemble...

Masters
  • Sakura Tohsaka: Potential Master, has the avatar of a girl from long ago whose memories she may be mistaking for her own​
  • Felix de Carvalho: Reportedly the winner of the previous War​
  • Blut Mavrik: Dark loner (or so he tries to be) with wolf features who Beryl says might be an 'A-Ray'​
  • Yakumo Amemiya: Enby oneiromancer who's also the narrator​
  • Mikoto Kasaito: Older aristocratic woman who looks like she could be related to Sakura, though she mocks the idea​
  • Cainessa Archibald: Icy noble with the mannerisms of a Victorian schoolteacher. Doesn't like Mikoto much​
  • Rin Matou: Mysterious and untalkative girl who's nevertheless a multi-talented prodigy​
  • Stathis Smaragdis: Serious military figure antagonistic towards Felix​
Servants
  • Saver Elagabalus: Servant to Sakura, an irresponsible prank-loving girl who still claims to be a Divine Empress​
  • Rider Simone Bolivar: Servant to Yakumo, a gallant swordswoman quick to defy monarchy​
  • Assassin 'Jeeves': Non-competing Servant in charge of valets and maids. Said to be more the concept of 'butler' than any one character​
  • Caster Jafar: Non-competing Servant acting as Head Librarian, jaded and standoffish​
  • Berserker Luisa Casati: Non-competing Servant acting as Museum Curator, has bizarre ideas about fashion and art​
Others
  • Ciel: Church Overseer, also coded to look like a woman from long ago
  • Beryl: Sakura's appointed pre-War maid
  • Jasper Carlisle: Yakumo's appointed pre-War valet

See Also

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Arlequine Lunaire's Character Compendium

This thread's so I can have a place to keep all my character profiles, for my various stories and Quests, in one convenient place without having to search all over SV for them. As to why I'm not just doing this in a notebook or hard drive, it's so that other people can look over them, comment on...

(Note: Above thread contains Major Spoilers about this Quest's Servants)

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Persona: The Beautiful Fantasy - Modern

A high school student looking for friendship and trying to find it in fame, you've received an invitation to join no less than the most popular clique in school, the All-Aces! However, they have an... odd initiation ritual, called 'The Persona Game'. And why did they choose you, of all people?

(My first Completed Quest, and the first Completed Persona Quest on SV)

Omake Rewards
  • A Servant sheet written by me of a mythic or historic character of your choosing
  • Spoiler PMs. If you're interested and can keep a secret, I'll answer any spoiler-y question you may have in a Direct Conversation
  • Side-stories. Along with my regular update, I'll also write a side-story update, be it an alt-Servant AU, other AU, crossover (provided I'm familiar with the source material), or something like a character piece
(Note: Written omakes should be at minimum 400 words)
 
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[X] -but instead, she did want to try socialising with other players, potential Masters, first. See what they knew, who she might be up against
 
[X] -but instead, she decided to explore Aquarius Manor itself. Get familiar with the layout, look for clues, and it wasn't like there was any major rush to get to her room

Super Sleuth Sakura
 
[X] -but instead, she did want to try socialising with other players, potential Masters, first. See what they knew, who she might be up against

I've tried, but it's hard to resist the allure of meeting our cast. We better get attached to them quick while we still can. I mean, technically the duels haven't been confirmed to be to the death for the Masters yet, but I'd rather see the gut punch coming in advance.
 
[X] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later
 
[X] -and so she did. Chance to unwind, more detailed instructions, all her stuff, why not?

No sense in going off script just yet, the tutorials might be useful.
 
[X] -but instead, she decided to explore Aquarius Manor itself. Get familiar with the layout, look for clues, and it wasn't like there was any major rush to get to her room
 
Oh by the way, I went back and forth on whether or not to include Bad Ends in this Quest. My current thoughts are they'll be around, but you'd have to go really out of the way to run into any of them, and restarting right where you left off's always possible
 
[X] -and so she did. Chance to unwind, more detailed instructions, all her stuff, why not?
 
[X] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later
 
[X] -but instead, she did want to try socialising with other players, potential Masters, first. See what they knew, who she might be up against
 
[X] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later
 
Switching to

[X] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later
 
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  • [X] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later
    [X] -but instead, she did want to try socialising with other players, potential Masters, first. See what they knew, who she might be up against
    [X] -and so she did. Chance to unwind, more detailed instructions, all her stuff, why not?
    [X] -but instead, she decided to explore Aquarius Manor itself. Get familiar with the layout, look for clues, and it wasn't like there was any major rush to get to her room
 
Prologue: Someone called a Church Overseer...
[X] -yet she was aware there was a 'Church Overseer' acting as a grand referee of sorts. Sounded like someone she should meet with sooner than later

"Hold on, there's supposed to someone called a 'Church Overseer', right?" Sakura asked.

"Well…" Beryl began, "It's not as if any Church itself oversees the war. I mean, we're told that's they used to do, way back when. But really Mistress, the Star-Cell simply uploaded the data of a Church priestess as that's what's expected for a Grail War."

With Beryl rambling on a little, Sakura said, "Er, what I was trying to say was, could we meet the Overseer first, regardless of whether they're a Church person? They really do sound like someone I should get to know right away."

"As you wish, Mistress," Beryl smiled and nodded, "You'll find their chapel in the gardens, but up in the hill this time, instead of downhill to the gates."

Sakura breathed out and said, "Hey, thanks," given that info was all she would've wanted to know from the start. Though it was funny how she now had to go right back out of the big oaken door she'd been hesitant to enter.

The sheer size of the gardens, like the size of everything around the Hotel Aquarius, meant it was still quite some distance to walk, which left Sakura huffing and puffing by the time she actually made it out to said chapel, a dusty place of reddish brick and angular roofs. "Whew, I'm really not used to this much exercise. I mean, makes me worried I'm kind of too scrawny to be a Master," Sakura said.

"Since this is a virtual world, anything to keep your legs from atrophying," Beryl said, giving yet another reminder of what this world was.


"Trust me, you'll get used to this little hike of ours before you know it," said a third voice, which came from a woman standing right by the chapel's entrance arch. This woman was unsurprisingly dressed in a nun's robe, but also sported dark blue hair cut boyishly short.

"Ah, so you'd be the Overseer, right?" Sakura asked.

The nun smirked. "Well, it's not like there's anyone else here they could be. Yes, this Star-Cell dredged me up to make sure all you players didn't cause any more havoc, oh, than you probably already will anyway," she said, before she more properly introduced herself, "My name is Ciel… or no, not really. That was a name of another woman entirely, from ages ago. I'm just a program wearing her face and having sort of the same job, really, since the Star-Cell needed me to look like someone in its databanks."

While Sakura was normally calm if a bit nervous, soemthing about what Ciel said made her twitch. "Okay, okay, why do all of you keep going on about how this is all just VR? Like, do you just want to wreck immersion right away?"

"Tohsaka Sakura," Ciel now made direct eye contact with the potential Master, "I, and it seems the other AIs, do not wish to pretend we're anyone we're not. Furthermore, need I remind you you're doing the same thing I am, wearing the guise of a long-ago woman?" The Overseer sighed, then tried to soften her voice, "Immersion's one thing, but the Star-Cell has a responsibility to make sure you don't lose sight of who you are. I mean, look at us, we already took your memories."

That admission of guilt at least made Sakura ease up back to her usual self, before she asked, "Er, okay then, so then could you tell me a little about the outside world? Yeah yeah, I know you can't just give me the answer, but if you're concerned about my identity, some clue could really help me out."

Ciel then smiled. "Why, I already have given you a hint. Inadvertently yes, but still. All my talk about how long ago our original 'selves' ought to let you know that, as far in the future as you think this is, think even further," she said, before she leaned in closer to Sakura, "Alright, since you've actually been one of the more reasonable players I've met, your little tantrum aside, I'll give you another. Think about why the hotel may've chosen the name 'Aquarius', beyond just its connection with cups."

"Ah, th-thank you," Sakura said, then gulped and looked down, "But really, me, one of the 'better' players? No, that can't be, I… got all angry with you just then."

"Oh I meant it, you were quite polite compared to some of the others I've deal with today," Ciel said, then leaned in and conspiratorially whispered, "I can't say much, my programming wouldn't even allow it, but some of the potential Masters I've met today, much as we even have days anymore, have been a real headache. One tried to bribe me with tithes, one complained non-stop about magi not being allowed to run their own affairs, much as 'mages' even exist anymore, and one thought his anti-Christianity made him some sort of genius."

"Wow, that does sound bad," Sakura said the first response that came to mind.

"I am Overseer, so don't worry. Those types are my burden, no need to shoulder yourself with their like," Ciel grinned, but then added, "Unless they're assigned as your opponent for a Round, they'd be your burden then I guess. And it hasn't been all bad for me, I did meet two quite nice players. One was a blue-haired kid, hair a lighter shade than mine, didn't get their name sadly. The other, well, he probably needs no introduction, no less than Felix de Carvalho."

"Felix de Carvalho?" Sakura asked in an instant, showing he did in fact need an introduction.

"The winner of the previous Grail War," it was Beryl who then spoke up, "You may have this war be called 'v2', he was victorious in v1."

"Beryl, you just spoke?" Sakura had to ask, given how Beryl had stayed quiet this whole time.

"It wasn't really my place to speak otherwise, Mistress," Beryl said.

"I confess, I don't do well with maids," Ciel suddenly said, "No idea what it is, something in my coding just has me side-eyeing them. Anyway, as for Felix Carvalho, for a moment I dreaded all the fame had gone to his head, but he actually seemed quite nice. Hasn't told anyone what he wished for last time, but I do suppose that's his prerogative."

"Really? I thought a Grail Wish would've been really noticeable…" Sakura muttered.

As Sakura thanked Ciel and turned to leave, the maid Beryl then brought up, "I naturally suppose you'll be heading back to your room, Mistress. However, if there's still wanderlust in your veins, you may also like to check out our Museum or Library, where all our relics and documents of Heroic Spirits reside."

[ ] Sakura told the maid that yeah, she should be getting to her room already.

[ ] Sakura was interested in the Museum, she did want to start thinking of what sort of Heroic Spirit to summon.

[ ] The Library sounded like a good idea, ought to study up before the War heated up.

[ ] Write-in
 
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[X] Sakura was interested in the Museum, she did want to start thinking of what sort of Heroic Spirit to summon.

Now this, this is worth going out of our way for.
 
[X] Sakura was interested in the Museum, she did want to start thinking of what sort of Heroic Spirit to summon
 
Minor thing, but I quickly altered Carvalho's first name for Jacinto to Felix since I was worried it sounded a bit close to a character I planned to introduce later. Probably a good thing I did before we met either in person
 
[X] Sakura was interested in the Museum, she did want to start thinking of what sort of Heroic Spirit to summon.
 
[X] Sakura was interested in the Museum, she did want to start thinking of what sort of Heroic Spirit to summon.
 
this will be a valiant effort I'm sure, but unless this ends up some kind of massive quadruple-great-grail-war, you're not gonna make a dent in your servant sheet collection :V

which I suppose was a pretty nice place to spend that time, I suppose.
But do you suppose? :thonk:

The meek, black-haired even jumped back a bit
feel like there's a word missing here

being reminded of that was soemthing else.

looking more like they were here attend some fancy ball than, well, a tournament

soemthing about what Ciel said made her twitch
 
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this will be a valiant effort I'm sure, but unless this ends up some kind of massive quadruple-great-grail-war, you're not gonna make a dent in your servant sheet collection :V

The idea I had in mind was this'd be more of a 'best sheets' showcase than something more comprehensive, but on top of that I also have a more F/GO-style fic planned (though one that inverts F/GOs main premise)
 
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