Speaking of Divine Intervention... (PMMM/Okami)

Well I guess it isn't spoilers if I say this but one has to remember that despite Homura being this outwardly:


She has never, ever EVER:

Remember, Homura as the cold tough as nails time traveler is fanon. Case in point, rewatch the first episode. Those awkward pauses aren't because she's trying to appear cool. She is just that bad at social. She's the type of person to rehearse every conversation beforehand and sticks to script even when her guesses prove horribly off. And as we saw, this comes back to bite her constantly.

Now as to what will happen when you take that and throw in Ammy? Well...

Spoilers. :V

But suffice to say, Homura is all talk she built herself up as and will constantly make things worse until she realizes it.
She's already confused too. This is her first loop where something so drastically different as Madoka having a pet occured, we could see that when Homura stumbled at the mention of Ammy. Now time loops inevitably cause variations depending on how long they go on, but they usually stay fairly consistent...especially with literal karmic destiny and when the creation of a god is a focal point. I get the feeling Amaterasu saw what Madoka would eventually be forced to (best friend/love interest trapping her soul for eternity/next film) and decided: "Japan's my territory and since she was Japanese before ascending, she's my responsibility. Hold on Madoka! Mama Ammy's coming!"
 
She's already confused too. This is her first loop where something so drastically different as Madoka having a pet occured, we could see that when Homura stumbled at the mention of Ammy. Now time loops inevitably cause variations depending on how long they go on, but they usually stay fairly consistent...especially with literal karmic destiny and when the creation of a god is a focal point. I get the feeling Amaterasu saw what Madoka would eventually be forced to (best friend/love interest trapping her soul for eternity/next film) and decided: "Japan's my territory and since she was Japanese before ascending, she's my responsibility. Hold on Madoka! Mama Ammy's coming!"

There is also the fact that Amy is the name of the cat Madoka usually uses her wish to save. She was probably thinking 'Oh SHIT! I'm too late!'
 
But suffice to say, Homura is all talk she built herself up as and will constantly make things worse until she realizes it.
And Ammy will be nothing be patient, kind and understanding while trying to help the poor dear. Pointing the light machine gun in her face while semi-hysterically calmly questioning her is not acceptable behavior though.
 
Part 8
"Called it." Sayaka replied smugly.

"What?" Madoka looked incredulously at her semi-aquatic friend. She had just finished explaining the last few days to Sayaka, everything from the statue to all the weird happenings with Ammy.

"Yeah, I said she was a spirit yesterday. And I was right!" Sayaka pumped her fist with a cheer, while wolf and owner both sighed.

At least she isn't panicking anymore.

"Soooooo...you think Ammy suddenly changing is related to well... this?" Sayaka suddenly asked, thumping her tail against her bed for emphasis.

"I don't know for certain… but it must be. I just don't understand why. Why did everything happen today?" Madoka pondered outloud.

"Maybe it was like some cosmic alignment or something?" Sayaka offered. "Or maybe like a prophecy that was like 'on a Tuesday after a pink-haired girl gives a wolf snausages it becomes a badass shiny spirit thingy."

A curious whine came from Ammy at the word "Snausages."

"Oh uh Ammy… they're a dog treat that's basically a cheese wrapped sausage. " Madoka explained.

Ammy's eyes widened to incredible levels as her jaw slowly lowered. A look of pure joy passed across the wolf's visage, the same expression a parent would have upon holding their newborn child. Tears flowed freely from her eyes as the wolf comprehended this incredible revelation, only matched by the drool pooling at her feet. Her tail swishing back and forth with such intensity it was a blur. A light shown in through the windows, illuminating Ammy as flower petals drifted lazily into the bedroom.

On this day Ammy the wolf knew for certain, despite all the troubles they faced. Despite how they stumbled from time to time humans were truly capable of creating things more beautiful than any god could manage. And this revelation filled her with hope and determination. Nothing, not even the personification of evil itself could possibly shatter thi-

"Aren't Snausages really unhealthy for dogs? She's pudgy enough as is."

"Yeah I guess you're right, we really do need to watch Ammy's diet. She doesn't exercise much at all..."

The tears coming from Ammy's eyes were no longer those of joy.

"...Do you think she's upset we talked about her weight problem?" Madoka asked, pointing at the wolf who had placed herself in front of Sayaka's mirror, an almost literal cloud of despair emanating from her.

"Nah. She's fine."

"A-anyways Sayaka, I-I think we'll have to take you to my home. You can't stay here alone." Madoka said, her stomach twisting into knots as the unfortunate reality of their situation finally settled on her.

"Y-yeah… I-I guess I can't e-even take care of myself anymore." Sayaka said shakily, staring at her hands.

"I-I'm sure we'll find a way to change you back Sayaka!"

"A-and I guess have to r-rely on other's to just do basic tasks…" She sniffed.

"Sayaka…"

"A-a-a-and eating seafood is c-cannibalism now r-right?"

"I-I'm pretty sure you can still eat fish Sayaka,"

"A-and...And I guess I have to switch from t-track to the s-s-swimming club n-now, right Madoka?" Tears were flowing freely now from Sayaka, her hair dripping in turn.

"Umm.."

"A-and… A-a-a-and…"

"...Sayaka?"

Sayaka suddenly started bawling, her hair suddenly turning into a waterfall that soaked her bed and Madoka "KYOUSUKE'S GONNA THINK I'M A FREEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA-" *SMACK*

"..."

"..."

"...."

"..."

"......."

"................Did I just get slapped in the face by a wolf spirit?" Sayaka asked, rubbing her cheek.

"Uhhhhmmm…" Her friend tried to answer, at a loss for words.

"BARK!" Was Ammy's answer.

"You know what, I'm repressing that. Guess we should start… packing I guess." Sayaka gloomily stated.

"How are we going to carry all your stuff out, I only have my school bag with me." Madoka asked "We're also going to need to dry everything."

"Hmm, maybe we can find some garbage baRGHABLARGLE!" Sayaka suddenly shouted as a swift wind suddenly ripped through her room, impossibly drying up all the water while knocking over the two girls and every loose object Sayaka hadn't already.

The flower petals covering everything did at least brighten the place up.

"BARK!" Ammy stated happily.

"W-well I guess that solves the water problem." Madoka said as she disentangled herself from the floundering mermaid.

"Could have done without the tornado though!" Was Sayaka's grumpy reply.

"W-well, now we just need to pack up all your stuff."

Ammy however seemed to have a solution in mind as she picked up some of Sayaka's shirts.

"Ammy look, I know you want to help but getting wolf slobber all over them isn't exactly-WHOA!" Sayaka exclaimed suddenly as the wolf impossibly pocketed the shirts.

"H-how… what did she...?" Madoka asked.

Suddenly the wolf reached into her side and pulled out those shirts, they bounced toward Sayaka in a bubble of light before it popped, causing them to land in her lap in a neat pile. Warm to the touch like they had been just pulled out from the dryer the shirts had somehow been cleaned, folded and smelled vaguely of flowers.

"...Madoka?"

"Yes Sayaka?"

"Ammy is the best wolf ever."

What followed was the strangest packing session Madoka had ever been involved in her life. Ammy it seemed had no limit to the items she could pocket and didn't even need to physically "pocket" them in order to store them, as they had found out mid-way through when Sayaka had thrown a bundle of socks at Ammy. That had rapidly evolved into a game of catch as both Madoka and Sayaka tossed objects at Ammy, the wolf leaping at them and causing them to vanish when they touched her. However as always Sayaka seemed to take it a little overboard.

"Hey can you pocket my bed Ammy?"

"Sayaka we have spare bed- O-oh nevermind then." Madoka said quietly as Sayaka's bed vanished into Ammy's dimensional pocket.

"LETS DO THE FRIDGE NEXT!"

"The fridge…? Why would you need too…"

"Duh Madoka, the food will go bad otherwise." Sayaka answered as if it was the most obvious answer in the world.

There was a slight delay as Sayaka tried to drag herself to the kitchen before Ammy tossed her onto the wolf's back but eventually they made it.

Opening the fridge Sayaka examined its contents. "You can keep all this from spoiling, right?" The wolf nodded her head. "And you aren't going to eat it when I'm not looking, right?" The wolf didn't respond. "Ammy…" Begrudgingly Ammy nodded.

"ALRIGHT, LETS DO THIS!" Sayaka exclaimed as she started to shovel food into the wolf.

Madoka though could only sigh, slightly relieved. Well, at least Sayaka is currently back to her old self. She thought. Hopefully Ammy would continue to work her magic and keep Sayaka smiling through this difficult time. But how was she going to explain this to her parents? Actually, that raised a bigger question…

"Um, how are we going to get to my house?" Madoka asked, wondering if they should call up her parents.

"Easy Madoka, we'll just do what you did to get here!" Sayaka stated, smiling at her.

"Uuuuh.." Madoka gulped; she wasn't sure she liked this plan.

"It'll be fine! Right Ammy?"

"BARK!"

"See?"

A few moments later they were outside Sayaka's apartment, Madoka locking Sayaka's door before clambering onto the wolf behind the mermaid.

"Okay, just go as fast as possi-"

"Wait, s-shouldn't we try to be safe?" Madoka asked.

"Hmm, good point Madoka. Ammy, have a solution?"

Ammy answered with an affirmative bark before vines suddenly wrapped themselves around the girls, tying them to the wolf.

"See? What'd I tell you. You have the best wolf ever."

"I-I'm still not sure on this. Maybe we should wal- Ammy?" Madoka stopped suddenly as she felt the wolf tense. Ammy was looking to their right; she was staring straight into a wall, and yet Madoka was certain she was seeing something far beyond it. A growl issued from Ammy's throat as her lips peeled back, revealing far-too-sharp teeth.

"Ammy, what's wrong?" Madoka asked, concern filling her voice as she rubbed the wolf's side. She had never heard Ammy growl before.

"W-wow, Ammy. N-not the time to r-remind us you're a giant wolAAAAAAAAAH" Sayaka screamed as both girls were suddenly made aware of a very important fact.

Ammy had been holding back when she carried Madoka.

"I REGRET THIS IMMENSEEEEEEEEELLLLLYYYYY!" Sayaka screamed into Ammy's neck as she tore across the city, leaping from building to building, flying up walls and using vines that emerged from nowhere to pull herself forward at even faster speeds.

Straight to Mitakihara's Downtown Mall.
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She has sensed a witch...that means Kyubey is currently being shot at. Homura must be confused thiugh, because she knows Sayaka and Madoka were supposed to meet Mami but haven't.
 
Nah, all kinds of possibilities exist. Especially when you have Homura trying to make things turn out differently.
She'll probably be relieved that Madoka didn't show up, most likely.
 
Nah, all kinds of possibilities exist. Especially when you have Homura trying to make things turn out differently.
She'll probably be relieved that Madoka didn't show up, most likely.
It still would confuse her, because it is more common that she does. Variations throw time loopers off balance...until they get used to it.

Anyway, Ammy reminds me of another Okami crossover, except she was less comedic in that one. Summoning the Sun is a Familiar of Zero/Okami cross where Louise summons Amaterasu as her familiar. In it she can talk to other familiars besides the one already capable of speech through some sort of telepathy shared by all creatures, but humans have ignored. It's been dead for nearly 2-and-a-half years, but it's till a good read. So I have to ask, will Ammy talk to Kyubey at all, even if just to warn the complete and utter moron off?
 
I'll admit the rundown of the loops Homura went through never made a lot of sense to me in that episode, I must have missed that part. Did Homura kill her straight out or something? How many loops has the girl experienced anyway?
*facepalm*

It's not that hard.

Timeline 1: Madoka and Mami die, Homura makes her wish. Sayaka and Kyoko fate are unknown.
Timeline 2: Madoka becomes a witch. Sayaka, Kyoko, and Mami's fates are unknown.
Timeline 3: Sayaka becomes a witch, Mami kills Kyoko, Madoka kills Mami, Homura kills Madoka.
Timeline 4: Homura kills one of Kyubey's bodies in an attempt to stop Madoka from contracting. Madoka contracts to stop Walmart. The fates of Sayaka, Kyoko and Mami are unknown, but given how Homura goes on about "I must do everything myself" she likely just ignored them.

Episode 10 ends with Homura chasing down Kyubey, as seen in Episode 1. However, episode 11 states Homura went through countless timelines, therefore there are more time lines beyond what we see in the show.
 
*facepalm*

It's not that hard.

Timeline 1: Madoka and Mami die, Homura makes her wish. Sayaka and Kyoko fate are unknown.
Timeline 2: Madoka becomes a witch. Sayaka, Kyoko, and Mami's fates are unknown.
Timeline 3: Sayaka becomes a witch, Mami kills Kyoko, Madoka kills Mami, Homura kills Madoka.
Timeline 4: Homura kills one of Kyubey's bodies in an attempt to stop Madoka from contracting. Madoka contracts to stop Walmart. The fates of Sayaka, Kyoko and Mami are unknown, but given how Homura goes on about "I must do everything myself" she likely just ignored them.

Episode 10 ends with Homura chasing down Kyubey, as seen in Episode 1. However, episode 11 states Homura went through countless timelines, therefore there are more time lines beyond what we see in the show.
Well, i only watched the show fully once. Give me a break!
 
orika manga is supposed to be canon alternate timeline so Homura did get into loops where things went off rails completely before.

Giant god wolf off no, but strange things have happened before.
 
orika manga is supposed to be canon alternate timeline so Homura did get into loops where things went off rails completely before.

Giant god wolf off no, but strange things have happened before.
Well duh, she's Looping. There's a reason that fanfic series has things called Variants, the more you loop the more time becomes 'strained' and starts to fray and snap, causing weird things to happen.
 
Not until Madoka joins back with her divine self and stops Homucifer Akuma. And frees the Incubators, but that is a completely secondary goal to remaking reality...for a third time.

They could always join forces. Except for the 'free the Incubators' thing. Bunnycats are DICKS, and don't deserve it. But think about it, Godoka and Homucifer teaming up. Godoka is extra-super safe, AND Homucifer gets her girl. Win/Win/laugh at the Bunnycats.
 
They could always join forces. Except for the 'free the Incubators' thing. Bunnycats are DICKS, and don't deserve it. But think about it, Godoka and Homucifer teaming up. Godoka is extra-super safe, AND Homucifer gets her girl. Win/Win/laugh at the Bunnycats.
Except for the part where Madokami agreed that though the Inucbators were wrong in their efforts, but that they were doing the right thing, so she created (or allowed to come into existence) the Wraiths to replace witches. They only way Homucifer would team up (after somehow losing her Protection Obsession), is if she could design the enemies fought by Magical Girls. Considering how comfortable her dream world was, she would probably go with the Nightmares.

Edit: And being in charge of the Incubators, just so she can tear them apart if they contract too often and to those who are at risk of becoming like Madoka.
 
I love this. It's adorable. There simply aren't enough Okami Amaterasu fics out there. Maybe this issue with Sayaka will cleanse her of all the craziness that turned her into Oktavia. You never know.

I also want to see Ammy melt Homura's scarred and frigid heart. That will bring tears to my eyes. For reals. I'm not even joking.
 
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