Myself as I was last year, self inserted into the head of Clementine. Oh look, there goes canon. Aaaand, it's derailed. That was expected. Only question is: is it just rolling down a hill, or running straight off a cliff.
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There are a deficit of Walking Dead SIs. After reading most of them, I made a discovery.As soon as I read The Walking Dead SI Clementine?
Oh, look. Another fic I didn't even know I wanted...
Watched!
Make a spear it's not hard just duck tape a kitchen knife to a broom handle it will give you reach
Second psa this is TWD 99.5% of people are idiots, assholes, or both
I kept reading Walkers as Walken's....
Hordes of hungry and violent Christopher Walken!!
I man I remember playing this game got so involved in the story that I bawled My eyes out at the end of the first game. Real enjoy what You have written and looking forward to more! Hopefully Clem can get mitigate the worst outcomes !
It's on the list, as soon as they can get some tools/time to do it.
Beware the Walken Apocalypse! Amazing guy, btw. Love anything he's in.
Right there with you, bro. These games punch you in the heart. It's not a friendly universe, shit happens. I hope I can life up to all your expectations!
I was thinking though....
What other little Tykes would be fun to see in WD?
Little Sister from Bioshock?
Vista from Worm?
I haven't seen it either. According to Wikipedia it's 10 years after Day 0, featuring the first 'teenagers' to reach maturity in universe. The first generation raised among the dead. It's certainly an interesting concept. I might have to look into it a bit more.Well isn't there a twd spin off called twd: world beyond featuring teenagers? i Haven't seen it so don't know if it's any good but that might be worth a watch for some inspiration.
good update =) sucks about the hat tho oh well she will get it later in the story the hat always finds away.
you could totally make this hat thing a running gag. have her wear different hats every chapter or two as she figuresout her own style. maybe have others comment on the hat changes or they give her hats they find when they are out and about.Thanks! I'm always a little self-conscious about my writing, so it's nice to get positive feedback!
The only things I would have done differently would be to look at the family portraits and ask Lee to bring one down to me for a keepsake slash sell the sad little girl act better. Add a moment where I sadly stare at the picture before putting it in my backpack to really sell the act. Plus kinda keep it as a reminder of Clem. The only other thing I would do would be to adventure out back once the coast is clear to grab the cops weapons night stick mace radio cuffs and whatever else his vehicle has.AN: Thoughts, reactions, comments? I'm a sucker for feedback, and it keeps me interested in a story when I know people enjoy it.
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Only really useful up close. Don't let video games and highschool of the dead fool you. Clem might not be able to use these but am adult like Lee should be able to learn to use one fast enough to dispatch zombie groupings that git too close.Get Nail and Rivet Guns from Hardware Stores with lots of Rivets and Nails as Ammo. Might be easier to get than Firearms and Bullets. Gas for the Tool Guns can be refilled via compressor or by hand or crank pump.
Please don tell your audience that. Just leave it vague so we can insert ourselves into the story in our headI am- was-, a white, redheaded male, 22, fresh from university and looking for a professional job as a programmer.
No it's fine.Please don tell your audience that. Just leave it vague so we can insert ourselves into the story in our head
That's the plan. SoL chapter coming up next, including discovering/finding a style. Maybe they find one, maybe not. Not even I know, yet.you could totally make this hat thing a running gag. have her wear different hats every chapter or two as she figures out her own style. maybe have others comment on the hat changes or they give her hats they find when they are out and about.
Fair. That's sorta the angle I'm gonna take in order to get the gun back from Lee. 'It's my dads' kinda thing. everyone in the group knows it is.The only things I would have done differently would be to look at the family portraits and ask Lee to bring one down to me for a keepsake slash sell the sad little girl act better. Add a moment where I sadly stare at the picture before putting it in my backpack to really sell the act. Plus kinda keep it as a reminder of Clem.
Yes, my freshly reminded-of-his-own-mortality SI is gonna brave the walker-laden woods to get a shotgun (Loud) with minimal ammo and a nightstick. I wouldn't do that. They've got screwdrivers, a gun (Pending) and tricks learned from future group members.The only other thing I would do would be to adventure out back once the coast is clear to grab the cops weapons night stick mace radio cuffs and whatever else his vehicle has.
I always remembered that the zombies getting distracted by something and leaving immediately so the coast would be clear in a little bit.
Thanks!
iirc, the word 'Zombie' doesn't exist in this universe. thats why they call them every name under the sun. 'Walkers', 'Geeks', 'Lurkers', 'Muertos' and a hundred other names. The reason I'm calling them 'monsters' to everyone else is to try to cement in their minds that, yes, this is a little girl. Even if she can kill a 'monster' very quickly and efficiently.I don't know much about TWD beyond the first and somewhat second Telltale games. But it always struck me that they all universally called them Walkers. Was there a national newspaper that dubbed them that?
It sounds like you're getting this group to call them Monsters. If you're doing a time skip you could have this group call them whatever you want. Monsters, Puppets, or even Zombies?
The term Zombie originated from Hatie I think? Something about overloading a human body with poisons that keeps the body alive but no one home for servitude. So if you go with that last one Clem could just bring up that factoid from the tv?
IN my opinion? waste of resources. Yes, you distracted the walkers. Whoopie. They will hang around the boom-box until it runs out of batteries. Then, eventually, you run out of batteries and can't do it anymore. you might not even get the boombox back. I can think of better uses for Batteries.Could have boom boxes set to play loud music on certain roof tops to draw them away or towards traps?
Thanks for the ideas, but I do want you to remember some things. They can't rely on throw-away weapons or that they'll be able to scavenge more of them later.Clem needs to learn throwing knives, darts, axes etc.
Paintball Gun with glass bb's full of acid.
Personally, I wouldn't think of this. And I don't think Clem is strong enough to do it, anyway. Certainly not with the rationing that's gonna be happening.
Again, most likely not getting those back. Waste of resources.Wind up alarm clocks, wind up toys, music boxes etc as Zombie Bait and Distractions.
How am I gonna get enough lighter fluid to fill a super-soaker? Lets say I make my home-brew flamethrower, you think the adults are gonna just let me use that? either way, it's more likely we'd just be dealing with zombies that are also on fire.Super Soaker full of Lighter Fluid to spray Zombies, then set Zombies on fire with home made flame thrower kitbashed from Aerosol Cans and an Electric Clicker to light gas stoves and BBQ grills etc.
This is Macon, Georgia. It's two and a half hours from the coast. It's not exactly gonna have a Scuba shop, or a Ren Faire. Chainmail is also very heavy. SI is a little eight year old girl. Not stronk enoughRaid a Ren Faire or Scuba Shop to get Chainmail.
Also grab Rubber Band and Gas Powered Harpoon Guns if at Scuba Shop.
Gas-powered tools are overhyped and honestly, this is America. As of the 10 years into the apocalypse, they can still find ammo left all over the place.Get Nail and Rivet Guns from Hardware Stores with lots of Rivets and Nails as Ammo. Might be easier to get than Firearms and Bullets. Gas for the Tool Guns can be refilled via compressor or by hand or crank pump.
I Actually own a twist-torch. You twist the end, and it makes the light brighter. Might come in handy. Clockwork radio, though? I think you're dreaming.Get a clockwork torch and radio. If you cannot find any, then make some as they are too too useful in a world with no mains electric and limited batteries.
Might be smart, but I wouldn't know where to go find one.Grab some Solar Charging Mats that can roll up for portability to recharge vital gear like Radio etc.
Again with the burning, then you'd just be dealing with a zombie on fire. At least, till it's brain burns away. Still, it's on fire and walking around. Not the best combo since it can't feel pain anyway.Get some Magnifying Glasses or raid an optometrists for lenses from glasses. May be useful for distant viewing or starting fires for cooking or warmth. Could even burn zombies from range?
Dried food Good. Jerky and such. Trust me, the canned food was grabbed because I knew that they were gonna bunker down at the motel. the rationing system will involve perishables-first, then tinned, then dried.Dried food is the most portable. Tins are good for liquid and mood elevation but heavy.
Probably not. Might as well use a Screwdriver if you're gonna be in close-range.Only really useful up close. Don't let video games and highschool of the dead fool you. Clem might not be able to use these but am adult like Lee should be able to learn to use one fast enough to dispatch zombie groupings that git too close.
Hmm. I didn't know that's a thing you can just buy from a shop. None of the people in the group are farmers, either. Might come across one when looting Macon, but idk.A Tractor Supply and Co. should have some a small windmill turbine you can stick on a roof or a vehicle to charge on the go.
We'll see. Unlikely on the Arrows, more likely to just throw some fire-crackers. better than using alarm clocks or wind-up toys, anyway. likely louder too.Stick fireworks on the end of arrows. Get zombies to attack one of their own at the back of the pack.
You should try to look up industrial parks. Specifically where the warehouses are. They should be a treasure trove of goodies.
Hm. I might remove it, if it hurts your suspension of disbelief that much. Personally, I like knowing what kinda person the SI is compared to who they are now, even if it never comes up again in the story. I mean, isn't that part of why we love Tanya? Middle-aged Japanese Salaryman becomes tiny blond German child?Please don tell your audience that. Just leave it vague so we can insert ourselves into the story in our head
No it's fine.
I just keep thinking Wally West is the SI for the laughs.