Trenacker
Margrave of the Transvaal
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- Imperial Remnant
I'd be interested in seeing how Nwabudike Morgan, the arch-capitalist, is adapting to starting from zero.
Nick Stepanovich has perceptively pointed out on his Paean to SMAC blog that Morgan's "solution" for Planet is to change nothing. Human civilization on Earth didn't fail, in Morgan's book. We consumed all there was to consume, and then we moved on. The system worked, it just had its malcontents and losers, that's all.
It might be easy to think that Godwinson would most appeal to the fearful, but I can see Morgan's slick "change nothing" advertising hitting home with the least-resilient. The same way climate change denial often arises not from scientific literacy or illiteracy but motivated reasoning: if you say that a problem doesn't exit, then nobody can reasonably lay on you any accountability to contribute to a solution.
Honestly, it'd be cleanest if the pirates killed Yudikon. He's made it abundantly clear that he's not interested in working with us, Lal/us aren't the sort to just shoot him, and I doubt that Struan is going to just pick up his people and go. If I recall correctly, though, most of the people who left with him were Overseer types, something we don't need, and doesn't mesh at all with who Lal is. Would be a trial managing them.
As a point of clarification, Struan's is a company: Struan's Pacific Trading Company, sometimes called Struan's Asia-Pacific Trading House. (Nod to James Clavell and the Nobel House saga.) The faction leaders are Roshann Cobb, the Struan's Factor, and Dr. Aleigha Cohen, a neuroscientist.
What's Abbadon about? We've just got a deposed tinpot dictator bumming around the place, and he's the one advocating for us to hold to moral purity?
Correct. You know who Vesper Abaddon is, but you don't know why Vesper Abaddon is, nor how Vesper Abaddon is.
We are used to thinking that great evil cannot yield great good and that pain and suffering often link directly back to personal animus on the part of the guilty party toward the victims. At face value, Vesper Abaddon's story seems to pose the question, "Can the ends ever justify the means?" I worry that's a little trite, but at certain points in our story, the readers have been invited to contemplate Abaddon's crimes in dialogue with (A) his stated motivations, (B) the condition of federal Carmel post-war, and (C) Carmel's collective approach to post-war justice and healing.
Vesper Abaddon should feel very, very incongruent.
In some ways, I have failed you because I haven't kept up with internal issues in your colony. Guan Biao and Planitzer, at least, should continue to be upset by you decision not to treat Abaddon as a prisoner, to say nothing of his privileged role in the colony's administration.
You made an offhand line about the Soviet Premier possibly being in one of the pods, and that'd honestly be funny as hell. More seriously, perhaps some sort of scientist or doctor; we're well stocked on asskickers right now, oddly enough.
I will take you to The Edge™.
Raw supplies might be more efficient, but honestly, the most interesting salvage is something like the Skagway; a questline that rewards an advanced prize at the end. If you do go with that, it should probably be a noncombat thing, so as to not step on the Skagway's toes or trivialize combat too early. One of those giant super Former things would be neat, or some kind of high grade 3D printer.
Because every science fiction story absolutely requires unobtanium harvesters the size of city blocks!
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I'm anticipating making contact with Deidre and Zakharov after we laid the foundations pre planetfall
Lal clearly has a soft spot for Lady Skye.
I feel like Zakharov would be very bitter about what happened aboard Unity. Lal's reputation as a Garland loyalist would surely not be pleasing to him. Depending on who you've gathered to you as helpmates, and his awareness thereof, that displeasure could be amplified significantly. I didn't explicitly put you in opposition to Zakharov. The original fiction, Journey to Alpha Centauri, tells us that Lal was tasked with monitoring Zakharov's conformity to Garland's orders during the Unity Crisis. If I remember correctly, Lal detected Zakharov's unauthorized incursion into the Unity armory. In this story, Zakharov's primary antagonist aboard Unity was Executive Officer General Francisco d'Almeida, who doubted Zakharov's ability to save the ship and declined to provide him with what he believed was sufficient and necessary resourcing to get that job done. The ship was more or less affirmatively dying by the time your part of the narrative got underway, so it's hardly as if Zakharov could fault you for rushing to the exits. However, I imagine he would look very dimly on your decision to pardon Captain Erkins, a Spartan.
On the other hand, Sathieu Metrion and the Tomorrow Institute were nominally comrades in the same fight. You can reasonably expect Zakharov to look favorably upon them. Your raw research output, notwithstanding your limited medical and scientific cast, would also probably make it easier for you to engage with Zakharov, even if just in a purely transactional relationship.
I'm a bit curious if alien ruins & artifacts are going to show up. I'd like to find some more sympathetic people & factions to talk with.
I am very, very reticent to include aliens as active characters. I don't think most writers do aliens any justice. Instead, as in Star Trek, they feel mostly like exaggerations of specific human tendencies or cultures.
There are, however, many mysteries of Chiron to unravel. And I fully expect you to meet many, many more sympathetic people and factions.
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