Shonen Quest!

Easy enough the the stink the stink of of Kariya Matou radiates so radiates so pungent a that a smell that his failure is is easily recognizable.

He did journalism by the way. He is the anti shonen. Ya know seeing as he ran away from his family burden told no one he cared about the very predictably relevant facts of the matter and came back to suck and fail in the last hour. This leading to a spiral that almost destroyed the world.


That Kariya succeeded? Netorared Toshkaka. Got the girl and managed three very time consuming jobs to have a plaplace for his three daughters in the customs of mass verse magi?

And has angel magics? I'd sooner believe that he told Toshiomi and motivated him to do that.

Mmmm, I always saw Kariya as a tragic figure. He finds out that his family's magic is probably one of the most evil things currently going on in Japan, but he lacks the personal power to do anything about it. To gain that power he'd have to participate in that evil. So instead he strikes back with the only weapon he can, by removing himself and his talent from the Matou family, leaving Zouken with no available heirs, which was probably very difficult for Kariya. Due to this he becomes poor, doesn't consider himself worthy of Aoi (no money, no status, few prospects), and thus never confesses his feelings to her, and thus is never accepted/rejected. He never moves on as a result, but out of respect for Aoi he continues to swallow his feelings now that she is married to a guy who primarily treats her as an heir producer (which Aoi is perfectly fine with, but that's another matter), and her daughters as tools for furthering magecraft (to be fair, Tohsaka also considers himself a tool to further magecraft. Heaven's Feel route of the original F/SN does a good job exploring why this attitude tends to be...bad for those involved in magic).

Then Tohsaka hands Sakura over to Zouken. It should be fairly obvious to Tohsaka that Zouken is a monster, what sort of magic he practices, and how this is probably not a good thing for Sakura, but due to his own flaws, Tohsaka has no clue. However, Tohsaka has always had the reputation of being competent, so Kariya has every reason to believe Tohsaka knew what was in store for Sakura. Kariya is now in a tough position. He wants to save Sakura. He can't ask Tohsaka to reverse it, because as far as Kariya knows, Tohsaka approves of the situation. He has no skill in magic, because Nasuverse magic is based on the past and learning knowledge horded and passed down by your family, so he had no opportunity to learn it. However, he manages to find a way to save Sakura (who is not related to him, nor does he have any actual obligation to help in any way) by sacrificing himself. It was pretty clear that even if he won the grail war, he'd still die from the worms within the year. If he'd succeeded he'd be obviously a noble figure who basically sacrificed his reputation, wealth, power, feelings and life to resist evil and for the sake of others. Instead, due to the nature of the work, he starts breaking under the strain, and with a little help from our favorite priest, becomes completely broken and ends up hurting Aoi. Still, he does not give up, and Berseker does pretty well in the war, only losing when Kariya's body finally starts failing due to the strain. Kariya's last actions are attempting to rescue Sakura, before he collapses and dies at her feet.

So, in a different setting, where he can gain power without using his family's methods, I wouldn't find it surprising at all if he left the Matous earlier, sacrificed his health by working himself nearly to death, and then actually confessing to Aoi because he sees himself as able to support her/now able to protect her from his family. I don't see how you got that he Netorared Tohsaka. They were both competing for Aoi's affections, and the Kariya who was able to exist in this more forgiving setting won. As for the angel magics, I needed something impressive for Hasami to look up too, and the angel motif fit well with the magic mechanics that haven't yet been revealed.

VOTES LOCKED

[] Go in anyway. They probably can't see you, so you should be fine.

Is nearly unanimous. SV continues to defy my attempts to predict. Y'all selected the option I was pretty sure no one would be interested in. What happened to that famous SV caution? I have less prepared ahead of time for that option...so the update might be sometime tonight rather than this afternoon.
Diomedea threw 1 4-faced dice. Reason: Nothing to See Here Total: 3
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Diomedea threw 3 10-faced dice. Reason: Absolutely Nothing Total: 12
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Diomedea threw 1 100-faced dice. Reason: Move Along Total: 25
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I've heard a lot about this supposed "SV caution", but I've never really seen is as a problem. Yes, there is a general opinion of "measure twice, cut once" but "first strike assures victory" is also a common sentiment as far as I can tell.

And, of course, any pretense of caution is thrown to the wind once a shiny appears.
 
Keh. It's Shonen! We would consider cautious approach in a life-threatening situation, but there is no guarantee even in the most extreme conditions...


P.S. Rin's expy not being a magic user just rubs me the wrong way.. i guess it's tiresome being fanboy.
 
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Eh. We really should have announced ourselves for obvious reasons.

I mean we just got our ass kicked due to a night thinking we're an evil spirit and you want surprise ultimate badass nastier see preist?
 
Ah, but villains always announce themselves. By simply walking in alongside Hasami, we show that we are one of her comrades, and thus worthy of trust!

A fool-proof plan!
 
Ah, but villains always announce themselves. By simply walking in alongside Hasami, we show that we are one of her comrades, and thus worthy of trust!

A fool-proof plan!
Actually no. Polite people announce their selves and their harmlessness.

Villains stalk after innocent maidens being themselves unseen before they are one shot by the passive defenses.
 
Keh. It's Shonen! We would consider cautious approach in a life-threatening situation, but there is no guarantee even in the most extreme conditions...


P.S. Rin's expy not being a magic user just rubs me the wrong way.. i guess it's tiresome being fanboy.

Well, Claymore, Death Note, Akumetsu, FMA, Gunslinger Girl, and Highschool of the Dead are all also published in Shonen Magazines, so...:p

Joking aside, I am aiming for a more lighthearted quest than most of those works, and I'm definitely not a killer GM. However, success is not guaranteed. The way I tend to run things is that I dislike the immediate bad ends present in a lot of quests (though those usually give you an immediate restart to compensate), so to reach a bad end you need to be making consistently bad decisions, over and over, and never learn from any mistakes, which I'm not too worried about. You've been making decent decisions so far, and even some optimal choices for relationship boosts with Hasami.

P.S. Yeah, I feel you man, she's one of my absolute favorite characters. I'm just overly fond of putting expies in my work. We all have our vices.
 
Of course we had perfect Hasami Relation boosts, there's no way we could resist! She's so adorable I want to pet her!
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Can we get an option to pet her?
 
This is still going. I've just been hit with some surprise mandatory overtime last week and this week which has been eating my writing time. I'm hoping to get an update out this week, and things should return to normal Monday.
 
Sorry if this is a bit rude, but how's the update?

Since you've asked, Sufficient Velocity, I'll tell you the five greatest threats to me updating. That's right, this is

Threatdown!

#5) Friends!

These pesky moochers claim to be visiting to see me, but in reality they eat my food, eat my time, and force me to interact with actual other human beings. They claim that this is in the name of "bonding," that "it's so great to see me" (which is true, I'll admit), or even that we are "Having fun." However, could it really be an insidious plot to keep me from updating my quests? You decide, Sufficient Velocity!

#4) Roleplaying!

I've found myself falling into the insidious clutches of the roleplaying section of the forum. I found myself summoned into a magical war with seven different heroic figures fight for the holy grail, myself being the amazingly handsome Assassin. That's right, it's Fate:Another Night. What is that, Sufficient Velocity? How did I even end up in that hive of scum and villainy that is the Roleplaying forum? Well, that's because I've been infected with the...

#3) The @wdango Virus!

That's right! The most feared disease of the entire questing forum! Forced to constantly have ideas for new worlds, new plotlines, that all demand realization. They don't tell you about the worst, most insidious aspect of this well documented disease. It is at its most potent when you are too busy to write! I was in the middle of my boring menial job, working away, when I was hit with a sudden idea for a great fantasy setting. But it would never work as a quest...no, it needed, it demanded several minds in tandem to explore it properly. I spent hours (my work allows a lot of thinking) putting together ideas for the RP I wished to see, when it struck me. I had never even participated in a play-by-post RP, how the heck did I expect to run one? So then I spent time delving into the RP forum to see how others did it, and before I knew it I was sucked in. It wasn't my fault! I just couldn't resist the wonderful allure of character creation...

Sadly, Sufficient Velocity, this wasn't the end of my wdango woes. Inspired by patient zero's new short quest Heartbroken, another idea was born in my mind. It over powered me, and before I knew it, I had created Whitewashed (Experimental Original Quest). I tried to fight it, I really did! It was just too powerful! And I needed the practice, because the few weeks of inactivity had made it really difficult get back into the groove of writing, which was due to...

#2) Work!

That scourge of life, that tremendously troublesome toil we are forced to engage in even if we just want the bare necessities like food, shelter, and high speed internet access. It's true, Sufficient Velocity, that work the past month has made me quite fatigued with things like: Mandatory overtime! Mandatory Weekends! Working through Lunch! Really, if it wouldn't end with me losing my internet access, I wouldn't work at all. Work can be such a bear sometimes...

#1) BEARS!



How can I update when these monstrous killing machines might get me at any moment? None of us are safe! Panic! PANIC!



...okay, that was fun. Sheesh, I didn't mean for it to get so involved. I'm working on updating Shonen Quest as we speak...er, communicate...um. I'm working on it right now. So expect it to be up later today.



tldr: UPDATE LATER TODAY, JA!
 
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Most enlightening!

And do not fear bears, with the power of my patented Bear Repellent Bat Spray! A lifetime supply available for three easy payments of $19.99!
 
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