Beware uncharted lands, for there be spoilers afoot!
This may seem like it's overdue, but based on a comment I recently received elsewhere, apparently the fact that there will be spoilers to both the Neon Genesis Evangelion anime and the events of various games in the Persona Series (including but not limited to Persona 3, Persona 3 Portable, Persona 4, and Persona 5) wasn't made clear just by how the plot has unveiled.

So I'm placing a sticky post for this message: if you have not watched the original Evangelion anime, or if you have not played the Persona games — especially P3, P4, P5, and their updated re-releases — then take note that this story contains spoilers to all of them. Read at your own risk.

/that should do it
//right?
///right??
 
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8/6 - Early Evening: The Onsen, Part 4
/Meanwhile, in the women's outdoor onsen/

(Such was the variety of life, that as tense conversations with a cognitive terrorist and a cognitive serial killer went about inside, far more casual conversations occurred within the hot springs...)

"Seriously Yamagishi-san, what's this about?" Akane angrily crossed her arms, glaring at Mayumi. "Why so pushy?"

"...ah. I guess I am." She wilted, backing away sheepishly. "My apologies...I guess I just wanted to know more, is all. Going by what you've said, Ikari-san seems to have changed a lot since he's been here...is it so wrong to wonder?"

"...I...suppose not," she relented. With a sigh, Akane asked, "but why here, of all places? Is it just to live up to the stereotype of gossiping in the onsen?"

"...maybe?" admitted Mayumi with a shy smile.



"Why?"

"...I...I don't recall ever going to a hot springs like this. We've done it before for certain educational school trips when in prior years...but like this? With...an acquaintance? With a friend?" As she said the last word, she gestured towards Mana, who was staring quietly up at the sky. "It's...a new experience, for me."

"...that's honestly surprising. You don't strike me as someone who's a loner. You've been pretty sociable so far."

"...I suppose I come off that way. Back home...I tend to keep to myself...which is why I'm trying to get as much as I can, because I don't know how long this will continue, and I want to cherish each and every single moment...because..." Mayumi gulped, nervously folding her hands in front of her chest. "...because I'm halfway convinced this is just a ludicrously pleasant dream, and I don't want to wake up..."

Akane blinked. "You must be exaggerating."

"...I don't want to say. I'm afraid it might come true..."

The beast quietly wriggled and writhed; at the boundary of its domain, a blue mold spread like a fungus.

As the cat watched warily from atop the branches of a dead tree, it spoke. "Malice-and-cruelty...a-regrettable-concoction...but-our-sorrow-takes-priority...over-your-hate..."

The blue mold formed a mouth filled with rotting teeth. "we aRE merely hERE to wITNESS"

"We-will-accept-this..."​

Mayumi shivered, feeling suddenly cold in the core of her being. (Unbeknownst to her, Akane subconsciously backed away by a few inches, caused by a primal urge. Likewise, Mana briefly flinched.) Looking towards Kirishima, she asked, "you've...you've been awfully quiet, Mana-san..."

Mana looked oddly at her for a few moments (was that a glare?) before answering, "just...thinking, is all. I think...my family...we visited a hot spring like this, once." She briefly flexed her hands, staring at them. "Maybe that's why I felt the urge to bring AIGIS and LABRYS in here," she said, referring to the weapons now sitting within the HiAce van that was parked outside the onsen. "...so they could also share in the memory..."

Akane blinked, briefly whispering towards Mayumi. "I was under the impression from my father that she was an orphan...?"

"It's complicated," Mayumi whispered back, before speaking aloud. "Your Big Sis, your Little Sis, and your brothers...you were still all together, then?"

"Yeah..." Mana huffed, looking somewhat agitated. "It was a ghost town. Can't remember exactly where, but I think it had been depopulated due to Angel Syndrome. No way to know for sure...but when you're orphans living on your own, you can't be picky about the places you pick to hole up in. It wasn't as nice as this...and it was mixed too. But except for Big Sis, we were all kids, so I don't think it was a big deal." The gruff girl suddenly looked rather nostalgic. "We were pretty rowdy. There was a big splash fight too, boys versus girls...we took a bunch of food that had been left behind by the departed villagers, and stuffed ourselves silly...it was...nice..." The girl scratched at her left shoulder, her face curdling with anger. "...we were barely on our way out of the town when we were found by Tokita's men...and...well, I don't have to say anything else, do I?"



Akane and Mayumi both stared at each other, the former looked far more perturbed than the latter.

"...I want to believe that the more power I gain, I'll be able to do what I want...what I need...but even Ikari, for all his power, is still shackled by others...so how can I even compare...?" Mana leaned back against the rocky edge of the hot spring, staring listlessly at the steam. "Maybe that's why I feel so irritated...because I'm still trying to come to grips with that. I'm...probably never gonna get left alone, am I?"

Akane slowly answered, "well...you are pretty powerful, just based on what I've seen from our training sessions these past couple of days. Any person with a measure of cognitive or metaphysical power will draw interest...and if you're associated with an Evangelion-user, that would only be more true."

"...I figured as much..." Mana smiled bitterly. "Maybe...maybe I'd be better off just leaving my brothers alone...why drag them into my mess? Why draw the eyes of other people to them? Maybe they're enjoying their freedom...and who am I to take that away from them?"

(Little did they know, that a tiny little line of blue mold was peeking over the outer fence of the hot springs, its tip morphed into the shape of a tiny parabolic dish.)

(Little did they know, that this little line stretched under the adjacent river, running through the hilly forest south of the onsen for over half a kilometer.)

(Little did they know, that this line connected with an audio transmitter, which two young teenagers — boys, with haunted eyes — listened to with increasingly angry expressions.)

"Mana-san..." murmured Mayumi with somber empathy.

"...maybe I was just deluding myself. NERV and Katsuragi have been a damn sight better than Tokita...but if I didn't have the power I wield, would they have honestly cared? Would anyone?"

Mayumi impulsively shuffled closer, slowly placing her hand on Mana's bare shoulder. "I care, Mana-san! And I...I know that Ikari-san and Aida-san and Suzuhara-san do as well..."

"And how would you know? Aida and Suzuhara are both Persona-users, and Ikari literally rescued me from a lab in the Metaverse."

(Both of them missed Akane murmuring to herself, "should I be hearing this...?")

"They all have a stake in fighting," Mana continued. "Of course they would care about my ability to fight...but without it, why would they even care?"

"...well...I'd like to think that Ikari-san cares about me," she shyly admitted. "Aida-san and Suzuhara-san...they've both been nice to me as well...even though I have nothing to contribute at all...so I'd like to think that even if you had just been a normal girl, without any powers, they still would have been willing to be your friend. I...I want to believe that."

"...if you say so," murmured an uncertain Mana.

(Akane couldn't help but feel that she was a little out of her depth in this conversation, so she wisely kept silent.)
 
"...I figured as much..." Mana smiled bitterly. "Maybe...maybe I'd be better off just leaving my brothers alone...why drag them into my mess? Why draw the eyes of other people to them? Maybe they're enjoying their freedom...and who am I to take that away from them?"

(Little did they know, that a tiny little line of blue mold was peeking over the outer fence of the hot springs, its tip morphed into the shape of a tiny parabolic dish.)

(Little did they know, that this little line stretched under the adjacent river, running through the hilly forest south of the onsen for over half a kilometer.)

(Little did they know, that this line connected with an audio transmitter, which two young teenagers — boys, with haunted eyes — listened to with increasingly angry expressions.)
To turn the brothers against the sister by using her own words out of context, making it seem like she doesn't care about them at all. A devilish plot that will only pile more tragedy upon Mana. This is only going to get worse before it gets better.
 
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To turn the brothers against the sister by using her own words out of context, making it seem like she doesn't care about them at all. A devilish plot that will only pile more tragedy upon Mana. This is only going to get worse before it gets better.

It's possible that will be the case, but I got more of the impression that they will see Mana's self-loathing and fear of only being valued because of her power making them safer without her and might be further convinced that Strega is right to align with the angels and destroy humanity.
 
8/6 - Early Evening: The Onsen, Part 5


"...and what message would that be?" warily asked Shinji, managing to power through the heat of the sauna.

Takaya suddenly chuckled. "A message of hope, young one; humanity has trudged on long after its fated demise, lurching on like a corpse that has yet to realize it died...ever yearning for that sweet release."

"...and you think the Angels are the key to that?"

The pale man chuckled knowingly. "The power of the Angels...the tool of both salvation and damnation, used in complementary yet contradictory ways...I suppose for one who is free, it is difficult to understand just how constrained our current condition is."

"What do you mean by 'free'? How am I free?"

"Spoilers, Third Child...after all, thoughts can be a tricky thing, in the face of one who deigns to see everything...even if their vaunted vision will prove to be useless in the days to come." At this, Takaya could not help but laugh. "Yes...in preparation for this time, every single player is acting to their utmost...that charlatan occupying the Throne of God has played at omniscience and omnipotence for so long that they have become blind to their own shortcomings. Such is their myopic focus on your perfection that they will hesitate to use all the tools at their disposal...and in that lies the key to our freedom, the key to humanity's unmaking at long last."

Shinji was taken aback at these words. He...knows of the Usurper? (Of course he would; the Angels opposed the Usurper as well, for enslaving ADAM.) "...if you know that much...then why fight us? Why destroy and kill so many?!"

"You act as if that truly means anything."

"Of course it does!"

"...I suppose I cannot blame your ignorance, in this particular instance. The shackles you willingly placed upon yourself to even come here...it is no surprise, that your memory has been affected so. Otherwise, you would be as cavalier with the lives of humanity as I."

Memory. Memory. It kept coming back to memory, it seemed. "What...what do you know? What happened to me?"

"Ah ah ah; such knowledge comes with a cost, Third Child." The veins on chest suddenly seemed to writhe. "Submit yourself to the Angels, and you will have all the knowledge you desire."

"...no." This man, and Jin Shirato, had already spoken of their desire to destroy humanity. The people he had come to care for...well, they were a part of humanity. "I...I wish it didn't have to be this way. But I won't join you."

"A pity...but an expected response," said Takaya, who seemed honestly disappointed. "LILITH wishes to return all things to the wretched status quo...ADAM desires to bring about the end of a species that has long since surrendered itself to death...and the Usurper, opposed to both, wishes to fully claim the Throne of God for their own selfish desires. As such, we are still at cross purposes."

xxxx

Zenkichi pounded his fist on the table, startling his compatriots. "Enough theatrics. Tell us whatever Sakaki's message is."



Jin Shirato seemed unaffected by Hasegawa's anger. "Takaya's message is the message of the Angels. And with the ending ceremonies coming up...the entire world will be watching."

"...wait..." murmured Ryuji, eyes widening with shock. "The Olympics...?"

At that precise moment, there was a distant rumble, drawing everyone's attention for just a split second.

When Ryuji looked back, Shirato had already vanished.

xxxx

"For the time being, I'll say this," said Takaya, rising to his feet. As Shinji impulsively rose as well out of primal wariness. "I hope you'll tune in to watch the Olympics this Sunday. The ending ceremony will be quite...flashy."

The veins on Takaya's chest flickered; in tandem, a Ghost suddenly rose from the floor-!

On impulse, Shinji summoned Unit-01, pulling it from the confines of his skull; as the spectral thoughtbeast easily crushed the Ghost, Shinji looked back to where Takaya had stood.

The man was gone, as though he had never existed at all.

xxxx

/Meanwhile, in the outdoors hot springs/

There was the sound of a distant explosion to the north, drawing the attention of the boys and girls.

Simultaneously, a Ghost suddenly arose from the waters, in the women's outdoor hot springs.

Mayumi and Akane impulsively shrieked out of sheer terror.

Mana rose on instinct, summoning AIGIS and LABRYS into her hands; warping from the van in the parking lot to her hands, she swung decisively. "HAH!"

The spirit was split in half; so too was the bamboo divider wall behind it. With a clack of hollow wood, the wall blocking the men from the women fell.

Mana, holding her shield at her side and her axe over her shoulders, stared imperiously down at a gobsmacked Toji and Kensuke. "Ghost's been taken care of."

Both boys stared, faces redder than a tomato.

Akane yelped, impulsively retreating away towards the women's shower room without a second thought.

"MANA-SAN!" yelled Mayumi, grabbing at the girl's shoulders and dragging her away.

"Hey hey, watch it-!" protested the axe wielder.

"Sorry for breaking the wall!" Mayumi called out across the steamy air.

And just like that, Toji and Kensuke were left alone.

xxxx

"...well Ken, you got your 'look'. You happy now?"

"...honestly Toji, I feel kind of conflicted."

"It's the axe, ain't it?"

"An axe that can split me in half with terrifying ease? Yes. It's probably the axe."

"...we talk about this to no one."

Kensuke thought about it. "...I have a feeling Hasegawa-san would kill us if he even got an inkling that we saw his daughter. I concur heartily."

"Only Ikari can know."

Kensuke paled. "Nuh uh, not a chance."

"Why? He's a guy like us, ain't he?"

"Toji, he's terrible at keeping secrets! Knowing our luck, he'd probably snitch on us to Hasegawa-san, Sakamoto-san, and the Class Rep for good measure!"

"...good point," admitted the jock. "Lucky for us he decided to go for the sauna..."

"...I think it's time to get out, because I think I heard an explosion."

"Oh good, so it wasn't just me."

And just like that, the boys' hot springs trip came to an end.
 
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So Mana was the intruder for the Onsen-Scene. That will make quite a story when its Shinji's turn.
Mana: "So what? I been to the boys side before and nobody complained."

Also why Shinji is not forwarned about Onsen and Girl-trouble.
 
8/6 - Evening
The Hasegawas and the Hakone Caravan had gathered outside of the onsen; Zenkichi was speaking rather seriously with the local police from the Nishiawakura substation, whilst bystanders gazed nervously to the column of smoke rising a few hundred meters to the north, coming from some point beyond the ridge. As this was going on, Junpei and Ken were gathering stories from all of the teenagers regarding what had happened in the onsen.

(That Shinji had not disclosed the reason he left for the sauna in the first place — namely, the perverted topic of conversation between Toji and Kensuke — made him a minor hero to the teenage lads.)

However, even more striking than the sudden Ghost attack, even more surprising than Jin Shirato's appearance...was the fact that Shinji had had a one-on-one conversation with the infamous Takaya Sakaki himself.

"...man, your luck is awful," blurted out Toji.

Kensuke elbowed his friend in the side. "Not the time!"



After regaling as much of what he could remember of Takaya's words (while consciously glossing over anything and everything related to the Usurper), Shinji finally concluded with the man's cryptic warning about the Olympics.

"...same as Shirato, then." Ken Amada grimaced, looking over towards Ryuji. "We have to warn people."

"...you're still an Agent, so you can do things all 'official' like. I'll call the Commissioner, and make sure that security does get increased," said Ryuji.

"Wait, we're not gonna cancel the rest?" blurted out Junpei. "That's stupid!"

"They're not going to cancel the Summer Olympics over a mere threat," admitted Ken. "Political violence and terrorism have never resulted in the cancellation of Olympic events from what I recall...suspended, yes, but outright cancelled? There'd have to be an all-out war for that to happen."

"And what, a terrorist organization aligned with an enemy dedicated to wiping out humanity isn't a war?" growled Junpei, irritated by the prospects of Takaya and Jin causing havoc. "Do I have to remind you about what happened during the last new moon?"

"And the Olympics Committee will simply respond that the ceremonies will conclude before the new moon," rejoindered Ken.

"And, going by what Ikari and the girls said, they can apparently summon friggin' Ghosts now!"

Ryuji huffed loudly, drawing both of their attention. "You both raise good points...but right now, Okayama is probably home to more individuals with cognitive and metaphysical fighting capability per capita than anywhere else on the planet right now. And that'll hold until the Olympics are over and done with. And if there's something that requires the firepower of an Evangelion...well, we're a hop, skip, and a jump away, eh?"

(Mana frowned, looking curiously at Shinji. "...how far can he hop, skip, and jump...?" she murmured to herself.)

Finally, Zenkichi walked towards them, a stern frown on his face. "The police found the cause of the explosion: a car loaded with a bunch of fertilizer that had been left on the side of a mountain road. Judging by the plates they were able to dig up from the wreckage, the car had been reported as stolen just this morning from the city of Maniwa, about fifty kilos west of here. No word yet on if they were able to get any surveillance footage of the car theft itself...but beyond some singed trees and shattered asphalt, there wasn't any collateral damage from the car bomb."

"In other words...it was a distraction!" exclaimed Kensuke with a dramatic gesture.

Toji elbowed his friend in the side. "Not the time!"

Sakamoto, tellingly, agreed. "Probably. Judging by their disappearing act, they must have slipped into the Metaverse during that instant we were distracted...cheeky bastards." With a gruff sigh, he added, "pardon the language."

"And my patrol on Trismegistus didn't turn up jack," grumbled Junpei, kicking at the ground with his feet. "They gave us the slip...damn it."

"...so...what does that mean now?" asked Shinji.

"As far as you kids are concerned?" said Ryuji. "Not much. There's still nothing stopping you from enjoying the rest of your summer vacation...and if we need your help, you'll be the first to know."

"Okay..." he murmured, looking quietly at the sky.

"...is everything okay, Ikari-san?" quietly asked Mayumi. "Takaya Sakaki didn't do anything, did he...?"

"...physically? No..." Honestly, the heat of the sauna had been more demanding (and it had been an exercise in determination...). But mentally was another story altogether. "I'm just...wondering what's going to happen next, is all..."

(Akane stared quietly at Shinji Ikari, trying to square her memories of Ikari with that of a boy who talked one-on-one with a serial killer and came out unscathed. As with so many other things over the past few days, it was yet another oddity that grabbed her attention.)

"...I suppose that's fair enough," murmured Mayumi, an uncertain shadow coming across her face, one that Shinji couldn't help but feel as well.

His Other felt...a sense of foreboding.

The Beast, meanwhile, simply grinned at the thought of the carnage which would soon unfold.

Jin Shirato...Takaya Sakaki...Strega...the Angels...the Usurper. Shinji sighed. There's just so much...

Alas, there was little to do except to retire for the day; thus did the Hasegawas depart, whilst the Hakone Caravan returned to Sojiro Sakura's place.

xxxx



Meanwhile, several hundred meters to the south, within a mountainous forest, Takaya Sakaki quietly observed Keita Asari and Musashi Strasberg. The blue mold connected to the audio transmitter — the means by which the two boys had listened to the conversations within the hot springs — slithered its way back into his body. "So...what did you hear from your dear sister?" he asked, sitting upon a fallen log.

"...she feels trapped," growled Musashi. "She still has to fight..."

"Even if her circumstances seem better...and more pleasant...Mana-neesan, Big Sis, and Little Sis are stuck doing what Tokita would be having them to do anyway..." The boy, whose timidity was fading day by day, couldn't help but scowl. "...to the point where she thinks it might be better to leave us alone..."

"Misguided altruism, driven by fear," explained Takaya, as he handed the audio transmitter over towards Jin Shirato. The mold from the hot springs was still making its long trek back. "Fear over her lack of control, fear that her own power won't be enough to make a difference where it counts..."

Musashi snarled, rising to his feet. "Then what's the point of showing us all of this?!" The past weeks had been spent observing various aspects of human society from afar, in all of its wretchedness; swept from the idyllic memories spent wandering the countryside as proverbial nomads, the two boys had been shown a world driven by cold calculus and hot irrationality. "You trying to make us feel hopeless? That we can't change anything?!"

Jin snorted. "Power means nothing if you're not willing to use it."

"Indeed," concurred Takaya with a knowing smile. "Power is the ultimate arbiter...if you have more power than another, you can determine the fates of those with less power. However, that means nothing if you lack conviction." The last of the mold slipped back in through his fingers, even as the veins in his chest throbbed. "People are capable of justifying so much of their own actions, cloaked in self-righteousness...but I prefer to cast away those foul falsehoods, and cling to simplicity: to live every single moment according to my own will, without thought for what others will think. Your sister, trapped by the concerns of society, feels unable to cast aside everything to come and save you..."

"...but I don't blame her for feeling that way," whispered Keita.

"Indeed; she is but a child, much like you. But the circumstances by which she attained her power, the humans who gave it to her, and the institutions which force her down a path not of her own choosing...are they not blameworthy?"

"...of course they are," hissed Musashi. "But what are we supposed to do about it?"

Jin snorted. "To make a choice, obviously." Rising to his feet, the man adjusted his glasses, tucking the transmitter under his arm. "I'll be making preparations for Sunday." Without another word, he vanished into thin air.

"...and what's our choice?" asked Keita, looking back towards Takaya.

The young man chuckled. "That is something that I cannot decide for you; I can certainly provide you the keys to power...and you've demonstrated a willingness to stare the reality of death in the face." Standing up, he said, "you've seen the power that the Angels have granted me...a power that has allowed me to protect you, and to do many things. Humanity and the Angels are both caught in an existential war...so my choice would have me branded as a traitor to my species. And yet, you've seen quite well just how much our species is worth...isn't that right?"

Musashi and Keita looked uncertainly at each other.

"I will give you until the next new moon to decide: eight days from now. If you wish to try and return to humanity...then I will let you go, for there's nothing you can do to me. But if you wish to lay waste to humanity, and join the Angels...if you wish to enact vengeance on a diseased society that would command mere children to fight for its survival, while so many adults bask in safety...then I will finally bring your Shadows to you, and provide the means of obtaining greater power." Placing his hands on their shoulders, he added, "you do not have to decide right now. It is a momentous decision, worthy of much thought."

The young boys grimaced, instincts warring with their passions...but they nonetheless nodded.

Without another word, Takaya and the two children disappeared into the Metaverse.

xxxx

/it occurs to me
//that Kensuke and Toji
///are two sides of the same idiotic coin
 
Never say never. I'm sure Mana and her brothers will learn a valuable lesson by the end of all this. They'll have to even if it kills them.

Well, in canon, Shinji learned many great life lessons at the cost of reducing all of humanity (save Asuka) into orange Tang, so that would just be par for the course. :V
 
8/6 - Evening, Part 2


"...I thought hot springs were supposed to be rejuvenating," remarked Sojiro Sakura upon their return to his residence. The smell of curry wafted from the kitchen. "There were more leftovers than expected today, so it's curry again for dinner."

"No complaints here," remarked Ryuji. "Junpei, Ken, and I are probably going to be making calls for most of the evening, so you can just put our share in the fridge. We're still kind of full from eating at the onsen anyhow."

"Calls, huh?" Sojiro's expression was set into a grim expression. "I suppose it wouldn't have anything to do with that explosion that everyone heard, would it?"

"Probably best not to wonder," said the freelancer, leaning on his cane for emphasis.

"...fair enough. Just don't drag any trouble into my home."

With those words said, the three adults of the Hakone Caravan headed outside so they could speak without disturbing anyone else; the teens (save Shinji, who had meandered off towards his room), now all dressed in plain yukatas, were all gathered around the television while Sojiro went about cleaning up in the kitchen. Some game show starring professional wrestlers was playing at the moment. "...so what exactly is the game?" asked Mana, who was absentmindedly combing Mayumi's hair by her request. Yamagishi, for her part, had Enkai-chan resting in her lap as she stroked the Scottish Fold's fur.

"...I think they're being rated by how fabulous their poses are," analytically said Kensuke.

"...huh. Weird."

Toji shook his head. "I can kinda see it. The cooler the pose, the better, right? I mean, that Featherman show you always watch is all about that, right?"

"...fair enough," remarked Mana, a thoughtful expression coming to her face.

"SO," suddenly said Ren Amamiya, almost booming. The four young teenagers looked over their shoulders at their senpai, whose arms were crossed. "You all went to an onsen, I hear."

"Yes. It was almost a shame that you didn't come along...but since there were Ghosts and terrorists involved, maybe it was a good thing you didn't," sheepishly admitted Mayumi.

"Indeed...but I'm curious if there were any...shenanigans." The way he said that word, it was almost like a curse.



The way he just stared with intent at Toji and Kensuke actually made the two boys start sweating. "Uh...and by shenanigans you mean...?" cautiously asked Kensuke.

"I think you 'teenage boys rife with hormones' know exactly what I mean." They way the duo's eyes flickered almost bashfully towards Mana and Mayumi was confirmation enough to Amamiya. "Flushed faces, guilty expressions; so there were shenanigans!"

"Dude, are you really gonna make us talk about it in front of em'?!" exclaimed Toji out of primal terror.

"It's a tradition, or so I've been told." Amamiya pushed his glasses against his nose. "Call me curious, but I'd like to know about the collateral damage."

True to form, Mana answered completely factually. "Well, as far as the hot springs go, I broke down the dividing wall with my axe while killing a Ghost. But that's about it." With a lackadaisical gesture in Kensuke and Toji's direction, she added, "I wanted to ask those two if they were okay, but Yamagishi dragged me away before I could even say anything."

Mayumi, for her part, impulsively lowered her head. "Mana-san...you don't have to talk about it..."

Ren Amamiya, being the older and wiser senpai, read between the lines immediately. "...so you mean to tell me that you two actually witnessed..."

"Not intentionally!" interrupted Toji.

"And there was still a lot of steam!" interjected Kensuke, a look of panic growing across his face.

"...and you didn't get any kind of physical retribution...whatsoever?"

The sheer disbelief in Amamiya's voice must have sparked something in Mayumi, since she sheepishly added, "um...well, Mana-san's the one who broke down the wall, so...it wouldn't be fair to attack them for something that wasn't their fault...I mean, life's not supposed to be like a romantic comedy manga, you know? Even if some parts would be easier if it were..."

Ren stared. And stared. And stared.

At last, he sank to his knees, a look of pure despair coming to his face. "...the Fist of Justice...was so cruel...and without mercy...!"

As the high school student began grumbling into the floor with a vacant expression, Toji looked with confusion towards Kensuke. "...any idea what that's all about?"

"Not a clue. But that's not a scab I would pick at for all the money in the world." Almost as an afterthought, he glanced back towards the two girls. With great hesitance, he said, stumbling over his words, "u-um...w-well...no hard f-feelings, I hope...?"

Mayumi's face was red. "It's...n-not like you'd make a habit of that...so...no...not this time, Aida-san..."

Kensuke's sigh of relief was palpable. Crisis averted!

Toji, for his part, decided to try and be 'helpful.' "Well, your abs still looked pretty good, Mana-san."

"TOJI," hoarsely choked Kensuke, his face going pale with absolute terror.

"What? The girls know we looked at them now, so I might as well compliment them! What if they thought that we thought they looked ugly or somethin'? Cause they ain't!"

Kensuke sputtered, "well yeah, obviously, but you can't just say it out loud like that!"

Mana, missing all of the subtext, simply nodded. "Thanks." Looking down at Mayumi, she asked, "hey, Yamagishi; do I compliment them back or something? I don't know if this is part of onsen 'etiquette' or not, cause' Big Sis never told me."

Mayumi's face was buried in her hands, which stifled the noises of sheer embarrassment slipping past her lips.

Toji, sensing a change in mood, puffed himself up. "Well, if you're gonna compliment me in return, I'd like to think my pecs are pretty muscular for a young man~"

Kensuke nearly sank into his chair, utterly mortified. "Oh gods why is this happening...make it stop..."

Mana shook her head. "I've seen better. Musashi-neesan, definitely. Keita-neesan...maybe? He was always better at endurance drills..."

Toji's ego promptly deflated. "Ah...I see..."

Kensuke and Mayumi simply wallowed in their mutual embarrassment and refused to say anything else. Mana, seeing that no one else was talking, and utterly ignorant of the hormonal awkwardness that had been set off amongst her three peers, went back to watching the game show. "...how is that guy stretching so far without tearing his hamstrings?" she idly asked aloud.

("They have no idea how good they've got it," murmured Ren to himself, utterly in disbelief by the conversation that had just transpired. "They have no idea...")
 
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So how many timelines has Ren gone through? You would think he'd get over that Fist of Justice incident by now.
 
So how many timelines has Ren gone through? You would think he'd get over that Fist of Justice incident by now.

It's been previously established from August the 3rd that he's only had two lives as a Wild Card under his belt (and at most three):

Ren Amamiya (though in the back of his mind, the name 'Akira Kurusu' still lurked like a thief in the night) quietly stared at the ceiling of his guest room.

He'd had quite the opportunity to be...contemplative, since awakening into this timeline. (There were times where he still envied his former ignorance, because damn did Arisato and Narukami have it rough.) After all, it was the only method he had of keeping things straight in his head, of sorting between what was real and not real. (Wrong way of thinking about it; what's real this time, and what was real last time?) Quite frankly, he wouldn't blame Arisato or Narukami (or Akechi, for that matter) if they thought that he was in over his head...because honestly, what did he bring to the table in terms of experience?

Narukami, counting this timeline, had experienced 2,457 lives that he could recall. Arisato had experienced who knows how many more than that. Ayanami had experienced far more than even them, before they had ever even been Wild Cards. (This wasn't even counting an apparently antagonistic Wild Card that just so happened to share the same surname as Arisato, which threw up all sorts of red flags. That sort of inner paranoia and nervous tension...he hadn't felt the like since the time the Phantom Thieves had discovered Akechi — that smug yet seemingly earnest ally of theirs — was in fact plotting to assassinate him on Shido's orders...but that was another lifetime, alas...)

Himself? He had two lives as a Wild Card under his belt. (And one ran through so many similar beats that it was downright uncanny...but in one life, Yoshizawa and Maruki had never been a factor, while in another...?) At times (in your dreams), he was halfway convinced that there had been a third (those summer memories are so very fleeting)...but that was it. What did he honestly bring to the table compared to those two, other than another Persona-user with the power of the World Arcana?

/so in other words
//the "Fist of Justice"
///is REALLY recent, relatively speaking
 
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